This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年1月11日 at 20:59:49

Artist: Hollow Wings
Title: Wo Zhen De Shou Shang Le
Tags: 张学友 Jacky Cheung 热 王菀之 Ivana 中国香港 Hong Kong fanzhen0019
BPM: 136.3
Filesize: 5604kb
Play Time: 03:24
Difficulties Available:

1. fanzhen's Hard (1.97 stars, 202 notes)
2. Hurted Lin (3.56 stars, 364 notes)
3. Insane (2.67 stars, 263 notes)
4. Normal (1.66 stars, 208 notes)

Download: Hollow Wings - Wo Zhen De Shou Shang Le
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Hollow Wings 我真的受伤了

bg by me

fanzhen's Hard by fanzhen0019

"wait... give me a sec... "

very old record here... check folder below please ↓

n1ce

god tier singer

Omg
Such a beautiful voice <3

♥

good voice

<3

o. i had this from a while back xd

It better as ar6 because then i can hr it

哦哦哦哦哦哦1111111

00:12:841 (4) - a bit early; 00:12:880 - 1/8 tick sounds better but need to shorten slider to 1/8 too so it lands on the next red line
01:50:775 (1) - too early; sounds more accurate on 01:50:830 - 1/8 tick
01:57:046 (2) - too early; better on 01:57:101 - 1/16 tick and shorten so slider repeat is on 01:57:182 -

02:36:300 (2) - this slider seems problematic to me for a few reasons; it doesnt start on anything audible, and has a bit misleading spacing coming from 02:36:081 (1) -
I think the best solution would be to move the slider to 02:36:518 - and remove 02:36:955 (3) - or
ctrl+g the slider, because a jump from 2 -> 3 plays better than 1 -> 2 and the spacing isnt that misleading

02:39:796 (2) - the same applies to this slider but it's not as problematic as the first one so it would be fine to keep it as it is

love the voice~

？？干嘛

wudi

Absolutely Amazing

Beautiful voice.

I love your voice hollow wings!

Imma give you a star, cuz why not
cuz this is a chill song for chill creative creator
prepare for shit mod cuz i'm still too weak for your maps xd

If this piece masterpiece got ranked, the whole community will be ashamed by called a creative woman f*ckin cancer mapper without checking their dignity beforehand

fanzhen's Hard

Hurted Lin

Time for sh*t mod
is it okay to double post? (although the time length is pretty far =p)


Props for the vocal for such an amazing talent on singing b

I forgot to return my m4m because school came up and i got really busy x.x

Do you want me to mod something else? I will shoot kds at it or smth if you wish

Hollow Wings <3

szanuje

真的是你唱

fanzhen?!

Now this is nice

没什么摸的呐..直接飞吧

Hi

I like your map, it's very relaxing (except when I miss )

My suggestions:

[all]
Mute slidertick.wav ?

[Insane, fanzhen's Hard and Normal]
03:11:407 - I think you should map here
If you don't want to map there, maybe move the spinner beginning to 03:22:458 . I think it matches better with the background music. Right now the spinner feels a little bit late.

[Hurted Lin]
Very good :D

01:48:143 (2) - Timing is wrong? The circle is a little early.
02:15:348 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I do not understand the new combos.

[Insane]

I like it :D!

00:07:158 (3,1) and 00:08:918 (3,1) - I think the spacing here is misleading.
00:40:520 (3,1) - Here is another slightly misleading spacing.

(^ Those aren't so bad. But I think it would be better if they were pushed a little bit farther apart.)

00:33:772 (3) - Maybe drag this slider to the right a little bit. I think it looks good at X:472 Y:315. This makes it flow off of the blue 2 better.
00:36:151 (2) - I think the slider looks better if you shape it like this https://puu.sh/sZb04.png . But I don't know why, it just looks better to me >.<
03:08:166 (1,2) - I think these sliders look a little ugly D: Maybe you should change it to a triangle pattern like this https://puu.sh/sZbE1.png . Or, maybe you could copypaste (2) and Ctrl-J it.

[fanzhen's Hard]
00:26:151 (4,5) (copypaste 02:46:132 (4,5) ) - This jump is so big I see why you wanted to make a big jump here, but this is TOO big
00:56:447 (2) - I don't understand why there's a big jump here.

Other than that it is very good :D

[Normal]
00:29:200 (2,3) - These sliders are almost parallel. Maybe you should make them parallel.
00:47:152 (3,1) - same problem ^
00:43:193 (2,3,4) - Maybe make it a perfect triangle?
00:57:345 (1,2,3,4) - If you make this pattern move to the right a little bit (like this: https://puu.sh/sZce7.png )... then you wouldn't have to position 01:02:128 (3) in an "awkward" spot. I think you put the green 3 there because you ran out of space on the screen? If you move the red pattern to the right, you will have enough space.
01:32:777 (2,3) - Not a perfect blanket >:D
02:27:847 (4) - New Combo?
03:09:096 (2) - This slider looks kind of strange next to the one before it. I suggest you copy-and-paste slider 1, press Ctrl-H and Ctrl-G on it, and rotate it 16 degrees to make it look like this https://puu.sh/sZcwk.png .

这歌是个随兴弹奏吗 xd全是红线
感觉琶音放按压滑条迷之违和 但怎么听都找不出理由啊1111
[Normal]
01:12:651 (2,3) - 感觉难度不合适 至少不要叠起来
01:28:384 (1) - 稍微有点糊度好看点
[fan先生]
SL0.2是不是不大好
00:31:390 (1,2,3) - 不如近点 粘在一起有点难受
[Insane]
01:30:139 (3) - 这个折返....完全听不到声音orz 我觉得如果是般安静应该是一个长滑条
02:10:777 (1) - 和02:09:912 (1,2,3) - 组个平行四边形?
02:18:996 (3,1) - 我觉得应该是相反的方向
[Hurted Lin]
01:57:536 (1) - 这个和01:56:829 (1) - 重叠?
02:30:454 (7) - 改成超短滑条
02:38:703 (1,1,2,3) - △?
老大美！！

last diff seems pretty picture perfect to me