1. Por lo que me decias de si te podia ayudar en la star count de la dificultad normal, es simplemente que la dificultad es como un facil. Lo que tienes que hacer es poner mas objetos y hacerlo un poco mas ''frenetico''

1. 00:22:134 (1) - hace contacto con el circulo anterior, muevelo un poco para solucionarlo (obiamente xdxd)

1. 00:32:961 (4) - es mejor que hagas ese slider asi. Te quedara mas limpio

1. 00:38:374 (3) - no me gusta como ha quedado ese circulo contactando con el slider, creo que seria mejor que lo movieses

1. 00:49:201 (5) - este slider es mu raro y no queda muy bien. haz otro si quieres

1. 00:56:419 - ahi pon un spinner, quedara mejor

1. 01:02:284 (2) - haz que ese circulo se junte con 01:04:540 (5). asi no contactaria con el otro slider y quedaria mejor

1. 01:42:434 (1) - mueve este circulo mas cerca del slider asi no quedaria mal que hagan ese contacto raro con el otro circulo

1. 01:56:870 (3,6) - estos dos contactan

1. 01:59:577 (1) - mueve este circulo al principio del slider 02:01:382 (5)

1. 02:23:487 (4) - mueve ese circulo al final del slider 02:21:231 (1)

1. 02:23:938 (5) - mueve ese circulo un poco para que no contacte con 02:23:487 (4)

1. 00:35:442 (3) - este slider contacta con el siguiente

1. 00:39:276 (4) - contacta con el slider anterior

1. 01:37:923 (1) - este slider es un poco, ''feo''

1. 02:51:908 (1,3) - estos sliders no se suelen utilizar mucho y quedan un poco mal

1. 00:20:780 (2) - haz que ese circulo se ponga encima del anterior

1. 00:23:713 (2) - este slider es un poco ''feo''. creo que deberias cambiarlo

1. 00:32:510 (3) - ^

1. 00:33:637 (4) - este circulo contacta con el slider siguiente

1. 01:40:179 (2) - haz que ese circulo se ponga encima del anterior

1. 01:46:043 (4) - este slider es un poco raro, deberias cambiarlo

1. 01:49:201 (2) - deberias poner este circulo encima del slider anterior

1. 01:50:329 (1) - ^

1. 02:26:419 (4) - contacta con el slider

1. 02:32:735 (2) - pon este circulo encima del anterior

1. 02:43:111 (2) - haz que este slider sea como mas, ''bonito''?

- Frontier - wrote:

hi

[General & Storyboard]

1. Gap between Normal and Hard is very far. D:
2. Distance Snap in Normal diff isn't consistent. You can ask this problem with BN.
3. 00:07:699 - 00:13:112 - These font sprites look so dark. You should make it brighter.
4. flash.png You can make it loop.

That's all. I can't mod the map But I like your storyboard. It's like S i R i R u's storyboard.
Good luck!

Mentai wrote:

From my queue, gonna go in-depth on your hard diff

I have no SB experience so I will not be modding that

Hard

00:14:917 (1,2) - we have our first opportunity to blanket something, this slider end should blanket the 2 slider

00:18:751 (1,2) - blanket here as well

00:24:616 (3,4) - at 00:17:398 (5,6) ds .8 was used, but now ds 1.1 was used in the newest combo, but it feels like there is no change in emphasis, especially considering the following pattern has lower ds than thew combo following 00:17:398 (5,6)

00:27:323 (4,5) - blanket suggestion https://puu.sh/rqdZC.jpg
you will have to alter the 6 circle to maintain consistent ds as well

00:29:804 (2,3) - blanket is off

00:32:059 (9) - i think this circle needs to be more emphasized by a higher ds because of the incredibly strong backbeat at this section

00:33:864 (5) - same as above

00:38:375 (3) - another blanket suggestion, you will again have to alter the ds of the note afterwards to maintain consistent ds https://puu.sh/rqedk.jpg

00:40:856 (3,6) - there is actually no sounds here to emphasize, highly recommend removing these (“Well timed silence has more eloquence than speech.”)

00:45:593 (1,2) - blanket please

00:50:781 (5) - seems like an accident, just fit it into the line, the emphasis is self intuitive by the stream

00:51:909 (3,4,5) - not proper blanket, the slider's curvature is to blame

00:53:714 (7) - meaning of this circle? i see nothing it could be mapped to

00:54:616 (1,2) - blanket by pulling the 1 back

00:58:676 (4,5) - keep at ds 1.2, just blanket it better

01:03:638 (2,3) - what is the purpose of this slider stack, seems really awkward just to look at

01:09:954 (3,4) - why stack the 4, 01:09:052 (1,2) had the same sound and emphasis, and even same hitsound. There's no reason to tuck the note away

01:14:804 - highly reccomend removing 01:14:917 (7) and adding a 1/4 slider to tackle both the dominant backbeat on the blue tick, and maybe hitsound the slider end to also emphasize the voice on the white tick

01:15:368 - start spinner here

01:31:608 (4,5) - blanket

01:39:503 (1,2) - blanket

01:42:435 (2) - again, immense backbeat, emphasize this please, your ds is actually getting lower

01:44:240 (6) - same, at least un-overlap for emphasis

01:47:623 (2) - x192 y164 for proper blanket

01:50:105 (5) - this note doesn't deserve 1.4 emphasis, this one does 01:50:330 (1)

01:54:165 (5) - again unnecessary note

01:57:548 (6) - x252 y192, to blanket

01:59:127 (4,5,6) - I was gonna mod thew blankets and spacing here, but i actually have no idea what rhythm you are following. Please remap this

02:06:120 (6) - x336 y160, to blanket

02:11:082 (2,3) - figure out a compromise to blanket this

02:13:112 (2,3,4) - again, I have no idea what rhythm you are following, why is it mapped this way?

02:24:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - very un-aesthetically pleasing, please make a nicer slider and ctrl+shift+f to make into a well formatted and spaced stream

02:31:157 (2) - why are you stacking such a strong beat, it should be emphasized with ds

02:32:962 (3) - same as above

these two circles would be a great place to utilize your soft-hitclap.wav a little more

02:34:541 (1) - soft-hitclap.wav

02:36:571 (3) - ^, also emphasize with higher ds

02:38:375 (3) - ^

02:39:503 (2) - if you are following the bass rhythm, move this circle to the blue tick right after it, 02:39:616

02:39:277 (1,2,3) - that being said, please normalize the spacing between these 3, as they are a rhythm witch the exact same rhythmic value, and then further emphasize the circle after it

02:41:984 (3) - ^^

02:43:789 (3) - it's almost insulting to hide this under the slider end, after even using 1.6 ds. please fix

02:53:939 (6) - why does this beat exist?

03:04:315 (4,6) - awkward overlap, suggest moving the slider down

03:09:954 (1,2) - blanket these in some way

03:16:496 (1,2) - needs a blanket, and more emphasis, especially with an emphasis hitsound https://puu.sh/rqgQ9.jpg

03:18:074 (4) - remove whistle, seems arbitrary

In general, you understand the basics of ds, but noiw you must manipulate it to give the subtle emphasis or large emphasis you need to make your beatmap breath. Also, lots of aesthetic mistakes, blanketing is essential if you want to go for a ranked mapset

Also a 2 diff set is too small I think, I suggest an Easy or Beginner diff to add onto it, and you'll be good to go

Good luck

Lumario wrote:

Normal diff:
00:30:932 (2,3) - Try to sync them with the vocals.
00:41:308 (3,4) - Minor thing move them a bit apart so they don't overlap [Aesthetics :3]
01:37:924 (1,2,3,4) - I think something like this would be more fitting

SPOILER

02:04:090 (2) - Move this one to the next white tick. (seemed more fitting to me)
02:54:841 (5) - Remove this one. (flow)

Hard diff:
Did not find anything too outstanding except:
00:50:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this stream more curved [Again aesthetics :3]

Well that's it I guess, hope I helped
Luma

[A L P H A] wrote:

Modding

Hola!
Mod de mi queue
[General]

1. Por lo que me decias de si te podia ayudar en la star count de la dificultad normal, es simplemente que la dificultad es como un facil. Lo que tienes que hacer es poner mas objetos y hacerlo un poco mas ''frenetico''

[Begginer]

1. 00:22:134 (1) - hace contacto con el circulo anterior, muevelo un poco para solucionarlo (obiamente xdxd)

1. 00:32:961 (4) - es mejor que hagas ese slider asi. Te quedara mas limpio

1. 00:38:374 (3) - no me gusta como ha quedado ese circulo contactando con el slider, creo que seria mejor que lo movieses

1. 00:49:201 (5) - este slider es mu raro y no queda muy bien. haz otro si quieres

1. 00:56:419 - ahi pon un spinner, quedara mejor

1. 01:02:284 (2) - haz que ese circulo se junte con 01:04:540 (5). asi no contactaria con el otro slider y quedaria mejor

1. 01:42:434 (1) - mueve este circulo mas cerca del slider asi no quedaria mal que hagan ese contacto raro con el otro circulo

1. 01:56:870 (3,6) - estos dos contactan

1. 01:59:577 (1) - mueve este circulo al principio del slider 02:01:382 (5)

1. 02:23:487 (4) - mueve ese circulo al final del slider 02:21:231 (1)

1. 02:23:938 (5) - mueve ese circulo un poco para que no contacte con 02:23:487 (4)

[Normal]

1. 00:35:442 (3) - este slider contacta con el siguiente

1. 00:39:276 (4) - contacta con el slider anterior

1. 01:37:923 (1) - este slider es un poco, ''feo''

1. 02:51:908 (1,3) - estos sliders no se suelen utilizar mucho y quedan un poco mal

[Hard]

1. 00:20:780 (2) - haz que ese circulo se ponga encima del anterior

1. 00:23:713 (2) - este slider es un poco ''feo''. creo que deberias cambiarlo

1. 00:32:510 (3) - ^

1. 00:33:637 (4) - este circulo contacta con el slider siguiente

1. 01:40:179 (2) - haz que ese circulo se ponga encima del anterior

1. 01:46:043 (4) - este slider es un poco raro, deberias cambiarlo

1. 01:49:201 (2) - deberias poner este circulo encima del slider anterior

1. 01:50:329 (1) - ^

1. 02:26:419 (4) - contacta con el slider

1. 02:32:735 (2) - pon este circulo encima del anterior

1. 02:43:111 (2) - haz que este slider sea como mas, ''bonito''?

No encontre nada mas xd

miradzin wrote:

Mod

Hard
00:37:472 (5,6) - A triple here shoud be fine.
00:45:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sounds a little weird, try this:http://puu.sh/s5BmV/47fac0ff21.jpg
00:50:104 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - I think the stream should begin here.
00:51:006 (1) - Try making a 1/2 reverse slider here.
01:01:607 (1) - The finish hitsound here sounds weird.
01:03:412 (1,2) - Make a 1/1 slider here.
01:14:803 (7) - Make this a circle instead of a slider.
01:44:464 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try something like this: http://puu.sh/s5BN9/43f272023f.jpg
02:11:081 (2,3) - 1/1 slider should be here and then the circle.
02:12:209 (5,1,2) - To be honest a 1/1 reverse slider should be better, like this: http://puu.sh/s5Dd1/3eb66e74c7.jpg
02:15:592 (1,2) - Change those into a 1/1 slider only.
02:17:397 - Add a circle here.
02:27:096 (5) - It should be here: 02:26:983
02:27:547 (6) - I think without this slider is better.
Well there are some more issues to be fixed, but I'll end it here, just follow my instructions, there are some mistakes in the rhythm, you need to know where and when use sliders correctly.
GL with the map

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[General]
Beginner Normal Hard? Where is Easy diff?

[Hard]
00:39:840 - 00:39:953 - 00:40:066 - add beats
00:50:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - AHrd to play for beginners, make kickslider.
03:08:825 - add a beat

Good luck

Lily Bread wrote:

"mod"

as request

[Easy]
OD5 and HP5 are too high for an easy diff. try AR3 or AR2, OD2 or OD1, HP2 or HP1.

we should use 1 DS in Easy diff from start to end.
http://puu.sh/sk3ZQ/1e931952f9.jpg
i found that your DS is different in this diff, so i suggest you to make them same. such as 0.80.

[Normal]
OD5 HP5 also too high for Normal. OD4 and HP4 are better.
in Normal diff, it's better to use 1 DS, too.

00:25:743 (1,2) - this pattern is too hard in normal diff. circle shouldn't be under a slider's tail in normal diff (but it's ok if it's above a slider's head).

00:27:547 (4) - 1/1 slider repeat twice is a bit weird in modern maps. we often use 1/1 slider * 2 in this case.

[Hard]
OD should be 6, and AR can be 7 or 8.

02:13:788 - here has a strong vocal, so what about to make - 02:13:562 (2) - into a 1/2 slider?
http://puu.sh/sk4jg/02ebe50aae.jpg

gl

xpcppo wrote:

hi from my queue here is my suggest


[easy]
01:02:284 (1) - the distance between yellow5 and green2 need fix

[normal]
00:31:607 - add a circle
01:02:284 (1) - not in a straight line
00:36:344 - add o circle
01:47:397 - same
02:13:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - change shpae

[hard]
01:33:186 (4,5) - in a straight line is good
01:58:901 - add a circle
02:51:908 (1) - change anlge like u did behind



thats all nice song

Chocobo wrote:

Hi, from my queue.
Sorry to be soooooooooooooo late;

General

. nice SB;
. mapping does not fit the rhythm very well, I'll try to point out some of them;
. need to check AImod;

Hard

. SV 1.9 can be a bit fast for such a low BPM;
. Rhythm seems quite strange in kiai time, missing a lot of sounds;
layout issues:
. RIP corner, no notes there;
. 00:46:269 (3,4,5) - such placement seems unclean, use more blanket to make them better;
. 00:54:615 (1,2) - blanket;
. 00:55:066 (2,3,4,5) - can rotate 4-5-6 a little;
. 00:56:758 (7,8) - there are many similar issues like this in this diff, it's not wrong but make the map unaesthetic;
. 02:01:607 (2,3) - as above;
. 01:00:705 (1,2,3,4) - not a good flow;
. 02:04:991 (4) - some drag sound like this can be map with a shape, avoid always using simple sliders;
Rhythm:
. 00:29:577 - missing note, hear the sound "hu" i ni
. 00:30:479 - as above;
. 00:32:284 (1,2,3) - overmapping, there's nothing here that needs such emphasize;
. 00:32:735 - missing note;
. 00:38:825 (7,8,9) - I suggest change this to note 7 note 8 and slider 9, since there are two very obvious drum sounds at 00:38:825 - and 00:39:051 - ;
. 00:47:171 - the slider should begin at here;
. 00:57:322 - slider starts here;
PS. if u really want to follow the drum here 00:57:096 - , u can use a single note to express this;
. 01:59:352 - ^
. 01:57:773 - compare to the similar section: 00:43:788 - try to keep the consistency of them;
. 02:09:502 - also, look back to 00:57:322 - can do something the same as above;
. 02:43:111 (2) - slider should begin here: 02:43:224 - just as 02:39:276 (1,2) - ;
02:43:562 - and ends here;
NC:
. 00:57:322 (9) - NC;
. Try to add NC every few measures, they are rather randomly now;

Noraml

. 00:24:164 - missing note;
. 00:25:743 (1,2) - unclean, try to be symmetrical;
. 00:28:901 (8,1) - blanket;
. 00:31:607 - missing note;
. 00:55:968 (5,6) - blanket;
. 01:08:149 (5,6,1) - really unclean;
. 03:18:750 (4,5,6,7) - blanket;

The whole map set gives me a sense of very old maps, like those uploaded in year 2010;
Although I can see a lot of efforts during mapping, this set still needs polishing, and even some rework.
Hope my moddings may help;
Good luck~

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! Mod from my queue!
I'm really sorry I'm late, but i wrote a message and you know all.
You said only Hard diff mod, so ok
General

1. Soft-hitfinish2.wav: you haven't used this hitsound ever, so remove it
2. You haven't used this images in storyboard, so remove it too:
   SB\circle.png
   SB\Screen_blur.png
   SB\Lyrics\25-L-Momo&Nana.png
   SB\Lyrics\9-L-Momo&Nana.png
3. soft-hitfinish.wav have a 6ms delay click!! It's too high! I made for you new file with no delay click2!

Hard

1. 00:14:916 (1) - I think you can put 1/1 slider here, cause this 00:15:367 vocal is strong
2. 00:16:946 (4) - You can make this slider curved. Make curve at 304/336 and end at 328/304. You can make it, cause after thi part you have many curved sliders and it will fit more to song
3. 00:21:231 (5,6) - Make it one slider for better look?
4. 00:36:570 (1,2,3,4) - Make here something like this?
5. 00:38:149 (1) - Imo you can make a little down curve here for better transitio
6. 00:40:179 (1,2) and 00:41:307 (3,4) - Reversed 1/1 sliders will fit more than circle and 1/2 slider.
7. 00:41:983 - I'm really confused why you didn't map this part. My sugestion is:
8. 00:50:104 (5,6) - Ctrl + G thi two for better rhtyhm
9. 00:57:998 - You can put a circle here, cause it's "ooo" here
10. 01:03:412 (2) - Imo my slider is beter than yours
11. 01:05:203 and 01:05:329 - Imo you can put here notes stacked with 01:05:442 (1), unstack 01:05:667 (2) and stack it with 01:05:893 (3) slider
12. 01:06:344 (4,5,6) - If you approve mod above stack 01:06:570 (5) with 01:06:795 (6)
13. 01:15:592 (5) - This slider looks really ugly, so make it like on screen:
14. 01:33:186 (4) - Copy 01:32:284 (1) and rotate about ~220 degrees
15. 01:38:600 (2) - Fix DS here
16. 01:48:073 (4) - I think you can make end of this slider at 344/264 for better transition and make a little circular flow here
17. 01:49:201 (2) - Fix DS too
18. 01:54:164 - The same like 00:41:983
19. 02:04:991 (4) - Try to make this slider symmetrical
20. 02:09:502 - You can put here two 1/4 double-repeats sliders for better rhythm
21. 02:52:810 (3,4) - Copy 02:51:908 (1,2) and try to DS
22. 03:03:186 (4) - Remove first slider node pls
23. 03:14:239 (3) - Move end to 144/336 for make it parallel with slider before

Ok that's all...
It was a short look, cause busyyyy...
GOOD LUCK!

TwillghtSparkle wrote:

Hi begginner NM
Hard : 00:20:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674850
00:42:886 - Nothing here?
00:57:998 (2) - Circle?
01:04:540 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674906
01:28:675 (3,4) - stacked ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674930
01:51:231 (3,4,5,6) - uhmm this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674945
01:55:066 - nothing here too?
02:52:810 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674958
03:03:186 (4) - slider looks bad , try to adjust it
03:23:036 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674968

Just opionions

CuteFunnyCat wrote:

Hi im form the mod que.

Easy:

Blanket issues:
00:47:848 (2,3) - You could blanket this like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6675240 this.

Normal:

Overlap issues:
00:35:442 (6,7,8) - They are too together.
01:48:299 (7,1) - Overlap.
02:39:276 (4,5) - ^

Spacing difference:
00:46:946 (1,2) - Spacing difference.
01:01:156 (2,3) - ^
01:01:156 (2,3) - ^
01:01:156 (2,3) - ^

Hard:

Overlap issues:
01:07:923 (3,1) - Overlap.

This is all for my mod the map seems prety good.

_Meep_ wrote:

From my queue

momo is here so i am here ;3
omg nana's smirk HAHAHAH(no offense this artstyle just makes her already-bossy attitude become more asshole)

Hard <3
00:19:878 (5) - copy paste 00:19:427 (4) - and ctrl+H,then rotate it by -30 degrees and ctrl+G,gives better symmetry than the current slider
I pity lala shes in the BG of the storyboard but not in the song ;w;
00:41:758 - Considering 'Stop' sounds like a really sharp sound,I suggest adding a note here rather than the slider repeat

01:27:096 - OMAIGAWD BEST MOMO BG <3
01:44:464 (1,2) - blanket properly please~
01:51:683 (5,6) - Make this same DS as 01:51:457 (4,5) - ?
01:59:577 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 10 single notes in a hard mode is pretty much a killer for those who do not have stamina,maybe try adding a slider on 02:00:028 - and 02:00:479 -
02:01:607 (2) - Make this a kickslider maybe?
02:03:073 - You could've mapped a note here
02:04:991 (4) - This slider looks bad imo -.- just use a normal curve
02:06:795 - from here,I'd like the rhythm changed to:

02:09:502 (2,3) - Line them up so it's easier to play
02:30:254 - woah woah whats with the badass but unrelated BG o-o
02:32:058 (1) - Make this a 3/4 repeat slider?
02:35:667 (1) - this too
02:37:021 (5,6,7,8,1) - I don't really hear a very distinct sound that plays a 5 note burst here,hard diff players may have trouble dealing with this as the beats may not be too loud,thus their fingers don't really want to tap or feel like tapping,consider changing this to a reverse slider
03:27:998 (5) - Why is this so much closer to 03:27:886 (4) - than the notes before?

short mod,sorry xd song is quite long
momo is love,momo is life

Yijun wrote:

hello

[Easy]

00:27:998 (4) - you could have blanketed this slider better like this

the mp3 is way shorter than the part you mapped. consider mapping the whole song

[Normal]

00:49:878 - the circle is placed on a section where there is no significant sound

02:13:562 (2) - this pattern is just aesthetically un-pleasing so maybe this would look more proper.

[Hard]

nothing really but if i notice anything i'll update this mod

fLaw wrote:

Mod for Hard difficulty

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01:04:540 (4) - because this and 01:04:878 (5) are fast doubles, it'd help to read by having them opposite ways. Like here > http://i.imgur.com/pFFXzKd.png
01:09:276 (2) - This singer's pitch on this note is lower than the previous note. I'd suggest not stacking these notes to reflect that > http://i.imgur.com/BbT81Lg.png
01:10:179 (5) - Same thing on this note > http://i.imgur.com/E93UGjH.png
01:10:855 (1,2,3,4) - The way each word is held for 1/4 a note would flow better as two sliders, like here > http://i.imgur.com/FLYE5pA.png
01:46:043 (4,5) - I would say make these two notes a single slider, again because of the singing
02:03:186 (1) - This note isn't spaced with 1.0x spacing like most of the notes are. Makes it run together a bit much with the 5 burst
02:31:156 (2) - Same with these, except its placed a bit further. Makes it a bit harder to read the rhythm here.
02:40:179 (4,5) - You could make these into a slider, maybe one that is the opposite of 02:41:081 (1)
03:20:216 (5) - Again with opposite fast doubles. Not too important tho imo
03:24:389 (1) - I would say make this two separate notes instead of a slider, because two words are sung here
03:25:292 (3) - ^Same with this slider
-----------------

Thats all from me ^^
Other than that, I think this was a great difficulty.
The only general thing I would point out is how most of the notes are clustered around the middle. If you use Ctr+A you'll see that pretty much all the corners are empty. Not saying you have to put a lot of notes in the corner, just something to think about for future

YukiZura- wrote:

from mod queue - Bye Bye 2016
sorry late lol xD

Hard

00:18:299 - i think you should put 1/6 reverse slider here cuz there is a strong sound i heard

00:46:495 (4,5,1) - blanket this together
01:09:953 - nc here?
00:59:577 (2) - move a little bit up the slider that i highlight cuz the distance blanket you made not nice enough ^^

example

01:30:479 - same like this one 00:18:299 -
02:34:089 - i dont hear any sound here?
03:28:675 - move this a little bit up since you made this slider like this 03:27:998 -

example

goodluck ^^
<3

O-Moei wrote:

Hi !

Hard
I bet you want to keep the spacing as their reading movement, so please check AIMod spacing issues

01:59:126 (6,7,1) - I suggest keep follow the vocal here to equalize with 00:47:171 (1) -

01:59:577 (7,1) - Swap NC

01:10:855 (1,2,3,4) - Why it's different with 02:23:036 (1,2,3,4) - ?

00:55:968 (6,7,8) - Not really everyone's taste, but maybe make this like 02:08:600 (1) - and 03:11:758 (1) -

02:44:464 - Pull the break timing to 02:44:690 -

03:27:998 (5) - NC

Good luck !

Toehoe wrote:

General

1. Your storyboard has suggestive themes at 01:27:096 - you need to give a warning on beatmap page
2. Some AiMod problems

Hard

1. 00:15:818 (2) - New combo here since the notes aren't a pattern together (change this for every time in the map)
2. 00:16:946 (1) - With a new combo here instead
3. 00:23:036 (2) - New combo here too, because it is confusing at 00:24:615 (3,4) when you expect same wait pattern
4. 00:41:307 (1) - New combo to show wait, like here 01:02:735 (1)
5. 01:02:735 (1) - I think just a normal slider would sound better here
6. 01:03:412 (2) - New combo again here for reasons said already
7. 01:05:216 (6,7,1) - I don't think you should curve the stream here, stack it neater
8. 01:10:855 (1,2,3,4) - For this section you map to vocals but here is strange, try 3 sliders then 1 note on white tick instead
9. 01:12:660 (1) - But here you start on instrument as slider instead of a single note and then sliders for vocals
10. 01:50:329 (1,2) - The vocals sound like you should make the slider at (1) instead and because (2) ends on a beat
11. 02:02:510 (4,5,6,7,8) - You miss a beat here 02:03:082 to start slider on vocals, it's confusing and too challenging. Suggestion is to replace with repeat slider
12. 02:14:916 (5) - Odd repeat slider again, better as just single slider
13. 02:17:397 - Here is better place for repeat slider
14. 02:24:389 (5) - I can't hear these beats in the song