1. Alarido's Soft (1,29 stars, 75 notes)
2. Betrayal (3,27 stars, 256 notes)
3. Hard (2,62 stars, 186 notes)
4. Normal (1,71 stars, 141 notes)

Difficulties

Annika Flina wrote:

Here is your NM

General

1. Nothing to mention here.

Normal

Didn't find anything needing change here.

Hard

00:35:167 (1) - Fix this blanket. Fixed
01:06:562 (3) - Remove this, I don't hear anything here. Actually there is a bass sound to emphsize on that one
01:28:771 - Add a circle here, there is a sound here. Yes there is a drum sound, but that triplet coulc make the whole rhythm harder imo, so I chose not to put one

I hope my mod was helpful.
Good luck on rank Thank you very much!

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hey~

This is your NM

Difficulties

Normal

1. 00:37:027 (1) - ^ Actually tried to follow the bass there, I try make this diff have less 1/2 slider, because I don't have an Easy diff, same answer applied to below
2. 00:37:957 (3) - ^
3. 01:33:539 (2) - Shrink this slider until white tick.

Hard

1. 00:51:678 - Add a circle That is intentional, I want to create a stop momentum on this part 00:45:864 (3,1) - and so on. I think they plays good so far
2. 00:55:399 - Add a circle

It's all that I can make lol
Good luck with your map! That's fine thank you very much!

Alarido wrote:

Taking a modding seat. Modding.

[Normal]
* Move 00:22:143 (1,2,3,4) - to x:132 y:88. Reason: the current position between 00:24:004 (4,5) - may lead some newbies to click 00:25:632 (6) - instead, And it get a bit neatier because makes a blanket here. In addition, it also avoids 00:22:143 (1) - 's head to get very very far from center right after the previous spinner. Fixed

* Make the positions of 00:34:237 (2,3) - a bit neatier like this ---> http://puu.sh/qJ984/0bcd37490a.jpg Fixed

* Avoid the almost covering of the number of 01:31:678 (5) - make Ctrl-J and move to x:456 y:104. Fixed

* If you did the last, then select together 01:30:981 (4,5) - and move them together by raising them by 1 grid up and 1 grid left (to fix spacing safe on 01:31:678 (5,6) - that got broken while doing that). Fixed

[Hard]
* Nothing so blatant was found (IMHO - important notice). A few would be doubtful, but fits to hard level. Thank you I'm glad to hear that

That's all. Ganbatte kudasai~ うん がんばります、 mod ありがとう！

1. As much as I appreciate the beautiful background I do not see any relevancy with the song. I've nothing against real-life photos, but I also want to make sure that everything in the set is here because it makes sense with the song.
2. Kiais are inconsistent. Which does not make much sense provided that all the diffs are made by you.
3. I would recommend adding an Easy difficulty. With the ton of overlapped 1/2 beats Normal using I just keep thinking than an easier verwsion would fit nicely with the spread.

1. 00:24:934 (5,6) - I would prefer two 1/2 sliders for the strings. A circle and a 1/2 slider could also fit welll example Basically, just try something like 00:27:260 (3)
2. 00:31:446 (4,5) - something similar to the suggestion above, sticking with the vocals instead of excessively using 1/2 should work better, something like this.
3. 00:45:399 - the peak of the vocals is here, while the slider begins 1/2 earlier. Whatever you were going for is definitely not as intense as the vocals are. Try a circle and an 1/2 slider?
   Note: 00:48:888 (2) - 00:52:841 - 00:54:469 (5) - 01:29:818 (2) - 01:37:260 (2) - same here.
   
   Beautiful flow, neat patterning. Just a bit of discomfort with the sliders mentioned above.

1. 00:30:283 (2) - the peak of the vocals is here, while the slider begins 1/2 earlier. Whatever you were going for is definitely not as intense as the vocals are. Try a circle and an 1/2 slider?
   Note: 00:32:143 (2) - 00:37:725 (2) - 00:39:585 (2) - same here and so on.
2. 01:28:655 (3,4) - I would probably use a 1/4 slider here. Sounds a lot better with the drums.
   
   Pretty nice one. I didn't like a few patterns with the sliders mentioned above but otherwise it's a candy.

1. 00:54:236 (2,3) - try to keep the spacing values higher here. The low spacing creates a bit of a slowdown here and feels slightly forced.
2. 01:15:864 (5,1) - could use a jump to stress the strong drum sound and the beginning of a new combo.
3. 01:18:771 (2,3,4,5) - the stream itself is neat, but the fact that it's the only stream shaped this way makes it somewhat confusing. How about adding a bit of consistency?
   
   Not much to add here. A pleasant difficulty.

Bakari wrote:

Yo, as per your request.

[General]

1. Kiais are inconsistent. Which does not make much sense provided that all the diffs are made by you. o-okay.. but I'll keep that kiai burst on 00:29:585 - tho

[Insane]

1. 00:54:236 (2,3) - try to keep the spacing values higher here. The low spacing creates a bit of a slowdown here and feels slightly forced.sure
2. 01:15:864 (5,1) - could use a jump to stress the strong drum sound and the beginning of a new combo. I guess no, but I'm not sure
3. 01:18:771 (2,3,4,5) - the stream itself is neat, but the fact that it's the only stream shaped this way makes it somewhat confusing. How about adding a bit of consistency? done

Bakari wrote:

Yo, as per your request.

[General]

1. As much as I appreciate the beautiful background I do not see any relevancy with the song. I've nothing against real-life photos, but I also want to make sure that everything in the set is here because it makes sense with the song. Already answered on previous post~
2. Kiais are inconsistent. Which does not make much sense provided that all the diffs are made by you. Fixed
3. I would recommend adding an Easy difficulty. With the ton of overlapped 1/2 beats Normal using I just keep thinking than an easier verwsion would fit nicely with the spread. Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:24:934 (5,6) - I would prefer two 1/2 sliders for the strings. A circle and a 1/2 slider could also fit welll example Basically, just try something like 00:27:260 (3) Fixed, rearrange the first part
2. 00:31:446 (4,5) - something similar to the suggestion above, sticking with the vocals instead of excessively using 1/2 should work better, something like this. Done
3. 00:45:399 - the peak of the vocals is here, while the slider begins 1/2 earlier. Whatever you were going for is definitely not as intense as the vocals are. Try a circle and an 1/2 slider? Same explanation like on Hard
   Note: 00:48:888 (2) - 00:52:841 - 00:54:469 (5) - 01:29:818 (2) - 01:37:260 (2) - same here.
   
   Beautiful flow, neat patterning. Just a bit of discomfort with the sliders mentioned above.

[Hard]

1. 00:30:283 (2) - the peak of the vocals is here, while the slider begins 1/2 earlier. Whatever you were going for is definitely not as intense as the vocals are. Try a circle and an 1/2 slider? Because I try to follow the bass instead, if you hear more carefully there is actually a bass sound play on 00:30:283 - and etc that mostly on red tick before the vocal like you mention above and so far they are plays great and consistent enough on this part 00:29:585 - , 00:44:469 - , 01:14:236 -
   Note: 00:32:143 (2) - 00:37:725 (2) - 00:39:585 (2) - same here and so on.
2. 01:28:655 (3,4) - I would probably use a 1/4 slider here. Sounds a lot better with the drums. Umm if I use a triplet there, imo that would be a bit too much since we already have a 1/4 slider with reverse here 01:27:492 (2) - , so I decide to follow the bass sound instead with a bit larger spacing, also reorganized the jump pattern into a better one
   
   Pretty nice one. I didn't like a few patterns with the sliders mentioned above but otherwise it's a candy.

Apart from a few things I've listed it should be okay. Get a few more mods and try searching for a BN.

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Best of luck! Thank you so much Bakari, I'll find a little more mods before finding a bn

O-Moei wrote:

Hi !, 🌀NM atau 💑M4M sama aja deh

✨ = Suggestion
💧 = Uuhhh?
💥 = Warning !!!

Here we go...

General :
💧Itu cuma di diff Normal yang ga pake WS. Samain ka xD WS te naon, waroeng steak yaa, fixed anyway!

Normal :
✨00:39:353 (6,7) - Blanket ka? Kayanya udah ok deh
✨01:05:864 (6) - White dot terakhirnya di x472y362 Blanketnya malah tambah lebar o.o
✨01:24:469 (7) - White dot tengah di x405y228 white dot akhir di x461y256 Fixed

Hard :
Ga ada masalah =w= ;D

Oke, good luck !

Mako Sakata wrote:

O-Moei wrote:

General :
💧Itu cuma di diff Normal yang ga pake WS. Samain ka xD WS te naon, waroeng steak yaa, fixed anyway!

O-Moei wrote:

Hi !, 🌀NM atau 💑M4M sama aja deh

✨ = Suggestion
💧 = Uuhhh?
💥 = Warning !!!

Here we go...

General :
💧Itu cuma di diff Normal yang ga pake WS. Samain ka xD

Alarido's Soft :
✨00:18:422 (1) - Try the spinner ends here 00:21:213 - . Sounds lovelier there ► Done. (although someone might complain on objects appearing right before spinner itself ends... let's try and discover~ )

Oke, good luck !

O-Moei wrote:

Betrayal :
💧Ntu ada kiai time nyungsep ditengah gapapa gituh? xD (diff lain ga gitu =w= ) no prob for GD
✨01:13:771 (9) - NC ? still connected to previous NC
✨01:40:283 (1) - kyknya ini bagus klo wave nya yg dikasih red dot ditengah itu ???
✨01:44:004 (8) - NC buat closing scene, biar sama kyk diff lain well, nope

O-Moei wrote:

Niva senpai ga main lagi ka? Pengen ketemu =w=

1. Fine. I noticed somethin, like you added a Kiai fountain at 00:29:585 in the highest diff, Why didn't you put the same kiai fountain at the other diffs ? It could be nice !

1. Maybe you could but AR2.5 cause it's better to play with 2.5.
2. 01:25:399 : tbh, you could improve this blanket. It's weird, in this actual state, So put the end circle like that : http://puu.sh/qPgXQ/e374aa0cf3.jpg It will improve a bit more the blanket imo.
3. 01:44:004 : It will be nice if you do a blanket with the previous slider
4. Rest is pretty fine for me

1. 00:22:143 : Imo, you could put the slider's curve at left, like that : http://puu.sh/qPh8c/bd3bd4fb68.jpg for a better flow.
2. 00:24:004 (4,5) : Little blanket at the end of the slider and the next slider shape, fix it :3
3. 00:39:353 (6,7) : Same as above
4. 01:11:911 (3,4) : Really little blanket here.
5. 01:28:655 (5) : Blanket with the next slider.
6. 01:34:242 : I think it's better to put this circle here 120|224 for a better flow, and then, after, edit the slider (4) good for DS.
7. Rest is good

1. 00:34:004 : Just a blanket here with the circle (4) and the end of the slider (1)
2. 01:07:260 (1,2) : blanket here (small)
3. Rest is fine

1. 00:34:120 (2) : stack it please, it's better (imo)
2. 00:43:306 (3) : ^
3. rest is good

SORRY BUT I COULDN'T RESIST TO PUT THIS IN MY MOD