Hey Faust, here's some stuff. Suggestions are in green and they are just suggestions, ignore them if you don't want to change that stuff.
[General]:- Hitsounds are a bit too quiet. They blend too well with the music, you should raise the volume a bit.
- Kiai times are not set up properly, Hyper has weird kiai times, set them the same throughout the diffs if you can.
[Another Extended]:- There is no Makina in tags. I have no idea if it's supposed to be there though, if yes, add it, if not, remove it from Hyper.
- Hp drain is a little too low, set it to 7 or 6. I tested both and it's stable on both levels, just 7 is much less forgiving when it comes to missing (3-4 misses in a row equals death). Up to you which one you choose.
- 00:15:094 (1,1,2,3) - This is kinda awkward, would be nicer if they didn't stack.
- 00:23:477 (1,2,3) - This is kinda awkward as well. People who don't know the song will mistime this, if not miss it entirely, could use some better placement.
- 00:32:192 (1) - This slider is completely invisible, nice job in shaping it, but I don't think this is a good idea. Just move it away from the notes on top of it if you can.
- 01:00:013 - At around this area there are some clap-like sounds in the background, maybe put claps on notes for that? Might require a more silent custom clap though.
- 01:05:376 - ^
- 01:10:739 - ^ There are more moments like this in the song though, so I won't point them out anymore, you can probably hear them as well.
- 01:10:739 (7) - Recently I stopped naziing stuff, but this caught my eye, the slider isn't shaped properly, by that I mean the 2nd red point from the left should be moved by 1 grid to the left. Like this.
- 02:44:091 (8,9,10) - This is really evil. 9 out of 10 plays will think they should be pressed right as the slider finishes, I bet. Move them away a little if possible.
- 03:30:348 (5) - This might be stylish but it kinda looks ugly. Maybe use distance snap 0 for this note? (so it's at the slider end)
[Prism Hyper]:- I see combos are all over the place, I'll try to tidy them up a little.
- 00:21:463 (7) - New combo here? Remove it from 00:21:965 (1) afterwards.
- 00:25:485 (2) - New combo here as well, remove it from the previous note.
- 00:45:597 (7) - New combo, remove from 00:46:435 (1) afterwards.
- 00:56:323 (4) - NC, remove from 00:57:161 (1) afterwards.
- 00:59:340 (6) - NC, remove from 01:00:680 (1) afterwards.
- 01:01:686 (4) - NC, remove from 01:03:027 (1) afterwards.
- 01:04:368 (6) - NC, remove from 01:04:870 (1) afterwards.
- 01:20:457 (2) - NC, remove from the previous note.
- 01:23:138 (2) - ^
- 01:33:865 (9) - NC, remove from the next note.
- 01:39:228 - Make the kiai start here (it's like this in Another), yours is slightly late.
- 01:39:563 - This red line is coming too late by 1/1. In fact, I don't think it's necessary at all (just look @Another).
- 01:41:574 (6) - NC, remove from 01:43:250 (1) afterwards.
- 01:44:591 (3) - NC, remove from 01:48:278 (1) - afterwards.
- 01:49:954 (5) - NC, remove from 01:50:625 (1) - afterwards.
- 01:52:636 (8) - NC, remove from the next note.
- 01:55:317 (8) - NC, remove from 01:55:988 (1) - .
- 01:57:999 (9) - NC, remove from 01:58:669 (1) - .
- 02:06:043 - This is a really really long break. It's slightly above 20 seconds, I suggest you map something in between or map some more at the end of it. Don't think breaks longer than 20 seconds are allowed either, not 100% sure though.
- 02:32:859 (6) - NC, remove from 02:34:870 (1) -
- 02:38:222 (2) - NC, remove from 02:37:552 (1) -
- 02:40:904 (8) - NC, remove from next note.
- 02:43:585 (7) - NC, remove from 02:44:256 (1) -
- 02:45:932 (5) - NC
- 02:48:949 - Add a note with a finish here?
- 03:06:379 (7) - NC, remove from next note.
- 03:08:725 (9) - NC, remove from 03:09:563 (1) -
- 03:14:423 (9) - NC, remove from next note.
- 03:17:105 (6) - ^
- 03:19:787 (2) - NC, remove from previous note.
- 03:22:468 (9) - NC, remove from next note.
- 03:24:479 (6) - Extend this slider to 03:24:814, feels wrong like this.
- 03:25:150 (7) - NC, remove from 03:25:820 (1) -
- 03:27:831 (6) - NC, remove from 03:29:507 (1) -
- 03:30:513 (4) - NC, remove from 03:31:351 (1) -
- 03:33:194 (6) - NC, remove from 03:33:865 (1) -
- 03:35:876 (6) - NC, remove from 03:36:211 (1) -
- 03:38:557 (8) - NC
- 03:42:580 (4) - NC
- 03:50:625 - Start kiai here
- 03:53:306 (8) - NC, remove from next note.
- 03:55:988 (9) - NC, remove from next note.
- 04:00:345 (1) - Remove this NC.
- 04:01:351 (3) - NC
I won't comment on hitsounds much, they play alright (apart from the already said suggestions @another) but Hyper needs some cleaning up, kiai times, timing sections, combos, they all need some work. Removing the unnecessary red line @Hyper will make timing sections unsnapped, so you should fix them as well.
Hope this helps and good luck!~