Aoyama Teruma - Happiness · forum

LaunchedthousandShip

Joined August 2009

LaunchedthousandShip 2011-04-23T04:25:17+00:00

哈哈，打得过程中一种懒洋洋的感觉，就好想那兔子一样.bg真可爱啊，歌曲也很棒，节奏抓得不错，就是skin开始有些confusing，cool和fine,我想了想到后面看到slider才知道cool是300，有些音乐游戏里面cool并非是最准确的，而且你这里还有个fine，所以开始弄得我有些茫然。你的50是什么?sad还是bad,我打出来了1，2个但是没注意，建议用bad.

最好是great cool bad miss

真没什么问题...这种图不需要更多mod了，直接找mat/bat来buble就好了

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-04-23T06:46:19+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
好長的歌 D:
long song=long mod .__.

[General]
AudioLeadIn 拿整數 : 1500 checked
刪掉無用osb. file然後full-submit. 只有一个osb啊
這skin .__. 不是Krisom的嗎? 膜姐帮我做的....

[Easy]
00:41:744(4)-加whistle. checked
01;00:526(x)-為甚麼音量突然下降了?這樣會很怪. checked
01:26:613(1)-在這個reverse和下個reverse加whistle,在尾部加finish. checked-头+finish 尾部没加
01:30:787(3)-^ Same. checked---同上
01:50:092(x)-綠線沒snap好..(無用綠線? checked
01:54:787(5)-New combo. checked
01:58:961(1)-最好換一個位置. checked
02:17:222(x)-加音. checked
02:19:831(3)-New combo checked
02:21:396(6)-這個note和(4)-太近可能會誤導新手. 保留
02:28:178(6)-新手不好讀.also..New combo here. checked
02:36:526(5)-New combo here to consistent the previous new combo. checked
02:40:961(x)-這個break有一點長..考慮在02:57:396(x)-加一個spinner checked--好建议
03:05:744(6)-Combo 過長.在這裏New combo. checked
03:22:439(6)-^ Same. checked
03:30:787(6)-^ Same. checked
請適當的加上whistle.

[H-Miku's Normal]
00:03:135(x)-這段消音意義不明. checked
00:45:657(5.6)-換Normal hitsound.(6)-只需slider的頭部分換. (後面也這樣做) 意义？
00:56:352(1-6)-這個是snake阿... 什么意思？
01:27:657(5)-New combo. checked
01:31:831(3.4.5)-在這段內的紅線加上whistle以增加層次感. checked
02:11:483(7)-New combo here. checked
02:20:874(2.3.4)-不相等間距.關掉grid再排排看. checked
02:54:265(1.2.3)-明顯這個三角形歪掉...劃好一點吧... checked
02:57:396(1.2.3.4)-這幾個notes純在打拍子..沒什麼實在作用.換是我我會用一個spinner代替就好了

[Hard]
整體排班較擠
00:03:135(x)-這段消音意義不明. checked
00:16:700(5)-New combo here checked
00:51:135(6.7)-換個位置..不要和(3.4)-一樣. checked
00:58:439(7)-New combo. checked
01:19:048(x)-Add a note here. checked
01:30:787(5)-和之前的間距不相同. checked
02:07:309(1.2.3)-明顯這個三角形歪了. checked
02:28:175(1.2.3)-不要stack..打的時候變成一堆東西. checked
能吐遭貪吃蛇嗎? kanpakyin求拜师学排列！！！

Insane不想mod..
~間距較小
~AR8太高請自行調接.. XD

谢谢如此耐心的mod~kds~

Axey

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Joined October 2009

Axey 2011-04-23T10:23:51+00:00

sorry for my late modding!!!
sorry!!;_;

[H-Miku's Normal]
00:45:135(3,4)-snap

other diffs have no problem~

^^good luck to rank!

no kds..

KanaRin

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Joined April 2010

KanaRin 2011-04-23T11:29:58+00:00

嗯~ 我用中文該沒問題吧!?
好了~ ^o^/

[Easy]

00:10:439 (3) - New Combo?
00:48:005 (3) - ^
01:04:700 (3) - ^
02:07:309 (1) - Slider的頭加Finish?
02:11:483 (5) - New Combo?

[Normal]

01:31:831 (3) - New combo?
01:36:005 (5) - ^
03:07:309 (3) - ^
03:24:526 (4) - ^
03:43:309 (4) - Slider頭取消Finish

[Hard]

01:17:222 (1) - Slider頭加Finish?
01:33:918 (1) - ^
02:17:744 (6) - New Combo.
03:21:657 (6) - 這裡3連打有點難聽 , 1/2算了吧? 圓圓X2

[Insane]

不Nazi了做的滿不錯

Star~ Good luck~

wanhyrzh

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wanhyrzh 2011-04-26T01:20:28+00:00

lol 这图已经很成熟了，对我来说觉得没什么好mod的了
只是提一些看法和小问题：

SPOILER

1.音效有点太节拍器了……尤其前两个难度。嘛不过这歌可能比较适合打节拍器，也还好吧w
2.浅色note+KIAI好闪好瞎眼……
3.全难度slider速度都有些慢了……特别前三个难度我DT都觉得慢（自重
4.我不确定你只做一个spinner-circle是不是OK，如果你打算其他spinner元件都用默认的话，最好去默认皮肤那里把那几个元件拖过来。不然可能有的人用了些怪异的皮肤，配上你独特的spinner-circle可能会很奇怪——这也是有些MAT/BAT可能会说的nazi
5.最后一个难度，为啥03:18:265~03:34:961这段没加KIAI？我记得KIAI全难度统一（GD可以除外）是个比较明文的要求貌似……
6.Normal 00:45:396(4) spacing. 也许可以考虑弄成这样？

7.Easy 03:48:526(6) 左移1grid

就这么些东西，应该不需要KD了
Star~快rank了吧XD

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-04-26T18:07:37+00:00

KanaRin wrote:
嗯~ 我用中文該沒問題吧!?
好了~ ^o^/

[Easy]

00:10:439 (3) - New Combo?
00:48:005 (3) - ^
01:04:700 (3) - ^
02:07:309 (1) - Slider的頭加Finish?
02:11:483 (5) - New Combo?

[Normal]

01:31:831 (3) - New combo?
01:36:005 (5) - ^
03:07:309 (3) - ^
03:24:526 (4) - ^
03:43:309 (4) - Slider頭取消Finish

[Hard]

01:17:222 (1) - Slider頭加Finish?
01:33:918 (1) - ^
02:17:744 (6) - New Combo.
03:21:657 (6) - 這裡3連打有點難聽 , 1/2算了吧? 圓圓X2

[Insane]

不Nazi了做的滿不錯

Star~ Good luck~

All checked~

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-04-26T18:08:09+00:00

wanhyrzh wrote:
lol 这图已经很成熟了，对我来说觉得没什么好mod的了
只是提一些看法和小问题：
SPOILER
1.音效有点太节拍器了……尤其前两个难度。嘛不过这歌可能比较适合打节拍器，也还好吧w
2.浅色note+KIAI好闪好瞎眼……
3.全难度slider速度都有些慢了……特别前三个难度我DT都觉得慢（自重
4.我不确定你只做一个spinner-circle是不是OK，如果你打算其他spinner元件都用默认的话，最好去默认皮肤那里把那几个元件拖过来。不然可能有的人用了些怪异的皮肤，配上你独特的spinner-circle可能会很奇怪——这也是有些MAT/BAT可能会说的nazi
5.最后一个难度，为啥03:18:265~03:34:961这段没加KIAI？我记得KIAI全难度统一（GD可以除外）是个比较明文的要求貌似……
6.Normal 00:45:396(4) spacing. 也许可以考虑弄成这样？
[attachment=0:db534]01.jpg[/attachment:db534]
7.Easy 03:48:526(6) 左移1grid
就这么些东西，应该不需要KD了
Star~快rank了吧XD

谢谢modding~

Garven

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Garven 2011-05-03T15:06:13+00:00

Alrighty, then:

Nothing says happiness like a bunny girl chasing a turtle with a sword on a sunny day.

[General]
Remove "Emotion" from source and add "Emotions" to tags.

[Skin]
Add a spinner background, metre, and approach circle please.

[Easy]
01:56:874 (7,1) - That overlap is pretty bad. ><
02:26:092 (5,6) - Flow is kind of strange here. It makes more sense to travel downwards instead of upwards.
03:45:918 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for this level of an easy.
03:54:265 (1) - ^

[H-Miku's Normal]
00:37:570 (1) - Remove new combo
00:39:657 (3) - New combo
02:06:787 (6,1) - It plays fine, but I'm not sure if you intended to have this jump.
02:54:265 (1) - Remove new combo

[Hard]
02:22:961 (6) - Reduce by one repeat

[Insane]
02:19:831 (1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - Eh, just keep this all as one combo.

This is making me so sleepy. *yawn*

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-05-03T17:21:08+00:00

Garven wrote:
Alrighty, then:

Nothing says happiness like a bunny girl chasing a turtle with a sword on a sunny day.

[General]
Remove "Emotion" from source and add "Emotions" to tags. checked

[Skin]
Add a spinner background, metre, and approach circle please.

[Easy]
01:56:874 (7,1) - That overlap is pretty bad. >< checked
02:26:092 (5,6) - Flow is kind of strange here. It makes more sense to travel downwards instead of upwards. checked
03:45:918 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for this level of an easy. checked
03:54:265 (1) - ^ checked

[H-Miku's Normal]
00:37:570 (1) - Remove new combo checked
00:39:657 (3) - New combo checked
02:06:787 (6,1) - It plays fine, but I'm not sure if you intended to have this jump. checked
02:54:265 (1) - Remove new combo checked

[Hard]
02:22:961 (6) - Reduce by one repeat checked

[Insane]
02:19:831 (1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - Eh, just keep this all as one combo. checked

This is making me so sleepy. *yawn* OTZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

Thanks Garven~~good modding!! pretty useful~

DJPop

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DJPop 2011-05-03T18:11:29+00:00

As requested.

Download: spinner.part1.rar
Download: spinner.part2.rar

Garven

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Garven 2011-05-06T14:48:52+00:00

[General]
In the tags: Emotion -> Emotions

[Easy]
03:45:918 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner.
03:54:265 (1) - ^

[H-Miku's Normal]
00:03:135 - Raise the volume, please.
00:44:874 (3,4) - This spacing feels a bit small...
02:11:483 (7) - New combo
02:14:092 (1) - Remove new combo

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-05-06T17:20:06+00:00

Garven wrote:
[General]
In the tags: Emotion -> Emotions checked

[Easy]
03:45:918 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner. checked
03:54:265 (1) - ^ checked

[H-Miku's Normal]
00:03:135 - Raise the volume, please. checked
00:44:874 (3,4) - This spacing feels a bit small... checked
02:11:483 (7) - New combo checked
02:14:092 (1) - Remove new combo checked

Thanks for your great recheck!!

akrolsmir

606 posts

Joined November 2010

akrolsmir 2011-05-12T02:08:36+00:00

About time I got to modding this.

General:
Numbers are kinda hard to read, especially in kiai time. The entire thing in general is a bit to bright for my tastes and somewhat impedes visibility and readability, even if it fits the song nicely.

H-miku's normal:
Overall, pretty neat.
01:08:874 (1) - move endpoint 2 grids left for symmetry. Also, have (2) be a copy of this.
01:51:135 (2) - was this supposed to kind of warp around (1)? (it doesn't)
01:58:961 (1,3) - Looks a bit too pointed/sharp
03:02:352 (2,3) - I disagree with how these overlap
03:34:961 (1) - I thought 0% sound was not allowed? Also, if you want to reduce the sound you should do it for the spinning noise as well, so reduce the sound from the start of the spinner rather than the end.

Hard:
00:03:135- Timing point here is 0% as well
00:17:744 (7,8,9,10,11) - Strange pattern
01:22:961 (6) - up 1 or 2 grids

Insane:
Pretty good, the kind of map I'd give a 10 if it was ranked.

这个歌让我很高兴. Starred!

DJPop

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DJPop 2011-05-12T08:02:22+00:00

~Easy~
02:37:048 (6,7) - too far imo
TIMING 110,613 - remove
TIMING 206,613 - remove

~H-Miku's Normal~
00:06:265 (1) - remove claps
00:07:309 (2) - add clap at start, remove clap at middle
00:08:613 (4,6) - remove claps
00:09:396 (7) - remove finish
02:15:135 (7) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
TIMING 65,222 - remove
TIMING 180,526 - remove

~Hard~
TIMING 3,135 - use 30% volume

~Insane~
Fine.

+Star

PeaChick

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PeaChick 2011-05-12T18:24:43+00:00

star ~

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-05-14T09:06:43+00:00

DJPop wrote:
~Easy~
02:37:048 (6,7) - too far imo checked
TIMING 110,613 - remove checked
TIMING 206,613 - remove checked

~H-Miku's Normal~
00:06:265 (1) - remove claps checked
00:07:309 (2) - add clap at start, remove clap at middle checked
00:08:613 (4,6) - remove claps checked
00:09:396 (7) - remove finish checked
02:15:135 (7) - move down 1 grid (Lv3) checked
TIMING 65,222 - remove checked
TIMING 180,526 - remove checked

~Hard~
TIMING 3,135 - use 30% volume checked

~Insane~
Fine. Thanks~

+Star

Thanks for your modding ~POP ^ ^
Now waiting for your recheck!!!!!

lucyfly

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lucyfly 2011-05-17T14:04:49+00:00

I like it~!Very nice~
Star~

Nymph

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Nymph 2011-05-18T14:10:52+00:00

新人妮姆芙MOD 0 0

General:
Spinner-background是否可以做成和BG完美重叠? 现在的情况兔子会有一点点位移.虽然不是大问题啦..不过如果知道方法的话做成重叠最好(好吧我承认我也想做成重叠但是不会做..所以怂恿别人做..）

Mp3结尾淡出时间很长淡出10s就够了吧？这样能缩小文件大小

Insane:
00:03:135 (2) - 这里不建议音量0 建议音量小一些就可以了.开头是FINISH然后后面静音有些怪异.（个人建议）
01:07:570 (4) - 建议456音量降低能获得过渡感
01:12:265 (10,11) - 这里10 11都用的CLAP 没什么不好但是后面这样用的组合太多了是不是考虑换一种组合可以弄掉10的CLAP（相同的旋律第一段去掉一个CLAP 第二段用2个CLAP.只是建议）
01:31:831 (3) - ..为什么只有这里用了whistle...个人意见要不用就都不用好了
01:58:178 (7) - 这里没放CLAP就挺好听的...（果然个人偏见吗）
02:22:961 (1) - 这里排列有点丑（偏见...）

Hard: H-miku's normal:
还是对CLAP的意见没啦

Easy:
Easy什么的怎么样都好了..

完毕闪人0 0

Garven

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Garven 2011-05-19T16:22:11+00:00

[Easy]
01:33:918 (1,2,3) - This pattern just doesn't flow very well compared to the rest of the map. It's technically fine, but it feels like it's going against what you've mapped so far.
You think you can make the combos not so long? You could halve them easily and it'd be more fitting for an easy difficulty.

[Hard]
03:47:483 (7,8) - No claps?

Tashi_Scarlett[x]

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Tashi_Scarlett[x] 2011-05-27T03:27:27+00:00

shoot nice

Farmer_Player

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Farmer_Player 2011-05-27T03:33:08+00:00

澄空是妹子

JoJo

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JoJo 2011-05-27T04:42:37+00:00

Moe Map Moe Song Moe BG Moe Skin All Moe Yeah~~ www

以下是吐槽（喂
●hit xxx.png用的是miku的skin?..@.@
●无关紧要的osb文件是可以删掉的~以前经常被吐槽这个不过好像现在MAT什么的都无所谓了..=3=
●H-Miku你的难度做得很赞呢~>w</ 完全没有吐槽点啊~TvT
●本来想mod一下~~骗个KD什么的~~发现找不到什么唉~Q.Q 太弱了我

于是射星星=w=/

EDIT:啊哈哈..所以说MOD不出什么啊~只是打个酱油www 如果这样就能赚到KD我会害羞的~液╰(￣▽￣)╮

Last edited by JoJo 2011-05-27T06:06:17+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Okamiroy

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Okamiroy 2011-05-27T05:11:18+00:00

star star~~

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-05-27T05:44:34+00:00

Joshua Lost wrote:
Moe Map Moe Song Moe BG Moe Skin All Moe Yeah~~ www

以下是吐槽（喂
●hit xxx.png用的是miku的skin?..@.@
●无关紧要的osb文件是可以删掉的~以前经常被吐槽这个不过好像现在MAT什么的都无所谓了..=3=
●H-Miku你的难度做得很赞呢~>w</ 完全没有吐槽点啊~TvT
●本来想mod一下~~骗个KD什么的~~发现找不到什么唉~Q.Q 太弱了我

于是射星星=w=/

皮肤还会改......放心（你写这么少我怎么给KDS......

Dangaard

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Dangaard 2011-05-27T23:03:04+00:00

Overall

Use 2.092ms as offset on all diffs (red timing point) and remove other red timing points or green timing points on 2.092ms (or 2.110ms).
Check the green timing points on all diffs, they are usually some ms too early (I think you forgot to move them when you changed offset before).
It's not a big deal but at least the Kiai sections should be timed correctly for the Kiai-Burst.

[Easy]
01:00:544 (1,2) - they seem a bit too silent

[Normal]
03:34:961 (1) - reduce the volume on the spinner (when you check it in edit-mode its always silent, but listen to it in test-mode)

[Hard] and [Insane] seem fine (except the offset problem mentioned above)

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-05-28T13:21:18+00:00

Dangaard wrote:
Overall
Use 2.092ms as offset on all diffs (red timing point) and remove other red timing points or green timing points on 2.092ms (or 2.110ms).
Check the green timing points on all diffs, they are usually some ms too early (I think you forgot to move them when you changed offset before).
It's not a big deal but at least the Kiai sections should be timed correctly for the Kiai-Burst.
checked

[Easy]
01:00:544 (1,2) - they seem a bit too silent checked

[Normal]
03:34:961 (1) - reduce the volume on the spinner (when you check it in edit-mode its always silent, but listen to it in test-mode) checked

[Hard] and [Insane] seem fine (except the offset problem mentioned above)

Thank you very much!!!!!!!!

Dangaard

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Dangaard 2011-05-28T22:54:57+00:00

Overall
I'm very sorry but when I tested the map yesterday the timing was good for me with 2.092ms. Now I'm pretty sure it's too early. Try 2.105ms, worked pretty well for me.

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-05-29T09:46:42+00:00

Dangaard wrote:
Overall
I'm very sorry but when I tested the map yesterday the timing was good for me with 2.092ms. Now I'm pretty sure it's too early. Try 2.105ms, worked pretty well for me.

Done!I also make some change on the BG and the skin~OK please rechecked it

Dangaard

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Dangaard 2011-05-29T20:52:42+00:00

Overall
01.jpg is too wide with 1228x768, crop it to 1024x768
02.jpg causes letterboxes, so maybe crop it to 800x600

Sumisola

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Sumisola 2011-05-30T11:37:12+00:00