HellDawn wrote:

Normal+
Not normal+ please delete put hard no
Overal difficulty +2 ^
Hp Drain Rate +2 ^

00:48:426- spacing ok

Insane
Hp drain rate -1 no

Wiinter wrote:

Ohi, modding as requested~

General

1. Since you have a hit0 file, I guess you should also add the other hitbursts, since this ones might look odd depending on the player's skin (even if you get the template skin one here) ehh, if people are really complaining about it, i'll change it
2. The count.png files are a bit bad cut >_< to fix this problem, you could use some black borders on them, like this:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   In case you wanna use it, here are the files: http://puu.sh/6kSS

thanks :3

[Easy]

1. 01:04:966 (1) - unecessary new combo

fixed

[Normal+]

1. Even though this is a Normal+ diff, I think AR7 is way too fast (specially considering the other difficulty sets in this diff). Consider reducing it by 1 tick, or increase the others to make it proportional and call it Hard, since it plays more as a Hard than as a Normal+ anyways >_< no,it's a normal+, AR -1
2. 00:14:147 (5) - new combo?

ok

[ArisuKarin's Hard]

1. 00:41:953 (4) - new combo?
2. 00:56:336 (4) - ^
3. 00:57:895 (x) - add a note here?
4. 00:58:135 (x) - ^
5. 01:36:607 (1) - almost invisible slider orz

fixed everything
That's all. Hope it's useful

theMikeAG wrote:

The return of the revenge of the vengeance of the dark, evil, no good, very bad, Samus.

~Normal~
00:06:477 (5,6) - Center these. done
01:08:322 (1,2,3,4,5) - These repeaters sound a little busy. The only claps you need should be on the front ends. nah, I think this pattern sounds ok
01:13:596 (2) - Could you adjust this slider so that it isn't touching the note? done
01:21:267 (1,2,3,4) - Add some claps to the ends. done
01:44:279 (1) - This doesn't fit. huh? How doesn't this fit?

~Hard~
00:42:913 (1) - This doesn't really fit.
01:44:279 (1) - Neither does this.
well, I tried some different patterns :/ I'll change the second one, dunno what to place for the first x3

~Insane~
00:10:071 (2) - Add whistle. done
00:11:990 (x) - Add note. done
00:15:824 (8) - Finish doesn't really fit. I guess as the finishing note of this Stream it kinda fits :/

I'll star you once I get the opportunity.

bomber34 wrote:

Nice Map :3
The only thing that sounds weird for me is this part on hard

1:58:183 and 2:00:100 : I would put those sliders 1/2 away so they are on 1:58:422 and 2:00:340


But it is up to you

I give you a Star ^^

bomber34 wrote:

Isn't the source Metroid Prime 2 : Echoes ?
(I know the 2 : echoes is in the tags but still ^^) see next quote

and what about adding Retro Studios to the tags because they were the developer? alrighty

Zelos wrote:

General:
Remove "2 Echoes" from source and add it to tags. (don't ask me why. its one of the most stupid rules I've ever heard of)

bomber34 wrote:

bomber34 wrote:

Isn't the source Metroid Prime 2 : Echoes ?
(I know the 2 : echoes is in the tags but still ^^)

and what about adding Retro Studios to the tags because they were the developer?

Edit: Why do you use the Taiko BG as preview picture? ^^

1. Vielleicht ein paar Inherited Points für's Volume setzen, damit nicht alles so eintönig ist von der Lautstärke her

1. 00:27:571 (5) - Ich würde den Kreis rund machen ;O
2. 00:42:913 (1) - Break zu diesem Slideranfang hier ziehen
3. 01:04:008 (1) - ^
4. 01:13:596 (2,3) - Ich weiß nicht ob's so gut ist die Slider mehr oder weniger in einer Normal Diff so zu überlappen D:
5. 01:17:431 (1,1) - Zu nah aneinander für eine Normal Diff
6. 01:28:938 (x) - Hier vielleicht 'nen Spinner setzen der bis 01:30:855 geht?
7. 01:40:444 (1) - Break zum Slideranfang ziehen
8. 01:44:279 (1) - Der Slider ist aus'm Takt.

1. 00:33:564 (1) - Würde ich auf den blauen Tick ziehen (also der direkt nach dem Slider (7) kommt)
2. 00:58:374 (1) - Wie wärs hier mit 2 Spinnern? Der erste geht bis 01:00:052 und der 2. von 01:00:172 bis 01:02:090
3. 01:02:569 (1,2,3) - Nicht ein bisschen zu krass für 'ne Hard Diff?
4. 01:19:349 (1,2,3,4) - Die Whistles passen nicht (es seidenn du machst sie soft)

1. AR -1
2. 00:58:254 (7) - Drag the break to the end of (7)
3. 01:38:405 (4,5) - Spacing?! Oo
4. 01:46:196 (5) - NC
5. How about mapping until 02:03:456? So that every diff ends at the same time?

DoKoLP wrote:

General

1. Vielleicht ein paar Inherited Points für's Volume setzen, damit nicht alles so eintönig ist von der Lautstärke her

[Normal]

1. 00:27:571 (5) - Ich würde den Kreis rund machen ;O ok
2. 00:42:913 (1) - Break zu diesem Slideranfang hier ziehen hoppla x3
3. 01:04:008 (1) - ^ ^
4. 01:13:596 (2,3) - Ich weiß nicht ob's so gut ist die Slider mehr oder weniger in einer Normal Diff so zu überlappen D: Odaril meinte es sei ok
5. 01:17:431 (1,1) - Zu nah aneinander für eine Normal Diff wie oft hier über sowas gestritten wurde ... is weg ^^
6. 01:28:938 (x) - Hier vielleicht 'nen Spinner setzen der bis 01:30:855 geht? ok
7. 01:40:444 (1) - Break zum Slideranfang ziehen x3
8. 01:44:279 (1) - Der Slider ist aus'm Takt.

wie jetzt? <.<

[Hard]

1. 00:33:564 (1) - Würde ich auf den blauen Tick ziehen (also der direkt nach dem Slider (7) kommt)
2. 00:58:374 (1) - Wie wärs hier mit 2 Spinnern? Der erste geht bis 01:00:052 und der 2. von 01:00:172 bis 01:02:090 jep
3. 01:02:569 (1,2,3) - Nicht ein bisschen zu krass für 'ne Hard Diff? 3 reverse slider? ka
4. 01:19:349 (1,2,3,4) - Die Whistles passen nicht (es seidenn du machst sie soft) soft, but still rough *rawr* ;D

[ArisuKarin's Insane]

1. AR -1 k
2. 00:58:254 (7) - Drag the break to the end of (7) ^
3. 01:38:405 (4,5) - Spacing?! Oo hehe, don't know what happened there x3
4. 01:46:196 (5) - NC k
5. How about mapping until 02:03:456? So that every diff ends at the same time? no,

So. Fertisch. Ich hoffe ich konnte helfen ;D
(Und sorry das es doch etwas länger gedauert hat)

marshall_racer wrote:

DoKoLP wrote:

[Normal]

1. 01:44:279 (1) - Der Slider ist aus'm Takt.

wie jetzt? <.< Ich meine damit den Reverse auf'm roten Tick. Der passt irgendwie nicht zum Rhythmus ;o
[/list]

Danke <33

IceBeam wrote:

hi hi there :3

delete Kenji Yamamoto - Dark Samus (marshall_racer) [Phish's Insane] from the song folder and add a link with a diff to creator's words okey dokey sir o/

also,remove 2 from Tags,we cannot search for tags having less then 3 characters k

all kiai sections are -1 mms earlier,fix it please fixed

[Normal]
HP Drain -2
OD -1

00:48:187 (4) - start it 1/1 later ok

[Hard]
00:08:394 (5,1) - a long gap between em' .-. add a note 00:09:833 to keep the rhytm on? fixed
00:58:374 (1) - extend this spinner up to the 01:00:172 and start next one from 01:00:292 ^
01:11:678 (1) - change to a slider please.. ^
01:28:938 (x) - drag a break here ^

[ArisuKarin's Insane]
Kiai is different here,consider to fix it no "guest Diff." exceptions?
it ends earlier then others..map to the 02:03:456? mapper left it like this :/

00:51:302 (3) - start this slider 1/1 later,leaving a note at 00:51:303. atm there's no rhytm at all k
00:55:137 (3) - nope,repeat is wrong,do as above ^
01:04:965 (1) - too close to previous object fixed
01:04:965 (1,2) - because of a new-discovered osu! bag,such moments are unrankable,as stacking doesn't occur during gameplay
move 01:05:445 (2) 1 grid down and right (lvl4) or change it in any other way fixed it differently

01:09:760 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:21:267 (x) - drag a break here k
01:32:772 (1,2,3,4) - again..zero stack leniency,make a manual stacking or change it fixed
01:36:607 (1,2,3) - that's odd,as the (4)-th symmetrical slider is missing sorry x3
01:55:065 (1) - too sudden and short,please change it to something else ok

[Taiko]
set audio lead-in to 1000 fixed

Loctav wrote:

[Normal]

Etwas linear platzierte Hitcircles machen die Map etwas eintönig. Versuch sie, etwas variabler anzuordnen.
generell sind die Hitsounds etwas seltsam, wirkt wie TaikOsu auf mich - und Taikosu is Unfug XD
Vielleicht solltest du auch mit dem Hitsound Volume rumspielen, dann wirken manche Hitsounds auch nicht so penedrant. ... ok

Circle Size -1

00:27:571 (5) - ugly slider hmm ... :/
00:42:913 (1) - replace whistle with finish ok
00:45:310 (1) - ugly slider+ nope
00:50:584 (2) - eww, you misuse whistles. how? <.<
00:53:940 (1,2,3) - finish(no whistle), none, whistle
00:55:378 (5,6,7) - ^
00:56:337 (1,2,3) - ^ done
01:25:102 (1) - ugly slider o.o
01:40:444 (1) - this whistle really sucks
01:42:362 (1) - ^
01:46:197 (2) - ^
01:48:115 (1) - ^ why
01:49:553 (2) - finish ok
01:50:032 (1) - this whistle really sucks, too
01:57:703 (1) - ^
01:59:621 (1) - ^ again, why?

[Hard]

00:23:736 (1) - create a 90° bow, looking far better (by creating my control points) k
01:11:678 (3) - ugly slider suggestions?
01:21:267 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this pattern more symmetric by reshaping the sliders meh, I guess it's ok like this :/
01:44:279 (1,2,3,4) - pretty overmapped with this kick sliders is it?
01:57:703 (1,2) - why so linear? changed
01:59:621 (1,2) - ^ ^

[ArisuKarin's Insane]

You should place triplets and streams closer together like http://puu.sh/atYF (or maybe with x0.9 distance snapping)
In general you should shape the sliders more like bows. Everything is so edgy or straight D:

00:10:790 (4,5,6) - is it just me or is THIS triplet different from the previous one? nope, they're copied from the previous triplets
00:15:824 (8) - make the stream don't ne so edgy with this 8 ok
00:50:584 (1,2,3,4) - time/add the objects like this http://puu.sh/atZ8 - replace objects then
00:54:418 (1,2,3,4) - ^ no and no, I like the rhthym
01:17:430 (5) - New combo? ok
01:28:937 (5) - ^ ^

[Rikki-Don's Dark Taiko]
Lol, nice skin. But why is the Circle Size so high? (even if it doesn't matter - but why? XD)
But nice Taiko at all.

First of all, always keep the volume at the same level, please.(60% or maybe increase it to 70%). This is very distracting in Taiko.
00:04:079 (10) - kat?
00:54:419 (273,274,275) - kkd?

Loctav wrote:

[Rikki-Don's Dark Taiko]
Lol, nice skin. Why thank you.
But why is the Circle Size so high? (even if it doesn't matter - but why? XD)

ShadowSoul wrote:

Normal
00:27:571 (5) - New Combo
00:29:489 (1) - Remove NC
01:13:117 (1) - Remove NC
01:13:596 (2) - Add NC

Other Diffs look fine <3
Just may change some sliders in Hard .. Ugly Sliders

Rikers wrote:

Loctav wrote:

[Rikki-Don's Dark Taiko]
Lol, nice skin. Why thank you.
But why is the Circle Size so high? (even if it doesn't matter - but why? XD)

I...have no idea, actually lol.
Unless Marshmallow changed some stuff.. o 3o

Rikers wrote:

Maybe I'll work on it a little.

..or maybe not.

DiamondCrash wrote:

Normal;

00:29:010 (2) - Clap.
01:04:008 (1) - Clap on the end.
01:13:596 (1) - Take the clap off the start.

Hard;

Approach Rate: +1
01:07:364 (1,3) - I don't think these really fit. It's up to you if you want to change them, but I'd have them 1/4 shorter if it was me.
01:23:185 (5,6) - Spacing.


Taiko;

00:00:733 (1) - Not snapped.

ArisuKarin wrote:

You deleted my Difficulty

18:12 <Broetchen8441> : 00:22:777 (5) - so ugly imo :<
18:13 <marshall_racer> : geh es posten verdammt x.x
18:15 <Broetchen8441> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/214460
18:15 <Broetchen8441> : do it like this
18:15 <Broetchen8441> : use approach circle to align with
18:15 <marshall_racer> : goddamnit post it ó.ó
18:15 <Broetchen8441> : i will
18:16 <Broetchen8441> : 00:33:444 (1) - change spinner's end volume?
18:16 <Broetchen8441> : 30% sounds fine imo
18:17 <Broetchen8441> : 00:45:310 (2) - 2 times repeat is kinda long, ya know? shorten down by 1 arrow & do smth. else about i t
18:17 <Broetchen8441> : *it
18:17 <Broetchen8441> : 00:49:385 (1) - people will bitch about it bcuz starts on red tick
18:18 <Broetchen8441> : so replace previous combo's 6 wiz 1x-reverse-slider
18:19 <Broetchen8441> : 00:50:584 (4) - can't you try on finding another shape & shorten it down on just 1 white tick length?
18:19 <Broetchen8441> : like using 2 1x-reverse-sliders instead
18:20 <Broetchen8441> : 01:13:596 (3,5) - how u dare raping mah eyes wiz dat shapes? D:
18:20 <Broetchen8441> : cut .mp3's end
18:21 <Broetchen8441> : oh, nvm, taiko continues
18:22 <Broetchen8441> : i suggest you to put the taiko-files as an aditional download and not include them in the map itself
18:22 <marshall_racer> : ...
18:22 <Broetchen8441> : TEEHEE

- Rikkukun - wrote:

I love this song! **

Stefan wrote:

wtf it's in WIP

how dare uu