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Chitose Sara - Arcadia (Short ver.)

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KSHR wrote:

Consider adding thzz’s previous name to Tags. Since he got a ranked map before changing his username to the current one, that would help players searching his maps. Ignore this if you guys already dicided not to do so. I think you are right. I'll talk with thzz about it
Also, let me throw in suggestions on Hard / Insane. I see,

Insane

  1. 00:09:754 (2,3,4) - 配置の提案です。00:08:912 (6) - のコピー反転がやや目立って不恰好に見えたので、控えめなジャンプ混じりになりますが曲げて置いてみてはどうでしょうか。 http://puu.sh/sh3XT/696738ae22.jpg　確かにコピー反転よりもコードの通りのほうがきれいに見えますね、直しました
    332,372,9754,2,0,P|344:372|396:360,1,63.7500024318696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    500,268,10092,2,0,P|488:268|436:256,1,63.7500024318696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    344,152,10429,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:23:912 (4,5,6) - プレイヤーが混乱しそうに見えるので完全にスタックさせておく方が無難だと思います。　完全にスタックミスです、直しました
  3. 00:25:429 - バスドラム、ピアノ（？）、ボーカルの強い音があるので、スライダーの頭か単発で音を拾った方が曲に合っていてプレイ感が良くなると思います。　そうですね、確かにそう思います、直しました
  4. 00:33:519 (4) -流れを壊さずにジャンプを作って00:33:519 - にある強音を強調できるのでCtrl+Gしてみてはどうでしょう。　たしかにそのほうが自然に感じますね、直しました。　そうだと思います、直しました
  5. 00:46:496 (3,4,1) - (3,4)のジャンプまではいいと思うんですが、そのあとの(4,1)で(3,4)より小さいジャンプがあるので、(3,4,1)全体で見るとaimが詰まってしまうように見えます。　コードの通りに直しました
    00:47:170 (1) - をCtrl+H、それに合わせて00:47:002 (4,2) - の位置調整をすると多少改善されると思うので一度試してみてください。 　http://puu.sh/sh8pn/c31c6468bc.jpg
    120,140,47002,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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  6. 00:50:372 (2) - Ctrl+Jと位置調整で00:50:372 (2,3,4) - に三角形を作ると見た目が良くなるのでおすすめです。 http://puu.sh/sh8MA/5e110ea61a.jpg　がぞうのとおりに直しました
  7. 01:10:766 (4,5,1) - ここも前の内容に同じく詰まって見えます。01:11:271 (5) - をx:168 y:76かどこかに移動させるとサクッと修正できるので少し調整してみてください。　たしかに01:11:271 (5,1) - ここのdistanceのほうを大きくしたほうが自然だと思いました、そこの座標におきました
  8. 01:35:710 (1) - この後の(2)も直線なので、こちらは曲げて置いた方が変化があって面白いと思います。スライダーを曲げるのは下手くそなんで参考になるかは分かりませんが、例えばこんな感じです。 http://puu.sh/sh6B5/eaa3f09a3f.jpg
たしかに視覚的にそのほうがきれいだと思いました、直しました

SatelliteさんやHailさんからHIにmodが必要な譜面があって、しかもその譜面が1st rankになると聞いて、居ても立ってもいられずpostしました。事前にjoker-さんに伝えずにmodしてしまったので何かご迷惑になってしまうことがあれば申し訳ないです。
1st rank頑張ってください！GL

まさか迷惑なんてとんでもないです！HIのmodを集めていたのは確かなので本当に感謝しています！！
KSHRさんのmodどれも指示が的確だと思ったので全部直しました！
1st ranked目指して頑張ります(=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Meg wrote:

KSHRさんすげえええ
すごすぎて全部その通りに直しちまったよ
thzz
579 posts
Joined May 2012
thzz

Hail wrote:

はじめまして!
mod下手なので変なこと言ってたらごめんなさい；；
Extra
  1. 00:20:035 (1) - ここ、Ctrl+Gした方が流れがいいと思うのですがどうでしょうか？
    また、00:19:361 (1,2) - や00:20:710 (1,2) - とドラムの音変わらないと思うので3/4+circleに分割するのもいいかもしれません
    またもしメロディーを取っているのなら、00:20:710 (1,2) - が3/4である必要がなくなる気がします・・・Ctrl+Gしました！ 全部3/4だとつまらないかな？と思うので音取りはそのままで
  2. 01:18:013 (1,2) - う～んメロディーにしてもドラムにしても3/4+circleで取るほど01:18:350 - の音は強くないと思うので、1/1にしていいと思いました 確かに、change
gl!
ありがとうございます！

KSHR wrote:

Consider adding thzz’s previous name to Tags. Since he got a ranked map before changing his username to the current one, that would help players searching his maps. Ignore this if you guys already dicided not to do so.
since i dislike previous name, i wouldn't like to do that :o
thx attention~


note: Orb->orb
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__Ag
597 posts
Joined July 2011
__Ag

Hail wrote:

Hard
  1. 01:02:844 (4) - aa... why did you skip the snare? please try to follow drumsリズムの上で、あるところには自分の考えを試しぬこうと思いますから
    SPOILER
  2. 01:44:978 (5) - umm don't you put claps like 01:40:260 (3) - 01:42:619 (3) - ?直しました

Fraye wrote:

Hi :D

[Ag's Hard]
  1. 00:03:181 (2) - Remove Whistle on tail? Some inconsistency with the whistle pattern.fixed
  2. 00:19:361 (3,4) - 1/1 slider here sounds better and for consistency with 00:20:035 (1,3) - fixed
  3. 00:25:934 (2) - 00:28:462 (2) - 00:29:136 (4) - 00:31:833 (5) - Those sliderwhistles are noisy for this part imo :<BGM has some special sounds,so I used whistles on them
  4. 01:01:665 (6,7) - please consider to convert this to 1/2 like how your 00:58:968 (5) - was.somebody told me to change this,but I want to keep it
  5. And I think some blankets can be improved (ex : 01:10:766 (3,4,1) - 01:13:968 (5,1) - 01:16:496 (4,1) - ) :<I didn't work hard for it


Good mapset, goodluck! :)
@KSHR:すべて直しました

thank you

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136,12,47002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,92,47170,6,0,L|92:112,1,56
64,208,47507,2,0,L|116:188,1,56,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,228,47844,2,0,L|164:248,1,56
87,284,48181,1,2,0:0:0:0:
87,284,48350,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,328,48519,6,0,P|176:348|208:356,1,56
248,292,48856,2,0,P|282:292|313:280,1,56,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,204,49193,2,0,P|341:185|360:158,1,56
388,96,49530,1,0,1:2:0:0:
432,164,49698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,40,50372,2,0,P|204:79|204:96,1,56
244,160,50710,1,0,1:0:0:0:
164,180,50878,1,0,3:0:0:0:
244,160,51047,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,232,51215,6,0,L|224:248,1,56
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292,380,52395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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388,248,53238,2,0,P|384:216|392:188,1,56
448,140,53575,1,0,3:0:0:0:
448,140,53743,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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24,300,91496,1,0,1:0:0:0:
76,368,91665,21,4,1:0:0:0:
288,352,92507,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,264,92676,2,0,L|220:264,3,35,0|0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
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356,320,93856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,276,94024,1,0,1:0:0:0:
484,320,94193,54,0,B|501:291|496:254|484:232|484:232|493:208|493:208|480:168,1,140
488,108,94698,1,0,1:0:0:0:
420,144,94867,2,0,P|384:152|336:136,1,70
288,100,95204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,176,95372,1,0,1:0:0:0:
332,216,95541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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228,204,96552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,268,96721,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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232,280,99417,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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xNyamx
298 posts
Joined August 2015
xNyamx
no kds

遅くなりましたあああああああああ。　追加分です。　hardは配置の具体的な指摘は飛ばします。
jokerさんにHardは日本語でokと言われたので、日本語でいきます。

hard

全体的に　ほとんどDSが統一されているので、ところどころのNCでDS飛ばすと面白みが出て、かなり変わると思います。（全部はやりすぎだと思うので、ところどころで。）
(e.g. [サビの最初だけ] 01:11:440 (1) - 01:14:136 (1) - 01:16:833 (1) - ...)

また全体的に配置をもう少し綺麗にするといいと思います。　（こんなとことか01:19:530 (1,2,3) - ）

00:14:474 (5) - これをサークルにして　00:14:811 - から1/1スライダー引っ張った方が　曲に合ってると思います。
（同じような曲調の00:17:339 - も1/1ですし、統一すべきだと思います。）

00:18:013 (3,4) - 　リズム ctrl+g　の方がいいかな。

00:27:283 (2,3) - 　^

00:41:608 (5) - これを消して 次(1)を1/1にしませんか？

00:51:552 (2,3) - 　ここはDS離さない方がいいと思います。

00:57:283 (3,4,5,1,2) - 音に合っていません。　叩けないこともないですが、変えたほうがいいと思います。
　　　この直後に同じ曲調があります。　00:59:979 (3,4,1,2,3) - 　　ここは別に問題ないので、同じように音を取って統一させた方がいいと思います。

01:17:844 (4,5) - ここのDSを飛ばすなら　先程言ったNCで飛ばしてからの方がいいと思います。

01:18:519 (2,3) - ^

01:28:294 (3,2) - このoverlapはやめましょう。

01:35:204 (4,5,6,1) - 　ここはDTプレイのことも考えて角度を統一（(5)(6)間と(6)(1)間の角度を緩める）した方が良いです。　　もしくは01:35:710 (1) - のDSを飛ばすのはどうでしょう（個人的にこっちが好き）

01:39:586 (1) - ここのDSは01:38:406 (1,2) - のことを考えても飛ばしたほうがいいんじゃないかな。

gl^^
__Ag
597 posts
Joined July 2011
__Ag

xNyamx wrote:

no kds

遅くなりましたあああああああああ。　追加分です。　hardは配置の具体的な指摘は飛ばします。
jokerさんにHardは日本語でokと言われたので、日本語でいきます。

hard

全体的に　ほとんどDSが統一されているので、ところどころのNCでDS飛ばすと面白みが出て、かなり変わると思います。（全部はやりすぎだと思うので、ところどころで。）
(e.g. [サビの最初だけ] 01:11:440 (1) - 01:14:136 (1) - 01:16:833 (1) - ...)

また全体的に配置をもう少し綺麗にするといいと思います。　（こんなとことか01:19:530 (1,2,3) - ）直しました

00:14:474 (5) - これをサークルにして　00:14:811 - から1/1スライダー引っ張った方が　曲に合ってると思います。
（同じような曲調の00:17:339 - も1/1ですし、統一すべきだと思います。）直しました

00:18:013 (3,4) - 　リズム ctrl+g　の方がいいかな。なんだか合わないだろうか

00:27:283 (2,3) - 　^直しました

00:41:608 (5) - これを消して 次(1)を1/1にしませんか？このままでいいと思っています

00:51:552 (2,3) - 　ここはDS離さない方がいいと思います。スライダーだから、大丈夫ですね

00:57:283 (3,4,5,1,2) - 音に合っていません。　叩けないこともないですが、変えたほうがいいと思います。
　　　この直後に同じ曲調があります。　00:59:979 (3,4,1,2,3) - 　　ここは別に問題ないので、同じように音を取って統一させた方がいいと思います。直しました

01:17:844 (4,5) - ここのDSを飛ばすなら　先程言ったNCで飛ばしてからの方がいいと思います。ただここの音を表そうと思ってたが

01:18:519 (2,3) - ^スライダーだから、これでもいいと思っています

01:28:294 (3,2) - このoverlapはやめましょう。直しました

01:35:204 (4,5,6,1) - 　ここはDTプレイのことも考えて角度を統一（(5)(6)間と(6)(1)間の角度を緩める）した方が良いです。　　もしくは01:35:710 (1) - のDSを飛ばすのはどうでしょう（個人的にこっちが好き）直しました

01:39:586 (1) - ここのDSは01:38:406 (1,2) - のことを考えても飛ばしたほうがいいんじゃないかな。ハードにとって飛ばさせなくてもかまわないと思っています

gl^^
ありがとう

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Kagetsu
796 posts
Joined March 2015
Kagetsu
some few points:

[Metadata]
  1. referring to the title, i think it should be アルカディア (Short ver.) acordding to this (taken from official website warning +18 pics)
  2. for romanised artist i guess Arcadia (Short ver.) works
  3. for romanised artist... i found some sort of prefered romanisation? (taken from here so i'm still not really sure if it should be CHITOSE SARA instead... it looks kinda weird for me but anyways... we have to be very precise about the metadata
  4. i'll try to contact a QAT to clarify those points
[Insane]
  1. 00:30:822 (4,1) - could swap NC here, basically because 00:30:822 - is stronger and it makes more sense with previous patterns
  2. 00:33:350 (1,2) - ^, also this 00:34:024 (1) - nc seems unnecessary, so i'd rather remove it
  3. 01:05:878 (6,1) - swap nc because of previous reasons?
  4. 01:21:215 (1) - could place this nc either here 01:20:710 (5) - or 01:20:878 (6) - , current place looks a bit weird tbh
  5. 01:23:406 (6,1) - i think nc should be on 01:23:406 - instead... you could also try something like this as it seems to flow better that way
  6. 01:26:271 (6,1) - same as above
[Hard]
  1. 01:30:653 (3) - forgot to add normal sampleset there
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:035 (6,1) - tbh, stacking is confusing, i'd prefer to only use stacks for 1/2 gaps because it's way less confusing that way... maybe try something like this?
  2. 00:10:766 (1,4) - this rhythm is a bit confusing so i'd rather use something like , it also avoids stacking
  3. 00:54:586 (2,3) - not really sure if you're intented to use a blanket pattern here, but could either improve or maybe just get rid of it
  4. 01:18:013 (4) - hiding the sliderpath using red archors isn't a great idea on easier diffs, because it might be confusing for newbies
  5. 01:21:889 (7,1) - similar to other stacked patterns, would be better to keep things simple here, it's better to use a straightforward spacing concept for this section so unstacking seems to be a better option
  6. 01:24:249 (5) - similar to 01:18:013 (4) - point
  7. 01:30:316 (1) - there are a lot of missing hitsounds here, i think you forgot to add normal sampleset... also, how about this rhythm instead?
  8. 01:38:406 (1,2,3) - rhythm is a bit too advanced for this type of diff, converting 01:38:912 (2,3) - into a slider makes things a lot easier, because polarity change between red and white ticks feels more intuitive that way
easy and orb are fine, call me back o:
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Topic Starter
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Kagetsu wrote:

some few points:

[Metadata]
  1. referring to the title, i think it should be アルカディア (Short ver.) acordding to this (taken from official website warning +18 pics)
  2. for romanised artist i guess Arcadia (Short ver.) works
  3. for romanised artist... i found some sort of prefered romanisation? (taken from here so i'm still not really sure if it should be CHITOSE SARA instead... it looks kinda weird for me but anyways... we have to be very precise about the metadata
  4. i'll try to contact a QAT to clarify those points
[Insane]
  1. 00:30:822 (4,1) - could swap NC here, basically because 00:30:822 - is stronger and it makes more sense with previous patterns
  2. 00:33:350 (1,2) - ^, also this 00:34:024 (1) - nc seems unnecessary, so i'd rather remove it
  3. 01:05:878 (6,1) - swap nc because of previous reasons?
  4. 01:21:215 (1) - could place this nc either here 01:20:710 (5) - or 01:20:878 (6) - , current place looks a bit weird tbh
  5. 01:23:406 (6,1) - i think nc should be on 01:23:406 - instead... you could also try something like this as it seems to flow better that way i changed like this
  6. 01:26:271 (6,1) - same as above
[Hard]
  1. 01:30:653 (3) - forgot to add normal sampleset there
    I fixed it instead of Ag cuz he said to do so.
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:035 (6,1) - tbh, stacking is confusing, i'd prefer to only use stacks for 1/2 gaps because it's way less confusing that way... maybe try something like this?
  2. 00:10:766 (1,4) - this rhythm is a bit confusing so i'd rather use something like , it also avoids stacking
  3. 00:54:586 (2,3) - not really sure if you're intented to use a blanket pattern here, but could either improve or maybe just get rid of it
  4. 01:18:013 (4) - hiding the sliderpath using red archors isn't a great idea on easier diffs, because it might be confusing for newbies
  5. 01:21:889 (7,1) - similar to other stacked patterns, would be better to keep things simple here, it's better to use a straightforward spacing concept for this section so unstacking seems to be a better option
  6. 01:24:249 (5) - similar to 01:18:013 (4) - point
  7. 01:30:316 (1) - there are a lot of missing hitsounds here, i think you forgot to add normal sampleset... also, how about this rhythm instead?
  8. 01:38:406 (1,2,3) - rhythm is a bit too advanced for this type of diff, converting 01:38:912 (2,3) - into a slider makes things a lot easier, because polarity change between red and white ticks feels more intuitive that way
easy and orb are fine, call me back o:
okay all fixed, i call you later
thanks a lot!
Kagetsu
796 posts
Joined March 2015
Kagetsu
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Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi
あと一歩だぞぉ
がんばって
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DeletedUser_7370134
Go‼︎
頑張って :)
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thanks Kagetsu!
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
[Easy]
  1. 01:43:125 (1) - DS a bit off

[Normal]
  1. Using HP 3.5 will be better for spread
  2. 00:27:451 (2) - DS a bit off
  3. 01:36:889 (4) - ^

[Ag's Hard]
  1. 01:18:013 - 這裡的綠線把kiai打開啊

[Insane]
  1. 00:11:271 (2) - This circle seems not suitable here. I would prefer you to use a 3/2 slider(like thzz's diff) or delete it. If you choose delete it then make the spinner start from 00:11:271 - .

[thzz's orb]
  1. 00:11:271 - Mute the slider end?
Nice mapset, call me back.
thzz
579 posts
Joined May 2012
thzz

Kencho wrote:

[thzz's orb]
  1. 00:11:271 - Mute the slider end?
Nice mapset, call me back.
since there's a actually vocal sound on the song, no change plz~

thx checking!
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Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED

Kencho wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 01:43:125 (1) - DS a bit off

[Normal]
  1. Using HP 3.5 will be better for spread
  2. 00:27:451 (2) - DS a bit off
  3. 01:36:889 (4) - ^

[Ag's Hard]
  1. 01:18:013 - 這裡的綠線把kiai打開啊　I fixed instead of him cuz he said so to do for me.

[Insane]
  1. 00:11:271 (2) - This circle seems not suitable here. I would prefer you to use a 3/2 slider(like thzz's diff) or delete it. If you choose delete it then make the spinner start from 00:11:271 - .

Thank you, Kencho!
All fixed, I'll call you soon
thzz
579 posts
Joined May 2012
thzz
i discussed with Kencho about a thing and changed it
joker, update plz~

http://puu.sh/svVi7/3258f64bb6.osu
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
Everything looks good. Good luck for your 1st rank map!
Qualified!
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Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED
Thank you Kencho!!!!
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi
Gratz! uwu
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
1stおめでとうございます～
_DT3
1,403 posts
Joined October 2015
_DT3
Oh wow, I still remember modding this like a month or two ago :o
Gratz!
-Maruk-
322 posts
Joined December 2012
-Maruk-
おめでとうございます！
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
omedeto :D
DeletedUser_423548
DeletedUser_423548
おめでとうございます
__Ag
597 posts
Joined July 2011
__Ag
やったぜ！おめでとう！これからも頑張って
jokerさんは英語がうまそうですね？日本の方が英語苦手と思いましたが、羨ましいなああ
試験や結婚式といった済んだらまた譜面作ろうか？
lLinutionHD
lLinutionHD
まあ、待ち時間はそれの価値がありました
Thanks lLinutionHD for making a veri veri nice banner!!
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
Gratz~~you did it~
_kotachi_
567 posts
Joined July 2014
_kotachi_
！！！
おめでとうございますすす！！！
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Akitoshi wrote:

Gratz! uwu

Satellite wrote:

1stおめでとうございます～

_DT3 wrote:

Oh wow, I still remember modding this like a month or two ago :o
Gratz!

-Maruk- wrote:

おめでとうございます！

alacat wrote:

omedeto :D

Yasaija 714 wrote:

おめでとうございます

__Ag wrote:

やったぜ！おめでとう！これからも頑張って
jokerさんは英語がうまそうですね？日本の方が英語苦手と思いましたが、羨ましいなああ
試験や結婚式といった済んだらまた譜面作ろうか？

lLinutionHD wrote:

まあ、待ち時間はそれの価値がありました
Thanks lLinutionHD for making a veri veri nice banner!!

[ Abhor ] wrote:

Gratz~~you did it~

_kotachi_ wrote:

！！！
おめでとうございますすす！！！
Thank you guys!!!
lLinutionHD
lLinutionHD

joker- wrote:

Akitoshi wrote:

Gratz! uwu

Satellite wrote:

1stおめでとうございます～

_DT3 wrote:

Oh wow, I still remember modding this like a month or two ago :o
Gratz!

-Maruk- wrote:

おめでとうございます！

alacat wrote:

omedeto :D

Yasaija 714 wrote:

おめでとうございます

__Ag wrote:

やったぜ！おめでとう！これからも頑張って
jokerさんは英語がうまそうですね？日本の方が英語苦手と思いましたが、羨ましいなああ
試験や結婚式といった済んだらまた譜面作ろうか？

lLinutionHD wrote:

まあ、待ち時間はそれの価値がありました
Thanks lLinutionHD for making a veri veri nice banner!!

[ Abhor ] wrote:

Gratz~~you did it~

_kotachi_ wrote:

！！！
おめでとうございますすす！！！
Thank you guys!!!
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