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2016-12-22 19:12 wajinshu: sergio!
2016-12-22 19:12 wajinshu: can you help?
2016-12-22 19:13 MrSergio: that double pm
2016-12-22 19:13 wajinshu: xd
2016-12-22 19:13 wajinshu: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1054503 Izumi Akazawa (CV. Madoka Yonezawa) - Responsibility Response [Waji's Extra]]
2016-12-22 19:13 wajinshu: about SV
2016-12-22 19:13 wajinshu: 00:33:460 (1) - from this
2016-12-22 19:13 wajinshu: section
2016-12-22 19:14 wajinshu: what can you recommend me to use
2016-12-22 19:14 MrSergio: well, the song there calms down quite a lot in comparison with the previous section, so using a slower SV would make a better rendering of the song
2016-12-22 19:14 wajinshu: i know...
2016-12-22 19:14 MrSergio: it was x1 before that part and it is now x0.85
2016-12-22 19:15 MrSergio: so umh... not so noticeable imo
2016-12-22 19:15 wajinshu: wait
2016-12-22 19:15 wajinshu: what
2016-12-22 19:15 wajinshu: a
2016-12-22 19:15 wajinshu: wait
2016-12-22 19:15 wajinshu: hmm
2016-12-22 19:15 wajinshu: 0,65х enough?
2016-12-22 19:15 MrSergio: let's say that it's also a bit AR's fault here, making it look faster than it is
2016-12-22 19:16 MrSergio: yeah, could work
2016-12-22 19:16 wajinshu: okay, and i put 01:01:232 - triplet here
2016-12-22 19:16 wajinshu: xdd
2016-12-22 19:16 wajinshu: thanks!
2016-12-22 19:17 MrSergio: I'd actually avoid the triplet lol
2016-12-22 19:17 MrSergio: but well, consistency I guess...
2016-12-22 19:18 MrSergio: the main focus of 01:00:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part are finishers, and as such I would expect emphasis on them accordingly
2016-12-22 19:18 MrSergio: if you place a triplet it kinda makes all that vain imo
2016-12-22 19:18 MrSergio: taking that ^ as reference, 00:56:034 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - this whole thing should be 1 combo alone and without the triplet
2016-12-22 19:19 MrSergio: 01:15:935 (1,2) - a ctrl + g would really make a good flow here
2016-12-22 19:19 wajinshu: o
2016-12-22 19:19 wajinshu: really
2016-12-22 19:19 wajinshu: right
2016-12-22 19:19 wajinshu: fixed
2016-12-22 19:19 wajinshu: :3
2016-12-22 19:20 MrSergio: 00:00:193 (1,2,3) - if I take this as reference and then check 00:02:569 (1) - this one, it feels a bit strange you didn't map the high pitch piano and instead mapped the grave piano
2016-12-22 19:21 MrSergio: basically, 00:02:569 (1) - for consistency, it should be circles
2016-12-22 19:21 MrSergio: or even a 1/2 repeat slider
2016-12-22 19:21 MrSergio: or something that uses all 3 beats and not just one
2016-12-22 19:22 wajinshu: i put circes here
2016-12-22 19:22 MrSergio: 00:27:519 (1,2,3) - small details, but there aren't even equally distant if you check lol
2016-12-22 19:22 they *
2016-12-22 19:23 MrSergio: 00:28:113 (3) - x88 y96
2016-12-22 19:23 MrSergio: and adjust 4 accordingly maybe
2016-12-22 19:23 wajinshu: okay
2016-12-22 19:25 MrSergio: 00:45:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - well, flow-wise, this is fine... I guess... If I look at it rhythm-wise I see that emphasis is placed on the wrong beats
2016-12-22 19:26 MrSergio: 00:45:341 (1,3,5,7) - these are the strong beats, hence they should have a bigger jump than the the previous object
2016-12-22 19:26 MrSergio: 00:45:490 (2) - yet this has a big jump on it (check top right corner of the screen for values)
2016-12-22 19:33 wajinshu: aaaaaaa
2016-12-22 19:33 wajinshu: my internet
2016-12-22 19:33 wajinshu: rip
2016-12-22 19:33 wajinshu: qwq
2016-12-22 19:33 wajinshu: sorry ><
2016-12-22 19:33 MrSergio: http://mrsergio.s-ul.eu/FgwH4hGG.png
2016-12-22 19:34 wajinshu: thanks :d
2016-12-22 19:34 wajinshu: http://puu.sh/sXNHo/eb4f6bb708.png bad flow?
2016-12-22 19:38 MrSergio: umh, where is that?
2016-12-22 19:38 wajinshu: 00:02:569 (1) -
2016-12-22 19:39 wajinshu: there must be consistency
2016-12-22 19:39 wajinshu: with
2016-12-22 19:39 wajinshu: 00:00:193 (1,2,3) -
2016-12-22 19:39 wajinshu: so
2016-12-22 19:39 wajinshu: i try
2016-12-22 19:41 MrSergio: umh... let's say yes...
2016-12-22 19:41 MrSergio: although it's not structurally solid (but I guess that's not really something you considered in the whole map so let's leave it at that)
2016-12-22 19:41 wajinshu: well, okay
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