heyo
GeneralWhite color is unrankable in kiai parts, consider changing it to a light gray or something
a lot of sliders could have a neater curve by using 2 gray anchors instead of one, using one doesn't make a circle but a parable which is really meh to see.
the rhythm of the first part is weird, it looks totally random, you put spinner for idk which reason and most of yours slider's end end on a strong sound for example this one 00:46:120 (1) -
what a waste of time adding 1 herited timing every 1/1, you could just rename the current hitsounds, for example : drum-hit
finish or soft-hit
clap and use claps/finish for the same result.
Intestellar bg?(all the pictures shows fixed slidershapes/suggestions)
00:06:120 (1) - you could accentuate the first red anchor to have a better curve like this :
https://i.imgur.com/2Ge3LYQ.png00:12:120 (1) - use 2 anchor instead of one to have neater curves when using art sliders :
https://i.imgur.com/gAeD2eU.png00:20:120 (1) - ^
00:34:120 (1) - ^
00:14:120 (1) - move a bit the first anchor to the right/down, it doesn't fit perfectly the slider's end shape
00:22:120 (1) - this slider doesn't look really neat, look at the surronded part of the slider in the picture :
https://i.imgur.com/jKynHMV.png01:00:120 (1) - the slider's end doesn't look really pretty, you can do something like this :
https://i.imgur.com/xhv3Ea7.png01:09:120 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the change of the rotation seems too radical for such a small song, i would prefer to rotate them instead by -68° and you stack it on 01:08:786 (2,3) - . also this part doesn't seems to use a lot the right side
01:22:120 - can i understand why the hitsounds are different but it's the same part of the song?
01:27:620 (1) - it doesn't fit at all, replace it with the precedent triangle pattern that you have here 01:26:620 (1,2,3) -
01:30:120 - why nc every 2 combos now ? keep the 4/3 combo consistancy
01:33:120 (1,2,3) - instead of stacking it on the same pattern 3 times in a row, you could differentiate them from the 2 precedent combo by not stacking the highlighted circles with the precedent pattern and make a another unique pattern with 01:33:620 (1,2,3) -
01:34:120 (1,2,3,1) - rhythm used seems unfitting with the current nc pattern, i would nc every 4 objects instead of 3
01:48:120 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - the concept of inreasing/decreasing spacing is interesting but the visuals doesn't seem as good for me by making the spacing inconsistancy "random" : i excepted 01:48:620 (1,2,3) - to have the same visual spacing as 01:49:120 (1,2,3) - and 01:48:120 (1,2,3) - like 01:49:620 (1,2,3) - . now you have a A-B-B-A pattern
01:54:120 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - fix stacks, it looks bad for me
02:12:286 (2,3,1,2) - they don't look aligned
02:14:453 (3,2,3) - make a triangle, it makes the second 3 out of place
02:17:120 (1,3) - fix stacks
02:28:120 (1,2,3) - fix visuals, it doesn't look really pretty with 3 touching the border
02:31:620 (1,2,3) - not aligned
02:33:620 (1,2,3) - ^
02:37:620 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - flow used is weird, i was excepting that the triangle is rotated by -45°, this is unexcepted
02:41:453 (3,1) - brutal unconfortable flow change and small spacing for whatever reason
03:14:120 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - a least, try to make this visually more polished, 03:14:953 (3) - could be placed at x293 y238 and 03:15:120 (1,2,3) - could have a consistant spacing like 03:14:120 (1,2,3) -
03:19:120 (1,1) - fix stack lol
03:28:120 (1) - the second gray anchor could be moved to the left for a better curve
03:36:120 (1) - the slider's end isn't parallal to the slider's head
03:46:120 (1) - ehh, fix blanket for this one
03:48:370 (1,1) - you could map the next part or deleting this, keeping this look like very unfinished
04:28:120 - MY EARS OMG, could you reduce the volume this part of the song ? (actual song, not hitsounds), if you're planning this for ranked, you can abandon this immediately and trying to feature it in the loved section if you're keeping this.
also why making it so similar to the precedents sections if this part of the song is very different ?
05:00:120 - fiix NC's until the end of the song by switching nc of these 05:00:120 (4,1) - 05:01:620 (9,1) - , it's nonsense to nc on a 1/3 tick and not on the white one
05:12:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - unstructured random pattern, they overlaps each other for no reason
sorry for being salty in the end of my mod and gl