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Chitose Sara - Arcadia (Short ver.)

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Kagetsu
some few points:

[Metadata]
  1. referring to the title, i think it should be アルカディア (Short ver.) acordding to this (taken from official website warning +18 pics)
  2. for romanised artist i guess Arcadia (Short ver.) works
  3. for romanised artist... i found some sort of prefered romanisation? (taken from here so i'm still not really sure if it should be CHITOSE SARA instead... it looks kinda weird for me but anyways... we have to be very precise about the metadata
  4. i'll try to contact a QAT to clarify those points
[Insane]
  1. 00:30:822 (4,1) - could swap NC here, basically because 00:30:822 - is stronger and it makes more sense with previous patterns
  2. 00:33:350 (1,2) - ^, also this 00:34:024 (1) - nc seems unnecessary, so i'd rather remove it
  3. 01:05:878 (6,1) - swap nc because of previous reasons?
  4. 01:21:215 (1) - could place this nc either here 01:20:710 (5) - or 01:20:878 (6) - , current place looks a bit weird tbh
  5. 01:23:406 (6,1) - i think nc should be on 01:23:406 - instead... you could also try something like this as it seems to flow better that way
  6. 01:26:271 (6,1) - same as above
[Hard]
  1. 01:30:653 (3) - forgot to add normal sampleset there
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:035 (6,1) - tbh, stacking is confusing, i'd prefer to only use stacks for 1/2 gaps because it's way less confusing that way... maybe try something like this?
  2. 00:10:766 (1,4) - this rhythm is a bit confusing so i'd rather use something like , it also avoids stacking
  3. 00:54:586 (2,3) - not really sure if you're intented to use a blanket pattern here, but could either improve or maybe just get rid of it
  4. 01:18:013 (4) - hiding the sliderpath using red archors isn't a great idea on easier diffs, because it might be confusing for newbies
  5. 01:21:889 (7,1) - similar to other stacked patterns, would be better to keep things simple here, it's better to use a straightforward spacing concept for this section so unstacking seems to be a better option
  6. 01:24:249 (5) - similar to 01:18:013 (4) - point
  7. 01:30:316 (1) - there are a lot of missing hitsounds here, i think you forgot to add normal sampleset... also, how about this rhythm instead?
  8. 01:38:406 (1,2,3) - rhythm is a bit too advanced for this type of diff, converting 01:38:912 (2,3) - into a slider makes things a lot easier, because polarity change between red and white ticks feels more intuitive that way
easy and orb are fine, call me back o:
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED

Kagetsu wrote:

some few points:

[Metadata]
  1. referring to the title, i think it should be アルカディア (Short ver.) acordding to this (taken from official website warning +18 pics)
  2. for romanised artist i guess Arcadia (Short ver.) works
  3. for romanised artist... i found some sort of prefered romanisation? (taken from here so i'm still not really sure if it should be CHITOSE SARA instead... it looks kinda weird for me but anyways... we have to be very precise about the metadata
  4. i'll try to contact a QAT to clarify those points
[Insane]
  1. 00:30:822 (4,1) - could swap NC here, basically because 00:30:822 - is stronger and it makes more sense with previous patterns
  2. 00:33:350 (1,2) - ^, also this 00:34:024 (1) - nc seems unnecessary, so i'd rather remove it
  3. 01:05:878 (6,1) - swap nc because of previous reasons?
  4. 01:21:215 (1) - could place this nc either here 01:20:710 (5) - or 01:20:878 (6) - , current place looks a bit weird tbh
  5. 01:23:406 (6,1) - i think nc should be on 01:23:406 - instead... you could also try something like this as it seems to flow better that way i changed like this
  6. 01:26:271 (6,1) - same as above
[Hard]
  1. 01:30:653 (3) - forgot to add normal sampleset there
    I fixed it instead of Ag cuz he said to do so.
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:035 (6,1) - tbh, stacking is confusing, i'd prefer to only use stacks for 1/2 gaps because it's way less confusing that way... maybe try something like this?
  2. 00:10:766 (1,4) - this rhythm is a bit confusing so i'd rather use something like , it also avoids stacking
  3. 00:54:586 (2,3) - not really sure if you're intented to use a blanket pattern here, but could either improve or maybe just get rid of it
  4. 01:18:013 (4) - hiding the sliderpath using red archors isn't a great idea on easier diffs, because it might be confusing for newbies
  5. 01:21:889 (7,1) - similar to other stacked patterns, would be better to keep things simple here, it's better to use a straightforward spacing concept for this section so unstacking seems to be a better option
  6. 01:24:249 (5) - similar to 01:18:013 (4) - point
  7. 01:30:316 (1) - there are a lot of missing hitsounds here, i think you forgot to add normal sampleset... also, how about this rhythm instead?
  8. 01:38:406 (1,2,3) - rhythm is a bit too advanced for this type of diff, converting 01:38:912 (2,3) - into a slider makes things a lot easier, because polarity change between red and white ticks feels more intuitive that way
easy and orb are fine, call me back o:
okay all fixed, i call you later
thanks a lot!
Kagetsu
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Akitoshi
あと一歩だぞぉ
がんばって
DeletedUser_7370134
Go‼︎
頑張って :)
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED
thanks Kagetsu!
Kencho
[Easy]
  1. 01:43:125 (1) - DS a bit off

[Normal]
  1. Using HP 3.5 will be better for spread
  2. 00:27:451 (2) - DS a bit off
  3. 01:36:889 (4) - ^

[Ag's Hard]
  1. 01:18:013 - 這裡的綠線把kiai打開啊

[Insane]
  1. 00:11:271 (2) - This circle seems not suitable here. I would prefer you to use a 3/2 slider(like thzz's diff) or delete it. If you choose delete it then make the spinner start from 00:11:271 - .

[thzz's orb]
  1. 00:11:271 - Mute the slider end?
Nice mapset, call me back.
thzz

Kencho wrote:

[thzz's orb]
  1. 00:11:271 - Mute the slider end?
Nice mapset, call me back.
since there's a actually vocal sound on the song, no change plz~

thx checking!
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED

Kencho wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 01:43:125 (1) - DS a bit off

[Normal]
  1. Using HP 3.5 will be better for spread
  2. 00:27:451 (2) - DS a bit off
  3. 01:36:889 (4) - ^

[Ag's Hard]
  1. 01:18:013 - 這裡的綠線把kiai打開啊 I fixed instead of him cuz he said so to do for me.

[Insane]
  1. 00:11:271 (2) - This circle seems not suitable here. I would prefer you to use a 3/2 slider(like thzz's diff) or delete it. If you choose delete it then make the spinner start from 00:11:271 - .

Thank you, Kencho!
All fixed, I'll call you soon
thzz
i discussed with Kencho about a thing and changed it
joker, update plz~

http://puu.sh/svVi7/3258f64bb6.osu
Kencho
Everything looks good. Good luck for your 1st rank map!
Qualified!
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED
Thank you Kencho!!!!
Akitoshi
Gratz! uwu
Satellite
1stおめでとうございます~
_DT3
Oh wow, I still remember modding this like a month or two ago :o
Gratz!
-Maruk-
おめでとうございます!
alacat
omedeto :D
DeletedUser_423548
おめでとうございます
__Ag
やったぜ!おめでとう!これからも頑張って
jokerさんは英語がうまそうですね?日本の方が英語苦手と思いましたが、羨ましいなああ
試験や結婚式といった済んだらまた譜面作ろうか?
lLinutionHD
まあ、待ち時間はそれの価値がありました
Thanks lLinutionHD for making a veri veri nice banner!!

Lobelia
Gratz~~you did it~
_kotachi_
!!!
おめでとうございますすす!!!
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED

Akitoshi wrote:

Gratz! uwu

Satellite wrote:

1stおめでとうございます~

_DT3 wrote:

Oh wow, I still remember modding this like a month or two ago :o
Gratz!

-Maruk- wrote:

おめでとうございます!

alacat wrote:

omedeto :D

Yasaija 714 wrote:

おめでとうございます

__Ag wrote:

やったぜ!おめでとう!これからも頑張って
jokerさんは英語がうまそうですね?日本の方が英語苦手と思いましたが、羨ましいなああ
試験や結婚式といった済んだらまた譜面作ろうか?

lLinutionHD wrote:

まあ、待ち時間はそれの価値がありました
Thanks lLinutionHD for making a veri veri nice banner!!

[ Abhor ] wrote:

Gratz~~you did it~

_kotachi_ wrote:

!!!
おめでとうございますすす!!!
Thank you guys!!!
lLinutionHD

joker- wrote:

Akitoshi wrote:

Gratz! uwu

Satellite wrote:

1stおめでとうございます~

_DT3 wrote:

Oh wow, I still remember modding this like a month or two ago :o
Gratz!

-Maruk- wrote:

おめでとうございます!

alacat wrote:

omedeto :D

Yasaija 714 wrote:

おめでとうございます

__Ag wrote:

やったぜ!おめでとう!これからも頑張って
jokerさんは英語がうまそうですね?日本の方が英語苦手と思いましたが、羨ましいなああ
試験や結婚式といった済んだらまた譜面作ろうか?

lLinutionHD wrote:

まあ、待ち時間はそれの価値がありました
Thanks lLinutionHD for making a veri veri nice banner!!

[ Abhor ] wrote:

Gratz~~you did it~

_kotachi_ wrote:

!!!
おめでとうございますすす!!!
Thank you guys!!!
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