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Girls Dead Monster - Morning Dreamer

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Suzully
osu! Alumni
2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully
Thank you for request :P
SPOILER
General
  • Preview time of [Hard] is different from other diffs.
    Resnap green line.
Easy
  1. 00:55:072 ~ 01:07:715 (1) - I think this break time is not needed. Put some note?
  2. 02:03:643 (2,3) - I think easy player can't play with following this rhythm.
  3. 02:08:357 (1,2) - difficult pattern for easy player.
  4. 02:24:214 ~ 02:36:857 - same as previous one.
  5. 02:39:214 (3,4,5,6) - spacing
  6. 03:15:857 (1,2,3) - difficult pattern for easy player.
  7. 03:19:500 (5,6,7) - ^
  8. 03:27:215 (2) - same as Normal
  9. 03:41:143 (6) - spacing
Normal

  • I think SV1.50 is a little high for normal diff. Maybe...decrease it to 1.20~30?
  1. 00:13:929 (1,2,3,4) - wide spacing for normal player.
  2. 00:37:929 (1,2,3,4) - difficult patten for normal player.
  3. 00:42:857 (1) - delete it. and new combo at 00:43:072 (2).
  4. 01:00:857 (2) - put this slider at 01:01:072 and end it 01:01:500.
  5. 01:38:786 (4,1) - they are hidden by HP bar.
  6. 01:55:929 (4,5,1) - change pattern or delete (5).
  7. 02:49:715 (4,1) - spacing
  8. 03:27:215 (3) - OMG please make this slider's length to be twice as long as current one.
  9. 03:41:357 (x) - finish KIAI at this time.
Hard

  • I recommend you to use Slider Tick Rate 1.
  1. 00:39:643 (1,3,4,5) - not stacking them looks good for me.
  2. 00:53:572 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think almost players are confused by these spacing. Change pattern or...increasing AR by 1 maybe solve this problem.
  3. 00:58:072 (5,6,1) - Change them like this ↓. I feel your pattern don't follow vocal.
  4. 01:06:000 (2,3,4) - random spacing
  5. 01:22:072 (x) - finish KIAI at this time.
  6. 01:49:072 (1,2,3,4) - get them into shape like this↓?
  7. 01:59:143 (1,2,3,4) - close spacing
  8. 02:20:786 (5) - spacing
  9. 02:23:357 (5) - new combo
  10. 02:24:643 (2,3) - spacing
  11. 03:16:286 (x) - put a note
I love Girls Dead Monster <3
And I like this song very very much!! :oops:
Good luck! Star~
zsr123
357 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
zsr123

Suzully wrote:

Thank you for request :P
SPOILER
General
  • Preview time of [Hard] is different from other diffs.
    Resnap green line.
Easy
  1. 00:55:072 ~ 01:07:715 (1) - I think this break time is not needed. Put some note?
  2. 02:03:643 (2,3) - I think easy player can't play with following this rhythm.
  3. 02:08:357 (1,2) - difficult pattern for easy player.
  4. 02:24:214 ~ 02:36:857 - same as previous one.
  5. 02:39:214 (3,4,5,6) - spacing
  6. 03:15:857 (1,2,3) - difficult pattern for easy player.
  7. 03:19:500 (5,6,7) - ^
  8. 03:27:215 (2) - same as Normal
  9. 03:41:143 (6) - spacing
Normal

  • I think SV1.50 is a little high for normal diff. Maybe...decrease it to 1.20~30?
  1. 00:13:929 (1,2,3,4) - wide spacing for normal player.
  2. 00:37:929 (1,2,3,4) - difficult patten for normal player.
  3. 00:42:857 (1) - delete it. and new combo at 00:43:072 (2).
  4. 01:00:857 (2) - put this slider at 01:01:072 and end it 01:01:500.
  5. 01:38:786 (4,1) - they are hidden by HP bar.
  6. 01:55:929 (4,5,1) - change pattern or delete (5).
  7. 02:49:715 (4,1) - spacing
  8. 03:27:215 (3) - OMG please make this slider's length to be twice as long as current one.
  9. 03:41:357 (x) - finish KIAI at this time.
Hard

  • I recommend you to use Slider Tick Rate 1.
  1. 00:39:643 (1,3,4,5) - not stacking them looks good for me.
  2. 00:53:572 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think almost players are confused by these spacing. Change pattern or...increasing AR by 1 maybe solve this problem.
  3. 00:58:072 (5,6,1) - Change them like this ↓. I feel your pattern don't follow vocal.
  4. 01:06:000 (2,3,4) - random spacing
  5. 01:22:072 (x) - finish KIAI at this time.
  6. 01:49:072 (1,2,3,4) - get them into shape like this↓?
  7. 01:59:143 (1,2,3,4) - close spacing
  8. 02:20:786 (5) - spacing
  9. 02:23:357 (5) - new combo
  10. 02:24:643 (2,3) - spacing
  11. 03:16:286 (x) - put a note
I love Girls Dead Monster <3
And I like this song very very much!! :oops:
Good luck! Star~
Thank you :)
Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Hushu_old
Easy:
1:52:072 - Shape it as you shaped slider (2)
0:21:215 - Don't change from vocals to intruments so rapidly in Easy. Move (3) 1/2 back. Put (4) 1/2 forward.
0:24:215 - Add a note, make it nc.
0:24:643 - Remove, add a note 1/1 later instead
0:25:500 - Move 1/2 later
0:26:357 - Move 1/2 erlier
0:26:572 - Add a note
0:36:643 - Remove 5, copy the slider at 0:34:072 here.
2:59:111 - I don't think you need the last bit for an Easy... They played enough, so just end the thing on the spinner if possible. I don't see the sense of newbies still playing.

...And more symmetrical sliders needed overall.

Normal:
0:20:786 - New Combo. It dosn't matter that it is confusing as long as it is right. Focus on it being right, not being easy to see...
0:22:500 - No nc
0:26:786 - Do three circles instead like at 0:23:357
0:27:643 - This should be nc, not the note after.

Forget about modding the rest, is 1/1, no point. This map is not fun, you should marely follow the vocals, because the intrumentals are SIMPLE. Beatmaps should only fallow locals when they are hard rock/metal... I understood Easy, but Normal..? Pointless.

Hard:
0:46:926 - Off. This slider should be where she says 'neee', switch the sequence around?

Nah, now 1/4 nearly always.... Boring beatmap! Try remapping at least Hard and Normal so that they fallow vocals more than instrumental.
zsr123
357 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
zsr123
thank you all the same
net45291
net45291
Hi~! :)

Sound mod and a little mod


SPOILER
[General]

Hit sound to loud ' ่ีjust 70 - 80

[Easy]

*use x1 speed, don't use a slowslider in easy , slow just in a hard and insane diff.

00:39:644 (1) - add finish

00:43:072 (3) - ^

00:59:786 (4) - remove clap on red tick

02:03:643 (2) - remove finish

02:29:786 (5) - add clap on white tick

02:29:786 (5) - remove clap on red tick

02:36:857 (1) - remove kiai

02:37:715 (1) - add kiai here

03:16:286 - remove kiai

03:16:286 - add kiai here

03:19:500 (4) - remove clap

03:41:143 (6) - remove clap on red tick

[Normal]

*This diff should be easier

00:27:215 (6) - add clap

00:43:072 (1) - add finish

01:07:715 (4) - remove whistle on last white tick

01:21:429 (5) - remove whistle on white tick

01:56:786 (1) - add finish

02:10:500 (4) - add finish on last white tick

02:13:929 (6) - add finish on first white tick

02:17:357 (6) - ^

02:24:214 (1) - add kiai here

02:24:643 (2) - remove kiai

02:37:929 - add timing and add more Noisiness

03:20:357 (3) - add clap on white tick

03:20:357 (3) - remove clap on red tick

03:28:072 (3,4,5) - to hard in normal

03:28:179 (4) - remove this note

03:41:143 (5) - remove clap

[Hard]

00:42:857 (8) - add finish on white tick

00:55:286 - remove kiai

00:42:857 (8) - add kiai here

01:00:000 (5) - remove clap on last red tick

01:01:929 (7) - remove finish

01:15:429 (5) - add finish on red tick

01:49:714 (4) - add finish on white tick

01:53:357 (1) - add finish

01:56:786 (9) - ^

02:12:000 (5) - add finish on white tick

02:15:429 (9) - ^

02:29:572 (2) - add clap on white tick

02:30:000 (3) - remove clap

02:52:072 (5,6) - ^

02:52:286 (6) - add finish

02:53:786 (5,6) - ^^^

02:55:500 (5,6) - ^^^

03:41:143 (7) - remove clap

์good map and spacing XD , star ~
zsr123
357 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
zsr123

net45291 wrote:

Hi~! :)

Sound mod and a little mod


SPOILER
[General]

Hit sound to loud ' ่ีjust 70 - 80

[Easy]

*use x1 speed, don't use a slowslider in easy , slow just in a hard and insane diff.

00:39:644 (1) - add finish

00:43:072 (3) - ^

00:59:786 (4) - remove clap on red tick

02:03:643 (2) - remove finish

02:29:786 (5) - add clap on white tick

02:29:786 (5) - remove clap on red tick

02:36:857 (1) - remove kiai

02:37:715 (1) - add kiai here

03:16:286 - remove kiai

03:16:286 - add kiai here

03:19:500 (4) - remove clap

03:41:143 (6) - remove clap on red tick

[Normal]

*This diff should be easier

00:27:215 (6) - add clap

00:43:072 (1) - add finish

01:07:715 (4) - remove whistle on last white tick

01:21:429 (5) - remove whistle on white tick

01:56:786 (1) - add finish

02:10:500 (4) - add finish on last white tick

02:13:929 (6) - add finish on first white tick

02:17:357 (6) - ^

02:24:214 (1) - add kiai here

02:24:643 (2) - remove kiai

02:37:929 - add timing and add more Noisiness

03:20:357 (3) - add clap on white tick

03:20:357 (3) - remove clap on red tick

03:28:072 (3,4,5) - to hard in normal

03:28:179 (4) - remove this note

03:41:143 (5) - remove clap

[Hard]

00:42:857 (8) - add finish on white tick

00:55:286 - remove kiai

00:42:857 (8) - add kiai here

01:00:000 (5) - remove clap on last red tick

01:01:929 (7) - remove finish

01:15:429 (5) - add finish on red tick

01:49:714 (4) - add finish on white tick

01:53:357 (1) - add finish

01:56:786 (9) - ^

02:12:000 (5) - add finish on white tick

02:15:429 (9) - ^

02:29:572 (2) - add clap on white tick

02:30:000 (3) - remove clap

02:52:072 (5,6) - ^

02:52:286 (6) - add finish

02:53:786 (5,6) - ^^^

02:55:500 (5,6) - ^^^

03:41:143 (7) - remove clap

์good map and spacing XD , star ~
Thank you ! :)
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
hi~ :3
I like Girls Dead Monstar & AB <3

SPOILER
[Easy]
I suggest you should use distance snap all note.
Changing/random spacing in easy/normal are comfused beginner player.
00:41:786 (2,4,6,8) remove
00:43:072 (2) hwo about adjust this slider more symmetrical?
00:46:501 (4) new combo
00:55:072 (T) starting kiai here
02:24:215 (5) new combo
02:26:357 (1) remove new combo
02:50:786 (T) actually , ending kiai here?? as far as looking other diff.
03:16:500 (T) starting kiai here

[Normal]
HP +1 or +2
02:36:857 (T) cancel kiai
02:37:072 (T) ^
02:38:357 (T) this timing point is needless??
02:50:786 (T) starting kiai here

[Hard]
adjust some kiai time like other diff >:
AR +1
00:18:215 (6) move 1 grid up

hmm , to be honest , mapset needs more work.
Try to make things look pretty in all diff.
But I often see such things in beginner mappers.
So you don't need depressed.
fight~ ;)
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
Timing:
BPM: 140.000
Offset: 201
zsr123
357 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
zsr123

banvi wrote:

hi~ :3
I like Girls Dead Monstar & AB <3

SPOILER
[Easy]
I suggest you should use distance snap all note.
Changing/random spacing in easy/normal are comfused beginner player.
00:41:786 (2,4,6,8) remove
00:43:072 (2) hwo about adjust this slider more symmetrical?
00:46:501 (4) new combo
00:55:072 (T) starting kiai here
02:24:215 (5) new combo
02:26:357 (1) remove new combo
02:50:786 (T) actually , ending kiai here?? as far as looking other diff.
03:16:500 (T) starting kiai here

[Normal]
HP +1 or +2
02:36:857 (T) cancel kiai
02:37:072 (T) ^
02:38:357 (T) this timing point is needless??
02:50:786 (T) starting kiai here

[Hard]
adjust some kiai time like other diff >:
AR +1
00:18:215 (6) move 1 grid up

hmm , to be honest , mapset needs more work.
Try to make things look pretty in all diff.
But I often see such things in beginner mappers.
So you don't need depressed.
fight~ ;)
thanks :)


Selee wrote:

Timing:
BPM: 140.000
Offset: 201
thanks :)
Last edited by zsr123 , edited 1 time in total.
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
thx request

[Hard]
1.19.058(2) - spacing
1.20.129(6) - spacing(x0.0 and offgrid)
1.41.343(5,6) - 2grid right 5grid down(level3)
1.42.415(8) - 1grid right(level4)
2.07.058(1) - spacing(x0.0 and offgrid)
2.23.129(4) - 1grid left
2.25.701(4) - spacing
2.29.558(2) - spacing(x0.0 and offgrid)
2.42.629(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - like it pic.
2.44.986(3) - 1grid right and down
2.45.843(4) - 1grid right

+star
zsr123
357 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
zsr123

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx request

[Hard]
1.19.058(2) - spacing
1.20.129(6) - spacing(x0.0 and offgrid)
1.41.343(5,6) - 2grid right 5grid down(level3)
1.42.415(8) - 1grid right(level4)
2.07.058(1) - spacing(x0.0 and offgrid)
2.23.129(4) - 1grid left
2.25.701(4) - spacing
2.29.558(2) - spacing(x0.0 and offgrid)
2.42.629(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - like it pic.
2.44.986(3) - 1grid right and down
2.45.843(4) - 1grid right

+star
thank you :)
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
:!:
Miu Matsuoka
662 posts
Joined May 2008
Miu Matsuoka
[Overall]
Better to add a silenced 'soft-sliderslide.wav' imo

[Easy] - Very boring, just having one note every 2nd beat of a bar, try to make more variations
00:39:630 (1) - Stack with 00:39:201 (4)
02:13:486 (1) - 2nd point: x:224 y:248
03:41:129 (6) - Finish? (Slider end)

[Normal]
00:07:058 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Is this the same as [Easy]??? Please remap here
00:59:343 (5) - 2nd point: x:340 y:368
03:28:915 (1) - Too close to the previous note imo

[Hard] - Please try not to overlap so much
00:54:200 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:54:415 (5) - New Combo

Star~!
zsr123
357 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
zsr123

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

[Overall]
Better to add a silenced 'soft-sliderslide.wav' imo

[Easy] - Very boring, just having one note every 2nd beat of a bar, try to make more variations
00:39:630 (1) - Stack with 00:39:201 (4)
02:13:486 (1) - 2nd point: x:224 y:248
03:41:129 (6) - Finish? (Slider end)

[Normal]
00:07:058 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Is this the same as [Easy]??? Please remap here
00:59:343 (5) - 2nd point: x:340 y:368
03:28:915 (1) - Too close to the previous note imo

[Hard] - Please try not to overlap so much
00:54:200 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:54:415 (5) - New Combo

Star~!
thank you :)
Very boring, just having one note every 2nd beat of a bar, try to make more variations
really not sure how to make it more variations, it might be hard for a easy in someone's opinion,but i will try my best to make it better :)
lcclarke
112 posts
Joined March 2009
lcclarke
送分图什么的最好了 Star~~
OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
[Easy]
Notes look sort of randomly placed... try adding sliders with regular circles more often, because it helps create more flow. Not only that, make some sliders longer, and make more prettier shapes, rather than the repetitive beat you have.

I'd also recommend changing some colors, because it doesn't seem to fit. It also feels like the sliders you have would look better if it had some other color to it, I don't know.
[Normal]
Pretty much the same as above... 'cept less random, I guess
[Hard]
AR -1. It's too fast for this kind of song... it's only a hard map...

Aaand the same as above ._.

Keep trying ><
zsr123
357 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
zsr123

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Easy]
Notes look sort of randomly placed... try adding sliders with regular circles more often, because it helps create more flow. Not only that, make some sliders longer, and make more prettier shapes, rather than the repetitive beat you have.

I'd also recommend changing some colors, because it doesn't seem to fit. It also feels like the sliders you have would look better if it had some other color to it, I don't know.
[Normal]
Pretty much the same as above... 'cept less random, I guess
[Hard]
AR -1. It's too fast for this kind of song... it's only a hard map...

Aaand the same as above ._.

Keep trying ><
thank you :)
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[Hard]:
  1. 01:22:486 (T) - note with finish, cancel the finish on 01:22:058 (5).
  2. 02:00:843 (4,1) - use x0.8 or more spacing snap
  3. 02:20:343 (4,1) - spacing
  4. 03:28:486 (10,1) - ^
  5. 03:34:915 (8,1) - too close
[Normal]:
  1. 01:22:486 (T) - same as in Hard
  2. 00:37:915 (1,2,3) - spacing
[Easy]:
  1. 01:20:343 (1) - cancel finish
  2. 01:22:486 (T) - make the break start from here? drag the line on the notes' bar to change the starting point.
star~
zsr123
357 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
zsr123

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]:
  1. 01:22:486 (T) - note with finish, cancel the finish on 01:22:058 (5).
  2. 02:00:843 (4,1) - use x0.8 or more spacing snap
  3. 02:20:343 (4,1) - spacing
  4. 03:28:486 (10,1) - ^
  5. 03:34:915 (8,1) - too close
[Normal]:
  1. 01:22:486 (T) - same as in Hard
  2. 00:37:915 (1,2,3) - spacing
[Easy]:
  1. 01:20:343 (1) - cancel finish
  2. 01:22:486 (T) - make the break start from here? drag the line on the notes' bar to change the starting point.
star~
all done, thank you :)
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Revived.

SPOILER
Short message and stuff, you know it.
zsr123
357 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
zsr123

osuplayer111 wrote:

Revived.

SPOILER
Short message and stuff, you know it.
thanks :)
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
sherrie__fay
http://puu.sh/4qck
this is你要的comboburst
我一共摳了4個出來 想要哪個任選:333
不讓打星就這樣
“★”
:333
希望你喜歡喵~
zsr123
357 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
zsr123
谢谢 :)

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