nice, an easier map of this
unrankable thing:
00:17:492 -
inconsistent settings for red/green line on same spot (sampleset), make them both S:C7 i guess?
other things:
too lazy to check collab parts
00:02:208 (1) - why the drumclap? soft whistle or something on spinnerend would fit the song better I think
00:39:567 (7,8,1) - would be nicer if 8-1 was spaced more/same visually as 7-8 to make it stand out more
00:53:930 (2) - would just remove this 1/4, doesn't really work with the other rhythms you used, it feels way too random here
01:14:944 (4,1) - why the sudden stack in such a fast section? really kills momentum and doesnt fit the song since 01:15:086 (1) - is pretty important
01:48:482 - really feels like it deserves a bigger jump for emphasis, also jump on 01:49:190 (4) - could be a bit reduced since the tick is rather weak
01:51:454 (1) - 1/3 snapping like
http://i.imgur.com/JFMZiTX.jpg seems to fit better
01:55:133 (2) - why not start the 1/2 circle pattern from here? fit better since the musical pattern starts here
02:01:642 (8) - why would you reduce spacing so much here when music is still building up? should have more or at least similar spacing to before
02:06:029 (1) - really lacks emphasis, how about moving 3 to get something like
http://i.imgur.com/Xlk0gng.jpg02:06:029 (1,4,5,6) - looks like you wanted to have 1-456 manually stacked? it's off a bit in that case
http://i.imgur.com/1RkjRpL.jpg02:06:737 (3,4,5,6,1) - whole pattern is really uncomfortable to play (at least for me), because of the stop combined with weirdly low spacing on 1 and the angle. maybe you can rework this pattern a bit
02:46:572 (11,1,1) - can you make this cleaner somehow, looks really unpolished
02:48:341 (1,2,3) - spacing feels overdone compared to song and other spacing you use around here
02:56:548 (1,2) - I'd actually ctrlg this rhythm since it doesn't belong to the musical pattern before/sounds are way different. that would greatly emphasize the vocals too
http://i.imgur.com/PENlORJ.jpg03:06:737 (3,1) - why is this suddenly not spaced?
03:33:341 (1,2,3,4) - ignores the song completely, listen to what the melody does. following that would be so much better
04:44:661 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - rhythm combined with ignored the vocals on white ticks is really awful to play
05:04:897 (1,4,5,6) -
http://i.imgur.com/wOSHp98.jpg manually stack this or something
05:18:907 (5,1) - should probably be spaced // same for 05:23:718 (4,1) - to fit your other 1/4 repeat patterns better
rip ending : (
guess you can get alacat to rebubble, good luck!