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Hi !, 🌀NM request



✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )

Here we go...

General :
✨"Eternal Scripture" diffname seemed horror enough for a normal diff. How about "Disembodied" or "Incurso". This name mentioned a lot when I checked online tags

💧Eternal Scripture, please check unsnapped objects by pressing "Alt+L.Shift+A". And also some irregular spacing there xd

✨Add "Progressive Technical Death Metal" at tags

Eternal Scripture :
✨I recommend CS3,5 AR4 HP3

✨00:48:819 (1) - This spinner ended here 00:52:319 - . And you can silence it so the hitsound provides well

✨01:22:569 (3) - NC
01:34:569 (3) - ^
01:50:569 (5) - ^
02:26:569 (5) - ^
03:02:069 (3) - ^
03:11:069 (3) - ^
03:52:446 (3) - ^
06:16:014 (4) - ^
07:00:807 (4) - ^
08:08:522 (5) - ^

✨02:28:569 (1) - Swap NC with 02:30:569 (2) -
02:32:569 (1) - ^ 02:34:569 (3) -
03:35:440 (5) - ^ 03:35:940 (1) -
04:27:686 (1) - ^ 04:28:166 (3) -
05:45:686 (1) - ^ 05:47:606 (3) -
05:53:366 (1) - ^ 05:55:286 (3) - then remove NC 05:57:206 (1) -
06:25:665 (3) - ^ 06:26:522 (1) -
06:32:522 (6,1) - ^

✨02:36:569 (5,6) - Change this to 1/4 slider is better to match the... whatever is it called xd, then NC it

✨02:37:569 (1) - Remove NC as a closing scene

💧02:45:523 (1) - uhh??
02:53:066 (1) - ^
02:56:066 (5) - ^
02:57:066 (6) - ^

✨03:51:446 (2) - Such a strong(important) beat here
04:08:966 (5) - ^

✨05:35:126 (4,5) - Doesn't seemed cool imo xd. The way you mapped this part like this 05:31:286 (3) - is much more fitting
05:38:966 (4,5) - ^

✨07:52:522 (1) - It should be red xd

Oke that's all from me. All e best C:
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IRC mod, talked about rhythms and variations.
19:04 [Nemesis]: hey
19:04 [Nemesis]: is it okay I give you a little map for an irc mod?
19:04 [Nemesis]: I really need some feedback
19:04 Electoz: how much sr
19:05 [Nemesis]: 1.6
19:08 Electoz: map pls
19:08 *[Nemesis] is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1079982 Spawn Of Possession - Apparition]
19:12 *Electoz is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1079982 Spawn Of Possession - Apparition [Eternal Scripture]]
19:12 Electoz: this one right
19:12 [Nemesis]: y
19:13 Electoz: 01:01:569 - wouldn't skip this imo
19:13 Electoz: if you want sth for variation sth like 01:08:569 (3) - fits better
19:20 Electoz: 01:26:569 (1,2,3,4) - Don't know why you mapped this differently from 01:30:569 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
19:21 Electoz: I'm curious
19:23 Electoz: 03:35:940 - remove finish? I don't hear anything worth putting it tho
19:24 Electoz: 03:51:446 - should be mapped
19:25 Electoz: 03:57:686 - 03:59:126 - 03:59:606 - you can create some cool rhythms with these
19:25 Electoz: ^same applies for 04:01:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6) too
19:25 Electoz: 04:01:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
19:26 Electoz: .04:20:486 (1) - I don't think a spinner is really fit here, does it express anything from the song?
19:28 Electoz: 04:49:766 (4,1) - minor but was expecting a stack here
19:29 Electoz: 05:11:126 - spinner would fit better if started here but current one also plays alright
19:30 Electoz: oi
19:31 Electoz: I asked you about 01:26:569 (1,2,3,4) -
19:31 Electoz: I wanna know why
19:31 [Nemesis]: yeh, I just felt like the rhythm would've been a bit different
19:31 [Nemesis]: but, I changed it
19:32 Electoz: imo that one and 01:30:569 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) should be mapped in the same way cuz they're in the same rhythm
19:32 Electoz: 01:30:569 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
19:33 Electoz: could've used rhythm ideas from 01:26:569 (1,2,3,4) - on 01:30:569 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
19:33 Electoz: to express the different rhythm
19:33 Electoz: from that kiai and 01:42:569 -
19:34 Electoz: 05:17:126 (1) - not a really good idea to end it on 05:20:366 which is in the middle of drumroll or w/e, ending it on 05:19:766 - sounds better imo
19:35 [Nemesis]: here
19:35 [Nemesis]: how's this
19:35 Electoz: 05:36:086 (1,3,4,5) - the overlaps are pretty random to me lol considering that you didn't do it anywhere else earlier
19:35 [Nemesis]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6122747
19:36 Electoz: anything's fine as long as you make the rhythm different from the first kiai and 01:42:569 -
19:36 Electoz: while keeping the rhythm consistency throughout that section
19:38 [Nemesis]: fixed everything you said
19:38 [Nemesis]: 05:43:766 (1,2,3,4,5) -
19:38 [Nemesis]: how about this
19:38 Electoz: 06:20:903 (3,4,1) - the spacings are pretty misleading tbh
19:38 Electoz: don't rely on DS when you're changing SV
19:38 [Nemesis]: stack it?
19:39 Electoz: just make them spaced equally in visual
19:39 Electoz: if you removed the green line on 06:22:237 - you will see the DS on 06:21:792 (4) is messed up
19:41 [Nemesis]: ill just stack them, lol
19:41 [Nemesis]: 06:51:379 (2,1) -
19:41 [Nemesis]: how's this btw
19:42 Electoz: 06:51:379 (2) - could've use some cooler sliderarts but it's fine
19:42 Electoz: 05:43:766 (1,2,3,4,5) - fine
19:42 Electoz: 07:08:093 - optional but can be mapped
19:43 Electoz: 07:24:522 (1) - 7 sec spinner in kiai is a big no from me
19:44 Electoz: same reasoning as I explained earlier in a mod long ago
19:44 Electoz: should be mapped
19:45 Electoz: 08:14:022 (1) - you can use a 3/2 slider here to follow guitar
19:46 Electoz: also I would like to see some variation in volume usages throughout the song
19:46 Electoz: depends on the intensity on each sections
19:47 Electoz: I don't really like the usage of kicksliders either, they could be sth more creative
19:47 Electoz: like 04:19:526 (5) - for example, the drum or whatever got denser on 04:20:006 - so I expect to see sth different here for variation
19:48 Electoz: 04:56:006 (1) - this one too, there's nothing on 04:56:966 - tho
19:49 Electoz: well there's a few more where you can improve but the above ones are just a few examples where you can use more creativity on rhythms
19:49 [Nemesis]: lol
19:50 [Nemesis]: I was doing one thing and got like 10 more
19:50 [Nemesis]: hang on need to keep up
19:50 Electoz: wew
19:50 Electoz: that's it I guess
19:50 [Nemesis]: looking at the very last note
19:50 [Nemesis]: as it is the finisher, can I make it look like this?
19:51 [Nemesis]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6122829
19:52 Electoz: up to you
19:52 Electoz: but 08:16:897 (1,2) - should have the same rhythm
19:54 [Nemesis]: alright
19:54 [Nemesis]: updated the map
19:54 [Nemesis]: what about the volume usages, by the way
19:54 Electoz: less intense = lower volume, more intense = higher volume
19:54 Electoz: that's basically it
19:55 Electoz: you use 80% almost the time lol
19:57 Electoz: anything else you want to know?
19:57 [Nemesis]: is it rankable?
19:58 Electoz: quality wise I would say it's not enough atm
19:58 Electoz: needs more polishing/improvement
19:59 [Nemesis]: I see what you mean
posted
i cant mod anything thar really need to be modded,just shoot a star :)
posted
This isn't my type of map to mod or play, but I just wanted to say I really like your creativity on sliders. Good luck!
posted
From my queue!

Normal

  1. The offset feels more accurate at 54,571 to be honest.
  2. 01:44:069 (2,3) – Move these two down so they’re symmetrical along the end of 01:42:569 (1)?
  3. 01:53:571 (4,1) – Too close to the slider end imo, I’d move 4 a bit away.
  4. 02:50:578 (5) – This note sounds way off timing.
  5. 03:21:569 (2,3,4,5) – Could be more linear.
  6. 04:56:006 (1,2) – This plays pretty awkwardly. Maybe something like this? https://puu.sh/rLWss/fe1cda5840.png I just don’t like the multi-reverse slider because it’s so short and difficult to read how many times you’re gonna reverse it.
  7. 04:59:606 (1) - +1 Reverse?
  8. https://puu.sh/rLWws/8d71596de9.png You toggled kiai time 5 times in 20 seconds. That’s a kiai per 4 seconds. Why not make that area a whole kiai time?
  9. 05:20:726 (1,2,3,4) - + 1 reverse is possible, but not needed.
  10. 05:26:006 (4) – The guitar goes from white tick to white tick and doesn’t play anything on the red tick.
  11. 05:36:086 (1,4) – … I don’t know about this. Could you try to stack these somehow?
  12. 05:41:846 (3,4,6) – Same as above. +1 reverse is possible. Also, 05:42:806 (5) ? Why is this one longer than the others?
  13. 05:49:526 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  14. 05:57:206 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  15. 06:22:237 (1) – Sudden sv change in a part with similar intensity as before. Could throw players off, I would keep the sv you had before or just lower it slightly, not from 1.5, I don’t get why it’s changed now. I get that the BPM is lower, but I recommend keeping a similar sv to before.


That’s all the major things that stood out to me.~

Good luck!
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Miryle wrote:

From my queue!

Normal

  1. The offset feels more accurate at 54,571 to be honest. Feels good to me.
  2. 01:44:069 (2,3) – Move these two down so they’re symmetrical along the end of 01:42:569 (1)? Sure thing, fixed
  3. 01:53:571 (4,1) – Too close to the slider end imo, I’d move 4 a bit away. Done
  4. 02:50:578 (5) – This note sounds way off timing. True that, fixed.
  5. 03:21:569 (2,3,4,5) – Could be more linear. Got it
  6. 04:56:006 (1,2) – This plays pretty awkwardly. Maybe something like this? https://puu.sh/rLWss/fe1cda5840.png I just don’t like the multi-reverse slider because it’s so short and difficult to read how many times you’re gonna reverse it. Looks better now, thanks!
  7. 04:59:606 (1) - +1 Reverse? Fixed
  8. https://puu.sh/rLWws/8d71596de9.png You toggled kiai time 5 times in 20 seconds. That’s a kiai per 4 seconds. Why not make that area a whole kiai time? I prefer it this way, besides the original apparition has it as well.
  9. 05:20:726 (1,2,3,4) - + 1 reverse is possible, but not needed. The first 2 having 3 repeats to get new players get used to it, the rest have usual 4.
  10. 05:26:006 (4) – The guitar goes from white tick to white tick and doesn’t play anything on the red tick.
  11. 05:36:086 (1,4) – … I don’t know about this. Could you try to stack these somehow? Tried to. I think it looks good now.
  12. 05:41:846 (3,4,6) – Same as above. +1 reverse is possible. Also, 05:42:806 (5) ? Why is this one longer than the others? Didn't spot this one, thanks for pointing that out.
  13. 05:49:526 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  14. 05:57:206 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  15. 06:22:237 (1) – Sudden sv change in a part with similar intensity as before. Could throw players off, I would keep the sv you had before or just lower it slightly, not from 1.5, I don’t get why it’s changed now. I get that the BPM is lower, but I recommend keeping a similar sv to before. Leaving it, I prefer it this way.


That’s all the major things that stood out to me.~

Good luck!
Thanks a lot for the mod! <3
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2016-11-12 02:13 PajWoj: 01:40:569 (3) -
2016-11-12 02:13 PajWoj: ten jest dziwny
2016-11-12 02:13 PajWoj: slider
2016-11-12 02:13 PajWoj: 01:42:569 (1,3) -
2016-11-12 02:13 PajWoj: to się styka
2016-11-12 02:14 [Nemesis]: co z nim nie tak?
2016-11-12 02:14 PajWoj: 02:06:569 (1) -
2016-11-12 02:14 PajWoj: o ten też taki
2016-11-12 02:14 PajWoj: w sensie
2016-11-12 02:14 PajWoj: mam wrażenie
2016-11-12 02:14 PajWoj: że ciężko się czyta takie
2016-11-12 02:14 PajWoj: co mają początek w tracka zawinięty prawie że
2016-11-12 02:15 PajWoj: może być mylące
2016-11-12 02:15 [Nemesis]: wydaje mi sie, ze jest to wyraznie nakreslone
2016-11-12 02:15 [Nemesis]: oczywiscie moge sie mylic
2016-11-12 02:15 PajWoj: znaczy no nie wiem tak zobaczyłem i jakoś
2016-11-12 02:15 PajWoj: mogę się mylić
2016-11-12 02:16 PajWoj: 02:47:582 (2) -
2016-11-12 02:16 PajWoj: to mógłbyś na jedynce położyć
2016-11-12 02:16 [Nemesis]: lekko go poprawilem
2016-11-12 02:16 PajWoj: szczerze to nie wiem co by to zmieniło
2016-11-12 02:16 PajWoj: ale mógłbyś
2016-11-12 02:16 PajWoj: i na to 1 i 2 jakieś whistle dodać czy coś
2016-11-12 02:16 PajWoj: bo taki dźwięk tam jest
2016-11-12 02:16 PajWoj: 02:46:554 (1,2) -
2016-11-12 02:17 [Nemesis]: mysle ze fixed
2016-11-12 02:17 [Nemesis]: (jak cos to postuj na threat, dam Ci kudosa)
2016-11-12 02:18 PajWoj: wkleję logi
2016-11-12 02:18 [Nemesis]: aight
2016-11-12 02:19 [Nemesis]: jak reszta?
2016-11-12 02:19 PajWoj: mógłbyś dodać kółko w tym miejscu
2016-11-12 02:19 PajWoj: 04:31:526 (4) -
2016-11-12 02:19 PajWoj: fajnie brzmi
2016-11-12 02:19 PajWoj: chociaż nie wiem czy się nadaje
2016-11-12 02:20 PajWoj: 04:57:446 (4) -
2016-11-12 02:20 PajWoj: w tym momencie w sumie też
2016-11-12 02:20 PajWoj: tak styknięte z 1
2016-11-12 02:22 [Nemesis]: hmm
2016-11-12 02:22 [Nemesis]: dobry pomysl z ta druga opcja
2016-11-12 02:22 [Nemesis]: pierwsza zostawiam
2016-11-12 02:22 PajWoj: o a tu
2016-11-12 02:22 PajWoj: mógłbyś porobić
2016-11-12 02:22 PajWoj: slidery 1/1
2016-11-12 02:22 PajWoj: od białego do białego
2016-11-12 02:22 PajWoj: zamiast kółek co 2 białe
2016-11-12 02:23 PajWoj: 06:29:951 (4) -
2016-11-12 02:23 PajWoj: od tego momentu
2016-11-12 02:23 PajWoj: 06:29:522 (4) -
2016-11-12 02:24 PajWoj: zamiast tego spinnera mógłbyś zmapować te długie takie
2016-11-12 02:24 PajWoj: wiesz
2016-11-12 02:24 PajWoj: 06:44:843 -
2016-11-12 02:24 PajWoj: żeby się kończył jakoś tu
2016-11-12 02:24 PajWoj: 06:41:093 (1) -
2016-11-12 02:24 PajWoj: cholera
2016-11-12 02:25 PajWoj: 42:807 żeby się kończył
2016-11-12 02:25 [Nemesis]: lol
2016-11-12 02:25 PajWoj: i od następnego takie slidery ładne
2016-11-12 02:25 [Nemesis]: nie rozumiem co masz na mysli
2016-11-12 02:26 PajWoj: coś takiego
2016-11-12 02:27 PajWoj: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6545945
2016-11-12 02:27 PajWoj: nie patrz na kształty i w ogóle
2016-11-12 02:27 PajWoj: mniej więcej jak na timeline
2016-11-12 02:27 PajWoj: żeby było
2016-11-12 02:27 PajWoj: i potem jest następny ten dźwięk
2016-11-12 02:27 PajWoj: i slider by się kończył tam gdzie jest to
2016-11-12 02:28 PajWoj: 06:49:665 (1) -
2016-11-12 02:29 PajWoj: i na koniec możesz wsadzić spinnera
2016-11-12 02:30 PajWoj: no i to chyba tyle
2016-11-12 02:30 PajWoj: ciekawe, easy apparition


my first mod ever, hopefully it was useful!
posted
You should probably use the timing this map has https://osu.ppy.sh/s/374115

Simply because it is more accurate regarding offsets and timing signatures

Current timing has wrong signatures many times e.g. the 270 BPM kiai 06:09:792 - being 1 bar of 6/4 + 2 of 4/4 repeatedly
posted
if this is a joke map, this is glorious i love this

otherwise - its a massive sigh

[Eternal Scripture]
  1. first off i see no reason to have so many slider ticks, might as well leave it at 1, or at least silence it
  2. 01:10:569 (1,2,3,4) - would say you can map sliders onto here as well to emphasise on more notes and make them less jagged for the decreased intensity effect
  3. 01:29:569 (3,4,1) - why not make it a slider as well, seemingly no point to have it as 3 hitcircles
  4. 01:33:569 - not gonna map to big white tick?
  5. 01:44:069 (2,3,4,1,2) - not very sure as to what your rhythm choice is here, so will it be drums or vocals or both? if anything i feel like there can be more emphasised notes
  6. 02:41:561 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - would not suggest having hitcircles for parts with various bpm changes, can throw off Normal players
  7. 02:50:515 (5) - this should be shifted 1/4 after
  8. 03:29:440 (1,2,3) - the overlapping notes look rather ugly imo
  9. 03:56:946 (1,2,3,4) - having a sudden double reverse right after single reverse sliders can throw players off imo
  10. 04:05:126 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - overdone finishes
  11. 04:36:806 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why the sudden choice to completely desert the sliderart compared to parts before with similar musical structure?
  12. 04:56:006 (1,2,3,4) - given the distance its really hard to read, suggest making 04:56:726 (3) - reverse

    i think i'll stop here, am not quite sure how to mod this because your whole map has not much of a structure i can grasp. the notes and sliders are placed well but it really doesnt follow the song at some points and it makes no sense to me to look in the editor. i could say it probably plays alright if there were less unreadable things.

    gl i guess
posted
The whole map is supposed to reflect the original apparition, so usually the rhythm choice, or sudden pattern change from sliderart to circles are both emphasized by the song AND the original apparition. Otherwise a very good mod, applied most of the changes, thanks for pointing things out.
posted
m4m

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01:16:569 (4) - i think u should nc this since its the the downbeat to be consistent
01:27:569 (2) - using sliders like these fits better than the wavy one
01:45:069 (4) - can try remove the repeat and make the downbeat clickable with a slider that end here 01:46:319 - that way u can emphasise the bg guitar
01:50:569 (1) - u can at least make more neat sliders that have more meaning and creats better flow because even if u ctl a u see all objecs stacked in center u didnt even use the whole mapping field
01:14:569 (3) - the spacing is not consistent and there is more along the map , check distance snap in modhelp since this a normal better keep distance equal
02:38:826 - maybe add break here and here 02:41:742 - to give the player drain pause
02:46:554 (1,2) - this kind of spacing is confusing to read for a normal difficulty maybe avoide it either stack them or space them with ds
02:55:062 (4,5,6,7) - ^
03:23:440 (1,2) - maybe dont overlap and give the slider a clear path for the player
05:07:286 (1,2,3) - its better to make something playabe like this than 04:52:166 (1) - its really can misslead the player and he doesnt know when to stop because it repeat it self many times
05:49:526 (2,3,4,5) - maybe avoid too much 1/2 in normal and since its 250bpm
06:21:792 (4,1) - one time u stack 1/2 and then u stack 1/1 it can create confusion
overall i dont agree much with the sv changes since i consider this as normal, quality can be improved more and what i mention before repeats also consistency is important i hope i helped good luck!
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