Giga & suzumu feat.Kagamine Rin - Undead Enemy · forum

Ryuusei Aika

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Ryuusei Aika 2016-08-31T15:35:46+00:00

来了
是不是有外国友人啊，那我再多打一句
HI~
这图太有趣了，再加上我六个难度只憋出来了五句话，最重要的是因为giga是我本命p，所以来个星

General

tag不一致：Insane的是“cut version __Ag No_Gu _MiaoFUuU_ KittyAdventure”，其他难度是“cut version __Ag No_Gu _MiaoFUuU_ KittyAdventure gokugohan12468”
kiai时间不一致：easy和normal是后面一整段，其他难度中间断开了一小截，建议统一一下

Kitty's Easy

00:20:270 (1) - try to avoid this tiny overlap to make ur map more clean

Normal

00:56:000 (2) - 你这里要是跟人声的话，建议把这个滑条做成1/1的然后放在00:55:832 - 这里，你看是不是好点

Ag's Hard

00:18:837 - 这有个鼓点，在这里加个note做一个连打感觉好点

Gu's Insane

00:22:040 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - 这一部分对于insane难度来说是不是有点超纲了，一般~180bpm这种间距的串感觉只会在5*+看到
00:47:742 (3) - 迷惑性感觉有点强，因为你后面00:48:163 (5,6,1) - 是两两隔1/4拍的，觉得把这个note移到靠近2那里会比较好

Last edited by Ryuusei Aika 2016-08-31T15:41:48+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

liangv587

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liangv587 2016-08-31T15:39:04+00:00

阿西吧，我怎么接了个这种歌。不过图已经没什么问题可以找了，水水

[Insane]
00:21:618 (1) - 不是最高难度，这么长的串有可能被搞事，最好不要超过9个
01:00:382 (4) - 全篇那么多3/4这个怎么不用，可以用3/4滑条啊，还可以加点速

[MiaoFUuU's Insane]
00:43:191 (1,2) - 交换位置制造一个来回跳
00:44:540 (1) - ctrl+g，然后00:45:719 (4,2) - 交换位置，flow会不会更好点

[Kitty's Easy]
00:20:270 (1) - 要不多叠点？少了不好看
00:21:618 (3,4) - 3上翘，4下翘，flow好些
00:56:337 (2) - flow被破坏了，不用执着于包

wajinshu

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wajinshu 2016-08-31T15:42:44+00:00

Sadly not the full version T_T

Lobelia

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Lobelia 2016-08-31T23:34:42+00:00

wajinshu wrote:
Sadly not the full version T_T

I'm lazy

__Ag

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Joined July 2011

__Ag 2016-09-01T00:40:34+00:00

Neanmoins wrote:
Ag's Hard
00:18:837 - 这有个鼓点，在这里加个note做一个连打感觉好点hard里面省一些轻的音也无妨，这个就这样了

感谢摸得

Lobelia

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Lobelia 2016-09-01T04:00:18+00:00

Neanmoins wrote:
来了
是不是有外国友人啊，那我再多打一句
HI~
这图太有趣了，再加上我六个难度只憋出来了五句话，最重要的是因为giga是我本命p，所以来个星

General
tag不一致：Insane的是“cut version __Ag No_Gu _MiaoFUuU_ KittyAdventure”，其他难度是“cut version __Ag No_Gu _MiaoFUuU_ KittyAdventure gokugohan12468”
kiai时间不一致：easy和normal是后面一整段，其他难度中间断开了一小截，建议统一一下好，都改了

Normal
00:56:000 (2) - 你这里要是跟人声的话，建议把这个滑条做成1/1的然后放在00:55:832 - 这里，你看是不是好点咦？这个没关系吧，我觉得现在这样比较好

Lobelia

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Lobelia 2016-09-01T04:03:06+00:00

liangv587 wrote:
阿西吧，我怎么接了个这种歌。不过图已经没什么问题可以找了，水水

[Insane]
00:21:618 (1) - 不是最高难度，这么长的串有可能被搞事，最好不要超过9个曲子已经剪了，不能太善良
01:00:382 (4) - 全篇那么多3/4这个怎么不用，可以用3/4滑条啊，还可以加点速我觉得结尾这里平一点比较好

[MiaoFUuU's Insane]
fix those by his permision
00:43:191 (1,2) - 交换位置制造一个来回跳我觉得这两个FLOW都差不多，可以不改
00:44:540 (1) - ctrl+g，然后00:45:719 (4,2) - 交换位置，flow会不会更好点貌似不是很好改ORZ，先这样，我到时候问问本人这里要不要改

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2016-09-03T11:28:36+00:00

liangv587 wrote:
[Kitty's Easy]
00:20:270 (1) - 要不多叠点？少了不好看. Fixed from previous mod!
00:21:618 (3,4) - 3上翘，4下翘，flow好些. I think the flow is fine
00:56:337 (2) - flow被破坏了，不用执着于包. Fixed a bit blanket and it's can be readed ^^

@Neanmoins: Fixed! ^^
Thank you for mod, guys :3

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Lobelia

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Lobelia 2016-09-03T11:58:47+00:00

Wow,kitty you can read chinese?
really cool.
XD

No_Gu

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No_Gu 2016-09-04T11:48:15+00:00

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420,80,14877,5,0,0:0:0:0:
443,111,14961,1,0,2:0:0:0:
453,150,15045,1,0,2:0:0:0:
448,189,15129,1,0,2:0:0:0:
427,223,15214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,324,15382,1,0,2:0:0:0:
179,112,15551,5,0,0:0:0:0:
216,100,15635,1,0,2:0:0:0:
256,101,15719,1,0,2:0:0:0:
291,119,15803,1,0,2:0:0:0:
317,149,15888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,362,16056,1,0,2:0:0:0:
221,215,16225,6,0,L|125:219,1,80,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
380,248,16562,2,0,L|476:244,1,80,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
299,294,16899,2,0,L|303:169,1,120,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
302,174,17236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,330,17405,1,0,2:0:0:0:
210,345,17573,6,0,B|147:368|94:335|94:335|112:324|123:298,1,160
60,185,18079,2,0,P|45:237|52:268,1,80,0|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,135,18416,2,0,P|109:96|79:86,1,80,0|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,231,18753,2,0,P|194:217|217:196,1,80,0|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,107,19090,5,0,2:0:0:0:
284,107,19174,1,0,2:0:0:0:
284,107,19259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,214,19427,1,0,2:0:0:0:
167,98,19596,2,0,L|171:10,1,80,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
329,214,19933,2,0,L|333:302,1,80,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
109,226,20270,6,0,L|153:218,1,40,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
269,151,20438,2,0,L|313:159,1,40,0|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
443,196,20607,2,0,L|446:114,1,80,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
447,91,20944,6,0,L|393:100,1,40,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
253,181,21112,2,0,L|199:171,1,40,0|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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39,21,21618,5,2,0:0:0:0:
113,198,21787,2,0,P|75:221|26:222,1,80,0|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,251,22040,1,2,2:0:0:0:
127,258,22124,1,2,2:0:0:0:
176,248,22208,1,2,2:0:0:0:
220,211,22292,1,0,1:0:0:0:
252,159,22377,1,2,2:0:0:0:
256,98,22461,1,2,2:0:0:0:
240,37,22545,1,2,2:0:0:0:
290,77,22629,1,0,1:0:0:0:
348,89,22714,1,2,2:0:0:0:
409,85,22798,1,2,2:0:0:0:
466,61,22882,1,2,2:0:0:0:
508,16,22967,5,4,0:0:0:0:
486,163,23135,1,0,2:0:0:0:
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438,271,23641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
391,119,23809,1,0,2:0:0:0:
438,271,23978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
391,119,24146,1,0,2:0:0:0:
366,336,24315,6,0,P|322:345|273:331,1,80,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
220,288,24568,1,0,2:0:0:0:
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328,259,24989,2,0,L|321:136,1,120,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
254,101,25326,2,0,L|258:21,1,80,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
188,162,25663,5,4,0:0:0:0:
33,117,25832,2,0,P|79:110|118:121,1,80,0|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,243,26169,1,0,2:0:0:0:
319,199,26337,2,0,L|416:203,1,80,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
183,243,26674,2,0,L|86:239,1,80,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
278,286,27011,5,0,0:0:0:0:
231,168,27180,1,0,2:0:0:0:
231,168,27264,1,0,2:0:0:0:
231,168,27349,2,0,P|222:128|226:85,1,80,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
294,28,27686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,73,27854,1,2,2:0:0:0:
330,48,28023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,53,28191,1,2,2:0:0:0:
365,68,28360,6,0,L|360:196,1,120,4|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
311,245,28697,2,0,L|315:355,1,80,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
160,176,29034,2,0,B|213:145|272:171|272:171|264:142|229:133,1,160
228,252,29540,1,0,2:0:0:0:
228,252,29624,1,0,2:0:0:0:
228,252,29708,6,0,P|220:290|225:333,1,80,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
390,176,30045,2,0,P|398:138|393:95,1,80,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
313,46,30382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,135,30551,1,0,2:0:0:0:
399,14,30719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,85,30888,2,0,L|122:82,1,80,0|4,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,46,31225,5,0,2:0:0:0:
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305,135,31731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,266,31899,2,0,L|32:263,1,80,0|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,310,32236,6,0,P|261:275|255:231,1,80,0|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,83,32573,1,0,2:0:0:0:
343,83,32658,1,0,2:0:0:0:
343,83,32742,2,0,P|337:118|343:162,1,80,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
404,229,33079,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,169,33247,1,0,2:0:0:0:
343,162,33416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
255,231,33585,1,0,2:0:0:0:
356,278,33753,6,0,L|480:272,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
509,195,34259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,341,34427,2,0,P|263:298|276:231,1,120.000004577637
355,191,34933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,216,35101,6,0,L|100:211,1,60.0000022888184
233,129,35438,2,0,L|151:124,1,60.0000022888184
279,34,35776,2,0,L|197:29,1,60.0000022888184
193,26,36450,6,0,L|312:18,1,120.000004577637
387,65,36955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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410,159,37629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,159,37967,5,4,0:0:0:0:
292,243,38219,1,4,0:0:0:0:
148,230,38472,1,4,2:0:0:0:
148,230,38978,5,0,2:0:0:0:
218,170,39146,1,4,0:0:0:0:
130,139,39315,2,0,L|43:141,1,80,0|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,253,39652,5,0,2:0:0:0:
224,193,39820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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235,84,40832,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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332,56,41169,2,0,L|428:62,1,80,0|0,1:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
135,120,41506,2,0,L|39:114,1,80,8|0,1:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,145,42096,1,0,2:0:0:0:
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428,207,42517,1,0,1:0:0:0:
507,50,42686,2,0,P|513:90|504:129,1,80,0|8,2:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,258,43023,1,0,2:0:0:0:
293,77,43192,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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218,155,43528,1,8,0:0:0:0:
398,103,43697,1,0,2:0:0:0:
353,285,43865,2,0,P|316:302|271:299,1,80,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
297,212,44202,1,8,0:0:0:0:
466,262,44371,5,0,2:0:0:0:
406,332,44539,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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489,268,45045,5,0,2:0:0:0:
429,338,45213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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512,275,45719,1,0,2:0:0:0:
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112,292,46225,2,0,P|72:284|28:292,1,80,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
233,264,46562,2,0,P|253:210|238:149,1,120,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
172,99,46899,1,8,0:0:0:0:
333,152,47068,1,0,2:0:0:0:
172,99,47236,6,0,L|69:105,1,80,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
26,168,47489,2,0,P|19:208|27:250,1,80,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
86,307,47742,1,2,2:0:0:0:
112,323,47910,2,0,L|200:316,1,80,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
271,354,48163,2,0,P|289:304|271:234,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
251,212,48500,1,2,2:0:0:0:
217,196,48585,6,0,L|126:192,1,80,4|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
281,109,48922,2,0,L|285:18,1,80,4|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
368,172,49259,2,0,L|459:176,1,80,4|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
304,259,49596,2,0,L|300:350,1,80,4|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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461,264,52124,1,2,2:0:0:0:
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420,345,52461,1,2,2:0:0:0:
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118,310,52967,2,0,L|21:305,1,80,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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459,105,54315,5,4,0:0:0:0:
382,94,54652,5,4,0:0:0:0:
230,67,54989,5,4,0:0:0:0:
5,19,55326,6,0,B|36:126|36:126|12:174,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,224,55832,1,0,2:0:0:0:
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187,92,59708,1,4,0:0:0:0:
233,263,59877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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suzumu在tag里重了，镜音也有但是和.没空格不知道能不能搜到你可以删掉试一下
我之前suzumu一首的video里面看s应该是小写的你再看一下
日文里面feat.和镜音没空格英文里有空格看看哪个是对的

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

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Lobelia 2016-09-04T11:49:23+00:00

No_Gu wrote:
suzumu在tag里重了，镜音也有但是和.没空格不知道能不能搜到你可以删掉试一下
我之前suzumu一首的video里面看s应该是小写的你再看一下
日文里面feat.和镜音没空格英文里有空格看看哪个是对的

好!检查了一下英文那里空格去掉了，本人投稿是小写s,改了

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined April 2012

neonat 2016-09-09T16:06:11+00:00

The song is an utaite original, unfortunately this cover is not in any albums as of yet.

Artist Unicode: ギガ&スズム feat.鏡音リン
Artist: Giga & suzumu feat.Kagamine Rin

日文里面根本没用空格，所以看出来好像没有空格。换成英文后那个‘&’就会分那些名字。

That's how I see it, and also discussed this with KwaN too, but I think the concept is still being discussed

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

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Lobelia 2016-09-10T02:48:36+00:00

neonat wrote:
The song is an utaite original, unfortunately this cover is not in any albums as of yet.

Artist Unicode: ギガ&スズム feat.鏡音リン
Artist: Giga & suzumu feat.Kagamine Rin

日文里面根本没用空格，所以看出来好像没有空格。换成英文后那个‘&’就会分那些名字。

That's how I see it, and also discussed this with KwaN too, but I think the concept is still being discussed

Thanks a lot!I will fix these soon!

Kirisakiii

186 posts

Joined February 2015

Kirisakiii 2016-09-28T04:52:40+00:00

Undead Enemyyyy <3
Random mod from Offline #Modreqs~
I don’t know if this is gonna help but

General

Suggestion~ Maybe adding combo colors that follows the bg would be nice

Normal

00:35:944 (5) – Slightly unreadable. Maybe moving it to 00:35:776 (5) instead

Insane

00:40:495 (3) – I don’t really mod Insanes but maybe ending this slider at 00:40:663 would be better? Just a suggestion
00:54:989 (4) – And maybe end this one at 00:55:158?

Wow its hard to find fauIts here hahah I had a lot of fun modding this tho
Hope this helps, even if it’s a little ;w;
Good luck on your beatmap

Lobelia

858 posts

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Lobelia 2016-09-28T07:16:05+00:00

Kirisakiii wrote:
Undead Enemyyyy <3
Random mod from Offline #Modreqs~
I don’t know if this is gonna help but

General
Suggestion~ Maybe adding combo colors that follows the bg would be nice combo colors follow the bg might seems hard to read
Normal
00:35:944 (5) – Slightly unreadable. Maybe moving it to 00:35:776 (5) insteadI follow the vocal here so no change
Insane
00:40:495 (3) – I don’t really mod Insanes but maybe ending this slider at 00:40:663 would be better? Just a suggestion i hear the vocal end at the blue line so i want to keep
00:54:989 (4) – And maybe end this one at 00:55:158?i follow the same ryhthm as the previous parts

Wow its hard to find fauIts here hahah I had a lot of fun modding this tho
Hope this helps, even if it’s a little ;w;
Good luck on your beatmap

Thanks to mods~~

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2016-09-28T08:20:32+00:00

Hello!
Sugestion,

Easy

00:01:394 (1) - Try use soft sampleset http://puu.sh/rqqnl/a9eec30089.jpg to make the hit sound more quite
00:06:787 (1,2,3) - Umm try move to x:484 y:128? symetrical reason
00:44:540 (1) - Ctrl+j that one? make the shape more paralel with 00:45:888 (3) - could be great http://puu.sh/rqqsA/f74e963d80.jpg

Normal

00:01:394 (1) - Try use soft sampleset http://puu.sh/rqqnl/a9eec30089.jpg to make the hit sound more quite
00:23:304 (2) - Try to ctrl+h that one? I think the flow on 00:23:304 (2,3) - will less sharp and more natural http://puu.sh/rqqHC/d23fca10c4.jpg
00:49:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A long consecutive circles like that seems too much on a Normal fast bpm, I think you can try to replace some circle with 1/1 slider to make the rhythm easier

Hard

00:45:888 (1,2,3) - The drum sampleset on that one seems out of place imo, it is literally you don't use drum sampleset elsewhere on this diff

Miao Insane

00:37:967 (2) - Doesn't need an nc imo, the polarity on that one played nice on that 3/4 slider
00:46:393 (2) - Actually it played better if that one not stacked, try to use regular spacing or jump to improve the gameplay a bit like you did on 00:43:191 (1,2,1,2) - so at least both part more consistent

Insane

00:22:292 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Uhm seems overmapped imo, literally the drum sequences end on 00:22:292 - . So the stream after 00:22:292 (9) - not really supported by the drum or synth

Fun mapset, see you soon on qualified

Kyouren

5,582 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2016-09-28T08:41:36+00:00

I will check soon! :3

Lobelia

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Lobelia 2016-09-28T08:48:22+00:00

KittyAdventure wrote:
I will check soon! :3

me too~i have a class tonight,so i will fix these after class~

Lobelia

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Lobelia 2016-09-28T13:23:22+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Hello!
Sugestion,

Normal
00:01:394 (1) - Try use soft sampleset http://puu.sh/rqqnl/a9eec30089.jpg to make the hit sound more quite
00:23:304 (2) - Try to ctrl+h that one? I think the flow on 00:23:304 (2,3) - will less sharp and more natural http://puu.sh/rqqHC/d23fca10c4.jpg
00:49:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A long consecutive circles like that seems too much on a Normal fast bpm, I think you can try to replace some circle with 1/1 slider to make the rhythm easier

Insane
00:22:292 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Uhm seems overmapped imo, literally the drum sequences end on 00:22:292 - . So the stream after 00:22:292 (9) - not really supported by the drum or synth
Fun mapset, see you soon on qualified

all fix,really useful mods

Kirisakiii

186 posts

Joined February 2015

Kirisakiii 2016-09-29T01:22:18+00:00

gasp I'm new to modding so I felt like I didn't help at all QAQ sorry I guess still have a long way to go but yeah I have color suggestions. And of course, you can choose to ignore this

(no need kudosu or anything, just a suggestion)

[ Abhor ] wrote:
combo colors follow the bg might seems hard to read

So yeah if you're interested, you can try this

Hopefully this one isn't hard to read. Well, for me at least. It just visually looks more appealing

color code

[Colours]

Combo1 : 0,0,64
Combo2 : 129,129,129
Combo3 : 74,74,255
Combo4 : 0,0,230

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Lobelia 2016-09-29T04:17:20+00:00

Kirisakiii wrote:
gasp I'm new to modding so I felt like I didn't help at all QAQ sorry I guess still have a long way to go but yeah I have color suggestions. And of course, you can choose to ignore this (no need kudosu or anything, just a suggestion)
I think kudosu for everyone who really want to give mappers advice and i'm very glad to see you give me a mod~~I give it for encouraging.You can mod better in the future!So never be upset!

[ Abhor ] wrote:
combo colors follow the bg might seems hard to read
So yeah if you're interested, you can try this Hopefully this one isn't hard to read. Well, for me at least. It just visually looks more appealingi'm glad to take your suggestion and it's really good but i have to talk with other mappers for their diffs,if they agree to change their combo colors then i will change.
color code
[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,0,64
Combo2 : 129,129,129
Combo3 : 74,74,255
Combo4 : 0,0,230

_MiaoFUuU_

314 posts

Joined April 2014

_MiaoFUuU_ 2016-09-30T05:02:54+00:00

@Mako Sakata all fixed

^

 osu file format v14

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Tags:vocaloid △○□× cut version miwasiba __Ag No_Gu _MiaoFUuU_ KittyAdventure gokugohan12468
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Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Lobelia 2016-10-07T02:37:53+00:00

UPDATE!

KittyAdventure wrote:
I will check soon! :3

Kitty,where are you?

Prophecy

1,794 posts

Joined December 2013

Prophecy 2016-10-09T04:53:03+00:00

[ Abhor ] wrote:
UPDATE!
KittyAdventure wrote:
I will check soon! :3
Kitty,where are you?

In your home.

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2016-10-09T23:14:24+00:00

[General]
offset +5ms 感觉打的更准一些
用的是default颜色？至少把绿色给改了，现在跟bg没有什么关联性
Normal以上的diff开头都没有转盘，为什么不加上呢？

[Kitty's Easy]
00:05:438 - spinner的尾巴音量要弄小一些

[Normal]
00:18:922 (4,5,6) - 这里摆出个正三角形会好看一些
00:36:450 (1,2) - 没包好
00:53:978 (5) - 这里可以多加个NC突出节奏

[Ag's Hard]
00:17:910 (1,2) - 把圈和滑条反过来，这样00:18:079的vocal会有emphasis
00:26:843 (6,1) - 这里间距最好保持一致

[MiaoFUuU's Insane]
00:17:573 (1,4) - 叠到一起
00:27:011 (1,2,3) - 怎么听怎么不对劲，应该是这样

SPOILER

00:43:528 (1) - 去掉NC，可以加在00:43:865 (3)
00:53:978 (1,1,1,1,1) - 这星星能摆的更工整一些

[Insane]
00:15:551 (5,6,7) - 这里试试这种节奏

SPOILER

00:44:118 (6) - 这个间距非常的难打，前一个滑条很容易出100，最好缩短一下距离
00:47:236 (1,1) - 这里最好跟vocal

SPOILER

00:54:652 - 这里是重音，放个圈然后缩短之前的滑条
00:58:023 (1) - 可以拉长成一个折返滑条，这样正好在00:59:034结束

[Gu's Insane]
00:37:967 (1,2,3) - 这个我老是打不准，间距再拉大一点试试
00:47:742 (3,4) - 这里最好用NC区分开来，怎么看现在都是1/4的节奏
01:00:719 - 加个圈? 这样跟别的难度一起结束

ok改完了叫我

_MiaoFUuU_

314 posts

Joined April 2014

_MiaoFUuU_ 2016-10-10T03:11:43+00:00

@LFJ大大 all fixed

^

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Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Lobelia 2016-10-10T04:24:39+00:00

Fix mods get Kiity's permission~

jonathanlfj wrote:
[General]
offset +5ms 感觉打的更准一些fix
用的是default颜色？至少把绿色给改了，现在跟bg没有什么关联性fix
Normal以上的diff开头都没有转盘，为什么不加上呢？因为E,N难度不加转盘很容易出现榜上全是一个分数拉不开差距的问题，所以只有E,N开头加了

[Normal]
00:18:922 (4,5,6) - 这里摆出个正三角形会好看一些
00:36:450 (1,2) - 没包好
00:53:978 (5) - 这里可以多加个NC突出节奏
all fix

[Insane]
00:15:551 (5,6,7) - 这里试试这种节奏
SPOILER
00:44:118 (6) - 这个间距非常的难打，前一个滑条很容易出100，最好缩短一下距离这里删掉了蓝线的圈，感觉舒服多了！
00:47:236 (1,1) - 这里最好跟vocal这里想做成对称梗，然后白线也有很强的重音鼓，所以不是很想改
SPOILER
00:54:652 - 这里是重音，放个圈然后缩短之前的滑条
00:58:023 (1) - 可以拉长成一个折返滑条，这样正好在00:59:034结束
other problems all fix

[Kitty's Easy]
00:05:438 - spinner的尾巴音量要弄小一些改成soft音效了

ok改完了叫我

谢谢lfj

Mako Sakata wrote:
Hello!
Sugestion,

Easy
00:01:394 (1) - Try use soft sampleset http://puu.sh/rqqnl/a9eec30089.jpg to make the hit sound more quite
00:06:787 (1,2,3) - Umm try move to x:484 y:128? symetrical reason
00:44:540 (1) - Ctrl+j that one? make the shape more paralel with 00:45:888 (3) - could be great http://puu.sh/rqqsA/f74e963d80.jpg
all fix

Last edited by Lobelia 2016-10-11T09:03:48+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

__Ag

597 posts

Joined July 2011

__Ag 2016-10-10T05:55:03+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
[Ag's Hard]
00:17:910 (1,2) - 把圈和滑条反过来，这样00:18:079的vocal会有emphasis
00:26:843 (6,1) - 这里间距最好保持一致

All fixed，thank you

改

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No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2016-10-10T13:09:05+00:00

all fixed

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191,188,56005,2,0,L|277:195,1,80,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
512,180,56342,2,0,L|426:173,1,80,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
359,287,56679,6,0,L|347:127,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,63,57185,1,0,2:0:0:0:
115,167,57354,2,0,P|172:195|255:158,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,157,57775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,157,57859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,337,58028,5,4,0:0:0:0:
386,337,58365,2,0,L|391:295,3,40,2|0|2|0,2:0|2:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
441,239,58702,2,0,L|436:197,3,40,2|0|2|0,2:0|2:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
430,160,59207,6,0,L|271:166,1,160
187,92,59713,1,4,0:0:0:0:
233,263,59882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,92,60050,2,0,P|224:34|237:101,1,160,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,308,60724,5,4,0:0:0:0:

你artist那边&之间好像没空格啊...unicode这边有...不用统一一下吗

Lobelia

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Lobelia 2016-10-10T14:39:34+00:00

@No_Gu,这个我找neonat审核过了，他们说英文没有没空格的用法，英文的&要带上空格，但是日文原版就是没有空格的。具体前面他有给我post!

neonat wrote:
The song is an utaite original, unfortunately this cover is not in any albums as of yet.

Artist Unicode: ギガ&スズム feat.鏡音リン
Artist: Giga & suzumu feat.Kagamine Rin

日文里面根本没用空格，所以看出来好像没有空格。换成英文后那个‘&’就会分那些名字。

That's how I see it, and also discussed this with KwaN too, but I think the concept is still being discussed

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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jonathanlfj 2016-10-15T04:49:45+00:00

first two green lines on easy is unsnapped

00:56:679 - green line on insane is unsnapped

fix these and i can bubble

Lobelia

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Lobelia 2016-10-15T05:20:32+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
first two green lines on easy is unsnapped

00:56:679 - green line on insane is unsnapped

fix these and i can bubble

OK!fixed

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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jonathanlfj 2016-10-15T06:59:47+00:00

ok

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2016-10-16T22:28:10+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
ok

raririn

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raririn 2016-11-03T17:21:50+00:00

undead enemy好啊啥时候q

Lobelia

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Lobelia 2016-11-04T00:34:03+00:00

raririn wrote:
undead enemy好啊啥时候q

BN说最近比较忙，还要等几天！

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2016-11-04T13:06:00+00:00

Gu's Insane:
- 00:11:005 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is clearly ignoring the most prominent sound in the song. What is this even mapped to? If I check the previous pattern I clearly see you were following the synth sound, so why are you ignoring it now? Is there such a strong instrument I'm missing?
Idk what exactly you had in mind anyway, but imo the rhythm should be something like this, or in any case, something that uses those breaks into the pattern.
- 00:42:101 (2,3) - that weird stuck bothers me, mostly because it never happens again in the map: how it should look like
- 01:00:050 (4,1) - again, rhythm here is a bit weird. You prioritize 01:00:724 (1) - over the beat at 01:00:387 - which is a bit strange imo. Rhythm reference but it can also work with 2 circles instead of the slider if you don't like it.

Insane:
- 00:06:455 (1) - I'd rather increase SV a little more and make it into something like this. Honestly, that plain slider can't express that "WAO" in the music at all like that imo
- 00:10:837 (5) - this needs more emphasis, it's the strongest beat of the combo. What about stacking it on 00:10:163 (1) - ?
- 00:12:185 (1) - again, don't use SV in such a way, it changes nothing. Basically the difference between 00:12:185 (1,1) - is visually none, or at least not that noticeable. If you want to emphasize the acceleration on 00:12:185 (1) - use a higher SV (x1.50 feels fast enough but higher can be good too) and give a different shape to it. Actually, even just the different shape can improve the pattern by a lot. Lame example
- 00:17:578 (1) - same ^
- 00:14:882 (1) - what about stacking this on 00:15:556 (5) - ? You once again created a weak emphasis on a strong beat (namely 00:14:882 (1) - ) by using a curved flow for that part with constant spacing. Create more sharp angles if you want proper emphasis please
- 00:15:893 (7,2) - just pointing out that you should enable stacking in the editor and check how stacks behave, because you create some weird overlaps: Before --> After. You have to manually stack those
- 00:20:949 (3,6) - what about a ctrl + g on these? you once agasin waste emphasis on 3 which is a shame for the map
- 00:22:297 (9,10) - this is ignoring vocals, the instrument you are probably following here since there isn't anything better to follow. Better?
- 00:28:028 (6) - this beat needs more emphasis imo, so make sure to put more spacing between 00:27:859 (5,6) - than the spacing between 00:27:691 (4,5) - (aka, don't use constant DS there)
- 00:46:904 (1,1,1,1) - what is this? You're not following anything I can recognize in the song, or rather, I do recognize what you are following with the objects but their aim was surely different. What I'm saying is that those SV changes were meant to follow well vocal changes, but your rhythm is following drums, which doesn't make sense here. 00:47:241 (1) - this could easily be made 1/4 longer, while you could also add a beat at 00:47:831 -
- 00:53:983 - ohhh, this is how SV changes should work: along side different slider shapes. Take it as example and try to fix the patterns I mentioned above ^
- 00:59:207 (1) - uh, well, this is just personal, but it doesn't look that great lol. Is there any way to make it more "clean"?
- 01:00:387 (4,1) - these should be in the same combo imo, and moreover 4 should be unstacked from there, because you don't give it enough emphasis. Example

MiaoFUuU's Insane:
- 00:11:258 (4,2) - maybe try to avoid that tiny overlap: with stacking enabled
- 00:25:415 (4,5) - I generally try to avoid un-warranted triplets on slider ends, generally because they play badly. What about this instead?
- 00:38:983 (3) - I'd move this at 00:38:814 - . where the clap in the song is instead
- 00:55:331 (1,2) - distance them a little more, otherwise it feels like there's a 1/4 gap between them. Refer to 00:57:691 (3,1) - for example
- General combo-ing seems a bit unstable and at times too short:

00:07:466 (1,1) - remove NCs
00:08:477 (5) - add
00:08:814 (1) - remove
00:10:837 (1) - remove
00:11:005 (3) - add
00:11:511 (1) - remove
00:14:207 (1) - remove
00:15:556 (1) - remove
00:20:949 (1) - remove
00:22:297 (1) - remove
00:26:342 (1) - remove
00:32:578 (1) - remove
00:41:174 (1) - remove
you kinda screwed up with rhythm here, since the NC was supposed to be on 00:41:848 -
00:42:522 (1) - remove
00:43:196 (1,1) - remove
00:42:691 (2) - add
00:46:230 (1) - remove
00:53:983 (1,1,1,1) - special case. It is fine as it is, but since all of them use the same snap and spacing, making them a giant combo would fit better imo
01:00:050 (1,1) - remove
01:00:387 (2) - add

I guess that Combo-ing is something you still need to work on, umh...

Ag's Hard:
- 00:12:185 (1,1) - I'd rather follow vocals with a 1/1 slider like this instead, since the SV change you use there is kinda weak and moreover the shape of 00:12:185 (1) - is just the same as the others (which means no difference, hence no emphasis)
- 00:17:578 (1) - consistency
- 00:22:297 (1,2,3) - I'd rather not use such misleading rhythm for this difficulty, but it's your call here
- NCs should have went on 00:23:309 - and on 00:24:657 -
- other patterns look consistent, although not always clean. I would have used a little bit more basic SV on this map and avoided the 5 beats stream

Normal:
- 00:20:275 (1) - shouldn't this be a 1/2 slider too? It's the same as 00:20:612 (2) - to me
- 00:20:949 (3,4) - I'd turn them into a slider, considering the strong beat on 00:20:949 -
- 00:26:005 (2,3) - this is not the first one, but I just happened to notice it now. What are you following with this stuff? I was pretty sure you wanted to focus on vocals but that doesn't look like it (and neither in the previous spots now that I check again). Can you give a better place for these rhythms?
- 00:23:983 (3) - for example this one. I would rather have it a circle only, since vocals are pretty strong on 00:24:151 - , so with a circle you keep rhythm on drums which is regular
- 00:26:005 (2) - same here, the strong beat on vocals actually falls on 00:25:837 - which is what makes this one misleading again.
- 00:28:702 (2,3) - this one is good for example
- 00:43:196 (4) - I would have rather clicked on the tail here. Maybe remove the repeat and add a circle?

Kitty's Easy:
- 00:33:758 (1) - what is this spinner even following... Spinners are like sliders: they should follow an unique, long sound in the song, not an entire part of the song just because. Please map it instead...
- 00:58:028 (1,2) - the only 1/2 snap in the entire map... uhhh

General:
- I'd lower OD by 0.5 on Insane for better spread difficulty across the highest diffs
- I'd also lower a bit AR on the Hard for the same reason
- Just to confirm this: did Kitty ever ranked something with the old username? If that's not the case there is no reason to put a tag no one knows about, right?

Just returning the M4M~

Lobelia

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Lobelia 2016-11-04T16:13:32+00:00

~~Thank you MrSergio,I will fix them tomorrow!~~

MrSergio wrote:
Insane:
- 00:06:455 (1) - I'd rather increase SV a little more and make it into something like this. Honestly, that plain slider can't express that "WAO" in the music at all like that imo
- 00:10:837 (5) - this needs more emphasis, it's the strongest beat of the combo. What about stacking it on 00:10:163 (1) - ?fixed
- 00:12:185 (1) - again, don't use SV in such a way, it changes nothing. Basically the difference between 00:12:185 (1,1) - is visually none, or at least not that noticeable. If you want to emphasize the acceleration on 00:12:185 (1) - use a higher SV (x1.50 feels fast enough but higher can be good too) and give a different shape to it. Actually, even just the different shape can improve the pattern by a lot. Lame example
- 00:17:578 (1) - same ^
- 00:14:882 (1) - what about stacking this on 00:15:556 (5) - ? You once again created a weak emphasis on a strong beat (namely 00:14:882 (1) - ) by using a curved flow for that part with constant spacing. Create more sharp angles if you want proper emphasis pleasefixed
- 00:15:893 (7,2) - just pointing out that you should enable stacking in the editor and check how stacks behave, because you create some weird overlaps: Before --> After. You have to manually stack thosefixed
- 00:20:949 (3,6) - what about a ctrl + g on these? you once agasin waste emphasis on 3 which is a shame for the mapfixed
- 00:22:297 (9,10) - this is ignoring vocals, the instrument you are probably following here since there isn't anything better to follow. Better?fixed
- 00:28:028 (6) - this beat needs more emphasis imo, so make sure to put more spacing between 00:27:859 (5,6) - than the spacing between 00:27:691 (4,5) - (aka, don't use constant DS there)fixed
- 00:46:904 (1,1,1,1) - what is this? You're not following anything I can recognize in the song, or rather, I do recognize what you are following with the objects but their aim was surely different. What I'm saying is that those SV changes were meant to follow well vocal changes, but your rhythm is following drums, which doesn't make sense here. 00:47:241 (1) - this could easily be made 1/4 longer, while you could also add a beat at 00:47:831 - ok,i changed to follow the vocal
- 00:53:983 - ohhh, this is how SV changes should work: along side different slider shapes. Take it as example and try to fix the patterns I mentioned above ^
- 00:59:207 (1) - uh, well, this is just personal, but it doesn't look that great lol. Is there any way to make it more "clean"?i think its good enough
- 01:00:387 (4,1) - these should be in the same combo imo, and moreover 4 should be unstacked from there, because you don't give it enough emphasis. Exampleumm...i don't know how to respond this but i think 3 and 4 is sounded similar so i stack them!

Some opinions for those SV changes:I think you give me a really worthful advice for how to change the SV and make them better,i will pay more attention to these in the future,but i still have some my own viewpoints for this time!I think though i might make a not really nice SV changes but i still make a new colors to make them different from other parts and it's not a unrankable ,right?

Normal:
- 00:20:275 (1) - shouldn't this be a 1/2 slider too? It's the same as 00:20:612 (2) - to me
- 00:20:949 (3,4) - I'd turn them into a slider, considering the strong beat on 00:20:949 -
- 00:26:005 (2,3) - this is not the first one, but I just happened to notice it now. What are you following with this stuff? I was pretty sure you wanted to focus on vocals but that doesn't look like it (and neither in the previous spots now that I check again). Can you give a better place for these rhythms?
- 00:23:983 (3) - for example this one. I would rather have it a circle only, since vocals are pretty strong on 00:24:151 - , so with a circle you keep rhythm on drums which is regular
- 00:26:005 (2) - same here, the strong beat on vocals actually falls on 00:25:837 - which is what makes this one misleading again.
- 00:28:702 (2,3) - this one is good for example
- 00:43:196 (4) - I would have rather clicked on the tail here. Maybe remove the repeat and add a circle?

I will make a better rhythm!

General:
- I'd lower OD by 0.5 on Insane for better spread difficulty across the highest diffsok
- I'd also lower a bit AR on the Hard for the same reason
- Just to confirm this: did Kitty ever ranked something with the old username? If that's not the case there is no reason to put a tag no one knows about, right?

Just returning the M4M~
Thanks for modding!

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2016-11-06T10:18:22+00:00

Yes, i want everyone know my old nickname since it's almost mapper doing that! (Abhor, you can doing it without my permission)

Sonnyc

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Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2016-11-09T01:22:58+00:00

Easy.
00:58:028 (1) - This 1/2 felt unreasonably difficult in this level. Ending at 00:58:533 would be a more appropriate setting for difficulty, and for emphasizing the vocals. Even normal ends there. Having a harder rhythm than normal despite this being a guest difficulty didn't felt awesome in spreads.

Normal.
00:37:972 (3) - The rhythm was pretty complexed, and the current design felt a little confusing to read. Consider a new combo to indicate its abnormal rhythm.

Hard.
00:26:005 - 00:29:629 - 00:31:398 - You were mostly expressing every vocals. Leaving this empty didn't made much sense.
00:34:432 (2,3,4) - 00:37:129 (3,4,5) - This section of the music is pretty calm than any other sections in this song. Consider expressing these triples as a 1/4 reverse slider so that you can place a better intensity emphasis on other stronger parts.
00:53:983 (1,1,1,1) - Think of another placement please. The way you expressed this part of the song was the same as 00:49:938 (1,1,1,1,1,1) while there is a clear difference. Structure issue.

Miao Insane.
00:25:668 (1,2) - Could this 1/2 spacing be larger? Having such a close spacing on a 1/2 didn't felt consistent.
00:29:629 - Consider adding a note along the vocals.
00:41:258 (2,5) - These triple really feels overmapped. Remove these please.
00:55:331 (1,2) - Spacing is really bad to indicate a 1/2 rhythm. These needs a fix.

Insane.
00:15:893 (7,2,3,4) - Oh, did you changed this?
00:29:629 - Omitting this vocal line felt really awkward.
00:40:331 - The volume is 100% which is way too loud. Fix this.
00:47:241 (1,1) - Let me see the rhythm change here.
00:54:825 (3) - Adding a new combo here will be a consistent setting of a single combo at 00:53:983 (1).

Gu Insane.
00:35:106 (1,2,3) - The placement isn't properly aligned in terms of linear placements. Consider adjusting accordingly to make a more neat placement.
00:41:848 (1,2,3) - Stack in-game is pretty off. Try some manual stack to cure that.
00:42:691 (5,6,1) - (1) has a strong beat. (6) having a stronger jump didn't placed a proper emphasis. That sudden massive jump to a less strong beat felt highly inappropriate.
00:51:286 (1,3) - I believe removing combo at (1), and starting one from (3) will fit the songs and the pattern you are following much more effectively.

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