[General]
-The widescreen support should be closed in Chaoz's diff
-EDIT: Add gideon5504 into the tag
[Chaoz's First Voice]
-00:32:143 (2,3) - I think using reverse slider here is better since the sound in 00:32:443 (3) - is really soft, instead of using circle, using reverse slider is a more appropriate way to emphasize the note
-00:32:593 (4) - Using a long slider here seems a bit weird since 00:32:893 - has a great sound that should be emphasized by a clickable object, here's a suggestion =>
http://puu.sh/rJIJi/f88cc0dc33.png-00:51:793 (4) - As well, even though the vocal is continuing, I still believe that 00:52:093 - should be clickable
-01:26:443 - ,01:36:043 - ,01:40:843 - The vocal should be mapped since you seems following vocal. Otherwise the rhythm would be a bit awkward and not consistent. Maybe you can use a slider to slightly emphasize it =>
http://puu.sh/rJJbE/66afaaa016.png-02:52:693 (2) - I think it can be placed further to emphasize the different of beat with 02:51:793 (4,1) -
-02:56:143 (2,3) - The blanket can be improved >:D
-02:57:493 (4,5) - Blanket >:D
-03:29:143 (7) - I think the note can be placed further to match the rising rhythm
-04:50:593 (4) - Just some 強逼症 here, you can place it lefter to make the similar distance with 04:49:693 (1,2,3) - ==>
http://puu.sh/rJJvs/2642d20528.png-05:00:793 (1) - I think the spinner is not necessary. Using 05:00:343 (3) - as the ending is already awesome and good. Adding the spinner makes the ending less 爽 and 霸氣
[Sound Of Slider]
-I think "of" is more appropriate than "Of", it just looks awkward tbh
-Actually I don't think those SV change is necessary...but anyway that's up to you
-Slider tick rate 1 is a lot BETTER. Take a example, 04:07:693 (1,1) - , using 2 will make the rhythm become too dense, and it cannot emphasize that this is a slow and quiet part in the song
-Be careful to your used of NC, your NC is kinda messy, for example, 00:34:093 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ,00:55:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ,01:12:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . Please self-mod your NC pattern and uses
-00:10:693 (1,2) - For me the SV is totally too high since there's a quiet part, using that high SV will make the flow and rhythm awkward
-00:13:693 (1) - I think using a simple curved or straight slider here is more appropriatre instead of using a complicated slider because of the slow rhythm
-00:14:893 (1,1) - Isn't their SV is too extreme? 1.1~1.2 is totally can express the feeling of the rising rhythm
-00:24:493 (1) - This slider is a bit ugly... I think the flow can be improved by changing the slider shape, for example,
http://puu.sh/rJK5k/1955006519.png-00:25:993 (5,6) - The rhythm is weird!! There are some suggestion:
http://puu.sh/rJKaA/c88f8ff4ef.png or
http://puu.sh/rJKbE/bc65f46ebf.png. And those must be better than the current one
-00:26:893 (1,2,3,4,5) - You made this pattern but you didn't do the same pattern in 00:22:093 (1,2,3) - , please make sure your patterns are consistent enough!
-00:32:893 (2) - Are you sure you need to ignore that beat? That beat is absolutely strong enough to be mapped(If you changed the slider tick rate)
-00:35:743 (1) - Why SV change here
-00:37:693 (1) - You can try to modify the shape in order to improve the flow =>
http://puu.sh/rJN06/dbb4f217e2.png-00:41:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You did other rhythm pattern in 00:23:143 (1,2,3) - . Try to unify your pattern so as to improve the consistency of the rhythm and pattern
-00:50:893 (1,1,1) - and 00:32:593 (1,2) - ya you better make a consistent pattern here
-01:02:593 (5,6) - I think the placing of the note is too far and awkward, maybe convert them to reverse slider. I think it will be even better.
-01:12:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - and 00:53:293 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Please unify the pattern that you used ;w;
-01:24:493 (3) - NC
-01:25:093 (1) - Remove NC
-01:26:293 (3,4,5,6) - and 01:35:743 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - You know what I mean :<
-01:43:693 (1) - The slider can be placed further, just like what you did in 01:29:143 (8,1) -
-01:50:893 (1) - No.. This slider shape is too awkward... Strongly advise you to reshape it
-01:53:743 (2) - Add a note here => 01:24:943 (2) -
-01:55:093 (5) - 01:55:093 (5) - I think a kick slider is not that necessary here since there is no need to make a kick slider imo
-02:02:293 - I think this note is mappable and there are some suggestion =>
http://puu.sh/rJOT1/b7a38ecb9d.png or
http://puu.sh/rJOTT/33abf2d1d7.png-02:19:693 (1,2,3) - Too fast imo.. 1.0 is REALLY enough for you to emphasize it. Otherwise it will be weird
-04:04:093 (1) - Why not make a blanket with 04:03:493 (1) - by changing the shape? It can make the flow becomes smoother =>
http://puu.sh/rJPAD/c1fd3c0f4b.pngGood Luck with the map!