Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi~

Storyboard mod

~Thoughts and suggestions~
[*] Lovely skin <3
[*] About the flashes, I think them being completely opaque kind of ruins the soft and cute atmosphere. Maybe if you fade White to 0.5 instead of 1 (check the codes in the .osb if you don't know what I'm talking about) they look way better and softer~
^ Fixed.
~Issues and Adjustments~
[*] I wonder... The artist is "Singular" but you have "Singgular" in the texts, which one is the correct one? xP
^ "Singular" is correct I fixed SB now
General mod
- [0OoMickeyoO0's Hard] and [Spirit's Love] have a different offset, please fix this.
^ about Spirit's Love diff, If him don't edit him diff within 7 days I'll remove difficulty.
~Easy~
00:51:975 (1) - Fix spacing.
^ Fixed
~Normal~
No problems here!

~0OoMickeyoO0's Hard~
No problems here!

~Spirit's Love~
00:09:889 (x) - This custom ticksound sounds so weird =x
00:16:059 (TS) - Maybe you should increase a bit the volume of this Timing Section...
00:25:373 (3,1,2) - Add a New Combo in (3) to mark the slowdown, remove the New Combo of (1) and move it to (2).

~Insane~
No problems here!

Nice and lovely <3 Good luck! *star*
^ Thank you very much :3

-oSpiriT_Runo- wrote:

fixed

HeatKai wrote:

got request from crimmi queue
so here's the mod

[easy]
00:10:362 (2) - spacing Okay
00:14:718 (1) - too short Fixed with long slider.
01:00:443 (1) - too short Fixed with long spin.

[normal]
00:18:104 (3) - spacing Fixed

nicely done ;_;

[mickey's hard]
Lovely <3

[spirit's love]
nice

[insane]
nice too ;_;

[overall]
nice and sweet

8.9/10

go some more mods then good

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi~Nymph here

Easy:
fine~

Normal:
Sv1.4 maybe a little fast? I think it fine for me xD
others fine~

Mickey's hard:
00:44:476 (2) - 01:05:282 (4) - maybe too near the scorebar.come down a little?

Spirit's love:
00:10:605 (5,6,1) - this spacing maybe a little uncomfortable.use half spacing here maybe? put the 6 right in the middle of 5 and 1.
01:02:137 (3) - maybe finish not clap at the end of this slider.

Insane:
fine I think~

well.that is all~ nice sb and skin~ good job~

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Sorry for late mod~
Hope you don't mind~

[Overall]
I will add a silenced 'soft-sliderslide.wav' if I were you ;w;
I strongly urge you not to mute the slider sliding sounds with those inheriting sections
First, it's very annoying to do it on every slider and there will be still sounds on the head and end

The red boxes shows the places with sliding sounds if you make the inheriting sections like that

You know, that sliding sound ruins the song ;___;
So, change delete all those inheriting sections and add in a silenced 'soft-sliderslide.wav'

[Insane]
Timing Section 00:16:049 - Put to 00:16:169 instead Fixed.
00:51:492 (9) - Delete this note? no
00:58:629 - I think muting this is not needed IMO :3 Fixed

[Spirit's Love]
00:32:137 (1) - Whistle or Finish? (A little dry without hitsounds)
01:02:137 (3) - Delete Clap (Slider end)
01:02:742 (4) - Left 2 grid (Grid size 4)
01:03:589 (3) - Clap (Slider head)
01:05:040 (1) - Clap (Slider End)
01:18:347 (4) - I don't like this because it overlaps the previous slider D:

[0OoMickeyoO0's Hard]
01:17:621 (2) - Avoid overlapping with the previous slider

[Normal]
00:16:652 (1) - Too close to spinner? (Ignore this if you think this is fine :3)
00:54:637 (8) - Avoid overlapping with the previous slider ok
01:03:104 (1) - Too close to spinner? (Ignore this if you think this is fine :3)
01:06:491 (6) - x:260 y:176 ok
01:07:943 (3) - ^ ok
01:08:910 (5) - Last point: x:452 y:296 no
01:16:652 (1) - I saw you tried to mute this spinner (Volume 0%), but it doesn't seem to work OwO Fixed

[Easy]
01:03:104 (1) - Too close to spinner? (Ignore this if you think this is fine :3)
01:06:491 (5) - x:188 y:248 Fixed
01:07:459 (1) - Delete, copy 01:08:427 (2), paste and then Ctrl + H? (To make it symmetrical) Fixed
01:10:362 (4) - 1 grid up (Grid size 4) Fixed

Star~!

Thanks you "Sis" :3
P.S. about short spinner I don't fixed sorry

1. low quality on the edge of lyrics/title1/title2 elements, do the same thing you did on title.png to make them smoother.
2. spinner-background compress to JPG format.
3. hit0, hit50...should be 256x256. (this is not a must-fix but suggest you do so)
4. some black border parts of score- elements is cut. (0,6,8,9,%,X is especially obvious)
5. copy score- elements to default- elements to make your skin complete?
6. force border color since you use custom hitcircle skin, to prevent strange border color from players' custom skin unfit your custom skin.

[Colours]
SliderBorder : 238,238,238 // you can change the color yourself

1. 33,381
2. 37,702
3. 46,049
4. 51,250
5. 74,718
6. 75,202
7. 75,686

1. 58,992
2. 72,782
3. 74,718

loveFantasy wrote:

hi

[General]
- there're some minor issue on your storyboard/skin:

1. low quality on the edge of lyrics/title1/title2 elements, do the same thing you did on title.png to make them smoother.
2. spinner-background compress to JPG format. Fixed.
3. hit0, hit50...should be 256x256. (this is not a must-fix but suggest you do so)
4. some black border parts of score- elements is cut. (0,6,8,9,%,X is especially obvious)
5. copy score- elements to default- elements to make your skin complete?
6. force border color since you use custom hitcircle skin, to prevent strange border color from players' custom skin unfit your custom skin.

[Colours]
SliderBorder : 238,238,238 // you can change the color yourself

- remove SkinPreference:Default code in your Insane diff Fixed
- enable "display storyboard in front of combo fire", it's blocking your lyric storyboard Fixed

[Easy]
- great

[Normal]
- remove following unused timing sections:

1. 33,381
2. 37,702
3. 46,049
4. 51,250
5. 74,718
6. 75,202
7. 75,686

<00:36:007> (2) add finish for consistent hitsound (ref. [Easy])
<00:39:879> (1) ^
- last KIAI line is not snapped.
All Fixed.

[Hard]
- remove the unused timing sections in KIAI part (there're lots of them)
<00:24:153> (4,5,1) slightly inconsistent spacing, fix it in lv4 grid
- end the KIAI section at same place as other diff

[Spirit's Love]
<00:51:008> (4) clap it
<00:55:121> (5) ^
<00:58:992> (5) ^
- end the KIAI section at same place as other diff

[Insane]
- remove following unused timing sections:

1. 58,992
2. 72,782
3. 74,718

- do this arrangement:
<00:58:024> (1) remove new combo
<00:59:234> (3) new combo
<00:59:718> (1) remove new combo
All Fixed
star, good.

Baka Backstep , fast Ranked this thing D:!

XD

the BG when want to retry so cute T.T

1. 01:04:073 - A note here would be good for me
   Really nice Easy,i like it!

1. 01:16:652 (1) - Add a whistle on this slider
   Again,I really like the Normal too!

1. 00:20:282 (6) - Well,I find this note really unnecessary,maybe remove it?

1. I think this diff is a bit overmapped,since there are a lot of useless streams,but if you don't wanto to change this,ok
2. 00:13:266 (2) - I really don't like how this note is placed...Maybe put this like i did on the screenshot?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:23:428 (3) - Well,this shape could be done better but never mind
4. 00:26:089 - Add a note?
5. 00:56:331 (4) - (nazi) Move the 3rd waypoint 1 grid left to make the shape better?
6. 00:59:234 (1) - Well,this shape too could be done better but never mind
7. 01:18:347 (4) - I really don't like how this slader is placed,maybe move this like in the screenshot?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:28:992 (4) - Aww,i think this slider is not placed very well,but if you don't want to change the position of this slider that's ok
2. 00:46:170 (4) - Make this like 00:45:686 (2) - and move this 1 grid down

-kevincela- wrote:

As requested,here's my mod!:D

[Easy]<

1. 01:04:073 - A note here would be good for me
   Really nice Easy,i like it!

[Normal]

1. 01:16:652 (1) - Add a whistle on this slider
   Again,I really like the Normal too!

Fixed

[0OoMickeyoO0's Hard]

1. 00:20:282 (6) - Well,I find this note really unnecessary,maybe remove it?

Fixed by me

[Spirit's Love]

1. I think this diff is a bit overmapped,since there are a lot of useless streams,but if you don't wanto to change this,ok
2. 00:13:266 (2) - I really don't like how this note is placed...Maybe put this like i did on the screenshot?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:23:428 (3) - Well,this shape could be done better but never mind
4. 00:26:089 - Add a note?
5. 00:56:331 (4) - (nazi) Move the 3rd waypoint 1 grid left to make the shape better?
6. 00:59:234 (1) - Well,this shape too could be done better but never mind
7. 01:18:347 (4) - I really don't like how this slader is placed,maybe move this like in the screenshot?
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. 00:28:992 (4) - Aww,i think this slider is not placed very well,but if you don't want to change the position of this slider that's ok
   I change a shape of slider a little :>
2. 00:46:170 (4) - Make this like 00:45:686 (2) - and move this 1 grid down

Fixed

Well, the diff of Spirit needs some work,but this beatmap is turning out really well!
About Spirit diff I'll remove now, because him not responsed.
My vote is 8/10

HeatKai wrote:

I hope you like it

please please.
:3


313 combo .
Taiko diff >w<
the BG support for SB >w<

Ehhh.. I don't have free time with osu now! (Hard study in university & other activities)
But in July 1st I can add your diff in my map
Kudosu for "Supporter"

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]

00:10:363 (6) - [Nazi] right 1 lv4 grid
00:13:266 (3) - [^], up 1 lv4 grid
00:16:411 - excess timing line...?
00:18:589 (7,8,9) - a bit weird when (7) covers part of (8), try to use curve slider?
00:20:524 (1) - whistle here?
00:23:186 (9) - [Nazi], down 1 lv4 grid
00:28:992 (4) - looks better when it doesn't overlaps with (3), like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105038
00:54:637 (7) - whistle here?
01:00:202 (3,5) - whistle at ending referring to a weak piano sound?
01:08:911 (1) - right 2 lv4 grid to achieve equal spacing
01:17:984 - make this timing line softer as well, like 30%?
All fixed. (PS. some place I add whistle sound already.)
[Hard]

nice!

[Normal]

00:22:460 (4,5,6,7,1) - try to make a more regular pentagon, (4) left 1 lv4 grid, (6) up 1 lv4 grid
01:18:589 (s) - for spinner, you have to mute the spinner eariler, try to put several timing line there to make it gradually softer?
Fixed.
[Easy]
OD, AR - 1?
no problem here~
Fixed.
nice, I don't spot any unrankble stuffs here, star~

arien666 wrote:

[Just a little H's Taiko]
00:20:040 (44) - don? YES
00:38:669 (121) - ^ Maybe fix ==''
00:49:073 (170) - Delete finish? YES , add kat



Actually, not much things :3
orz

ps. Don't give kudosu for this reply ;_;

arien666 wrote:

[Easy]
:3

[Normal]
:3

[0OoMickeyoO0's Hard]
:3

[Insane]
:3

[Just a little H's Taiko]
00:20:040 (44) - don?
00:38:669 (121) - ^
00:49:073 (170) - Delete finish?



Actually, not much things :3
orz

ps. Don't give kudosu for this reply ;_;

Equivalent wrote:

Hi,
First of all, try full submit the beatmap as I have 3 difficulties available after download, "Mickey's Hard", "Normal", "Easy". I will mod only this 3 diff as that the only 3 diff I have
Hmm... When I download I have 5 difficulty.

General:
"The White Room" is album of the song? If it so, remove it from source and move it to tags
viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24765
Remove "Preferred skin : default" on all difficulty and change it to "User's Preferences" instead Fix <3

Skin/SB:
Your missing "hitcircle.png" It's have in my folder. -0-
Change: "Spinner-background.jpg" to "Spinner-background.png", "white.jpg" to "white.png" Fixed.

Mickey hard:
01:05:282 (4) touch HP bar a bit
Other than that, I have no issues

Easy:
<3

Normal:
<3

1. If the Taiko diff is a guest diff, you need to add the mapper's name in the tags. If not... I don't understand its name at all.
2. Why are the spinner-background and the fail screen from Pure Pure (tl;dr what's the link between them and the song ?)
3. For the hitbursts, I generally find it confusing not to have hitbursts that have the same colour as the standard ones. Would you mind recolouring the hearts (not the cute dog) for hit100, hit100k and hit50 ? =(

1. 00:14:718 (1) - There's no reason why you should silence this slider's end. Reducing the volume (around 30%) would be better.
2. 00:34:072 (3) - Going back to the very corner of the streams feels a bit weird, and I doubt many new players would see this note... try moving it elsewhere
3. 01:03:104 (1) - This note appears too soon after the spinner. Remember new players don't spin well and need a long time to readjust their aim.

1. This is rather hard for a Normal. It has too many 1/2 beats (even some 3/4 rhythms...).
2. I generally wouldn't recommend stacking notes under sliderends for a Normal. Due to the stacking, it often looks bad, and the rhythm used is unclear because of the stack.
3. I find the difficulty settings to be rather high for such a calm Normal.

Odaril wrote:

As per your request.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. If the Taiko diff is a guest diff, you need to add the mapper's name in the tags. If not... I don't understand its name at all.
   His name have tag in my map already ("HeatKai") _ _"
2. Why are the spinner-background and the fail screen from Pure Pure (tl;dr what's the link between them and the song ?)
   Yeah,I think it's inconsistent with my map. But I want the picture to match the content of Thai music.
3. For the hitbursts, I generally find it confusing not to have hitbursts that have the same colour as the standard ones. Would you mind recolouring the hearts (not the cute dog) for hit100, hit100k and hit50 ? =(

Fixed with heart color. >w<"
Easy

1. 00:14:718 (1) - There's no reason why you should silence this slider's end. Reducing the volume (around 30%) would be better.
   Fixed.
2. 00:34:072 (3) - Going back to the very corner of the streams feels a bit weird, and I doubt many new players would see this note... try moving it elsewhere
   Moved it. :3
3. 01:03:104 (1) - This note appears too soon after the spinner. Remember new players don't spin well and need a long time to readjust their aim.

Change to slider :]
Normal

1. This is rather hard for a Normal. It has too many 1/2 beats (even some 3/4 rhythms...).
   - Fixed all difficulty with all 1/2 beat (another players easy to catch the beat)
2. I generally wouldn't recommend stacking notes under sliderends for a Normal. Due to the stacking, it often looks bad, and the rhythm used is unclear because of the stack. --------- >> Fixed with all kiai use CS-2
3. I find the difficulty settings to be rather high for such a calm Normal.

^ Maybe I think it's normal+ ha^^"
0OoMickeyoO0's Hard
Sweet Hard.

Insane
Looks fine.

Just a little H's Taiko
Looks fine

Sweet mapset.

1. Remove thai from tags since it will be in the language anyway.
2. What are "sin" and "sony" doing in the tags ?
3. "music" is too generic of a tag to be put imo...
4. The cursortrail.png is too big (62x62 when the maximum size is 51x51).
5. The scorebar background is too big (112 in height when the maximum allowed is 72)
6. The scorebar-colour is too big (the maximum size is 646x13)

Odaril wrote:

Oh, I forgot that in my previous mod, sorry:

1. Remove thai from tags since it will be in the language anyway. Fixed.
2. What are "sin" and "sony" doing in the tags ? Sin is singer of this song ;_;
3. "music" is too generic of a tag to be put imo... Removed.
4. The cursortrail.png is too big (62x62 when the maximum size is 51x51).
5. The scorebar background is too big (112 in height when the maximum allowed is 72) Fixed.
6. The scorebar-colour is too big (the maximum size is 646x13)

Fixed.

Also rename the taiko diff to "HeatKai's Taiko Oni" Fixed.

don't kudosu