- You might wanna change the "black combo" to a brighter one, it's readdy too dark dude. yo idk they were all different colour combos so I switched all of them lol
- Last kiai is useless, i'd consider removing it. maybe ;w; I'll see
- Preview point is unsnapped, change it. okie
- Consider adding a muted slider-slide please. idk ;w; I'll see what other people say about it
00:32:150 (1) - you can maybe replace this by a 1/1 reverse slider ?
00:41:750 (2) - remove nc, it's a bit useless.
00:44:950 (1) - ^ reverse here aswell?
00:49:350 (2,4) - i would avoid this overlap, since all your map hasn't got overlap like this, to make it clean.
00:30:950 (4,5) - check ds
00:31:350 (5,6) - ^
00:46:150 (4,5) - ^
00:26:350 (2,3) - no, just no, too hard for a normal.
00:29:750 (2) - too many notes overlapped on the same note, is hard for newbies, better clean up this patern.
00:35:350 (1) - double reverse is pretty meh, try an alternative rythmn
00:41:750 (1) - useless nc
uhh the note placement on this normal is really messy and unpolished, this need more work, don't try and make gimmicks flowish stuff in a normal man, newbies don't like that. I completely remapped this
00:14:550 (3) - what an ugly overlap please
00:41:350 (5,1) - feels so unpolished
same i really think you can polish that diff more, and fix those overlap, i'm too lazy to notice them all but yeah, same as normal the structure of this hard is all over the place. uhm I kinda re-mapped it sort of
00:37:750 (3,4) - this is ugly Changed a bit :3
00:50:950 (1) - 127|323 oh okay
well anyway same as other diffs lol
looks like you speed mapped this set, without even taking care about notes intensity/placement. I've literally re-mapped so many parts of this to raise emphasis and intensity and just the /beginning/ of this map at first stage took me like 2 days and after re-mapping I thought it was fine but I guess not. I am literally not a good enough mapper to "speed map".