AnatOWJIya wrote:

Or1g1n's Beginner

1|2|3|4
00:07:364 (7364|2) - to 4 - Нет
00:07:499 (7499|1,7634|0) - Ctrl+J - Нет
00:07:905 (7905|3) - to 3 - Нет
00:08:175 (8175|2) - to 4 - Нет
00:08:580 (8580|3) - to 2 - Нет
00:09:256 (9256|1) - to 3 - Нет
00:09:661 (9661|2) - to 2 - Нет
00:11:688 (11688|1,11823|2,11959|3) - Ctrl+J - Нет
00:16:283 (16283|3) - To 2 - Нет
00:16:553 (16553|0) - to 4 - Нет
00:16:823 (16823|1) - to 1 - Нет
00:21:418 (21418|3,21688|2) - ctrl+g - - Поменял
Maybe i got the flow wrong,but there's no sound for note 00:22:229 - Убрал
Missed note? 00:31:283 - Так и задумано. Три ноты на 1/2 сделаны под вокал
00:32:229 (32229|2) - to 2 - Нет
00:42:499 (42499|1,42769|2) - ctrl+g - Нет
01:11:283 - Missed note - Поставил
01:12:364 - Missed note - Поставил
Missed LN from 01:16:283 - to 01:19:526 - ? - Так и задумано для передышки
01:22:769 (82769|2,83040|0) - ctrl+g - Нет
This LN ( 01:28:648 (88648|3) - ) starts here 01:28:715 - Этот ЛН стоит правильно, он сделан под 1/4
What about to add note at the end of the song 01:41:959 - ? - Нет

Or1g1n's Hyper

1|2|3|4
00:25:337 - Missed double? - Поставил
00:26:148 - ^ - Ничего тут не пропущено
00:27:499 - ^
00:33:580 - There's no burst but there is 00:36:013 - Ничего тут не пропущено
00:45:540 - Missed note? - Нет. ЛН выступает в роли 1/4
00:45:675 - ^
00:46:621 - ^
00:46:756 - ^
00:47:702 - ^
00:47:837 - ^
00:48:715 - No LN but 3 times earlier there is - Здесь вокал, так что все ок
00:50:878 - No burst but there is 00:49:796 - Здесь вокал
00:59:256 - Missed double? Нет. Клавишный звук дополнен еще одной нотой, поэтому получился дабл.
00:59:932 - ^
01:00:337 - ^
01:00:742 - ^
01:01:148 - ^
01:01:418 - ^
01:02:094 - ^
01:02:499 - ^
01:03:580 - ^
01:04:256 - ^
01:04:661 - ^
01:05:742 - Missed note? - Нет. Здесь мапался дабл от клавиш
01:10:878 - no LN but there is 01:06:553 - Нет. Короткие стримы можно оставить, а те длинные - как ЛН для разнообразия.
01:18:715 (78715|1) - This LN starts here 01:18:580 - Поставил
01:21:959 - Missed note/double Здесь задумывался клавишный звук, так что всё ок.
01:22:499 - ^
01:24:121 - ^
01:24:661 - ^
01:26:283 - ^
01:26:823 - ^
01:30:337 - ^
01:30:607 - ^
01:30:878 - ^
01:32:499 - ^
01:32:769 - ^
01:33:310 - ^
01:34:661 - ^
01:34:932 - ^
01:35:202 - ^

Ibrahim wrote:

yaa shana sorry for delay , this m4m with me in your queue '3'

Or1g1n's Hyper

01:30:472 (90472|2,90742|2,91013|2,91283|2,91553|2) - same mention as before

Ibrahim wrote:

ETarry Another

OMG IM NOT ET
00:07:364 (7364|0,7499|0,7634|0) - how about this jack move it to col 4 (col 1 2 3 4) , since you make this 00:06:013 (6013|0,6418|0,6823|0) - Hmm, here I want those jacks on the opposite column to 00:07:905 (7905|3) - , so I made it column 1 (the same as before)
00:12:499 - this part how to try single note like in diff Walpurgis Hm? ;w; Walpurgis is the same as this diff
00:30:337 (30337|3) - how about move to col 2, make it jack with this 00:30:540 (30540|1) - I wanted 00:30:337 (30337|3,30337|2,30540|3,30540|1,30742|0,30742|3) - this pattern to be reverse of 00:29:796 (29796|1,29796|0,29999|0,29999|2,30202|0,30202|3) - for a nice effect :3 sorry
00:30:540 (30540|1) - add one note i think, since this part in kiai Hmm, I don't quite understand this, sorry ;w; Maybe you used wrong time?
Good diff as usual =w=b

DoNotMess wrote:

hello~ queen grimoire Hi <3

Walpurgis Night

00:07:499 - move 1 to 3 because 00:07:364 - and 00:07:499 - has different melody, hence different notes fixed
00:14:391 - 3 for sound effect? fixed
00:40:067 - and 00:40:202 - 3 notes? fixed
00:41:418 (41418|1,41418|0) - i think this melody starting sounds the same as 00:41:283 (41283|2,41283|3) - fixed
00:41:486 - and maybe there should be a note here, i'm not sure if it continues from the sound before or individual
00:42:229 - http://puu.sh/r2LUW/d2da7822f8.jpg my suggestion fixed
01:05:405 (65405|2) - ??
01:10:134 - i hear something there that should be mapped, http://puu.sh/r2M2K/822c27eeda.jpg suggestion
01:21:013 - should be 2 notes only
01:23:175 - should be 2 notes fixed
01:26:418 - should be 2 notes fixed
01:29:053 (89053|3,89188|2) - these 2 ghost notes i think
01:31:823 - 2 notes fixed

really great map O_O

1 2 3 4

• [General]

1. Turn off Widescreen support in Beginner and Another
2. Hitsound file soft-hitfinish.wav delay > 5ms
   [Or1g1n's Beginner]
3. 00:06:013 (6013|1,6013|0,6418|2,6823|1) - those note are the same sound, so maybe make them into single will be nice
4. 00:23:310 - from this part to 00:27:634 - , i think you miss some main sound which on 1/4, i will use 00:23:310 - to 00:25:472 - as a example
   00:23:580 (23580|1) - to 00:23:513 -
   00:23:850 (23850|3) - to 00:23:715 -
   00:24:121 (24121|2) - to 00:23:986 -
   00:24:256 - add one here
   What I mean img, ofc those mod also apply to the same part thats after
5. 00:43:850 - why not make this part in to a 1 4 trill to emphasize the repetitive snare img
6. 00:48:175 - same as above img
7. 01:08:715 (68715|2,68715|3,69121|1,69526|0) - same thing as I said in my first mod
8. 01:20:337 - compare to other diff, this LN should end 01:20:472 - , but a 1/2 should LN is too hard for a EZ so i think better change to a normal note for this FX sound
9. 01:23:850 - 01:32:499 - add one for the finish sound (cymbal)
10. 01:35:742 - a repetitive pattern will fit the rhythm very well, rather than map them randomly, by what i mean img
    [Normal]
11. 00:05:472 - perhaps add one on 1 col for the kick sound
12. 00:10:742 - yup same ^
13. 01:04:391 - i think you miss this double because 1/2 trill can be hard for Normal, so its better to reduce the double like 00:58:175 - 00:59:256 - 01:00:337 - 01:01:148 - 01:01:418 - etc, so you can use double for 01:02:229 - which i think more worth to follow
14. 01:08:175 - as i mention above, add on 4 this time
15. 01:13:040 (73040|0,73445|3) - those LN should extend to 01:13:445 - and 01:13:850 - imo, unlike other LN 01:11:959 (71959|2,72364|1) -
16. 01:20:337 (80337|0) - hmm... i think this should end at 01:20:472 - like you did for your last diff, but i will suggest change to normal note since short LN kinda hard
    [Or1g1n's Hyper]
17. 00:14:121 (14121|0,14188|1) - how about CTRL+J, the pitch change at 00:13:986 - so make the pattern a little different with the previous pattern.
18. 00:27:634 - this triple is same as the double after, so pls reduce one and, 00:27:499 - make it double for the finish sound
19. 00:31:418 (31418|1,31486|0) - CTRL+J pls, those vocal 1/4 arent coherent with 00:31:283 (31283|3,31350|2) - , so a stair really not fitting the music
20. 00:36:215 - ghost note, comparing with feerum's diff
21. 00:45:472 - suddenly use LN for the 1/4?
22. 00:46:553 (46553|3,47634|1) - those two as well, i dont understand why you want to reduce the difficultly here
23. 00:54:526 (54526|1) - move this to 4, better than the current 1/2 jack
24. 01:06:553 - 01:07:634 - i dont understand those two part as well, why not just map 1/4 with single note
    [Starry's Another]
25. 00:31:959 - nothing important, but why so many "book mark" here lmao
26. 00:07:905 - if this is for the vocal then should end at 00:08:175 -
27. 00:12:229 - this one as well
28. 00:13:986 (13986|3,14053|1,14121|2,14188|0,14256|3,14323|1) - why not make those in to 1 4 trill, compare with previous 2 3 trill
29. 00:57:769 - a double here is overnote imo, i dont see any reason, a single note is enough for the background fade in long sound

Feerum wrote:

Aww why is the last diff name not in German. I think "Walpurgisnacht" sounds cooler than "Walpurgis Night" xP

SanadaYukimura wrote:

• [Starry's Another]

1. 00:31:959 - nothing important, but why so many "book mark" here lmao
2. 00:07:905 - if this is for the vocal then should end at 00:08:175 -
3. 00:12:229 - this one as well I think Shana already fixed these for me :3
4. 00:13:986 (13986|3,14053|1,14121|2,14188|0,14256|3,14323|1) - why not make those in to 1 4 trill, compare with previous 2 3 trill at first I had 1-4 trill, but because in that area the song is more intense, I wanted to mix things up here (also I just think it plays better than 1/4 trill too).
5. 00:57:769 - a double here is overnote imo, i dont see any reason, a single note is enough for the background fade in long sound The lead noise is here too, so I used 2 notes, as I did before.

That's all from me, good luck!!! >w<

Starry- wrote:

Omg I'm so sorry Shana D:
Haven't been active in the past month because of Uni, and osu! hasn't been of much interest to me.
You fixed everything fine anyways, sorry for having to wait so long for me QwQ

SanadaYukimura wrote:

• [Starry's Another]

1. 00:31:959 - nothing important, but why so many "book mark" here lmao
2. 00:07:905 - if this is for the vocal then should end at 00:08:175 -
3. 00:12:229 - this one as well I think Shana already fixed these for me :3
4. 00:13:986 (13986|3,14053|1,14121|2,14188|0,14256|3,14323|1) - why not make those in to 1 4 trill, compare with previous 2 3 trill at first I had 1-4 trill, but because in that area the song is more intense, I wanted to mix things up here (also I just think it plays better than 1/4 trill too).
5. 00:57:769 - a double here is overnote imo, i dont see any reason, a single note is enough for the background fade in long sound The lead noise is here too, so I used 2 notes, as I did before.

That's all from me, good luck!!! >w<

Thanks a lot SY! Shana already has fixed everything~

Kawawa wrote:

Alright.

Checked.

19:49 *Kawawa is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1062757 Rairyu - ra'am]
19:49 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1062757 Rairyu - ra'am [Or1g1n's Beginner]]
19:49 *[Shana Lesus] is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1062757 Rairyu - ra'am [Or1g1n's Beginner]]
19:54 Kawawa: 01:20:607 - Add a note here? with hitsound "F"
19:54 Kawawa: because It's not same section with 01:22:769 - ?
19:54 Kawawa: like 01:23:850 -
19:55 Kawawa: also put the hitsound "W"
19:55 [Shana Lesus]: added to 4
19:55 Kawawa: missing here 01:23:850 (83850|1) - "W"
19:55 [Shana Lesus]: ok
19:55 Kawawa: 01:32:499 (92499|2) - "F"
19:57 Kawawa: okay
19:57 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1058281 Rairyu - ra'am [Normal]]
19:57 [Shana Lesus]: ready
20:00 Kawawa: okay is fine
20:00 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1056849 Rairyu - ra'am [Or1g1n's Hyper]]
20:04 Kawawa: oh
20:04 Kawawa: who bubbled this map?
20:04 Kawawa: I can't find any issue.
20:04 [Shana Lesus]: Fresh
20:04 [Shana Lesus]:
20:04 Kawawa: I see
20:05 Kawawa: Hyper no problem
20:05 [Shana Lesus]: oki
20:05 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1065233 Rairyu - ra'am [Starry's Another]]
20:05 Kawawa: mehh, Starry diffs, I should see?
20:05 Kawawa: =w=
20:05 [Shana Lesus]: maybe
20:05 Kawawa: I think perfect without check
20:06 Kawawa: what do you think about? remove book mark spam
20:06 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/rTPnp/f4ff7e8afb.jpg
20:07 [Shana Lesus]: ok, i remove now
20:07 Kawawa: ofc, It will not be any dq issue. but It helped file size.
20:07 [Shana Lesus]: yes, i know this
20:08 [Shana Lesus]: book mark removed
20:08 Kawawa: okay~
20:08 Kawawa: no problem
20:09 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1055358 Rairyu - ra'am [Walpurgisnacht]]
20:10 [Shana Lesus]: 00:12:499 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6398914 i change part here
20:10 Kawawa: in last diffs?
20:11 [Shana Lesus]: yes
20:11 [Shana Lesus]: hmmm
20:11 [Shana Lesus]: or need delete this lns
20:12 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/rTPE1/fbec6a4839.jpg
20:13 [Shana Lesus]: o
20:13 [Shana Lesus]: better
20:13 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
20:15 Kawawa: 00:48:715 (48715|1,48715|2,48783|1,48783|3,48783|0,48850|3,48850|2) -
20:15 Kawawa: what do you think about?
20:16 [Shana Lesus]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6398938 i think, this more playable
20:17 Kawawa: I think this jack should be avoid. Since It is 222 bpm.
20:17 Kawawa: at least keep 1 jack only.
20:17 Kawawa: not 2 jack.
20:17 Kawawa: kinda hard, and can't feel the any rhythm with those jacking
20:18 Kawawa: or you can use 1notes here.00:48:850 -
20:18 [Shana Lesus]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6398944 ?
20:18 Kawawa: 00:48:715 - there is a vocal sample, so can be impact than 00:48:850 -
20:18 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/rTPSi/e3b763a847.jpg
20:19 [Shana Lesus]: ok, i keep your advice
20:19 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
20:21 Kawawa: 00:30:878 (30878|2,30878|0,30878|3,30945|2,30945|3,30945|0,31013|2,31013|1,31013|3,31148|1,31148|0,31148|2,31283|1,31283|2,31283|0,31350|1,31350|3,31350|0) - 01:28:175 (88175|0,88175|3,88175|1,88242|0,88242|1,88242|3,88310|1,88310|2,88310|0,88445|3,88445|0,88445|1,88580|3,88580|0,88580|2,88648|3,88648|0,88648|1) -
20:21 Kawawa: wanna keep them?
20:22 [Shana Lesus]: oh
20:22 Kawawa: If you think so, can keep then. but I can consider once again.
20:22 [Shana Lesus]: this part
20:22 [Shana Lesus]: yes
20:22 [Shana Lesus]: i want keep
20:22 [Shana Lesus]: but need
20:22 [Shana Lesus]: fix
20:24 Kawawa: because I'm sure someone will point it out.
20:24 Kawawa: I guess
20:24 Kawawa: 30 sec http://puu.sh/rTQ84/8f22370412.jpg
20:25 Kawawa: 1m 28 http://puu.sh/rTQ5D/d4471993b6.jpg
20:25 Kawawa: like this, you can make easy or arrange something.
20:25 Kawawa: I just give you a feed back
20:26 Kawawa: nah, I noticed one thing. 00:31:418 - ~ 00:31:688 - this notes should be 2notes by note consistence.
20:26 Kawawa: since you used 2notes to them on below section
20:27 [Shana Lesus]: part fixed
20:27 [Shana Lesus]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6398980
20:27 [Shana Lesus]: parts*
20:27 Kawawa: okay.
20:27 Kawawa: 1m 28sec is?
20:28 [Shana Lesus]: too
20:28 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
20:28 Kawawa: metadata is
20:28 Kawawa: fine?
20:29 Kawawa: can you give me any information for that
20:29 [Shana Lesus]: https://remywiki.com/Ra%27am
20:29 [Shana Lesus]: i take metadata here
20:29 [Shana Lesus]: tags too
20:32 Kawawa: vedio size is fine?
20:32 [Shana Lesus]: yes
20:32 [Shana Lesus]: 1024 x 768
20:32 [Shana Lesus]: rankable
20:32 Kawawa: audio disabled right?
20:32 [Shana Lesus]: yes
20:32 [Shana Lesus]: but bg
20:32 [Shana Lesus]: 1000 x 750
20:33 [Shana Lesus]: need fix ?
20:33 Kawawa: yes
20:33 [Shana Lesus]: ok
20:33 [Shana Lesus]: i fix to 1024 x 768
20:33 Kawawa: If It is not rankable rate, have to fix.
20:34 Kawawa: 4:3, 16:10 maybe
20:34 [Shana Lesus]: bg rate fixed
20:34 [Shana Lesus]: size*
20:35 [Shana Lesus]: i can update now ?
20:35 Kawawa: yes

Kawawa wrote:

Qualified!
Congratz, Shana!