1. Easy (1.73 stars, 224 notes)
2. Hard (3.37 stars, 481 notes)
3. Insane (4.02 stars, 568 notes)
4. Normal (1.99 stars, 280 notes)

1. Maybe put the preview point on a different kiai? Idling on this preview point makes it just repeat itself over and over, there's so much more of this great song to be heard!
2. For your Insane diff, maybe put a unique diffname like Falling or Scattered

1. 00:01:231 (1) - maybe shorten this so it only repeats once, and then put a note on the white tick?
2. 00:03:106 (7) - nc
3. 00:03:106 (7,8) - also I've mentioned it to you before but you really have a thing for super tight blankets hehe. I'm not going to mention it past this one, but I think making your blankets more loose would look so much better!
4. 00:02:403 (5,6) - I think an antijump here would be more fitting
5. 00:04:278 (3,4) - ^ these are purely suggestive though and would just be how I would map this
6. 00:05:216 (2) - 2 circles maybe? and do something like this
7. 00:13:185 (1,2) - oh hey look, a loose blanket
8. 00:15:997 (4,5,6) - I would make the spacing of the 5 and 6 on the tail of 4 smaller, maybe like .7 ds or something
9. 00:16:935 (1) - making this into 2 circles could make a cute lil pattern
10. 00:16:935 (1,2,3) - also, back to the tight blankets I see? You should pick one and stay consistent
11. 00:20:216 - totally a personal thing but removing the note here follows the vocals just as well and is a nice break in flow.. 00:20:450 (5) - would need to be repositioned though
12. 00:20:685 (1,2,3) - if you like that flow-breaky change than this is another fitting one and plays just as well
13. 00:25:606 (4) - x341 y223 to make 00:25:841 (5) - more emphasized?
14. 00:34:513 (5) - don't think this should be 3/4
15. 00:38:263 (3,4) - maybe play around with the spacing here some as you're leading into the kiai?
16. 00:41:778 (1) - putting a nc here is kinda cute
17. 00:43:419 - important sound being skipped here
18. 00:54:903 (3) - this is a suggestion for every kick like this (so 00:54:903 (3) - 00:56:778 (4) - 00:55:841 (8) - etc) try to emphasize them through spacing or using sharper angles than the rest a little bit more. I'm not going to point them all out for times sake but if you want to try and improve them a bit it might look and feel better to play!
19. 01:00:997 (1) - you could nc here if you want
20. 01:05:216 (6,1) - nazi blanket mod here
21. 01:06:856 (6,1,2) - ^
22. 01:12:247 (4) - two circles maybe?
23. 01:16:231 (4,1) - ctrl + g
24. 01:17:169 (3,4) - ctrl +g or make the slider into 2 circles... also you could have some fun with the spacing here cause the music spikes a tiny bit
25. 01:20:685 (1) - nc
26. 01:26:310 (1,2) - blanket
27. 01:31:700 (5,2) - blanket
28. 01:35:216 (5,1) - blanket (ok I'll be honest I didn't start paying much attention to the blankets until recently so you might wanna go back and recheck the rest of them)
29. 01:37:325 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think maybe having 1 2 3 closer together and then bigger spacing on the 4 5 would help emphaisize the lyrics
30. 01:38:263 (5,6,7) - with that being said I think that putting the 1/2 slider 01:38:263 - here and then having 2 circles helps follow the lyrics better.. so maybe find a nice compromise between the two
31. 01:39:903 (2) - maybe make this higher up and to the right a tad
32. 01:47:638 (3) - turning this into a kickslider with 2 circles afterwards might be kinda neat
33. 01:48:810 (1,2) - I would space these a tiiiiiiiiiiny bit more
34. 01:49:981 (5,6) - ctrl +g?
35. 01:50:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would adjust the spacing here by toning it down in general but having emphasis on the jump between 01:51:622 (4,5,6) - these
36. 02:01:114 (4) - overmapped
37. 02:04:630 - but if you wanted you could do a note here to make triples on these kinds of noises
38. 02:07:091 (6,1) - super nazi blanket here
39. 02:08:966 (7,2) - less nazi of a blanket here
40. 02:10:138 (3,4) - ^
41. 02:27:247 (4) - move this down some?
42. 02:29:591 (5,1,2) - fix this somehow, by either putting the 5 on the tail of 2 or blanketing the 5 into the 1
43. 02:36:622 (4,5) - ctrl + g to have a click on kick (i hate that i can't say this without it rhyming zz)
44. 02:38:966 (4,5) - stack maybe?
45. 02:45:529 (2,5) - blanket
46. 02:48:810 (1,2) - ^
47. 02:49:981 (5,7) - ^
48. 02:50:216 (6,7) - also maybe make the angle between these two sharper to emphasize the lyric
49. 02:54:200 (6) - nc here maybe?
50. 03:04:278 (2,5) - I'm being a bit of a nazi aren't I >>;
51. 03:08:731 (8,1,2) - ^
52. 03:12:481 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe do a rhythm like this for the ending?

Logic Agent wrote:

(you're not from my queue but I made this cute graphic recently so fk it I'm putting it everywhere xD)

M4m stuff~

[General]

1. Maybe put the preview point on a different kiai? Idling on this preview point makes it just repeat itself over and over, there's so much more of this great song to be heard!
   Ah, changed it to the first chorus
2. For your Insane diff, maybe put a unique diffname like Falling or Scattered

Oh. Hm. I'm not sure what'd I would change it to exactly, but I'll ask around if I need to

[Insane]

1. 00:01:231 (1) - maybe shorten this so it only repeats once, and then put a note on the white tick?
   Hmm. If I do that, I'll be missing a beat on: 00:01:407 -
2. 00:03:106 (7) - nc
   Okay~
3. 00:03:106 (7,8) - also I've mentioned it to you before but you really have a thing for super tight blankets hehe. I'm not going to mention it past this one, but I think making your blankets more loose would look [url=http://i.imgur.com/aBkTs9N.png]so much better[url]
   Oh okay, Changed what I saw
4. 00:02:403 (5,6) - I think an antijump here would be more fitting
   Um, I'm not sure what an anti-jump is
5. 00:04:278 (3,4) - ^ these are purely suggestive though and would just be how I would map this
   ^^^^
6. 00:05:216 (2) - 2 circles maybe? and do something like this
   I'm not sure because the synthy noises starts at the beginning of the slider and ends at the end, two circles would just leave it empty inbetween, but I'm not sure yet. I'll come back to this!
7. 00:13:185 (1,2) - oh hey look, a loose blanket
   
8. 00:15:997 (4,5,6) - I would make the spacing of the 5 and 6 on the tail of 4 smaller, maybe like .7 ds or something
   The reason I have it at ds 1 is so that it's the same speed of the slider that you have to contiune~
9. 00:16:935 (1) - making this into 2 circles could make a cute lil pattern
   I kinda like it too, but same as above, I'll have to check it out later and get other's opinions
10. 00:16:935 (1,2,3) - also, back to the tight blankets I see? You should pick one and stay consistent
    Yeah changed from before~
11. 00:20:216 - totally a personal thing but removing the note here follows the vocals just as well and is a nice break in flow.. 00:20:450 (5) - would need to be repositioned though
    It feels kind of out of place if that's the only break in the whole song I think :<
12. 00:20:685 (1,2,3) - if you like that flow-breaky change than this is another fitting one and plays just as well
    ^^^^
13. 00:25:606 (4) - x341 y223 to make 00:25:841 (5) - more emphasized?
    I feel like a larger jump there out of nowhere is a little odd, but I do kind of like that.. IDKajuaeflauf
14. 00:34:513 (5) - don't think this should be 3/4
    Ahh okay changed
15. 00:38:263 (3,4) - maybe play around with the spacing here some as you're leading into the kiai?
    I actually made the slider velocity lower here leading into the bridge lol
16. 00:41:778 (1) - putting a nc here is kinda cute
    sure why not
17. 00:43:419 - important sound being skipped here
    The whole point of the first bridge was to only map the beat of the main drum, which is why it's kind of scarce in notes, the second one though does 00:41:778 (1) -
18. 00:54:903 (3) - this is a suggestion for every kick like this (so 00:54:903 (3) - 00:56:778 (4) - 00:55:841 (8) - etc) try to emphasize them through spacing or using sharper angles than the rest a little bit more. I'm not going to point them all out for times sake but if you want to try and improve them a bit it might look and feel better to play!
    Aaaaaa that gets rid of the nice triangles they make :< Although I'll probly do something with them now that you mention it.
    Okay so here's what I'm gonna do, the first chorus won't have any changes, the second one will have slight ones, and the last will have the biggest? idk I think that's okay, we'll see~ Actually, after going through it, doing so kind of messes up the structure I already had in place :<
19. 01:00:997 (1) - you could nc here if you want
    aaaa idk
20. 01:05:216 (6,1) - nazi blanket mod here
    I suk at these ;-;
21. 01:06:856 (6,1,2) - ^
    rip
22. 01:12:247 (4) - two circles maybe?
    Same as above^^
23. 01:16:231 (4,1) - ctrl + g
    yeah
24. 01:17:169 (3,4) - ctrl +g or make the slider into 2 circles... also you could have some fun with the spacing here cause the music spikes a tiny bit
    I like the ctrl g thing~ Changed a few other things here
25. 01:20:685 (1) - nc
    weeeeee
26. 01:26:310 (1,2) - blanket
    cry
27. 01:31:700 (5,2) - blanket
    ery
28. 01:35:216 (5,1) - blanket (ok I'll be honest I didn't start paying much attention to the blankets until recently so you might wanna go back and recheck the rest of them)
    tim
    rip
29. 01:37:325 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think maybe having 1 2 3 closer together and then bigger spacing on the 4 5 would help emphaisize the lyrics
    Not sure if this plays well, but I cchanged it
30. 01:38:263 (5,6,7) - with that being said I think that putting the 1/2 slider 01:38:263 - here and then having 2 circles helps follow the lyrics better.. so maybe find a nice compromise between the two
    I can agree that 01:38:497 (6) - might not follow the lyrics, but i'm not sure about the other stuff. I'll probly change this note though somehow. The slider afterwards is there because she ends the note there
31. 01:39:903 (2) - maybe make this higher up and to the right a tad
    ah I didn't realize this was weirdly spaced
32. 01:47:638 (3) - turning this into a kickslider with 2 circles afterwards might be kinda neat
    Ahh this part follows the lyrics, but I might do that in the last chorus?
33. 01:48:810 (1,2) - I would space these a tiiiiiiiiiiny bit more
    idk I think its okay
34. 01:49:981 (5,6) - ctrl +g?
    I kinda like the way it is
35. 01:50:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would adjust the spacing here by toning it down in general but having emphasis on the jump between 01:51:622 (4,5,6) - these
    Changed~
36. 02:01:114 (4) - overmapped
    Changed, but I'm not sure I like what I changed it to
37. 02:04:630 - but if you wanted you could do a note here to make triples on these kinds of noises
    Ahh I could've huh, dang that's gonna be a lot of adjusting ;-; I'll have to do it later
38. 02:07:091 (6,1) - super nazi blanket here
    Changed the slider completely
39. 02:08:966 (7,2) - less nazi of a blanket here
    Oh whoops my bad
40. 02:10:138 (3,4) - ^
    aaaaaa nazis are bad :<
41. 02:27:247 (4) - move this down some?
    It fits the ds tho :<
42. 02:29:591 (5,1,2) - fix this somehow, by either putting the 5 on the tail of 2 or blanketing the 5 into the 1
    Oh wtf, I had this correctly before, I must've messed it up
43. 02:36:622 (4,5) - ctrl + g to have a click on kick (i hate that i can't say this without it rhyming zz)
    Changed, not sure it's great though
44. 02:38:966 (4,5) - stack maybe?
    wait what?
45. 02:45:529 (2,5) - blanket
    yeah
46. 02:48:810 (1,2) - ^
    aaaaaaa
47. 02:49:981 (5,7) - ^
    aaaaaaaaaa
48. 02:50:216 (6,7) - also maybe make the angle between these two sharper to emphasize the lyric
    I kinda like the DS change instead
49. 02:54:200 (6) - nc here maybe?
    ah idk about that
50. 03:04:278 (2,5) - I'm being a bit of a nazi aren't I >>;
    maybe
51. 03:08:731 (8,1,2) - ^
    aaa
52. 03:12:481 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe do a rhythm like this for the ending?
    ah okay

I loooooooove this song and this is map is nice! Hopefully with these changes you'll be on the road to ranking it! osu needs more reoooooooooooooooollllll!!
yay

Lilyanna wrote:

Easy

00:07:560 (1,1) - u didnt leave enough time for recovery
Ahhh crap I'm not sure what to change this into. Halp
00:58:653 (2,3) - blanket can be better
Changed
01:09:435 (1,1) - recovery
^^^^
01:21:856 (4) - ctrl g fix blanket 01:20:685 (3,4) - and the ctrl g back
Fixed
01:41:778 (2,3) - can be better blanket
slightly fixed?
02:04:278 (2,5) - this kinda overlaps
aaa yea changed
02:29:591 (5,1) - can fix blanket im goin nazi xd
Nazis are bad fixed tho
03:06:622 (5,2) - make the look the same and blanket is little off here 03:06:622 (5,1) -

Normal

00:24:435 (1,3) - stack well
idk why this wasn't already
00:25:372 (2,5) - ^
00:26:310 (3,6) - ^
^^^
00:46:231 (7) - move x422 y215 so it doesnt overlap and fix the ds
The only reason this is slightly overlapping is because the ds is correct

Hard

00:37:325 (2,6) - avoid this overlap 00:36:856 (1,5) - stack and then 00:38:497 (6) - ctrl h and rotate by -23 and blanket again with 5
I honestly don't understand what you mean here ;-; All the times you copied are all the same, but the points highlighted are far away
01:29:356 (4,5,6) - this triple doesnt make sens here maybe do it same sound as here 01:33:106 (4,5,6) - for consistency
I don't think the end of one verse should have the same pattern as the beginning of another tho
sometimes the patterns dont feel so much connected they can be better.
welp

I hope i helped ;w;.
Good luck

Janpai wrote:

Please send a vote on my queue to improve my modding =w=)y

DISCLAIMER:

1. The following things will be only opinions and suggestions so feel free to ignore them.

General

1. Disable Widescreen Support
   Whoops
2. Recommended BG size are 1366x768 (your BG dimension is 1360x764, apparently width is behind by 6 pixels and height is behind by 4 pixels)
   Ah crap okay I'll change it a bit later on
3. Others are good for me

Easy

1. Set your tick rate to 1. Having tick rate 2 seems unnecessary
   Okay
2. 00:01:231 (1) - This slider don't really show up on easy expecially it's a 1/2 rhythm which is GENERALLY (some 1/2s are pretty acceptable but not in this one) prohibited in easy, how about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/qxmgH/4eb97814e6.jpg
   Ah okay changed that
3. 00:03:106 (2) - A simple 1/1 slider would fit here since you were following instrumentals on the start and never bothered about that clicl sound
   EHHH its okay I like it
4. 00:04:981 (1) - Same thing about the first mention
   Changed already~
5. 00:07:560 (1,1) - This spinner issue is unrankable because the time of rest between that note and the spinner is too short (mostly beginners spin widely so they will wonder where the hell their cursor go). I recommend you to use slider art here instead of spinner because of that issue
   Ahhhh okayyyyy I'm not sure what kind of slider that would work so I'll just try something ;-;
6. 00:16:935 (1,2) - Fix blanket
   It's already fine, ctrl+g it and you'll see?
7. 00:18:810 (3,4) - This can be simplified by removing 00:19:981 (4) - and making a reverse slider at 00:18:810 (3) - to avoid using 1/2s
   Tried to change what I could throught the song
8. 00:20:685 (1,2) - ^^ Same
   ^
9. 00:22:794 (3) - This slider doesn't follow the vocal completely infact the vocals are in the first 3 ticks so recommending to move this to 00:22:560 and add circle afterwards
   Pretty sure moving it there would cause it to be harder for an easy
10. 00:24:200 (1) - Uhuh. that vocal on the redtick doesn't really matter at all so I think it's really okay if you skip that and put a 1/1 slider at 00:24:435 then remove 00:24:903 (2) -
    okay
11. 00:30:060 (3,4) - Blanket is a bit off
    :(
12. 00:33:810 (3,4) - Already mentioned above
13. 00:35:685 (1) - I totally don't agree with this, as I said earlier this slider is kinda nowhere to be seen in easy nowadays and infact this is really hard for beginners since the tutorial didn't put this kind of stuff. just replace it with 1/1
    already changed~
14. 00:39:435 (1) - Make this 1/1 like you did at 00:43:185 (1) -
    One follows the beat, the other follows the lyrics
15. 00:45:763 (4,5) - Blanket is a bit off
    like 1 pixel wtf
16. 00:47:872 (2,3) - I would simply just do the rhythm like this because that start of vocal is really unnecessary to follow http://puu.sh/qxn10/064fa2c72a.jpg
    changed
17. 00:58:185 (1,2) - Fix blanket
    :<
18. 00:58:653 (2,3,4) - Too dangerous imo, please avoid stacking like this at your easiest difficulty, it's really bad
    Yeah
19. 01:09:435 (1,1) - Already mentioned above about the spinner matters
20. Okay, I'll stop from here seems these pointings are enough for you to notice what you should do with the following objects since they are just the same I think. And also I recommend you to experiment more with curved sliders :v it's fun than straight and edgy sliders. Avoid stacking things because your song is slow then there are some timestamps that they are appear in the same time that confuses the beginners.
    aaaaaaa I kind of meant it to be edgy

Normal

1. Set your HP & OD to 4 and AR to 5
   sure why not
2. 00:01:231 (1) - Instead of this 2 time reverse slider why not just put it like this http://puu.sh/qxnhf/ab9c68d6e5.jpg
   Did somethign similar
3. 00:03:106 (1) - Replacing this with 1/2 and a circle would be better
   Ehh I think its okay
4. 00:04:981 (1,2,3) - Try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/qxnnq/739a276aa5.jpg
   That doesn't exactly fit what I was going for
5. 00:07:442 (1,1) - Same for spinner matters on easy
   Dang okay idk if what I put is okaay we'll see
6. 00:09:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -This rhythm is too plain imo try this instead http://puu.sh/qxnqT/64c564390d.jpg
   That. Requires me to change all of them. If I'm gonna do that, it'll have to be later. or something.
7. 00:13:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^^
8. 00:37:794 (5,6) - Wew their blanket, avoid overlapping like this
   Moved a little

So I'm kinda tired from the mods in the easy and I have to stop here, even though I like the song, I can't still bear the 3 minute length and I feel bad for that so I guess I'll leave you a goodluck here :3 go for it! I wanna make a short version of this ;w; aaaa
Honestly I was going to make a short version but idk I just didn't :<

Kawaii_Mirella wrote:

:) [Easy]
▶OD set to 4-5
I'll do 3
▉ 00:01:231 (1) ▶ doesnt match with the song..u can make longer 1 note again there..1/2 snap right?
Ahh changed
▉ 00:07:560 ▶ add a spinner here
I can't, there's not enough recovery time here, so unless someone recommends something else, I can't change it
▉ 00:08:966 (4) ▶ remove this
^

[Normal]
▉ 00:05:685 - 00:06:153 ▶ to short Can u make it more difficult?
I think its fine to be honest ;-;
Umm just that..:v

[Hard]
I didnt see the problem with the hard diff :v
yay


[Insane]
▉ 00:03:575 (2) ▶ its insane map..can u make it harder?
It's only the beginning of the song, I think its okay

▉ 00:05:685 (3,4) ▶^
^^^^^^

▉ 00:07:325 (7) ▶place it like this

SPOILER

If I change it like that, then the distance snapping will be messed up D:

▉ 00:22:325 (6) ▶ ctrl+g it
That's just my style of mapping~ I do it multiple times in this map

▉ 00:22:794 (1) ▶ place it under the slider..it can make the map harder
Ahhh okay I see what you're trying to do, but I kind of like what I have

▉ 00:35:802 (2,3,4) ▶ place like this

SPOILER

I think what I have lets it flow better

▉ 00:47:638 (2,3) ▶ u need an stack there to match the song..its insane right?
Ah, I see what you mean, but if I move it the star won't be perfect, I can move the entire star if someone else agrees that I should change it though.

▉ 01:05:685 (1) ▶ this is better

SPOILER

I think I like what I have more

▉ 01:11:310 (1,2,3) ▶ u should set a far slider or a jump
Why? The song is just on a normal verse, there's no need for a jump or anything

▉ 01:53:380 (2) ▶ add a stack here..to match the song
I think its okay actually, I know I stacked it once before earlier, but I don't have to follow it, I think.

▉ 01:54:669 (2) ▶ set like this

SPOILER

I kind of want to do a larger space but then distance snapping here would look weird and play weird unless I change the whole thing

▉ 02:36:856 (4) ▶ there something wrong with the sound
Whats wrong

▉ 03:05:450 (6,7) ▶ rotate 111 degrees and change 7th note place
I kind of agree that this could look better, but I'm not sure if that's the solution


Thats all i can do..btw this is my first modding my eng is not good either :v
btw ur mapping style is good^^

Nahh man your english is good~ and,
Thank you for the compliment and the mod <3

Xayler wrote:

Just letting you know that I will mod this soon today. Not sure if I look at all the difficulties, as it's quite long, but lets see... ps: 128bpm is best
Heya, NM from my queue! (As you mentioned about M4M then if you could check this, then I would be very glad)
Ooo sure, I'll get to it sometime~
Lets get right into it...

General
What about 1366x768 bg image instead?
Yeah.. I should fix that.
And what about 192kbps bit rate for audio?
I think the audio is fine actually ;-;

Easy
00:18:810 (3,1) - is overlapping like this allowed in Easy difficulty?
Yeah I agree. I didn't know what to change it to, but now I changed it.
01:24:669 (3) - not really liking this slider as it feels uncomfortable to play, I feel like at least the slider's end needs to be clickable
Oh. Really I thought it was okay
01:27:247 (3,4,5) - not the best kind of flow as you need to do some random movements what is more like for Hard difficulty, better to don't blanket (4)
I'm not sure I agree ;-;
02:11:310 - add a circle (same to other diffs)
That's the beginning of the next measure, I don't think I should add a note there.

Normal
00:20:919 (2,3) - blanket fix
Seems okay as is ;-;
00:22:794 (4) - place this slider's slidertail on top of 00:20:919 (2) - slidertail
I think it's fine as is tbh
01:09:435 (1) - some sliderart perhaps?
I would, if I could ;-; I want to though.
01:47:638 (6,7) - this seems very weirdly blanketed
Tried to fix~
01:49:747 (2,3) - ^
^
02:28:653 (4,5,6) - make them straight instead
Why tho ;-;
02:47:638 (6,7) - not the best kind of blanket
Changed a bit
03:03:106 (6,7) - ^
^
03:03:106 (6,8) - they kinda overlap, avoid it
yea~

Hard
00:06:153 (4) - silence the slidertail
? What do I do ?
00:16:231 (5,6,7) - it's 1/8 here so that 1/4 triple sounds very weird, better add that 1/8 slider like at start
1/8 slider feels weird to play here. Was following the same motif as: 00:27:481 (4,5,6)
00:27:599 (5) - I hear nothing here
What do you mean..? Listen again?
00:31:231 (4,5) - ^ 1/8 and so on with next ones, suggesting to remove the triple from some spaces or add 1/8 slider
aaaaaaaa
01:36:153 (2) - better move it up and don't blanket it as it ruins the flow quite a bit
I mean, I've done this multiple times in this map I believe, and I think it's okay
01:40:606 (7) - better to end it 01:40:841 - here instead
Mmm sure~
02:49:278 (2,3) - small blanket fix
weeeeeeee
02:49:747 (3,4) - ^
wooooooo

Insane
that same 1/8 thing from Hard also to here
sammeee
00:04:278 (3) - add a 1/3 slider maybe from here? sounds awesome with that sound
Not exactly sure about that :<
00:34:981 (6,2) - don't overlap
cri
00:41:778 (1) - 1/3 slider again? and same goes to another of these sounds later
^
00:53:966 (8) - as it's with different slider velocity then I highly recommend to NC this
Sure~
00:57:481 (8,9,1) - maybe space (9) a bit more as it's kinda strong beat and fits, there are more of these probably, it's just 1 example
Ah okay, why not.
01:17:169 (3,1) - blanket fix
aaaaa
02:05:450 (1,3) - probably blanket them also in that bottom blanket thingy as it kinda otherwise overlaps badly and it looks better
okay
03:13:653 (4) - remove the repeat
Didn't remove, but moved and changed.
03:14:122 - add a slider from here to 03:14:356 - here and add a circle 03:14:591 - here
Uhh I changed it from above^

That's all I think, good luck!

-Nighthawk- wrote:

Woah, this is pretty good! If you would like to have the music video as a background video. Let me know and I'll make one for you to use, that will fit within size limits.

chparkkim wrote:

Hello from my queue~! reol songs are always fun :3

here i go

insane

ok so the map was super clean! in fact i didn't find anything messy about your map~ yay
yaaay
heres a few
00:26:544 (2,4) - move these veeeery slightly right-up to make the star 00:26:544 (2,3,4,5,6) symmetrical (as in 3 and 5 should be symmetrical to 2 and 4 with the line of symmetry going through 6). you may need to shift a few notes because distance 2-4 is slightly less than distance 3-5.
I wasn't trying to make this a star pattern, I just wanted a jumpy clockwise turn ;-;
00:48:341 (4,5) - fix blanket
Ah yea
00:48:575 (5,3) - overlap
Fixed
00:51:388 (3,4,5,6,1) - use ctrl-shift-d for perfect star
I already know about the tool, I'm surprised I didn't use it there though.
01:04:513 (3,4,5,6,7) - make it symmetric (4,7 vs 3,6 with line crossing 5 as pivot)
Ah. Yea ~
01:10:841 - i feel like this part should be clickable. try ending the spinner 1/2 earlier to fit a note in here
I think it's fine...
01:54:669 (2,4,5,6) - either space out 2-6 same as the other notes, or stack 2 and 6
Ah okay
02:05:450 (1,5) - can stack better
How do you even notice something like that
02:45:529 (2,3,4,1) - overlap
aaaaa


general thing i felt about your map: this map sacrificed excitement in return for cleanliness.
This map overuses mundane parallel patterns and stacks (although stacked is better than messy overlaps i guess) that takes away from reol's style of hyped and bumpy(?not sure if i used the right word tbh haha) soundtrack.
Ah yea I understand what you're trying to say~
Breaking apart from ocd parallelism makes a map more unpredictable and brings out asymmetrical beauty (for example in 01:50:919 (1,2,3,4) 1 and 2 are not parallel to 3 and 4, but i thought it was still aesthetically pleasing with few tweaks).
Also occasional use of creative slider shapes (MODERATELY) makes a map more interesting. i noticed a few in your map, but most were simple curves and straight lines (again not a bad thing, but i think this song could use some strange shapes occasionally)
Yeah, I wish I was better at making those ;-; but I understand your point^

PLEASE understand that i don't mean be a nazi! i'm going into this much detail about style BECAUSE this map was really good and i didn't have to waste much time on pointing out nitpicky stuff. i hope i was helpful! good luck!
Thanks for the honesty

Juiceys wrote:

GOD I LOVE REOL OMG

Easy

Overall I'd say that this difficulty is very "Liney" as in it's very straight forward and boring, even for an easy diff I'd suggest making the map less symmetrical i know it seems crazy but take a map like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/375648 for example, it uses fun sliders and cool patterns that you could use too to make your map more entertaining but anyway onto the real mod
Yeah.. I'll update it normally for now, but I'll add more shape into this when school calms a bit more down.
00:04:981 (1) - I'd probably shorten this slider to a half beat plus a circle to follow the instrumental more
I believe this is already following the instrumentals
00:13:185 (1,2) - as i said before these sliders are very boring and would be good to change, I'm not gonna mention every slider like this but keep an eye out for them
yea I changed stuff, not sure if all of it looks good though
00:18:810 (3) - I would change this slider to something maybe like

As i said before I won't point these all out so just keep an eye out. :3
idk if I can make it something that huge, but I put a similar style. Just a lot more subtle.
01:09:435 (7) - If this slider could change to blanket 01:08:497 (6) - That would be aesthetically pleasing or if not It could be made into some sick slider
art.
aaaaaaaa
02:51:153 (4,5,6) - three circles in a row in an easy difficulty should more than likely be changed either into a repeating slider or a slider and a circle

wait what?

btw

If you ever need an easy/normal GD i can help :3
ayyy what's up

UPUPUPUPUPUPU

Thanks for the mod
Hopefully I'll get around to making the sliders more interesting after school dies down. Or if someone helps me out with that idk

Annika Flina wrote:

Sorry, I won't be able to do mods anytime soon because something came up my my life.

Have a star instead. GL

Mun wrote:

Hey!

I'm here from my modding queue.

Insane

00:12:481 (6) - This has a tick outside of the playing field, may want to bring it down a bit.
AImod didn't say it was a problem so I'm sure it's fine
00:34:981 (6) - Poor emphasis
How do I fix that?
00:36:388 (4) - Move this slider a little bit to the left so that the followpoint runs the same angle as the slider. Then, stack it with the head of 00:37:325 (1) -
Changed a bit, but I don't think it's what you intended
00:55:606 (7) - looks ever-so-slightly off of the 00:55:138 (4,5,6) - line. Maybe move it up a bit?
Sure!
00:56:778 (4) - This should probably be stacked under 00:55:138 (4) -
Mmm sure.
01:06:388 (3,4,5) - If you were attempting to make this straight like you do to other triples, you did not do so. The middle one is very slightly off.
Changed
01:16:231 (4) - Poor emphasis
Tried something else.
01:16:231 (4,3) - These two slider should probably be closer to exactly parallel.
already changed
01:31:935 (1) - This slider doesn't interact with 01:32:403 (2,3) - at all, so it feels out of place.
Tried something new idk tho
01:36:856 (4) - More poor emphasis
I think it's fine
01:36:856 (4,5) - These 2 should probably stack
They seem distant enough for them not to be stacked I think
01:57:950 (1,2) - NC here is off
Sounds like she's starting the second part of that verse, seemed fine to me ;-; right?
03:12:130 (4,5) - These two should probably curve just a bit more, so that they flow accurately with the slider before them.

Lastly, a map this slow may be better off AR8 or 8.5. That's personal preference, though.

Sorry if this mod wasn't too helpful! Slower maps really aren't my area of expertise, but I did my best.

Thanks for the mod tho, it was helpful
Changed some other small minor things~

Time Capsule wrote:

M4M Return

Insane
00:10:372 (5) - ctrl+g, people expect the same rotation which you do reveerse c wise. it also make this identical rhytm covered better imo 00:10:372 (5,6) -
I like the way it plays as is
00:13:185 - i would pick this pattern applyment, make the flow easier to catch ((4) is stack with 00:05:216 (2) - ) https://gyazo.com/450a96b28d041963a7989d3cdeb8ba57
Did something similar
00:16:935 (1,2,3) - this deserve slightly larger spacing for the blanket
Why
00:20:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - a bit lack of flow, could improved more
Changed a little, but not very much
00:24:435 (1,2) - please pay attention with spacing 00:24:903 (2,5) - and this miss of overlap (i wont notice it again)
DS is fine here, and there isn't a rule against close blankets. That's just prefernce. It plays fine
00:34:278 - hte vocal hold is actually here, if you want to stack it supposed to be this note at slider head instead
Actually the vocals are held at both 3 and 4, yet I only used a note here to emphasize the repetition of the vocals.
00:35:685 (2) - ctrl+g flow breaker there then you can stack (3) with 00:22:091 (5) -
Hmm. I'll agree that maybe this isn't the best rn, but I'll see what I can do with it.
00:40:606 (2,3) - its a bit off if you meant to make linear
okay
00:41:544 - 00:44:591 - since you was playing with mayor rhytm this will be counted as missing note
???
00:47:169 (1) - stack at 00:47:872 (3) - end maybe?
okay
01:01:935 - try this to emphasis the upbeat (and also the jump) https://gyazo.com/0100ee6afe7877ea3ceff72b9fe429de
Changed it up a bit
01:07:794 (2,3,4) - sharp angle there
I don't think anything's wrong with 90 deg
01:31:700 (5,1,2,3) - flow improvement needed
eh
01:42:481 (1,2) - slightly mis linear
okay
01:52:325 (7) - stack at slider head woth more. easier to read and woth to hold
I think I like it as is
02:08:380 (4,5,1) - look rough
Changed
02:38:497 (3) - ctrl+g? i see no reason to chage the circulation
hmmm
02:43:888 (2) - feel a bit plain since it emphasising vibrating vocal, try blanket it with 02:45:060 (1) -
agreed
02:49:278 (2,3,4) - supposed to going down
???
02:50:216 (6,7) - ouch jump
ouch my feelings
02:52:325 (6,1,2,3,4) - i believe theres a better flow you could imagine for this part
changed
03:05:450 (1) - most innocent slider wave ive ever se in my life xD
Yeah.. I made this map a long time ago, I changed it up

Hard
00:04:747 (4,3) - decent
uh stacked
00:34:747 (3) - stack at slider head instead
agreed
00:57:013 (3) - add a curve there
ye
02:50:450 (4) - ctrl+g, i always expect in that way lol
i'll try it I guess
03:04:981 - this worth to click. make the slider become 1/4 reverse and add circle here https://gyazo.com/8e1b218fda69a97e9b7010617120ec2d
Changed, but something different.

Normal
00:20:919 (2,3) - 00:35:919 (2) - 01:22:794 (2) - hs on slider tick? check it again
mmm
00:46:231 (7,1) - i dont like this lol (best selfish modding words 2k17 nominated)
I changed it before uploading rip
01:09:435 (1) - not really neccesary emphasis that sound lol, single note is more than enough
???
02:09:669 (5,7) - this overlap bother me more than it should lol
yep

Easy
Nah its fine (really i check it until end not just take a simple conculsion after see the simple intro flow lol)

RxDave wrote:

Could be fun but its too slow