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lapix - NEO TREASON [OsuMania]

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Aruel
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Aruel
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016년 10월 15일 토요일 at 오후 9:35:56

Artist: lapix
Title: NEO TREASON
Source: SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags: sdvx the 5th kac original song contest konami bemani GRAVITATIONAL RADAR EPISODE 2 Kyoubate Haruka
BPM: 200
Filesize: 5191kb
Play Time: 02:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED - 4Key (3.32 stars, 1292 notes)
  2. BASIC - 4Key (1.4 stars, 368 notes)
  3. EXHAUST - 4Key (4.19 stars, 1575 notes)
  4. GRAVITY - 4Key (5.15 stars, 1790 notes)
  5. NOVICE - 4Key (2.16 stars, 670 notes)
Download: lapix - NEO TREASON
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hola amigo
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Aras
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Aras
wot? again lel
Reba
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Reba
hola como estas
Aruel
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Joined February 2014
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Aruel

Lass wrote:

hola como estas
u r pendejo
Wonki
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Joined February 2016
Wonki
그래비티
개인적인의견이지만 123이 뭔가더 자연스러울거같음
00:02:879 - ~00:03:179 - 여기까지 잘들어보면 드럼소리있는데 한개씩 배치해서 익저랑 차이를 주면 좋을거같음

00:30:779 - 이쪽부분 롱놋표현해서 하면어떨까 http://puu.sh/qMsuC/575b71ffbd.jpg이런식으루다가

00:31:979 - ~00:32:279 - 이쪽부분에도00:32:279 (32279|0,32429|1) - 이런음이 있는데 롱놋추가하는거도 좋을듯

00:40:379 - ~00:41:279 - 이쪽부분도 위와같이 롱놋표현해도좋을듯http://puu.sh/qMsAW/f158785c47.jpg

00:50:129 (50129|3,50279|3,50429|3) - 여기도 롱놋해도좋을듯 00:50:579 (50579|3) - 이걸 1,2로옮기셈

01:17:279 - ~01:17:579 - 개인의견이지만 여기에 16스냅으로 1.8 0.1 반복으로 변속넣으면 느낌있음

01:18:479 - 01:18:779 - 동일 뒤쪽에많음 귀찮으면 하지마셈

끝
Aruel
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Aruel

Wonki wrote:

그래비티
개인적인의견이지만 123이 뭔가더 자연스러울거같음
00:02:879 - ~00:03:179 - 여기까지 잘들어보면 드럼소리있는데 한개씩 배치해서 익저랑 차이를 주면 좋을거같음 - 변속떄문에 여기 노트넣으면 대재앙

00:30:779 - 이쪽부분 롱놋표현해서 하면어떨까 http://puu.sh/qMsuC/575b71ffbd.jpg이런식으루다가 - 음 여기는 깔끔하게놔두고싶어서 보류

00:31:979 - ~00:32:279 - 이쪽부분에도00:32:279 (32279|0,32429|1) - 이런음이 있는데 롱놋추가하는거도 좋을듯 - ㅇㅅㅇ 이해가 안됨

00:40:379 - ~00:41:279 - 이쪽부분도 위와같이 롱놋표현해도좋을듯http://puu.sh/qMsAW/f158785c47.jpg - 같은 이유

00:50:129 (50129|3,50279|3,50429|3) - 여기도 롱놋해도좋을듯 00:50:579 (50579|3) - 이걸 1,2로옮기셈 - 이건 참고해서 재량으로 변경

01:17:279 - ~01:17:579 - 개인의견이지만 여기에 16스냅으로 1.8 0.1 반복으로 변속넣으면 느낌있음 -ㅋㅋ 거기는 이미 다른 변속이 있음

01:18:479 - 01:18:779 - 동일 뒤쪽에많음 귀찮으면 하지마셈 - 거기도 아까 위랑 마찬가지로 변속 리딩문제

끝
감사하오
Axertje
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Axertje
Very enjoyable & creative map, nice work!
Shinsekai-
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Joined November 2012
Shinsekai-
SPANISH O_O WTF hola :D!
Kawawa
Kawawa
modded
2016-09-17 12:59 Kawawa: 01:37:979 - ~ 01:37:979 - 요기
2016-09-17 12:59 Kawawa: 롱놋 하나로 넣어도 될듯 하오
2016-09-17 12:59 Kawawa: 드럼 올라가니
2016-09-17 13:00 Fresh Chicken: 음
2016-09-17 13:00 Fresh Chicken: 0:00:000 길이의
2016-09-17 13:00 Fresh Chicken: 롱놋을 넣으면 되는군요
2016-09-17 13:00 Kawawa: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ머야
2016-09-17 13:00 Kawawa: 01:40:379 -
2016-09-17 13:00 Fresh Chicken: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㄱ,ㄴ데 저건 일단 거절할게요 저거
2016-09-17 13:00 Fresh Chicken: 좀 깔끔해보이기도 하고
2016-09-17 13:00 Kawawa: 넹
2016-09-17 13:00 Fresh Chicken: 저거 또 넣었다가 fox4처럼 버그꼴 날까봐
2016-09-17 13:00 Fresh Chicken: 무섭습니다...
2016-09-17 13:01 Kawawa: 01:58:379 (118379|3,119579|0) -
2016-09-17 13:01 Kawawa: 01:58:379 (118379|3,119579|0) - 이거롱놋
2016-09-17 13:01 Kawawa: 02:00:479 - 여기 끝내는게 깔끔하지 않나요
2016-09-17 13:01 Fresh Chicken: 아 네 방금거기 보고있었어요
2016-09-17 13:01 Fresh Chicken: 수정완료데스
2016-09-17 13:01 Kawawa: 예
2016-09-17 13:02 Fresh Chicken: 이거 랭크버리기는 막난 변속짠게 아까워서
2016-09-17 13:02 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/rdVIo/a8ef724773.png
2016-09-17 13:02 Fresh Chicken: 걍 빠르게 보낼려하고
2016-09-17 13:02 Fresh Chicken: 오
2016-09-17 13:02 Kawawa: 이건 이상하게 꺼둬도 맵 업데하고 막 하다보면
2016-09-17 13:02 Fresh Chicken: !
2016-09-17 13:02 Kawawa: 다시 켜지던데
2016-09-17 13:02 Kawawa: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2016-09-17 13:02 Kawawa: ㄹㅇ 미스테리
2016-09-17 13:02 Fresh Chicken: 페피가 또...
2016-09-17 13:02 Kawawa: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1055811 lapix - NEO TREASON [NOVICE]]
2016-09-17 13:04 Kawawa: 00:53:279 -
2016-09-17 13:04 Kawawa: 노트 하나가 빠찐듯하오
2016-09-17 13:04 Fresh Chicken: 그렇소
2016-09-17 13:04 Fresh Chicken: 추가하였오
2016-09-17 13:06 Kawawa: 01:37:229 (97229|2) -
2016-09-17 13:06 Kawawa: 이게 여기가는게 맞나여
2016-09-17 13:06 Kawawa: 01:37:079 - 아니라면 여기가야할거 같은데
2016-09-17 13:06 Fresh Chicken: 그 똥또로 똥
2016-09-17 13:06 Kawawa: 01:31:979 (91979|1,92279|2,92729|1) -
2016-09-17 13:06 Kawawa: 여것들처럼ㄴㄴ
2016-09-17 13:06 Kawawa: 여것들처럼
2016-09-17 13:06 Fresh Chicken: 구간이 끝나는곳에 놓은건데
2016-09-17 13:06 Fresh Chicken: 음 어색한가여
2016-09-17 13:06 Fresh Chicken: 아 내가봐도 좀어색하긴하네
2016-09-17 13:06 Fresh Chicken: 수정하였소
2016-09-17 13:07 Kawawa: 뭔가 어색하네요
2016-09-17 13:07 Kawawa: 동동동동 하는건
2016-09-17 13:07 Kawawa: 01:32:279 -  흰색라인에만 있는거같긴한데
2016-09-17 13:07 Kawawa: 01:32:579 -
2016-09-17 13:07 Kawawa: 01:32:879 -
2016-09-17 13:07 Kawawa: 01:37:079 - 01:37:379 - 01:37:679 -
2016-09-17 13:07 Fresh Chicken: 01:31:979 - 똥01:32:129 - 똥01:32:279 - 똥01:32:429 - 똥 해서 똥 끝나는지점에 놔둔거였는데 걍
2016-09-17 13:07 Fresh Chicken: 흰색에다가 놔두기로 했소
2016-09-17 13:07 Kawawa: 예
2016-09-17 13:08 Kawawa: 디저블 와이드스크린 서폿
2016-09-17 13:08 Kawawa: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1055808 lapix - NEO TREASON [ADVANCED]]
2016-09-17 13:08 Fresh Chicken: 슈얼
2016-09-17 13:09 Kawawa: 00:12:479 (12479|3,12554|2,12629|1,12704|0) - 여기를 그냥 아랫 흐름과 동일하게 3스냅 신디음으로 유지시키는것도 나쁘진 않을듯 한데
2016-09-17 13:09 Kawawa: 아니다
2016-09-17 13:09 Kawawa: 00:14:879 (14879|0,14954|1,15029|2,15104|3) - 위를 동일하게  4스냅으로 썼으니
2016-09-17 13:09 Kawawa: 변경 안하는게 낫겠소
2016-09-17 13:09 Fresh Chicken: yea.
2016-09-17 13:11 Kawawa: 00:48:779 (48779|2) - 이걸 삭제해주는것도 나쁘지 않을듯 하오
2016-09-17 13:11 Kawawa: 00:49:979 - 여기서 1개사용했으니
2016-09-17 13:11 Kawawa: 드럼으로 같이 부각되지만
2016-09-17 13:11 Kawawa: 그에비해 익저스트에서는 저 두파트에서 2개사용했네요
2016-09-17 13:11 Fresh Chicken: 00:49:979 - 요기를 추가하기로 결정하였소
2016-09-17 13:11 Kawawa: 에
2016-09-17 13:11 Kawawa: 예
2016-09-17 13:11 Fresh Chicken: 예
2016-09-17 13:14 Kawawa: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1055810 lapix - NEO TREASON [EXHAUST]]
2016-09-17 13:14 Fresh Chicken: 예.
2016-09-17 13:15 Kawawa: 00:30:779 (30779|2,30929|0,31079|3,31229|0,31379|3,31529|1) - 여거도 그래비티처럼
2016-09-17 13:15 Kawawa: 비슷하게 배치해주는게 어떻소?
2016-09-17 13:15 Kawawa: 그래비티에 저 보컬 느낌 배치로 한게 맘에드네요
2016-09-17 13:16 Fresh Chicken: 2-3에 그래비티랑 비슷하게 미니 트릴을 만들었소이다
2016-09-17 13:16 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/rdWnJ/d4a57fdcee.jpg
2016-09-17 13:16 Fresh Chicken: 또한 00:31:679 - 여기 하나 추가
2016-09-17 13:16 Kawawa: 예
2016-09-17 13:16 Fresh Chicken: http://puu.sh/rdWoQ/05039d1218.jpg
2016-09-17 13:16 Fresh Chicken: 이렇게 하였쏘
2016-09-17 13:16 Kawawa: 예
2016-09-17 13:17 Kawawa: 00:38:279 (38279|1) - 이걸 2로 옮기는것도 나쁘진 않을듯 하오
2016-09-17 13:17 Kawawa: 아니 3
2016-09-17 13:17 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/rdWqQ/107c31fc8f.jpg
2016-09-17 13:17 Fresh Chicken: 이동하였소
2016-09-17 13:17 Kawawa: 00:40:529 (40529|1,40679|2,40829|3,40979|2,41129|1) - 아까 그걸 변경했으니
2016-09-17 13:17 Kawawa: 여기도 다시 한번
2016-09-17 13:17 Kawawa: 00:41:279 - 이것도
2016-09-17 13:17 Fresh Chicken: 이미 하였쏘이다
2016-09-17 13:17 Fresh Chicken: 뀨
2016-09-17 13:18 Kawawa: 좋소
2016-09-17 13:20 Kawawa: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1055022 lapix - NEO TREASON [GRAVITY]]
2016-09-17 13:20 Fresh Chicken: 예.
2016-09-17 13:23 Kawawa: 01:03:479 (63479|0,63629|0,63779|0,64079|0,64229|0,64379|0,64529|0,64604|1,64679|0,64829|0,64979|0,65129|0,65279|0) -
2016-09-17 13:23 Kawawa: 이것들이 clap사운드를
2016-09-17 13:23 Kawawa: 따라간것으로 예상되오나
2016-09-17 13:23 Kawawa: 01:04:229 (64229|0) - 여기서 그 사운드가 들리는게 확실하오?
2016-09-17 13:24 Fresh Chicken: 음
2016-09-17 13:24 Fresh Chicken: 그렇군오
2016-09-17 13:24 Fresh Chicken: 안들리오
2016-09-17 13:24 Kawawa: 저게 애매하다면 01:03:629 (63629|0) -
2016-09-17 13:24 Kawawa: 여기도 같은 이유오
2016-09-17 13:24 Fresh Chicken: 음그래도 힛사로
2016-09-17 13:24 Fresh Chicken: 덮을수있지않겠쏘?
2016-09-17 13:24 Fresh Chicken: 아아니다
2016-09-17 13:24 Fresh Chicken: 너무작ㄴ[ㅔ
2016-09-17 13:24 Kawawa: 덮을 수는 있으나, 오스가 mp3에서 들리는 사운드를 기반으로 챠트를 만드는것이기 땜시
2016-09-17 13:25 Kawawa: 01:03:629 (63629|0) - 01:04:229 (64229|0) -  01:04:979 (64979|0) -
2016-09-17 13:25 Kawawa: 이 3개만
2016-09-17 13:25 Kawawa: 다소 위험한듯 하오
2016-09-17 13:25 Kawawa: 01:04:979 - 그러나 여기는 삭제하기보다는 다른 col로 이동시켜주는게 나을듯 하기도하고
2016-09-17 13:27 Fresh Chicken: 다 고치었소
ㅇㅅㅇㅅㅇ
Aruel
1,891 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Aruel

Kawawa wrote:

modded
2016-09-17 12:59 Kawawa: 01:37:979 - ~ 01:37:979 - 요기
2016-09-17 12:59 Kawawa: 롱놋 하나로 넣어도 될듯 하오
2016-09-17 12:59 Kawawa: 드럼 올라가니
2016-09-17 13:00 Fresh Chicken: 음
2016-09-17 13:00 Fresh Chicken: 0:00:000 길이의
2016-09-17 13:00 Fresh Chicken: 롱놋을 넣으면 되는군요
2016-09-17 13:00 Kawawa: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ머야
2016-09-17 13:00 Kawawa: 01:40:379 -
2016-09-17 13:00 Fresh Chicken: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㄱ,ㄴ데 저건 일단 거절할게요 저거
2016-09-17 13:00 Fresh Chicken: 좀 깔끔해보이기도 하고
2016-09-17 13:00 Kawawa: 넹
2016-09-17 13:00 Fresh Chicken: 저거 또 넣었다가 fox4처럼 버그꼴 날까봐
2016-09-17 13:00 Fresh Chicken: 무섭습니다...
2016-09-17 13:01 Kawawa: 01:58:379 (118379|3,119579|0) -
2016-09-17 13:01 Kawawa: 01:58:379 (118379|3,119579|0) - 이거롱놋
2016-09-17 13:01 Kawawa: 02:00:479 - 여기 끝내는게 깔끔하지 않나요
2016-09-17 13:01 Fresh Chicken: 아 네 방금거기 보고있었어요
2016-09-17 13:01 Fresh Chicken: 수정완료데스
2016-09-17 13:01 Kawawa: 예
2016-09-17 13:02 Fresh Chicken: 이거 랭크버리기는 막난 변속짠게 아까워서
2016-09-17 13:02 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/rdVIo/a8ef724773.png
2016-09-17 13:02 Fresh Chicken: 걍 빠르게 보낼려하고
2016-09-17 13:02 Fresh Chicken: 오
2016-09-17 13:02 Kawawa: 이건 이상하게 꺼둬도 맵 업데하고 막 하다보면
2016-09-17 13:02 Fresh Chicken: !
2016-09-17 13:02 Kawawa: 다시 켜지던데
2016-09-17 13:02 Kawawa: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2016-09-17 13:02 Kawawa: ㄹㅇ 미스테리
2016-09-17 13:02 Fresh Chicken: 페피가 또...
2016-09-17 13:02 Kawawa: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1055811 lapix - NEO TREASON [NOVICE]]
2016-09-17 13:04 Kawawa: 00:53:279 -
2016-09-17 13:04 Kawawa: 노트 하나가 빠찐듯하오
2016-09-17 13:04 Fresh Chicken: 그렇소
2016-09-17 13:04 Fresh Chicken: 추가하였오
2016-09-17 13:06 Kawawa: 01:37:229 (97229|2) -
2016-09-17 13:06 Kawawa: 이게 여기가는게 맞나여
2016-09-17 13:06 Kawawa: 01:37:079 - 아니라면 여기가야할거 같은데
2016-09-17 13:06 Fresh Chicken: 그 똥또로 똥
2016-09-17 13:06 Kawawa: 01:31:979 (91979|1,92279|2,92729|1) -
2016-09-17 13:06 Kawawa: 여것들처럼ㄴㄴ
2016-09-17 13:06 Kawawa: 여것들처럼
2016-09-17 13:06 Fresh Chicken: 구간이 끝나는곳에 놓은건데
2016-09-17 13:06 Fresh Chicken: 음 어색한가여
2016-09-17 13:06 Fresh Chicken: 아 내가봐도 좀어색하긴하네
2016-09-17 13:06 Fresh Chicken: 수정하였소
2016-09-17 13:07 Kawawa: 뭔가 어색하네요
2016-09-17 13:07 Kawawa: 동동동동 하는건
2016-09-17 13:07 Kawawa: 01:32:279 -  흰색라인에만 있는거같긴한데
2016-09-17 13:07 Kawawa: 01:32:579 -
2016-09-17 13:07 Kawawa: 01:32:879 -
2016-09-17 13:07 Kawawa: 01:37:079 - 01:37:379 - 01:37:679 -
2016-09-17 13:07 Fresh Chicken: 01:31:979 - 똥01:32:129 - 똥01:32:279 - 똥01:32:429 - 똥 해서 똥 끝나는지점에 놔둔거였는데 걍
2016-09-17 13:07 Fresh Chicken: 흰색에다가 놔두기로 했소
2016-09-17 13:07 Kawawa: 예
2016-09-17 13:08 Kawawa: 디저블 와이드스크린 서폿
2016-09-17 13:08 Kawawa: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1055808 lapix - NEO TREASON [ADVANCED]]
2016-09-17 13:08 Fresh Chicken: 슈얼
2016-09-17 13:09 Kawawa: 00:12:479 (12479|3,12554|2,12629|1,12704|0) - 여기를 그냥 아랫 흐름과 동일하게 3스냅 신디음으로 유지시키는것도 나쁘진 않을듯 한데
2016-09-17 13:09 Kawawa: 아니다
2016-09-17 13:09 Kawawa: 00:14:879 (14879|0,14954|1,15029|2,15104|3) - 위를 동일하게  4스냅으로 썼으니
2016-09-17 13:09 Kawawa: 변경 안하는게 낫겠소
2016-09-17 13:09 Fresh Chicken: yea.
2016-09-17 13:11 Kawawa: 00:48:779 (48779|2) - 이걸 삭제해주는것도 나쁘지 않을듯 하오
2016-09-17 13:11 Kawawa: 00:49:979 - 여기서 1개사용했으니
2016-09-17 13:11 Kawawa: 드럼으로 같이 부각되지만
2016-09-17 13:11 Kawawa: 그에비해 익저스트에서는 저 두파트에서 2개사용했네요
2016-09-17 13:11 Fresh Chicken: 00:49:979 - 요기를 추가하기로 결정하였소
2016-09-17 13:11 Kawawa: 에
2016-09-17 13:11 Kawawa: 예
2016-09-17 13:11 Fresh Chicken: 예
2016-09-17 13:14 Kawawa: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1055810 lapix - NEO TREASON [EXHAUST]]
2016-09-17 13:14 Fresh Chicken: 예.
2016-09-17 13:15 Kawawa: 00:30:779 (30779|2,30929|0,31079|3,31229|0,31379|3,31529|1) - 여거도 그래비티처럼
2016-09-17 13:15 Kawawa: 비슷하게 배치해주는게 어떻소?
2016-09-17 13:15 Kawawa: 그래비티에 저 보컬 느낌 배치로 한게 맘에드네요
2016-09-17 13:16 Fresh Chicken: 2-3에 그래비티랑 비슷하게 미니 트릴을 만들었소이다
2016-09-17 13:16 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/rdWnJ/d4a57fdcee.jpg
2016-09-17 13:16 Fresh Chicken: 또한 00:31:679 - 여기 하나 추가
2016-09-17 13:16 Kawawa: 예
2016-09-17 13:16 Fresh Chicken: http://puu.sh/rdWoQ/05039d1218.jpg
2016-09-17 13:16 Fresh Chicken: 이렇게 하였쏘
2016-09-17 13:16 Kawawa: 예
2016-09-17 13:17 Kawawa: 00:38:279 (38279|1) - 이걸 2로 옮기는것도 나쁘진 않을듯 하오
2016-09-17 13:17 Kawawa: 아니 3
2016-09-17 13:17 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/rdWqQ/107c31fc8f.jpg
2016-09-17 13:17 Fresh Chicken: 이동하였소
2016-09-17 13:17 Kawawa: 00:40:529 (40529|1,40679|2,40829|3,40979|2,41129|1) - 아까 그걸 변경했으니
2016-09-17 13:17 Kawawa: 여기도 다시 한번
2016-09-17 13:17 Kawawa: 00:41:279 - 이것도
2016-09-17 13:17 Fresh Chicken: 이미 하였쏘이다
2016-09-17 13:17 Fresh Chicken: 뀨
2016-09-17 13:18 Kawawa: 좋소
2016-09-17 13:20 Kawawa: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1055022 lapix - NEO TREASON [GRAVITY]]
2016-09-17 13:20 Fresh Chicken: 예.
2016-09-17 13:23 Kawawa: 01:03:479 (63479|0,63629|0,63779|0,64079|0,64229|0,64379|0,64529|0,64604|1,64679|0,64829|0,64979|0,65129|0,65279|0) -
2016-09-17 13:23 Kawawa: 이것들이 clap사운드를
2016-09-17 13:23 Kawawa: 따라간것으로 예상되오나
2016-09-17 13:23 Kawawa: 01:04:229 (64229|0) - 여기서 그 사운드가 들리는게 확실하오?
2016-09-17 13:24 Fresh Chicken: 음
2016-09-17 13:24 Fresh Chicken: 그렇군오
2016-09-17 13:24 Fresh Chicken: 안들리오
2016-09-17 13:24 Kawawa: 저게 애매하다면 01:03:629 (63629|0) -
2016-09-17 13:24 Kawawa: 여기도 같은 이유오
2016-09-17 13:24 Fresh Chicken: 음그래도 힛사로
2016-09-17 13:24 Fresh Chicken: 덮을수있지않겠쏘?
2016-09-17 13:24 Fresh Chicken: 아아니다
2016-09-17 13:24 Fresh Chicken: 너무작ㄴ[ㅔ
2016-09-17 13:24 Kawawa: 덮을 수는 있으나, 오스가 mp3에서 들리는 사운드를 기반으로 챠트를 만드는것이기 땜시
2016-09-17 13:25 Kawawa: 01:03:629 (63629|0) - 01:04:229 (64229|0) -  01:04:979 (64979|0) -
2016-09-17 13:25 Kawawa: 이 3개만
2016-09-17 13:25 Kawawa: 다소 위험한듯 하오
2016-09-17 13:25 Kawawa: 01:04:979 - 그러나 여기는 삭제하기보다는 다른 col로 이동시켜주는게 나을듯 하기도하고
2016-09-17 13:27 Fresh Chicken: 다 고치었소
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ZZHBOY
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General

fine~

BASIC

00:11:579 (11579|2) - move to 1 for balance,00:11:579 (11579|2,12179|1) - these are kinda unbalanced

00:26:579 (26579|3) - to 3 as refer 00:23:579 - here

00:30:179 - I think it would be great if you add a LN in here

01:41:579 - make those notes to 3.4, 01:40:379 - refering it will be help

NOVICE

00:01:079 - what about this http://puu.sh/riP9o/558f77cf55.jpg

00:30:179 - Same suggestion with BASIC

00:47:579 (47579|0) - maybe move to 2, 00:47:579 (47579|0,47879|0) - jacks are not needed in here

ADVANCED

00:01:379 (1379|1,1454|2,1529|3) - 1.2.3 is more better, seems column 1 is kinda empty
and if you followed this, 00:01:829 (1829|2) - move to 4 for balance

00:30:479 - this trills are not good in ADV, seems better to make same with 00:29:879 - here.

00:46:379 - try to rearrange here, not fit tbh.

00:55:679 - 00:55:829 - add one, kicks are here

01:30:779 (90779|0) - it should be on 3, for consistency with 01:30:179 (90179|0,90279|1,90379|0,90479|1) - here

01:57:779 - make it stairs for cover 1/8

EXHAUST

00:02:129 - i think it should be mapped same with GRV or similiar.

00:34:379 - add one note for kick.

00:36:629 (36629|2) - move it to 1, better to play 00:35:804 (35804|2,36029|2,36254|2,36479|2,36629|3) - for this.

00:37:979 - http://puu.sh/riPBw/f79806d3a2.jpg

01:04:979 - Clap HS should be removed like GRV

01:51:179 - 2 notes should be on 12.

GRAVITY

00:02:129 - Double timing points

00:18:779 - http://puu.sh/riPQI/a7b86d8723.jpg more comfortable to play

00:40:979 - just make mini jack like you did on 00:31:379 - here

01:06:704 (66704|2) - it's useless note. please remove

01:49:604 - here's a sound that you're using 2 notes
Aruel
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All fixed ZZHGAY thanks AH
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Bubbb
Aruel
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ZZHBOY wrote:

Bubbb
Thanks gay ♂
[ A v a l o n ]
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Hi Chicken . . .

  • [General]
  1. 30% hitsound volume seems very low for me, maybe i think you should adjust it to 35 or 40%
  2. Metadata confirmed here https://p.eagate.573.jp/game/sdvx/iii/p ... list_id=71

    [BASIC]
  3. 00:07:979 (7979|3,8579|2) - maybe you can swtich those column for balance, 00:06:779 (6779|3) - you can refer to this note
  4. 00:29:879 - is this really needed ? hmmm i think not . . . because you didn't use the same way for NOVICE diff too
  5. 00:55:829 - you have missing note, I'm sure here must be noted because you are only just following kick.
  6. 01:08:579 - here too, apply it for consistency with 01:07:979 - like there
  7. 01:57:779 - I think it must be long note for covering those 1/8 background sounds . . . like on NOVICE diff

    [NOVICE]
  8. 00:20:429 - I think it would be great if you add long note here like other diffs, this is really fit in here
  9. 00:36:629 - you have missing hitsound here ?
  10. 00:53:579 - hmmm how about this, make 1/1 jack in here like you did in 00:51:179 - here, this looks fun to me and not going to be so hard
  11. 01:12:179 - you should use 2 notes in here for those loud sound imo

    [ADVANCED]
  12. 00:12:779 - I think it would be great if you use 1/2 with long note, seem 1/1 is too easy for this difficulty level
  13. 01:06:929 - well, just personal suggestion . . . i hope you make it to 1/2 jack, just 12-34 is too boring i think
  14. 01:56:279 - hitsound missing, it should have bass

    [EXHAUST]
  15. 00:17:579 (17579|3,17579|2,17729|2,17729|3,17879|3,17879|2) - I think it can be improve more than now, just three jack is not good to fit in here
  16. 00:37:079 - add one note note for finish
  17. 00:39:179 - http://puu.sh/rJHSv/30b42247c0.png for balance, it would be great because 00:38:279 (38279|3,38429|3,38579|3,38729|3,38879|3,39029|3) - these jacks break balance of current pattern
  18. 00:55:829 - missing note here ? there's a kick

    [GRAVITY]
  19. 00:02:129 - I would like to suggest pattern like this http://puu.sh/rJI1C/5e4aec75c1.png because there's long note after SV so it's more good for balance
  20. 00:39:479 - add one nore note for finish, you're using three when there's finish and kick
  21. 00:48:179 - how about add some SVs like you did on below, seems good for me
  22. 01:15:479 (75479|1) - move it to 3, for balance because there's jump stream after long note in one hand\
  23. 01:44:129 - hey, you have double timing point here owo
call me back then
Aruel
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[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi Chicken . . .

  • [General]
  1. 30% hitsound volume seems very low for me, maybe i think you should adjust it to 35 or 40%
  2. Metadata confirmed here https://p.eagate.573.jp/game/sdvx/iii/p ... list_id=71

    [BASIC]
  3. 00:07:979 (7979|3,8579|2) - maybe you can swtich those column for balance, 00:06:779 (6779|3) - you can refer to this note
  4. 00:29:879 - is this really needed ? hmmm i think not . . . because you didn't use the same way for NOVICE diff too
  5. 00:55:829 - you have missing note, I'm sure here must be noted because you are only just following kick.
  6. 01:08:579 - here too, apply it for consistency with 01:07:979 - like there
  7. 01:57:779 - I think it must be long note for covering those 1/8 background sounds . . . like on NOVICE diff

    [NOVICE]
  8. 00:20:429 - I think it would be great if you add long note here like other diffs, this is really fit in here
  9. 00:36:629 - you have missing hitsound here ?
  10. 00:53:579 - hmmm how about this, make 1/1 jack in here like you did in 00:51:179 - here, this looks fun to me and not going to be so hard
  11. 01:12:179 - you should use 2 notes in here for those loud sound imo

    [ADVANCED]
  12. 00:12:779 - I think it would be great if you use 1/2 with long note, seem 1/1 is too easy for this difficulty level
  13. 01:06:929 - well, just personal suggestion . . . i hope you make it to 1/2 jack, just 12-34 is too boring i think
  14. 01:56:279 - hitsound missing, it should have bass

    [EXHAUST]
  15. 00:17:579 (17579|3,17579|2,17729|2,17729|3,17879|3,17879|2) - I think it can be improve more than now, just three jack is not good to fit in here - It's kinda intended one, like one - two - three
  16. 00:37:079 - add one note note for finish
  17. 00:39:179 - http://puu.sh/rJHSv/30b42247c0.png for balance, it would be great because 00:38:279 (38279|3,38429|3,38579|3,38729|3,38879|3,39029|3) - these jacks break balance of current pattern
  18. 00:55:829 - missing note here ? there's a kick

    [GRAVITY]
  19. 00:02:129 - I would like to suggest pattern like this http://puu.sh/rJI1C/5e4aec75c1.png because there's long note after SV so it's more good for balance
  20. 00:39:479 - add one nore note for finish, you're using three when there's finish and kick
  21. 00:48:179 - how about add some SVs like you did on below, seems good for me
  22. 01:15:479 (75479|1) - move it to 3, for balance because there's jump stream after long note in one hand\
  23. 01:44:129 - hey, you have double timing point here owo
call me back then
All fixed without a thing! Thanks!
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aaa let's give a try then
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Aras
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Aras
some stuff in GRAVITY
#nooffense
- 01:06:704 - missing sound, similar like 01:04:604 (64604|1) - guess there should be no reason for you to empty that one since they sound similar either in the way they heard or how it will be played, and also it is still in the same section
- 01:15:679 (75679|0,75879|2,76179|2,76379|3,76679|2,76979|3,77179|0) - the DunDun.wav seems more fitting for'em
- 01:21:179 (81179|0,81479|0,81779|0,82079|3) - add the Finish.wav HS stuff, they are so loud for you to ignore
- 01:22:079 (82079|3) - can add 1 more, there's cymbal here like 01:21:179 (81179|2,81479|3) - , actually there's cymbal here too 01:21:779 (81779|0) -, but I guess 2 is fine since there's 1/4 follow up + 1 column is occupied with the LN, but here? 01:22:079 (82079|3) - why only 2? (cymbal + loud voice sample there)
Aruel
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Aruel

Aras25 wrote:

some stuff in GRAVITY
#nooffense
- 01:06:704 - missing sound, similar like 01:04:604 (64604|1) - guess there should be no reason for you to empty that one since they sound similar either in the way they heard or how it will be played, and also it is still in the same section - This is intended one, there's a note in old days but I removed that. I think you're claiming about consistency with 01:04:529 - here, but as you can hear it carefully, first that I used 1/4 has clap sound and 01:06:704 - this doesn't
- 01:15:679 (75679|0,75879|2,76179|2,76379|3,76679|2,76979|3,77179|0) - the DunDun.wav seems more fitting for'em - Yeah I can admit with this one, but I don't want to DQ this map because of just this hitsound, if there's dq with bad problems, I will fix it
- 01:21:179 (81179|0,81479|0,81779|0,82079|3) - add the Finish.wav HS stuff, they are so loud for you to ignore - I really have no idea where has finish hs
- 01:22:079 (82079|3) - can add 1 more, there's cymbal here like 01:21:179 (81179|2,81479|3) - , actually there's cymbal here too 01:21:779 (81779|0) -, but I guess 2 is fine since there's 1/4 follow up + 1 column is occupied with the LN, but here? 01:22:079 (82079|3) - why only 2? (cymbal + loud voice sample there) 01:21:779 - This is for playable, so I used just 2 notes, and 01:22:079 - I made this 2 notes for giving difference with other 3 notes, the loud of sound is same but there's different vocal sample, I'd like to give 4 notes but I thought that is kinda overcharded so I made it with 2 notes
Aras
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my bad, by fadding inish.wav at 01:21:179 (81179|0,81479|0,81779|0,82079|3) - I mean HiImFinish.wav
Aruel
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Aras25 wrote:

my bad, by fadding inish.wav at 01:21:179 (81179|0,81479|0,81779|0,82079|3) - I mean HiImFinish.wav
I understood, I mean there doesn't need to add finish
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