poots_mcgoots wrote:

May I mod?

[Nemesis] wrote:

poots_mcgoots wrote:

May I mod?

sure thing :3

• 
  [The Apparition, a Messenger of the Eternal Scripture]
  (*) It is okay for this difficulty to be at normal level as long as you keep it to one difficulty, but I'm not sure about the naming. You may want to check to make sure you're allowed to have a custom difficulty name for a normal diff, since it's the hardest diff this may be okay.
  (*) I suggest changing the name of this to just "A Messenger of the Eternal Scripture", since there is already apparition in the title, it seems repetitive and unnecessary. Also it just makes it shorter and cleaner.
  (*) Overall your DS seems to be a bit low, so maybe increase it to 1.00x-1.50x.
  (*) You may want to copy timing points from the ranked apparition. Copying timing points from ranked maps is always a good idea as they are definitely correct and in the right place.
  (*) Relating to this point above, your first timing point should be at 0569, and the BPM is 240, not 120.
  (*) 00:54:569 (1) - You should never place objects out of the grid in normal difficulties.
  (*) 01:10:069 (4,1) - Again
  (*) 01:00:569 (3) - This slider goes over a strongly emphasised part, starting at 1:01:569. You should definitely map this section. Try doing something like this http://puu.sh/rcZJh.jpg.
  (*) 01:08:569 (3,4) - You should map in between these notes, same reason as before.
  (*) 01:40:569 (3) - This is off the grid again.
  (*) 02:55:066 (4,5,6,7) - You shouldn't stack in normals. Slight stacking is okay in some situations but this is a bit too much.
  (*) 03:28:940 (3,1) - This too.
  (*) 04:15:206 (4,5,6,1) - This pattern should be spread out more. The stacking of (4) on (1) could confuse some new players.
  (*) 04:20:486 (1,1) - You always want to leave a resting time of 2 white ticks after a spinner in normal difficulties, since it gives newer players a time to react. I suggest moving the spinner end to 4:22:886, or mapping this section instead.
  (*) 04:40:166 (4,1,2,3) - This doesn't look nice. Try stack (3) on (4) and adjusting the pattern a little.
  (*) Also in this part of the map you seem to only place circles, which can throw some players off and is also not very nice to look at. Try add a couple sliders in here.
  (*) 04:52:166 (1,1,1) - I don't like these repeating sliders. Maybe add several sliders or a couple repeating sliders.
  (*) I think you should remove the bursts of kiai between 4:52 and 5:09. It's unnecessary.
  (*) 05:17:006 (1,1) - Same here, this is too close. You need to space your slider and following notes more.
  
  In general it looks like your patterns are nice, and the map looks good, but you need to increase the DS, and fix some small placement issues and your map will look a lot better. I skipped a lot of the parts since I would be repeating myself, but generally what I have said should fix a lot of other problems you have.
  If you would like to ask me anything about this mod feel free to ask me in game.
  Anyway good luck with your map!

Kanye wrote:

Hi!
Saw your post in a mod queue and decided to give a little help.

• 
  [The Apparition, a Messenger of the Eternal Scripture]
  (*) It is okay for this difficulty to be at normal level as long as you keep it to one difficulty, but I'm not sure about the naming. You may want to check to make sure you're allowed to have a custom difficulty name for a normal diff, since it's the hardest diff this may be okay. <-- Approval maps may use free naming
  (*) I suggest changing the name of this to just "A Messenger of the Eternal Scripture", since there is already apparition in the title, it seems repetitive and unnecessary. Also it just makes it shorter and cleaner. <--- I'll consider it
  (*) Overall your DS seems to be a bit low, so maybe increase it to 1.00x-1.50x. <--- I like it the way it is, tbh. It's supposed to be REALLY easy.
  (*) You may want to copy timing points from the ranked apparition. Copying timing points from ranked maps is always a good idea as they are definitely correct and in the right place. <--- I did it, just removed unnecessary ones
  (*) Relating to this point above, your first timing point should be at 0569, and the BPM is 240, not 120. <--- offset changed, BPM sounds good and it would make me remake ALL the timing points, so no, it stays.
  (*) 00:54:569 (1) - You should never place objects out of the grid in normal difficulties. <--- Fixed
  (*) 01:10:069 (4,1) - Again <--- This one is in the grid lol?
  (*) 01:00:569 (3) - This slider goes over a strongly emphasised part, starting at 1:01:569. You should definitely map this section. Try doing something like this http://puu.sh/rcZJh.jpg. <--- I like it the way it is :3
  (*) 01:08:569 (3,4) - You should map in between these notes, same reason as before. <--- ^
  (*) 01:40:569 (3) - This is off the grid again. <--- Fixed
  (*) 02:55:066 (4,5,6,7) - You shouldn't stack in normals. Slight stacking is okay in some situations but this is a bit too much. <--- alright
  (*) 03:28:940 (3,1) - This too.
  (*) 04:15:206 (4,5,6,1) - This pattern should be spread out more. The stacking of (4) on (1) could confuse some new players. <--- I don't think I know how to fix it for me to like it, so I leave it
  (*) 04:20:486 (1,1) - You always want to leave a resting time of 2 white ticks after a spinner in normal difficulties, since it gives newer players a time to react. I suggest moving the spinner end to 4:22:886, or mapping this section instead. <--- Fixed.
  (*) 04:40:166 (4,1,2,3) - This doesn't look nice. Try stack (3) on (4) and adjusting the pattern a little. <--- I think you'll like it this way, fixed.
  (*) Also in this part of the map you seem to only place circles, which can throw some players off and is also not very nice to look at. Try add a couple sliders in here. <--- That's very, very intended. Not changing that for sure.
  (*) 04:52:166 (1,1,1) - I don't like these repeating sliders. Maybe add several sliders or a couple repeating sliders. <--- Same here.
  (*) I think you should remove the bursts of kiai between 4:52 and 5:09. It's unnecessary. <--- They are, believe me.
  (*) 05:17:006 (1,1) - Same here, this is too close. You need to space your slider and following notes more. <--- Fixed
  
  In general it looks like your patterns are nice, and the map looks good, but you need to increase the DS, and fix some small placement issues and your map will look a lot better. I skipped a lot of the parts since I would be repeating myself, but generally what I have said should fix a lot of other problems you have.
  If you would like to ask me anything about this mod feel free to ask me in game.
  Anyway good luck with your map!

-SuGon- wrote:

[General]
According to rule below
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

1. Each mapset must have at least two osu!standard difficulties, one of which must be an Easy/Normal level. Approval mapsets are allowed to have only one standard difficulty of any level.
2.Difficult name can't write by youself. I mean you need to flow this https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/178700
3.your song is too long .less than 5 min is better.

4.If your map's level is Normal. overlap:02:46:554 (1,2) - 02:55:066 (4,5,6) - 02:57:066 (6,7) -
5.If your map's level is Normal .You can't put the hitcircle or head slider in blue line.
6.If your map's level is Normal .slider is too long 03:29:440 (1) -
7.04:27:686 (1,2,3) -

I like this flow 06:16:014 (4,5,6,7) -

I think you need
1.cut your song(too long)
2.write correct level name

Otherwise, I can not help you Because IDK what is your map's level

[Nemesis] wrote:

-SuGon- wrote:

[General]
According to rule below
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

1. Each mapset must have at least two osu!standard difficulties, one of which must be an Easy/Normal level. Approval mapsets are allowed to have only one standard difficulty of any level.
2.Difficult name can't write by youself. I mean you need to flow this https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/178700
3.your song is too long .less than 5 min is better.

4.If your map's level is Normal. overlap:02:46:554 (1,2) - 02:55:066 (4,5,6) - 02:57:066 (6,7) -
5.If your map's level is Normal .You can't put the hitcircle or head slider in blue line.
6.If your map's level is Normal .slider is too long 03:29:440 (1) -
7.04:27:686 (1,2,3) -

I like this flow 06:16:014 (4,5,6,7) -

I think you need
1.cut your song(too long)
2.write correct level name

Otherwise, I can not help you Because IDK what is your map's level

The mod didn't really help, sorry. This map is going for approval, which means it can extend to ANY length and is able to use free naming, sorry but it's not another 1:30 animango song with 10 diffs.

Miryle wrote:

From my queue!

Eternal Scripture

Normal

1. The offset feels more accurate at 54,571 to be honest. Feels good to me.
   
2. 01:44:069 (2,3) – Move these two down so they’re symmetrical along the end of 01:42:569 (1)? Sure thing, fixed
   
3. 01:53:571 (4,1) – Too close to the slider end imo, I’d move 4 a bit away. Done
   
4. 02:50:578 (5) – This note sounds way off timing. True that, fixed.
   
5. 03:21:569 (2,3,4,5) – Could be more linear. Got it
   
6. 04:56:006 (1,2) – This plays pretty awkwardly. Maybe something like this? https://puu.sh/rLWss/fe1cda5840.png I just don’t like the multi-reverse slider because it’s so short and difficult to read how many times you’re gonna reverse it. Looks better now, thanks!
   
7. 04:59:606 (1) - +1 Reverse? Fixed
8. https://puu.sh/rLWws/8d71596de9.png You toggled kiai time 5 times in 20 seconds. That’s a kiai per 4 seconds. Why not make that area a whole kiai time? I prefer it this way, besides the original apparition has it as well.
   
9. 05:20:726 (1,2,3,4) - + 1 reverse is possible, but not needed. The first 2 having 3 repeats to get new players get used to it, the rest have usual 4.
   
10. 05:26:006 (4) – The guitar goes from white tick to white tick and doesn’t play anything on the red tick.
    
11. 05:36:086 (1,4) – … I don’t know about this. Could you try to stack these somehow? Tried to. I think it looks good now.
    
12. 05:41:846 (3,4,6) – Same as above. +1 reverse is possible. Also, 05:42:806 (5) ? Why is this one longer than the others? Didn't spot this one, thanks for pointing that out.
    
13. 05:49:526 (2,3,4,5) - ^
    
14. 05:57:206 (3,4,5,6) - ^
    
15. 06:22:237 (1) – Sudden sv change in a part with similar intensity as before. Could throw players off, I would keep the sv you had before or just lower it slightly, not from 1.5, I don’t get why it’s changed now. I get that the BPM is lower, but I recommend keeping a similar sv to before. Leaving it, I prefer it this way.

That’s all the major things that stood out to me.~

Good luck!

1. first off i see no reason to have so many slider ticks, might as well leave it at 1, or at least silence it
2. 01:10:569 (1,2,3,4) - would say you can map sliders onto here as well to emphasise on more notes and make them less jagged for the decreased intensity effect
3. 01:29:569 (3,4,1) - why not make it a slider as well, seemingly no point to have it as 3 hitcircles
4. 01:33:569 - not gonna map to big white tick?
5. 01:44:069 (2,3,4,1,2) - not very sure as to what your rhythm choice is here, so will it be drums or vocals or both? if anything i feel like there can be more emphasised notes
6. 02:41:561 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - would not suggest having hitcircles for parts with various bpm changes, can throw off Normal players
7. 02:50:515 (5) - this should be shifted 1/4 after
8. 03:29:440 (1,2,3) - the overlapping notes look rather ugly imo
9. 03:56:946 (1,2,3,4) - having a sudden double reverse right after single reverse sliders can throw players off imo
10. 04:05:126 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - overdone finishes
11. 04:36:806 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why the sudden choice to completely desert the sliderart compared to parts before with similar musical structure?
12. 04:56:006 (1,2,3,4) - given the distance its really hard to read, suggest making 04:56:726 (3) - reverse
    
    i think i'll stop here, am not quite sure how to mod this because your whole map has not much of a structure i can grasp. the notes and sliders are placed well but it really doesnt follow the song at some points and it makes no sense to me to look in the editor. i could say it probably plays alright if there were less unreadable things.
    
    gl i guess