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Heyo! Mod from M4M!

The Hitsounds in the silent parts are way too loud, please make green lines with volume adjusted to fit the volume of the song.

Before i nitpick further, please decide what you want to map to, and what you dont want to map to in your streams.
Your map here is very inconsistent with its hitsounding,

00:40:955 (165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229) - this is a massive stream focusing its k's and sometimes even kk's on an even spread pattern on the hihat.
00:44:105 - what happens from here on out is inexplainable for me, since i dont know that there was a hi hat on 00:44:255 - , because there simply is none.
Please rectify these inconsistent streams, to which i will give a list of the streams that need fixing.

The number of small mistakes in meta are just way too high for me to list up...

So heres again generally some advice.
02:30:155 - to 03:14:555 -
It seems in this part your mapping style is not uniform and doesnt make sense at most parts
02:31:355 - here it seems the k placement is almost irrelevant, and i would suggest you tune the k's to the instruments in the background, as seen in most other dragonforce maps (yes even in the streams)

03:30:155 (100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) - why are these finishers for no appearant reason? Please stay consistent with your mapping...

04:10:955 - to 04:19:355 -
Please emphasize all notes equally, and not leave out notes such as 04:15:455 (18) - and other...

05:05:237 (412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426) - That finisher spam is just way too out of place and even the sharp pitch of the guitar could justify that, please do something else with them, its ok on single notes like 05:09:587 (443) - but dont spam them...

06:14:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - This stream again is very inconsistent about where you put your kk's in the stream, it seems almost random, please develop a structure for that!

06:47:537 (359) - unfinish? I cant hear anything special about that note.

I sadly didnt point out all the issues because i would kill me doing that, please improve the maps structure, which is important in songs especially for dragonforce (see all ranked dragonforce maps, they have lots of good structure).

Good luck Ranking this!
posted

Nepuri wrote:

Heyo! Mod from M4M!

The Hitsounds in the silent parts are way too loud, please make green lines with volume adjusted to fit the volume of the song.

Before i nitpick further, please decide what you want to map to, and what you dont want to map to in your streams.
Your map here is very inconsistent with its hitsounding,

00:40:955 (165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229) - this is a massive stream focusing its k's and sometimes even kk's on an even spread pattern on the hihat.i dont want this part is uniform

00:44:105 - what happens from here on out is inexplainable for me, since i dont know that there was a hi hat on 00:44:255 - , because there simply is none.
Please rectify these inconsistent streams, to which i will give a list of the streams that need fixing.
The number of small mistakes in meta are just way too high for me to list up...

So heres again generally some advice.
02:30:155 - to 03:14:555 -
It seems in this part your mapping style is not uniform and doesnt make sense at most partsnope
02:31:355 - here it seems the k placement is almost irrelevant, and i would suggest you tune the k's to the instruments in the background, as seen in most other dragonforce maps (yes even in the streams)i dont want to this part is uniform

03:30:155 (100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) - why are these finishers for no appearant reason? Please stay consistent with your mapping...done

04:10:955 - to 04:19:355 -
Please emphasize all notes equally, and not leave out notes such as 04:15:455 (18) - and other...yeah,you're right

05:05:237 (412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426) - That finisher spam is just way too out of place and even the sharp pitch of the guitar could justify that, please do something else with them, its ok on single notes like 05:09:587 (443) - but dont spam them...yeah,i know this part is bad.fixed

06:14:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - This stream again is very inconsistent about where you put your kk's in the stream, it seems almost random, please develop a structure for that!

06:47:537 (359) - unfinish? I cant hear anything special about that note.you're right

I sadly didnt point out all the issues because i would kill me doing that, please improve the maps structure, which is important in songs especially for dragonforce (see all ranked dragonforce maps, they have lots of good structure).

Good luck Ranking this!
Thanks a lot :)
posted
hi :) m4m

I think that is better tailored to voice(Except where the drum is noticeable)

・change to HP=4?
・00:39:605 - change to d
・00:41:855 - 00:43:055 - k? 00:44:255 pattern
・01:02:255 (405,406,407) - Ctrl+G and 01:02:555 (408,409,410) - change to k d k (1/2)
・01:03:530 - move to 01:03:380 and 01:03:305 - d
・01:04:280 - add k
・01:04:580 - 01:04:730 - delete and 01:04:880 - add k
・01:09:005 (470,471,472) - change to ddk (1/4)
・01:09:380 - move to 01:09:680 and 01:09:755 - change to k
・01:10:655 - change to k
・01:11:855 (499,500,501) - Ctrl+G
・01:12:155 (502,503,504) - change to k d k (1/2)
・01:12:980 - add k
・01:13:355 - delete finish?
・01:13:880 - add k
・01:14:180 - 01:14:330 - delete
・01:14:480 - add k
・01:20:780 - change to k
・01:22:730 (619,620) - Ctrl+G
・01:25:955 - change to k
・01:37:355 (771,772,773) - Ctrl+G and 01:37:655 - change to k
・01:50:555 (880,881,882,883,884) - Ctrl+G
・01:51:980 - add k
・01:54:455 - change to d 01:49:655 pattern
・01:55:655 (928,929) - change to d and 01:55:580 - add k
・01:56:405 - change to d 01:51:605 pattern
・02:07:130 (1052,1053) - Ctrl+G
・02:20:105 - change to k , 02:20:180 - add d and 02:20:330 - change to d
・02:22:505 - change to d and 02:22:580 - add k
・02:24:980 - add d
・02:32:105 - change to k
・02:33:380 - add d
・02:34:880 - add k
・02:40:580 - change to d
・02:40:955 - change to k and 02:41:105 - change to d
・02:41:255 - change to k and 02:41:480 - change to d
・02:42:305 - change to d and 02:42:605 - change to k
・02:43:355 - change to k and 02:43:430 - change to k
・02:44:405 - change to d and 02:44:555 - change to k
・02:46:055 - change to k
・02:47:180 - add k
・03:13:655 - change to k
・03:19:355 - change to d
・03:20:555 (11,12) - Ctrl+G
・03:24:305 - change to d and 03:24:605 - change to d
・03:25:655 (58,59) - change to d
・03:26:405 - change to d
・03:37:130 (181,182) - Ctrl+G
・03:57:080 - add d
・04:26:202 ~ 04:26:202 - You'll be able to fit more sound
 ・04:26:466 - 04:26:907 (74,75) - 04:27:613 (82,83) - change to k
 ・04:27:790 (84,85) - Ctrl+G
 ・04:28:760 - 04:28:937 - change to k
 ・04:28:937 (97) - change to d
 ・04:32:113 - 04:32:555 (123,124) - 04:33:349 - 04:33:525 - 04:34:319 - change to k
 ・04:34:937 - 04:35:378 - change to k
 ・04:35:643 - change to d
 ・04:36:084 - 04:36:437 - 04:37:143 - change to k
 ・04:37:407 - add k
 ・04:38:907 - 04:40:319 - change to k
 ・04:43:584 - 04:44:466 - 04:44:819 - change to k
 ・04:49:055 - change to k
 ・04:51:966 - 04:52:055 - change to k
 ・04:52:143 - change to d
 ・04:52:231 - change to k
・05:02:462 - change to k
・05:08:612 - change to d and change to k
・05:10:112 - change to k and 05:10:712 - change to k
・05:11:612 - add d
・05:11:912 - 05:12:062 - add k
・05:12:212 - add d
・05:14:612 - change to k and 05:14:687 - change to d
・05:15:212 - add d and 05:15:512 - change to k
・05:18:587 - change to k
・05:21:437 ~ 05:21:887 - change to slider? 05:16:637 pattern
・05:22:037 ~ 05:36:437 - You'll be able to fit more sound
 ・05:22:037 - change to d
 ・05:22:187 - 05:22:412 - change to k
 ・05:23:012 - change to d
 ・05:23:087 - 05:23:162 - change to k
 ・05:23:237 - 05:23:312 - change to d
 ・05:23:462 - 05:23:612 - 05:24:212 - 05:24:587 - 05:24:662 - change to k
 ・05:24:737 - change to d
 ・05:24:887 - 05:25:412 - change to k
 ・05:27:587 - 05:27:962 - 05:29:162 - 05:29:987 - 05:30:362 - 05:32:387 - change to k
 ・05:33:887 - change to d and 05:33:962 - change to k
 ・05:34:787 - 05:35:162 - 05:36:287 - change to k
・05:37:862 - 05:38:087 - change to k and 05:37:937 - 05:38:012 - change to d
・05:42:962 - delete and 05:43:037 - change to d
・05:47:162 - 05:49:562 - change to k
・05:50:687 - change to d and 05:50:762 - change to k
・05:51:962 - change to k
・06:04:187 - 06:05:387 - 06:06:587 - change to k
・06:06:587 - 06:08:912 - change to d and 06:08:987 - change to d
・06:09:587 - 06:10:187 - 06:10:787 - change to k
・06:13:112 - change to d and 06:13:187 - change to k
・06:15:287 - change to k
・06:16:412 - change to d and 06:16:487 - change to k
・06:17:312 - 06:17:912 - 06:17:687 - change to k and 06:17:612 - 06:18:212 - change to d
・06:21:287 - 06:22:112 - 06:22:712 - change to k
・06:28:337 - change to k
・06:32:087 - 06:32:837 - change to k
・06:35:987 - 06:36:287 - change to d and 06:36:062 - add k
・06:52:037 - change to k
・06:54:437 - change to k and 06:54:587 - change to d
・06:55:862 - add k
・06:56:987 - change to k
・06:58:187 - 06:58:487 - change to d
・07:15:812 - change to k and 07:15:887 - change to d
・07:42:437 - timing point is overlapping
・07:48:951 - spiner end point move to 07:48:399 ?


Please call me if you do not understand
good lack ! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
posted
M4M mod


Tatsujin


00:21:755 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - wait... this is copy paste right??? :Pdon't be lazy :^)

00:42:905 (191,192,193,194,195,196,197) - maybe kkdkddk here

00:50:030 (272) - i think d is better here

00:52:355 (302) - ^

01:13:055 (511,512,513,514) - i can't hear 1/3 sound here... maybe change this to ddddd (1/4)?

01:23:166 - maybe kkddk here

01:27:680 (672,673) - Ctrl+G

01:53:930 (911,912) - change to dd

02:10:955 (1074,1093) - i can't hear sound here, delete?

02:52:655 (221,222,223,224,225) - maybe kkkkd?

03:40:955 (206,225) - same as 02:10:955 (1074,1093)

03:50:180 03:52:580 and 03:54:980 - maybe add a note....

04:50:907 (297) - i think you don't need a slider here, change this by d or k

06:00:212 (208,209) - Ctrl+G?

06:42:437 (308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324) - maybe kkkkddkdkkkkddddk

07:40:937 (946,947,948,949) - Ctrl+G

07:42:437 - maybe a note here, also move spinner to 07:42:522

Sorry for short mod because i'm lazy xD
Anyway gl with rank
posted

Ppus wrote:

M4M mod


Tatsujin


00:21:755 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - wait... this is copy paste right??? :Pdon't be lazy :^) copypasted is fine if the sound is "same"/"Similar"

00:42:905 (191,192,193,194,195,196,197) - maybe kkdkddk here done

00:50:030 (272) - i think d is better here done

00:52:355 (302) - ^ nope

01:13:055 (511,512,513,514) - i can't hear 1/3 sound here... maybe change this to ddddd (1/4)? oh sorry,you're right.done,but i think it should be ddddk
01:23:166 - maybe kkddk here done

01:27:680 (672,673) - Ctrl+Gyeah

01:53:930 (911,912) - change to dd done

02:10:955 (1074,1093) - i can't hear sound here, delete? oh sorry,i forgot this.done

02:52:655 (221,222,223,224,225) - maybe kkkkd? done

03:40:955 (206,225) - same as 02:10:955 (1074,1093) i added d note

03:50:180 03:52:580 and 03:54:980 - maybe add a note.... done
04:50:907 (297) - i think you don't need a slider here, change this by d or k nope

06:00:212 (208,209) - Ctrl+G? done

06:42:437 (308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324) - maybe kkkkddkdkkkkddddk done

07:40:937 (946,947,948,949) - Ctrl+G done

07:42:437 - maybe a note here, also move spinner to 07:42:522 nope.if i do this,i have to add finisher note.and adding finisher after stream is bad

Sorry for short mod because i'm lazy xD
Anyway gl with rank
Thanks a lot :)
posted
00:01:055 (6) - k
00:02:255 (6) - k
00:07:055 (6) - k
00:25:205 (52) - k
00:26:405 - add k
00:44:555 (214) - k
00:46:130 - add d
00:46:280 (235) - delete
00:48:530 - add d
00:48:680 (259) - delete
00:58:205 (372) - k
00:58:805 (379) - delete
01:07:355 (454) - k
01:07:505 (455) - d
01:07:580 - add d
01:20:855 (595) - k
01:21:830 (608,609) - ctrl g
01:25:505 (646,647) - dd
01:25:655 (648) - k
01:25:805 (650) - d
01:25:955 (652) - k
01:26:105 (654,655) - dd
01:26:255 (656) - k
01:26:555 (660,661) - kk
01:26:705 (662,663) - dd
01:26:855 (664) - d
01:27:680 (675,676) - ctrl g
02:31:355 (1,2) - ctrl g
02:31:805 (5) - k
02:31:955 (7) - d
02:34:655 (33) - k
02:34:955 (35) - k
02:35:105 (37) - d
02:35:255 (39) - k
02:36:155 (47) - k
02:47:405 (160) - k
02:48:980 - add d
03:00:155 (307) - d
03:28:055 (80) - k
01:30:905 (708,709,710,711,712) - ddkdk
01:31:505 (715) - d
01:31:655 (717) - k
01:31:955 (721) - d
01:33:380 - add d
01:37:355 (774) - k
01:37:505 (776) - d
01:37:655 (778) - k
01:50:555 (883) - k
01:51:005 (886) - k
01:51:305 (888) - d
01:53:255 (906) - k
01:58:055 (952) - k
01:59:255 (966,967,968) - kkk
02:08:930 (1060,1061) - ctrl g
03:50:330 (278) - d
03:55:130 (322) - d
06:05:387 (267) - k
06:06:587 (283) - k

Iyi şanslar rank için idk if i'm right lol
posted

Oui wrote:

00:01:055 (6) - k
00:02:255 (6) - k
00:07:055 (6) - k
00:25:205 (52) - k
00:26:405 - add k
00:44:555 (214) - k
00:46:130 - add d
00:46:280 (235) - delete
00:48:530 - add d
00:48:680 (259) - delete
00:58:205 (372) - k
00:58:805 (379) - delete
01:07:355 (454) - k
01:07:505 (455) - d
01:07:580 - add d
01:20:855 (595) - k
01:21:830 (608,609) - ctrl g
01:25:505 (646,647) - dd
01:25:655 (648) - k
01:25:805 (650) - d
01:25:955 (652) - k
01:26:105 (654,655) - dd
01:26:255 (656) - k
01:26:555 (660,661) - kk
01:26:705 (662,663) - dd
01:26:855 (664) - d
01:27:680 (675,676) - ctrl g
02:31:355 (1,2) - ctrl g
02:31:805 (5) - k
02:31:955 (7) - d
02:34:655 (33) - k
02:34:955 (35) - k
02:35:105 (37) - d
02:35:255 (39) - k
02:36:155 (47) - k
02:47:405 (160) - k
02:48:980 - add d
03:00:155 (307) - d
03:28:055 (80) - k
01:30:905 (708,709,710,711,712) - ddkdk
01:31:505 (715) - d
01:31:655 (717) - k
01:31:955 (721) - d
01:33:380 - add d
01:37:355 (774) - k
01:37:505 (776) - d
01:37:655 (778) - k
01:50:555 (883) - k
01:51:005 (886) - k
01:51:305 (888) - d
01:53:255 (906) - k
01:58:055 (952) - k
01:59:255 (966,967,968) - kkk
02:08:930 (1060,1061) - ctrl g
03:50:330 (278) - d
03:55:130 (322) - d
06:05:387 (267) - k
06:06:587 (283) - k

Iyi şanslar rank için idk if i'm right lol
thanks :D
posted

yassu- wrote:

hi :) m4m

I think that is better tailored to voice(Except where the drum is noticeable)

・change to HP=4?
・00:39:605 - change to d
・00:41:855 - 00:43:055 - k? 00:44:255 pattern
・01:02:255 (405,406,407) - Ctrl+G and 01:02:555 (408,409,410) - change to k d k (1/2)
・01:03:530 - move to 01:03:380 and 01:03:305 - d
・01:04:280 - add k
・01:04:580 - 01:04:730 - delete and 01:04:880 - add k
・01:09:005 (470,471,472) - change to ddk (1/4)
・01:09:380 - move to 01:09:680 and 01:09:755 - change to k
・01:10:655 - change to k
・01:11:855 (499,500,501) - Ctrl+G
・01:12:155 (502,503,504) - change to k d k (1/2)
・01:12:980 - add k
・01:13:355 - delete finish?
・01:13:880 - add k
・01:14:180 - 01:14:330 - delete
・01:14:480 - add k
・01:20:780 - change to k
・01:22:730 (619,620) - Ctrl+G
・01:25:955 - change to k
・01:37:355 (771,772,773) - Ctrl+G and 01:37:655 - change to k
・01:50:555 (880,881,882,883,884) - Ctrl+G
・01:51:980 - add k
・01:54:455 - change to d 01:49:655 pattern
・01:55:655 (928,929) - change to d and 01:55:580 - add k
・01:56:405 - change to d 01:51:605 pattern
・02:07:130 (1052,1053) - Ctrl+G
・02:20:105 - change to k , 02:20:180 - add d and 02:20:330 - change to d
・02:22:505 - change to d and 02:22:580 - add k
・02:24:980 - add d
・02:32:105 - change to k
・02:33:380 - add d
・02:34:880 - add k
・02:40:580 - change to d
・02:40:955 - change to k and 02:41:105 - change to d
・02:41:255 - change to k and 02:41:480 - change to d
・02:42:305 - change to d and 02:42:605 - change to k
・02:43:355 - change to k and 02:43:430 - change to k
・02:44:405 - change to d and 02:44:555 - change to k
・02:46:055 - change to k
・02:47:180 - add k
・03:13:655 - change to k
・03:19:355 - change to d
・03:20:555 (11,12) - Ctrl+G
・03:24:305 - change to d and 03:24:605 - change to d
・03:25:655 (58,59) - change to d
・03:26:405 - change to d
・03:37:130 (181,182) - Ctrl+G
・03:57:080 - add d
・04:26:202 ~ 04:26:202 - You'll be able to fit more sound
 ・04:26:466 - 04:26:907 (74,75) - 04:27:613 (82,83) - change to k
 ・04:27:790 (84,85) - Ctrl+G
 ・04:28:760 - 04:28:937 - change to k
 ・04:28:937 (97) - change to d
 ・04:32:113 - 04:32:555 (123,124) - 04:33:349 - 04:33:525 - 04:34:319 - change to k
 ・04:34:937 - 04:35:378 - change to k
 ・04:35:643 - change to d
 ・04:36:084 - 04:36:437 - 04:37:143 - change to k
 ・04:37:407 - add k
 ・04:38:907 - 04:40:319 - change to k
 ・04:43:584 - 04:44:466 - 04:44:819 - change to k
 ・04:49:055 - change to k
 ・04:51:966 - 04:52:055 - change to k
 ・04:52:143 - change to d
 ・04:52:231 - change to k
・05:02:462 - change to k
・05:08:612 - change to d and change to k
・05:10:112 - change to k and 05:10:712 - change to k
・05:11:612 - add d
・05:11:912 - 05:12:062 - add k
・05:12:212 - add d
・05:14:612 - change to k and 05:14:687 - change to d
・05:15:212 - add d and 05:15:512 - change to k
・05:18:587 - change to k
・05:21:437 ~ 05:21:887 - change to slider? 05:16:637 pattern
・05:22:037 ~ 05:36:437 - You'll be able to fit more sound
 ・05:22:037 - change to d
 ・05:22:187 - 05:22:412 - change to k
 ・05:23:012 - change to d
 ・05:23:087 - 05:23:162 - change to k
 ・05:23:237 - 05:23:312 - change to d
 ・05:23:462 - 05:23:612 - 05:24:212 - 05:24:587 - 05:24:662 - change to k
 ・05:24:737 - change to d
 ・05:24:887 - 05:25:412 - change to k
 ・05:27:587 - 05:27:962 - 05:29:162 - 05:29:987 - 05:30:362 - 05:32:387 - change to k
 ・05:33:887 - change to d and 05:33:962 - change to k
 ・05:34:787 - 05:35:162 - 05:36:287 - change to k
・05:37:862 - 05:38:087 - change to k and 05:37:937 - 05:38:012 - change to d
・05:42:962 - delete and 05:43:037 - change to d
・05:47:162 - 05:49:562 - change to k
・05:50:687 - change to d and 05:50:762 - change to k
・05:51:962 - change to k
・06:04:187 - 06:05:387 - 06:06:587 - change to k
・06:06:587 - 06:08:912 - change to d and 06:08:987 - change to d
・06:09:587 - 06:10:187 - 06:10:787 - change to k
・06:13:112 - change to d and 06:13:187 - change to k
・06:15:287 - change to k
・06:16:412 - change to d and 06:16:487 - change to k
・06:17:312 - 06:17:912 - 06:17:687 - change to k and 06:17:612 - 06:18:212 - change to d
・06:21:287 - 06:22:112 - 06:22:712 - change to k
・06:28:337 - change to k
・06:32:087 - 06:32:837 - change to k
・06:35:987 - 06:36:287 - change to d and 06:36:062 - add k
・06:52:037 - change to k
・06:54:437 - change to k and 06:54:587 - change to d
・06:55:862 - add k
・06:56:987 - change to k
・06:58:187 - 06:58:487 - change to d
・07:15:812 - change to k and 07:15:887 - change to d
・07:42:437 - timing point is overlapping
・07:48:951 - spiner end point move to 07:48:399 ?


Please call me if you do not understand
good lack ! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
Thanks :)
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Bazı yerlerde birkaç eksik fark ettim, onları buraya yazayım.

01:06:155 (444) - buraya bir finisher gider, d kalsın.
01:15:755 (540) - finisher
02:00:155 (964) - finisher
02:36:155 (48) - finisher, ama d yap.
02:45:755 (147) - finisher, ama d yap.
03:30:155 (103) - finisher
04:13:205 - 04:15:605 - 04:18:005 - bu kısımlarda bateride 1/6'lık kısımlar var. Sadece finisher da kalabilir, ama 1/6 daha güzel duyulabilir.
04:54:437 (32) - finisher, ama k yap.
04:55:637 (34) - finisher, ama d yap.
05:02:837 - eğer amacın guitar soloyu yazmaksa, burası tamamen 1/4 stream. Her boşluğa bir adet d ekle 05:05:087 - buraya kadar.
05:24:737 (82,83,84,85) - kdkd
05:42:587 (298) - d
06:08:537 (301) - bu nota diğer finishere göre daha kalın ama k yapman daha iyi olabilir çünkü hala ince
06:34:037 (225) - finisher, ayrıca oradaki red timing point i yeşil yapabilirsin
06:59:237 (477) - finisher, ama d yap.
06:59:387 (478) - k
07:04:037 (523) - finisher

Benim fark ettiklerim bu kadar, kolay gelsin :D
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frukoyurdakul wrote:

Bazı yerlerde birkaç eksik fark ettim, onları buraya yazayım.

01:06:155 (444) - buraya bir finisher gider, d kalsın.
01:15:755 (540) - finisher
02:00:155 (964) - finisher
02:36:155 (48) - finisher, ama d yap.
02:45:755 (147) - finisher, ama d yap.
03:30:155 (103) - finisher
04:13:205 - 04:15:605 - 04:18:005 - bu kısımlarda bateride 1/6'lık kısımlar var. Sadece finisher da kalabilir, ama 1/6 daha güzel duyulabilir. orasını ben de düşündüm,hatta ilk öyleydi ama 1/6 streamin sonunda bir finisherın yakışacağını sanmıyorum
04:54:437 (32) - finisher, ama k yap.
04:55:637 (34) - finisher, ama d yap.
05:02:837 - eğer amacın guitar soloyu yazmaksa, burası tamamen 1/4 stream. Her boşluğa bir adet d ekle 05:05:087 - buraya kadar.
05:24:737 (82,83,84,85) - kdkd
05:42:587 (298) - d
06:08:537 (301) - bu nota diğer finishere göre daha kalın ama k yapman daha iyi olabilir çünkü hala ince
06:34:037 (225) - finisher, ayrıca oradaki red timing point i yeşil yapabilirsin
06:59:237 (477) - finisher, ama d yap.
06:59:387 (478) - k
07:04:037 (523) - finisher

Benim fark ettiklerim bu kadar, kolay gelsin :D
1/6 hakkında söylediklerin yanlış finisherlar mantıklı geldi :D
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Valla başlarda çok keyifliydi, bazı kısımlarda mavi finishlerin eksikliği çoktu. Özellikle şu tarz boşluklar: 02:10:955 - (İlk kiai sonrası olmasa bile ikinci kiai sonrasında olmalıydı)

Lakin sonlara doğru şu "oooo" kısımlarında gereksiz stream var. Yani izlerken sıkıldım :/ Deathstream yapacağım diye çok uğraşmışsın, gitar soloların heps taikoda stream olmak zorunda değildir her zaman. Yani kimse 2 dakika boyunca aralıksız deathstream yapmak istemez özellikle taikoda. Arada nefes aldırman gerek, farklı ritimler olmalı. Deathstreamler bir yerden sonra sadece kkddkkddkkddkkdd olarak gidiyor. Bu şekilde olacaksa araya başka patternler koyman daha mantıklı. Yine de bilemiyorum şimdiki oyuncular böyle şeyleri oynamaktan keyif alıyorsa sıkıntı yok, benim kişisel zevkim.

Onun haricinde eline emeğine sağlık çok güzel olmuş yolun açık olsun ^^
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UnderminE wrote:

Valla başlarda çok keyifliydi, bazı kısımlarda mavi finishlerin eksikliği çoktu. Özellikle şu tarz boşluklar: 02:10:955 - (İlk kiai sonrası olmasa bile ikinci kiai sonrasında olmalıydı)

Lakin sonlara doğru şu "oooo" kısımlarında gereksiz stream var. Yani izlerken sıkıldım :/ Deathstream yapacağım diye çok uğraşmışsın, gitar soloların heps taikoda stream olmak zorunda değildir her zaman. Yani kimse 2 dakika boyunca aralıksız deathstream yapmak istemez özellikle taikoda. Arada nefes aldırman gerek, farklı ritimler olmalı. Deathstreamler bir yerden sonra sadece kkddkkddkkddkkdd olarak gidiyor. Bu şekilde olacaksa araya başka patternler koyman daha mantıklı. Yine de bilemiyorum şimdiki oyuncular böyle şeyleri oynamaktan keyif alıyorsa sıkıntı yok, benim kişisel zevkim.

Onun haricinde eline emeğine sağlık çok güzel olmuş yolun açık olsun ^^
Çok teşekkür ederim :D
Not:"ooooo" denilen kısımda deathstream olmasının nedenini şöyle açıklayayım:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/114142 bu mapin de "oooo" diye tabir ettiğin kısmında deathstream var ve mapperlar dragonforce maplerinde bu tip kısımları(veya bateri sesinin baskın olduğu yerleri) genelde bateriye göre maplerler :D kkddkkdd.. şeklinde giden streamleri düzeltmeye çalışıyorum,gelecek modlara bağlı :D
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your req.

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note


[ General]


  • 00:00:155 - 00:19:355 - why voloume is 100%? This part is calm part.so I think 65% is good.

    00:19:355 - Kiai Time vol is 80%.but,This part is 100%.hmm...I prefer this part vol is 85% & Kiai Time is 100%.

    overlapping ;e; http://puu.sh/s6V3D/8b17d881b2.png & You can reference http://osu.ppy.sh/s/348808 (Ranked ver)

    no need "marathon" tag.



[ Inner Oni]


  • 07:48:962 - Spinner End is 07:49:037 - here.



If you got more mod.call me.If have time,I'll second mod :)
posted

Charlotte wrote:

your req.

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note


[ General]


  • 00:00:155 - 00:19:355 - why voloume is 100%? This part is calm part.so I think 65% is good.

    00:19:355 - Kiai Time vol is 80%.but,This part is 100%.hmm...I prefer this part vol is 85% & Kiai Time is 100%.

    overlapping ;e; http://puu.sh/s6V3D/8b17d881b2.png & You can reference http://osu.ppy.sh/s/348808 (Ranked ver)

    no need "marathon" tag.



[ Inner Oni]


  • 07:48:962 - Spinner End is 07:49:037 - here.



If you got more mod.call me.If have time,I'll second mod :)
Oh I forgot them.Accepted everything.Thanks for reminding :)
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To reinagurate (did i write that right) the queue revived, ill mod this 7 min map <3
also insert obligatory meme of dragonforce and the colorchanging backgrounds

00:11:105 (2) - make k?
00:13:355 (1) - make d?
00:15:905 (2) - make k?
00:18:155 (1) - make d?
00:38:555 - make this stream kdkkdkkkddddkdk to add some challenge >:3
00:53:180 (314) - make it k?
00:57:755 - kkddddkkddddk to follow better the guitar and drums
00:58:880 (380) - make d?
00:59:405 (387) - ^
00:59:555 (389,390) - Ctrl+G
01:09:005 (471,472) - Ctrl+G
01:10:655 (489,490) - Ctrl+G
01:11:480 (497) - make k?
01:38:555 - make this stream kkkkddkkkkddkdddk to follow the drums better i guess.
01:44:105 - 01:44:405 - add a d on both
02:34:805 - Make this stream start at 02:34:955 - , the note that gets stacked umm, move it where the stream used to start
02:49:580 (185) - make it a d
03:14:105 - add a d
03:45:605 (243) - make it a D
03:52:805 (301) - ^
04:50:907 (1) - move spinner to 04:50:996 - (but spinner end should be still at the same place (04:51:437 - ))
06:02:837 - to 06:05:162 - Something feels off here, can you remap this section? ;A;
06:07:562 (296) - make k?
06:14:837 - put a kiai start here and kiai end here 06:24:137 -
06:47:987 - & 06:48:287 - pls add d on both
07:29:837 (825,826) - make k
07:29:987 (827) - make d
07:30:137 (829,831) - Ctrl+G
07:30:437 (833,834) - make them into k
07:30:887 (839) - make d

Hope this mod helps ;w;
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Vulkin wrote:

To reinagurate (did i write that right) the queue revived, ill mod this 7 min map <3
also insert obligatory meme of dragonforce and the colorchanging backgrounds

00:11:105 (2) - make k?
00:13:355 (1) - make d?
00:15:905 (2) - make k?
00:18:155 (1) - make d?
00:38:555 - make this stream kdkkdkkkddddkdk to add some challenge >:3
00:53:180 (314) - make it k?
00:57:755 - kkddddkkddddk to follow better the guitar and drums
00:58:880 (380) - make d?
00:59:405 (387) - ^
00:59:555 (389,390) - Ctrl+G
01:09:005 (471,472) - Ctrl+G
01:10:655 (489,490) - Ctrl+G
01:11:480 (497) - make k?
01:38:555 - make this stream kkkkddkkkkddkdddk to follow the drums better i guess.
01:44:105 - 01:44:405 - add a d on both
02:34:805 - Make this stream start at 02:34:955 - , the note that gets stacked umm, move it where the stream used to start
02:49:580 (185) - make it a d
03:14:105 - add a d
03:45:605 (243) - make it a D
03:52:805 (301) - ^
04:50:907 (1) - move spinner to 04:50:996 - (but spinner end should be still at the same place (04:51:437 - ))
06:02:837 - to 06:05:162 - Something feels off here, can you remap this section? ;A;
06:07:562 (296) - make k?
06:14:837 - put a kiai start here and kiai end here 06:24:137 -
06:47:987 - & 06:48:287 - pls add d on both
07:29:837 (825,826) - make k
07:29:987 (827) - make d
07:30:137 (829,831) - Ctrl+G
07:30:437 (833,834) - make them into k
07:30:887 (839) - make d

Hope this mod helps ;w;
WOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
(thanks xd)
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no kd

* 00:45:005 - change to d, then 00:45:230 (222) - this k, more easier
* 00:54:605 (333) - and 00:54:830 (336) - like above
* 01:13:055 (511,512,513,514,515) - is not 1/4, delete these. change it to dddk 1/3
* 05:08:237 (151,152,153,154,155,156) - ctrl g, 05:08:237 (151,152,153) - had similar sound like previous kkd. then 05:08:537 - here is dkd
* 05:09:737 (168,169) - change these to k, dont hear had alter drum sound
* 05:12:437 - oh.. I just realised from here, I recommend you do this.. puu.sh/s96Og/d85d63089b.jpg, then from 05:13:637 - here kkddkkddkkkdkkddk. and you will see a magical, loool
* 05:15:512 - change k, dont you hear that guitar?
* 05:18:212 - ^ change this to d
* 05:24:662 - k, guitar
* 05:37:637 (247,248,249,250,251,252,253) - kddkddk, herman li is cool!
* 05:38:087 - kkd 1/4
* 05:42:587 - don ^
* 05:45:662 (28,29) - swap
* 05:57:812 - k, high guitar
* 06:04:487 (255,256) - k these, I still hear that snare drum
* 06:07:637 - from here, I recommend you do this..[2] http://puu.sh/s97kS/f320cdb130.jpg
* 07:20:837 (719,720,721) - kkd, 07:21:512 (728,729,730,731) - dddk
* 07:35:762 (894) - d
* 07:40:862 (949) - why?.................. swap with 07:41:012 (951) - this
* 07:42:062 (965) - ^ d

really fuckin... rank this, Efe!
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Hey from your modding queue, here for my M4M request.
I requested it 14 days ago, wow the delay I've been really busy ~~

• 00:00:155 to 00:19:355 - The volume on this part should be reduced, the offset sets the volume to 65% which I think is a great choice but there's a timing point overlapping it and changing the volume back to 100% so I think this should be fixed
• For this first part, I think that notes could be added in all these blank spaces : 00:00:905 ; 00:02:105 ; 00:03:305 etc.
Because there's definitely a string sound on these spots. If you decide not to fill these, you could actually add notes in those spaces in the 2nd part : from 04:01:355 to 04:10:955 to differenciate these two parts
• I would remove the finisher on that note : 02:08:555 (1047) because the sound isn't that loud and the next similar note 02:11:105 (1068) isn't a finisher
• 02:16:355 (1108,1109,1110) - The 3 guitar sounds you're mapping are at the same pitch, so change 02:16:505 (1110) to a k
• 02:26:030 - Add a k here just like 02:16:355 (1108,1109,1110) and change 02:26:105 (1188) to a k if you did previously
• 03:06:155 (354) - There's a cymbal sound and I think it should be emphasized, add a finisher on that note
• 03:46:505 (249) - Same suggestion as previously - k
• 03:56:030 - Same suggestion, add a k and change to a k
• 04:20:255 (34,35,36) - This could be a 1/4 pattern, I would suggest adding a d on both 04:20:330 and 04:20:480 because it sounds similar to 04:20:405 (36)
• 05:08:237 (151,152,153,154,155,156) - I think you should invert these two using Ctrl + g, 05:08:237 (151,152,153) sounds identical to 05:07:937 (148,149,150) so I think it should be mapped the same and the pitch actually varies on 05:08:537 (154,155,156) so it should be mapped differently
• 05:55:787 (160) - Just a little suggestion here, I would change to a k and change 05:55:937 (161) to a d, I just think it works a bit better that way
• For 06:07:637 (296,297,298,299,300,301,302) and 06:08:237 (303,304,305,306,307,308,309)
I think that 06:08:012 (301) and should be removed. The guitar sound from the previous notes are held on these spots so I think that adding some breaks emphasizes this
• 07:01:862 - There's a loud drum sound here, it's the continuation of the drums in 07:01:712 (500) for exemple so I think you should a note a d, or at least fill in the gap because I don't think that there's need of one
• 07:31:787 (850,851,852,853,854,855) - I actually think that this part would works better if you moved 07:32:162 (853) to 07:32:012
And added a note here : 07:32:312
• I checked back : Same suggestion for 07:22:187 (736,737,738,739,740,741)

I really hope that my mod helped!
Good luck for the future!
posted

Surono wrote:

no kd

* 00:45:005 - change to d, then 00:45:230 (222) - this k, more easier
* 00:54:605 (333) - and 00:54:830 (336) - like above
* 01:13:055 (511,512,513,514,515) - is not 1/4, delete these. change it to dddk 1/3
* 05:08:237 (151,152,153,154,155,156) - ctrl g, 05:08:237 (151,152,153) - had similar sound like previous kkd. then 05:08:537 - here is dkd
* 05:09:737 (168,169) - change these to k, dont hear had alter drum sound
* 05:12:437 - oh.. I just realised from here, I recommend you do this.. puu.sh/s96Og/d85d63089b.jpg, then from 05:13:637 - here kkddkkddkkkdkkddk. and you will see a magical, loool
* 05:15:512 - change k, dont you hear that guitar?
* 05:18:212 - ^ change this to d
* 05:24:662 - k, guitar
* 05:37:637 (247,248,249,250,251,252,253) - kddkddk, herman li is cool!
* 05:38:087 - kkd 1/4
* 05:42:587 - don ^
* 05:45:662 (28,29) - swap
* 05:57:812 - k, high guitar
* 06:04:487 (255,256) - k these, I still hear that snare drum
* 06:07:637 - from here, I recommend you do this..[2] http://puu.sh/s97kS/f320cdb130.jpg
* 07:20:837 (719,720,721) - kkd, 07:21:512 (728,729,730,731) - dddk
* 07:35:762 (894) - d
* 07:40:862 (949) - why?.................. swap with 07:41:012 (951) - this
* 07:42:062 (965) - ^ d

really fuckin... rank this, Efe!
posted

Kazaze wrote:

Hey from your modding queue, here for my M4M request.
I requested it 14 days ago, wow the delay I've been really busy ~~

• 00:00:155 to 00:19:355 - The volume on this part should be reduced, the offset sets the volume to 65% which I think is a great choice but there's a timing point overlapping it and changing the volume back to 100% so I think this should be fixed
• For this first part, I think that notes could be added in all these blank spaces : 00:00:905 ; 00:02:105 ; 00:03:305 etc.
Because there's definitely a string sound on these spots. If you decide not to fill these, you could actually add notes in those spaces in the 2nd part : from 04:01:355 to 04:10:955 to differenciate these two parts
• I would remove the finisher on that note : 02:08:555 (1047) because the sound isn't that loud and the next similar note 02:11:105 (1068) isn't a finisher
• 02:16:355 (1108,1109,1110) - The 3 guitar sounds you're mapping are at the same pitch, so change 02:16:505 (1110) to a k
• 02:26:030 - Add a k here just like 02:16:355 (1108,1109,1110) and change 02:26:105 (1188) to a k if you did previously
• 03:06:155 (354) - There's a cymbal sound and I think it should be emphasized, add a finisher on that note
• 03:46:505 (249) - Same suggestion as previously - k
• 03:56:030 - Same suggestion, add a k and change to a k
• 04:20:255 (34,35,36) - This could be a 1/4 pattern, I would suggest adding a d on both 04:20:330 and 04:20:480 because it sounds similar to 04:20:405 (36)
• 05:08:237 (151,152,153,154,155,156) - I think you should invert these two using Ctrl + g, 05:08:237 (151,152,153) sounds identical to 05:07:937 (148,149,150) so I think it should be mapped the same and the pitch actually varies on 05:08:537 (154,155,156) so it should be mapped differently
• 05:55:787 (160) - Just a little suggestion here, I would change to a k and change 05:55:937 (161) to a d, I just think it works a bit better that way
• For 06:07:637 (296,297,298,299,300,301,302) and 06:08:237 (303,304,305,306,307,308,309)
I think that 06:08:012 (301) and should be removed. The guitar sound from the previous notes are held on these spots so I think that adding some breaks emphasizes this
• 07:01:862 - There's a loud drum sound here, it's the continuation of the drums in 07:01:712 (500) for exemple so I think you should a note a d, or at least fill in the gap because I don't think that there's need of one
• 07:31:787 (850,851,852,853,854,855) - I actually think that this part would works better if you moved 07:32:162 (853) to 07:32:012
And added a note here : 07:32:312
• I checked back : Same suggestion for 07:22:187 (736,737,738,739,740,741)

I really hope that my mod helped!
Good luck for the future!
Sorry,I am too busy nowadays.Thanks ^^.I'll mod your map tomorrow :D
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