hello~ my love :3

Firs Download this and past you folder "SB" not friend ok

Download: SB (friend).zip

Second you copy all code and past 4 diffs and save

[haku´s unrequite love]


[Pereira´s nice love]


[sekai´s soft love]


[TheVilleOne´s complex love]


just copy and pasted

that all

If you can´t just aske for me pleasse

thank you

star~

taiko mod =d

AR, OD-1

-> beginning: triplet every 4 beats? :/ You can place the triplet on 00:17:311 or 00:17:939, but not the white tick
^ (More k should be added in the beginning part too.)
00:34:011 - ddkdddd / ddkkddd
00:50:711 - d ddk k d k
01:00:298 - kdddkdkdk
01:33:080 - If you ends here, delete this

Rating (-1~1)
Pattern - most problems come from the inappropiate triplet at the beginning, nice for the rest: 0.5
Density - ^, :0.5

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done , fixed ~

Download: Haruko Momoi - Let Me Love You - Remix Version (- S e k a i -) [Heat's Taiko sweet love].osu

Taiko mod by request.

[Heat's Taiko]

Suggestion:
- Difficulty change to ALL 5? More easy to SS / HRable.
- SV change to 1.3 ~ 1.4 .

Hitsounds modding:
00:27:826 (41) - KAT
00:33:392 (61) - ^
00:34:939 (69) - KAT.
00:36:176 (74) - ^
00:44:526 (105) - ^
00:55:350 (147) - ^
00:56:587 (151) - ^
01:00:298 (169) - ^
01:00:608 (171) - ^
01:03:082 (183) - ^
01:08:648 (205) - ^
01:06:793 (198) - ^
01:08:648 (205) - ^
01:14:215 (226) - ^
01:19:782 (247) - ^
01:25:349 (268) - ^
01:27:204 (274) - ^
01:28:132 (277) - ^
01:33:080 (300) - Add a note (Don)

My Rating: 6.5 / 10

You miss some hitsound in your map so i feel some boring in this Taiko diff.
Overall that's Not bad , Since that's so hard to map.

Okay~ Star~

EDIT : HELL ! IT'S DELETED T>T

ATTACH[Haruko Momoi - Let Me Love You - Remix Version (- S e k a i -) [TheVileOne's complex love].osu]

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Download: Haruko Momoi - Let Me Love You - Remix Version (- S e k a i -) [TheVileOne's complex love].osu

*Small note: Time Signature should be 3/4!
*SB note: lyrics have too much blank space!
Why is this font different?

No love
01:16:847 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - whoops, shift right 1/4?
01:30:920 (2,3,4) - Consider this timing? It seems a bit more intuitive

01:38:961 (2) - Add note, move slider 1/2 to right and remove repeat?
01:40:816 (4) - Add note?
02:29:992 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Shift to white tick.

To be honest, this difficulty is /ok/, but I'm sure it can be better c:

[Will finish later, do not kudosu until I'm done aha]

call me at chat when you fix thepianist mod.
I will mod it.

please remove " HeatKai " from tags

ATTACH[Haruko Momoi - Let Me Love You - Remix Version (- S e k a i -) [TheVileOne's complex love].osu]

Download: Haruko Momoi - Let Me Love You - Remix Version (- S e k a i -) [TheVileOne's complex love].osu

star~

bpm fine.
first offset : 933
second offset : follow Haku's offset

Hi~

Storyboard Mod

~Thoughts and Suggestions~
[*] The lyrics are a bit hard to see with the background you have in [No Love], consider using a different image.

~Issues and Adjustments~
[*] With the name change you did, you forgot to change the name of the .osb file, so right now the storyboard doesn't show anymore. Please fix the name of your .osb file.
[*] You're no longer using wallpaper-school-days-anime, remove it from the folder. Remember to do a Full Submit when you update after doing this (or maybe you can use it for [No Love] and remove the white-y one...)
[*] Remove the unnecessary transparency in all your images, please.
[*] You should re-arrange the texts, they aren't alligned between them and the background (compare the allignments of this and this, for example).
[*] [No Love] doesn't have any butterfly/name in it.

03:29:992 - hoka ni wa nani mo hoshi kunai appears at the bottom of the screen instead of at the top, and it sometimes covers the mapper's name (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/82993).

General mod

~General~
- I wonder why is this song called "Remix Version"... It doesn't sound like a remix at all (and it's the same version as the original one?), but it seems to be correct... ._.;
- Shouldn't the artist be Momoi Haruko and not Haruko Momoi? Because of the japanese name order and all that. There's also a ranked map with "Momoi Haruko" as Artist (http://osu.ppy.sh/s/21724), so you should stick to that. Remember to check this guide to see how to change the artist on your map without creating a duplicate of your map.

~No love~
- Capitalize "love" in the diff's name please.
- Use a 3/4 Time Signature for this map.
- No Kiai?
- No Hitsounds?
- Resnap all your inherited timing sections, they must be placed in ticks on the timeline.
- I think you should think about mapping this in other way, some of the notes feel really weird and don't really fall in anything in the music. Maybe you should just map only to the lyrics and use sliders in empty places, talking about Easy.
- Please, use Distance Snap, there are lots of inconsistent spacings through the whole map (01:12:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6), 01:28:136 (3,4,5), 01:29:373 (1,2,3,4)...)

00:44:837 (1) - Finish the spinner 1/1 later? (next white tick)
01:32:157 (3) - Move 1/2 earlier (white tick).
02:20:713 (1) - Move the spinner 1/4 earlier (red tick) and finish it at 02:22:878.
02:43:445 (2) - Move 1/4 later (white tick).
02:50:249 (7) - ^
03:11:280 (1) - Starting from this note, the whole rest is completely out of rythm, re-snap this whole part, please ;~;

~My soft love~
- Capitalize "soft love" in the diff's name please.
- No Hitsounds?
- Your kiai time is too long. You should use it only for choruses and not having it active at breaks.
- Resnap all your inherited timing sections, they must be placed in ticks on the timeline.
- Please, use Distance Snap, there are lots of inconsistent spacings through the whole map (00:21:331 (5), 00:33:083 (1), 00:51:639 (6)...)

00:17:311 (1) - Snap this slider to 1/2, the point that falls in a 1/4 beat sounds really weird.
00:30:300 (5,6) - The endpoint of (5) and (6) don't fall in any note in the music, you should remap this part :/
00:43:289 (7) - Finish the slider 1/2 earlier (white tick).
01:30:915 (9) - Make this a single slider with no repeats that finishes at 01:31:843 (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88767). The repeat and end points doesn't fall in any note in the music.
01:45:142 (3) - You should really move this away, that overlap can be unrankable.
02:04:625 (7) - Finish this slider 1/2 earlier (white tick).
02:52:561 (4,5) - Delete (4) and move (5) to where (4) was in the timeline. The endpoint of (5) sounds weird.
03:17:921 (1) - Start this spinner 1/2 earlier? (white tick)
03:51:631 (1) - Finish this spinner 1/2 later (white tick).
04:03:692 (2) - Replace this slider with something else, it doesn't follow the music at all...

~TheVileOne's complex love~
- Capitalize "complex love" in the name of the diff please.
- Why is HeatKai in Tags? Should it be there?
- Um... what is this timing? x.x Follow the timing on all the other diffs please, this one isn't even right :/
- You should really add more hitsounds. The map sounds too plain in some places.
- I don't really like the huge difference of spacing from the easier diff to this (and the harder diff as well). There are so many jumps and spacing changes that don't really fit the music and they end being confusing and making the spacing through the diff so inconsistent :c

00:28:755 (8) - Make this a New Combo if you want to leave this jump.
00:50:095 (8,9,10,11) - Random spacing? There's nothing in the music going on to make jumps like these. But if you wanna leave them, make (8) a New Combo please.
01:29:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too inconsistent spacing, re-arrange this whole combo.
01:39:270 (4) - Fix spacing? If you wanna leave the jump, make this a New Combo.
01:50:404 (4) - New Combo to mark the spacing change (and maybe remove the one at 01:51:331 (1)).
02:18:858 (5) - New Combo to mark the spacing change.
03:46:988 (3) - Fix spacing.
03:51:936 (6) - New Combo to mark the spacing change.
03:54:720 (4,7,10) - Add New Combos to mark the spacing changes.
04:07:710 (3) - Either delete the repeat or add another repeat to this slider, it sounds weird right now.

~Pereira's nice love~
- Capitalize "nice love" in the diffs name, please.
- No hitsounds? Also, you should combine Soft and Normal hitsounds, Normal hitsounds don't sound nice at some places (the beginning, for example).

00:33:394 (8,9) - Unstack these notes?
01:24:115 (6) - New Combo to mark the speed/spacing change.
01:28:755 (5) - This slider looks so weird ;~;
01:30:920 (1,2,3,4,5) - Flip this combo horizontally? The spacing at (1) would make more sense xD
02:49:785 (6) - Unrankable slider, make the startpoint/endpoint clearly visible and the sliderpath intuitive to follow please.
02:55:971 (1) - This spinner is too long D:
04:10:198 (1) - Maybe delete this spinner? I think the last circle makes a good ending.

~Haku's unrequited love~
- Capitalize "unrequited love" in this diff's name please.
- Reduce the AR by 1 tick. It's way too fast compared to the really slow slider velocity you have here.
- Talking about the slider velocity, Why is it so slow? The easier diff has 1.50x, being so slow is really weird

00:08:239 (2,3) - I don't understand why do you make these 1/6 souble streams, there isn't anything in the music to justify them ._.
00:15:456 (5,6) - Fix spacing.
00:28:136 (1) - Hidden repeat arrow (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88806), please move the slider away.
01:00:713 (2,3) - Why a 1/6 stream? It doesn't follow the music, use a 1/4 stream instead >:
01:08:342 (1,2) - Fix spacing.
01:30:920 (1) - Finish this spinner 1/2 earlier (white tick).
01:45:456 (7,8) - This mini-jump is quite unexpected, you should move (7) to another place.
02:12:054 (5,6) - You should unstack these sliders, they're so short they can be confusing >.<
04:00:610 (4,5) - Fix spacing? This spacing is really weird even as a jump.
04:02:157 (9) - Oops? xD
04:06:950 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier (red tick).

Well, I guess it's obvious seeing the huge modpost but this map needs a lot of improvement ;_; The spread is so weird, there isn't a curve of difficulty since from one diff to another the difference of spacing/slider velocity is so different that is impossible to see which one is the hard or which one is the insane >:

Good luck with this~

h h h hi! \ºoº/

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi~

Storyboard Mod

~Thoughts and Suggestions~
[*] The lyrics are a bit hard to see with the background you have in [No Love], consider using a different image.

~Issues and Adjustments~
[*] With the name change you did, you forgot to change the name of the .osb file, so right now the storyboard doesn't show anymore. Please fix the name of your .osb file.
[*] You're no longer using wallpaper-school-days-anime, remove it from the folder. Remember to do a Full Submit when you update after doing this (or maybe you can use it for [No Love] and remove the white-y one...)
[*] Remove the unnecessary transparency in all your images, please.
[*] You should re-arrange the texts, they aren't alligned between them and the background (compare the allignments of this and this, for example).
[*] [No Love] doesn't have any butterfly/name in it.

ALL DONE

03:29:992 - hoka ni wa nani mo hoshi kunai appears at the bottom of the screen instead of at the top, and it sometimes covers the mapper's name (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/82993).ups sorry and done

~Pereira's nice love~
- Capitalize "nice love" in the diffs name, please.done
- No hitsounds? Also, you should combine Soft and Normal hitsounds, Normal hitsounds don't sound nice at some places (the beginning, for example).ok done but i didn´t change Soft only kiai time

00:33:394 (8,9) - Unstack these notes? done
01:24:115 (6) - New Combo to mark the speed/spacing change.done
01:28:755 (5) - This slider looks so weird ;~;done
01:30:920 (1,2,3,4,5) - Flip this combo horizontally? The spacing at (1) would make more sense xDdone
02:49:785 (6) - Unrankable slider, make the startpoint/endpoint clearly visible and the sliderpath intuitive to follow please.done
02:55:971 (1) - This spinner is too long D:done but i have questions i can make break time 40 sec?
04:10:198 (1) - Maybe delete this spinner? I think the last circle makes a good ending. done

Thank you ! looking my diff

Download: Haruko Momoi - Let Me Love You (-Sekai-) [Nice Love].osu

Sekai if you have free time call me in-game because i have explain you with SB thank you

star





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this is my map(dear my friend)

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28714

~Haku's unrequited love~
- Capitalize "unrequited love" in this diff's name please.
- Reduce the AR by 1 tick. It's way too fast compared to the really slow slider velocity you have here.
- Talking about the slider velocity, Why is it so slow? The easier diff has 1.50x, being so slow is really weird
it's a mapping choose, as i wanted the diff to feel slow
00:08:239 (2,3) - I don't understand why do you make these 1/6 souble streams, there isn't anything in the music to justify them ._. i did an error as it's in 1/8 ( i hear a guitar chord here )
00:15:456 (5,6) - Fix spacing.
00:28:136 (1) - Hidden repeat arrow (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88806), please move the slider away. Rotated it
01:00:713 (2,3) - Why a 1/6 stream? It doesn't follow the music, use a 1/4 stream instead >: the 1/4 stream follow the music even worser i instead tweaked it in 1/8
01:08:342 (1,2) - Fix spacing.
01:30:920 (1) - Finish this spinner 1/2 earlier (white tick).
01:45:456 (7,8) - This mini-jump is quite unexpected, you should move (7) to another place. Well, 01:45:765 (8) - is simply 01:44:837 (6) - mirrored
02:12:054 (5,6) - You should unstack these sliders, they're so short they can be confusing >.<
04:00:610 (4,5) - Fix spacing? This spacing is really weird even as a jump.
04:02:157 (9) - Oops? xD
04:06:950 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier (red tick). sounded to early, moved it 1/8 earlier

Download: Haruko Momoi - Let Me Love You - Remix Version (- S e k a i -) [Haku's Unrequited Love].osu

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The video offset : 2500

your sb is the name only , so no worry.

Star ^^ ~

why my name at the tags actually -_- ?

the only thing I regret is that i cannot mod this through my cellphone, so star

Neptunus wrote:

the only thing I regret is that i cannot mod this through my cellphone, so star

thank you ya sure you cant mod it in call phone

ilu

SEKAI , remove my name from the tags !