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Gladenfold - ...To Eternity

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LMT
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Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
LMT

BOUYAAA wrote:

Hello as promised here is the mod

I'm gonna assume timing is correct lol
Are you familiar with audio editing? If yes your map would benefit from some cuts in places where timing goes nuts. Here for example (hard) 00:10:560 (3,1) - just to make the gap less noticeable.Maybe you could even remove all inconsistencies and make this a constant 171 bpm <3 thanks for your edit

Easy :

00:06:725 (3) - In easy diffs it's better to keep flow intuitive. In this case it would work better if the slider pointed towards the next object so that movement is smooth. Right now it's curve goes to the right which doesn't really achieve that fixed

00:13:742 (1,3) - just for aesthetics, i think it would be better if the two objects would be symmetrical. Like this for example http://puu.sh/qUe08/33b407affc.jpg. I know it's pretty minor but little details like this one can improve how your map looks by quite a lot fixed

00:20:053 (2,3) - here too flow is not very good, the two objects point away from each other. My suggestion would be this http://puu.sh/qUeLh/611619214e.jpg fixed

00:29:889 (5,3) - here it might cause issues too because beginners might be more enclined to play 3 after 5 since 5 points directly towards it I guess 3 appears really late so I don't think they're going to click that.

00:34:429 - repeat slider should end somewhere here to end on the 1/1 beat :(, right now the snapping you use will be confusing yeah but I can't snap the sliderend to the correct beat so I'll keep it for now
Also when doign multibpm stuff it's probably better to keep spacing consistent between objects even if there are inconsistencies. 00:34:804 (2,3,1) - here for example i imagine all these notes are supposed to be 1/1, would be cool if spacing sugested that too. Like this for ex : http://puu.sh/qUfhu/1b56e8cba2.jpg
Happens here too 00:37:619 (3,1) - fixed and fixed
00:46:066 (1,2,3) - objectys don't seem to have same visual spacing either here I can't really see it but moved around to make sure it's the case.

00:59:488 (1) - probably better to do a slider that goes from 00:59:203 - to 00:59:488 - , less confusing imo. Same for the other ones 1/2s are too short for me :d so I'll keep it.

Normal :

Just like easy it would be better if those sliders that are pointing away from the next object would actually point towards it, on easier diffs it's important to keep flow intuitive so that you do not confuse the player too much. a few examples would be 00:33:412 (1,2) - 00:18:635 (2,1) - 00:37:221 (3,4) - . There are probably others i missed so find them pls I hope I fixed them all.

00:06:725 (3,1) - I'd probably ask around to see if those kind of overlaps are fine with such a big gap between the objects. Imo they are not but who knows
00:07:426 (1,2,3) - while you're at it ask for these too xd http://puu.sh/qUg17/01140650b9.jpg <- this guy sais it's ok though umm I'll ask around I think it's o...kkay...

00:11:638 (3,2) - the touching of unrelated objects like this doesn't look too good in game imo fixed

00:16:549 (1,2) - yea definately you can't do 2/1 (00:06:725 (3,1) - ) and 1/1 in the same map lol. I'd space the 1/1 like you did here 00:23:573 (1,2) - fixed

00:34:316 (2,3,4) - visually different spacing even though bpm doesn't change, this is due to the next timing section, i think you have to place them manually here. 00:45:749 (4,1,2) - aaaaah here too fixed

00:59:203 - same remark as easy, slider would fit better there imo now I think it works.

Hard :

00:05:672 (2,3) - I'm a little worried about readability here, you can probably guess why ctrl+g'd

00:20:053 (2,3,4) - same visual spacing pls maybe I've fixed it unconsciously, but it looks equal to me.

00:30:591 (1,2,3,4) - i'm guessing your manipulation spacing for pitch and intensity but id's suggest leaving that for insane and up 00:30:591 (1,2,3,4) - particularly noticeable here umm yeah, but only for this one, I'd keep the 1/1s for pitch relevance though.


00:33:938 (2) - not snapped correctly i think 00:34:316 (3) - same 00:35:166 (4) - fixed when I fixed timing.

00:44:170 (2) - Suddently you don't follow your previous rythm anymore, unless you wanna do triple stuff like you did before (which i don't recomment cuz it would probably be overmapped here) you should porbably snap the slider to the next white tick yeah

00:44:872 (3) - the end should be snapped on the white tick i think (timing might be a little off here) it really is on the blue tick but I snapped it to the white tick anyways.

00:44:872 (3,4) - 1/1 isn't clear enough, this is spaced like 1/2, don't do that made a flow break + proper 1/1 spacing.

00:49:925 (5,1) - if you're going for a little jump on the others, do it here too yea



Insane :

00:33:412 (1,2) - doesn't flow very well and doesn't look great imo I think it flows fine like a drop-off , but made the sliderheads closer to the slidertails for intuitive reading.

00:33:915 (2,3,4) - would be cool if you did something like in normal where sliders would rotate around the last slider I think I just prefer this design.

00:45:925 (3,1) - i'm not a fan of kicksliders with such low spacing when they are in streams. i'd space those two objects a bit more so that they at lest don't touch yeah, it was there because of the timing point, fixed.

You might be able to improve flow in the stream part if you wanted but i like this, cool stuff I think it's alright :d


I'm gonna stop here for now, i'm too lazy to read everything agaiun so if you don't get something feel free to ask me ingame
Nice song, i hope this map gets somewhere!

Good luck!
!! Big thanks for the mp3 edit, and your mod was really helpful!
Maelstrrom
192 posts
Joined July 2011
Maelstrrom
m4m

General
  • 00:41:870 - preview point fix (all diffs)
Easy
  • 00:07:797 (5,1) - a bit weird flow for easy
    00:16:529 (1,2,3,4) - yeah those flowers and smooth blankets seems clean. But easy diff needs easier cursor movings. Consider the petals to be wider.
    00:26:009 (3,4) - a little DS fix
    00:29:167 (4,5) - ^ turn off grind snap if you're using it
    00:32:667 (5,1) - heavy flow. Lower the first slider or lift the second
    00:31:974 - here starts a high bpm switching density part. Revise it with equal DS (guideline for Easy and Insane)
Normal
  • 00:32:667 (5,1) - a bit complication would fit the music. Turn 00:32:667 (5) - up (higher pitch) and 00:33:392 (1) - down (lower pitch). Also this would make flow between them harder (which melody is asking for) and flow between 00:33:392 (1,2) - easier which is looks good to me as well.
    00:36:204 (1,2) - may confuse a new player
    00:44:852 (3,4) - space leaps are not recommended for normal and easy
    00:48:502 (2,3,4) - uncomfortable to play. My suggestion on the screens below which would also emphasize 00:50:256 (1) -


Yamicchi's Light Insane
  • 00:15:126 (1,2) - overmapped
Insane
  • Move 00:30:921 (2) - under the next slider's end and curve 00:30:220 (4,5,1) - by lifting 00:30:395 (5) - up to create some flow
    Move 00:35:804 (3) - down and 00:36:204 (1) - up+clockwise rotate by the same reason
Such a lovely melody! Can i make another GD ?

Good luck!
Last edited by Maelstrrom , edited 1 time in total.
LMT
535 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
LMT

Maelstrrom wrote:

m4m

General
  • 00:41:870 - preview point fix (all diffs) yesyes
Easy
  • 00:07:797 (5,1) - a bit weird flow for easy I think it's okay because the circles suggest a circular flow, which is usually considered comfortable.
    00:16:529 (1,2,3,4) - yeah those flowers and smooth blankets seems clean. But easy diff needs easier cursor movings. Consider the petals to be wider. not entirely sure I think the slider shapes do suggest the next thing to click is the sliderhead clear enough. I'll change it if someone else brings this issue up again.
    00:26:009 (3,4) - a little DS fix fixed I think
    00:29:167 (4,5) - ^ turn off grind snap if you're using it fixed
    00:32:667 (5,1) - heavy flow. Lower the first slider or lift the second fixed
    00:31:974 - here starts a high bpm switching density part. Revise it with equal DS (guideline for Easy and Insane) 3 and 4 gives enough emphasis for 5 and the sliders are to differentiate with the less strong piano sounds so I guess I'll keep that for now.
Normal
  • 00:32:667 (5,1) - a bit complication would fit the music. Turn 00:32:667 (5) - up (higher pitch) and 00:33:392 (1) - down (lower pitch). Also this would make flow between them harder (which melody is asking for) and flow between 00:33:392 (1,2) - easier which is looks good to me as well. did something about making the flow more interesting for 3 and 4 but i can't do anything about the pitch thing because spacing in Normal should 99% of the time be consistent.
    00:36:204 (1,2) - may confuse a new player 1/1 stacks are used consistently throughout the map so they should get this.
    00:44:852 (3,4) - space leaps are not recommended for normal and easy the hell was i doing lol.
    00:48:502 (2,3,4) - uncomfortable to play. My suggestion on the screens below which would also emphasize 00:50:256 (1) - I've considered your suggestion but the flow isn't so smooth from 1 to 2 . Also the rhythm pattern here changes a bit compared to the previous measure so I want to player to be a bit aware of what they're clicking to. Also isn't being at the pivot of the symmetry a better emphasis :D ? .
    http://puu.sh/r91b6/a6e997329d.jpg
    http://puu.sh/r91o4/ae197e2686.jpg

Insane
  • Move 00:30:921 (2) - under the next slider's end and curve 00:30:220 (4,5,1) - by lifting 00:30:395 (5) - up to create some flow 00:30:571 (1,2) - correspond to different rhythm pattern compared to 00:30:220 (4,5,1) - these so a new pattern + flow break is needed to distinguish between the two.
    Move 00:35:804 (3) - down and 00:36:204 (1) - up+clockwise rotate by the same reason I get what you mean but I want to emphasise this piano note with a sharp angle. It does have a clockwise circular flow though so I think it's fine.
Such a lovely melody! Can i make another GD ? Sorry :( The spread is quite bad if there's another diff. And I don't think there are enough musical elements to map an Extra.

Good luck!
Thanks for modding!!
Yamicchi
1,175 posts
Joined May 2015
Yamicchi

BOUYAAA wrote:

Light insane is a dumb diff name :

00:17:017 (2) - try not to go offbeat, it's very offputing when you mapped onbeat until now and suddently this happen. This should probably be a repeat slider like the other ones that starts on the strong beat : 00:16:900 - http://puu.sh/qUiaw/5295a65dc4.jpg or something fixed

00:33:098 (3) - same here, why offbeat don't really think it's a problem here this time because I just simply make it clickable at stronger beats

00:33:915 (2,3) - 5/4 gap, not very readable lol lol but not sure how to fix because It's what the music like

00:41:918 - snares are triggering me, use somethign softer and more fitting like maybe the soft whistle or something probably because of the hitsound of your skin you're using, but yea let's make them whistle

nice diff

Good luck!
Always a good mod Bouyaaa, thanks :3
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PyroBear
144 posts
Joined October 2015
PyroBear
For the M4M (if you can't do the mod for me that's fine)

Easy
Add a break between 00:02:183 and 00:05:341?

add a break in 00:57:212
Normal
00:43:975 (2) connects strangely to (3) (pure opinion btw)
00:33:918 AImod says the slider end is not snapped.

Other than that it's well mapped

Hard has no issues! (For now, I'll check it properly tomorrow)

Light Insane
00:56:994 I hope this is intentional. If it's not https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Making_Good_Sliders(why tho)

Insane will be done tomorrow! And I will check the maps again.
LMT
535 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
LMT

ThePyroBear wrote:

For the M4M (if you can't do the mod for me that's fine)

Easy
Add a break between 00:02:183 and 00:05:341?

add a break in 00:57:212 adding breaks would kill the atmosphere, so no.
Normal
00:43:975 (2) connects strangely to (3) (pure opinion btw) yeah but it's intentional because music goes a bit strange and the play has enough time to readjust their aim, though if this issue is brought up again I'll change it
00:33:918 AImod says the slider end is not snapped. fixed, ughh multiple timing points.

Other than that it's well mapped
Thanks for modding! I'll get to yours now.
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Shyotamaze
Hi, M4M from my modding queue

General
  1. Disable countdown and widescreen support
Hard
  1. 00:12:319 (3) - Make it a bit less curvy like the other sliders in this part imo
  2. 00:19:313 (1,3) - Fix stack
  3. 00:27:764 (1,2) - Nazi blanket ye
  4. 00:33:392 (1,2,3) - Here the spacing is pretty similar so it can be hard to guess that 00:34:296 (3) - is another rhythm
  5. 00:37:599 (1,2,3) - Nazi blanket ye
Yamicchi's Light Insane
  1. 00:30:571 (1,2) - Waves could be improved imo, why not make them like this one 00:33:392 (1) - ?
  2. 01:06:868 (1,1) - Nazi blanket ye
Insane
  1. 00:05:692 (3,1) - Some kind of blanket would be cool imo, if you agree and want to keep a consistent spacing I'd suggest moving 00:06:394 (5,1) - a bit to the right
  2. 00:08:148 (1,2) - Nazi blanket ye
  3. 00:15:126 (1) - Something like this http://prntscr.com/chn7w5 would be better since the second part of the stream (where I put circles) sounds kinda different than the reverse slider part imo
  4. 00:32:667 (1,2) - Maybe more emphasize? The piano sounds is kinda loud here
  5. 00:34:784 (1) - The overlap with 00:34:296 (3) - looks weird imo, try to move it down a bit
  6. 00:35:497 (2,1) - Nazi blanket ye
  7. 00:39:706 (3,1) - Maybe blanket?
  8. 00:47:800 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Make them with the same angle for consistency/aesthetics (just copy/paste 00:47:800 (1,2,3) - and rotate by 180°)
  9. 00:48:502 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - You could do the same as ^ for consistency/aesthetics ye since the two patterns are similar, why not make them similar with the note placement too?
  10. 00:52:361 (1) - The wave could be improved imo
  11. 00:56:994 (1) - It sounds like a weird triple with sounds here http://prntscr.com/chne33 tbh idk how you're supposed to map that but I just wanted to say it lol
  12. 01:06:167 (1,1) - Nazi blanket ye
Wow I love the song and background :d
Good luck!
LMT
535 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
LMT

Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, M4M from my modding queue

General
  1. Disable countdown and widescreen support ok
Hard
  1. 00:12:319 (3) - Make it a bit less curvy like the other sliders in this part imo sure
  2. 00:19:313 (1,3) - Fix stack yeah
  3. 00:27:764 (1,2) - Nazi blanket ye ye
  4. 00:33:392 (1,2,3) - Here the spacing is pretty similar so it can be hard to guess that 00:34:296 (3) - is another rhythm a bit more spacing for 3
  5. 00:37:599 (1,2,3) - Nazi blanket ye would be too curvy to make a blanket out of it , so proooobably not.

Insane
  1. 00:05:692 (3,1) - Some kind of blanket would be cool imo, if you agree and want to keep a consistent spacing I'd suggest moving 00:06:394 (5,1) - a bit to the right eh probably not cus that kinda kills the flow.
  2. 00:08:148 (1,2) - Nazi blanket ye i can't blanket this cus the angle from the slidertail to the stream will be toooo sharp, really uncomfortable.
  3. 00:15:126 (1) - Something like this http://prntscr.com/chn7w5 would be better since the second part of the stream (where I put circles) sounds kinda different than the reverse slider part imo it's kinddd of different but such sounds can be achieved on the guitar by just 1 technique so I want to keep it. Besides I've made the hitsounds a bit different for the two sets.
  4. 00:32:667 (1,2) - Maybe more emphasize? The piano sounds is kinda loud here yea
  5. 00:34:784 (1) - The overlap with 00:34:296 (3) - looks weird imo, try to move it down a bit actually moved up so the overlap is equal for both sliders. That was my idea but somehow it slipped xd.
  6. 00:35:497 (2,1) - Nazi blanket ye how the f do you catch these things, fixed, probably, i can't even see the difference.
  7. 00:39:706 (3,1) - Maybe blanket? nah that slider is just to emphasise the ending piano sound, it has nothing to do it 3 so no need to make a pattern out of it.
  8. 00:47:800 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Make them with the same angle for consistency/aesthetics (just copy/paste 00:47:800 (1,2,3) - and rotate by 180°) sure
  9. 00:48:502 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - You could do the same as ^ for consistency/aesthetics ye since the two patterns are similar, why not make them similar with the note placement too? cus triangle xd.
  10. 00:52:361 (1) - The wave could be improved imo fixed...eh....close enough .
  11. 00:56:994 (1) - It sounds like a weird triple with sounds here http://prntscr.com/chne33 tbh idk how you're supposed to map that but I just wanted to say it lol it's actually 1/6 quadruple but I'm following the leap sound so proooobably not
  12. 01:06:167 (1,1) - Nazi blanket ye fuk blankets :(( fixed
Wow I love the song and background :d
Good luck!
Thanks for modding! I'll get to yours now :) .
Yamicchi
1,175 posts
Joined May 2015
Yamicchi

ThePyroBear wrote:

Light Insane
00:56:994 I hope this is intentional. If it's not https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Making_Good_Sliders(why tho) I'd be appreciated to hear your suggestions, just don't teach how to *the link*. Yes it's intentional

Shyotamaze wrote:

Yamicchi's Light Insane
  1. 00:30:571 (1,2) - Waves could be improved imo, why not make them like this one 00:33:392 (1) - ? straight slider instead
  2. 01:06:868 (1,1) - Nazi blanket ye yes
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Ashton
Ashton
HI nm mod from modreqs

[Easy]

00:10:957 (1) - this and 00:12:319 (3) - this should be identical in my opinion (also if you do make them identical I'm pretty sure you can still blanket this 00:13:371 (4) - circle)
00:21:431 (3,1) - move (1) up a bit more so (3) is aiming directly at it
00:26:360 (4,5,1) - make these identical
00:29:167 (4) - left and down more (for flow)
00:32:667 (5,1) - blanket?
00:50:607 (2,3,4) - if your going to do this curve (4) the other way so it's a circular flow


good luck

short mod :( :) :( ;)
-NeBu-
435 posts
Joined March 2014
-NeBu-
Hey, M4M here aswell, here I go!

Easy:

00:09:527 (3,4,1) - I know there's BPM change, but the distance snap between 00:10:580 (4,1) - feel kinda weird for me

Overall it's hard to find something here for me, basic stuff, great DS and placement. I like it.

Normal:

00:12:319 (1) - I would consider deleting the NC, I hear this 00:10:957 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - part as one.
00:14:424 (2,3) - Make it triangle with slider and then just fix distance snap 00:15:126 (4,5) - the way it is now is kinda boring I think.
00:19:313 (1,2,1,2) - [suggestion] 00:19:313 (1,2,1,2) - Make both slider NC instead of circles? If you won't change that - 00:22:150 (1) - I hear NC here anyway, the piano change the rhythm
00:28:465 (2) - Maybe blanket it to make this 00:28:465 (2,3) - to the left/right
00:37:599 (4) - Ctrl+H and move it back without overlap with 00:37:201 (3) - it will look better and you get small triangle here 00:36:850 (2,3,4) - for cooler symmetry meanwhile not destroying the flow into 00:38:977 (1) -

Cool diff, I like the use of kick-sliders, gz!

Hard:

00:06:043 (3) - [suggestion] NC or maybe 00:06:043 (1,2) - ctrl+< this and connect this with the 00:05:341 (1,2) - part. You got better look here and small triangle (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6126866)

After all I don't see anything wrong/to change here. The main song part is mostly triple with slider.

Yamicchi's Light Insane:

00:26:009 (5) - Maybe overlap on 00:24:957 (1) - [?]
00:26:711 (2) - Overlap again on 00:25:307 (3) - or find something cooler here, the look of 00:26:360 (1,2,3) - is kinda meh :(
01:07:336 (1,2) - I think slider here would be better, but not needed

I like the stream part, good diff!

Insane:

00:01:131 (1,2,3) - It's kinda off. If you gonna listen to it on 25%, you hear second slider is slightly off, you can move slider on 1/6 to the right, but overall it's just meh. Maybe just spinner like on all diffs, would be better, but it's your choice :P
00:23:202 (4) - Unnecessary overlap, maybe move it somewhere close to x:143 y:202 to make 00:23:202 (4,5,1,2) - looks like almost square and then 00:24:430 (4) - between 00:24:255 (3,4,5) - [?]
00:28:465 (3) - Overlap too, just move it on the end of 00:27:062 (2) - but it's just how you feel.
00:40:407 (1) - I think it's little bit too long, maybe 1/6?

And I think that's it. I love this mapset, you got my kudosu. The song is great aswell, good luck in ranking that!
LMT
535 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
LMT

NeBuSC2 wrote:

Hey, M4M here aswell, here I go!

Easy:

00:09:527 (3,4,1) - I know there's BPM change, but the distance snap between 00:10:580 (4,1) - feel kinda weird for me fixed

Overall it's hard to find something here for me, basic stuff, great DS and placement. I like it.

Normal:

00:12:319 (1) - I would consider deleting the NC, I hear this 00:10:957 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - part as one. fair point, fixed
00:14:424 (2,3) - Make it triangle with slider and then just fix distance snap 00:15:126 (4,5) - the way it is now is kinda boring I think. cool idea
00:19:313 (1,2,1,2) - [suggestion] 00:19:313 (1,2,1,2) - Make both slider NC instead of circles? If you won't change that - 00:22:150 (1) - I hear NC here anyway, the piano change the rhythm um no because the circles fall on downbeats which are stronger than the sliderheads
00:28:465 (2) - Maybe blanket it to make this 00:28:465 (2,3) - to the left/right kinda breaks the flow if i blanket here.
00:37:599 (4) - Ctrl+H and move it back without overlap with 00:37:201 (3) - it will look better and you get small triangle here 00:36:850 (2,3,4) - for cooler symmetry meanwhile not destroying the flow into 00:38:977 (1) - cool stuff, but I need the overlap so the player understands that this is 1/2.

Cool diff, I like the use of kick-sliders, gz!

Hard:

00:06:043 (3) - [suggestion] NC or maybe 00:06:043 (1,2) - ctrl+< this and connect this with the 00:05:341 (1,2) - part. You got better look here and small triangle (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6126866) Not NC because downbeat consistency and I can't ctrl+< cus that requires remapping a bit lol, otherwise flow is a bit awkward

After all I don't see anything wrong/to change here. The main song part is mostly triple with slider.

Insane:

00:01:131 (1,2,3) - It's kinda off. If you gonna listen to it on 25%, you hear second slider is slightly off, you can move slider on 1/6 to the right, but overall it's just meh. Maybe just spinner like on all diffs, would be better, but it's your choice :P xd it's all sliders so it's fine, it's just a bit inconsistent.
00:23:202 (4) - Unnecessary overlap, maybe move it somewhere close to x:143 y:202 to make 00:23:202 (4,5,1,2) - looks like almost square and then 00:24:430 (4) - between 00:24:255 (3,4,5) - [?] fixed this my way xd
00:28:465 (3) - Overlap too, just move it on the end of 00:27:062 (2) - but it's just how you feel. the slider has already disappeared so I guess it's ok .
00:40:407 (1) - I think it's little bit too long, maybe 1/6? that 1/4 slider is just to emphasise the piano note, 1/6 makes it a bit too easy to sliderbreak

And I think that's it. I love this mapset, you got my kudosu. The song is great aswell, good luck in ranking that!

Whirl wrote:

[Easy]

00:10:957 (1) - this and 00:12:319 (3) - this should be identical in my opinion (also if you do make them identical I'm pretty sure you can still blanket this 00:13:371 (4) - circle) made it identical but i can't blanket 4 xd
00:21:431 (3,1) - move (1) up a bit more so (3) is aiming directly at it yea, still miss it a bit but otherwise causing flow after that to break xd.
00:26:360 (4,5,1) - make these identical ok
00:29:167 (4) - left and down more (for flow) yea
00:32:667 (5,1) - blanket? maybe fixed, i can't blanket :<
00:50:607 (2,3,4) - if your going to do this curve (4) the other way so it's a circular flow yea
Thanks for modding!!
Yamicchi
1,175 posts
Joined May 2015
Yamicchi

NeBuSC2 wrote:

Yamicchi's Light Insane:

00:26:009 (5) - Maybe overlap on 00:24:957 (1) - [?] stacked due to the rhythm's pitch
00:26:711 (2) - Overlap again on 00:25:307 (3) - or find something cooler here, the look of 00:26:360 (1,2,3) - is kinda meh :( this pattern is fine
01:07:336 (1,2) - I think slider here would be better, but not needed nah :d

I like the stream part, good diff!
thanks for the mod :3 

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Hollow Delta
793 posts
Joined March 2015
Hollow Delta
From #modreqs doing M4M.

Easy
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Something I notice right off the bat.
As hard as I've tried, can't find anything bad here.

Normal
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00:07:095 - You overlap here, yet you can hear a beat. I'd place another hit circle here.
00:19:677 - ^
00:21:080 - ^
00:31:974 (3,4) - Twice before, you used curved sliders like this to form a propeller-like pattern. It looks like you tried to get it to work here, but it didn't work out too well. I'd remove the middle points of each slider so they're straight, then re-adjust to your liking. The only reason it worked last time was because the patterns were feeding into a hard curve of a slider. The slider's not curved so much here.
00:36:204 (1,2) - You created an overlap here, but their's much more you could do here. 00:35:497 (4) - You could use this note to blanket 1, and then continue the flow. That's a way you could improve this part.
00:43:951 (1) - You used a different degree of curvature here than the last 2 notes from the similar patterns. 00:41:870 (1,3) - Their's no difference in length nor pitch, so why a different angle? I'd lessen the curve of the new 1 so it matches the previous 1, 3.

Hard
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00:11:618 (2,4) - I'm looking at these 2 notes, and I'm thinking, the curves are bisecting each other, but since they both go from left-to-right they should be straight. I'm not saying this is bad, but if you want my suggestion, look at this screenshot. I can't explain it very well, but this is my logic of what I just said: http://puu.sh/rjrzg/446d03adcb.jpg I deleted one of the sliders temporarily, but this is the shape I feel 2 and 4 need, and why it looks good. Not only does it flow into the next note very well, it looks more creative than just simple curves.
00:44:275 (2,3) - The song hasn't dropped in intensity, so why the difficulty drop here? You should continue the triplet-slider rhythm!

Yamicchi's Light Insane
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00:23:202 (4) - Seems a little random, so what I suggest you do it move 4 so 00:22:500 (2,3,4) - creates a right-angle.

Insane
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00:08:148 (4) - The last 2 notes were set up perfectly, why didn't this one join in to finish the flower pattern?
00:56:119 (1,2) - I know their's no SV change, but just for the sake of consistency, can you NC this?

Sorry I couldn't find much for Easy, it was already very good. ;)
LMT
535 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
LMT

Bubblun wrote:

From #modreqs doing M4M.

Easy
SPOILER

Something I notice right off the bat.
As hard as I've tried, can't find anything bad here. fixed unsnapped stuff, but the ds is fine because timing points orz

Normal
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timing points so no.
00:07:095 - You overlap here, yet you can hear a beat. I'd place another hit circle here. was trying to making a pattern out of 1 2 3, so no. Also stacks are 2/1s consistently throughout the map.
00:19:677 - ^ picking out the piano pattern, so no for both points.
00:21:080 - ^
00:31:974 (3,4) - Twice before, you used curved sliders like this to form a propeller-like pattern. It looks like you tried to get it to work here, but it didn't work out too well. I'd remove the middle points of each slider so they're straight, then re-adjust to your liking. The only reason it worked last time was because the patterns were feeding into a hard curve of a slider. The slider's not curved so much here. yeah straight sliders are a bit better here.
00:36:204 (1,2) - You created an overlap here, but their's much more you could do here. 00:35:497 (4) - You could use this note to blanket 1, and then continue the flow. That's a way you could improve this part. umm no , picking out the piano pattern with these 00:36:204 (1,2) - . About the blanket, that would break the ds.
00:43:951 (1) - You used a different degree of curvature here than the last 2 notes from the similar patterns. 00:41:870 (1,3) - Their's no difference in length nor pitch, so why a different angle? I'd lessen the curve of the new 1 so it matches the previous 1, 3. you are right.

Hard
SPOILER
00:11:618 (2,4) - I'm looking at these 2 notes, and I'm thinking, the curves are bisecting each other, but since they both go from left-to-right they should be straight. I'm not saying this is bad, but if you want my suggestion, look at this screenshot. I can't explain it very well, but this is my logic of what I just said: http://puu.sh/rjrzg/446d03adcb.jpg I deleted one of the sliders temporarily, but this is the shape I feel 2 and 4 need, and why it looks good. Not only does it flow into the next note very well, it looks more creative than just simple curves. nice idea but then 00:10:957 (1,2) - i want to make an oval with these so no.
00:44:275 (2,3) - The song hasn't dropped in intensity, so why the difficulty drop here? You should continue the triplet-slider rhythm! made a triple on 2 but 3 stays the same cus rhythm is a bit different here 3 starting on the red tick, kinda confusing for new players so would like to keep it simple to play.

Yamicchi's Light Insane
SPOILER
00:23:202 (4) - Seems a little random, so what I suggest you do it move 4 so 00:22:500 (2,3,4) - creates a right-angle.

Insane
SPOILER
00:08:148 (4) - The last 2 notes were set up perfectly, why didn't this one join in to finish the flower pattern? added a little angle for 4.
00:56:119 (1,2) - I know their's no SV change, but just for the sake of consistency, can you NC this? sure

Sorry I couldn't find much for Easy, it was already very good. ;)
Yamicchi
1,175 posts
Joined May 2015
Yamicchi

Bubblun wrote:

Yamicchi's Light Insane
SPOILER
00:23:202 (4) - Seems a little random, so what I suggest you do it move 4 so 00:22:500 (2,3,4) - creates a right-angle. what is random to you :^ ?
Wishkey
774 posts
Joined September 2011
Wishkey
Yow! random mod

Insane
  1. 00:18:615 (2) - make sure your volume levels for the red and green timing points are the same when you stack them
  2. ^ doublecheck this section 00:33:392 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - aswell
  3. 00:15:126 (1) - 1 return kick less and a circle at the end here would be good I think, since the end is the leadin to the next 2 notes so why not have it clickable aswell
  4. 00:23:904 (1,2,3,4,5) - sounds a bit off when playing maybe add a 178 bpm line for these? since the section is all circles gotta have this optimized as best as possible I'd double check the timing here
  5. 00:31:974 (1,2,3,4) - main ones kinda sound like 1/3 and the others are more 1/6 (check 4 on 1/6). This whole section being 1/3 would be better to play imo
  6. 00:34:784 (1) - head deserves a whistle imo
  7. 00:36:070 - green line can be deleted here
  8. 00:47:449 (1,2,3) - would be nice if these were pointing up instead something like this so you have this really smooth wave flow between 00:47:098 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - since this is the only one currently that felt kinda forced to play
  9. 00:45:239 (6,7) - green line can be deleted here
  10. 00:45:239 (6,7) - DS is slightly off bc of the new timing section (make the timing on 7 195bpm and recheck for 0.75)
  11. 01:06:517 (1,1,1) - nazi, not an even triangle
  12. 01:07:336 (1) - I dont really see the need to mute the end here and other diffs, it lands on the highest pitch guitar thingy for this section and has a drum so its a bit weird to mute that imo
  13. bit strange imo is the hitsounding across the set, dunno if its intentional but you use a lot of finishes on places in normal where you don't here and some whistles on here where thers none in easy/normal. Just seemed a bit strange to use different hitsounds across your own diffs imo just mentioning it incase it wasn't intentional
Normal
  1. 00:22:150 (3,4) - can blanket if you want
  2. 01:06:167 (1,2) - increase ds here comparing it to the other 171 bpm sections here 00:38:977 (1,2,3) - its noticably off
  3. 00:50:256 (1,2,3) - what happened with the ds here, seems semi intentional with the pitch but it seems its the only was that deviate from your 1.0ish standard ds and you dont do it for the pitch here00:52:712 (2,3) - so dunno if its intentional
  4. 00:55:295 (1,1,1) - even spacing here
  5. 00:59:183 (2) - NC like in the other diffs and next notes
  6. damn this must have been a nightmare to ds but nice work!
Easy
  1. 00:01:131 (1) - less then 1 second of spin time on an easy diff is really pushing it since spinners are like the hardest for new players, definitly ask if its okay should be extended a bit imo for this diff
  2. 00:32:667 (5,1) - nerf ds a bit here, comparing to all your other blankets like 00:29:869 (5,1) - this is kinda a noticable difference
  3. 00:37:201 (2,3) - switch the rythm here maybe so you have all the piano notes captured in the slider instead of leaving blank now
  4. 00:41:870 (1) - why not end on the downbeat earlier, it has a strong sound and you have more recovery time (1200 instead of 960 ish when usualy easy requires 1600ms, basicly the 1 full measure required recovery time is for 4/4 and since this is 3/4 its really short atm)
  5. 00:45:162 - green line can be deleted here
  6. 01:06:096 (1) - in all your other diffs the notes start on the next timing point, would do it the same with the spinner here to keep it consistent
  7. solid easy diff
GL with the map man!
LMT
535 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
LMT

Wishkey wrote:

Yow! random mod

Insane
  1. 00:18:615 (2) - make sure your volume levels for the red and green timing points are the same when you stack them
  2. ^ doublecheck this section 00:33:392 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - aswell fixed all xd nice catch
  3. 00:15:126 (1) - 1 return kick less and a circle at the end here would be good I think, since the end is the leadin to the next 2 notes so why not have it clickable aswell since a lot of people seem to be triggered by this i'm changing to + a circle.
  4. 00:23:904 (1,2,3,4,5) - sounds a bit off when playing maybe add a 178 bpm line for these? since the section is all circles gotta have this optimized as best as possible I'd double check the timing here well since you're doing 1/2 jumps here and you can't be bothered with managing your fingers to every single timing point and in the end it average out at 171bpm (the piano lands on 5 fairly accurately) so I'm leaving it as it as for now.
  5. 00:31:974 (1,2,3,4) - main ones kinda sound like 1/3 and the others are more 1/6 (check 4 on 1/6). This whole section being 1/3 would be better to play imo when you hear it on 75% or 100% you can feel like the piano is slowing down so that justifies the piano being 1/4s. I think the piano plays 1/4s as I hear it, it's a bit inconsistent yes
  6. 00:34:784 (1) - head deserves a whistle imo yess
  7. 00:36:070 - green line can be deleted here oh yeah xd I remapped this part so that's the remnant from the previous stuff
  8. 00:47:449 (1,2,3) - would be nice if these were pointing up instead something like this so you have this really smooth wave flow between 00:47:098 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - since this is the only one currently that felt kinda forced to play
    fixed, sort of xd
  9. 00:45:239 (6,7) - green line can be deleted here yes
  10. 00:45:239 (6,7) - DS is slightly off bc of the new timing section (make the timing on 7 195bpm and recheck for 0.75) yeah fixed , hand placed it.
  11. 01:06:517 (1,1,1) - nazi, not an even triangle wasn't even my intention though xd
  12. 01:07:336 (1) - I dont really see the need to mute the end here and other diffs, it lands on the highest pitch guitar thingy for this section and has a drum so its a bit weird to mute that imo it's not really a mute just an effect to end it smoothly
  13. bit strange imo is the hitsounding across the set, dunno if its intentional but you use a lot of finishes on places in normal where you don't here and some whistles on here where thers none in easy/normal. Just seemed a bit strange to use different hitsounds across your own diffs imo just mentioning it incase it wasn't intentional it's just different interpretation when i mapped this thing ==" . I'll change it if it's actually a problem.
Normal
  1. 00:22:150 (3,4) - can blanket if you want would overlap otherwise but moved it a bit upward for more intuitive flow
  2. 01:06:167 (1,2) - increase ds here comparing it to the other 171 bpm sections here 00:38:977 (1,2,3) - its noticably off yea
  3. 00:50:256 (1,2,3) - what happened with the ds here, seems semi intentional with the pitch but it seems its the only was that deviate from your 1.0ish standard ds and you dont do it for the pitch here00:52:712 (2,3) - so dunno if its intentional forgot to fix that, was mapping to the pitch then changed all to 1.0x then forgot about this.
  4. 00:55:295 (1,1,1) - even spacing here yes
  5. 00:59:183 (2) - NC like in the other diffs and next notes yes
  6. damn this must have been a nightmare to ds but nice work! :o
Easy
  1. 00:01:131 (1) - less then 1 second of spin time on an easy diff is really pushing it since spinners are like the hardest for new players, definitly ask if its okay should be extended a bit imo for this diff extended it a bit, but had to silence the spinner end.
  2. 00:32:667 (5,1) - nerf ds a bit here, comparing to all your other blankets like 00:29:869 (5,1) - this is kinda a noticable difference yeah fixed, that slider is so troublesome though, it passes through like, 4 or 5 timing points xd everytime i touch it has to fix the slider vel to resnap it correctly, takes at least 2 minutes orz
  3. 00:37:201 (2,3) - switch the rythm here maybe so you have all the piano notes captured in the slider instead of leaving blank now nah i can't use 1/2s in easy and I think the notes on the white ticks are noticeably stronger so I just skip it, I think it's fine.
  4. 00:41:870 (1) - why not end on the downbeat earlier, it has a strong sound and you have more recovery time (1200 instead of 960 ish when usualy easy requires 1600ms, basicly the 1 full measure required recovery time is for 4/4 and since this is 3/4 its really short atm) yes good point
  5. 00:45:162 - green line can be deleted here yup
  6. 01:06:096 (1) - in all your other diffs the notes start on the next timing point, would do it the same with the spinner here to keep it consistent lol yes this is a remnant of the previous timing version.
  7. solid easy diff
GL with the map man! Cheers!
Sick mod thanks!
Signum
Signum
i was in a Prague twice. it's really beautiful place :3

00:12:647 - There should be a timing point with 171BPM. And at 00:13:699 - too

Hard
00:15:827 (2,3,1) - I would unstack these. It feels really confusing during the play

Insane
00:53:063 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would keep the constant distance snap

I have nothing to say. Really clean and really aesthetically great map!
good luck with ranking it c:
LMT
535 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
LMT

Signum wrote:

i was in a Prague twice. it's really beautiful place :3 Indeed! I was travelling with a few friends there, awesome place!

00:12:647 - There should be a timing point with 171BPM. And at 00:13:699 - too improved timing here

Hard
00:15:827 (2,3,1) - I would unstack these. It feels really confusing during the play yes

Insane
00:53:063 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would keep the constant distance snap Probably not, I'm trying to emphasise each piano note here :< though if there are more complaints about it I'll change it a bit.

I have nothing to say. Really clean and really aesthetically great map! Thanks !
good luck with ranking it c:
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]
Hey~! From #Modreqs for M4M

[Hard]
00:33:895 (3) - This slider was variable speed. So I think this way you need NC.

[Yamicchi's Light Insane]
00:20:355 (1,2) - unsnapped
00:43:951 (1,3) - Whistle?

[Insane]
00:35:497 (2,1) - unsnapped

Melodic~!

wiht you success~!hey,It's ranked now
LMT
535 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
LMT

[Kamiya] wrote:

Hey~! From #Modreqs for M4M

[Hard]
00:33:895 (3) - This slider was variable speed. So I think this way you need NC. slider vel isn't supposed to change here it's because the timing point made it change, added SV correction

[Insane]
00:35:497 (2,1) - unsnapped it is snapped, it's the timing point that makes it look like it xd .

Melodic~!

wiht you success~!hey,It's ranked now
Thanks!
Yamicchi
1,175 posts
Joined May 2015
Yamicchi

[Kamiya] wrote:

[Yamicchi's Light Insane]
00:20:355 (1,2) - unsnapped it's 1/6
00:43:951 (1,3) - Whistle? why?
welp, no update
HootOwlStar
750 posts
Joined May 2014
HootOwlStar
posted in your queue. how do you even time this song anyway like hol y
[General]
  1. assumed this is the metadata source since it's included in the official Soundcloud page.
    https://www.recordshopx.com/artist/gladenfold/from_dusk_to_eternity/#396418
  2. your image is 1365 x 768 anyway and so it doesn't fi t the 16:9 ratio. therefore fix it to 1366 x 768
  3. unsure whether you need to add AudioLeadIn but consider to add 1000ms anyway
  4. not sure about the combo patterns so err get more suggestions and check thoroughly a few more times
  5. i'm so triggered when the music file provides the wrong information in the Year panel since it should be 2014 instead
[Easy]
  1. 00:01:131 (1) - only spinner that ends differently throughout all diffs. spinner time isn't really sufficient for the beginners to play in any kind of sense if you fix it, and not fixing it will cause unsnaps, so consider to blank the part throughout al l diffs or replace the spinner with a slider instead.
  2. 00:33:392 (1) - problem is sudden decrease in slider velocity, which will be rather unexpected during gameplay. it;s like an sv change so please fix the issue anyway
  3. 00:41:870 (1) - and using a spinner doesn't really fit to introduce the increase intensity + it covers up way too much note that should be mapped instead of just brought over
  4. 00:53:765 (1) - unnecessary nc tbh
  5. 00:59:468 (1,1,1) - eh the prob is basically that the notes are really hard to be aimed for 300's since it's hard to estimate the clicks with t he godly timing so consider to use sliders as in Normal diff
[Normal]
  1. 00:21:431 (2,3) - 00:54:501 (1,1,1,1) - distance snapping problems which are too visible and need to be fixed, even though they're affected by timing but still, the distance-time concept is ruined + 00:22:150 (3) - nc
  2. 00:44:855 (3) - it covers the first piano note but not the second. so in 00:44:275 (2,3) - consider to follow the 1/1 gap pattern as before in 00:42:220 (2,3) -
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:360 (1,2) - the flow is disrupted so consider to just make 00:26:360 (1) - flat
  2. 00:44:855 (5) - as in normal diff, the non-coverage of second piano note is really weird
[Light Insane]
  1. mayb reduce od to 6 since it's od7 in insane diff
  2. rather triggered in 00:15:476 (2,3) - by how it seems to be overlapping zxzxzxzxz. will make (3) flat out or other pattern that won't let (2) be covered up by (3) imo but it's purely suggestion anyway.
Insane diff seems fine. gl for the mapset
LMT
535 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
LMT

HootOwlStar wrote:

posted in your queue. how do you even time this song anyway like hol y cry inside a little, get some timing mods and cry a little more because have to fix them all in notepad manually xd
[General]
  1. assumed this is the metadata source since it's included in the official Soundcloud page.
    https://www.recordshopx.com/artist/gladenfold/from_dusk_to_eternity/#396418 I just asked IamKwaN and it's supposed to be ...To Eternity instead of without ellipses.
  2. your image is 1365 x 768 anyway and so it doesn't fi t the 16:9 ratio. therefore fix it to 1366 x 768 wtf i'll try to fix it if possible.
  3. unsure whether you need to add AudioLeadIn but consider to add 1000ms anyway there's more than 1 sec in,don't know if it's actually a problem
  4. not sure about the combo patterns so err get more suggestions and check thoroughly a few more times maybe
  5. i'm so triggered when the music file provides the wrong information in the Year panel since it should be 2014 instead It was last edited by BOUYAAA, don't think that's actually a big problem xd.
[Easy]
  1. 00:01:131 (1) - only spinner that ends differently throughout all diffs. spinner time isn't really sufficient for the beginners to play in any kind of sense if you fix it, and not fixing it will cause unsnaps, so consider to blank the part throughout al l diffs or replace the spinner with a slider instead. Spinner fits this part the best, I can't really think of a good way to represent it here as a slider. It was a slider, then people pointed out that it didn't really fit so I changed it to a spininer. I silenced the sliderend though hopefully that's decent enough. actually that's dumb too xd . Fixed.
  2. 00:33:392 (1) - problem is sudden decrease in slider velocity, which will be rather unexpected during gameplay. it;s like an sv change so please fix the issue anyway fixed, it's still 0.93x because timing points but that's tiny.
  3. 00:41:870 (1) - and using a spinner doesn't really fit to introduce the increase intensity + it covers up way too much note that should be mapped instead of just brought over too many timing points :( can't map this in Easy.
  4. 00:53:765 (1) - unnecessary nc tbh it is necessary because I changed the rhythm around a bit to avoid an obnoxious timing point, so yea.
  5. 00:59:468 (1,1,1) - eh the prob is basically that the notes are really hard to be aimed for 300's since it's hard to estimate the clicks with t he godly timing so consider to use sliders as in Normal diff changed to a spinner instead because 1/2 sliders in Easy is a bit dumb.
[Normal]
  1. 00:21:431 (2,3) - 00:54:501 (1,1,1,1) - distance snapping problems which are too visible and need to be fixed, even though they're affected by timing but still, the distance-time concept is ruined + 00:22:150 (3) - nc fixed all. The NC here is because I choose to NC every two downbeats except for certain patterns. Since locally it seems like it's going as NC per 1 downbeat I'll follow it too.
  2. 00:44:855 (3) - it covers the first piano note but not the second. so in 00:44:275 (2,3) - consider to follow the 1/1 gap pattern as before in 00:42:220 (2,3) - umm the second piano is on the sliderend, hopefully that covers it enough. It's slightly weird here as the piano plays 3/2 -> 1/1 rhythm instead of just 1/1 .
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:360 (1,2) - the flow is disrupted so consider to just make 00:26:360 (1) - flat uh it's intentional to emphasise the piano crescendo http://i.imgur.com/X0Iblht.jpg this image hopefully describes it better xd.
  2. 00:44:855 (5) - as in normal diff, the non-coverage of second piano note is really weird I think it is on the second note :(, the piano is different here.
Insane diff seems fine. gl for the mapset
Sick mod, thanks a lot ! Will get to yours in a day.
Yamicchi
1,175 posts
Joined May 2015
Yamicchi

HootOwlStar wrote:

[Light Insane]
  1. mayb reduce od to 6 since it's od7 in insane diff
  2. rather triggered in 00:15:476 (2,3) - by how it seems to be overlapping zxzxzxzxz. will make (3) flat out or other pattern that won't let (2) be covered up by (3) imo but it's purely suggestion anyway.
Sure, all fixed
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 41870
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 41890
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:...To Eternity
TitleUnicode:...To Eternity
Artist:Gladenfold
ArtistUnicode:Gladenfold
Creator:LMT1996
Version:Yamicchi's Light Insane
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_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
_Yiiiii
Hi
Surprisingly I get some free time on Thursday, so here is my mod~

[Insane]
00:01:481 (2,3) - What about increase the SV slightly?
00:20:355 (3) - Ctrl+G because the note you want to emphasize isn't this slider but this one 00:20:730 (1) - , you can emphasize it by doing that.
00:30:921 (2) - Put it at about (216,328), the position it now has isn't good for flow.

[Light Insane]
00:15:476 (2,3) - Fix the blanket.
00:20:355 (1,2) - ^
00:29:167 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+H to change the flow, and put this slider somewhere else.
00:36:204 (1,2,3) - To be honest, I couldn't find a reason for this reverse, if you can't either, then try another pattern.

[Hard]
00:38:644 (3) - Fix the blanket.
Nothing else, if I must say something about this diff, I'd like to point out this slider 00:37:201 (2) - looks a bit ugly and uncomfortable to follow the track, move it left and down, or make the second slider tick a bit right and up.

[Normal]
00:26:360 (3,4) - Fix the blanket.
00:29:167 (4,5) - ^
00:30:571 (1,2) - ^

Really a good map, hope for rank :D
LMT
535 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
LMT

_Yiiiii wrote:

Hi
Surprisingly I get some free time on Thursday, so here is my mod~

[Insane]
00:01:481 (2,3) - What about increase the SV slightly? could consider that, but I think the increase in spacing currently is good enough to emphasise it.
00:20:355 (3) - Ctrl+G because the note you want to emphasize isn't this slider but this one 00:20:730 (1) - , you can emphasize it by doing that. moved it further away from 1 instead to increase spacing, since this is 1/3, there's a slight more reading challenge (not that much tho)
00:30:921 (2) - Put it at about (216,328), the position it now has isn't good for flow. yeah agreed

[Hard]
00:38:644 (3) - Fix the blanket. nah this symmetry looks a bit cool :>
Nothing else, if I must say something about this diff, I'd like to point out this slider 00:37:201 (2) - looks a bit ugly and uncomfortable to follow the track, move it left and down, or make the second slider tick a bit right and up. did something

[Normal]
00:26:360 (3,4) - Fix the blanket. fixed
00:29:167 (4,5) - ^ fixed
00:30:571 (1,2) - ^ symmetrical with 00:29:869 (5) :(

Really a good map, hope for rank :D Thanks!
Thanks for modding!
Mazzerin
493 posts
Joined July 2013
Mazzerin
00:13:722 - objects from here till 00:15:126 - are too off

EASY
00:41:870 (1) - spinner's end has 2 timing points with different volumes

HARD
00:24:255 (3,4,5) - these really should be spaced somehow differently from 00:24:079 (2) - , they're stronger than that
00:44:855 (5) - slider end should be clickable it's as strong as 00:42:220 (4) - 00:43:229 (4) - 00:44:275 (4) -

yamicchi's insane
00:24:255 (3) - make these clickable piano is strong there
00:41:870 (1) - did you hand place literally all the streams here, because the spacing is inconsistent on every burst and it looks kinda bad
00:48:853 (5) - apart from the spacing angle is off on this one

INSANE
00:01:131 (1) - placement like this emphasizes the strong notes more
00:17:581 (6,7) - maybe have all these as circles? they're stronger than the other white tick groups, differentiating would be nice
00:24:255 (3,4) - should be separate from the other 2 notes in this combo
00:37:201 (3) - should be clickable like these 00:34:296 (1,1) - , composition seems similar, it's just that these are faster than the ones before
00:43:409 (3,4,5,1) - flow too blunt
00:44:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make triple+reverse slider here? to emphasize that red tick 00:45:008 (3) - and also avoid the random 195 bpm longer burst
LMT
535 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
LMT

Mazzerin wrote:

00:13:722 - objects from here till 00:15:126 - are too off fixed timing

EASY
00:41:870 (1) - spinner's end has 2 timing points with different volumes fixed

HARD
00:24:255 (3,4,5) - these really should be spaced somehow differently from 00:24:079 (2) - , they're stronger than that it was mapped to the pitch with increasing ds before, but it's pointed out that that sort of spacing is reserved for Insane or above. I'll try to do something about that if it's brought up again, I can't think of a compromise right now.
00:44:855 (5) - slider end should be clickable it's as strong as 00:42:220 (4) - 00:43:229 (4) - 00:44:275 (4) - fixed


INSANE
00:01:131 (1) - placement like this emphasizes the strong notes more that's slightly hard to read but i'll try it anyways since this is something that's brought up quite often
00:17:581 (6,7) - maybe have all these as circles? they're stronger than the other white tick groups, differentiating would be nice made that last one all circles so the player can catch up with the 1/3s. i mean, fixed
00:24:255 (3,4) - should be separate from the other 2 notes in this combo cool idea actually.
00:37:201 (3) - should be clickable like these 00:34:296 (1,1) - , composition seems similar, it's just that these are faster than the ones before timing here is too crazy for that, those were circles before.
00:43:409 (3,4,5,1) - flow too blunt yes, fixed
00:44:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make triple+reverse slider here? to emphasize that red tick 00:45:008 (3) - and also avoid the random 195 bpm longer burst i agree
Really helpful mod, thanks a lot!
Last edited by LMT , edited 1 time in total.
Yamicchi
1,175 posts
Joined May 2015
Yamicchi

_Yiiiii wrote:

[Light Insane]
00:15:476 (2,3) - Fix the blanket. with what exactly?
00:20:355 (1,2) - ^ yes
00:29:167 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+H to change the flow, and put this slider somewhere else. why?
00:36:204 (1,2,3) - To be honest, I couldn't find a reason for this reverse, if you can't either, then try another pattern. higher pitch, larger spacing

Mazzerin wrote:

yamicchi's insane
00:24:255 (3) - make these clickable piano is strong there ( o3o)b
00:41:870 (1) - did you hand place literally all the streams here, because the spacing is inconsistent on every burst and it looks kinda bad never had I mapped a stream song b4, so yea my bad
00:48:853 (5) - apart from the spacing angle is off on this one fixed
Thanks guys

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Cheri
1,770 posts
Joined November 2014
Cheri
This is already pretty good so I only have only few suggestions that you don't really have to do

no need to kd this post if you don't want to since i'm only trying to improve myself when it comes to modding

I only looked at the Insane since the other maps there wasn't much to really say to me

Looking at the map I feel like AR 9 is a bit fast but that just me. I think AR 8.5 is better and you should make OD to 7.5 at least


I don't hear anything for a note here 00:24:079 (2) -

same as above 00:30:395 (5) -

I slow the song down to 25% and 50% to make sure so just check this out just in case I could be wrong

This could go up a bit 00:31:974 (1,2,3,4,5) -

To me this 00:33:895 (1,1,1,1) - flow a bit weird like they to close to each other - try to spread them out a tad bit and could you move 00:33:895 (1) - down a lil


Alright that all I see really so GL :)
LMT
535 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
LMT

DJ Lucky wrote:

This is already pretty good so I only have only few suggestions that you don't really have to do

no need to kd this post if you don't want to since i'm only trying to improve myself when it comes to modding

I only looked at the Insane since the other maps there wasn't much to really say to me

Looking at the map I feel like AR 9 is a bit fast but that just me. I think AR 8.5 is better and you should make OD to 7.5 at least


I don't hear anything for a note here 00:24:079 (2) - i do, it's the piano playing a crescendo

same as above 00:30:395 (5) - ^

I slow the song down to 25% and 50% to make sure so just check this out just in case I could be wrong

This could go up a bit 00:31:974 (1,2,3,4,5) - not entirely sure why though, but polished this part a little bit.

To me this 00:33:895 (1,1,1,1) - flow a bit weird like they to close to each other - try to spread them out a tad bit and could you move 00:33:895 (1) - down a lil yes and no, I moved the second slider slightly lower but that's because it's a 1/2 gap instead of 1/4 gap like the others. No because the player will immediately go for the sliderhead of next slider even though the sliderball hasn't *quite* reached the sliderend yet, just adding some spice to this part, i think it's cool tho.


Alright that all I see really so GL :)
was actually helpful, take the kds.
Seijiro
osu! Alumni
3,438 posts
Joined April 2013
Seijiro
this map is like a rough diamond

Insane:
- 00:08:148 (4) - I feel like this should be made into circles, check the guitar's beats
- 00:23:904 (1,2,1,2) - is there a reason for the second NC here? By removing it it becomes clearer that you went for a square too
- 00:44:855 (1,3) - hitsounding is a bit messy in this area. How about removing that clap from 3 and moving the finish on 3 instead of 1?
- 00:22:150 (1) - whistle on head?
- 00:29:167 (1) - same
- 01:07:336 (1) - I'd turn this into circles too. It's the last diff so I would expect more emphasis on the music's beats over personal simplification of the song

Make sure these timing points aren't in conflict:
- 00:15:092 - volume
- 00:15:810 - volume
- 00:33:742 - volume
- 00:36:204 - volume

There were also some unsnapped timing sections, but they were earlier than objects, so it should be fine


Yamicchi:
- 00:44:275 (5,6) - this is so misleading at first, but later on it actually makes sense. I would still put a NC to warn players about this rhythm change tho (same goes for the next similar patterns)

Make sure these timing points aren't in conflict:
- 00:12:319 - volume
- 00:18:617 - volume


Hard:
- at first I though combo colors were just used at random, then I re-considered it while modding the Insane, since i thought it may just be me and those combo actually make sense, but once I checked this I realized it IS random (unless I missed something). For example take the kiai.
On this diff kiai time has just the 2 most lively colors, yet the Insane uses colors in a strange order sometimes (at least for me). I'm honestly curious as to how you switch combo colors


Normal:
- 00:39:706 (2,3) - finish should be on 3 imo. (actually, you didn't use hitsound copier, right? =w=)
- 00:56:556 (1) - no need for NC here

Make sure these timing points aren't in conflict:
- 00:19:313 - volume
- 00:20:730 - volume
- 00:22:150 - volume


Easy:
- 00:41:870 (1) - this spinner on its own makes sense, but when I see you switch to mapping stuff again later on it just feels off. Since it's out of question to keep a spinner for like... 20 seconds or what the kiai time is, I'd rather remove the spinner.


General:
- Just timing issues on the diffs were I pointed them out.
- Nice BG
LMT
535 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
LMT

MrSergio wrote:

this map is like a rough diamond

Insane:
- 00:08:148 (4) - I feel like this should be made into circles, check the guitar's beats the guitar plays the same pitch for these 3 sliders, the reason why you feel like the last one should be made to circles is because the sliderhead is on the downbeat which is stronger. However I think following the pitch here is more justified.
- 00:23:904 (1,2,1,2) - is there a reason for the second NC here? By removing it it becomes clearer that you went for a square too The second couple has noticeably higher pitch than the first couple. It was a suggestion by Mazzerin a couple of mods earlier and I think it was cool as well.
- 00:44:855 (1,3) - hitsounding is a bit messy in this area. How about removing that clap from 3 and moving the finish on 3 instead of 1? that clap must have been a misclick omg. added finish on 00:44:275 (5,1,1) - these to inform of a slightly difference emphasis.
- 00:22:150 (1) - whistle on head? fixed
- 00:29:167 (1) - same fixed
- 01:07:336 (1) - I'd turn this into circles too. It's the last diff so I would expect more emphasis on the music's beats over personal simplification of the song fixed

Make sure these timing points aren't in conflict:
- 00:15:092 - volume
- 00:15:810 - volume
- 00:33:742 - volume
- 00:36:204 - volume fixed all

There were also some unsnapped timing sections, but they were earlier than objects, so it should be fine As long as the objects are properly placed using these unsnapped timing points there shouldn't be a problem I think.

Hard:
- at first I though combo colors were just used at random, then I re-considered it while modding the Insane, since i thought it may just be me and those combo actually make sense, but once I checked this I realized it IS random (unless I missed something). For example take the kiai.
On this diff kiai time has just the 2 most lively colors, yet the Insane uses colors in a strange order sometimes (at least for me). I'm honestly curious as to how you switch combo colors I colourhaxed them all but then there were NC mods so I couldn't bother to fix them everytime there's a mod. I'll fix them right now


Normal:
- 00:39:706 (2,3) - finish should be on 3 imo. (actually, you didn't use hitsound copier, right? =w=) oops how did I not catch this xd ? I copied the slider from 1 which had a finish hitsound on it, forgot to cancel the hitsound
- 00:56:556 (1) - no need for NC here yes

Make sure these timing points aren't in conflict:
- 00:19:313 - volume
- 00:20:730 - volume
- 00:22:150 - volume fixed all


Easy:
- 00:41:870 (1) - this spinner on its own makes sense, but when I see you switch to mapping stuff again later on it just feels off. Since it's out of question to keep a spinner for like... 20 seconds or what the kiai time is, I'd rather remove the spinner. The only reason why I used a spinner there was because there were so many timing points in that section. I actually don't know if that reason is sufficient to justify it...


General:
- Just timing issues on the diffs were I pointed them out.
- Nice BG thanks
The lines in purple are things that I'm not sure about given my justification, I'd like to hear what you think about these points. Thanks a lot!
Yamicchi
1,175 posts
Joined May 2015
Yamicchi

MrSergio wrote:

Yamicchi:
- 00:44:275 (5,6) - this is so misleading at first, but later on it actually makes sense. I would still put a NC to warn players about this rhythm change tho (same goes for the next similar patterns) sure fix!

Make sure these timing points aren't in conflict:
- 00:12:319 - volume
- 00:18:617 - volume about that ^ I removed it because it's kinda useless but what is the point here? I don't really understand you
Thank you Sergio c:

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LMT
535 posts
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Topic Starter
LMT

Yamicchi wrote:

MrSergio wrote:

Make sure these timing points aren't in conflict:
- 00:12:319 - volume
- 00:18:617 - volume about that ^ I removed it because it's kinda useless but what is the point here? I don't really understand you
It's the green and red lines having conflicting volumes, but since you removed them it should be fixed.
pishifat
osu! Paragon
3,802 posts
Joined August 2013
pishifat
tfw timing errors are audible at 100% playback
most of what you have is between on-time and late, so like getting the later stuff closer to on-time would be nice. just so you have an idea about what im referring to, 00:09:177 (2) - is an example of on-time 00:11:968 (3,1) - are examples of late
people aren't gonna force you to get perfect timing on stuff like 00:01:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - , but simpler rhythms where it's clear where each sound is should be more correct
(though for complex rhythms like that first thing, it's nice to have the first and last object of the grouping be in time properly. right now last sound isn't close)

should also coordinate how you snap 00:32:667 - between the top 3 diffs. being different snappings is what

insane
00:10:229 (2,3,4,5,1) - looks like you're mapping the same thing as 00:09:177 (2,3,4,5,1) - but song's 1/4 there is so quiet :( clicking on the most obvious ones with like zzz seems more k
00:15:092 (1) - lower volume is for the reverses i assume, but lower feedback on head is ew. less ew
00:30:220 (4,5,1) - minorbut consistent spacing/line = bueno
00:31:886 (5) - 4 is like the same sound but so much more feedback um going with like 15% for both would make the louder thing after stand out and still giev feedbackg
00:52:361 (1,2) - why using a different comboing structure from 00:51:309 (1,1) - 00:46:046 (1,1) -
01:07:570 (2) - like other stuff more feedback = more appropriate. can still be quieter than 1 but not 4x quieter

yami
00:10:229 (3,4) - should really prioritize clicking white ticks in situations with constant 1/4. downbeats are getting more emphasis (and i think you know why considering how you mapped 00:15:092 (1,2) - 00:16:862 (2,3,4) - these)
00:43:152 (4,5) - spacing tho

hard
first thought from insane carries over kinda
00:36:204 (1) - nobody's gonna hurt you for muting sliderticks caused by broken timing (even if that does break ranking criteria currently). hearing a tick so shortly before the sliderend is ew
00:34:296 (3) - kinda not things you can do lol. if snapping the slider requires an unsnapped repeat, using a different rhythm >
lower diffs do these too

noraml
00:32:320 (4,5) - what is spacnig
Yamicchi
1,175 posts
Joined May 2015
Yamicchi

pishifat wrote:

yami
00:10:229 (3,4) - should really prioritize clicking white ticks in situations with constant 1/4. downbeats are getting more emphasis (and i think you know why considering how you mapped 00:15:092 (1,2) - 00:16:862 (2,3,4) - these) fixed
00:43:152 (4,5) - spacing tho fixed tho
Thanks pishi :3

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EDIT: Timing fixed
LMT
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LMT

pishifat wrote:

tfw timing errors are audible at 100% playback
most of what you have is between on-time and late, so like getting the later stuff closer to on-time would be nice. just so you have an idea about what im referring to, 00:09:177 (2) - is an example of on-time 00:11:968 (3,1) - are examples of late fixed any i found.
people aren't gonna force you to get perfect timing on stuff like 00:01:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - , but simpler rhythms where it's clear where each sound is should be more correct fixed timing -> simplied rhythm
(though for complex rhythms like that first thing, it's nice to have the first and last object of the grouping be in time properly. right now last sound isn't close)

should also coordinate how you snap 00:32:667 - between the top 3 diffs. being different snappings is what fixed for my diffs, will ask yamicchi to do it as well

insane
00:10:229 (2,3,4,5,1) - looks like you're mapping the same thing as 00:09:177 (2,3,4,5,1) - but song's 1/4 there is so quiet :( clicking on the most obvious ones with like zzz seems more k ok
00:15:092 (1) - lower volume is for the reverses i assume, but lower feedback on head is ew. less ew yea
00:30:220 (4,5,1) - minorbut consistent spacing/line = bueno yeah must have accidentally moved it when applying mod ...
00:31:886 (5) - 4 is like the same sound but so much more feedback um going with like 15% for both would make the louder thing after stand out and still giev feedbackg yeah
00:52:361 (1,2) - why using a different comboing structure from 00:51:309 (1,1) - 00:46:046 (1,1) - something i missed
01:07:570 (2) - like other stuff more feedback = more appropriate. can still be quieter than 1 but not 4x quieter 15% seems good


hard
first thought from insane carries over kinda same fix except without the circle on blue tick.
00:36:204 (1) - nobody's gonna hurt you for muting sliderticks caused by broken timing (even if that does break ranking criteria currently). hearing a tick so shortly before the sliderend is ew 5%, hopefully not breaking any rules.
00:34:296 (3) - kinda not things you can do lol. if snapping the slider requires an unsnapped repeat, using a different rhythm > fixed
lower diffs do these too fixed all took like 30 mins omg

noraml
00:32:320 (4,5) - what is spacnig oops timing points
literally fixed everything, thanks pishifat!
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