Duca - Jewel Days

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Yamicchi

lit120 wrote:

[yamicchi]
  1. 01:02:034 (5) - it'd be confusing where u have to hit a note on 01:02:367 (6) - . since it's a pause part, u should stack it instead .-. it's just to make the objects easier to read. Nothing changed
  2. 01:43:700 (4,5) - was expecting to have this a higher spacing due to its downbeat, but u didn't 01:43:700 (4,5) - those slider starts all have drum sounds, so I made them spacing due to aesthetics and drums too. It'd be fine
@joker- first one fixed. Next one not.

Thanks for mod

osu file format v14

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Title:Jewel Days
TitleUnicode:Jewel Days
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:0109-
Version:Yamicchi's Extra
Source:Golden Marriage -Jewel Days-
Tags:visual novel eroge lotta ensemble ゴールデンマリッジ ジュエルデイズ asaiga yamicchi
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Garden
Easy
  1. 00:45:200 (1) - nc is not needed here based on your general nc logic?
  2. 01:14:367 (1,3) - same, swap nc and de;ete this one 01:17:034 (1) - too
  3. 01:25:200 (1,3) - ^


Normal
  1. 00:51:867 (1,3) - blanket better if thats intended
  2. 01:08:367 - thought most vocals are somehow followed well, it feels weird to me that you suddenly ignore this one, I would suggest https://puu.sh/vlENY/8e32436763.png rhythm pattern instead. yea i changed 01:07:034 (4) - to circles too i think its nice to have some rhythm variation from 01:04:367 (2,4) - etc.
  3. 01:29:700 - ^


Hard
  1. 00:27:867 (1) - 00:29:867 (3) - 00:30:534 (1) - should be 1.4x spacing considering how you generally dealt with those finish emphasizes
  2. 00:51:200 (5,6) - visually too close, chekc how it looks with stacking on
  3. 01:22:367 (3) - vocal at the reverse sounds weird to me, what about turning 01:22:200 (2,3) - into 2 stacked circles + 1/2slider
  4. 01:23:534 (6,7,8) - change to a reversed slider so 01:23:617 - sound isn't missed? like 01:42:200 (3) -


Asaiga's Insane
  1. 00:13:700 - 00:19:867 (1) - 00:29:867 (4) - 00:30:534 (1) - 00:41:200 - 00:55:700 - 01:49:034 - finish i supposed, considering how ur general hitsounding was done
  2. 00:21:700 (4,5) - i'd go with simple 1/2 here cuz extended sliders are never used again to emphasize similar vocals
  3. 00:46:200 (4,1) - minor one, u can make the visual spacing between sliders a bit larger, based on the general visual distances in this diff
    hmm maybe just different aesthetic preferences your slider curve usage loks really random to me..


Yamicchi's Extra
  1. 00:06:534 - 00:39:700 - finish?
    the difficulty sounds a bit underhitsounded here and there but that might be your hitsounding style ;?


Jewel
  1. 00:11:450 (6) - the uneven spacing in the triplet triggers me a bit lol
  2. 00:35:367 - consider making the finish at tail clickable, it sounds a bit misleading in gameplay.. or deleting the finish can work too
  3. 00:57:200 - finish sounds better here
  4. 01:11:867 (1,3,1) - 01:33:200 (1,3,5) - consider whistle, fits music well imo
  5. 01:12:534 (1,2) - 01:33:867 (5,6) - different nc pattern/?
  6. 01:42:534 - imo 0.9x slowdown isnt significant enough while playing, i'd suggest around 0.8x
  7. 01:57:367 (1,2) - consider rearranging the placement of the two objects so movement will be consistent with 01:55:867 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - the rest
  8. 00:49:200 - to 00:51:867 - slowdown a bit like 01:42:534 - ?
Topic Starter
0109-

Garden wrote:

Easy
  1. 00:45:200 (1) - nc is not needed here based on your general nc logic? the pitch of the sound was kinda change like 00:43:867 (1) - , 00:46:534 (1) - has expressed
  2. 01:14:367 (1,3) - same, swap nc and de;ete this one 01:17:034 (1) - too ok
  3. 01:25:200 (1,3) - ^ ok


Normal
  1. 00:51:867 (1,3) - blanket better if thats intended ok
  2. 01:08:367 - thought most vocals are somehow followed well, it feels weird to me that you suddenly ignore this one, I would suggest https://puu.sh/vlENY/8e32436763.png rhythm pattern instead. yea i changed 01:07:034 (4) - to circles too i think its nice to have some rhythm variation from 01:04:367 (2,4) - etc. it's not a big problem imo, since the concept of the map not really follow the vocal, like 00:39:034 (2) - as an example, furthermore, putting notes in red ticks somehow feels awkward since i mapped mainly on white ticks which comfortable for new players.
  3. 01:29:700 - ^ ^


Hard
  1. 00:27:867 (1) - 00:29:867 (3) - 00:30:534 (1) - should be 1.4x spacing considering how you generally dealt with those finish emphasizes yeah
  2. 00:51:200 (5,6) - visually too close, chekc how it looks with stacking on changed it to 0.2 spacing instead
  3. 01:22:367 (3) - vocal at the reverse sounds weird to me, what about turning 01:22:200 (2,3) - into 2 stacked circles + 1/2slider i intendid to follow the drum sound here as the overall concept does as well
  4. 01:23:534 (6,7,8) - change to a reversed slider so 01:23:617 - sound isn't missed? like 01:42:200 (3) - cool


Jewel
  1. 00:11:450 (6) - the uneven spacing in the triplet triggers me a bit lol
  2. 00:35:367 - consider making the finish at tail clickable, it sounds a bit misleading in gameplay.. or deleting the finish can work too
  3. 00:57:200 - finish sounds better here
  4. 01:11:867 (1,3,1) - 01:33:200 (1,3,5) - consider whistle, fits music well imo
  5. 01:12:534 (1,2) - 01:33:867 (5,6) - different nc pattern/?
  6. 01:42:534 - imo 0.9x slowdown isnt significant enough while playing, i'd suggest around 0.8x
  7. 01:57:367 (1,2) - consider rearranging the placement of the two objects so movement will be consistent with 01:55:867 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - the rest
  8. 00:49:200 - to 00:51:867 - slowdown a bit like 01:42:534 - ?
    all fixed :)
Thanks for modding :)

Edit: fixed for yamicchi
Asaiga

Garden wrote:

Asaiga's Insane
  1. 00:13:700 - 00:19:867 (1) - 00:29:867 (4) - 00:30:534 (1) - 00:41:200 - 00:55:700 - 01:49:034 - finish i supposed, considering how ur general hitsounding was done all added! Thanks for pointing these out
  2. 00:21:700 (4,5) - i'd go with simple 1/2 here cuz extended sliders are never used again to emphasize similar vocals changed this pattern
  3. 00:46:200 (4,1) - minor one, u can make the visual spacing between sliders a bit larger, based on the general visual distances in this diff adjusted
    hmm maybe just different aesthetic preferences your slider curve usage loks really random to me.. I mapped this when I was still noob at mapping, I understand.
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236,160,114534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
126,216,114700,5,4,0:0:0:0:
126,216,114867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
126,216,115034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,86,115200,5,4,0:0:0:0:
239,47,115367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,54,115534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
407,110,115700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
407,282,115867,5,4,0:0:0:0:
299,336,116034,2,0,L|208:333,1,67.4999979400635,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,207,116367,5,4,0:0:0:0:
246,248,116534,2,0,L|170:235,1,67.4999979400635,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,87,116867,5,4,0:0:0:0:
205,28,117034,2,0,L|271:17,1,67.4999979400635,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,157,117367,5,4,0:0:0:0:
277,107,117534,2,0,L|358:115,1,67.4999979400635,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,281,117867,5,4,0:0:0:0:
338,190,118034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,295,118200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,295,118284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,295,118367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,163,118534,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,118617,12,0,125200,0:0:0:0:
Garden
sweet song
Xexxar
Easy:
01:01:200 - and 00:13:200 - are unrankable because you cannot silence both slider tick and slider slide.
00:48:534 (3) - unrankable because its not synced to any music
01:18:534 (1,2,3) - angles look bad
01:09:200 (3) - missing hitsound?
01:58:700 (1) - spinner should probably go on for another 2/1

Normal:
00:30:534 (1) - uhh i wouldnt do this slider shape.
01:29:034 - why is this a slider end? rly awkward

Fix the unrankables. I would also recommend spending some more time on the set overall. If you have questions about how to improve your mapset you can message me ingame, I'm short on time since its still finals week but I wanted to at least make sure this wasn't pushed with these unrankable elements. GL!
Topic Starter
0109-

Xexxar wrote:

Easy:
01:01:200 - and 00:13:200 - are unrankable because you cannot silence both slider tick and slider slide.
00:48:534 (3) - unrankable because its not synced to any music
01:18:534 (1,2,3) - angles look bad
01:09:200 (3) - missing hitsound? that was my intention, not really necessary to put something there imo..
01:58:700 (1) - spinner should probably go on for another 2/1 I just want all the difficulty have the same length. Adding another 2/1 seems kinda hard for HR players at the last diff :?

Normal:
00:30:534 (1) - uhh i wouldnt do this slider shape. im not sure if i did it right :(
01:29:034 - why is this a slider end? rly awkward i want to avoid red ticks as much as possible in order to make the map looks not so complicated. If it that noticeable, maybe i'll do some remap at the kiai :(

Fix the unrankables. I would also recommend spending some more time on the set overall. If you have questions about how to improve your mapset you can message me ingame, I'm short on time since its still finals week but I wanted to at least make sure this wasn't pushed with these unrankable elements. GL!
Thanks you ;)
No reply= fixed
depzdai
Ex diff mod delivered.
Nếu anh chịu M4M thì giúp em mod cái này luôn (tối thiểu là chỉ mod phụ em diff cuối thôi): https://osu.ppy.sh/s/595566. Cảm ơn anh nhiều! XD
À mà nếu mod này cùi bắp quá thì anh khỏi mod cái của em nữa cũng được. Xd

[Ex]
  1. Đầu tiên là cái buildup từ 00:19:867 trở đi. Một số đoạn jump góc hẹp quá mặc dù chẳng cần thiết phải làm thế: 00:25:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 00:33:534 (2,3,4,5) - 00:36:534 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - 00:51:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - .
  2. 00:12:534 (3) - Đổi thành 2 circles đi anh. Guitar nó chơi cả đầu với đuôi của slider đó và tone đang tăng nên cần jump.
  3. 00:24:867 (4,5,6,7,1) - Rotate cái slider hoặc chỉnh cái slider bớt cong để flow mượt hơn.
  4. 00:32:700 (2,2) - Blanket.
  5. 00:35:034 (1,2) - Lạ vì cái circle 2 không cần nhấn vì không có drum, chỉ có vocal, làm vậy thì không phù hợp với 00:34:367 (1) - trước đó. Mà 00:35:200 - có drum nè anh?
  6. 00:42:200 (4) - Kéo tới x:270 y:80 cho blanket đẹp hơn.
  7. 00:48:867 (2,3,4,5,1) - Blanket đống curve stream với 00:48:367 (1) - nhé anh.
  8. 00:49:200 (1,2,3) - Em thích chuyển về thế này: https://puu.sh/vXTQm/91bc1ba218.png. Slider 1 thay đổi cấu trúc đường đi của curve stream trước đó để nhấn mạnh (khúc đó rhythm chậm hẳn), và flow đẹp chơi sẽ sướng hơn (snap DS luôn càng tốt).
  9. 00:51:200 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - Blanket.
  10. 00:57:200 (1) - Gam trưởng tăng lên nên đảo flow hợp hơn nhiều. Mặc dù nếu làm vậy thì phải chỉnh thêm đống blanket phía sau nữa. https://puu.sh/vXUhT/b7157f0246.png
  11. 00:54:534 (1,2,3,4) - Đang map theo vocal mà đột nhiên chuyển sang drum nên kì. https://puu.sh/vXUDA/4689b56ee2.png
  12. 01:02:367 (3,1) - Nhạc dừng thì nên map stack, muốn jump để nhấn thì sử dụng kickslider. https://puu.sh/vXUH6/15173a16b0.png
  13. 01:04:367 (2,3,1) - 01:07:034 (2,3,1) - 01:09:700 (2,3,1) - Đống này lộn xộn, overlap không có qui tắc nên xấu map. (Khúc sau cấu trúc là stack sliders nên khá thích)
  14. 01:13:700 (2,3,1) - 01:16:367 (2,3,1) - Hai cái này đừng có overlap để nó giống khúc sau 01:35:034 (2,3,1) - 01:37:700 (2,3,1) - , với lại để nhấn mạnh so với 3 cái patterns bên trên cũng tốt.
  15. 01:51:200 (3) - Đổi thành 2 circles. Lí do như một ý nào đó ở trên.
  16. 01:52:867 (1,2,3,1) - Em nghĩ cần bỏ thêm 1 cái circle ở 01:53:117 - (làm thành cái penta luôn) để nhấn càng mạnh giọng hát (giọng hét) càng tốt. Vả lại triplet để không đó rồi jump sang nốt khác thì đống jump đằng sau (âm guitar) bị giảm hẳn stress trong bài hát. (Hình như em có nghe cả tiếng drum nữa, nhưng âm lượng drum giảm dần đều nên không rõ nữa)
  17. Hình như còn vài cái blankets nữa mà em không nhớ. Với lại còn flow ở một số chỗ khác không mượt mà như diff Jewel (chắc tại speedmap).

Chúc anh may mắn.
Topic Starter
0109-

depzdai wrote:

Ex diff mod delivered.
Nếu anh chịu M4M thì giúp em mod cái này luôn (tối thiểu là chỉ mod phụ em diff cuối thôi): https://osu.ppy.sh/s/595566. Cảm ơn anh nhiều! XD
À mà nếu mod này cùi bắp quá thì anh khỏi mod cái của em nữa cũng được. Xd

[Ex]
  1. Đầu tiên là cái buildup từ 00:19:867 trở đi. Một số đoạn jump góc hẹp quá mặc dù chẳng cần thiết phải làm thế: 00:25:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 00:33:534 (2,3,4,5) - 00:36:534 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - 00:51:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - . hẹp thì sao ?
  2. 00:12:534 (3) - Đổi thành 2 circles đi anh. Guitar nó chơi cả đầu với đuôi của slider đó và tone đang tăng nên cần jump. oki
  3. 00:24:867 (4,5,6,7,1) - Rotate cái slider hoặc chỉnh cái slider bớt cong để flow mượt hơn. ok
  4. 00:32:700 (2,2) - Blanket. lol xa quá rồi ko cần thiết đến mức vậy đâu :(
  5. 00:35:034 (1,2) - Lạ vì cái circle 2 không cần nhấn vì không có drum, chỉ có vocal, làm vậy thì không phù hợp với 00:34:367 (1) - trước đó. Mà 00:35:200 - có drum nè anh? à ko biết là đã update hs chưa nhưng ở đây có finish, để ở đuôi nhìn tù lắm
  6. 00:42:200 (4) - Kéo tới x:270 y:80 cho blanket đẹp hơn. ok
  7. 00:48:867 (2,3,4,5,1) - Blanket đống curve stream với 00:48:367 (1) - nhé anh. nó đang như thế rồi mà
  8. 00:49:200 (1,2,3) - Em thích chuyển về thế này: https://puu.sh/vXTQm/91bc1ba218.png. Slider 1 thay đổi cấu trúc đường đi của curve stream trước đó để nhấn mạnh (khúc đó rhythm chậm hẳn), và flow đẹp chơi sẽ sướng hơn (snap DS luôn càng tốt). Nhìn không quen lắm, nó cũng ko đến mức cần thiết vậy
  9. 00:51:200 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - Blanket. ok
  10. 00:57:200 (1) - Gam trưởng tăng lên nên đảo flow hợp hơn nhiều. Mặc dù nếu làm vậy thì phải chỉnh thêm đống blanket phía sau nữa. https://puu.sh/vXUhT/b7157f0246.png flow vậy sao gọi là hợp :|
  11. 00:54:534 (1,2,3,4) - Đang map theo vocal mà đột nhiên chuyển sang drum nên kì. https://puu.sh/vXUDA/4689b56ee2.png vẫn theo vocal mà, nhưng chỗ 00:55:034 cảm thấy không mạnh đến mức để cần nhấn quá
  12. 01:02:367 (3,1) - Nhạc dừng thì nên map stack, muốn jump để nhấn thì sử dụng kickslider. https://puu.sh/vXUH6/15173a16b0.png sao phải stack, quãng 1/1 cũng đủ để recover, stack sau 1 đoạn jump lớn cảm giác cũng khá là hững
  13. 01:04:367 (2,3,1) - 01:07:034 (2,3,1) - 01:09:700 (2,3,1) - Đống này lộn xộn, overlap không có qui tắc nên xấu map. (Khúc sau cấu trúc là stack sliders nên khá thích) không lộn xộn đến mức đấy đâu :|
  14. 01:13:700 (2,3,1) - 01:16:367 (2,3,1) - Hai cái này đừng có overlap để nó giống khúc sau 01:35:034 (2,3,1) - 01:37:700 (2,3,1) - , với lại để nhấn mạnh so với 3 cái patterns bên trên cũng tốt. đã sửa lại trông cho ổn hơn chút
  15. 01:51:200 (3) - Đổi thành 2 circles. Lí do như một ý nào đó ở trên. ok
  16. 01:52:867 (1,2,3,1) - Em nghĩ cần bỏ thêm 1 cái circle ở 01:53:117 - (làm thành cái penta luôn) để nhấn càng mạnh giọng hát (giọng hét) càng tốt. Vả lại triplet để không đó rồi jump sang nốt khác thì đống jump đằng sau (âm guitar) bị giảm hẳn stress trong bài hát. (Hình như em có nghe cả tiếng drum nữa, nhưng âm lượng drum giảm dần đều nên không rõ nữa) đã sửa thành 1 cái 1/4 slider và 1 circle
  17. Hình như còn vài cái blankets nữa mà em không nhớ. Với lại còn flow ở một số chỗ khác không mượt mà như diff Jewel (chắc tại speedmap).

Chúc anh may mắn.
<3
Sotarks
saw this bubbled, why u ask me mod?
k w/e some stuff could be adjusted before rank

illumination
00:06:200 (1) - mute slider end; no sound on the end
00:06:867 (2) - ^ try doing this for every one on your map won't notice them now anymore, it's just that faving a kick sound on a blue tic where's there's nothing on it feels weird.
00:13:034 (1) - place the 2nd anchor like that
00:21:367 - pls map that sound there's a clap
00:31:867 (1) - ^ same here
00:22:867 (2) - overlap feels horrible xd
00:40:534 (4,5) - flow is not smooth here, curve the stream counter clockwise to make it better
00:49:700 - map smth here (also this section hitsounding missing some claps dude)
01:22:367 (4) - clap pls 01:22:534 (1) - same on the ending
01:31:034 (2,3) - like i said before you are suposed to mute those slider ends sionce there are no sounds on those endings pls.
01:40:867 (3) - make this curve better pls

yamicchi
00:11:200 (5) - clap pls
00:22:867 (3,4,5) - clap
ok lots of hitsounds missing on this diff pls

eh idk why this got bubbled xD lots of stuff missing and unpolished
i really do think top diff could have more polishment
gl guys

btw look at kibb's ver https://osu.ppy.sh/s/605719
inspire yourself on rhythm and hitsounding
Topic Starter
0109-

Sotarks wrote:

saw this bubbled, why u ask me mod? i've just remapped lol
k w/e some stuff could be adjusted before rank

illumination
00:06:200 (1) - mute slider end; no sound on the end
00:06:867 (2) - ^ try doing this for everyone on your map won't notice them now anymore, it's just that faving a kick sound on a blue tic where's there's nothing on it feels weird.
00:13:034 (1) - place the 2nd anchor like that
00:21:367 - pls map that sound there's a clap
00:31:867 (1) - ^ same here
00:22:867 (2) - overlap feels horrible xd
00:40:534 (4,5) - flow is not smooth here, curve the stream counter clockwise to make it better
00:49:700 - map smth here (also this section hitsounding missing some claps dude) i just want to lower the intensity in the calm parts
01:22:367 (4) - clap pls 01:22:534 (1) - same on the ending
01:31:034 (2,3) - like i said before you are suposed to mute those slider ends sionce there are no sounds on those endings pls.
01:40:867 (3) - make this curve better pls

eh idk why this got bubbled xD lots of stuff missing and unpolished
i really do think top diff could have more polishment
gl guys

btw look at kibb's ver https://osu.ppy.sh/s/605719
inspire yourself on rhythm and hitsounding cool :)
no reply = fixed
Thx for modding :)
LMT
vài thứ

  1. 00:21:700 (3,4) - NC (3) được không? dễ đọc nhầm thành 1/2 slider quá.
  2. 00:55:367 (4) - đây theo vocals thì 00:55:034 - theo đây luôn nhỉ, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8774594 như này này
  3. 00:59:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - sắp xếp gọn hơn được không, nhìn hơn random. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8774657 chẳng hạn thôi.
  4. 01:08:867 (5) - kéo sang phải chút cho khoảng cách 3->4 với 3->5 giống nhau.
  5. 01:38:367 (1) - shape khác 1 tí tại vì vocal đang ngân cao được không?
  6. 01:51:700 (1,2) - sao đây đuôi slider chĩa vào circle mà 01:52:367 (4,5) - đây thì lại ko ? xd
  7. 00:37:200 (6) - slider hướng nghiêng quá so với các slider khác.
  8. 00:48:367 (4) - sao không để 3/4 + circle như mấy chỗ khác?
  9. 01:00:534 (5,1) - blanket? owo
  10. 01:18:450 (6) - kéo cái này lên trên chút, hiện giờ 6->1 hơi gãy.
  11. 01:36:867 (5,2) - overlap xíu
  12. 01:05:034 (1) - hiện giờ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8774722 ko được đều nhau lắm, mang 1 sang bên trái tí thì đẹp.


cũng ok đó =)) gl
Topic Starter
0109-

LMT wrote:

vài thứ

  1. 00:21:700 (3,4) - NC (3) được không? dễ đọc nhầm thành 1/2 slider quá.
  2. 00:55:367 (4) - đây theo vocals thì 00:55:034 - theo đây luôn nhỉ, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8774594 như này này hợp lý nhưng ko hiểu sao cứ thích cái rhythm này hơn :| sẽ xem thêm ý kiến ạ
  3. 00:59:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - sắp xếp gọn hơn được không, nhìn hơn random. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8774657 chẳng hạn thôi. đã chỉnh lại 1 chút cho spacing đống bên đó = nhau
  4. 01:08:867 (5) - kéo sang phải chút cho khoảng cách 3->4 với 3->5 giống nhau.
  5. 01:38:367 (1) - shape khác 1 tí tại vì vocal đang ngân cao được không? thấy không quan trọng lắm, đặt ở trên cao một phần thể hiện đc rồi chắc vậy
  6. 01:51:700 (1,2) - sao đây đuôi slider chĩa vào circle mà 01:52:367 (4,5) - đây thì lại ko ? xd
  7. 00:37:200 (6) - slider hướng nghiêng quá so với các slider khác. chưa thấy nỏ làm sao lắm
  8. 00:48:367 (4) - sao không để 3/4 + circle như mấy chỗ khác?
  9. 01:00:534 (5,1) - blanket? owo
  10. 01:18:450 (6) - kéo cái này lên trên chút, hiện giờ 6->1 hơi gãy. emphasize cái 1
  11. 01:36:867 (5,2) - overlap xíu
  12. 01:05:034 (1) - hiện giờ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8774722 ko được đều nhau lắm, mang 1 sang bên trái tí thì đẹp.


cũng ok đó =)) gl
no replay= fixed
cảm ơn ạ :)
A r M i N
m4m

[topdiff]

00:06:200 (1) - like this ? http://puu.sh/x4MKi/20e7db1dc8.jpg
00:07:700 (1) - http://puu.sh/x4MNw/c9e6d76096.jpg
00:10:367 (1) - blanket
00:13:034 (1) - maybe use same shape as 00:13:700 (4) -
00:22:867 (2) - http://puu.sh/x4MU7/0d7f3502e5.jpg
00:49:200 (1) - spacing a bit low on this one
00:50:534 (4) - nc
00:51:034 (5,6,7,8) - crappy flow
01:29:867 (4) - copy it and CTRL+H ,then put in on the spot of (5) dont forget to add back the hitsounds.. this is so it looks more symmetric you know xd
I would say that working on some slidershapes could be a good idea (especially those red point 1/1 sliders)

[Extra]

00:41:867 (3) - that would look better imo ^^ http://puu.sh/x4Nn0/4f1bf04fe0.jpg
00:57:200 (1) - i feel like at this part there are some claps missing
01:03:867 (6) - nc
01:27:700 (6) - like this? http://puu.sh/x4Nur/05e2e8e535.jpg

[Insane]

put OD8?

[Hard]

00:07:700 (1) - blanket
00:27:867 (1) - strange flow, http://puu.sh/x4PIA/4c99f38232.jpg
01:22:367 (3) - nc


Good luck :3
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/646741
Topic Starter
0109-

A r M i N wrote:

m4m

[topdiff]

00:06:200 (1) - like this ? http://puu.sh/x4MKi/20e7db1dc8.jpg i want to emphasize 00:06:534 (1) -
00:07:700 (1) - http://puu.sh/x4MNw/c9e6d76096.jpg looks nice but like there's no reason to make a shape like that
00:10:367 (1) - blanket
00:13:034 (1) - maybe use same shape as 00:13:700 (4) - they express different sounds
00:22:867 (2) - http://puu.sh/x4MU7/0d7f3502e5.jpg nice
00:49:200 (1) - spacing a bit low on this one
00:50:534 (4) - nc
00:51:034 (5,6,7,8) - crappy flow for the sake of build-up
01:29:867 (4) - copy it and CTRL+H ,then put in on the spot of (5) dont forget to add back the hitsounds.. this is so it looks more symmetric you know xd i wasn't intend to make a symmetric here :(
I would say that working on some slidershapes could be a good idea (especially those red point 1/1 sliders) yeah i'll try working on those

[Hard]

00:07:700 (1) - blanket
00:27:867 (1) - strange flow, http://puu.sh/x4PIA/4c99f38232.jpg
01:22:367 (3) - nc not really necessary


Good luck :3
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/646741
no reply=fixed thanks for modding, will try to get ur map modded soon :)
edit: updated for yami
Garden
general:
end yami's diff at 02:01:200 - like every other diffs?

hard:
00:40:534 (3,4,5,6) - https://puu.sh/xbnlu/12fc4352fc.png maybe
01:23:534 (6) - one more reverse

yami:
00:06:534 - 00:59:867 - finish

illumination:
00:06:200 (1) - maybe subjective, ctrl-g looks more natural to play.. or you can move the slider up that works too
00:40:700 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - try curve the stream less, would improve aesthetic/playability imo
01:01:534 (3,4) - i suggest decreasing some spacing here (around 2.8~2.9x maybe?), so you can make 01:01:867 (1,2) - stand out more
01:04:367 (2) - etc. nc all the slowdown?
Topic Starter
0109-

Garden wrote:

general:
end yami's diff at 02:01:200 - like every other diffs? ok

hard:
00:40:534 (3,4,5,6) - https://puu.sh/xbnlu/12fc4352fc.png maybe nice
01:23:534 (6) - one more reverse ok

yami:
00:06:534 - 00:59:867 - finish

illumination:
00:06:200 (1) - maybe subjective, ctrl-g looks more natural to play.. or you can move the slider up that works too adjusted a bit
00:40:700 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - try curve the stream less, would improve aesthetic/playability imo ok :)
01:01:534 (3,4) - i suggest decreasing some spacing here (around 2.8~2.9x maybe?), so you can make 01:01:867 (1,2) - stand out more adjusted a bit (3.5x)
01:04:367 (2) - etc. nc all the slowdown? not sure if it counted as unnecessary nc spam but yeah fixed :)
also fixed for yami :)
Garden
:)
gansta
:( I'm still waiting for the approval
Topic Starter
0109-
Im bad at finding t2 bn :(

edit: self popped (27/8)
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