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Niva
Mod request via forum PM

[General]
-> Preview time-nya beda, yang Hard 68073, yang Normal 68097. Coba buka file .osu-nya pakai notepad terus diselaraskan preview timenya (:
-> BG image coba cari yang ukuran 640 x 480 / 800 x 600 / 1024 x 768, sama kualitas file .mp3 yang diperbolehkan itu max. 192 kbps. Coba diganti kedua hal ini, terus pilih Full Submit (jangan Standard Submit)

[Normal]
-> Jujur ini masih terlalu susah buat normal, mungkin coba buat diff lain yang tingkat kesulitannya di bawah 3 stars atau utak-atik diff. settingnya jadi begini :
00:26:525 (2,3) - Rubah jadi 1/2 slider?
00:35:684 (3,4,5,6) - "Clustering", coba buat mereka ini nggak terlalu mengumpul, misalnya http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/118426 ? (sorry notenya gw tumpuk supaya 1 gambar : D)
00:48:958 (1) - Nada ini ketutupan sama hit-300 - nya ): Sebenarnya nggak masalah sih, tapi ini diff yang paling mudah, kalau ada pemula yang mainin ini pasti kaget
01:08:604 (1) - Kiai time-nya nggak ke-snap tuh xD
01:22:941 (3) - Usahakan ini nggak nempel sama (1) yang sebelumnya, kalau mau ditumpuk ditumpuk aja sekalian
01:25:330 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern yang terlalu menjebak buat Normal imo
01:28:781 (3) - Coba dirubah jadi bezier slider?
01:40:197 (4,5,6,7) - Susah dibaca >< Mending digabung jadi slider aja
01:47:100 (8) - Kalau mau bikin slider wave, coba pakai teknik ini : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/118431
02:02:764 (3,4) - Susah dibaca karena stack-nya tidak sempurna
02:39:932 (5) - Coba rubah arah slider ini supaya nggak nyentuh (2) yang sebelumnya

[Hard]
00:11:790 (4) - New combo, kalau nggak mau spacingnya disamain aja sama jump yang sebelumnya
00:19:489 (5) - Coba di-space lebih jauh dari (4)
00:27:321 (4,5) - Taruh 1/4 lebih awal
00:32:233 (8) - Jangan taruh slider di atas note sebelumnya, sama sekali nggak bisa dibaca ><
01:13:649 (5) - New combo atau taruh lebih jauh dari note sebelumnya
01:21:082 (1) - Stream ini spacingnya disamakan aja sama stream sebelumnya, soalnya terlalu menjebak kalau spacingnya begini
02:03:560 (7) - Evil jump :3
02:05:418 (9) - Spacingnya coba dijauhkan dari note sebelumnya
02:54:268 (2,3,4,5) - Terlalu nge-cluster ): Coba (2,3,4) dirubah jadi repeating slider terus spacingnya disesuaikan
03:34:888 (7) - Spacing

Masih banyak kesalahannya sih... Tapi gw star deh
Semangat yah~ Good luck !
Topic Starter
shikyu

Nivalis wrote:

Mod request via forum PM

[General]
-> Preview time-nya beda, yang Hard 68073, yang Normal 68097. Coba buka file .osu-nya pakai notepad terus diselaraskan preview timenya (: ok
-> BG image coba cari yang ukuran 640 x 480 / 800 x 600 / 1024 x 768, sama kualitas file .mp3 yang diperbolehkan itu max. 192 kbps. Coba diganti kedua hal ini, terus pilih Full Submit (jangan Standard Submit) ok

[Normal]
-> Jujur ini masih terlalu susah buat normal, mungkin coba buat diff lain yang tingkat kesulitannya di bawah 3 stars atau utak-atik diff. settingnya jadi begini : ok
[attachment=0:fa7e0]ygyg.png[/attachment:fa7e0]
00:26:525 (2,3) - Rubah jadi 1/2 slider? ok
00:35:684 (3,4,5,6) - "Clustering", coba buat mereka ini nggak terlalu mengumpul, misalnya http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/118426 ? (sorry notenya gw tumpuk supaya 1 gambar : D) ok
00:48:958 (1) - Nada ini ketutupan sama hit-300 - nya ): Sebenarnya nggak masalah sih, tapi ini diff yang paling mudah, kalau ada pemula yang mainin ini pasti kaget timing slider masih cukup jauh
01:08:604 (1) - Kiai time-nya nggak ke-snap tuh xD ok
01:22:941 (3) - Usahakan ini nggak nempel sama (1) yang sebelumnya, kalau mau ditumpuk ditumpuk aja sekalian ok
01:25:330 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern yang terlalu menjebak buat Normal imo ok
01:28:781 (3) - Coba dirubah jadi bezier slider? ok
01:40:197 (4,5,6,7) - Susah dibaca >< Mending digabung jadi slider aja ok
01:47:100 (8) - Kalau mau bikin slider wave, coba pakai teknik ini : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/118431 ok
02:02:764 (3,4) - Susah dibaca karena stack-nya tidak sempurna ok
02:39:932 (5) - Coba rubah arah slider ini supaya nggak nyentuh (2) yang sebelumnya ok

[Hard]
00:11:790 (4) - New combo, kalau nggak mau spacingnya disamain aja sama jump yang sebelumnya ok
00:19:489 (5) - Coba di-space lebih jauh dari (4) ok
00:27:321 (4,5) - Taruh 1/4 lebih awal yang 4 udah pas sama lirikinya, 5 ok
00:32:233 (8) - Jangan taruh slider di atas note sebelumnya, sama sekali nggak bisa dibaca >< ok
01:13:649 (5) - New combo atau taruh lebih jauh dari note sebelumnya ok
01:21:082 (1) - Stream ini spacingnya disamakan aja sama stream sebelumnya, soalnya terlalu menjebak kalau spacingnya begini ok
02:03:560 (7) - Evil jump :3 ok
02:05:418 (9) - Spacingnya coba dijauhkan dari note sebelumnya ok
02:54:268 (2,3,4,5) - Terlalu nge-cluster ): Coba (2,3,4) dirubah jadi repeating slider terus spacingnya disesuaikan ok
03:34:888 (7) - Spacing ok

Masih banyak kesalahannya sih... Tapi gw star deh
Semangat yah~ Good luck !
Shadow
[General Impressions]

Please use distance snap (if you press Alt, it appears in the top right corner)



and remap the both diff using a higher distance snap, its really hard to read and not really fun to play,

I'd also suggest you read this thread on how to make nice sliders.

Making Delicious Sliders: A Guide.


[Normal]
00:09:135 (1) - Finish Hitsound
00:11:259 (5) - Finish Hitsound on 1st White tick
00:11:259 (5) - Add an extra repeat with a finish hitsound on all three white ticks



00:14:180 (x) - Slider that end on 1st Whitetick (finish hitsound on red tick, and clap on white tick)



00:26:126 (1) - Finish hitsound
00:26:923 (3) - Finish Hitsound
00:27:188 (4) - Should start the red tick on 00:27:454
00:59:578 (4) - end this slider on 01:01:171 and delete 01:01:171 (1) -
01:05:418 (1,2,3) - Convert into a repeating slider and place a finish on 1st white tick



01:06:480 (2) - Finish on white and blue tick
01:07:277 (3) - Finish on red and white tick
01:11:259 (5) - Add a clap
01:11:790 (6) - clap on red tick
01:12:852 (1,2,3) - Convert this slider too, like 01:05:418 (1,2,3) and add a clap on white and red tick
01:13:914 (4) - Clap on 1st white tick
01:51:082 (6) - This looks a lot better, see SS. Also place a clap on red tick.


02:36:480 (3,4) - Clap on both

02:43:118 (4,5,6) - Same suggestion as for 01:05:418 (1,2,3) (to make it better to play)

[Hard]

For the hitsounds, you can use the same I suggested for normal.
Topic Starter
shikyu

ShadowLord wrote:

[General Impressions]

Please use distance snap (if you press Alt, it appears in the top right corner) ok


and remap the both diff using a higher distance snap, its really hard to read and not really fun to play , ok

I'd also suggest you read this thread on how to make nice sliders.

Making Delicious Sliders: A Guide.


[Normal]
00:09:135 (1) - Finish Hitsound ok
00:11:259 (5) - Finish Hitsound on 1st White tick ok
00:11:259 (5) - Add an extra repeat with a finish hitsound on all three white ticks ok



00:14:180 (x) - Slider that end on 1st Whitetick (finish hitsound on red tick, and clap on white tick) ok



00:26:126 (1) - Finish hitsound ok
00:26:923 (3) - Finish Hitsound ok
00:27:188 (4) - Should start the red tick on 00:27:454 sounds weird
00:59:578 (4) - end this slider on 01:01:171 and delete 01:01:171 (1) - ok
01:05:418 (1,2,3) - Convert into a repeating slider and place a finish on 1st white tick ok



01:06:480 (2) - Finish on white and blue tick ok
01:07:277 (3) - Finish on red and white tick ok
01:11:259 (5) - Add a clap ok
01:11:790 (6) - clap on red tick sounds weird
01:12:852 (1,2,3) - Convert this slider too, like 01:05:418 (1,2,3) and add a clap on white and red tick I add clap on all ticks
01:13:914 (4) - Clap on 1st white tick ok
01:51:082 (6) - This looks a lot better, see SS. Also place a clap on red tick. ok


02:36:480 (3,4) - Clap on both ok

02:43:118 (4,5,6) - Same suggestion as for 01:05:418 (1,2,3) (to make it better to play) ok

[Hard]

For the hitsounds, you can use the same I suggested for normal. ok
Yasora
yahoo~ mod by request~ :3

[Normal]
ngg... kayaknya spacingnya masih agak berantakan yah... sekalian nyaranin, spacingnya 1.0x aja.. biar ga terlalu susah buat normal~
00:23:737 (1) ganti jadi circle ?
00:26:216 (2) pindah ke 00:26:657 ?
00:27:587 (4) pindah ke 00:27:454 , berakhir di 00:28:250 (perpendek slider)
00:54:268 (1) new combo
00:55:595 (1) delete new combo
01:20:817 kiai time nya bagus sampe sini~
01:42:587 (4) new combo
02:06:480 (5) ^

[Hard]
ano... ini juga sama, spacing nya rapihin dikit lagi aja.. ^ ^"
00:39:666 (1,2,3,4) gimana kalo jangan stack gini... rasanya aneh.. coba tempatin di tempat lain...
00:40:463 (1,2,3,4) ^
00:43:383 (1) pindah ke 00:43:118
00:43:516 (2) pindah ke 00:43:383 & diperpanjang sampe 00:44:180
01:00:109 (1) add finish ?
02:11:790 (5) delete, slider (4) dipanjangin sampe situ
02:34:888 (7) new combo
02:36:480 (10) panjangin sampe 02:37:277
02:47:631 (7) new combo
03:00:640 (6) ^
03:24:534 kiai time sampe 03:39:401
03:39:666 add spinner sampe 03:40:994 +add finish
03:40:463 (1) delete

yosh~ kayaknye segitu dulu aje~~ smoga bermanfaat~ :3 maafin yah kalo ada salah kata~ ;w;
*kabur~*
Topic Starter
shikyu

Yasora-chan wrote:

yahoo~ mod by request~ :3

[Normal]
ngg... kayaknya spacingnya masih agak berantakan yah... sekalian nyaranin, spacingnya 1.0x aja.. biar ga terlalu susah buat normal~ spacing yang ini ga susah2 banget
00:23:737 (1) ganti jadi circle ? ok
00:26:216 (2) pindah ke 00:26:657 ? ok
00:27:587 (4) pindah ke 00:27:454 , berakhir di 00:28:250 (perpendek slider) ok
00:54:268 (1) new combo ok
00:55:595 (1) delete new combo ok
01:20:817 kiai time nya bagus sampe sini~ enakan sampe 01:16:303
01:42:587 (4) new combo ok
02:06:480 (5) ^ ok

[Hard]
ano... ini juga sama, spacing nya rapihin dikit lagi aja.. ^ ^" ok
00:39:666 (1,2,3,4) gimana kalo jangan stack gini... rasanya aneh.. coba tempatin di tempat lain... ok
00:40:463 (1,2,3,4) ^ ok
00:43:383 (1) pindah ke 00:43:118 ok
00:43:516 (2) pindah ke 00:43:383 & diperpanjang sampe 00:44:180 ok
01:00:109 (1) add finish ? ok
02:11:790 (5) delete, slider (4) dipanjangin sampe situ sesuai sama sound drum
02:34:888 (7) new combo di (8)
02:36:480 (10) panjangin sampe 02:37:277 tanggung, dipanjangin sampe 02:37:542
02:47:631 (7) new combo ok
03:00:640 (6) ^ ok
03:24:534 kiai time sampe 03:39:401 kepanjangan, sampe 03:28:250
03:39:666 add spinner sampe 03:40:994 +add finish ok
03:40:463 (1) delete ok

yosh~ kayaknye segitu dulu aje~~ smoga bermanfaat~ :3 maafin yah kalo ada salah kata~ ;w;
*kabur~*
fixed :)
mancuso_JM_
Well My mod
Some words: NC- Add New Combo RNC- Remove New Combo
General:
Your BG is 1227x767, Try to change to 1024x768 or maybe 640 x 480 After this you have to do full submision

Normal:
First of all I'm going to say that this diff. is better than hard

Slider velocity (1,40) it is the same in hard diff.
Hard is harder than Normal, I think that the slider velocity in Normal should be less
Kiai Time: select one place to set in all diff.This only can change if you have guest diff in the mapset
00:27:454 (4): NC?
00:28:781 (1): RNC?
00:38:339 (4): NC
00:57:719 (7): NC
00:57:985 (1): RNC
00:59:578 (5): NC
02:39:135 (4): NC
02:50:817: At the end Add a Spinner Start: Here Finish: 2:53:472 (Red Tick) and Hitsound FINISH

Hard:
I prefer to map with 1/4 beat snap divisor, I think that is better, but this is your opinion
Try to use the distance snap you have a lot of spacing mistakes
Circle size 2 maybe??
More than three unique slider speed are used in this beatmap, you can only change the slider speed three times

00:23:206 (5): NC
00:26:126: Slider speed: 1.40 x 0.5 and 00:27:454 1.40 x 1.5 The change in their sliders speeds is very abrupt
This is UNRANKEABLETry to change this It's very important
00:29:312 (x): Add one note
00:32:233 (8): NC
00:35:949 (7): NC
00:36:215 (slider): RNC
00:42:056 (6): NC
00:44:711 (3): NC
00:45:241 (slider): RNC
00:48:958 (3): NC
00:53:206 (5): NC
01:08:870 (6): NC
01:27:454 (6): NC
01:27:719 (1): RNC
02:02:233 (4): NC
02:05:418 (5): NC
02:05:684 (1): RNC
02:13:914 (5): NC
02:20:817 (6): NC
02:30:640 (4): NC
02:44:711 (circle): Remove this circle and add a slider that finish in 02:45:241 (white tick)
03:13:914 (10): NC
03:26:138 (6): NC
03:38:339 (slider and Inherited time): slider velocity change to 1,0 x slider start here and finish in 03:38:870 (white tick)
00:39:135 (slider) : This start here and finish in 03:39:401 You have to use the distance snap here
00:340:445 (Inherited time): Delete this, I think volume 60 to the end it's ok and you don't need the slider velocity


It's enough, I am very tired xD, Good Luck with your beatmap
jusufkala
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Download: Yuuki Aira - Zankoku yo Kibou to Nare (shikyu) [JK Hard].osu
hoLysoup
hi~
just suggestions

[JK's Hard]

OD7 and AR 8
00:11:790 (5) - New combo
00:16:038 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this more arc like?http://puu.sh/5NIX
00:32:896 (6) - try to not over lap this? it's hard to see
01:06:480 (4) - shorten this by a bit and add a circle at 01:07:542 to look like this: http://puu.sh/5NJo
01:29:843 (4) - stack on 3?
01:39:932 (7) - down 1 grid. Grid level 3
02:43:649 (8) - new combo
03:15:905 (8,1) - spacing

[Hard]

more than 3 slider speeds are used here. Please only use 3.
00:09:666 (6) - New combo here
00:10:994 (1) - remove new combo
00:14:976 (1,1,1,1) - make them 1 after another please. don't skip any beat in between. and also:
00:14:976 (1,1,1,1) - all of them are not snapped to anything: http://puu.sh/5NMk
00:20:551 (9,10,11) - spacing
00:23:870 (8) - whistle?
00:42:852 (7,1,2) - spacing
01:02:233 (6) - make slider end stack on the circle?
01:05:418 (3) - new combo
01:08:870 - no more kiai? :O maybe make kiai time from 01:08:604~01:29:843 and then 02:29:312~02:50:551

  1. Did you change SV when you finished mapping or something? :O many of your sliders are not stacked to anything:

00:14:976 (1,1,1,1) - here
03:09:135 (2,3,5,6) - like here
03:16:834 (1,2,6) - ^

ok.. I think you have many things to fix.. first you should definitely first fix all the sliders and snap them on to a line first. I won't go into deep mod yet because all the sliders need fixing.
Good Luck~~!!
pLease pm me when the map is done and I'll mod everything again ^^
jusufkala
I'm done fixing it :lol::D:D
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Download: Yuuki Aira - Zankoku yo Kibou to Nare (shikyu) [JK Hard].osu
Topic Starter
shikyu
@mancusojuanmattos & @hoLysoup

fixed :), for JK hard I've told the mapper
hoLysoup
hi~ back again
all suggestions as usual

I won't mod JK's hard because I modded it last time so i'll just mod Hard and Normal

[Hard]

00:10:197 (2) - move to the left one grid. (grid lvl 3)
00:15:507 (1) - ctrl+r
00:25:595 (11,1) - spacing, maybe move 1 away from 11
00:34:622 (1) - remove clap and add finish?
00:53:206 (5) - new combo
00:53:472 (6,7) - spacing
00:54:534 (8,9) - spacing, maybe stack together?
01:05:418 (3,4,5) - just a suggestion here, because rhythm changes maybe combine these 3 into a repeat slider?
01:08:870 (6) - new combo
01:10:994 (3,4) - hard to see these 2 sliders when you stack like this. Maybe don't stack them?
01:13:118 (3,4) - stack these 2 please
01:29:843 (1) - stack on slider end of (3)?
01:37:808 (1) - remove new combo
02:09:401 (7) - new combo here
and remove new combo here: 02:09:932 (1)
02:14:445 (7) - new combo here
02:16:569 (1) - remove new combo
02:18:427 (1) - remove new combo
02:18:693 (2) - new combo
02:33:427 (1,2) - not stacked on the circle
03:02:498 (5) - new combo here so it's easier to see
03:16:702 (7,1) - move these 2 away from (6)
03:26:126 (6) - new combo
03:39:135 (2) - add finish on slider end
delete last spinner? JK's Hard also ends on 03:39:401 so just remove the last spinner.. I think it doesn't fit very well.

[Normal]

00:10:197 (2) - move down 1 grid (grid lvl3)
00:17:100 (5,6,7) - combine into 1 repeat slider?
00:21:879 (7) - repeating sliders like this is not preferred for Normal/Easy. Maybe remove 2 repeats and add circle at 00:22:675 with finish?
00:34:622 (1) - use finish and remove clap?
01:08:073 (4) - maybe just use a circle at 01:08:073?
01:29:843 (4) - remove clap
01:38:339 (1) - finish
01:40:463 (3) - remove this beat?
02:03:826 (4) - same advice as before
02:06:480 (1,2) - combine into a slider?
02:19:755 (5) - quite confusing for beginners. Maybe move this away so it's not stacked with the circles.
02:25:064 (5) - new combo
02:26:126 (1) - remove new combo
02:26:126 (1,2,3) - combine these to 1 repeat slider?
02:46:038 (1) - maybe just remove this and add a circle at: 02:46:303
02:49:489 (1,2,3) - combine these to make a 1 repeat slider
and start spinner at: 02:50:551

ok that's all~
^^
Topic Starter
shikyu

hoLysoup wrote:

hi~ back again
all suggestions as usual

I won't mod JK's hard because I modded it last time so i'll just mod Hard and Normal

[Hard]

00:10:197 (2) - move to the left one grid. (grid lvl 3)
00:15:507 (1) - ctrl+r
00:25:595 (11,1) - spacing, maybe move 1 away from 11
00:34:622 (1) - remove clap and add finish?
00:53:206 (5) - new combo
00:53:472 (6,7) - spacing
00:54:534 (8,9) - spacing, maybe stack together?
01:05:418 (3,4,5) - just a suggestion here, because rhythm changes maybe combine these 3 into a repeat slider?
01:08:870 (6) - new combo
01:10:994 (3,4) - hard to see these 2 sliders when you stack like this. Maybe don't stack them?
01:13:118 (3,4) - stack these 2 please
01:29:843 (1) - stack on slider end of (3)?
01:37:808 (1) - remove new combo
02:09:401 (7) - new combo here
and remove new combo here: 02:09:932 (1)
02:14:445 (7) - new combo here
02:16:569 (1) - remove new combo
02:18:427 (1) - remove new combo
02:18:693 (2) - new combo
02:33:427 (1,2) - not stacked on the circle
03:02:498 (5) - new combo here so it's easier to see
03:16:702 (7,1) - move these 2 away from (6)
03:26:126 (6) - new combo
03:39:135 (2) - add finish on slider end
delete last spinner? JK's Hard also ends on 03:39:401 so just remove the last spinner.. I think it doesn't fit very well.

[Normal]

00:10:197 (2) - move down 1 grid (grid lvl3)
00:17:100 (5,6,7) - combine into 1 repeat slider?
00:21:879 (7) - repeating sliders like this is not preferred for Normal/Easy. Maybe remove 2 repeats and add circle at 00:22:675 with finish?
00:34:622 (1) - use finish and remove clap?
01:08:073 (4) - maybe just use a circle at 01:08:073?
01:29:843 (4) - remove clap
01:38:339 (1) - finish
01:40:463 (3) - remove this beat?
02:03:826 (4) - same advice as before
02:06:480 (1,2) - combine into a slider?
02:19:755 (5) - quite confusing for beginners. Maybe move this away so it's not stacked with the circles.
02:25:064 (5) - new combo
02:26:126 (1) - remove new combo
02:26:126 (1,2,3) - combine these to 1 repeat slider?
02:46:038 (1) - maybe just remove this and add a circle at: 02:46:303
02:49:489 (1,2,3) - combine these to make a 1 repeat slider
and start spinner at: 02:50:551

ok that's all~
^^

all fixed :)
mochi
[General]
Background must be 1024x768 or 800x600. (use the one in spoiler if you want)

[Hard]
02:01:171 (3,1) - why jump?
03:09:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this part feels really off... i would remap it =.=
Topic Starter
shikyu

qilliam wrote:

[General]
Background must be 1024x768 or 800x600. (use the one in spoiler if you want) thanks for bg :D

[Hard]
02:01:171 (3,1) - why jump? fixed
03:09:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this part feels really off... i would remap it =.= fixed
Miya
Hi.. I want make a quick mod on your map.. I hope it helps.. :)

General
Remove Yuuki Aira Idolm@ster Xenoglossia from your tags :) it shouldn't be there.
Delete this file, it's an unnecesary file..


Normal
00:57:985 (2) - 2 grid up..
00:58:781 (4) - i really feel akward in this note.. I must try 3 times for have a 300 combo..
01:18:427 - i think it would be best if you add a circle here.. :)
02:12:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use distance snapping here please.. :(
02:26:525 (2,3,1) - i hate this jump when on normal difficulty..

Hard
01:02:233 (6) - this slider doesn't look nice..
01:27:454 (6,1) - use new combo on 6, dont use new combo on 1
umm, well that's it on hard difficulty.. The jump and small circle, i hate it on a map.. but that's allright.. :D

JK Hard
same comment on hard map, small circle, lot of stream, and jump.. But it's fun to play.. :D

That's all my modding, sorry if there's a strong word on my mod :D.. i hope it will help..
Topic Starter
shikyu

Miya wrote:

Hi.. I want make a quick mod on your map.. I hope it helps.. :)

General
Remove Yuuki Aira Idolm@ster Xenoglossia from your tags :) it shouldn't be there.
Delete this file, it's an unnecesary file..
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Normal
00:57:985 (2) - 2 grid up..
00:58:781 (4) - i really feel akward in this note.. I must try 3 times for have a 300 combo..
01:18:427 - i think it would be best if you add a circle here.. :)
02:12:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use distance snapping here please.. :(
02:26:525 (2,3,1) - i hate this jump when on normal difficulty..

Hard
01:02:233 (6) - this slider doesn't look nice..
01:27:454 (6,1) - use new combo on 6, dont use new combo on 1
umm, well that's it on hard difficulty.. The jump and small circle, i hate it on a map.. but that's allright.. :D

JK Hard
same comment on hard map, small circle, lot of stream, and jump.. But it's fun to play.. :D

That's all my modding, sorry if there's a strong word on my mod :D.. i hope it will help..
all fixed :)
Miya
Your map has been updated, but i'll try to mod your map again :)

Normal
01:54:003 (4) - move the center point of the slider 1 grid left
01:55:330 (5) - move the end point of the slider 2 grid down
02:31:436 (4) - make this slider like this


Hard
00:49:224 (4) - make this slider shape curve or anything more beautiful. :)
01:26:259 (4) - 1 grid up
01:30:374 (2) - make this slider start point linear to 3
01:38:339 (3) - i think slider shape is more beautiful like this

01:41:259 (6,7) - make this slider simetric like this


01:50:817 (8) - this slider point is too much, decrease it to make this slider more beautiful.

JK Hard
00:25:861 (9) - move the center of this slider 1 grid left
01:07:808 (5) - delete this note
01:15:772 (11) - move the end of this silder 1 grid down
01:24:799 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think this stream position is not good. Try to shape linear stream or triangle stream..
01:39:135 (5) - delete this note
02:03:560 (10) - move the end of this slider 1 grid up
02:50:551 (2) - add finish sound
Oh yes, because there's lot of stream in this map, i think it's better to change the title of the difficulty to JK Insane

That's all for my mod (Again) :P.. I hope this 'll help (again) x)


jusufkala
i won't do anything to this diff except the owner told me to change it :|

Download: Yuuki Aira - Zankoku yo Kibou to Nare (shikyu) [JK Insane].osu
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