These are my suggestions. You can skip them if you want
02:18:459 (1,2,3,4,5) - Delete these
04:28:774 (1) - Why not change to
04:58:796 (2) - Delete this note.
06:48:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Delete this, and put a break.
09:09:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Delete these and 09:09:513 (1) - make this one reverse.
10:05:310 (1) - Delete and 10:05:310 - Add beat.
10:26:070 (1) - Delete note
Thats it, really
Good luck!
02:18:459 (1,2,3,4,5) - Delete these
04:28:774 (1) - Why not change to
04:58:796 (2) - Delete this note.
06:48:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Delete this, and put a break.
09:09:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Delete these and 09:09:513 (1) - make this one reverse.
10:05:310 (1) - Delete and 10:05:310 - Add beat.
10:26:070 (1) - Delete note
Thats it, really
Good luck!