1. Advanced (2.88 stars, 237 notes)
2. Cool! (6.14 stars, 413 notes)
3. Easy (1.56 stars, 90 notes)
4. Hard (3.61 stars, 280 notes)
5. Light Insane (4.26 stars, 327 notes)
6. MrSergio's Insane (4.69 stars, 385 notes)
7. Normal (2.24 stars, 161 notes)
8. Voli's Extra (5.45 stars, 422 notes)

By nyu -

rip cool dad

NEW QUALITY DAD BACKGROUND!! REDOWNLOAD REQUIRED!!!!

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

TEMPORARY BG OKAY!!??!>!>!!>!!??!<!1

Anxient wrote:

make it permanent

Weriko wrote:

:P

Mod from queue :p

My dad diff

00:01:160 (1) - maybe make this an stacked stream? like this ? I know it's a really cool thing to start off like that. But actually, I prefer an easier way so a single note should suffice even without streams just for the drums on the song track. And a little consistency with the rest of the diffs, so yeah. I may keep this.

00:09:936 (6,7,8,9) - maybe align this with the slider? I already did after the time you're about to mod this xDDDDDDDDD

00:37:542 (3) - overlap It's 100% intentional. I also provided a blanket there if you hover a little bit on this part in order to show you it's on purpose.

00:37:542 (3) - Same as above 00:37:542 (3) - 00:37:542 (3) - 00:37:542 (3) - 00:52:862 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 00:52:862 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 00:52:862 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 00:52:862 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - ............... and whatever.... every overlap you see (I DONT KNOW WHY PEOPLE CARE SO MUCH ABOUT OVERLAPS :C) same reason as above, 2017 is coming m8 MOAR OVERLAPPSSSS

01:08:181 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - you can make this stream more rounded Yeah, I can do that.

01:13:685 (14,15,16) - move this a bit to the left so the stream looks nicer Okay

01:20:308 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1) - distance between slider and stream should be the same.... i think Okay

01:21:026 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1) - 01:21:026 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1) - spacing change feels weird... probly just me Oh it's just you :^)))

Hard

00:01:160 (1) - same as in My Dad diff ..... like a stacked stream Same thing too. And besides, it'll be TOO HARD ;n;

00:06:106 (6,1,2) - the change in the slider kinda breaks the flow... I was intending an overlap here ofc, it doesn't even flaw tbh. As how the cursor guidance should flow like some wave, it shouldn't look broken ;p

00:29:883 (3,4,5,6) - noooop..... monstrata blessed me these triangles, do not pester his wisdom.

00:39:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - im not sure if distance is the same between some sliders? OH MY VOLKS- gonna fix that soon loool

PLEASE HIGHER AR..... Isn't AR7 enough for Hard diffs? ;n;


and then again..... overlapssss

and well..... the map felt a bit weird.. its like the flow is weird.... not sure tho.. im not the best with that ;-;

normal

00:01:160 (1) - hehehjsjsjsjsjsj.... you know what... but maybe you can put a 1/4 slider??? What the... I've NEVER put a 1/4 repeatable slider on any normal diff unless it's low bpm. But this one, it's pretty much a 'no' because too... complex(?).

and well.... same problems as other diffs :c

SORRYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!

i think your map has some of the same issues as my maps ;-;.... weird flow and stuff..... so im sorry if this felt weird but i dont really know how to help more ;-;


and those overlaps.... i dont really care but you know.......



Good luck!!!

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Weriko wrote:

01:21:026 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1) - 01:21:026 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1) - spacing change feels weird... probly just me Oh it's just you :^)))

Yahuri wrote:

from #memehelp
ur dad is cool
i dont know him but hes cool
the COOLEST dad ever ヽ( ｡ ヮﾟ)ノ

General
-can you get a louder finish hitsound? its softer than the soft-hitclaps (its not very audible in the early parts of the song, the kiai is better tho) Okay, increased volume a bit
-soft-hitclaps are pretty overpowering in the kiai, make hitsound volume a bit softer Same here, pretty sure it'll be fine now.

Hard
-low AR -> harder to read cuz too many objects on screen, try AR 8 instead (take into account that this has a fairly high bpm as well) Doing this just for the sake of readability. Redid.
-personally i would make NC every measure instead of every 2 measures (stay away from dat 10 combo 00:58:287 (10)) An NC in two tracks doesn't seen very bad tbh, as long as the combo isn't like... REAAALLLLY long for the low HP rate ;p
00:15:840 (7,8,1) - dont like the spacing here since the (tail of 8 is closer to the tail of 7) than the (head of 8 is to slider 1) so try something more like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5929974 I kept the spacing for emphasizing the music, but I fixed the blanket on slider (1) at least xdd
00:18:713 (9,1) - blanket not look good cuz the tail of 1 gets pretty close to the body of 9, also overlap 00:17:436 (4,1) I don't see this as a blanket bad at all. At least the tail isn't overlapping slider (9)'s slider body borders and making it look awkward... Was trying to make a small jump here fyi
00:24:777 (4,5) - flow looks kinda weird imo Dx how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5929990 ngl It'd still look the same as the current one. But in case for polishing aesthetics, maybe yes I may do that lol
00:26:691 (1) - this section would work better if you just use 1/2 sliders until 00:28:606 (put circle) so that you can click on the important lyrics I did that while I was mapping this in the first place, it made the diff's SR go up because of density. So I wouldn't want it to affect the difficulty spread. I decided to redo some 1/1 sliders here instead.
00:33:074 (5,6,7) - same thing about spacing like here 00:15:840 (7,8,1) I made no mistake on indicating the music by note density and spacing being merely multiplied by 0.5x. I wouldn't reduce it just for slider tails anyway D:
00:35:628 (7,8) - flow not perfect, move 8 to around x:190, y:141 Also moved to y:135 for the perfect spacing~
00:39:777 (2,3,4) - spacing, i think its ok if you want to change DS a little bit I don't think there's a problem with the spacing here either xdd just a nazi 0.01x which doesn't affect much lmao
00:41:851 (9,1) - blanket D: I don't intend to make more blankets on this one for the sake of flow. It does improve aesthetics, but I matter structure more on this part here.
00:45:202 (4,5,6) - spacing Same here tbh
00:50:787 - could put circle here and here 00:50:947 then move the spinner back a bit (how it is now is still fine tho) I'd just like to give a few bit of space for players to prepare for spinning, even if it's a hard diff I'd still give it out. So I don't think adding a circle here is necessary just for filling out the rhythm.

Normal
00:05:468 - map this, its way stronger than 00:05:628 ;-; I'm blaming you if this one would be too hard.
00:04:989 - this rhythm might work better? (circle 5 is optional) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5930102 NO WAY, for an Intro it is too early to represent more overdone 1/2s, so I've only started doing it on 00:21:585 - . This shouldn't be implemented imho
00:09:298 - you missed a beat here Nearly the same reason as above, I know it sounds pretty intense. but ^
00:09:138 - add clap? A drum-clap wouldn't fit here as I tried when I was hitsounding. I didn't even add one on other diffs tho.
00:09:457 - ^ Well, this one should be alright~
00:09:777 (4) - remove clap nuuuu hitsound consistency ;m;
00:10:096 - add clap Okay
00:31:798 (1,2) - i think it would be better if 1 flowed into 2 At least the current one didn't hurt the flow pretty much not a bit. Even If I moved the slider's tail towards the circle in order to do what you suggest. I may keep this ofc.
00:56:691 (2,3) - blanket? D: Same reason from the previous diff for blanketing ;p

good luck~

havkz wrote:

Cool song! see what i did there

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  [MrSergio's Insane]

1. 00:09:138 (2,3) - I'd personally unstack these to emphasize the strong crash sound on 00:09:298 (3) - with a jump, just as you did here: 00:09:936 (1) - , why would they be different?
   
2. 00:11:053 (1) - a reverse isn't very fitting here since you're skipping over the main beat 00:11:372 - on this tick without making it clickable, i mean CMON LEMME CLICK DAT DOWNBEAT PLZ
   
3. 00:13:606 (1,2) - increase SV a bit for vocal intensity?
   
4. 00:17:117 (4,5) - this plays meh, the momentum stops for no reason, I'd just make it a slider instead of two stacked notes. That way you can still get those two drum beats while still maintaining momentum + slider glides well with the vocal here
   
5. 00:17:596 (1,2) - minor point, but overlapping the slider in the middle looks neater like so: https://voli.s-ul.eu/CEBdio7e
   
6. 00:20:149 (4) - I recommend you ctrl+g it, as of now its unintuitive to play as you'd expect the slider to start from the other side after the jump from 00:19:989 (3,4) -
   
7. 00:21:106 (1,2,3) - I'd rather expect a larger jump than the previous pattern here seeing the intensity of the drums
   
8. 00:26:691 (2,4) - These parts could be more interesting if you increased the SV of these sliders by around 1,20 or 1,30
   
9. 00:27:968 (2,4) - ^ and same goes for similar instances like this 00:56:372 (2,4) - (srsly those kicks get a lot more going for them when theyre slightly emphasized by SV)
   
10. 00:50:947 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spacing felt rather underwhelming to me D:
    
11. 00:53:500 (1) - increase SV to around 1,20 for more SPICE k
    
12. 01:16:957 (2) - you kinda missed the strongest vocal sound by making it a reverse, why not remove the reverse and add a note 01:17:277 - here?
    
    Cool map! Could use a bit more flavor here and there imo (you only used a single SV throughout the entire map when the song calls for a lot of emphasized parts), but generally like how you did it.

Voli wrote:

Greetings Mr. Car and MrSergio, I've been asked to mod this.

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  [MrSergio's Insane]

1. 00:09:138 (2,3) - I'd personally unstack these to emphasize the strong crash sound on 00:09:298 (3) - with a jump, just as you did here: 00:09:936 (1) - , why would they be different? let's say I had in mind a certain pattern for the first part and then changed my mind midway LOL
   
2. 00:11:053 (1) - a reverse isn't very fitting here since you're skipping over the main beat 00:11:372 - on this tick without making it clickable, i mean CMON LEMME CLICK DAT DOWNBEAT PLZ heh, I wanted to follow vocals in most parts of the song since they are "cool" :^). Jokes aside, if someone else points this out I'll probably change it, but it seems consistent with the rest of the map to me
   
3. 00:13:606 (1,2) - increase SV a bit for vocal intensity? trust me, at first that was exactly my intention, but then I realized I couldn't make good patterns when I arrived 00:26:372 - at this part, so I threw away all the SV changes I formerly used for 00:13:606 - and 00:15:840 -
   
4. 00:17:117 (4,5) - this plays meh, the momentum stops for no reason, I'd just make it a slider instead of two stacked notes. That way you can still get those two drum beats while still maintaining momentum + slider glides well with the vocal here actually, I didn't use a slider since I had poor imagination how to make one fit well there, but instead I placed one more jump. Using the same concept I fixed also 00:18:394 (4,5) -
   
5. 00:17:596 (1,2) - minor point, but overlapping the slider in the middle looks neater like so: https://voli.s-ul.eu/CEBdio7e well, I was aiming to constant spacing between 00:18:074 (2,3,4) - so moving 2 more to the left would move that whole pattern to the left, creating an ugly overlap between 00:17:596 (1,3) -
   
6. 00:20:149 (4) - I recommend you ctrl+g it, as of now its unintuitive to play as you'd expect the slider to start from the other side after the jump from 00:19:989 (3,4) - I actually thought about that, but there is a general better feeling if you organize your patterns around "centre point of the pattern". Let me explain: 00:19:670 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - take this whole part and you'll notice how I keep going over the "centre of the pattern" many times. This creates an invisible and giant circular flow and that's the reason I used 00:20:149 (4) - in that verse.
   
7. 00:21:106 (1,2,3) - I'd rather expect a larger jump than the previous pattern here seeing the intensity of the drums depending on the situation and the previous patterns, anti-jumps may give a stronger feeling. In this case I created a lot of movement with the previous 2-3 patterns so once the player arrives to this one he has to focus all that movement in a single point. This creates a virtual stronger emphasis imo which fits that part better than jumps. Consider also that due to previous spacings, I'd need a larger spacing on these beats since they are far stronger.
   
8. 00:26:691 (2,4) - These parts could be more interesting if you increased the SV of these sliders by around 1,20 or 1,30 I ended up explaining above. It's indeed an option and I already considered it, but I didn't come up with anything good. If you have any visual suggestion let me know because I'm drained xD
   
9. 00:27:968 (2,4) - ^ and same goes for similar instances like this 00:56:372 (2,4) - (srsly those kicks get a lot more going for them when theyre slightly emphasized by SV) same for first point ^ and I swear I'll try something out but I make no promises
   
10. 00:50:947 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spacing felt rather underwhelming to me D: it's in order to create contrast with the kiai and also because I'm not considering vocals there anymore, only drum. If you have better options let me know, because it looks fine for me as it is
    
11. 00:53:500 (1) - increase SV to around 1,20 for more SPICE k it's already at x1.20 o.O
    
12. 01:16:957 (2) - you kinda missed the strongest vocal sound by making it a reverse, why not remove the reverse and add a note 01:17:277 - here? the pattern is mainly focused on vocals as I mentioned somewhere above tho and it feels nice to me D:
    
    Cool map! Could use a bit more flavor here and there imo (you only used a single SV throughout the entire map when the song calls for a lot of emphasized parts), but generally like how you did it. I intentionally avoided them as I said, because I couldn't come up with any cool patterns. I instead used different rhythm approaches, by considering the patterns around those specific parts to make the stand out more. I dunno if I achieved my goal

GL!

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21:12 Anxient: lets see the map first
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21:12 *Anxient drags CV out of closet
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