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Maniac
00:25:164 (6) - 头finish
01:05:564 (1) - 只是意見,01:05:464 (4,1) - 这里距離都x1.56了,不如干脆这串里每个NC渐加距離这样?(即是(4,1)加距離)
01:05:964 (1) - 头finish
01:20:364 (5) - NC
01:50:764 (1) - 加finish如何?

Hard
这难度的tick音是故意的?感觉不好听
01:18:764 (5) - finish

没用的话不用给kd
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karenying wrote:

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Maniac
00:25:164 (6) - 头finish ?
01:05:564 (1) - 只是意見,01:05:464 (4,1) - 这里距離都x1.56了,不如干脆这串里每个NC渐加距離这样?(即是(4,1)加距離) no 不过改了点
01:05:964 (1) - 头finish k
01:20:364 (5) - NC k
01:50:764 (1) - 加finish如何? k

Hard
这难度的tick音是故意的?感觉不好听 oops忘记改回来了 fixed
01:18:764 (5) - finish k

没用的话不用给kd
看来还需要MOD..毕竟是老图了
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Easy:
- Okay Tick Rate 2 is way too spammy for Easy. I'd suggest using Tick 1 for Easy.
00:35:564 (1,1) - Having notes so close after spinners in an Easy diff is difficult for beginners.
01:29:964 (3) - The slidertick being in the hitcircle looks a bit ugly.

lF Style:
- Why is this Slider Velocity smaller than in Easy? Next time watch out with Guest diffs.
00:50:364 (5) - Maybe move this one 1/4 tick later?

Hard:
01:10:964 (7,8) - Why use a different spacing for this all of a sudden?

Maniac:
01:04:364 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why do you have a different spacing in all these streams?
01:11:164 (3) - This slowdown is pretty hard to predict.
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Rukarioman wrote:

Easy:
- Okay Tick Rate 2 is way too spammy for Easy. I'd suggest using Tick 1 for Easy. Okay
00:35:564 (1,1) - Having notes so close after spinners in an Easy diff is difficult for beginners. Changed
01:29:964 (3) - The slidertick being in the hitcircle looks a bit ugly. lol

lF Style:
- Why is this Slider Velocity smaller than in Easy? Next time watch out with Guest diffs.
00:50:364 (5) - Maybe move this one 1/4 tick later? Nope

Hard:
01:10:964 (7,8) - Why use a different spacing for this all of a sudden? x.x fixed

Maniac:
01:04:364 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why do you have a different spacing in all these streams? fixed
01:11:164 (3) - This slowdown is pretty hard to predict.It's a little longer than others..Though it's hard to read at playing
Thanks for modding! :3
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Taking over for the poor Rukarioman.

[General]

IF Style has a different source, and a random kiai fountain in the middle that the other diffs don't have.
Hard is missing mekadon in tags.

The bright blue hurts the eyes a bit in kiai.

[Easy]

Can't say I'm a fan of the weird-shaped linear sliders.

00:09:964 (1,2) - I'd silence these two ticks, they're really loud.
01:02:764 (3) - Make this symmetrical?

It's structurally fine, but I didn't really like the looks.

[IF Style]

I assume this is Normal?

00:24:364 (1,2) - I recommend not having identical sliders with different speeds on any difficulty.
00:40:564 (1,2,3,4) - For the first iteration, changing this to two sliders will help the player actually read the pattern.
01:09:164 (1,2,3,4) - Identical sliders shouldn't have different numbers of repeats consecutively either.
01:38:764 (1) - Dunno what this doublets part is following...

Eh, it's a bit hard for a Normal, but not too hard that I'd be concerned, since you have an Easy.

[Hard]

00:06:764 (1) - This opener is really cool.
00:14:764 (1) - This part felt a bit messy, since the notes start appearing under hitbursts.
01:09:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Space these out a bit, maybe even as jumps; this is really hard to read.

This was a bit hard for a Hard too, at parts, but it played really well. I think it should be okay.

[Maniac]

00:16:364 (1) - I don't recommend having a stream like this.

Good, other than the fact that I can't FC it. :P
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Kytoxid wrote:

[IF Style]

I assume this is Normal?;)

00:24:364 (1,2) - I recommend not having identical sliders with different speeds on any difficulty.
i understand, but the music leads me to map with a fast slider+a slow slider, so i really want to keep it.
00:40:564 (1,2,3,4) - For the first iteration, changing this to two sliders will help the player actually read the pattern.
i sacrifice readability here because the instrument stand out the most here so i think circles fit more (the similar paragraph at 43:764 and 46:964, that instrument is less obvious so mapped in different way)
01:09:164 (1,2,3,4) - Identical sliders shouldn't have different numbers of repeats consecutively either.
you're right, change (4) to 2 sliders
01:38:764 (1) - Dunno what this doublets part is following...
remapped a bit

other fix done:
01:37:164 (4) - left a grid
01:44:564 (1) - hitsound change to S:normal

Eh, it's a bit hard for a Normal, but not too hard that I'd be concerned, since you have an Easy.:D
thanks for modding!

Download: ESTi - Ray of Illuminati (fanzhen0019) [lF Style].osu
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Kytoxid wrote:

Taking over for the poor Rukarioman.

[General]

IF Style has a different source(fixed), and a random kiai fountain in the middle that the other diffs don't have.
Hard is missing mekadon in tags. fixed

The bright blue hurts the eyes a bit in kiai. Errr..

[Easy]

Can't say I'm a fan of the weird-shaped linear sliders.

00:09:964 (1,2) - I'd silence these two ticks, they're really loud. done
01:02:764 (3) - Make this symmetrical? Follow the rhythm so nothin change

It's structurally fine, but I didn't really like the looks.

[IF Style]

I assume this is Normal?

00:24:364 (1,2) - I recommend not having identical sliders with different speeds on any difficulty.
00:40:564 (1,2,3,4) - For the first iteration, changing this to two sliders will help the player actually read the pattern.
01:09:164 (1,2,3,4) - Identical sliders shouldn't have different numbers of repeats consecutively either.
01:38:764 (1) - Dunno what this doublets part is following...

Eh, it's a bit hard for a Normal, but not too hard that I'd be concerned, since you have an Easy.

[Hard]

00:06:764 (1) - This opener is really cool. :O
00:14:764 (1) - This part felt a bit messy, since the notes start appearing under hitbursts. fixed
01:09:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Space these out a bit, maybe even as jumps; this is really hard to read. fixed

This was a bit hard for a Hard too, at parts, but it played really well. I think it should be okay.

[Maniac]

00:16:364 (1) - I don't recommend having a stream like this. :P

Good, other than the fact that I can't FC it. :P
Thank you for moding!
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lF style's source is still different. Please check over that.

Also, the maps in general are a bit too soft, especially sections at 30% or under, imo, since the hitsound blends into the music a bit too much.

Everything else looks okay.

EDIT: Bubbled.
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Kytoxid wrote:

lF style's source is still different. Please check over that.

Also, the maps in general are a bit too soft, especially sections at 30% or under, imo, since the hitsound blends into the music a bit too much.

Everything else looks okay.
OAO source fixed
hitsounds... ;_;

EDIT: :O Thank you!
我巨爽
I'm so happy
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really a long time

that's great

Your message is too short.
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Fine. Gratz for the first ranked.
it isn't short if I added this line.
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Cool song ))
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XD
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恭喜~! :)
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gratz~
话说你的德国boy是不是要等到寒假才能RANK了。。
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Fantastic Map. Doesn't try anything it can't do and does what it can extremely well. 10/10
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Finally..
*sigh

thanks all people above
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this was your first map? o.o
that's a very impressive first map.
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