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Kamishiro Ami - Cherry My Heart (Short Ver.)

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samiljul wrote:

7分で作った

thanks taiko diff >w<
tobaku2784
good map :p
ランク目指して頑張ってこ!
( ^ω^)ノ☆
PSPDS Eddie
緑はやってもやらなくてもいいと思うのでお好きにどうぞ
基本のリズムに関してはその人の譜面の良さがあると思うので、modはしていません。
音が寂しいかな?と思ったので、そこら辺を重点的に。
素人modです。嫌だと思ったらスルー推奨。
見落としがあるかもなので、modのとおりにする場合は同じパターンのFinishなどをよく見てください。

[Hard]
00:20:432 (2) - Add finish
00:29:906 (2) - Add finish at slider start point
00:33:064 (2) - ^
00:40:761 (4) - ^
00:41:551 (6) - ^
00:43:919 (6) - ^
00:45:696 (3) - ^
00:47:077 (6) - ^
00:47:867 (8) - ^
00:50:235 (7) - ^
00:53:393 (6) - ^
00:55:959 (1) - ^
00:59:906 (1) - ^
01:09:380 (1) - ^
01:12:538 (1) - Add finish
01:25:169 (2) - Add finish at slider start point

01:23:590 (1,2,3,4,5) - 付近にあの拍手のリズム
01:26:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:33:064 (1) - too long spin. 最適な長さがわかりませんが短くした方がいいです。

[Insane]
00:20:432 (1) - Add finish
00:33:064 (1) - Add finish
00:38:590 (3) - Add finish
00:38:788 (1) - Add whistle
00:42:538 (1) - Add finish at slider start point
00:43:919 (4) - ^
00:45:696 (1) - ^
00:47:077 (4) - ^
00:47:867 (1) - ^
00:53:393 (1) - Add whistle
00:55:564 (3) - Add finish at slider start point
00:56:353 (6) - ^

00:58:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - あの拍手のリズム
01:01:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:12:538 (2) - Add finish at slider start point
01:33:261 (1) - スピンを短く

nice map~
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PSPDS Eddie wrote:

緑はやってもやらなくてもいいと思うのでお好きにどうぞ
基本のリズムに関してはその人の譜面の良さがあると思うので、modはしていません。
音が寂しいかな?と思ったので、そこら辺を重点的に。
素人modです。嫌だと思ったらスルー推奨。
見落としがあるかもなので、modのとおりにする場合は同じパターンのFinishなどをよく見てください。

[Hard]
00:20:432 (2) - Add finish
00:29:906 (2) - Add finish at slider start point
00:33:064 (2) - ^
00:40:761 (4) - ^
00:41:551 (6) - ^
00:43:919 (6) - ^
00:45:696 (3) - ^
00:47:077 (6) - ^
00:47:867 (8) - ^
00:50:235 (7) - ^
00:53:393 (6) - ^
00:55:959 (1) - ^
00:59:906 (1) - ^
01:09:380 (1) - ^
01:12:538 (1) - Add finish
01:25:169 (2) - Add finish at slider start point

01:23:590 (1,2,3,4,5) - 付近にあの拍手のリズム
01:26:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:33:064 (1) - too long spin. 最適な長さがわかりませんが短くした方がいいです。

[Insane]
00:20:432 (1) - Add finish
00:33:064 (1) - Add finish
00:38:590 (3) - Add finish
00:38:788 (1) - Add whistle
00:42:538 (1) - Add finish at slider start point
00:43:919 (4) - ^
00:45:696 (1) - ^
00:47:077 (4) - ^
00:47:867 (1) - ^
00:53:393 (1) - Add whistle
00:55:564 (3) - Add finish at slider start point
00:56:353 (6) - ^

00:58:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - あの拍手のリズム
01:01:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:12:538 (2) - Add finish at slider start point
01:33:261 (1) - スピンを短く

nice map~

fix:3
thx mod~
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thx star ;)
Takos
gogo rank~
rui
:)
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Takos
rui

thanks for star :D
DerekMcD
*Star*
R a f E L
:)
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kokoroanime
R a f E L

thx for star ;)
YaMaO04
:)
YTYuyu
Star :D
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yamao0404
Byakugan249

thx for star ;)
Makar
I usually don't have lag problems with video but I did on this one. May just be me though.

Star~
Masquerade
kami
fight~~
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Makar8000
mb99

thx for star ;)
IceBeam
Hello~

Sorry for big delays.

Everything seems fine with the beatmap's folder.

You should add samiljul to Tags,as he mapped Taiko difficulty for you.

Also,I'd suggest you to start mapping from 00:04:643.

[Easy]
00:23:590 (1,2) - Make them curvier?
00:33:064 (1) - Don't make jumps in easier difficulties,please.Fix spacing.
00:59:906 (1) - Stacks may confuse beginners,unstack it?
01:03:064 (1,2) - Make them curvier?

You could add more finishes,they're clearly heard through the song.
00:59:906 (1) - Here.
01:03:064 (1) - ^
01:09:380 (2) - ^ and etc.

[KSHR's Normal]
00:28:130 (1,2,3) - You could add more notes here. Maybe use same pattern as in 00:26:353 (4,5,6)?
00:36:222 (1,2) - Doesn't match with rhytm/lyrics.
My suggestions are:
  1. Add a note to 00:36:814.
  2. Delete 00:37:011 (2) slider.
  3. Start slider from 00:37:209 with repeat at 00:37:603.
01:24:380 (5) - 2 claps in a row sound really bad :< Remove one of them.

[Hard]
00:37:011 (3) - It starts too early,move it to 00:37:209.
01:25:169 (2) - Remove this finish,it sounds so awkward :<
01:28:327 (1) - And add finish here.

[Insane]
00:16:485 (1) - It's too close to previous object,fix distance.
00:38:788 (1) - Slider is rankable,but it breaks the rhytm and it's really sudden anyway,so suggest you to map this part instead.
00:41:156 (1,2,3,1) - Spacing isn't correct.Remap this pattern to make 00:41:946 (1) 2x farther from other objects.
00:45:696 (1) - Why it's so close to previous object? :|
00:59:314 (6) - Spacing is odd,this jump looks like it was placed completely randomly,place it a little closer to previous objects.
01:02:472 (7) - ^
01:17:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Have to say it doesn't fit.Maybe separate these beats for triplets?

Nice job for the first map!
Good luck and have my star~
KSHR

IceBeam wrote:

[KSHR's Normal]
00:28:130 (1,2,3) - You could add more notes here. Maybe use same pattern as in 00:26:353 (4,5,6)?
00:36:222 (1,2) - Doesn't match with rhytm/lyrics.
My suggestions are:
  1. Add a note to 00:36:814.
  2. Delete 00:37:011 (2) slider.
  3. Start slider from 00:37:209 with repeat at 00:37:603.
01:24:380 (5) - 2 claps in a row sound really bad :< Remove one of them.
all fixed!! thank you for your very*10 nice suggestions!! :)

Download: Kamishiro Ami - Cherry My Heart (Short ver.) (R a r e) [KSHR's Normal].osu
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IceBeam wrote:

[Easy]
00:23:590 (1,2) - Make them curvier?
00:33:064 (1) - Don't make jumps in easier difficulties,please.Fix spacing.
00:59:906 (1) - Stacks may confuse beginners,unstack it?
01:03:064 (1,2) - Make them curvier?

You could add more finishes,they're clearly heard through the song.
00:59:906 (1) - Here.
01:03:064 (1) - ^
01:09:380 (2) - ^ and etc.

[Hard]
00:37:011 (3) - It starts too early,move it to 00:37:209.
01:25:169 (2) - Remove this finish,it sounds so awkward :<
01:28:327 (1) - And add finish here.

[Insane]
00:16:485 (1) - It's too close to previous object,fix distance.
00:38:788 (1) - Slider is rankable,but it breaks the rhytm and it's really sudden anyway,so suggest you to map this part instead.
00:41:156 (1,2,3,1) - Spacing isn't correct.Remap this pattern to make 00:41:946 (1) 2x farther from other objects.
00:45:696 (1) - Why it's so close to previous object? :|
00:59:314 (6) - Spacing is odd,this jump looks like it was placed completely randomly,place it a little closer to previous objects.
01:02:472 (7) - ^
01:17:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Have to say it doesn't fit.Maybe separate these beats for triplets?
All fixed~
thank you very much for mod.:D
nimba_old
おーじゃまおーじゃま
Haneii
Random mod :P

~Easy~
Disable countdown here since you have it disabled for all the other difficulties.

~Normal~
01:15:696 (1) - finish at beginning of slider
01:29:906 (3) - ^
01:31:485 (5) - ^

~Taiko~

Make a taiko bg? If you don’t know how this queue has people who’ll be willing to make you one viewtopic.php?f=60&t=51822 (read the rules before posting)

~Hard~
01:15:696 (1) - finish
01:20:432 (1,2,1,2) – pretty hard to sight read ( this part is more fun and less difficult in the insane, try mapping something similar to that)
01:28:327 – extra timing section (it isn’t different from the one right before it)
01:29:906 (7) - finish at beginning of slider
01:31:485 (1) - finish

~Insane~
A lot of the combos here are really short and random. Please try redoing some, this time a bit longer and following the melody or lyrics more.
Examples of parts that should be part of the same combo (taken from the chorus but there are places like this all over the map, not just these) :
01:09:380 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –
01:12:340 (1,2,1,2) –
01:13:919 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –
01:13:919 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –
There are too many to point out right here, hopefully you can fix them all on your own. If you need help with this pm me or msg me in game ^_^

00:06:222 (4) – slider end is unsnapped. See how the tick isn’t exactly in the middle of the slider end in this pic http://puu.sh/3ASd. To fix this, just grab the anchor at the end of the slider and try extending it a bit.
00:09:380 (4) - slider end here is also unsnapped.
00:43:919 (4) - lessen the jump here a bit. It’s feels like it comes out of nowhere + it’s a lot larger than 00:46:880 (3,4) even though its mapped to pretty much the same thing as well as mapped in a similar fashion.
00:56:156 (5) - properly stack this under 3
00:56:748 - have your Kiai time start here! (Right now it’s a couple ms off – you probably did an offset/bpm change in the past. Because it’s off the Kiai fountain doesn’t shoot out at the exact moment you hit the hitcircle on that spot)
01:08:590 (1) - new combo (or else player won’t receive the hp boost at the end of the spinner) http://puu.sh/3ARI
01:15:696 (1) - finish
01:16:190 - extra timing section (it isn’t different from the one right before it)
01:21:617 - have your Kiai time end here!
01:28:327 (1) – finish at beginning of slider
01:29:906 (1) - ^

Hitsounds are pretty low, can barely hear them over the song, mainly when the chorus hits.

good luck with your map ^_^

~Twinkle twinkle little star~
phoon
;)
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Haneii wrote:

Random mod :P

~Easy~
Disable countdown here since you have it disabled for all the other difficulties.

~Normal~
01:15:696 (1) - finish at beginning of slider
01:29:906 (3) - ^
01:31:485 (5) - ^

~Taiko~

Make a taiko bg? If you don’t know how this queue has people who’ll be willing to make you one viewtopic.php?f=60&t=51822 (read the rules before posting)

~Hard~
01:15:696 (1) - finish
01:20:432 (1,2,1,2) – pretty hard to sight read ( this part is more fun and less difficult in the insane, try mapping something similar to that)
01:28:327 – extra timing section (it isn’t different from the one right before it)
01:29:906 (7) - finish at beginning of slider
01:31:485 (1) - finish

~Insane~
A lot of the combos here are really short and random. Please try redoing some, this time a bit longer and following the melody or lyrics more.
Examples of parts that should be part of the same combo (taken from the chorus but there are places like this all over the map, not just these) :
01:09:380 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –
01:12:340 (1,2,1,2) –
01:13:919 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –
01:13:919 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –
There are too many to point out right here, hopefully you can fix them all on your own. If you need help with this pm me or msg me in game ^_^

00:06:222 (4) – slider end is unsnapped. See how the tick isn’t exactly in the middle of the slider end in this pic http://puu.sh/3ASd. To fix this, just grab the anchor at the end of the slider and try extending it a bit.
00:09:380 (4) - slider end here is also unsnapped.
00:43:919 (4) - lessen the jump here a bit. It’s feels like it comes out of nowhere + it’s a lot larger than 00:46:880 (3,4) even though its mapped to pretty much the same thing as well as mapped in a similar fashion.
00:56:156 (5) - properly stack this under 3
00:56:748 - have your Kiai time start here! (Right now it’s a couple ms off – you probably did an offset/bpm change in the past. Because it’s off the Kiai fountain doesn’t shoot out at the exact moment you hit the hitcircle on that spot)
01:08:590 (1) - new combo (or else player won’t receive the hp boost at the end of the spinner) http://puu.sh/3ARI
01:15:696 (1) - finish
01:16:190 - extra timing section (it isn’t different from the one right before it)
01:21:617 - have your Kiai time end here!
01:28:327 (1) – finish at beginning of slider
01:29:906 (1) - ^

Hitsounds are pretty low, can barely hear them over the song, mainly when the chorus hits.

good luck with your map ^_^

~Twinkle twinkle little star~
All fixed~ (and KSHR's Normal)
thank you mod :D
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Makar8000
Masquerade
IceBeam
nimba
Haneii
phoon

thx for star~
merchat7
Short version with video :) Some suggestions.
[General]
- Disable letterbox during breaks (Song Setup > Storyboard > Misc Toggles). Disable it when you have a video.
- Delete .osb from song folder unless you're going to have a storyboard and full resubmit.
- Fix your source, it's Love Delation! Found this from http://vndb.org/v2644. Be sure to change for all difficulties.
- Change your preview point to this 00:55:169. Sounds better. Be sure to change for all difficulties.Also the ranked full version set the preview point to something like this as well.
Beatmap feels laggy for some reason, but idk.
[Easy]
Looks fine
[Normal]
Looks fine
[Hard]
00:37:012 (2. 3) Spacing, check ai mod.
[Insane]
Hmm, check ai mod (ctrl+shift+a) and make sure all spacing errors are intentional.

Good map, starred!
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merchat7 wrote:

Short version with video :) Some suggestions.
[General]
- Disable letterbox during breaks (Song Setup > Storyboard > Misc Toggles). Disable it when you have a video.
- Delete .osb from song folder unless you're going to have a storyboard and full resubmit.
- Fix your source, it's Love Delation! Found this from http://vndb.org/v2644. Be sure to change for all difficulties.
- Change your preview point to this 00:55:169. Sounds better. Be sure to change for all difficulties.Also the ranked full version set the preview point to something like this as well.
Beatmap feels laggy for some reason, but idk.
[Easy]
Looks fine
[Normal]
Looks fine
[Hard]
00:37:012 (2. 3) Spacing, check ai mod.
[Insane]
Hmm, check ai mod (ctrl+shift+a) and make sure all spacing errors are intentional.

Good map, starred!
fixed~
thanks for mod.
General mod was helpful. :)
Kurowolfe
Hi there!
I'm helping HeatKai clear up the TBRT queue, and here's the Taiko BG:



If there's anything wrong, just PM me, and I'll fix it.

P/s: Don't kudosu me, please
P/s 2: And I like the Taiko map very much, so star~
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kurohacker wrote:

Hi there!
I'm helping HeatKai clear up the TBRT queue, and here's the Taiko BG:



If there's anything wrong, just PM me, and I'll fix it.

P/s: Don't kudosu me, please
P/s 2: And I like the Taiko map very much, so star~
thx for bg :)
Apricot
懐かしい曲


[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.
[?] = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.

[Easy]
00:23:590 (1,2) - 終点にClap ?
00:29:117 - スライダーの終点をここへ移動
00:31:485 (2) - 始点のwhistleを削除して、終点にwhistleを追加?
00:34:643 (2) - ^
00:35:432 (3) - remove clap?
00:35:432 (3) - add whistle?
00:50:432 (3) - スライダーを左に向けた方が流れが良くなると思います
01:09:380 (2) - add finish
01:12:538 (1) - ^

[KSHR's Normal]
00:03:064 (1) - 折り返し地点にWhistle ?
00:04:248 (2) - add finish ?
00:06:419 (4,5) - add whistle
00:07:801 (1,2) - 始点にwhistle
00:10:959 (1,2) - ^
00:17:274 (1) ~ 00:23:196 (5) - 00:17:274 の白線から 00:23:196 まで、2/1間隔でWhistle
00:26:748 (5) - NC ?
00:28:130 (1) - RNC ?
00:32:669 (5) - remove circle ?
00:56:748 (3) - 1grid上
01:05:038 (4) - NC

[Hard]
00:18:656 (6) - 右と上に1gridずつ移動
00:21:814 (1) - NC.
00:31:288 (8) - 2grid下1grid左
00:35:926 (*) - Add circle ?
00:44:906 (*) - ^
01:04:643 (1) - RNC ?
01:33:064 (1) - 音を小さくした方がいいかも?

[Insane]
00:04:643 (1) - スペーシング広すぎるかも?
00:16:682 (2) - ^
00:44:511 (5) - このスライダーを折り返してもいいかも?
01:33:261 (1) - 音を小さくした方がいいかも?
サビ前のhitsoundが少なくて寂しく感じました
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Apricot wrote:

懐かしい曲


[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.
[?] = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.

[Easy]
00:23:590 (1,2) - 終点にClap ?
00:29:117 - スライダーの終点をここへ移動
00:31:485 (2) - 始点のwhistleを削除して、終点にwhistleを追加?
00:34:643 (2) - ^
00:35:432 (3) - remove clap?
00:35:432 (3) - add whistle?
00:50:432 (3) - スライダーを左に向けた方が流れが良くなると思います
01:09:380 (2) - add finish
01:12:538 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:18:656 (6) - 右と上に1gridずつ移動
00:21:814 (1) - NC.
00:31:288 (8) - 2grid下1grid左
00:35:926 (*) - Add circle ?
00:44:906 (*) - ^
01:04:643 (1) - RNC ?
01:33:064 (1) - 音を小さくした方がいいかも?

[Insane]
00:04:643 (1) - スペーシング広すぎるかも?
00:16:682 (2) - ^
00:44:511 (5) - このスライダーを折り返してもいいかも?
01:33:261 (1) - 音を小さくした方がいいかも?
サビ前のhitsoundが少なくて寂しく感じました
some fixed~

thx for mod ;)
YTYuyu
Alright time to mod this. back then i just starred it because i liked it. time to make that up. these r all suggestions so u don't hav to follow them.

Easy
00:23:590(1) - 2 grids up at the end point of the slider.
00:25:169(2) - ^
01:03:064(1) - ^ and is the distance from (1) and (2) supposed to be at 0.9. if not please fix it
01:04:643(2) - can u make the slider like this?


KSHR's Normal
The distance snap for this song is at 1.0 and i saw all notes at 0.8
00:20:038(5) - 1 Grid Left
01:05:038(4) - Make the slider like this?


Hard
01:24:182(4) - 1 grid down.

Insane
Everything's good here.

Alright that's all i'm gonna do I just hope this map gets ranked. Someday it will. GL :D Not gonna star this cause i already did lol.
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Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright time to mod this. back then i just starred it because i liked it. time to make that up. these r all suggestions so u don't hav to follow them.

Easy
00:23:590(1) - 2 grids up at the end point of the slider.
00:25:169(2) - ^
01:03:064(1) - ^ and is the distance from (1) and (2) supposed to be at 0.9. if not please fix it
01:04:643(2) - can u make the slider like this?


Hard
01:24:182(4) - 1 grid down.

Insane
Everything's good here.

Alright that's all i'm gonna do I just hope this map gets ranked. Someday it will. GL :D Not gonna star this cause i already did lol.
some fixed~

ty for mod :)
KSHR

Apricot wrote:

[KSHR's Normal]
00:03:064 (1) - 折り返し地点にWhistle ? not fixed
00:04:248 (2) - add finish ? not fixed
00:06:419 (4,5) - add whistle fixed
00:07:801 (1,2) - 始点にwhistle fixed

上2つを修正したあと、それぞれの配置の次のスライダーの音が寂しく感じたので
00:09:182 (3) と 00:13:130 (5) の始点にもwhistleを追加しました


00:10:959 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:17:274 (1) ~ 00:23:196 (5) - 00:17:274 の白線から 00:23:196 まで、2/1間隔でWhistle
whistleのパターン付けが個人的に好きではないのでnot fixedにさせてください><
00:26:748 (5) - NC ? not fixed
00:28:130 (1) - RNC ?not fixed
00:32:669 (5) - remove circle ? ドラムに合わせてあるので not fixedでおねがいします><
00:56:748 (3) - 1grid上 not fixed
01:05:038 (4) - NCnot fixed

Byakugan249 wrote:

KSHR's Normal
The distance snap for this song is at 1.0 and i saw all notes at 0.8 oops.. fixed!
00:20:038(5) - 1 Grid Left fixed
01:05:038(4) - Make the slider like this? it seems nice! fixed

thank you, Apricot & Byakugan249! very useful to me! :)

Download: Kamishiro Ami - Cherry My Heart (Short ver.) (R a r e) [KSHR's Normal].osu
hoLysoup
hihi!
all suggestions

[General]

Please change red timing section offset to 1485. So the song will start on the down beat like: http://puu.sh/6zsI
for all difficulties

[Insane]
mostly hitsound mod :)
00:07:209 (3) - Add clap at the head of slider. You can hear clap in the music
00:10:367 (3) - ^
00:13:524 (2) - ^
00:20:235 (x) - add a beat here? :)
00:23:590 (2) - add finish..? it sounds good
00:36:222 (1) - add finish at head of slider?
00:37:603 (1) - remove finish from slider head
00:39:774 (1) - add whistle
00:40:169 (2) - add whistle at start of slider
00:47:867 (1) - remove finish from slider head?
00:51:814 (1,2,3) - don't add finish on (1), add finish on (3)
01:11:156 (2) - remove clap
01:16:485 (4) - add finish?
01:17:274 (1) - add finish?
01:15:498 (x) - add a beat here?

[Hard]
00:03:064 - why not start mapping here??
00:56:748 - snap kiai green line here

Very good map :)
Topic Starter
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hoLysoup wrote:


[General]

Please change red timing section offset to 1485. So the song will start on the down beat like: http://puu.sh/6zsI
for all difficulties

[Insane]
mostly hitsound mod :)
00:07:209 (3) - Add clap at the head of slider. You can hear clap in the music
00:10:367 (3) - ^
00:13:524 (2) - ^
00:20:235 (x) - add a beat here? :)
00:23:590 (2) - add finish..? it sounds good
00:36:222 (1) - add finish at head of slider?
00:37:603 (1) - remove finish from slider head
00:39:774 (1) - add whistle
00:40:169 (2) - add whistle at start of slider
00:47:867 (1) - remove finish from slider head?
00:51:814 (1,2,3) - don't add finish on (1), add finish on (3)
01:11:156 (2) - remove clap
01:16:485 (4) - add finish?
01:17:274 (1) - add finish?
01:15:498 (x) - add a beat here?

[Hard]
00:03:064 - why not start mapping here??
00:56:748 - snap kiai green line here
some fixed and these were very useful ~
thx for mod and star :)
Sure
Hi :D
Mod requested by somebody. (Sorry, I forgot who asked me to mod this map. orz)


[Insane]
00:13:425 - Add a note
00:38:788 (1) - Hmm... I'm surprised at this short spinner. I'd rather make it to like this example. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168885
00:50:038 (6) - Add finish to reverse arrow


[Hard]
00:50:234 (7) - Add finish to start of slider


[KSHR's Normal]
Some finish suggestions.
00:17:274 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
00:38:590 (1) - Add finish
00:42:538 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
01:28:327 (1) - ^


[Easy]
00:37:603 (1) - Shorten its length. to 00:40:761


There is no serious problem. I think you can bother any MAT.
Good luck ;)
Topic Starter
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ykcarrot wrote:

Hi :D
Mod requested by somebody. (Sorry, I forgot who asked me to mod this map. orz)


[Insane]
00:13:425 - Add a note
00:38:788 (1) - Hmm... I'm surprised at this short spinner. I'd rather make it to like this example. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168885
00:50:038 (6) - Add finish to reverse arrow


[Hard]
00:50:234 (7) - Add finish to start of slider

[Easy]
00:37:603 (1) - Shorten its length. to 00:40:761


There is no serious problem. I think you can bother any MAT.
Good luck ;)
All fixed :)
thx for mod and star ~
KSHR

ykcarrot wrote:

[KSHR's Normal]
Some finish suggestions.
00:17:274 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
00:38:590 (1) - Add finish
00:42:538 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
01:28:327 (1) - ^
all done~!
and, I changed by myself => 01:30:696 (4) - add finish to start of slider

thank you for modding :)

Download: Kamishiro Ami - Cherry My Heart (Short ver.) (R a r e) [KSHR's Normal].osu
IceBeam
hello

first of all,Insane is the only difficulty witn disabled letterboxes
as there aren't any breaks in map,you may disable them in all other difficulties too,or enable in Insane,but they should be consistent

also,fix Preview Time in 31's Taiko via notepad,it should be 55959

fine otherwise

Easy
00:48:853 - from this point rhytm is wrong at all =\ here's my suggestions how to improve it
use the notes as they are in the timeline,though you can map using any objects on your personal taste
first part (00:48:853 - 00:51:813)

second part (00:52:406 - 00:56:353)

01:04:445 (2) - move it 1/2 earlier (to 01:04:445)

it'd be better if you mapped it to the end..cause it's very short

[KSHR's Normal]
00:29:315 (3) - unsnapped
01:04:840 (4) - note is missng here :| if you'd stack it with 01:05:037 (5),it wouldn't make it hard to hit
01:06:222 (6) - separate this reverse-slider and use this pattern:
it fits the rhytm much more

[31's Taiko]
fix Preview Point,fine otherwise

[Hard]
HP Drain - 1? a bit high for hard difficulty

00:28:130 (1,2,3) - a bit unexpected rhytm..something like this would be better:
don't look at the playfield,only timeline

01:17:274 (1) - it should start 1/2 earlier
01:18:853 (1,2) - zero stack leniency is unrankable..as you see,during gameplay stacking doesn't occur when 2 sliders are stacked in the same point
so you may fix it by moving 2-nd slider 1 grid down and right (lvl4)
like this:

[Insane]
00:28:130 (1,2,3) - same suggestion as in Hard
01:15:696 (1) - too close to previous object,fix distance
01:22:011 (x) - cut Kiai here

I'd like you to fix everything,as I pointed out only major issues
if you won't find any other MATs - call me back for recheck
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