thanksStarrodkirby86 wrote:
Not anymore it ain't!Genkishi wrote:
Oh the map is graveyard i thought it's pending sorry
Revived. Good luck! Work hard, and all that good stuff.
thanksStarrodkirby86 wrote:
Not anymore it ain't!Genkishi wrote:
Oh the map is graveyard i thought it's pending sorry
Revived. Good luck! Work hard, and all that good stuff.
Starrodkirby86 wrote:
Not anymore it ain't!Genkishi wrote:
Oh the map is graveyard i thought it's pending sorry
Revived. Good luck! Work hard, and all that good stuff.
thanks anywaysenaya wrote:
Yo~
[General]
Your bg is 1228*767. maximum width is 1024, you have to resize yours.
Your diffs don't have any preview points. You can set them in Timing -> Set Current Position as Preview Point.
[Normal]
Uhh... You have an inheriting time section before your global BPM/Offset is being set. Remove it or else it won't work.
Lots of unsnapped notes (go Timing -> Resnap All Notes)
I seriously suggest you to map this diff till the end like you did with Hard.
00:21:804 (7) - make this repeat at 00:22:184 (1/4 shorter)?
00:28:717 (1) - it'd make it turn 1/4 earlier. i'd also make it 1/4 shorter (end it at 00:29:619)
00:31:065 (4) - 1 grid left, 1 grid down to put it under the previous slider or alternatively you can use distance snap.
00:30:282 (2) - i'd move this to 00:30:140
00:40:717 (1,2,3) - are you sure Normal diff should have something like triplets?
00:59:488 (4) - make it 1/4 longer or even better, move it to 00:59:619
01:03:021 (3,4) - spacing here looks bad
00:58:456 (2) - move this to 00:58:314 and add another circle here 00:58:705
00:59:500 (5) - move this to 00:59:619
01:03:021 (3,5) - bad spacing. maybe add a note to 01:03:532?
01:05:879 (2) - move this to 01:05:749?
01:07:326 (5,6,7) - and again, not sure if this should be in the easiest diff..
01:21:282 (1) - use 1/6 divisor and move it to 01:21:314
01:21:804 (2) - move this to 01:21:923?
01:22:836 (3) - again use 1/6 divisor and move it to 01:22:792
01:29:749 (4) - why not spinner instead?
[Hard]
00:23:227 (5,6,7) - bad spacing
00:33:402 (1) - too short
00:43:836 (3,4,5,6) - feels like not following anything here..
00:42:793 (7) - i'd use 1/6 divisor to move it to 00:42:879
00:48:793 (3) - i'd move this to 00:48:923
00:50:880 (1) - way too short for a spinner
00:58:966 (5,6,7) - spacing. also, doesn't fit music D:
02:06:793 (3) - i'd move this to 02:06:662
02:18:402 (1,2,3) - look at that spacing..
02:21:402 (7,8,9) - this could follow rhythm better
02:44:749 - remove this break? it's too short anyway..
03:01:706 (8,9) - don't hide sliders. it's unrankable.
03:24:793 (2,3,4) - spacing is bad
03:33:793 (5) - remove and move 03:33:924 (6) there instead and make it end at 03:34:314
Uh, actually, I thought that you should use 1/6 divisor all along.
But it turns out that your BPM is wrong, change it to 113
After that you will have to resnap all notes again and go through both diffs to fix notes that were shifted after the BPM chagne.
Nivalis wrote:
Mod request via forum PM
[General]
-> Preview time-nya beda, yang Hard 68073, yang Normal 68097. Coba buka file .osu-nya pakai notepad terus diselaraskan preview timenya (: ok
-> BG image coba cari yang ukuran 640 x 480 / 800 x 600 / 1024 x 768, sama kualitas file .mp3 yang diperbolehkan itu max. 192 kbps. Coba diganti kedua hal ini, terus pilih Full Submit (jangan Standard Submit) ok
[Normal]
-> Jujur ini masih terlalu susah buat normal, mungkin coba buat diff lain yang tingkat kesulitannya di bawah 3 stars atau utak-atik diff. settingnya jadi begini : okSPOILER00:26:525 (2,3) - Rubah jadi 1/2 slider? ok[attachment=0:fa7e0]ygyg.png[/attachment:fa7e0]
00:35:684 (3,4,5,6) - "Clustering", coba buat mereka ini nggak terlalu mengumpul, misalnya http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/118426 ? (sorry notenya gw tumpuk supaya 1 gambar : D) ok
00:48:958 (1) - Nada ini ketutupan sama hit-300 - nya ): Sebenarnya nggak masalah sih, tapi ini diff yang paling mudah, kalau ada pemula yang mainin ini pasti kaget timing slider masih cukup jauh
01:08:604 (1) - Kiai time-nya nggak ke-snap tuh xD ok
01:22:941 (3) - Usahakan ini nggak nempel sama (1) yang sebelumnya, kalau mau ditumpuk ditumpuk aja sekalian ok
01:25:330 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern yang terlalu menjebak buat Normal imo ok
01:28:781 (3) - Coba dirubah jadi bezier slider? ok
01:40:197 (4,5,6,7) - Susah dibaca >< Mending digabung jadi slider aja ok
01:47:100 (8) - Kalau mau bikin slider wave, coba pakai teknik ini : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/118431 ok
02:02:764 (3,4) - Susah dibaca karena stack-nya tidak sempurna ok
02:39:932 (5) - Coba rubah arah slider ini supaya nggak nyentuh (2) yang sebelumnya ok
[Hard]
00:11:790 (4) - New combo, kalau nggak mau spacingnya disamain aja sama jump yang sebelumnya ok
00:19:489 (5) - Coba di-space lebih jauh dari (4) ok
00:27:321 (4,5) - Taruh 1/4 lebih awal yang 4 udah pas sama lirikinya, 5 ok
00:32:233 (8) - Jangan taruh slider di atas note sebelumnya, sama sekali nggak bisa dibaca >< ok
01:13:649 (5) - New combo atau taruh lebih jauh dari note sebelumnya ok
01:21:082 (1) - Stream ini spacingnya disamakan aja sama stream sebelumnya, soalnya terlalu menjebak kalau spacingnya begini ok
02:03:560 (7) - Evil jump :3 ok
02:05:418 (9) - Spacingnya coba dijauhkan dari note sebelumnya ok
02:54:268 (2,3,4,5) - Terlalu nge-cluster ): Coba (2,3,4) dirubah jadi repeating slider terus spacingnya disesuaikan ok
03:34:888 (7) - Spacing ok
Masih banyak kesalahannya sih... Tapi gw star deh
Semangat yah~ Good luck !
ShadowLord wrote:
[General Impressions]
Please use distance snap (if you press Alt, it appears in the top right corner) ok
and remap the both diff using a higher distance snap, its really hard to read and not really fun to play , ok
I'd also suggest you read this thread on how to make nice sliders.
Making Delicious Sliders: A Guide.
[Normal]
00:09:135 (1) - Finish Hitsound ok
00:11:259 (5) - Finish Hitsound on 1st White tick ok
00:11:259 (5) - Add an extra repeat with a finish hitsound on all three white ticks ok
00:14:180 (x) - Slider that end on 1st Whitetick (finish hitsound on red tick, and clap on white tick) ok
00:26:126 (1) - Finish hitsound ok
00:26:923 (3) - Finish Hitsound ok
00:27:188 (4) - Should start the red tick on 00:27:454 sounds weird
00:59:578 (4) - end this slider on 01:01:171 and delete 01:01:171 (1) - ok
01:05:418 (1,2,3) - Convert into a repeating slider and place a finish on 1st white tick ok
01:06:480 (2) - Finish on white and blue tick ok
01:07:277 (3) - Finish on red and white tick ok
01:11:259 (5) - Add a clap ok
01:11:790 (6) - clap on red tick sounds weird
01:12:852 (1,2,3) - Convert this slider too, like 01:05:418 (1,2,3) and add a clap on white and red tick I add clap on all ticks
01:13:914 (4) - Clap on 1st white tick ok
01:51:082 (6) - This looks a lot better, see SS. Also place a clap on red tick. ok
02:36:480 (3,4) - Clap on both ok
02:43:118 (4,5,6) - Same suggestion as for 01:05:418 (1,2,3) (to make it better to play) ok
[Hard]
For the hitsounds, you can use the same I suggested for normal. ok
fixedYasora-chan wrote:
yahoo~ mod by request~ :3
[Normal]
ngg... kayaknya spacingnya masih agak berantakan yah... sekalian nyaranin, spacingnya 1.0x aja.. biar ga terlalu susah buat normal~ spacing yang ini ga susah2 banget
00:23:737 (1) ganti jadi circle ? ok
00:26:216 (2) pindah ke 00:26:657 ? ok
00:27:587 (4) pindah ke 00:27:454 , berakhir di 00:28:250 (perpendek slider) ok
00:54:268 (1) new combo ok
00:55:595 (1) delete new combo ok
01:20:817 kiai time nya bagus sampe sini~ enakan sampe 01:16:303
01:42:587 (4) new combo ok
02:06:480 (5) ^ ok
[Hard]
ano... ini juga sama, spacing nya rapihin dikit lagi aja.. ^ ^" ok
00:39:666 (1,2,3,4) gimana kalo jangan stack gini... rasanya aneh.. coba tempatin di tempat lain... ok
00:40:463 (1,2,3,4) ^ ok
00:43:383 (1) pindah ke 00:43:118 ok
00:43:516 (2) pindah ke 00:43:383 & diperpanjang sampe 00:44:180 ok
01:00:109 (1) add finish ? ok
02:11:790 (5) delete, slider (4) dipanjangin sampe situ sesuai sama sound drum
02:34:888 (7) new combo di (8)
02:36:480 (10) panjangin sampe 02:37:277 tanggung, dipanjangin sampe 02:37:542
02:47:631 (7) new combo ok
03:00:640 (6) ^ ok
03:24:534 kiai time sampe 03:39:401 kepanjangan, sampe 03:28:250
03:39:666 add spinner sampe 03:40:994 +add finish ok
03:40:463 (1) delete ok
yosh~ kayaknye segitu dulu aje~~ smoga bermanfaat~ :3 maafin yah kalo ada salah kata~ ;w;
*kabur~*
hoLysoup wrote:
SPOILERhi~ back again
all suggestions as usual
I won't mod JK's hard because I modded it last time so i'll just mod Hard and Normal
[Hard]
00:10:197 (2) - move to the left one grid. (grid lvl 3)
00:15:507 (1) - ctrl+r
00:25:595 (11,1) - spacing, maybe move 1 away from 11
00:34:622 (1) - remove clap and add finish?
00:53:206 (5) - new combo
00:53:472 (6,7) - spacing
00:54:534 (8,9) - spacing, maybe stack together?
01:05:418 (3,4,5) - just a suggestion here, because rhythm changes maybe combine these 3 into a repeat slider?
01:08:870 (6) - new combo
01:10:994 (3,4) - hard to see these 2 sliders when you stack like this. Maybe don't stack them?
01:13:118 (3,4) - stack these 2 please
01:29:843 (1) - stack on slider end of (3)?
01:37:808 (1) - remove new combo
02:09:401 (7) - new combo here
and remove new combo here: 02:09:932 (1)
02:14:445 (7) - new combo here
02:16:569 (1) - remove new combo
02:18:427 (1) - remove new combo
02:18:693 (2) - new combo
02:33:427 (1,2) - not stacked on the circle
03:02:498 (5) - new combo here so it's easier to see
03:16:702 (7,1) - move these 2 away from (6)
03:26:126 (6) - new combo
03:39:135 (2) - add finish on slider end
delete last spinner? JK's Hard also ends on 03:39:401 so just remove the last spinner.. I think it doesn't fit very well.
[Normal]
00:10:197 (2) - move down 1 grid (grid lvl3)
00:17:100 (5,6,7) - combine into 1 repeat slider?
00:21:879 (7) - repeating sliders like this is not preferred for Normal/Easy. Maybe remove 2 repeats and add circle at 00:22:675 with finish?
00:34:622 (1) - use finish and remove clap?
01:08:073 (4) - maybe just use a circle at 01:08:073?
01:29:843 (4) - remove clap
01:38:339 (1) - finish
01:40:463 (3) - remove this beat?
02:03:826 (4) - same advice as before
02:06:480 (1,2) - combine into a slider?
02:19:755 (5) - quite confusing for beginners. Maybe move this away so it's not stacked with the circles.
02:25:064 (5) - new combo
02:26:126 (1) - remove new combo
02:26:126 (1,2,3) - combine these to 1 repeat slider?
02:46:038 (1) - maybe just remove this and add a circle at: 02:46:303
02:49:489 (1,2,3) - combine these to make a 1 repeat slider
and start spinner at: 02:50:551
ok that's all~
^^
all fixed
all fixedMiya wrote:
Hi.. I want make a quick mod on your map.. I hope it helps..
General
Remove Yuuki Aira Idolm@ster Xenoglossia from your tags it shouldn't be there.
Delete this file, it's an unnecesary file..
[attachment=0:827e4]u.PNG[/attachment:827e4]
Normal
00:57:985 (2) - 2 grid up..
00:58:781 (4) - i really feel akward in this note.. I must try 3 times for have a 300 combo..
01:18:427 - i think it would be best if you add a circle here..
02:12:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use distance snapping here please..
02:26:525 (2,3,1) - i hate this jump when on normal difficulty..
Hard
01:02:233 (6) - this slider doesn't look nice..
01:27:454 (6,1) - use new combo on 6, dont use new combo on 1
umm, well that's it on hard difficulty.. The jump and small circle, i hate it on a map.. but that's allright..
JK Hard
same comment on hard map, small circle, lot of stream, and jump.. But it's fun to play..
That's all my modding, sorry if there's a strong word on my mod .. i hope it will help..
FixedMiya wrote:
Your map has been updated, but i'll try to mod your map again
Normal
01:54:003 (4) - move the center point of the slider 1 grid left
01:55:330 (5) - move the end point of the slider 2 grid down
02:31:436 (4) - make this slider like this
[attachment=2:08abc]slider1.PNG[/attachment:08abc]
Hard
00:49:224 (4) - make this slider shape curve or anything more beautiful.
01:26:259 (4) - 1 grid up
01:30:374 (2) - make this slider start point linear to 3
01:38:339 (3) - i think slider shape is more beautiful like this
[attachment=1:08abc]slider2.PNG[/attachment:08abc]
01:41:259 (6,7) - make this slider simetric like this
[attachment=0:08abc]lala.PNG[/attachment:08abc]
01:50:817 (8) - this slider point is too much, decrease it to make this slider more beautiful.
That's all for my mod (Again) .. I hope this 'll help (again) x)
remake and fixedOzzyOzrock wrote:
[General]
Delete the old .osb file. It doesn't even use the correct title.
[Easy] ugh... it's normal actually
00:17:100 (5) - Two to the right? ok
Hmm, I wouldn't recommend putting the circles on blue ticks to follow the vocal like you did. This is pretty hard to read in most easy diffs, as people usually expect simple 1/2 patterns and stuff. If you still want to, use a repeat slider or something.
Aaah, this seemed promising, but it needs some work still. At the moment it looks like most new mapper maps.
You'll get it later on, but for now, acquire as much mapping knowledge you can, and re-map this in the future.
Or very basically, use more pretty sliders. Those of which you can find here: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194
[Hard]
Oh and here's the second part of the simple things to making a nice map
00:14:976 (1,1,1,1) - Don't new combo spam. This was used to make an effect BEFORE, now it's just not good. ok
But yes, like easy, this needs more mapping knowledge to be fully rankable, or even moddable.
I mean, you seem to know about the rules and general guidelines of mapping, but still need time to make flow of it.
But that will take a LONG TIME. Well maybe not if you try.
[Insane]
Wait, was this made by you? Probably not, hence JK.
Either way, this is still new mapper style, as in, needs more experience.
There's an unfortunate chance that this will not be ranked.
But there's a fortunate chance that you will both improve.
Having said that:
01:06:480 (4) - FOLLOW THE SONG HERE.
*ahem* Anyways yes, get pro, re-map this later. Good luck.
-general-
I think you should use JK's kiai time. its more accurate
-normal-
00:15:507- (1) it sounds weird. why don't change it into 1-1 reverse slider?
00:19:224- (2) removes clap, put it in (3) instead.
00:21:879- (7) put clap on the start of the slider.
00:30:905- (4) remove clap on the start of the slider, put finish on the end of the slider.
00:56:923- (6) move to a half beat earlier. remember to distance snap it later.
01:28:781- (3) new combo as a mark of slider speed change
02:49:888- (3) why don't try to change it into like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163964
so far so good
-hard-
AR + 1
00:24:003- (9) new combo here
01:14:711- (7) remove soft hitsound here. it doesn't suit the song imo
01:53:604- (4) move to the white tick next to it.
02:08:073- (x) add note here, and one on 02:08:206
02:08:339- (6) ^ if you did that, remove repeat, add a slider velocity 0,5 then change it into a 1 beat slider (without repeat)
02:09:401- (1) ^ if you did that, add a slider velocity 1 again here.
02:25:064- (5) add finish in the end of slider.
02:25:595- (6) add finish.
02:27:587- (5,6) use finish instead of clap.
03:23:206- (4) add finish
nice
-JK insane-good luck~
00:43:649- (1) remove new combo.
00:44:976- (11) ^ if you did that, start new combo here.
01:28:516- end kiai time here instead.
02:27:454- (8) why don't try this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/164005
02:28:516- (1,2) delete this (follow the vocal) remember to new combo on 3.
02:49:622- removes all new combos until the orange one
02:55:064- the break is too long. try mapping some of it (since its a guitar, then streams fits here perfectly imo)
03:38:339- (aye, stream parts) if I'm you, I will put sliders here rather than streams (since its the last part you mapped). or if you want it to stay like this, remove the new combos.
this beatmap is rather fun to play good job (and luck too)
artpiggo wrote:
Hard
Circle size +1 like this size
00:09:135 (5) - remove finish since it cause too loud. change hitsound volume
00:12:321 (7) - ^ ^
01:05:418 (3) - add curve in it. ok
Rei_Fan49 wrote:
[request from queue]
[Normal]
> i see 1.2x spacing... and some symetrical-like slider shape.. here some suggestion
> i'm using images because too hard to tell it with "nazi"
00:11:259 (4) - symetrical like ->
00:15:507 (1,2) -
00:18:427 (4) - (nazi) up-right 1 grid
00:20:551 (5) -
00:24:003 (2) -
00:30:905 (4) - (nazi) slider-end-point left 1 grid
00:38:339 (1) - (nazi) slider-2nd-point right 2 grid
00:39:401 (2) - (nazi) slider-2nd-point left 2 grid
00:43:649 (4) -
00:53:472 (3) - (nazi) left 1 grid
00:54:799 (2) -
00:55:595 (3,4) - a bit harsh spacing no
00:56:923 (6) - (nazi) slider-end-point left 1 grid
00:59:578 (1) -
01:03:295 (3,4) - jump? lol it was very surprising fixed
01:14:976 (2) - (nazi) slider-2nd-point right 3 grid; slider-3rd-point,slider-4th-point right 2 grid
01:23:472 (4) - (nazi) slider-end-point left 2 grid; slider-2nd-point down 1 grid
01:28:781 (3) -
01:56:392 (1,2) -
01:59:578 (4) - (nazi) slider-end-point up 3 grid
02:05:418 (5) - (nazi) slider-end-point right 3 grid
02:12:321 (1) - (nazi) slider-end-point up 1 grid
02:14:445 (4) - (nazi) slider-end-point left 2 grid
02:35:684 (2) - (nazi) slider-2nd-point up 1 grid
use some of your nazi mod
[Hard]
> Drain -2 AR + 1 ok
01:25:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - too far... I use distance snap
03:31:171 (x) - add circle ? weird
okay, it still need more modding again, good luck~
Maya-kira wrote:
mod from queue
(well, personally, the song is not into my liking but yeah-)-general-
I think you should use JK's kiai time. its more accurate-normal-
00:15:507- (1) it sounds weird. why don't change it into 1-1 reverse slider? weird
00:19:224- (2) removes clap, put it in (3) instead. put clap at (2) and (3)
00:21:879- (7) put clap on the start of the slider. ok
00:30:905- (4) remove clap on the start of the slider, put finish on the end of the slider. ok
00:56:923- (6) move to a half beat earlier. remember to distance snap it later. ok
01:28:781- (3) new combo as a mark of slider speed change ok
02:49:888- (3) why don't try to change it into like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163964 ok
so far so good-hard-good luck~
AR + 1 ok
00:24:003- (9) new combo here ok
01:14:711- (7) remove soft hitsound here. it doesn't suit the song imo ok
01:53:604- (4) move to the white tick next to it. I follow lyric
02:08:073- (x) add note here, and one on 02:08:206 add note at 02:08:073
02:08:339- (6) ^ if you did that, remove repeat, add a slider velocity 0,5 then change it into a 1 beat slider (without repeat) no
02:09:401- (1) ^ if you did that, add a slider velocity 1 again here. no
02:25:064- (5) add finish in the end of slider. ok
02:25:595- (6) add finish.ok
02:27:587- (5,6) use finish instead of clap. ok
03:23:206- (4) add finish ok
nice