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@AmateurMonkeyYT: I don't think so :(

Anyway thanks for modding :)
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hello

00:08:200 (2) - the sound at the slider end should be clickable too, try changing with a circle and put a slider after
00:28:701 (5) - ctrl+G
00:29:534 (2,3) - ^, move them closer to the next two to make it a square
01:03:200 (5) - ^
01:19:534 (6) - ^
makes it flow better imo
first rename it to extra plz
00:13:700 (4,5) - same sound as 00:13:200 (2,3), why the long slider
from 00:14:534 (1) to 00:19:034 (2) - a little confusing to read, maybe space the sliders a bit more
00:22:867 (3,4,5) - this angle feels weird
00:34:034 (6,7) - same sound as 00:33:867 (5) - move 7 to like x:400 y180
stack 01:03:534 (4) with 01:03:034 (2)
01:16:700 (3) - ctrl + j


last diff is pretty good as it is, doubt I can be any help there
good luck tho!
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Arutsuki wrote:

first rename it to extra plz depends on 0109-'s decision
00:13:700 (4,5) - same sound as 00:13:200 (2,3), why the long slider didn't hear the sound. fixed
from 00:14:534 (1) to 00:19:034 (2) - a little confusing to read, maybe space the sliders a bit more made some changes
00:22:867 (3,4,5) - this angle feels weird hmmm okay
00:34:034 (6,7) - same sound as 00:33:867 (5) - move 7 to like x:400 y180 obviously I made a wrong decision on the hitclap so yea fixed a bit
stack 01:03:534 (4) with 01:03:034 (2) no need
01:16:700 (3) - ctrl + j nah I don't like that flow


last diff is pretty good as it is, doubt I can be any help there
good luck tho!
Thanks

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62534
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 4.199998

[Metadata]
Title:Jewel Days
TitleUnicode:Jewel Days
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:0109-
Version:Yamicchi's Insane
Source:Golden Marriage -Jewel Days-
Tags:game visual novel eroge lotta ensemble ゴールデンマリッジ ジュエルデイズ asaiga yamicchi
BeatmapID:1101027
BeatmapSetID:491650

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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posted

Arutsuki wrote:

hello

00:08:200 (2) - the sound at the slider end should be clickable too, try changing with a circle and put a slider after not really
00:28:701 (5) - ctrl+G not necessary and I prefer flow this way
00:29:534 (2,3) - ^, move them closer to the next two to make it a square wasn't intended to make a square
01:03:200 (5) - ^ no thx
01:19:534 (6) - ^ no circular flow because clap and it doesn't matter
makes it flow better imo yea, but not necessarily feel good while playing


good luck tho!
thx
posted
Hi.
The source should be the original (Japanese) title of the game, not the romanisation. It should be 'ゴールデンマリッジ ―ジュエルデイズ―'.
You can add the romanisation to the tags.
gl with the map c:
posted
randomly found the last spinner hard to pass with hr lol
http://puu.sh/sR0ZW/55a36ca0a9.jpg
posted
nice song and map!
dont grave ahhhhhhh
posted

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

dont grave ahhhhhhh
dont grave ahhhhhhh
posted
mod
Extra-

00:17:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - any reason why only 00:18:200 (1) - is curved slider? maybe curve all or straighten all to keep it consistent
00:19:867 (1,2,3) - would use 1/2 sliders instead of circles, feels like it transitions better into the stream
01:17:700 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - if anything this feels like it should be small ds -> big not the other way round
01:21:700 - there's a sound here ya?

nothing much for me, very clean map!
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posted

TequilaWolf wrote:

mod
Extra-

00:17:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - any reason why only 00:18:200 (1) - is curved slider? maybe curve all or straighten all to keep it consistent it's not really a problem
00:19:867 (1,2,3) - would use 1/2 sliders instead of circles, feels like it transitions better into the stream that's weird
01:17:700 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - if anything this feels like it should be small ds -> big not the other way round i don't really get it :(
01:21:700 - there's a sound here ya? fixed :)

nothing much for me, very clean map!
#
Thanks for modding
posted
Ill be honest, I may not have the best hearing, so if there are sounds where I say there aren't I'm sorry.
General
Ill be honest, in Extra I had no idea what you were following, the voice or drums. Half was voice half was drums.

Yamicchi's Extra
00:47:034 (2,3,4) - Blue tick doesnt have a sound on it, no need for triple.
00:55:034 (2,3,4) - ^
01:18:200 (7) - Probably be better if this was a 1/4th slider with repeats.
01:50:284 (4) - This doesnt have a sound on it.


Extra
00:06:867 (2,3,4) - These do not flow at all.
00:11:367 (5,6) - You could put a triple here instead, since theres a drum hit on the blut tick in between.
00:14:200 (4,5,1) - Making 5 a 1/4th slider would fir the song, as there is a drum sound on the blue tick, and that seems to be what your following here.
00:28:367 (1,2,1) - On the white ticks in between here there are loud hits that you should cover
00:49:700 - I see your following the voice here, but you could probably fit a circle on this red tick here.
01:02:867 (4) - There is a slider end on a strong part of the song.
01:03:367 (6,7) - 6 is where the voice starts and would be a better place to start the slider.
01:18:534 (1,2,3) - This doesnt flow, you could turn the slider upward instead and then it would flow better.
01:50:200 (4,5,6,7) - This stream should be a triple instead, as 5 doesnt land on a sound at all. (and theres also a hit on the blut tick before 4)


Sorry for a small mod I can mod anything other than extra and hard insanes..nor am I that good..
posted
Sorry I cannot find anything else :(

[Extra]
00:34:367 (1) - This is over-mapping a bit, since 00:13:034 (1) is the same shape, and it represents a more complex sound. Change the slider to match --> 00:35:700 (1)
00:48:367 (1) - /\
01:36:534 (4,5) - These should have clap sounds on them.
01:56:367 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - These jumps are off to the side. Maybe to emphasize the changing intensity, move it down and up rather than to the side.
posted
i followed both

Extra
00:06:867 (2,3,4) - These do not flow at all. these do
00:11:367 (5,6) - You could put a triple here instead, since theres a drum hit on the blut tick in between. fixed :)
00:14:200 (4,5,1) - Making 5 a 1/4th slider would fir the song, as there is a drum sound on the blue tick, and that seems to be what your following here. no sound on the blue tick
00:28:367 (1,2,1) - On the white ticks in between here there are loud hits that you should cover yeah
00:49:700 - I see your following the voice here, but you could probably fit a circle on this red tick here. fixed :)
01:02:867 (4) - There is a slider end on a strong part of the song. what do you mean?
01:03:367 (6,7) - 6 is where the voice starts and would be a better place to start the slider. i followed the drum here
01:18:534 (1,2,3) - This doesnt flow, you could turn the slider upward instead and then it would flow better. it does
01:50:200 (4,5,6,7) - This stream should be a triple instead, as 5 doesnt land on a sound at all. (and theres also a hit on the blut tick before 4) fixed :)


Sorry for a small mod I can mod anything other than extra and hard insanes..nor am I that good..

mindmaster107 wrote:

Sorry I cannot find anything else :(

[Extra]
00:34:367 (1) - This is over-mapping a bit, since 00:13:034 (1) is the same shape, and it represents a more complex sound. Change the slider to match --> 00:35:700 (1) fixed
00:48:367 (1) - /\ ^
01:36:534 (4,5) - These should have clap sounds on them. no :(
01:56:367 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - These jumps are off to the side. Maybe to emphasize the changing intensity, move it down and up rather than to the side. fixed
Thanks for modding
posted
hi, #modreqs

00:07:200 (2,3,1) - maybe make them like this http://puu.sh/uppzM/35fd13e07e.jpg so it looks more structured (and aeshetically it has a better look imo). i think theres no worry for hard flow for beginners

some blankets are a bit off like for example 00:46:534 (1,2) - 00:37:200 (3,4) - or 00:34:700 (2,3) - try to polish them a little bit more.

01:01:867 (3,1) - newbies follow the path of this short slider while more experienced players wouldnt. so this sudden movement change to the next object, even though a movement change is justified cuz start of kiai, is pretty awkward to hit for the player. so maybe try to connect them to each other a bit more

01:18:534 (1) - move the shape a bit to the left like this http://puu.sh/upq41/954c2d4745.jpg so the slider flows better to 01:19:534 (2) - . you can even consider adding a slight curve to make it flow more better

01:23:200 (3,1) - this may be my style but since you had such a movement change for the beginning of the first kiai, i think you should do this somewhat here too. currently it flows perfectly which means no empahsis at all, but yeah... up to you

01:29:867 (2,3) - blanket them too so you get a nice pattern?

01:41:867 (5,3) - stack

01:45:867 (2,3,1,2,3) - this is a mess if you look at your blankets, every blanket is off here :(
really hard for me to mod this because our sense of aesthetic are very different here i think. easy looked really clean to me while this difficulty doesnt. it feels like you didnt put much effort in this diff but maybe thats just me. i think its just because yeah... our sense of aesthetic varies here...
01:33:867 (4,2) - avoid this overlap :D
00:17:700 (3,1,2,3) - youz should increase the DS slightly here aswell as you did before with these finish sounds
00:21:200 (1) - this too because here 00:24:367 (1) - you did the increase again
00:29:867 (3) - ^
00:30:534 (1) -
00:31:867 (1) - yeah you should go through this diff and make this consistent
00:37:200 (1) - here is no finish sound, no emphasis basically only the vocal pitches a bit but you empahsize it with DS increase... looks pretty inconistent overall if you ask me because 00:37:700 (2) - is finsih again (stronger emphasis in music and your hitsounds) but you dont icnrease DS here

00:34:367 (1,3) - generally a nice idea but i think since the sliderhead of 00:35:034 (3) - gets slightly overlapped it doesnt look really neat, so idk.. personal preference i guess lol

01:23:784 - add circle here, you begin the first kiai with 1/4 rhythm too

01:47:700 (5,6,1) - 01:50:367 (5,6,1) - are manually ds'ed while 01:02:367 (1,2,3) - 01:52:867 (4,5,6) - are automatically stacked. idk if you thought something by doing this because i dont get it >< if you didnt then u should make it consistent



cant really mod high sr diff but i can say that it plays nicely :D fun to play

btw i think 5.24* is rather considered as an expert/extra difficulty. maybe you can name the 5.24* extra and find for your highest diff a cool custom name
hope i could help you a little bit!
best of luck with your map!
posted
extra

00:11:367 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - plz same ds
00:13:034 (1) - yes, plz finish
00:48:367 (1) - ^
01:00:867 (1,2) - increase DS?
01:04:367 (2,3) - actually, i don't think this 3/4 rhythm usage is good choice,
just 1/2 slider is better. simply
01:21:867 (3,5) - avoid weird stack..?
01:22:700 (6,1,2,3,4) - listen carefully, new melody start at 01:22:700 - ,
reconsider to swap NC 01:22:534 (5,1) - . and also reparttening 01:22:534 (5,6,1,2,3,4) -
doesn't follow song as well. imo.
01:33:200 (1,1) - why nc spaming :/ compare with 01:11:867 (1,2,3,4) -
01:40:200 (1) - remove nc
01:44:700 - aa not good idea, skiping this beat. since no basis for putting 3/4 slider 01:44:534 - .
00:11:367 (5,6,7) - is triplet but not 01:50:034 (5,6) - .
00:17:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - hmm.. i know every note don't keep same rhythm usage in everytime.
but compare with 01:55:867 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - they are really different.....
01:57:700 (3,2) - avoid overlap
01:58:700 (1) - aa plz no hp 6.5. it will make discourage HR player, by long spinner at HP 6.5 with hardrock = fail
change to hp6

need more hitsound work, let example, 00:22:867 (2,3,4) - , 00:24:867 (2,3,4,5,1) -
song have really pretty drum, but there is no any hitsounds.
also, non-custom hitsound(especially clap) doesn't fit with song, imo.



will continue later...
posted

Phyloukz wrote:

hi, #modreqs

00:07:200 (2,3,1) - maybe make them like this http://puu.sh/uppzM/35fd13e07e.jpg so it looks more structured (and aeshetically it has a better look imo). i think theres no worry for hard flow for beginners fixed

some blankets are a bit off like for example 00:46:534 (1,2) - 00:37:200 (3,4) - or 00:34:700 (2,3) - try to polish them a little bit more. fixed
01:01:867 (3,1) - newbies follow the path of this short slider while more experienced players wouldnt. so this sudden movement change to the next object, even though a movement change is justified cuz start of kiai, is pretty awkward to hit for the player. so maybe try to connect them to each other a bit more i'll ask for more others opinion to see if it really need to be changed

01:18:534 (1) - move the shape a bit to the left like this http://puu.sh/upq41/954c2d4745.jpg so the slider flows better to 01:19:534 (2) - . you can even consider adding a slight curve to make it flow more better fixed

01:23:200 (3,1) - this may be my style but since you had such a movement change for the beginning of the first kiai, i think you should do this somewhat here too. currently it flows perfectly which means no empahsis at all, but yeah... up to you

01:29:867 (2,3) - blanket them too so you get a nice pattern? i didnt tend to create a blanket here

01:41:867 (5,3) - stack that's fine

01:45:867 (2,3,1,2,3) - this is a mess if you look at your blankets, every blanket is off here :(those look fine lol
really hard for me to mod this because our sense of aesthetic are very different here i think. easy looked really clean to me while this difficulty doesnt. it feels like you didnt put much effort in this diff but maybe thats just me. i think its just because yeah... our sense of aesthetic varies here...
01:33:867 (4,2) - avoid this overlap :Dfixed
00:17:700 (3,1,2,3) - youz should increase the DS slightly here aswell as you did before with these finish sounds
00:21:200 (1) - this too because here 00:24:367 (1) - you did the increase again
00:29:867 (3) - ^
00:30:534 (1) -
00:31:867 (1) - yeah you should go through this diff and make this consistent fixed
00:37:200 (1) - here is no finish sound, no emphasis basically only the vocal pitches a bit but you empahsize it with DS increase... looks pretty inconistent overall if you ask me because 00:37:700 (2) - is finsih again (stronger emphasis in music and your hitsounds) but you dont icnrease DS here fixed

00:34:367 (1,3) - generally a nice idea but i think since the sliderhead of 00:35:034 (3) - gets slightly overlapped it doesnt look really neat, so idk.. personal preference i guess lol it's fine i guess

01:23:784 - add circle here, you begin the first kiai with 1/4 rhythm too fixed

01:47:700 (5,6,1) - 01:50:367 (5,6,1) - are manually ds'ed while 01:02:367 (1,2,3) - 01:52:867 (4,5,6) - are automatically stacked. idk if you thought something by doing this because i dont get it >< if you didnt then u should make it consistent i made those consistent with the beginning



cant really mod high sr diff but i can say that it plays nicely :D fun to play

btw i think 5.24* is rather considered as an expert/extra difficulty. maybe you can name the 5.24* extra and find for your highest diff a cool custom name
hope i could help you a little bit! i'll think about it :)
best of luck with your map!

Lami wrote:

extra

00:11:367 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - plz same ds fixed
00:13:034 (1) - yes, plz finish fixed
00:48:367 (1) - ^
01:00:867 (1,2) - increase DS? okay :)
01:04:367 (2,3) - actually, i don't think this 3/4 rhythm usage is good choice,
just 1/2 slider is better. simply im not really like putting 1/2 sliders here
01:21:867 (3,5) - avoid weird stack..? its fine

01:22:700 (6,1,2,3,4) - listen carefully, new melody start at 01:22:700 - ,
reconsider to swap NC 01:22:534 (5,1) - . fixed and also reparttening 01:22:534 (5,6,1,2,3,4) -
doesn't follow song as well. imo. i dont really get it..
01:33:200 (1,1) - why nc spaming :/ compare with 01:11:867 (1,2,3,4) - fixed
01:40:200 (1) - remove nc fixed
01:44:700 - aa not good idea, skiping this beat. since no basis for putting 3/4 slider 01:44:534 - . fixed
00:11:367 (5,6,7) - is triplet but not 01:50:034 (5,6) - . fixed
00:17:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - hmm.. i know every note don't keep same rhythm usage in everytime.
but compare with 01:55:867 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - they are really different.....fixed
01:57:700 (3,2) - avoid overlap fixed
01:58:700 (1) - aa plz no hp 6.5. it will make discourage HR player, by long spinner at HP 6.5 with hardrock = fail fixed
change to hp6

need more hitsound work, let example, 00:22:867 (2,3,4) - , 00:24:867 (2,3,4,5,1) -
song have really pretty drum, but there is no any hitsounds.
also, non-custom hitsound(especially clap) doesn't fit with song, imo. yeah..



will continue later...
Thanks for modding :)
posted
modding #2
yea, no kd

easy

00:13:867 (3) - move left a bit, too close with 00:14:534 (1) -

normal

00:40:034 (1) - nc remove
01:01:034 (1) - ^
01:14:867 (1) - ^
01:38:867 (1) - ^
01:58:200 (6,1) - inconsistent DS



hard

01:06:534 (1,2) - blanket?

insane

00:50:367 (1) - well.. i don't make sense 1/1 slider here.
because this slider is unique rhythm usage which don't fit with vocal.
01:17:700 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - since you already use many some stream partten,
why don't you skip this mostly stressed drum. xd
01:23:700 (4) - nc plz
01:03:034 (4) - pretty different rhythm usage, compare with 01:24:367 (4) -
01:38:200 (3,1) - buff DS, emphasis vocal and finish?
01:40:534 (1) - remove nc
01:40:367 - fill up rhythm
01:57:367 (1,1) - not important, but stack?

Yami

00:13:867 - clickable?
00:20:200 (2) - really weak beat, reduce volume or remove whislte.
slider's end too.
00:33:867 (5,6) - , 00:23:200 (4,5) - i guess you might put different partten by 00:34:200 (7) - ,
but i wish you make sure your partten design on the same part.
00:35:117 (5) - really overmapping, imo.
00:41:700 (2,3) - , 00:43:034 (2,3) - feel kinda unbalance DS, because (1,2) really small DS.
this DS is so contrasting at same NC cycle.
i think 00:44:367 (2,3) - is appropriate maximum DS.
00:58:034 (4,2) - player can see reverse arrow well?
01:02:034 (5,6) - i wish you handle this kinda weird overlap
01:22:367 (4,1) - placed straight same line. with 01:22:367 (4,5) -
posted

Bacwux wrote:

Yamicchi's Extra
00:47:034 (2,3,4) - Blue tick doesnt have a sound on it, no need for triple.
00:55:034 (2,3,4) - ^
01:18:200 (7) - Probably be better if this was a 1/4th slider with repeats.
01:50:284 (4) - This doesnt have a sound on it. so is 01:50:117 (2) - and I believe I made that for intensity

Lami wrote:

Yami

00:13:867 - clickable? not necessary ^^
00:20:200 (2) - really weak beat, reduce volume or remove whislte. not really a weak beat since it represent's the piano pretty well
slider's end too.
00:33:867 (5,6) - , 00:23:200 (4,5) - i guess you might put different partten by 00:34:200 (7) - ,
but i wish you make sure your partten design on the same part.
00:35:117 (5) - really overmapping, imo.
00:41:700 (2,3) - , 00:43:034 (2,3) - feel kinda unbalance DS, because (1,2) really small DS.
this DS is so contrasting at same NC cycle. i dont get what you mean here
i think 00:44:367 (2,3) - is appropriate maximum DS.
00:58:034 (4,2) - player can see reverse arrow well?
01:02:034 (5,6) - i wish you handle this kinda weird overlap
01:22:367 (4,1) - placed straight same line. with 01:22:367 (4,5) - it doesn't look bad to me at least ^^
Thanks for the mod, and sorry I'm in a rush can't reply to you guys properly

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posted

Lami wrote:

insane

00:50:367 (1) - well.. i don't make sense 1/1 slider here. fixed
because this slider is unique rhythm usage which don't fit with vocal.
01:17:700 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - since you already use many some stream partten, at that time i didn't want diff spike, now changed
why don't you skip this mostly stressed drum. xd
01:23:700 (4) - nc plz done
01:03:034 (4) - pretty different rhythm usage, compare with 01:24:367 (4) - fixed
01:38:200 (3,1) - buff DS, emphasis vocal and finish? buffed. there is snare sound
01:40:534 (1) - remove nc done
01:40:367 - fill up rhythm this happens everywhere in the map, so i don't think it's a problem here
01:57:367 (1,1) - not important, but stack? i like it this way
thanks

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00:35:367 - should probably have finish since music spams cymbals here

extra
00:13:034 (1,3) - as much as I like 1/1 sliders myself, they seem unfitting here cause of the skipped guitars you mapped before. also doesnrt really reflect the change in intensity compared to 00:10:367 (1) - something like http://i.imgur.com/OT2obDR.jpg for example would be nicer I think
00:17:117 - since you focus so much on guitar, mapping this with a triple or a kickslider would be nice // 01:42:534 (1) -
00:24:867 (2,3,4,5) - 00:20:867 (4,5,6,7) - these are mapped in the exact same way, but one has this piano roll in the background thats pretty noticeable, so patterning them differently would be great. like lower spacing or even stacking the drum ones (this repeats a few times)
00:40:534 (3) - since this doesnt map any held sound or whatever, I think 2 circles would be better as that lets people start the stream on the first beat of the drumroll http://i.imgur.com/lUss0yh.jpg
00:45:700 - why would you suddenly overmap 1/2? I think having a 1/1 gap here would represent the song much better. or if you dont want a gap maybe http://i.imgur.com/PTppQUN.jpg
00:51:200 (1) - stream after this emphasizes drums, but this ignores them completely, why not http://i.imgur.com/ff3oqxJ.jpg for a better transition to drums?
01:21:867 (3,5) - you dont really do overlaps like that anywhere else so it looks unfitting, why not just place it somewhere else
01:41:367 (2,3) - why suddenly a stack where the second sound is much weaker than first? doesnt really fit with your other stacks

gameplay seems alright overall. but I think this really lacks some differentiation between parts of the song. nearly the whole map uses the same sv, rhythm and base spacing making it feel very "consistent" but no in the good way, since songs also aren't consistent.
like 00:30:534 (1,2,3) - these things are nice as the give a good contrast for example
00:41:200 (1,2,3) - this part starts off nicely, lower rhythm density and way less tapping, lower spacing but then 00:43:200 (3,4,5) - already goes back to the usual "everything is jumps" patterning
only differentiation the chorus has is these 3/4 sliders


yamicchi
maybe rename to expert instead of extra to have some more "progression" in the names?00:06:242 -
00:06:242 - add a green line with ~25% volume here I think. repeats sound a bit too loud for the piano // 00:20:867 (1) - here too and for others
00:17:117 - see extra
00:34:034 (6) - think it would be nice to have this a 1/2 slider since your whole pattern focuses on the guitar sound and then suddenly (7) is on drums, even if it's only a stack. this way you would also get a short break in tapping, which would make 00:34:367 - where guitar is back feel more important

kinda similar issue with parts feeling a bit too "same", though here at least different sv was used for different parts


asaiga
00:14:534 (1,1,1,1,1) - the transitions between these patterns seem a bit random to me since so many different types of angles are used some more obtuse and some more acute ones
00:20:867 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:24:867 (1,2,3,4) - similar thing for these as top diff
00:28:367 (4) - seems weird to suddenly have cymbal under a stack when you usually emphsized it with spacing. maybe try something like http://i.imgur.com/de6NlW3.jpg ?
would also nicely differentiate it from 00:32:367 (4) - which has no cymbal
01:09:700 (2) - no idea why you'd suddenly use such low spacing for vocal and slider => slider transition
01:13:200 (1) - why is the end of this so "blocky" lol. how about making the second red note grey instead and moving it as bit to get http://i.imgur.com/xuW5esm.jpg ? or just http://i.imgur.com/SZncYVI.jpg
01:14:367 (1) - similar lol, think it would look more neat if you moved the last nodes a bit http://i.imgur.com/RTGS7it.jpg
01:29:034 (1) - another stack that doesn't really fit with your overall stack usage (also should probably have finish) cause you usually have them when the second sound is way less important
01:45:200 (1) - can you at least have this a 1/2 repeat? skipping red tick guitar completely seems weird
01:50:534 (3,1) - bit similar, though (1) kinda works with the vocal
01:52:367 - finish?
01:54:200 (1,2,3) - why is this the only time you map these as a line? I think just using the same thing as before and after makes more sense


hard
00:14:534 (1,2,3,4) - tapping density is a bit low here considering insane spams jumps here, could really use some 1/2 circles // 01:53:200 (1,2,3,4) - same here
spots like 00:25:117 - could probably use a 1/4 circle, since insane uses lots of 5 note streams with some spacing already
similar for things like 00:51:784 - that could be a triple for example
01:07:700 - would be nice to have the most important sound here clickable instead of being the end of a repeat slider (=one of the least emphasized objects in the game). same for things like 01:09:700 (2) -
01:23:534 (6,7,8) - emphasis wise, doing http://i.imgur.com/xzf5Bmh.jpg would make more sense since triples tend to put most pressure on the last note

normal
could really use less slider and more circles in part like 00:10:367 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - for example
spots like 00:25:034 - also could just add a 1/2 circle maybe since there is a lot going on in the song
00:58:034 - rhythm like http://i.imgur.com/HRanS2e.jpg for example would work better here as current has really weird emphasis

easy
same about circles > sliders than normal
01:01:867 - i dont really think you need 1/2 sliders on a such a low difficulty

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