1. Easy - 4Key (1.19 stars, 497 notes)
2. Elysium - 4Key (3.34 stars, 1971 notes)
3. Hard - 4Key (2.48 stars, 1317 notes)
4. Normal - 4Key (1.62 stars, 770 notes)

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Would you like to buy some flowers?

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

哦?
買花嗎?
這歌不短R

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

哦?
買花嗎?
這歌不短R

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

大家好 水摸時間

[最高的]

00:58:835 - add? //跟这个Snare 00:58:606 - 不同所以少个来区别开
01:18:530 - 感覺可以加點甚麼 //对可以加短LN， 改了下排列

[HARD]
01:18:530 - 跟頂一樣吧 //同上
02:43:721 - 02:43:835 - Add? //好

[NORMAL]
00:25:858 - add like 00:29:522 - //吧后面那个删了
00:30:897 - add? //跟前面音有点不同
01:24:484 -

MeowPaz wrote:

摸呼摸呼
1234
[NM]
00:12:805 (12805|1,13034|3,13263|2) - 建议换成432楼梯
00:23:568 (23568|1,23797|2) - 其实来个连点更好，又不难
01:22:194 (82194|1,82423|2) - ^
01:28:377 (88377|0,88377|3,88377|1) - 三压哦，神经大条诶。01:28:377 (88377|3) - 你要是怕难就干脆删掉吧，01:29:064 - 把这些重要的抓上更好。
01:41:202 (101202|0,101431|0,102118|3,102347|3) - 一个根本不够用，上两个更符合更有手感啊。反正star不会怎么变
02:58:148 - 这点没啥必要，反正这里都开始转了。你可以抓那个咻咻咻的音 //这个保留，Note抓Vocal
03:30:897 (210897|3) - 你之前都不抓，现在又突然抓

[HD]
01:33:416 (93416|0) - 在蓝线（其实很多都是，不知道你抓啥 //简化的主音， 抓太细单LN+片手1/4对于Hard来说太难，而且我觉得这样也能体现主音
02:36:622 (156622|3,156622|0,156736|2,156851|1,156965|0,157080|3,157080|2) - 不要了吧，02:36:164 - 开始有个很明显1/2的弦音，可以双键跟 //好

[jodo]
没什么好摸的

Aras25 wrote:

M4M
|1|2|3|4|

Easy

- 00:49:904 (49904|2) - to 4? It will become neat like this
- 01:14:179 (74179|3) - to 3? //prefer the current pattern
- 01:52:194 (112194|1,112194|2) - to 1&4, 01:52:652 (112652|0) - to 2, 01:53:110 (113110|1) - to 1, 01:54:942 (114942|2) - to 4
01:52:194 (112194|1,112194|2,112652|0,112652|2,113110|1,113568|3,114026|2,114484|0,114484|1,114942|2,115400|0) - make it the mirror of this 01:44:866 (104866|3,104866|0,105324|1,105324|2,105782|3,106240|0,106698|1,107156|3,107156|2,107614|0,108072|3) - ?
- 02:55:858 (175858|0) - add?
- 03:32:500 (212500|2) - separated hand? this wouldnt be a problem

Normal

- 00:58:606 (58606|0,58835|1,59064|0) - avoid this ? even Hard diff don't have this "one hand 1-2-1"
- 00:30:897 - add? maybe you will reject this cause you want to keep this pattern 00:29:751 (29751|3,29751|2,30209|0,30439|3,30668|0,31126|1,31126|2) -
- 01:40:286 (100286|2,100744|3) - ctrl + j? so it will become like this
- 01:57:232 (117232|3,117461|2,117690|3) - same liike before, guess you're doing this intentionally, I'll leave it then
- 03:27:003 (207003|3) - delete? same like before
- 03:30:668 (210668|1) - delete and add 1 here? 03:30:897 -

Hard

- 00:15:324 - add? you even add a note at the red tick in normal diff, so why not on this one?
- 01:14:637 (74637|1) - LN this?
- 01:28:606 (88606|0) - start at 01:28:835 - is better I think, the red tick where you start is actually the sound of the 01:28:377 (88377|3) - changing pitch, you can emphasize this (if you want) by having this 01:28:377 (88377|2) - become an LN and end this one at the red tick, enough with the writing, something like this is what I mean
- 01:31:584 (91584|1) - at here 01:31:469 - is better i think, rather than that not so audible hihat like, and you also got the more consistent snap between note for these 01:31:126 (91126|3,91469|1,91813|3) -
- 01:33:416 (93416|0) - ^
- 01:35:248 (95248|3) - ^ by "more consistent snap between note" what I mean is this (2 tick of 1/4 snapping between note)

that's all, good song, good BG, good chart, god mapper =w=)b

biemote wrote:

NM

00:09:828 (9828|0,10057|3,10286|0,10744|0,10973|3) - 好怪....改改啊.... //我觉得还好啊。。。
01:10:973 - 如果是我的话我大概会做成13 4 34这种(一个小jack强调拍手的声音(啊前后的都改改那也是极好的
02:14:408 (134408|3,135095|0) - 还不如1/2琴音往下走啦

HD

00:43:034 - 00:43:950 - 加一个来强调cymbal可好
02:29:751 (149751|0,149866|1,149980|2,150095|3,150209|0,150324|1,150439|2,150553|3) - 听起来根本不像是1/4啊,,,,,像1/6
02:38:225 (158225|0) - 开始在02:38:339 - 这里感觉比较好?

没了