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Miki(CV.Takahashi Rie)&Kurumi(CV.Ozawa Ari) - Unhappy End Wo

posted 2016-07-31T14:43:07+00:00

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xNyamx

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xNyamx 2016-09-03T05:45:02+00:00

M o c h a wrote:

update (with hitsounds)
good to go! :>

M o c h a's Farewell

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Title:Unhappy End world (short ver.)
TitleUnicode:アンハッピー・エンドワールド(short ver.)
Artist:Miki(CV.TakahashiRie)&Kurumi(CV.OzawaAri)
ArtistUnicode:直樹美紀(CV.高橋李依)&恵飛須沢胡桃(CV.小澤亜李) From 学園生活部
Creator:xNyamx
Version:M o c h a's Farewell
Source:がっこうぐらし！
Tags:Gakkougurashi! Takahashi_rie Ozawa_ari Anime character song tv size NaokiMiki EbisuzawaKurumi Yasaija_714 Kyle_Y m_o_c_h_a
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157,118,56810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,87,56891,1,8,0:0:0:0:
110,224,57052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,280,57214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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317,312,57536,1,4,0:0:0:0:
89,287,57697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,354,57859,6,0,P|386:327|391:227,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,82,58343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
103,198,58504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
103,198,58665,2,0,P|92:235|127:294,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,344,58988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,223,59149,6,0,P|425:179|415:117,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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304,91,59794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,91,59955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
189,199,60117,2,0,P|144:208|80:182,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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401,240,62052,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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454,219,101891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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44,282,103826,2,0,L|116:288,1,45
351,268,103988,5,4,0:0:0:0:

Okay　Updated~

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xNyamx 2016-09-03T05:45:25+00:00

Ready for mod (ALL diff) ( *´艸｀)

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2016-09-03 15:32 Yasaija 714: こんにちわー
2016-09-03 15:32 xNyamx: こんにちわ～
2016-09-03 15:33 Yasaija 714: DiffがそろったみたいなのでxNyamxさんのDiffのみmodしようと思います
2016-09-03 15:34 Yasaija 714: あ、postではなくchatのmodなので後でircとしてはっときます
2016-09-03 15:34 xNyamx: ありがとうございますー！　よろしくお願いします。
2016-09-03 15:34 Yasaija 714: Easyから言っていきます
2016-09-03 15:35 xNyamx: はいー
2016-09-03 15:35 Yasaija 714: Distance snapって使ってますか？
2016-09-03 15:36 xNyamx: はい　一応は…
2016-09-03 15:36 Yasaija 714: EasyはDistance snap の1.00を固定して置かないと変に離れてるとUnrankedです
2016-09-03 15:36 Yasaija 714: 00:34:633 (1,2,3) -
2016-09-03 15:37 Yasaija 714: (1)から(2)で2.00 (2)から(3)までで2.12も離れてます
2016-09-03 15:37 Yasaija 714: 始点から始点と考えれば近いように見えるんですが
2016-09-03 15:38 Yasaija 714: 終点から始点と考えればEasyとしては遠いです
2016-09-03 15:38 xNyamx: なるほど…
2016-09-03 15:39 Yasaija 714: 一応配置やスライダーの形などの指摘もあるんですが今回は省きます
2016-09-03 15:39 Yasaija 714: EasyのDistanceを直すってなると今指摘するとややこしくなると思うので
2016-09-03 15:40 Yasaija 714: たぶんですがDS0.9であわせてませんか？
2016-09-03 15:41 Yasaija 714: DS0.9とか0.8などが多かったんですが
2016-09-03 15:41 xNyamx: そうですね…
2016-09-03 15:41 xNyamx: 基本0.8くらいで合わせてると思います
2016-09-03 15:41 xNyamx: Easyは1.00固定とは　知りませんでした…
2016-09-03 15:42 Yasaija 714: 確かにDS0.8などでやっていくのもありかと思いますがDSは固定したほうがいいかと・・・
2016-09-03 15:42 xNyamx: Easy譜面作り直そうかな…
2016-09-03 15:42 xNyamx: そうですよね　すいません…ｗ
2016-09-03 15:43 Yasaija 714: Easyは配置やスライダーの形のmodをしないのははっきりいえなかったですが作り直しが必要かと・・・
2016-09-03 15:44 Yasaija 714: 作り直しでスライダーの形を指摘されるとまたややこしくなるので
2016-09-03 15:44 Yasaija 714: 少しだけ
2016-09-03 15:44 xNyamx: はい
2016-09-03 15:45 Yasaija 714: 00:06:247 (1) - 始点や終点の近くで直角に曲げるのはあまりよくないです
2016-09-03 15:45 Yasaija 714: EasyやNormalで奇怪なスライダーは結構厳しいです
2016-09-03 15:46 Yasaija 714: 00:06:247 (1,2) - overlap
2016-09-03 15:46 Yasaija 714: 00:12:698 (1) - NC外したほうがいい
2016-09-03 15:46 Yasaija 714: 00:13:988 (1) - これも
2016-09-03 15:47 Yasaija 714: 過度なNCは避けましょう
2016-09-03 15:47 Yasaija 714: あ、modの用語としてわからなければ聞いてください
2016-09-03 15:47 xNyamx: 了解ですー
2016-09-03 15:48 Yasaija 714: 00:21:569 (3) - かなり不恰好です
2016-09-03 15:49 Yasaija 714: 00:55:278 (3,4) - 同じく不恰好です
2016-09-03 15:49 Yasaija 714: こういうときはコピーペーストを使用したほうがいいかも
2016-09-03 15:50 Yasaija 714: 01:01:730 - ここから01:03:020 - ここまではちゃんと音とったほうがいいかも
2016-09-03 15:50 Yasaija 714: 強い音はちゃんととったほうが今後の音取りがわかりやすくなったりします
2016-09-03 15:51 Yasaija 714: 01:05:602 (1,1) - ここまで間隔があるならspinnerの方がいいかも
2016-09-03 15:52 Yasaija 714: ついでにスピナーにするならば
2016-09-03 15:52 Yasaija 714: 終点は01:06:891 - よりも
2016-09-03 15:52 Yasaija 714: 01:07:052 - の方がいいと思います
2016-09-03 15:52 Yasaija 714: あ、今のなしです＞＜
2016-09-03 15:52 Yasaija 714: 01:06:891 - が終点の方がいいです
2016-09-03 15:53 Yasaija 714: 01:08:182 (1,2,3,4) - 単調すぎるのでちょっと曲げたりしたほうがいいかも
2016-09-03 15:54 Yasaija 714: Remapするにあたって同じ音取りをする部分に対して言ってることなので少ないですが
2016-09-03 15:54 Yasaija 714: 参考にしてもらえればありがたいです
2016-09-03 15:55 Yasaija 714: Hardは自分modできないので許してください
2016-09-03 15:55 xNyamx: わかりました　ありがとうございますー
2016-09-03 15:56 Yasaija 714: Extraも指摘点は多いですけどRanked狙うなら真っ先にEasyを修正する必要があります
2016-09-03 15:56 Yasaija 714: Normalに関しては良い人選んだと思います！
2016-09-03 15:57 xNyamx: 了解です　Easy作り直しますねー
2016-09-03 15:57 xNyamx: ありがとうございますｗ（？）
2016-09-03 15:58 Yasaija 714: 今回はircとしてEasyのみですが
2016-09-03 15:59 Yasaija 714: ちゃんとpostするときにはそのほかのdiffも見て送ります
2016-09-03 15:59 xNyamx: Easyの音取りは　大体は変更なし（指摘もらった分は足します）で　作り直して良いんでしょうか？
2016-09-03 15:59 xNyamx: ありがとうございますー　了解です。
2016-09-03 15:59 Yasaija 714: ですね
2016-09-03 16:00 Yasaija 714: Easyらしいといえばらしいので

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-09-03T07:30:28+00:00

Yasaija 714 wrote:
irc
2016-09-03 15:32 Yasaija 714: こんにちわー
2016-09-03 15:32 xNyamx: こんにちわ～
2016-09-03 15:33 Yasaija 714: DiffがそろったみたいなのでxNyamxさんのDiffのみmodしようと思います
2016-09-03 15:34 Yasaija 714: あ、postではなくchatのmodなので後でircとしてはっときます
2016-09-03 15:34 xNyamx: ありがとうございますー！　よろしくお願いします。
2016-09-03 15:34 Yasaija 714: Easyから言っていきます
2016-09-03 15:35 xNyamx: はいー
2016-09-03 15:35 Yasaija 714: Distance snapって使ってますか？
2016-09-03 15:36 xNyamx: はい　一応は…
2016-09-03 15:36 Yasaija 714: EasyはDistance snap の1.00を固定して置かないと変に離れてるとUnrankedです
2016-09-03 15:36 Yasaija 714: 00:34:633 (1,2,3) -
2016-09-03 15:37 Yasaija 714: (1)から(2)で2.00 (2)から(3)までで2.12も離れてます
2016-09-03 15:37 Yasaija 714: 始点から始点と考えれば近いように見えるんですが
2016-09-03 15:38 Yasaija 714: 終点から始点と考えればEasyとしては遠いです
2016-09-03 15:38 xNyamx: なるほど…
2016-09-03 15:39 Yasaija 714: 一応配置やスライダーの形などの指摘もあるんですが今回は省きます
2016-09-03 15:39 Yasaija 714: EasyのDistanceを直すってなると今指摘するとややこしくなると思うので
2016-09-03 15:40 Yasaija 714: たぶんですがDS0.9であわせてませんか？
2016-09-03 15:41 Yasaija 714: DS0.9とか0.8などが多かったんですが
2016-09-03 15:41 xNyamx: そうですね…
2016-09-03 15:41 xNyamx: 基本0.8くらいで合わせてると思います
2016-09-03 15:41 xNyamx: Easyは1.00固定とは　知りませんでした…
2016-09-03 15:42 Yasaija 714: 確かにDS0.8などでやっていくのもありかと思いますがDSは固定したほうがいいかと・・・
2016-09-03 15:42 xNyamx: Easy譜面作り直そうかな…
2016-09-03 15:42 xNyamx: そうですよね　すいません…ｗ
2016-09-03 15:43 Yasaija 714: Easyは配置やスライダーの形のmodをしないのははっきりいえなかったですが作り直しが必要かと・・・
2016-09-03 15:44 Yasaija 714: 作り直しでスライダーの形を指摘されるとまたややこしくなるので
2016-09-03 15:44 Yasaija 714: 少しだけ
2016-09-03 15:44 xNyamx: はい
2016-09-03 15:45 Yasaija 714: 00:06:247 (1) - 始点や終点の近くで直角に曲げるのはあまりよくないです
2016-09-03 15:45 Yasaija 714: EasyやNormalで奇怪なスライダーは結構厳しいです
2016-09-03 15:46 Yasaija 714: 00:06:247 (1,2) - overlap
2016-09-03 15:46 Yasaija 714: 00:12:698 (1) - NC外したほうがいい
2016-09-03 15:46 Yasaija 714: 00:13:988 (1) - これも
2016-09-03 15:47 Yasaija 714: 過度なNCは避けましょう
2016-09-03 15:47 Yasaija 714: あ、modの用語としてわからなければ聞いてください
2016-09-03 15:47 xNyamx: 了解ですー
2016-09-03 15:48 Yasaija 714: 00:21:569 (3) - かなり不恰好です
2016-09-03 15:49 Yasaija 714: 00:55:278 (3,4) - 同じく不恰好です
2016-09-03 15:49 Yasaija 714: こういうときはコピーペーストを使用したほうがいいかも
2016-09-03 15:50 Yasaija 714: 01:01:730 - ここから01:03:020 - ここまではちゃんと音とったほうがいいかも
2016-09-03 15:50 Yasaija 714: 強い音はちゃんととったほうが今後の音取りがわかりやすくなったりします
2016-09-03 15:51 Yasaija 714: 01:05:602 (1,1) - ここまで間隔があるならspinnerの方がいいかも
2016-09-03 15:52 Yasaija 714: ついでにスピナーにするならば
2016-09-03 15:52 Yasaija 714: 終点は01:06:891 - よりも
2016-09-03 15:52 Yasaija 714: 01:07:052 - の方がいいと思います
2016-09-03 15:52 Yasaija 714: あ、今のなしです＞＜
2016-09-03 15:52 Yasaija 714: 01:06:891 - が終点の方がいいです
2016-09-03 15:53 Yasaija 714: 01:08:182 (1,2,3,4) - 単調すぎるのでちょっと曲げたりしたほうがいいかも
2016-09-03 15:54 Yasaija 714: Remapするにあたって同じ音取りをする部分に対して言ってることなので少ないですが
2016-09-03 15:54 Yasaija 714: 参考にしてもらえればありがたいです
2016-09-03 15:55 Yasaija 714: Hardは自分modできないので許してください
2016-09-03 15:55 xNyamx: わかりました　ありがとうございますー
2016-09-03 15:56 Yasaija 714: Extraも指摘点は多いですけどRanked狙うなら真っ先にEasyを修正する必要があります
2016-09-03 15:56 Yasaija 714: Normalに関しては良い人選んだと思います！
2016-09-03 15:57 xNyamx: 了解です　Easy作り直しますねー
2016-09-03 15:57 xNyamx: ありがとうございますｗ（？）
2016-09-03 15:58 Yasaija 714: 今回はircとしてEasyのみですが
2016-09-03 15:59 Yasaija 714: ちゃんとpostするときにはそのほかのdiffも見て送ります
2016-09-03 15:59 xNyamx: Easyの音取りは　大体は変更なし（指摘もらった分は足します）で　作り直して良いんでしょうか？
2016-09-03 15:59 xNyamx: ありがとうございますー　了解です。
2016-09-03 15:59 Yasaija 714: ですね
2016-09-03 16:00 Yasaija 714: Easyらしいといえばらしいので

Easy remapしましたー。

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-09-04T06:13:09+00:00

Extra 一部配置修正

Extra little changed

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-09-04T10:51:36+00:00

Konnichiwa ^^

Easy

For starter, beats like 00:20:439 (4,5) - didnt follow the beat properly, high chance of causing confusion for newbie players. In addition to that, you mapped a lot of vocal and missed tons of potential beats.

00:30:117 (2,3) - not blanket properly.
00:50:117 (1,2,3) - this is bad hitsounding, it should be on 00:50:439. I suggest a slider to cover it up
01:26:247 (1,2,3) - 1/2 circles are not recommended in Easy. Like, really

fix your hitsound placing. check other maps and see how they put up a hitsound

Ky's Normal

from 00:01:085 to 00:11:407, placing a clap is not good hitsound for a starting part, especially the one that needs a whistle, not a clap

00:12:697 add a note here as well

00:28:504 (3,1) - slight overlap

00:57:859 (1) - ctrl+h ctrl+j ctrl+g coz it killed the flow of 00:56:891 (5) -

Hard

00:17:536 missing note ==

00:21:084 (4) - put the clap from the 3rd note slider (00:21:407) to the previous tick (00:21:165)

00:24:149 (1) - this is more suited for a 1/1 slider

00:31:084 stOp skipPIng the beeee-ooaeaeae-aeai-joooo (the note, please dont skip them ffs)

00:46:246 WHYYY SKIP THE NOTES FOR THE VOCAL DDDDDDX

00:49:472 (9) - try to blanket with 00:48:826 (7) -

00:51:246 (6,7) - blanket

00:55:278 (1,3) - good blanket opportunity

00:59:149 (5,7) - i think it's bad overlap

01:16:246 damit, missing beat. I thought u map vocal, and you did. And this section actually confuses the player imo (Also, bland hitsounding)

01:24:149 (4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - dont make something like this, and have something like 01:25:601 (1,2) - to end the beat. This is actually tiring and might be pointed out by BNs

01:36:407 (3,4) - good blanket opportunity

Extra

00:03:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - overmapped

00:37:214 (3,6) - didnt blanket each other well

00:39:473 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - this is somewhat indecent mapping. The distance could cause a confusion for players

00:49:150 (3,3) - i see an overlap

00:51:972 add a note here on top of 00:52:053 (3) - coz extra diff

01:05:601 (1,1,1,1) - WHAT IS THIS!?

01:17:052 (6) - It doesn't fit the kiai as you map the kiai in 1/2 and 1/4 sliders

01:26:246 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped, i suggest one note and a triplet like the picture below

Mocha's farewell

This diff's maker gone through a bit of an improvement, better than our first failed full ver.

But some things bothered me, and will be putted as a mod

00:50:117 (1,4,1) - imperfect blankets

01:05:923 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - not sure about this distance. But oh well

01:07:375 (3,4,5,6,7) - but this one is not tolerable. use large grid and make a square

01:23:665 (1,2) - ugly sound coz of bad emplacement. fix pls

good luck

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-09-04T11:15:02+00:00

Underdogs wrote:
Konnichiwa ^^

Easy
For starter, beats like 00:20:439 (4,5) - didnt follow the beat properly, high chance of causing confusion for newbie players. In addition to that, you mapped a lot of vocal and missed tons of potential beats.

00:30:117 (2,3) - not blanket properly.
00:50:117 (1,2,3) - this is bad hitsounding, it should be on 00:50:439. I suggest a slider to cover it up
01:26:247 (1,2,3) - 1/2 circles are not recommended in Easy. Like, really

fix your hitsound placing. check other maps and see how they put up a hitsound

Easy remap

Hard
00:17:536 missing note == fixed

00:21:084 (4) - put the clap from the 3rd note slider (00:21:407) to the previous tick (00:21:165) fixed(?)

00:24:149 (1) - this is more suited for a 1/1 slider fixed

00:31:084 stOp skipPIng the beeee-ooaeaeae-aeai-joooo (the note, please dont skip them ffs) fixed

00:46:246 WHYYY SKIP THE NOTES FOR THE VOCAL DDDDDDX fixed

00:49:472 (9) - try to blanket with 00:48:826 (7) - i cant...

00:51:246 (6,7) - blanket fixed

00:55:278 (1,3) - good blanket opportunity Hmm.... littele changed

00:59:149 (5,7) - i think it's bad overlap keep

01:16:246 damit, missing beat. I thought u map vocal, and you did. And this section actually confuses the player imo (Also, bland hitsounding) fixed

01:24:149 (4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - dont make something like this, and have something like 01:25:601 (1,2) - to end the beat. This is actually tiring and might be pointed out by BNs changed

01:36:407 (3,4) - good blanket opportunity Hmm.... littele changed

Extra
00:03:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - overmapped fixed

00:37:214 (3,6) - didnt blanket each other well fixed

00:39:473 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - this is somewhat indecent mapping. The distance could cause a confusion for players fixed

00:49:150 (3,3) - i see an overlap keep

00:51:972 add a note here on top of 00:52:053 (3) - coz extra diff changed

01:05:601 (1,1,1,1) - WHAT IS THIS!? hahaha XD

01:17:052 (6) - It doesn't fit the kiai as you map the kiai in 1/2 and 1/4 sliders fixed

01:26:246 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped, i suggest one note and a triplet like the picture below keep

good luck

Thanks~!!

Last edited by xNyamx 2016-09-07T12:48:58+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

KuroNeko1509

55 posts

Joined July 2014

KuroNeko1509 2016-09-04T19:21:58+00:00

NM from the queue :3
Fun mapset, good luck on ranking!

M o c h a's Farewell

I really like this map, its so fun >w< could make a good pp map, mmmm pp <3
01:43:988 (1) - this ending is kind of off, id suggest to place a slider at this note and end it on 01:44:310 - , this way the end wont be so random
00:03:343 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'd suggest you to tone down this jumps a bit, because after looking at your map like 3 times I've noticed it just goes intense-intense-intense. That particular part is just the beginning and already so intense. I think you should make them a bit closer to each other. The reason for this is that the player will notice that lets say the chorus is coming when the hard part starts lol but this map is just always so hard. Decreasing distance just a little will work well
00:15:923 (3) - move this note a little closer to the slider before.
00:17:214 (4,5,6,7,1) - could be short stream until 00:17:778 -
00:35:762 (8,9,1) - I think this is slight overmapping cuz theres no sound on note 9, so id suggest you to remove this note
00:36:407 (4) - Sound that's inside of this slider, the trapped sound is pretty loud so try to do something about it. What I think you could do is - start a slider here 00:36:246 - and make it until the red tic here 00:36:407 - , then add a note over here 00:36:568 - \:D/
00:46:407 (2,3,4) - this jump pattern is confising to me personally, what id suggest is that you move note 4 somewhere else like this for example http://puu.sh/qZPLk/dc42085657.jpg
00:52:214 (4) - what is this slider doing here, I think replacing it with a note would fit way better
01:05:278 (5,6) - I don't think these sliders work here, the only sound that I can hear at that part is that red tic sound over here 01:05:439 - so placing sliders there is kind of overmapping it ><;;
01:05:762 (2) - this note also doesn't have a sound to it, id suggest removing it
01:01:407 - - here on the other hand there are sounds where you should probably place a notes, they would make up into a 5 note stream :>
http://puu.sh/qZQlT/aec7f59129.jpg don't we all just hate how notes like here 01:12:859 - are barely touching ? id suggest to overlap them more because you've been pretty consistent with overlapping them on like 1/4 of a circle.

Extra

01:44:230 (10) - ending feels empty you should probably consider making this note 01:43:988 (7) - a slider until the big white tic after note 10 01:44:310 -
00:03:665 (3,4,5) - doesn't look like these sliders fit in here because the music is still pretty calm, but with these sliders youre making it look intense
00:10:763 (1) - start stream from here basically just add few more notes :3 a note here 00:10:843 - and here 00:11:004 -
00:11:408 (7,8) - I think you should delete slider 8 and prolong slider 7 until the part where slider 8 ends, because theres so such sound to make a new slider, which is why just prolonging 7 would fit better
00:12:053 (1,2,3,4) - I think this is overmapping, this is the easy part of the song, the slow and calm part why add all those extra notes, what you could do is probably replace them with a slider
00:13:666 (4,5) - if you listen closely at this part, this has a sound that beats 3 times and meanwhile you only have 2 sliders. I'd suggest deleting these sliders and replacing them with one kick slider like this http://puu.sh/qZRkQ/e702d690c0.jpg . A follow up would be to make following note 1 closer to the slider because they are only 1/4 beats away :3
00:16:247 (6) - remove this slider, it doesn't have a sound to it. That part should stay blank it doesn't make any significant sound
00:31:731 (4,5) - I think you're trying to follow too many sounds at the same time, try to stay more consistent. Remove note 5 and add prolong a slider. This is how I think it should look like http://puu.sh/qZREa/2f8b68edfc.jpg , and here's how yours looks like http://puu.sh/qZRFr/d30b40d8d0.jpg
00:40:036 (2) - delete this note, no sound
00:40:278 (4) - here you're following vocal and then here you're following the beat 00:40:440 (5) -

try to stay consistent, delete this slider 00:40:440 (5) - and make slider 00:40:278 (4) - longer, until here 00:40:439 -

00:40:602 (5,6,7,8,9) - ok so what's up with this part lol, delete notes 5 and 6, and start slider 7 on place of note 5, meaning your slider 7 should start here 00:40:601 - and end here 00:40:762 - ; Then this 00:40:924 (6,7) - , this is fine if you move slider 6 closer to slider 7, they are placed to far apart on the graph but they are only 1/4 beats away on the timeline . Remember, placement of notes should always stay relatively equal to how they are placed on the timeline.
00:42:456 (3) - delete this note
00:52:940 (5) - ^
00:50:602 (4,1) - add a note between these 2 notes

00:54:634 (1) - delete NC
00:55:924 (1) - delete NC
00:57:215 (1) - delete NC
00:55:278 (7) - add NC
00:56:408 (4) - add NC
00:57:859 (4) - add NC ;
Go over your map and check for NC fix, NC should always start at downbeats and downbeats only <3
01:00:924 (3,1) - add a note between 3 and 1
01:01:408 (2,3,1) - add a note between 2 and 3 and 3 and 1, it should make a short stream :3
01:02:134 (3,5) - delete these notes
01:16:891 (5) - delete this slider
01:31:489 (1) - lol that would be a nice trap, if I were to play this and I was fc'ing I would think this is the end and bum there are more notes after this stream XD lol
01:32:697 - I don't think you should ignore this large sound here, I'd suggest to make a new slider here that goes until here 01:32:939 -

M o c h a

105 posts

Joined September 2013

M o c h a 2016-09-04T22:34:54+00:00

Underdogs wrote:
Mocha's farewell
This diff's maker gone through a bit of an improvement, better than our first failed full ver.

But some things bothered me, and will be putted as a mod

00:50:117 (1,4,1) - imperfect blankets fixed

01:05:923 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - not sure about this distance. But oh well :'(

01:07:375 (3,4,5,6,7) - but this one is not tolerable. use large grid and make a square fixed

01:23:665 (1,2) - ugly sound coz of bad emplacement. fix pls ok i changed it

KuroNeko1509 wrote:
M o c h a's Farewell
I really like this map, its so fun >w< could make a good pp map, mmmm pp <3
01:43:988 (1) - this ending is kind of off, id suggest to place a slider at this note and end it on 01:44:310 - , this way the end wont be so random okay
00:03:343 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'd suggest you to tone down this jumps a bit, because after looking at your map like 3 times I've noticed it just goes intense-intense-intense. That particular part is just the beginning and already so intense. I think you should make them a bit closer to each other. The reason for this is that the player will notice that lets say the chorus is coming when the hard part starts lol but this map is just always so hard. Decreasing distance just a little will work well ok
00:15:923 (3) - move this note a little closer to the slider before. done. what was the reason for this? it was already pretty close
00:17:214 (4,5,6,7,1) - could be short stream until 00:17:778 - i think it is fine the way it is
00:35:762 (8,9,1) - I think this is slight overmapping cuz theres no sound on note 9, so id suggest you to remove this note i wanted to emphasize the sound at 00:35:762 (didnt want to a slider) because it stands out. is that not allowed?
00:36:407 (4) - Sound that's inside of this slider, the trapped sound is pretty loud so try to do something about it. What I think you could do is - start a slider here 00:36:246 - and make it until the red tic here 00:36:407 - , then add a note over here 00:36:568 - \:D/ i decided to make turn that slider into jumps. i dont want to ignore the sound at 00:36:407 -
00:46:407 (2,3,4) - this jump pattern is confising to me personally, what id suggest is that you move note 4 somewhere else like this for example http://puu.sh/qZPLk/dc42085657.jpg ill try that
00:52:214 (4) - what is this slider doing here, I think replacing it with a note would fit way better it sounded good. rip me
01:05:278 (5,6) - I don't think these sliders work here, the only sound that I can hear at that part is that red tic sound over here 01:05:439 - so placing sliders there is kind of overmapping it ><;; fixed
01:05:762 (2) - this note also doesn't have a sound to it, id suggest removing it :<
01:01:407 - - here on the other hand there are sounds where you should probably place a notes, they would make up into a 5 note stream :> ok
http://puu.sh/qZQlT/aec7f59129.jpg don't we all just hate how notes like here 01:12:859 - are barely touching ? id suggest to overlap them more because you've been pretty consistent with overlapping them on like 1/4 of a circle. oh, i wanted them to be separate so they are different, fixed

Thank you both!

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[Metadata]
Title:Unhappy End world (short ver.)
TitleUnicode:アンハッピー・エンドワールド(short ver.)
Artist:Miki(CV.TakahashiRie)&Kurumi(CV.OzawaAri)
ArtistUnicode:直樹美紀(CV.高橋李依)&恵飛須沢胡桃(CV.小澤亜李) From 学園生活部
Creator:xNyamx
Version:M o c h a's Farewell
Source:がっこうぐらし！
Tags:Gakkougurashi! Takahashi_rie Ozawa_ari Anime character song tv size NaokiMiki EbisuzawaKurumi Yasaija_714 Kyle_Y m_o_c_h_a
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BeatmapSetID:489464

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xNyamx

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Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-09-05T10:34:33+00:00

KuroNeko1509 wrote:
Extra
01:44:230 (10) - ending feels empty you should probably consider making this note 01:43:988 (7) - a slider until the big white tic after note 10 01:44:310 - fixed
00:03:665 (3,4,5) - doesn't look like these sliders fit in here because the music is still pretty calm, but with these sliders youre making it look intense fixed
00:10:763 (1) - start stream from here basically just add few more notes :3 a note here 00:10:843 - and here 00:11:004 -
00:11:408 (7,8) - I think you should delete slider 8 and prolong slider 7 until the part where slider 8 ends, because theres so such sound to make a new slider, which is why just prolonging 7 would fit better fixed
00:12:053 (1,2,3,4) - I think this is overmapping, this is the easy part of the song, the slow and calm part why add all those extra notes, what you could do is probably replace them with a slider fixed
00:13:666 (4,5) - if you listen closely at this part, this has a sound that beats 3 times and meanwhile you only have 2 sliders. I'd suggest deleting these sliders and replacing them with one kick slider like this http://puu.sh/qZRkQ/e702d690c0.jpg . A follow up would be to make following note 1 closer to the slider because they are only 1/4 beats away :3 keep
00:16:247 (6) - remove this slider, it doesn't have a sound to it. That part should stay blank it doesn't make any significant sound fixed
00:31:731 (4,5) - I think you're trying to follow too many sounds at the same time, try to stay more consistent. Remove note 5 and add prolong a slider. This is how I think it should look like http://puu.sh/qZREa/2f8b68edfc.jpg , and here's how yours looks like http://puu.sh/qZRFr/d30b40d8d0.jpg fixed
00:40:036 (2) - delete this note, no sound keep
00:40:278 (4) - here you're following vocal and then here you're following the beat 00:40:440 (5) - try to stay consistent, delete this slider 00:40:440 (5) - and make slider 00:40:278 (4) - longer, until here 00:40:439 - fixed
00:40:602 (5,6,7,8,9) - ok so what's up with this part lol, delete notes 5 and 6, and start slider 7 on place of note 5, meaning your slider 7 should start here 00:40:601 - and end here 00:40:762 - ; Then this 00:40:924 (6,7) - , this is fine if you move slider 6 closer to slider 7, they are placed to far apart on the graph but they are only 1/4 beats away on the timeline . Remember, placement of notes should always stay relatively equal to how they are placed on the timeline. changed
00:42:456 (3) - delete this note fixed
00:52:940 (5) - ^ keep
00:50:602 (4,1) - add a note between these 2 notes keep
00:54:634 (1) - delete NC fixed
00:55:924 (1) - delete NC fixed
00:57:215 (1) - delete NC fixed
00:55:278 (7) - add NC fixed
00:56:408 (4) - add NC fixed
00:57:859 (4) - add NC ; fixed
Go over your map and check for NC fix, NC should always start at downbeats and downbeats only <3 Okay
01:00:924 (3,1) - add a note between 3 and 1 keep
01:01:408 (2,3,1) - add a note between 2 and 3 and 3 and 1, it should make a short stream :3 keep
01:02:134 (3,5) - delete these notes keep
01:16:891 (5) - delete this slider cant...
01:31:489 (1) - lol that would be a nice trap, if I were to play this and I was fc'ing I would think this is the end and bum there are more notes after this stream XD lol
01:32:697 - I don't think you should ignore this large sound here, I'd suggest to make a new slider here that goes until here 01:32:939 - changed

Thanks~!

M o c h a's Farewell updated^^

Ashton

Ashton 2016-09-06T10:52:28+00:00

Hi there nm from modreqs

Blue = Strongly Suggested Pink = Unrankable Red = suggestion

--GENERAL--

no custom combo colours are set on any of the diffs, I would strongly suggest adding some

Uncheck 'widescreen support' in the editor, because there is no storyboard

Easy

- 01:02:370 - Slider start
- 01:02:692 - Slider end need to be snapped, right now they aren't
- ncing for an easy should be every second downbeat to keep things nice and simple!
- 00:16:407 (1,2) - in my opinion, this should be a blanket for an aesthetically pleasing look
- 00:21:568 (1) - curve more for a better blanket I would suggest going around your WHOLE map and finding where blankets can be improved/added as they are very nice to look at
- the main problem with this difficulty is the structure, try looking at ranked easy difficulties and looking to see what kind of structure they use
- 00:45:602 (2,3,4) - this is something called 'irregular spacing' I would suggest avoiding this in easies/normals as it can cause players to misclick the right beat
- 01:01:730 (3,4,1) - it goes from LOUD hitsound to very quiet hitsound, causing a weird sound to be made ,I would suggest keeping the same overall volume for your whole map

- 01:15:923 (1,2,3,4) - this is once again another example of 'irregular rythym' I would suggest looking at this video by pishifat https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c7jYwSVjiSo
- 01:35:117 (2) - this shape isn't that appealing to look at

Hard

00:14:955 (5) - this object goes offscreen, now it's unrankable
01:05:278 (7,1) - recovery time for slider can be a bit more

- 00:00:923 (1,2,3) - blanket here please, again look throughout your WHOLE MAP and see where you can blanket
- 00:01:891 (4,1,2,3,4) - I can't really feel the rythym of the song, I would suggest slowing down the music to see where notes go and where notes do not go
- 00:04:955 (4) - double reverse sliders are a little bit weird and hard to play, I would just remove one reverse and put an note 00:04:955 (4) - here (go through your map and see stuff you can fix)
- 00:17:214 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) - you can add more hitsounds in here, if you don't know how to hitsound you can also ask someone else to do it for you! (just remember to put them in desc.)

I hope you found this useful

good luck

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-09-06T11:45:27+00:00

Whirl wrote:
Hi there nm from modreqs

Blue = Strongly Suggested Pink = Unrankable Red = suggestion

--GENERAL--

no custom combo colours are set on any of the diffs, I would strongly suggest adding some added~

Uncheck 'widescreen support' in the editor, because there is no storyboard fixed

Easy

- 01:02:370 - Slider start
- 01:02:692 - Slider end need to be snapped, right now they aren't
- ncing for an easy should be every second downbeat to keep things nice and simple!
- 00:16:407 (1,2) - in my opinion, this should be a blanket for an aesthetically pleasing look
- 00:21:568 (1) - curve more for a better blanket I would suggest going around your WHOLE map and finding where blankets can be improved/added as they are very nice to look at
- the main problem with this difficulty is the structure, try looking at ranked easy difficulties and looking to see what kind of structure they use
- 00:45:602 (2,3,4) - this is something called 'irregular spacing' I would suggest avoiding this in easies/normals as it can cause players to misclick the right beat
- 01:01:730 (3,4,1) - it goes from LOUD hitsound to very quiet hitsound, causing a weird sound to be made ,I would suggest keeping the same overall volume for your whole map
- 01:15:923 (1,2,3,4) - this is once again another example of 'irregular rythym' I would suggest looking at this video by pishifat https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c7jYwSVjiSo
- 01:35:117 (2) - this shape isn't that appealing to look at

Easy remap

Hard

00:14:955 (5) - this object goes offscreen, now it's unrankable fixed
01:05:278 (7,1) - recovery time for slider can be a bit more changed(?)

- 00:00:923 (1,2,3) - blanket here please, again look throughout your WHOLE MAP and see where you can blanket fixed Okay
- 00:01:891 (4,1,2,3,4) - I can't really feel the rythym of the song, I would suggest slowing down the music to see where notes go and where notes do not go fixed
- 00:04:955 (4) - double reverse sliders are a little bit weird and hard to play, I would just remove one reverse and put an note 00:04:955 (4) - here (go through your map and see stuff you can fix) fixed
- 00:17:214 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) - you can add more hitsounds in here, if you don't know how to hitsound you can also ask someone else to do it for you! (just remember to put them in desc.) fixed

I hope you found this useful

good luck

Thanks~~

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-09-07T13:01:26+00:00

Easy remap

( ;∀;)

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

kunka 2016-09-07T16:16:55+00:00

From #modreqs and re-map help ww

SPOILER

22:40 kunka: diff設定がおかしいです
22:41 kunka: normalと見比べてください
22:41 kunka: バランスが良くないです
22:41 kunka: AR,OD,HPを全て３でいいくらいです
22:42 xNyamx: なるほど　確かに…
22:43 kunka: 00:00:923 (1) - １コンボ目ですがeasyで赤線スタートは鬼畜ですｗ
22:43 kunka: 白線で問題ないと思います
22:43 kunka: そしてサークルでなくて(1)(2)を消してスライダーが無難です
22:44 kunka: http://puu.sh/r2YPg.jpg
22:44 kunka: どんどん逝きます
22:45 kunka: 00:02:859 (4) -
22:45 kunka: 消して00:02:214 (3) - を(4)まで伸ばした方がやりやすいです
22:45 kunka: http://puu.sh/r2YTk.jpg
22:46 kunka: 00:03:665 (1) - は1/1sliderがいいです。これと同じで00:10:117 (3,4) -
22:49 xNyamx: なるほど…
22:49 kunka: 00:05:601 (1,2) - ここは結構変えた方が良いと思います。例えばhttp://puu.sh/r2Z2R.jpg
22:50 kunka: 青線使ってますが様子見でｗ多分いけると思います
22:50 kunka: つか、白、赤でslider止めるとおかしい感じがします
22:51 kunka: 00:07:536 (5) - これいらないです('A`)　目立った音がないので不自然です
22:52 kunka: その代りに00:07:536 (5) - の尻尾から1/2sliderを足します。　http://puu.sh/r2Zbx.jpg
22:53 kunka: 00:08:826 (1,2) - これは00:10:117 (3) - のコピーで配置すると良い感じです
22:55 kunka: 00:13:988 (3,4) - easyでこのリズムはリバースを使うと問題ないです。２notesもしくは３notesだと間違いなく突っ込まれます　http://puu.sh/r2ZiQ.jpg
22:58 kunka: 00:15:601 (5,6) - なんか不自然です。理由は曲調が変わった直後の00:16:730 - にobjectがないせいです。なので
22:59 kunka: https://puu.sh/r2Zvc.jpg　が無難です
23:03 kunka: 00:17:214 (1,2,3) - ここも結構変えた方がいいです。00:18:020 (2) - の音取りがよくわかんない、、寧ろ00:18:181 - のスネア音を拾うと良いです。例えば
23:04 kunka: こんな感じで　http://puu.sh/r2ZIt.jpg
23:05 kunka: 00:18:504 - サークル、、いるかも？まかせます
23:10 kunka: 00:19:794 (1) - これも不要かと、、00:18:988 - から配置してみたので試してみてください　。(5)のリバース後に(1)があるのでそれは消してくだしあ
23:10 kunka: くだしあて('A`)
23:11 xNyamx: ( *´艸｀)
23:11 xNyamx: 了解です
23:16 kunka: 00:22:375 (6) - これも必要ないかと、、00:23:504 - にこれを置いてみてください。被ってるnoteは全て必要ないです http://puu.sh/r30hf.jpg
23:16 kunka: 00:24:955 (9) - koremo
23:18 kunka: 同じです。さっきの配置と同じように置くとgoodです　http://puu.sh/r30mp.jpg　（9）は00:24:633 - スタートでし
23:18 kunka: でして('A`)
23:21 kunka: 00:26:246 (11,1) - try this pls http://puu.sh/r30w3.jpg ちょっとむずかしめの配置なので突っ込まれたら直した方がいいかも
23:24 kunka: できたらうｐってほしいです。一旦確認したいです
23:25 xNyamx: わかりました　ちょっと時間くださいー
23:28 kunka: あいー
23:31 xNyamx: すいませんー　00:18:988 - からの配置例　もう一回送ってもらっていいですー？
23:32 kunka: どれだろ？ｗ
23:34 kunka: http://puu.sh/r2ZIt.jpg
23:34 xNyamx: 届いてない気がする
23:34 xNyamx: ええっと…
23:34 kunka: これかな？
23:35 xNyamx: それかも…　ありがとうございますｗ
23:35 kunka: 折り返しと終点でスネアが聞こえるので良いかなと
23:37 xNyamx: なるほど…
23:40 xNyamx: 一応できたかな…　確認お願いします～
23:41 kunka: あい
23:45 kunka: 00:18:988 (8) - これ違う^^; ちょっと提案した内容と変わりますがeasyならこれでおｋ　http://puu.sh/r31D5.jpg
23:45 kunka: 00:21:084 (10,1) - ここも違います
23:47 kunka: 00:20:923 (10) - スタートで終点に被る（１）を消します　。　http://puu.sh/r31Kt.jpg
23:48 xNyamx: すいませんｗ　そこの画像がこっちに届いてなかったっぽかったので　自分で配置しちゃいました…
23:48 xNyamx: 修正しますー
23:50 kunka: 00:22:052 (11) - サークルいるかも？？
23:53 kunka: 気になったのが00:04:633 (2) - 。　正確には00:04:472 - スタートだと思うんです。これ消して00:04:955 - にサークル置く方が
23:53 kunka: いかもしんない
23:57 xNyamx: そこも修正してみましたー　確認お願いしますー
23:57 kunka: ｋ
23:58 kunka: 良い感じです
23:59 kunka: ただ、ちょいnormalに近い形なんで所々足したサークルを消す必要がでてくるかもしれません
00:00 xNyamx: わかりましたー
00:01 kunka: 後半もツッコミたいんですがコレすげー時間かかりますねｗ
00:01 xNyamx: 確かに…ｗ
00:02 kunka: ざっと書きます
00:02 xNyamx: あ　ありがとうございますｗ
00:03 kunka: 00:27:859 (6) - ヴォーカルフォローだと思うんですがなんか違和感あります
00:03 kunka: 00:28:181 - に移動して2/1sliderとかどうですか？　
00:04 kunka: 1/1リバースが多いのでここらで長めのslider入れるといいかも、、曲調もＡパートで緩やかなので
00:07 xNyamx: なるほどxo…ｗ
00:07 xNyamx: …
00:08 kunka: 00:29:149 (1,2,3) - これはnormalで配置してもつっこまれます。　これならおｋ　https://puu.sh/r32Iz.jpg
00:12 kunka: 00:33:020 (1,2) - ここもあやしいです。try this pls http://puu.sh/r32Xf.jpg
00:16 kunka: 00:34:633 (2,1,2,1) - これは好みかもしれませんがＳＤを下げるのなら後ろの３つ消してリバースのみでいくのもありです　　http://puu.sh/r33aX.jpg
00:17 kunka: 00:37:859 (3) - ここはサークルないとブランクが不自然です
00:19 kunka: 00:38:343 (4,5,1,2,3) - これはむずいです('A`: こんなんどうでしょう？　http://puu.sh/r33iZ.jpg
00:22 xNyamx: なるほど　確かにそうかも…　わかりましたー
00:24 kunka: 00:42:375 (1,2,3,4) - ＾　try pls http://puu.sh/r33wM.jpg
00:27 kunka: 00:46:891 (2,3,4,5) - 00:50:117 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/r33Gz.jpg
00:29 xNyamx: 了解ですー

続きは今度でｗ
大分、変わったかな？
easyは必要以上に音取るとＳＤ上がってしまうので、”コレないとおかしいだろ！？”ってのをpick upします
1beat or 2 beat のblankを作りつつ色んなリズムのobject置くとそれなりに出来ます（適当）
1/2のリズムを置いてないようなのですぐ作り直せますyo GL!!

おまけHard

00:41:891 - Aパートを見て下さい。同じ曲調が続く中で何故かここだけblank,,不自然なので同じように他にも空白作った方がいいと思います。ここにサークルを足すのは安直で実際、必要以上にnotesが埋まってるので他を消すことをお勧めします。
00:57:214 (6,7,8,9) - stackズレてます。つか、Bパートも緩やかな感じで1/2の4hitはなんか合ってない気がします。ここまで1/2をよく使ってるので1/2slider×2の方が良い感じがします
00:59:149 (5,7) - blanketが綺麗な配置pls http://puu.sh/r35l1.jpg
01:01:730 (7,8,9,10) - 白線はかなり強い音なので(7)の終点を白線にするのはもったいないというかもったいない。1/2slider×4がbetter
01:04:955 - めっちゃ強い音を無視してます。(7)を消して(6)を01:04:955 - へ。元の(6)の位置にはサークル追加でおｋ
01:16:730 - ここサークルないとペン投げます
01:17:375 - マウス投げます
01:17:536 - 投げるものがない
01:28:181 - ^
01:28:343 - ^

サビ後、音が小さくなるの仕様？私、気になります！

Last edited by kunka 2016-09-07T18:24:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2016-09-07T16:50:56+00:00

Underdogs wrote:
Konnichiwa ^^

[Ky's Normal]
from 00:01:085 to 00:11:407, placing a clap is not good hitsound for a starting part, especially the one that needs a whistle, not a clap

00:12:697 add a note here as well fixed

00:28:504 (3,1) - slight overlap fixed, in fact it is minor

00:57:859 (1) - ctrl+h ctrl+j ctrl+g coz it killed the flow of 00:56:891 (5) -fixed

good luck

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67215
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.5

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Title:Unhappy End world (short ver.)
TitleUnicode:アンハッピー・エンドワールド(short ver.)
Artist:Miki(CV.TakahashiRie)&Kurumi(CV.OzawaAri)
ArtistUnicode:直樹美紀(CV.高橋李依)&恵飛須沢胡桃(CV.小澤亜李) From 学園生活部
Creator:xNyamx
Version:Ky's Normal
Source:がっこうぐらし！
Tags:Gakkougurashi! Takahashi_rie Ozawa_ari Anime character song tv size NaokiMiki EbisuzawaKurumi Yasaija_714 Kyle_Y m_o_c_h_a
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343,131,36568,2,0,P|387:118|457:137,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,220,37214,6,0,B|440:283|440:283|444:331,1,110,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,310,37697,2,0,P|349:298|297:313,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,334,38343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,334,38504,2,0,P|162:344|99:321,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
57,253,39149,2,0,L|78:132,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,91,39794,6,0,L|257:69,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,84,40278,2,0,P|277:131|291:193,1,110
350,250,40923,1,2,0:0:0:0:
350,250,41084,2,0,L|240:247,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,275,41568,2,0,L|137:304,1,55
76,257,42052,1,8,0:0:0:0:
127,185,42375,6,0,P|141:150|117:78,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,59,42859,2,0,B|173:69|173:69|254:53,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,97,43665,2,0,P|342:151|329:206,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,228,44149,2,0,P|284:281|302:332,1,110
338,357,44633,2,0,L|394:337,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,320,44955,6,0,B|468:275|468:275|452:225|475:169|475:169|456:96,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,86,45762,2,0,L|395:39,1,55,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,54,46084,2,0,P|291:84|208:39,1,165,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,26,46891,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,106,47214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
127,184,47536,6,0,L|134:297,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,324,48020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
165,324,48181,2,0,L|295:319,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,372,48826,2,0,P|363:317|346:267,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,202,49472,2,0,P|272:150|290:99,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,63,50117,6,0,P|283:9|201:80,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,131,51084,1,8,0:0:0:0:
177,208,51407,2,0,L|165:319,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,355,51891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
265,315,52214,2,0,L|331:317,1,55,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,360,52697,6,0,P|408:320|368:244,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,224,53181,2,0,P|328:164|344:108,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,88,53665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,32,53988,2,0,L|184:32,2,110,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,4,54955,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,52,55278,6,0,P|472:104|464:168,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,196,55762,2,0,P|432:252|456:316,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,328,56246,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,328,56407,2,0,B|408:320|408:320|352:332,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,344,56891,2,0,P|292:348|268:344,2,55,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,260,57536,1,8,0:0:0:0:
215,282,57858,6,0,P|155:266|95:286,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,259,58343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,259,58504,2,0,L|68:147,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,84,59149,2,0,P|184:96|236:72,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,148,59794,2,0,P|334:127|387:140,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,200,60439,6,0,B|460:264|460:264|436:320,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,336,61084,2,0,L|248:328,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,264,61730,1,4,0:0:0:0:
112,296,62052,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,224,62375,2,0,L|36:112,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,52,63020,6,0,P|184:76|264:36,1,165,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,24,63665,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,80,63988,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,32,64310,2,0,P|440:84|412:148,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,170,64794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,170,64955,2,0,L|412:245,1,55
383,308,65439,1,2,0:0:0:0:
383,308,65601,6,0,P|317:289|225:309,1,165,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,338,66246,2,0,P|196:294|95:238,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,241,66891,2,0,L|32:190,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,103,68181,6,0,P|344:122|407:94,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,81,68665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
423,81,68826,2,0,L|441:211,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,277,69472,2,0,P|364:266|308:279,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,310,70117,2,0,P|197:315|160:305,1,55
136,301,70439,2,0,P|106:295|82:298,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,313,70762,6,0,L|28:191,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,130,71407,2,0,P|132:147|188:124,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,83,72052,2,0,P|312:71|366:91,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,144,72697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,91,73020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
426,144,73343,6,0,L|424:263,1,110
367,321,73988,1,8,0:0:0:0:
282,295,74310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,328,74633,2,0,L|86:335,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,248,75278,2,0,P|87:200|52:135,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,89,75923,6,0,L|247:91,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,65,76407,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,113,76730,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,62,77052,2,0,P|440:136|374:198,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,268,77859,2,0,L|215:265,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,324,78504,6,0,P|135:278|150:214,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,191,78988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,191,79149,2,0,B|184:133|184:133|159:75,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,37,79794,2,0,P|72:81|95:144,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
26,199,80439,2,0,L|47:257,1,55
78,278,80762,2,0,L|83:336,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,365,81084,6,0,L|230:355,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,304,81730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,339,82052,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,274,82375,2,0,L|429:143,1,110
349,129,83020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
290,62,83343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,124,83665,6,0,B|183:72|216:15|216:15|135:60|43:56|43:56|94:68|102:117,1,385,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,157,84955,2,0,L|110:214,1,55
85,248,85278,2,0,L|70:310,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,342,85601,2,0,P|160:328|203:346,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,350,86084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,350,86246,6,0,P|272:300|268:238,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,212,86730,2,0,L|284:102,1,110
310,70,87214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
445,182,87859,1,8,0:0:0:0:
435,269,88181,2,0,L|451:326,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,351,88826,6,0,P|248:334|165:368,1,165,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,356,89472,2,0,L|94:297,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,279,89794,1,8,0:0:0:0:
89,194,90117,2,0,L|96:130,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,118,90439,2,0,L|126:52,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,36,90762,1,8,0:0:0:0:
243,68,91084,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,152,91407,6,0,B|343:118|327:41|327:41|385:92|379:153|379:153|420:154|449:188,1,330,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,155,92536,2,0,B|462:248|462:248|489:329,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,355,93343,2,0,L|350:371,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,326,93826,6,0,P|196:292|116:336,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,244,94633,2,0,P|95:198|40:111,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,70,95278,2,0,L|149:65,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,78,95762,2,0,P|228:91|295:66,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,56,96246,1,8,0:0:0:0:
325,56,96407,6,0,L|347:225,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,290,97214,2,0,P|428:283|457:288,2,55,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,321,97697,2,0,P|284:346|211:286,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,267,98343,1,2,0:0:0:0:
122,227,98665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,140,98988,6,0,P|139:62|67:15,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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274,126,103343,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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xNyamx

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xNyamx 2016-09-08T14:57:33+00:00

kunka wrote:
From #modreqs and re-map help ww 　くんかし #modreqs からだったの！？
SPOILER
22:40 kunka: diff設定がおかしいです
22:41 kunka: normalと見比べてください
22:41 kunka: バランスが良くないです
22:41 kunka: AR,OD,HPを全て３でいいくらいです
22:42 xNyamx: なるほど　確かに…
22:43 kunka: 00:00:923 (1) - １コンボ目ですがeasyで赤線スタートは鬼畜ですｗ
22:43 kunka: 白線で問題ないと思います
22:43 kunka: そしてサークルでなくて(1)(2)を消してスライダーが無難です
22:44 kunka: http://puu.sh/r2YPg.jpg
22:44 kunka: どんどん逝きます
22:45 kunka: 00:02:859 (4) -
22:45 kunka: 消して00:02:214 (3) - を(4)まで伸ばした方がやりやすいです
22:45 kunka: http://puu.sh/r2YTk.jpg
22:46 kunka: 00:03:665 (1) - は1/1sliderがいいです。これと同じで00:10:117 (3,4) -
22:49 xNyamx: なるほど…
22:49 kunka: 00:05:601 (1,2) - ここは結構変えた方が良いと思います。例えばhttp://puu.sh/r2Z2R.jpg
22:50 kunka: 青線使ってますが様子見でｗ多分いけると思います
22:50 kunka: つか、白、赤でslider止めるとおかしい感じがします
22:51 kunka: 00:07:536 (5) - これいらないです('A`)　目立った音がないので不自然です
22:52 kunka: その代りに00:07:536 (5) - の尻尾から1/2sliderを足します。　http://puu.sh/r2Zbx.jpg
22:53 kunka: 00:08:826 (1,2) - これは00:10:117 (3) - のコピーで配置すると良い感じです
22:55 kunka: 00:13:988 (3,4) - easyでこのリズムはリバースを使うと問題ないです。２notesもしくは３notesだと間違いなく突っ込まれます　http://puu.sh/r2ZiQ.jpg
22:58 kunka: 00:15:601 (5,6) - なんか不自然です。理由は曲調が変わった直後の00:16:730 - にobjectがないせいです。なので
22:59 kunka: https://puu.sh/r2Zvc.jpg　が無難です
23:03 kunka: 00:17:214 (1,2,3) - ここも結構変えた方がいいです。00:18:020 (2) - の音取りがよくわかんない、、寧ろ00:18:181 - のスネア音を拾うと良いです。例えば
23:04 kunka: こんな感じで　http://puu.sh/r2ZIt.jpg
23:05 kunka: 00:18:504 - サークル、、いるかも？まかせます
23:10 kunka: 00:19:794 (1) - これも不要かと、、00:18:988 - から配置してみたので試してみてください　。(5)のリバース後に(1)があるのでそれは消してくだしあ
23:10 kunka: くだしあて('A`)
23:11 xNyamx: ( *´艸｀)
23:11 xNyamx: 了解です
23:16 kunka: 00:22:375 (6) - これも必要ないかと、、00:23:504 - にこれを置いてみてください。被ってるnoteは全て必要ないです http://puu.sh/r30hf.jpg
23:16 kunka: 00:24:955 (9) - koremo
23:18 kunka: 同じです。さっきの配置と同じように置くとgoodです　http://puu.sh/r30mp.jpg　（9）は00:24:633 - スタートでし
23:18 kunka: でして('A`)
23:21 kunka: 00:26:246 (11,1) - try this pls http://puu.sh/r30w3.jpg ちょっとむずかしめの配置なので突っ込まれたら直した方がいいかも
23:24 kunka: できたらうｐってほしいです。一旦確認したいです
23:25 xNyamx: わかりました　ちょっと時間くださいー
23:28 kunka: あいー
23:31 xNyamx: すいませんー　00:18:988 - からの配置例　もう一回送ってもらっていいですー？
23:32 kunka: どれだろ？ｗ
23:34 kunka: http://puu.sh/r2ZIt.jpg
23:34 xNyamx: 届いてない気がする
23:34 xNyamx: ええっと…
23:34 kunka: これかな？
23:35 xNyamx: それかも…　ありがとうございますｗ
23:35 kunka: 折り返しと終点でスネアが聞こえるので良いかなと
23:37 xNyamx: なるほど…
23:40 xNyamx: 一応できたかな…　確認お願いします～
23:41 kunka: あい
23:45 kunka: 00:18:988 (8) - これ違う^^; ちょっと提案した内容と変わりますがeasyならこれでおｋ　http://puu.sh/r31D5.jpg
23:45 kunka: 00:21:084 (10,1) - ここも違います
23:47 kunka: 00:20:923 (10) - スタートで終点に被る（１）を消します　。　http://puu.sh/r31Kt.jpg
23:48 xNyamx: すいませんｗ　そこの画像がこっちに届いてなかったっぽかったので　自分で配置しちゃいました…
23:48 xNyamx: 修正しますー
23:50 kunka: 00:22:052 (11) - サークルいるかも？？
23:53 kunka: 気になったのが00:04:633 (2) - 。　正確には00:04:472 - スタートだと思うんです。これ消して00:04:955 - にサークル置く方が
23:53 kunka: いかもしんない
23:57 xNyamx: そこも修正してみましたー　確認お願いしますー
23:57 kunka: ｋ
23:58 kunka: 良い感じです
23:59 kunka: ただ、ちょいnormalに近い形なんで所々足したサークルを消す必要がでてくるかもしれません
00:00 xNyamx: わかりましたー
00:01 kunka: 後半もツッコミたいんですがコレすげー時間かかりますねｗ
00:01 xNyamx: 確かに…ｗ
00:02 kunka: ざっと書きます
00:02 xNyamx: あ　ありがとうございますｗ
00:03 kunka: 00:27:859 (6) - ヴォーカルフォローだと思うんですがなんか違和感あります
00:03 kunka: 00:28:181 - に移動して2/1sliderとかどうですか？　
00:04 kunka: 1/1リバースが多いのでここらで長めのslider入れるといいかも、、曲調もＡパートで緩やかなので
00:07 xNyamx: なるほどxo…ｗ
00:07 xNyamx: …
00:08 kunka: 00:29:149 (1,2,3) - これはnormalで配置してもつっこまれます。　これならおｋ　https://puu.sh/r32Iz.jpg
00:12 kunka: 00:33:020 (1,2) - ここもあやしいです。try this pls http://puu.sh/r32Xf.jpg
00:16 kunka: 00:34:633 (2,1,2,1) - これは好みかもしれませんがＳＤを下げるのなら後ろの３つ消してリバースのみでいくのもありです　　http://puu.sh/r33aX.jpg
00:17 kunka: 00:37:859 (3) - ここはサークルないとブランクが不自然です
00:19 kunka: 00:38:343 (4,5,1,2,3) - これはむずいです('A`: こんなんどうでしょう？　http://puu.sh/r33iZ.jpg
00:22 xNyamx: なるほど　確かにそうかも…　わかりましたー
00:24 kunka: 00:42:375 (1,2,3,4) - ＾　try pls http://puu.sh/r33wM.jpg
00:27 kunka: 00:46:891 (2,3,4,5) - 00:50:117 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/r33Gz.jpg
00:29 xNyamx: 了解ですー
続きは今度でｗ
大分、変わったかな？
easyは必要以上に音取るとＳＤ上がってしまうので、”コレないとおかしいだろ！？”ってのをpick upします
1beat or 2 beat のblankを作りつつ色んなリズムのobject置くとそれなりに出来ます（適当）
1/2のリズムを置いてないようなのですぐ作り直せますyo GL!!

おまけHard
00:41:891 - Aパートを見て下さい。同じ曲調が続く中で何故かここだけblank,,不自然なので同じように他にも空白作った方がいいと思います。ここにサークルを足すのは安直で実際、必要以上にnotesが埋まってるので他を消すことをお勧めします。
00:57:214 (6,7,8,9) - stackズレてます。つか、Bパートも緩やかな感じで1/2の4hitはなんか合ってない気がします。ここまで1/2をよく使ってるので1/2slider×2の方が良い感じがします
00:59:149 (5,7) - blanketが綺麗な配置pls http://puu.sh/r35l1.jpg
01:01:730 (7,8,9,10) - 白線はかなり強い音なので(7)の終点を白線にするのはもったいないというかもったいない。1/2slider×4がbetter
01:04:955 - めっちゃ強い音を無視してます。(7)を消して(6)を01:04:955 - へ。元の(6)の位置にはサークル追加でおｋ
01:16:730 - ここサークルないとペン投げます
01:17:375 - マウス投げます
01:17:536 - 投げるものがない
01:28:181 - ^
01:28:343 - ^
サビ後、音が小さくなるの仕様？私、気になります！　　今となっては意味のないものです…ｗ

おーるfixed！

ほんとにありがとうございますｗｗ

Ky's Normal updated!

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

kunka 2016-09-09T05:28:51+00:00

続き見ました
参考になればおｋ
No kds
Easy

01:10:117 (3,4,5) - 現状の取り方でも問題ないのですが個人的にはこちらをｵﾇﾇﾒ　http://puu.sh/r4VN0.jpg もし変更したのなら同じフレーズの01:20:439 (3,4,5) - も同じように変更
01:43:665 (4) - 終点は01:43:988 - が良いと思います

- About NC -
一貫性に従ってncを付けるといいです。（１小節毎 or ２小節毎等）
最初00:03:665 (1) - ここでnc付けてるのなら次は00:06:246 (4) - これがncになります。その次は00:08:826 (2) - です。次は00:12:697 (5) - 。その次は00:13:988 (3) - です
曲調が変わった瞬間のnoteやsv変化したnoteに付けるとおｋ
上記の通り基本、同じ間隔毎に付けてるといいですぉ

- About hitsounds -
必要な所に付加されてないので、よく聞いて付けるといいです（音が聞き取りにくくてわかりずらい時はRateを25％か50％に落すと聞き取りやすい）
例えば00:16:407 (5) - の頭にはfinishが必要です。
00:20:923 (1) - これは折り返しにwhistle付いてておｋなのですが同じ音の頭(00:20:923 - )もある方がいいです。また尻尾の00:21:563 - はfinishほしいです
他にも00:22:375 (3) - 尻尾にfinishとか探せばいっぱいあるので見直しをお勧めします

※Ex diffから見直してから直した箇所を他のdiffに共有すれば良いかんじ

大分、良くなったと思います
でも、細かい所の修正はもっとmod集めて直していく必要があります（00:08:181 (1,2) - blanket直してとかｗ）
頑張ってください

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-09-10T13:35:05+00:00

kunka wrote:
続き見ました
参考になればおｋ
No kds
Easy
01:10:117 (3,4,5) - 現状の取り方でも問題ないのですが個人的にはこちらをｵﾇﾇﾒ　http://puu.sh/r4VN0.jpg もし変更したのなら同じフレーズの01:20:439 (3,4,5) - も同じように変更
01:43:665 (4) - 終点は01:43:988 - が良いと思います

- About NC -
一貫性に従ってncを付けるといいです。（１小節毎 or ２小節毎等）
最初00:03:665 (1) - ここでnc付けてるのなら次は00:06:246 (4) - これがncになります。その次は00:08:826 (2) - です。次は00:12:697 (5) - 。その次は00:13:988 (3) - です
曲調が変わった瞬間のnoteやsv変化したnoteに付けるとおｋ
上記の通り基本、同じ間隔毎に付けてるといいですぉ

- About hitsounds -
必要な所に付加されてないので、よく聞いて付けるといいです（音が聞き取りにくくてわかりずらい時はRateを25％か50％に落すと聞き取りやすい）
例えば00:16:407 (5) - の頭にはfinishが必要です。
00:20:923 (1) - これは折り返しにwhistle付いてておｋなのですが同じ音の頭(00:20:923 - )もある方がいいです。また尻尾の00:21:563 - はfinishほしいです
他にも00:22:375 (3) - 尻尾にfinishとか探せばいっぱいあるので見直しをお勧めします

※Ex diffから見直してから直した箇所を他のdiffに共有すれば良いかんじ
大分、良くなったと思います
でも、細かい所の修正はもっとmod集めて直していく必要があります（00:08:181 (1,2) - blanket直してとかｗ）
頑張ってください

ありがとうございます！

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2016-09-10T17:27:39+00:00

ちゃんとmodしに来ましたー
※このmodを書く前に「キツめに意見もらわないと。」って言うプロマッパーからの助言を見たので少し厳しく行きます！

[General]

コンボカラーは通常色から2色追加していますが通常色(緑、青、赤、黄色)も変えませんか？
Tagがおかしいと思います
Rankedにあるようにgakkou gurashi や人名を漢字やひらがなにしましょう

[Easy]

00:01:085 (1) - 歌詞にあわせているのでしょうか？
確かにEasyでは音を拾いすぎたりするのはダメですが00:01:085 (1) - は間違ってます。00:03:665 (1) - と同じで良いと思います特別音が変わってるわけでもないので
00:02:214 (2) - 同じく歌詞にあわせているのかもしれませんが変なタイミングで押すことになるので00:02:372 - からにしましょう
00:03:665 (1) - delete NC
コンボが短すぎるのは良くないです
00:08:826 (1) - 　
00:07:536 - 今までと同じくAdd noteの方が自然です
00:01:085 - から00:11:407 - まで音をつけてないのは意図でしょうか？Remapでつけ忘れでしょうか？
00:12:697 (1) - whistleって感じの音じゃないです。
どちらかといえばsoft-hitclap2の音の方が良いですがclapでも無いので同じ音でwhistleにしませんか？
00:13:665 (3) - whistleじゃなくclapだと思います。
00:14:472 - clapだとうるさいので外しましょう
00:13:343 (2,2) - 重なります。
もっと色々な場所があるので重なりはなるべく避けましょう。
00:16:407 (1) - これは00:16:891 - まで伸ばしてもいいと思います。
00:17:214 - add whistle
00:18:504 (3) - add clap delete whistle
00:18:988 - add finish
00:18:988 (1) - 長いので00:19:472 - までにしませんか？
上記が採用された場合は00:19:794 - から00:20:278 - までのスライダーの方がいいかも
00:19:472 - にclap 00:19:794 - whistle 00:20:278 - finishで良いと思います
00:22:052 (1) - add clap
00:22:375 - clapいらないかな
00:25:439 - add whistle
強い音もなってるのでfinishも追加かな？
00:25:923 (3) - add clap
00:26:246 (4) - 始点と終点両方にfinishなんてどうでしょう？
00:24:955 (2,1) - 重なりがあります
それなりに場所もあるので避けましょう
00:28:181 (2,1) - どうせならstackしませんか？それか重なりがあるので移動しましょう
00:32:052 (2) - add finish 強い音がなってるので
00:33:343 - ^ + delete NC
00:37:214 - ^
00:39:794 (1) - コンボが短いのでdelete NC
00:43:343 (2) - delete whistle add clap
00:44:955 - から00:46:084 - までの音は拾ったほうがいいかも
00:47:214 - add clap
00:47:536 - delete clap add finish
00:48:181 (1) - delete NC
00:51:407 - から00:52:697 - まで間隔が空きすぎてるので00:52:052 - に単発置いてもいいんじゃないかな？
00:52:697 (1) - 今までの音取りから一変してるので今までの音取りを変えるか00:52:697 (1) - を変えるかにしましょう
00:53:826 (2) - 上記と同じですがいきなり歌詞にあわせてるのはどうかと思います
00:55:278 (1) - finishいらないかな・・・
00:55:923 - 単発入れてもいいかも
00:59:794 - finishいらないです
01:01:084 - delete clap
01:02:052 - add clap
01:04:955 - finishあっても良いような感じの音があります(幻聴かも)
サビからは盛り上りがあるので今までの音取りだとちょっと残念なので音をこまめに拾ってもいいかも
01:09:794 - 01:10:439 - 01:12:375 - 01:14:955 - 01:20:117 - 01:20:762 -
01:10:762 (1) - delete NC
短すぎます
01:12:697 (2,2) - 重なりがあります
01:13:988 - finishが変に目立つのでいらないです
01:15:923 (1) - delete NC
短いです！
01:18:826 - add clap
01:08:504 - ここでclap入れているので同じく入れましょう
01:19:794 - delete clap
01:21:084 (1) - delete NC
01:24:310 (1) - ^
01:26:246 (1) - 音取りに違和感があります
01:26:730 - までにしてリバースしてみては？その際は01:27:214 (2) - deleteで
01:32:536 (1) - delete NC
01:36:407 (1,2) - blanketじゃないよー
01:37:697 (2,1) - 重なりがあります

前回Remap推奨したときよりはかなり良くなりました！

[Hard]
modできないんだ！！！！
ごめんね

Extra2つに関してはもっとうまい人に見てもらってください！
英語無理ですしUnranked要素が含まれるmodになるかも・・・
それでも良い場合はGame chatください！

少し修正しました

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:アンハッピー・エンドワールド(short ver.)
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ArtistUnicode:直樹美紀(CV.高橋李依)&恵飛須沢胡桃(CV.小澤亜李) From 学園生活部
Creator:xNyamx
Version:Yasai's Insane
Source:がっこうぐらし！
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Good luck!

Kujinn

1,382 posts

Joined December 2013

Kujinn 2016-09-12T11:34:07+00:00

NM

[Yasai's Insane]

00:01:085 - I think its important to map this, its not really a small instrumental you can skip because there are lyrics here.
00:33:989 (5) - looks kinda ugly like this, you can make it straight
00:41:085 (1,2,3) - use ds when stacking

Didn't really see much problems with this diff. It did feel overmapped during gameplay.

[Extra]

01:05:601 (1,1,1,1) - i don't really understand this. In the music there is a build up of intensity, but you use the same 1/16 slider for all.
01:10:762 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - omg what is this overmapping, the song sounds too simple for this
01:21:084 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

This diffs is really good, so fun to play, but I feel like some parts of kiai is overmapped.

[M o c h a's Farewell]

00:03:665 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - way too jumpy for such a calm beginning.
00:17:214 (4,5,6,7) - crescendo totally ignored here.
00:31:407 (3,4,5,6) - jumps to large for a calm section
00:34:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - bruh, make it smaller
00:35:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ I understand that its a 6 star map, but you can always compensate for when the song gets more intense.
00:49:472 (3,4,5,6,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

Chorus seems fine, but prior to that I think this map needs more work.

Good Luck!!

M o c h a

105 posts

Joined September 2013

M o c h a 2016-09-12T23:34:50+00:00

Kujinn wrote:
[M o c h a's Farewell]
00:03:665 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - way too jumpy for such a calm beginning. made it smaller. it was mapped to the guitar
00:17:214 (4,5,6,7) - crescendo totally ignored here. I just mapped what it sounded like to me.. I'll make that part into a stream then
00:31:407 (3,4,5,6) - jumps to large for a calm section made it a bit smaller
00:34:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - bruh, make it smaller i think its ok..
00:35:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ I understand that its a 6 star map, but you can always compensate for when the song gets more intense.
00:49:472 (3,4,5,6,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ i dont think they're that large

Thank you!!

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Luel Roseline

1,034 posts

Joined February 2014

Luel Roseline 2016-09-13T00:18:33+00:00

From my queue
Light mod start

[Farewall]
00:08:181 (5) - Apply Sampleset: soft to sliderend(00:08:423)
00:11:407 to 00:13:504 - set sampleset to soft
01:31:407 (1,2) - Add whistle in sliderborders.

/me sleep

M o c h a

105 posts

Joined September 2013

M o c h a 2016-09-13T03:39:21+00:00

S A V E R Y wrote:
[Farewall]
00:08:181 (5) - Apply Sampleset: soft to sliderend(00:08:423) ok
00:11:407 to 00:13:504 - set sampleset to softdone
01:31:407 (1,2) - Add whistle in sliderborders. ok

Thank you!

update

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67215
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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Title:Unhappy End world (short ver.)
TitleUnicode:アンハッピー・エンドワールド(short ver.)
Artist:Miki(CV.TakahashiRie)&Kurumi(CV.OzawaAri)
ArtistUnicode:直樹美紀(CV.高橋李依)&恵飛須沢胡桃(CV.小澤亜李) From 学園生活部
Creator:xNyamx
Version:M o c h a's Farewell
Source:がっこうぐらし！
Tags:Gakkougurashi! Takahashi_rie Ozawa_ari Anime character song tv size NaokiMiki EbisuzawaKurumi Yasaija_714 Kyle_Y m_o_c_h_a
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[Difficulty]
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SliderMultiplier:1.8
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xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-09-13T10:34:38+00:00

遅くなってすいませんー　
Fixです～

Yasaija 714 wrote:
ちゃんとmodしに来ましたー
※このmodを書く前に「キツめに意見もらわないと。」って言うプロマッパーからの助言を見たので少し厳しく行きます！

[General]
コンボカラーは通常色から2色追加していますが通常色(緑、青、赤、黄色)も変えませんか？
Tagがおかしいと思います
Rankedにあるようにgakkou gurashi や人名を漢字やひらがなにしましょう
gakkougurashiは以前ひらがなで置いててKyさんに指摘されたので　置いときます。　漢字名追加しました。

[Easy]
00:01:085 (1) - 歌詞にあわせているのでしょうか？
確かにEasyでは音を拾いすぎたりするのはダメですが00:01:085 (1) - は間違ってます。00:03:665 (1) - と同じで良いと思います特別音が変わってるわけでもないので
00:02:214 (2) - 同じく歌詞にあわせているのかもしれませんが変なタイミングで押すことになるので00:02:372 - からにしましょう
00:03:665 (1) - delete NC
コンボが短すぎるのは良くないです
00:08:826 (1) - 　
00:07:536 - 今までと同じくAdd noteの方が自然です
00:01:085 - から00:11:407 - まで音をつけてないのは意図でしょうか？Remapでつけ忘れでしょうか？
00:12:697 (1) - whistleって感じの音じゃないです。
どちらかといえばsoft-hitclap2の音の方が良いですがclapでも無いので同じ音でwhistleにしませんか？
00:13:665 (3) - whistleじゃなくclapだと思います。
00:14:472 - clapだとうるさいので外しましょう
00:13:343 (2,2) - 重なります。
もっと色々な場所があるので重なりはなるべく避けましょう。
00:16:407 (1) - これは00:16:891 - まで伸ばしてもいいと思います。
00:17:214 - add whistle
00:18:504 (3) - add clap delete whistle
00:18:988 - add finish
00:18:988 (1) - 長いので00:19:472 - までにしませんか？　保留で
上記が採用された場合は00:19:794 - から00:20:278 - までのスライダーの方がいいかも
00:19:472 - にclap 00:19:794 - whistle 00:20:278 - finishで良いと思います
00:22:052 (1) - add clap
00:22:375 - clapいらないかな
00:25:439 - add whistle
強い音もなってるのでfinishも追加かな？
00:25:923 (3) - add clap
00:26:246 (4) - 始点と終点両方にfinishなんてどうでしょう？
00:24:955 (2,1) - 重なりがあります
それなりに場所もあるので避けましょう
00:28:181 (2,1) - どうせならstackしませんか？それか重なりがあるので移動しましょう
00:32:052 (2) - add finish 強い音がなってるので
00:33:343 - ^ + delete NC
00:37:214 - ^
00:39:794 (1) - コンボが短いのでdelete NC
00:43:343 (2) - delete whistle add clap
00:44:955 - から00:46:084 - までの音は拾ったほうがいいかも
00:47:214 - add clap
00:47:536 - delete clap add finish
00:48:181 (1) - delete NC
00:51:407 - から00:52:697 - まで間隔が空きすぎてるので00:52:052 - に単発置いてもいいんじゃないかな？
00:52:697 (1) - 今までの音取りから一変してるので今までの音取りを変えるか00:52:697 (1) - を変えるかにしましょう
00:53:826 (2) - 上記と同じですがいきなり歌詞にあわせてるのはどうかと思います
00:55:278 (1) - finishいらないかな・・・
00:55:923 - 単発入れてもいいかも
00:59:794 - finishいらないです
01:01:084 - delete clap
01:02:052 - add clap
01:04:955 - finishあっても良いような感じの音があります(幻聴かも)
サビからは盛り上りがあるので今までの音取りだとちょっと残念なので音をこまめに拾ってもいいかも
01:09:794 - 01:10:439 - 01:12:375 - 01:14:955 - 01:20:117 - 01:20:762 -
01:10:762 (1) - delete NC
短すぎます
01:12:697 (2,2) - 重なりがあります
01:13:988 - finishが変に目立つのでいらないです
01:15:923 (1) - delete NC
短いです！
01:18:826 - add clap
01:08:504 - ここでclap入れているので同じく入れましょう
01:19:794 - delete clap
01:21:084 (1) - delete NC
01:24:310 (1) - ^
01:26:246 (1) - 音取りに違和感があります
01:26:730 - までにしてリバースしてみては？その際は01:27:214 (2) - deleteで
01:32:536 (1) - delete NC
01:36:407 (1,2) - blanketじゃないよー
01:37:697 (2,1) - 重なりがあります

前回Remap推奨したときよりはかなり良くなりました！

[Hard]
modできないんだ！！！！
ごめんね

Extra2つに関してはもっとうまい人に見てもらってください！
英語無理ですしUnranked要素が含まれるmodになるかも・・・
それでも良い場合はGame chatください！

少し修正しました
osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: unhappy.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67215
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 55924,134553,144311,146892,180440,188182,210118,215279
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Unhappy End world (short ver.)
TitleUnicode:アンハッピー・エンドワールド(short ver.)
Artist:Miki(CV.TakahashiRie)&Kurumi(CV.OzawaAri)
ArtistUnicode:直樹美紀(CV.高橋李依)&恵飛須沢胡桃(CV.小澤亜李) From 学園生活部
Creator:xNyamx
Version:Yasai's Insane
Source:がっこうぐらし！
Tags:Gakkougurashi! Takahashi_rie Ozawa_ari Anime character song tv size NaokiMiki EbisuzawaKurumi Yasaija_714 Kyle_Y m_o_c_h_a
BeatmapID:1048108
BeatmapSetID:489464

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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Good luck!

Updated~

ありがとうございます！

Last edited by xNyamx 2016-09-18T03:49:46+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

xNyamx

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xNyamx 2016-09-14T17:34:34+00:00

WIP

Kujinn wrote:
NM

[Extra]
01:05:601 (1,1,1,1) - i don't really understand this. In the music there is a build up of intensity, but you use the same 1/16 slider for all.
01:10:762 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - omg what is this overmapping, the song sounds too simple for this
01:21:084 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
This diffs is really good, so fun to play, but I feel like some parts of kiai is overmapped.

Good Luck!!

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2016-09-15T10:56:11+00:00

Kujinn wrote:
NM

[Yasai's Insane]
00:01:085 - I think its important to map this, its not really a small instrumental you can skip because there are lyrics here. I do not make
00:33:989 (5) - looks kinda ugly like this, you can make it straight changed
00:41:085 (1,2,3) - use ds when stacking ok fixed
Didn't really see much problems with this diff. It did feel overmapped during gameplay. I do not think I'm over map...

Good Luck!!

遅れてすみません

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Title:Unhappy End world (short ver.)
TitleUnicode:アンハッピー・エンドワールド(short ver.)
Artist:Miki(CV.TakahashiRie)&Kurumi(CV.OzawaAri)
ArtistUnicode:直樹美紀(CV.高橋李依)&恵飛須沢胡桃(CV.小澤亜李) From 学園生活部
Creator:xNyamx
Version:Yasai's Insane
Source:がっこうぐらし！
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136,288,58182,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,368,58344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,360,58505,2,0,P|216:368|252:356,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,308,58827,2,0,L|356:220,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,59150,6,0,P|192:128|152:216,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,207,59634,1,2,0:0:0:0:
241,361,59795,2,0,P|317:369|372:344,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,296,60118,2,0,L|400:208,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,96,60440,5,2,0:0:0:0:
312,44,60602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,44,60682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,44,60763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,148,60924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,96,61085,2,0,L|112:192,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,278,61408,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,224,61569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,360,61731,6,0,P|336:372|384:320,1,132.00000402832,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,62053,6,0,P|312:228|312:312,1,143.999995605469,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,324,62376,6,0,P|404:280|364:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,292,62698,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,280,62779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,268,62860,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,256,62940,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,244,63021,6,0,L|204:116,1,120.000004577637,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,108,63505,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,136,63666,2,0,L|120:256,1,120.000004577637,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,328,64150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,344,64311,6,0,B|285:376|332:316|376:360,1,120.000004577637,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,364,64795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,352,64876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,340,64956,2,0,L|452:220,1,120.000004577637,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,139,65440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,220,65602,6,0,L|340:272,1,40,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,65924,6,0,L|264:240,1,47.9999985351563,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,84,66247,6,0,L|364:148,1,55.9999982910157,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,40,66569,6,0,L|244:112,1,64,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,320,66892,5,6,0:0:0:0:
296,320,67053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,352,67376,6,0,L|132:268,1,80,2|0,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
64,128,67698,2,0,L|68:212,1,80,2|0,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
192,204,68021,1,2,0:1:0:0:
296,320,68182,6,0,P|348:280|412:280,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,274,68424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,274,68505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,360,68666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,228,68827,2,0,B|508:164|508:164|488:120,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,72,69150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,48,69311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,156,69473,6,0,L|280:168,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,136,69795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,284,69956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,216,70118,2,0,L|116:204,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,284,70440,2,0,L|300:272,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,340,70763,5,0,0:0:0:0:
480,220,70924,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,212,71005,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,204,71085,1,10,0:0:0:0:
376,168,71247,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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376,192,71408,1,10,0:0:0:0:
272,224,71569,5,2,0:0:0:0:
272,208,71650,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,71731,1,10,0:0:0:0:
216,112,71892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,284,72053,6,0,P|276:332|356:272,1,191.999994140625,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,180,72537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,192,72698,2,0,P|184:188|124:212,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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76,128,73344,6,0,P|172:96|280:104,1,191.999994140625,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,180,73827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,332,73989,2,0,L|288:232,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,202,74311,2,0,L|122:302,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,332,74634,6,0,L|416:312,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,180,74956,2,0,L|276:164,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,202,75279,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,80,75440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,72,75521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,64,75602,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,32,75763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,164,75924,6,0,P|36:208|108:280,1,143.999995605469,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,202,76247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,344,76408,2,0,L|238:249,1,95.9999970703126,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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28,220,77537,5,8,0:0:0:0:
40,328,77698,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,208,77860,5,8,0:0:0:0:
136,356,78021,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,196,78182,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,188,78263,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,192,78344,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,204,78424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,224,78505,6,0,L|248:324,1,95.9999970703126,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,320,78747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,320,78827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,368,78989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,228,79150,2,0,P|380:200|328:192,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,208,79473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,80,79634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,132,79795,6,0,L|431:228,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,368,80118,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,228,80279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,304,80440,2,0,L|232:316,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,368,80763,2,0,L|464:356,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,192,81085,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,176,81247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,192,81326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,208,81407,1,10,0:0:0:0:
264,224,81569,5,2,0:0:0:0:
264,192,81650,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,160,81731,1,10,0:0:0:0:
152,144,81892,5,2,0:0:0:0:
152,192,81973,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,240,82053,1,10,0:0:0:0:
24,192,82215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,48,82376,6,0,P|248:16|344:60,1,191.999994140625,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,192,82860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,328,83021,6,0,L|252:328,1,47.9999985351563,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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152,332,83263,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,332,83344,2,0,L|176:276,1,47.9999985351563,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,83505,2,0,L|260:244,1,47.9999985351563,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,328,83666,6,0,P|412:352|488:296,1,191.999994140625,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,184,84150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,244,84311,6,0,L|372:144,1,95.9999970703126,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,40,84634,2,0,L|288:140,1,95.9999970703126,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,288,84956,6,0,L|132:300,1,103.999995239258,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,204,85279,2,0,L|144:216,1,103.999995239258,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,134,85602,5,8,0:0:0:0:
112,96,85763,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,108,85844,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,120,85924,1,10,0:0:0:0:
216,208,86085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,36,86247,6,0,P|340:28|400:36,1,103.999995239258,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,112,86569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,134,86731,6,0,P|224:126|164:134,1,103.999995239258,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,210,87053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,232,87215,6,0,P|340:224|336:360,1,240.000009155274,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,210,88182,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,210,88344,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,24,88827,6,0,P|304:52|232:132,1,191.999994140625,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,80,89311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,92,89392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,104,89473,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,116,89553,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,128,89634,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,232,89795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
247,136,89956,2,0,L|247:84,2,47.9999985351563,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,292,90279,6,0,P|360:308|420:212,1,191.999994140625,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,192,90763,2,0,P|240:204|206:235,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,288,91005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,288,91085,2,0,P|112:275|78:244,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,91408,12,0,92537,0:0:0:0:
120,72,92860,5,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,93021,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,192,93102,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,192,93182,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,192,93263,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,192,93344,1,10,0:0:0:0:
160,192,93505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,92,93827,6,0,B|396:208|396:208|380:260,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,256,94231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,264,94311,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,300,94473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,128,94634,2,0,L|264:36,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,16,94956,2,0,L|136:64,1,40,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,200,95118,6,0,B|152:208|184:192|184:192|200:196|200:196|232:184|276:200,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,292,95602,2,0,P|352:268|368:220,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,76,95924,2,0,P|368:100|352:148,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,267,96247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,197,96408,6,0,P|216:273|240:368,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,364,96811,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,364,96892,2,0,L|372:364,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,344,97134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,344,97215,2,0,P|448:304|432:256,1,80
353,132,97537,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,136,97698,6,0,B|80:152|80:152|128:172,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,172,98102,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,176,98182,1,10,0:0:0:0:
272,176,98344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,248,98505,6,0,P|100:284|116:332,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,360,98827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,176,98989,6,0,B|312:144|392:208|432:176,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,40,99473,2,0,P|300:24|240:44,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,96,99795,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,248,99956,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,104,100118,1,10,0:0:0:0:
124,144,100279,6,0,B|54:178|54:178|68:224|48:280,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,368,100763,2,0,P|124:360|144:336,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,248,100924,2,0,P|216:268|240:288,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,356,101085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,248,101247,2,0,P|440:208|440:160,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,101569,6,0,P|256:44|184:72,1,160,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,292,102053,2,0,P|292:196|264:124,1,160,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,20,102537,2,0,P|120:64|132:108,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,220,102860,6,0,B|132:276|216:324|176:380,1,160,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,344,103344,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,248,103505,1,2,0:0:0:0:
75,198,103666,6,0,P|87:138|151:86,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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xNyamx

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xNyamx 2016-09-18T04:06:17+00:00

最近忙しくて　更新遅くなりました。
all diff updated

Shocola

287 posts

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Shocola 2016-09-23T07:10:54+00:00

Hello, From my queue

[ Easy ]
01:10:117 (4,1) - i think this is a sharp turn for an easy
01:33:504 - don't be afraid to put a circle here

(its not over-mapping if you can hear the music)
01:34:310 - ^
01:38:020 - ^
01:40:601 - ^
00:34:310 - ^
00:41:407 - ^
00:41:407 - ^
00:31:407 (1,2,3) - why not a 1/2 slider?
00:41:730 (5) - ^
00:18:988 (1,2) - blanket ?
00:47:536 - at this point you can hear a lot more vocal and music, so try putting a circle on white tick as much as possible

[ Normal ]
00:29:149 - a circle/note ? why not, it will confuse some newcomer to waiting until you can click it

00:34:310 -
00:34:633 - put the slider here
00:34:955 -put this 00:35:278 (3) - slider here
00:34:955 (3) - try to follow the music using the white tick the most

[ Hard ]
00:24:149 (1,2) - blanket
00:33:181 (2,4) - ^
00:01:085 (2,3) - blanket not beautiful
00:14:472 (4,5) - ^
00:28:988 (1,2) - ^
00:38:826 (6,7) - ^ you'll get the point
00:03:343 (1) - don't stack these with these 2 --> 00:03:504 (2,3) -
00:05:601 (1,2,3) - ^
00:08:826 (3) - don't made this 3 times return, try putting a note somewhere here 00:09:310 -
00:10:762 (3) - ^
01:15:923 - slider and end it at this blue tick 01:16:165 -

[ Extra ]
00:00:923 - from this point i would just follow the vocal instead both and start following the bg music from 00:13:262 -
00:00:924 (1,2,3,4) - what are you following here vocal or bg music ?
00:17:215 (7,1) - blanket?
01:20:279 (2,3) - ^
00:21:247 (1) - i don't see the point of this nc
01:38:666 (1) - ^
00:27:052 (1,2,3) - try not stacking this three
00:48:182 (3,4,5) - ^ make them like this 00:48:826 (1,2,3) -
00:53:827 (1) - ctrl + g
01:05:601 (1,1,1,1) - oh wtf?

xNyamx

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xNyamx 2016-09-25T07:30:04+00:00

im not good at english
えいごにがて

[-Chocola-] wrote:
Hello, From my queue

[ Easy ]
01:10:117 (4,1) - i think this is a sharp turn for an easy
01:33:504 - don't be afraid to put a circle here (its not over-mapping if you can hear the music)
01:34:310 - ^
01:38:020 - ^
01:40:601 - ^
00:34:310 - ^
00:41:407 - ^
00:41:407 - ^ i think not good for easy.
00:31:407 (1,2,3) - why not a 1/2 slider? fixed
00:41:730 (5) - ^
00:18:988 (1,2) - blanket ? fixed
00:47:536 - at this point you can hear a lot more vocal and music, so try putting a circle on white tick as much as possible

[ Hard ]
00:24:149 (1,2) - blanket fixed
00:33:181 (2,4) - ^ fixed
00:01:085 (2,3) - blanket not beautiful fixed
00:14:472 (4,5) - ^ fixed
00:28:988 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:38:826 (6,7) - ^ you'll get the point fixed
00:03:343 (1) - don't stack these with these 2 --> 00:03:504 (2,3) - fixed
00:05:601 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
00:08:826 (3) - don't made this 3 times return, try putting a note somewhere here 00:09:310 - fixed
00:10:762 (3) - ^ fixed
01:15:923 - slider and end it at this blue tick 01:16:165 - keep...

[ Extra ]
00:00:923 - from this point i would just follow the vocal instead both and start following the bg music from 00:13:262 -keep...
00:00:924 (1,2,3,4) - what are you following here vocal or bg music ? first circle deleted
00:17:215 (7,1) - blanket?　fixed
01:20:279 (2,3) - ^　fixed
00:21:247 (1) - i don't see the point of this nc keep...
01:38:666 (1) - ^ keep...
00:27:052 (1,2,3) - try not stacking this three
00:48:182 (3,4,5) - ^ make them like this 00:48:826 (1,2,3) - keep...
00:53:827 (1) - ctrl + g　fixed
01:05:601 (1,1,1,1) - oh wtf?　^^

Thanks~~~

xNyamx

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xNyamx 2016-09-27T11:00:40+00:00

Extra　Aメロ配置大幅変更しました。

サビは流れ的にも叩きやすさ的にも（面白い気がする... ）できる限り変更したくないんですけど　overmap & overlap　的に変更すべきでしょうか。

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2016-09-27T16:52:27+00:00

xNyamx wrote:
Extra　Aメロ配置大幅変更しました。

サビは流れ的にも叩きやすさ的にも（面白い気がする... ）できる限り変更したくないんですけど　overmap & overlap　的に変更すべきでしょうか。

Extra diffだから多少のoverlapは良いかもだけど
overmapはやっぱり指摘されると思います
たとえばこの部分
01:10:762 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
Hitsoundで音がなっているかのごとくにも聞こえますが実際にはovermapです

エフェクト音を消して聞いてみればすぐわかると思います！

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

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xNyamx 2016-09-28T17:30:39+00:00

Yasaija 714 wrote:
Extra diffだから多少のoverlapは良いかもだけど
overmapはやっぱり指摘されると思います
たとえばこの部分
01:10:762 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
Hitsoundで音がなっているかのごとくにも聞こえますが実際にはovermapです

エフェクト音を消して聞いてみればすぐわかると思います！

やはりそうですよねぇ…
~~指摘もらったら変更する方向でいきます　（準備始めとこ…）~~
edit(9/29):　配置違和感のあるところ全部変更　サビの問題点はキックスライダーを消してみました。
ありがとうございます！！

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-09-29T12:31:25+00:00

Extra 違和感のあるところ　配置大幅変更。　サビの部分は音取りを少しだけ変更。

PROgj2

5 posts

Joined July 2015

PROgj2 2016-09-29T13:49:58+00:00

IRC

2016-09-29 22:00 PROgj2: でも、1分5秒の　連続で往復するスライダー（何て言うのかわからないｗ）の音を下げてあるのかな？
2016-09-29 22:01 xNyamx: 01:05:601 (1,1,1,1) -
2016-09-29 22:01 PROgj2: 俺ヒットした時の音でタイミングを計ってるから、音小さいとあれってなってしまうんだよねｗ
2016-09-29 22:01 xNyamx: なるほど　もうちょい上げるわ
2016-09-29 22:03 xNyamx: 15%→30%くらいにしてみた
2016-09-29 22:08 xNyamx: その部分
2016-09-29 22:09 xNyamx: 今は1/8でリバースさせてるけど　コンボ切りやすいとかある？？
2016-09-29 22:12 PROgj2: FCした後に3回やったけど、一回コンボ切れたかな
2016-09-29 22:12 xNyamx: 注意してたら切らない感じ？
2016-09-29 22:15 PROgj2: 注意してたら切らないと思うよ。
2016-09-29 22:19 PROgj2: 00:45:601 (4) -
2016-09-29 22:19 xNyamx: ああ…　凄い場所にあった…
2016-09-29 22:19 xNyamx: fixed

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

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xNyamx 2016-09-29T13:55:03+00:00

PROgj2 wrote:
IRC
2016-09-29 22:00 PROgj2: でも、1分5秒の　連続で往復するスライダー（何て言うのかわからないｗ）の音を下げてあるのかな？
2016-09-29 22:01 xNyamx: 01:05:601 (1,1,1,1) -
2016-09-29 22:01 PROgj2: 俺ヒットした時の音でタイミングを計ってるから、音小さいとあれってなってしまうんだよねｗ
2016-09-29 22:01 xNyamx: なるほど　もうちょい上げるわ
2016-09-29 22:03 xNyamx: 15%→30%くらいにしてみた
2016-09-29 22:08 xNyamx: その部分
2016-09-29 22:09 xNyamx: 今は1/8でリバースさせてるけど　コンボ切りやすいとかある？？
2016-09-29 22:12 PROgj2: FCした後に3回やったけど、一回コンボ切れたかな
2016-09-29 22:12 xNyamx: 注意してたら切らない感じ？
2016-09-29 22:15 PROgj2: 注意してたら切らないと思うよ。
2016-09-29 22:19 PROgj2: 00:45:601 (4) -
2016-09-29 22:19 xNyamx: ああ…　凄い場所にあった…
2016-09-29 22:19 xNyamx: fixed

まさか初見で99%FCするとは思わなかった...　
テストプレイ含め意見ありがとうございます！

またお願いするかも？ｗ

ItashaS13

678 posts

Joined January 2014

ItashaS13 2016-09-30T16:00:35+00:00

Hi from my modding Queue

M o c h a's Farewell
00:28:343 (2,3) - why so much spacing? this part is really quiet
00:29:310 (5,1,2,3,4) - reduce spacing, this part has like.. the same or more spacing than the part before that was more intense, but this part is really quiet so please reduce spacing
01:13:826 (2,3) - why the spacing is so short here?
01:20:278 (3,4,5,6,7) - lol this can be improved
01:30:601 (10,1) - more spacing please, maybe 01:30:762 (1) - ctrl+g ?
00:17:697 (1,2,3) - 01:35:117 (1,2,3) - why spacing in these two are too different? also 01:35:117 (1,2,3) - these shapes doesnt really look good, it can be improved
01:43:665 (6) - rotate this like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6213147

extra
00:04:150 (6) - stack its end with 00:03:505 (2) -
00:17:215 (7,8,9) - use kicksliders for the streamy sound :p? kicksliders will fill up the sound and play the same as now, so why not :p?
00:20:923 (8) - nc?
00:21:084 (1,1,1) - I think you don't need nc in all of these
00:20:279 (3) - make this a slider?
00:23:988 - why not a triplet there :<?
00:33:344 (2,3) - lol the slider ends on blue tick, the 3 is too far, this requires a really fast movement to catch the 3 but the song is quiet here, move the 3 closer
00:46:489 (8,9) - this may be confusing, no? I mean the placement
00:50:602 (4) - make this a kickslider or make a triplet? <so I wonder why you skip triplets like that but you don't skip the sound in parts like 00:34:473 (9) -, even this 00:34:473 (9) - is more quiet than 00:50:602 (4) ->
01:06:892 (1,2) - moooore spacing!
01:09:553 (2) - I dont hear anything here for a triplet, 01:09:472 (1,2,3) - make this a slider and make this into 01:09:150 (6) - two circles
01:11:407 (1,9) - stack?
01:11:730 (3,4,5,6,7) - move it to the right to make blanket with ^
01:21:568 (5) - move this a bit to the right and then stack the 9 on it like ^
01:29:311 (1,2,3) - where's the stream? :c
01:31:489 (1) - end this spinner at 01:32:375 - (the sound ends there) then add a slider here? 01:32:536 -

Short mod but I hope it helps, gl

M o c h a

105 posts

Joined September 2013

M o c h a 2016-10-01T01:02:32+00:00

Itasha_S13 wrote:

M o c h a's Farewell
00:28:343 (2,3) - why so much spacing? this part is really quiet fixed
00:29:310 (5,1,2,3,4) - reduce spacing, this part has like.. the same or more spacing than the part before that was more intense, but this part is really quiet so please reduce spacing ok
01:13:826 (2,3) - why the spacing is so short here? fixed
01:20:278 (3,4,5,6,7) - lol this can be improved changed
01:30:601 (10,1) - more spacing please, maybe 01:30:762 (1) - ctrl+g ? kk i'll try that
00:17:697 (1,2,3) - 01:35:117 (1,2,3) - why spacing in these two are too different? also 01:35:117 (1,2,3) - these shapes doesnt really look good, it can be improved i fixed the spacing, but im not really sure what else to do with it :/
01:43:665 (6) - rotate this like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6213147 done

Thank you!

update

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TitleUnicode:アンハッピー・エンドワールド(short ver.)
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ArtistUnicode:直樹美紀(CV.高橋李依)&恵飛須沢胡桃(CV.小澤亜李) From 学園生活部
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Source:がっこうぐらし！
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Silky

766 posts

Joined October 2014

Silky 2016-10-08T18:43:13+00:00

sorry for late
一応"mocha"もタグに入れときましょう
reqが溜まり過ぎてるのでHとX2つは飛ばします
HXも必要ならPMください(かなり遅れますが・・・)

Easy

最初のほうなんかしら音つけましょう
00:13:343 (2,3) - Easyで特に盛り上がりもないとこに1/1でサークル2つ置くのはあんまりお勧めできません、SD爆上がりするので・・・
00:18:988 (1,2,3) - 音取りが不自然ですオブジェクト詰まりますがこんな感じにするといいかも
SPOILER
00:23:181 - メロディーが強いしドラムもあるのでサークル入れてもいいかも
00:34:633 (5) - 長すぎてリズムの流れを崩している印象を受けます。例えば今までの置き方を考えるとこうとか？
SPOILER
00:43:665 (3) - ＾
SPOILER
00:55:923 - note追加
01:05:601 (1,1) - Easyでは最低でも4/1以上(bpm160基準)開ける必要がありますこの曲はそれよりも早い上のここではそのスペースをとることが難しいので、スライダーの使用をお勧めします
01:17:052 (5) - 3/2スライダーに変更？
01:18:181 - 普通に音強いんでノート足すか前のサークルをスライダーに変えるかしてください
01:33:826 (1) - 1/2伸ばしましょう
01:36:407 (1,2,3) - 前と同じ
　
全体的に音がスッカスカで逆にやりづらそうに思えます。Easyは絶対に*1.5以下じゃないといけないって訳じゃないんでここまで音抜かなくてもいいです

00:02:375 - 00:04:955 - maybe you could follow guitar sound... yea I think its better
00:34:633 - like this? I think you could follow the piano sound
SPOILER
00:44:955 (1) - uh you used 2/1 slider only here in this section...cut it? that's weird tbh
00:50:117 (1) - same as above but its ok imo
01:12:697 (4,5,1) - you should avoid overlap like this... its Normal diff xd
01:28:826 (1,2) - use 1/1 slider *2?
01:34:633 (2,3) - like this?
SPOILER

Yasai

ExtraのARがめっちゃ高いんでAR9にしないとspread的にきついです
00:23:505 (3,4) - 00:23:584 - 音無いし静かなんで普通に3を1/2スライダーにした方が曲に合います
00:33:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - 飛び過ぎじゃないですか？00:16:407 - からのパートより飛んでるのは明らかに不自然です(00:31:408 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - ここも)
00:35:279 (4) - 1/2でいいです。00:35:439 - のピアノやらの音飛ばしてまでやることじゃありません
00:55:924 (1,2) - う～んこっちの方がやりやすい気が・・・
SPOILER
00:56:810 - 今までのパターンからしてadd note?
01:15:924 (1,2) - 急に離れすぎてて分かりづらいです。もうちょっと近付けた方がいいと思います
01:23:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - このovermapはほぼ絶対通りません。普通に音取ってください
01:23:665 - から01:25:439 - のスライダー曲調に反して早すぎる印象を受けました。私ならx0.9にするかな・・・
01:40:924 (3,4) - 最初と同じ

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-10-09T15:30:04+00:00

Kanau wrote:
sorry for late
一応"mocha"もタグに入れときましょう
reqが溜まり過ぎてるのでHとX2つは飛ばします
HXも必要ならPMください(かなり遅れますが・・・)

Easy
最初のほうなんかしら音つけましょう
00:13:343 (2,3) - Easyで特に盛り上がりもないとこに1/1でサークル2つ置くのはあんまりお勧めできません、SD爆上がりするので・・・ fixed
00:18:988 (1,2,3) - 音取りが不自然ですオブジェクト詰まりますがこんな感じにするといいかも fixed
SPOILER
00:23:181 - メロディーが強いしドラムもあるのでサークル入れてもいいかも
00:34:633 (5) - 長すぎてリズムの流れを崩している印象を受けます。例えば今までの置き方を考えるとこうとか？ fixed
SPOILER
00:43:665 (3) - ＾ fixed
SPOILER
00:55:923 - note追加 fixed
01:05:601 (1,1) - Easyでは最低でも4/1以上(bpm160基準)開ける必要がありますこの曲はそれよりも早い上のここではそのスペースをとることが難しいので、スライダーの使用をお勧めします fixed
01:17:052 (5) - 3/2スライダーに変更？ fixed
01:18:181 - 普通に音強いんでノート足すか前のサークルをスライダーに変えるかしてください fixed
01:33:826 (1) - 1/2伸ばしましょう fixed
01:36:407 (1,2,3) - 前と同じ fixed
　
全体的に音がスッカスカで逆にやりづらそうに思えます。Easyは絶対に*1.5以下じゃないといけないって訳じゃないんでここまで音抜かなくてもいいです

ありがとうございます！

Last edited by xNyamx 2016-10-16T05:18:47+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2016-10-10T07:43:20+00:00

Kanau wrote:
sorry for late
一応"mocha"もタグに入れときましょう
reqが溜まり過ぎてるのでHとX2つは飛ばします
HXも必要ならPMください(かなり遅れますが・・・)

Yasai
ExtraのARがめっちゃ高いんでAR9にしないとspread的にきついです 確かに
00:23:505 (3,4) - 00:23:584 - 音無いし静かなんで普通に3を1/2スライダーにした方が曲に合います fixed
00:33:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - 飛び過ぎじゃないですか？00:16:407 - からのパートより飛んでるのは明らかに不自然です(00:31:408 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - ここも) 縮めました
00:35:279 (4) - 1/2でいいです。00:35:439 - のピアノやらの音飛ばしてまでやることじゃありません fixed
00:55:924 (1,2) - う～んこっちの方がやりやすい気が・・・ nice!!!!!!
SPOILER
00:56:810 - 今までのパターンからしてadd note? 1/6の音も混ざってるのでシンプルに拾いました
01:15:924 (1,2) - 急に離れすぎてて分かりづらいです。もうちょっと近付けた方がいいと思います stackしました
01:23:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - このovermapはほぼ絶対通りません。普通に音取ってください (3)(4)(5)のキックはやっぱりだめでしたか
01:23:665 - から01:25:439 - のスライダー曲調に反して早すぎる印象を受けました。私ならx0.9にするかな・・・曲がでかくなってきている&kiai継続なのでこのままで
01:40:924 (3,4) - 最初と同じ ^

modありがとうございます！！！！

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