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Camellia Ft. Nanahira - EDM Jumpers [OsuMania]

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L A U R A
103 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
L A U R A
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 06 Agustus 2016 at 14:28:47

Artist: Camellia Ft. Nanahira
Title: EDM Jumpers
Tags: DubStep loli jump bassdrop electro
BPM: 145
Filesize: 5058kb
Play Time: 05:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Are You Ready? - 4Key (3,85 stars, 2626 notes)
Download: Camellia Ft. Nanahira - EDM Jumpers
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Need MODs please!!! >.<
Last edited by L A U R A , edited 3 times in total.
Syadow-
Beatmap Nominator
1,514 posts
Joined October 2013
Syadow-
mod mod :)
|1|2|3|4|

[Note]
00:15:005 (15005|3) - ln end in 00:15:212 -
00:16:040 (16040|2) - ln end in 00:16:454 -
00:17:074 (17074|1) - ^ 00:17:488 -
00:17:902 (17902|1) - ^ 00:18:316 -
00:21:626 (21626|1) - ^ 00:21:833 -
00:22:661 (22661|0) - ^ 00:23:074 -
00:24:316 (24316|0) - ^ 00:24:730 -
00:31:971 (31971|0,32074|0,32178|1) - i suggest to move 00:31:971 (31971|0,32074|0) - to col 2 n 00:32:178 (32178|1) - col 1 for balance
00:42:730 (42730|2,42833|2,42936|0,42936|1) - ctrl h biar ga berat sebelah
00:45:419 (45419|0) - ln end in 00:46:040 -
00:54:316 - add ln
01:01:971 (61971|2,61971|0,62074|0,62385|0,62385|2,62592|0,62798|1) - berat kiri usahakan balance
01:05:074 (65074|1,65178|1,65281|0) - maybe double note ?
01:06:523 - i hear some sound here
01:07:350 - loud sound
01:07:764 - ^
01:08:178 - ^
Perhatikan tik yg putih soalnya byk suara yg keras dari 01:06:936 - sampai 01:26:798 -
01:31:454 (91454|3,91505|2,91557|1,91609|0,91661|3,91712|2,91764|1,91816|0) - pindah ke 01:31:350 - semua + ln di 01:31:764 - 01:32:178 -
01:59:695 (119695|1,119798|1) - move to col 1
01:59:902 (119902|0,120005|1,120109|2) - move col 2 3 4
02:01:350 (121350|1,121454|1) - col 1
02:01:557 (121557|3,121661|1,121764|0) - col 2 4 1
02:02:798 (122798|2,123005|2,123109|2,123316|2) - avoid over jack, check lain2 yg kyk gitu
02:18:730 (138730|3,138833|3,139143|3,139247|3,139557|3,139661|3) - berat kanan banget
02:31:350 - until 02:31:971 - many sound
02:59:281 - add note n 02:59:385 -
04:23:074 - until 04:23:902 - many sound
start di sini 04:38:385 - sampai 04:52:040 - cek lagi kek yg pertama
Feel free to reject
Mod pakai bahasa campuran :'v + lagunya ena :D
Good luck mas :)
L A U R A
103 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
L A U R A

Syadow- wrote:

mod mod :)
|1|2|3|4|

[Note]
00:15:005 (15005|3) - ln end in 00:15:212 -
00:16:040 (16040|2) - ln end in 00:16:454 -
00:17:074 (17074|1) - ^ 00:17:488 -
00:17:902 (17902|1) - ^ 00:18:316 -
00:21:626 (21626|1) - ^ 00:21:833 -
00:22:661 (22661|0) - ^ 00:23:074 -
00:24:316 (24316|0) - ^ 00:24:730 -
00:31:971 (31971|0,32074|0,32178|1) - i suggest to move 00:31:971 (31971|0,32074|0) - to col 2 n 00:32:178 (32178|1) - col 1 for balance
00:42:730 (42730|2,42833|2,42936|0,42936|1) - ctrl h biar ga berat sebelah
00:45:419 (45419|0) - ln end in 00:46:040 -
00:54:316 - add ln
01:01:971 (61971|2,61971|0,62074|0,62385|0,62385|2,62592|0,62798|1) - berat kiri usahakan balance
01:05:074 (65074|1,65178|1,65281|0) - maybe double note ?
01:06:523 - i hear some sound here
01:07:350 - loud sound
01:07:764 - ^
01:08:178 - ^
Perhatikan tik yg putih soalnya byk suara yg keras dari 01:06:936 - sampai 01:26:798 -
01:31:454 (91454|3,91505|2,91557|1,91609|0,91661|3,91712|2,91764|1,91816|0) - pindah ke 01:31:350 - semua + ln di 01:31:764 - 01:32:178 -
01:59:695 (119695|1,119798|1) - move to col 1
01:59:902 (119902|0,120005|1,120109|2) - move col 2 3 4
02:01:350 (121350|1,121454|1) - col 1
02:01:557 (121557|3,121661|1,121764|0) - col 2 4 1
02:02:798 (122798|2,123005|2,123109|2,123316|2) - avoid over jack, check lain2 yg kyk gitu
02:18:730 (138730|3,138833|3,139143|3,139247|3,139557|3,139661|3) - berat kanan banget
02:31:350 - until 02:31:971 - many sound
02:59:281 - add note n 02:59:385 -
04:23:074 - until 04:23:902 - many sound
start di sini 04:38:385 - sampai 04:52:040 - cek lagi kek yg pertama
Feel free to reject
Mod pakai bahasa campuran :'v + lagunya ena :D
Good luck mas :)


thanks A lot!!!!!! Updated
Alsty-
638 posts
Joined March 2016
Alsty-
hai , M4M here.
here the mod as requested. maaf kalo mungkin agak menyinggung tapi langsung to the point kok , feel free to reject xD
GENERAL
BPM : OK
offset : OK
BG : cari yang resolusi 1366x768
Audio : OK
Hitsound : X
COLUMN GUIDE 4k
1|2|3|4

mod
00:01:557 (1557|2,2178|2,3833|1,5488|0,8178|2) - ilangin single notes nya , tinggalin LN aja
00:13:971 - coba cek http://puu.sh/qqttp/d04e6f6222.jpg lebih rapih mungkin (?)
00:15:833 (15833|1) - ini harusnya bukan LN mungkin kalo LN harus berenti di 00:15:971 - rescale di 1/6 recheck lagi semua LN yang pendek
00:20:592 - http://puu.sh/qqtCT/64b8fbfa84.jpg
00:23:488 (23488|1) - tempatin di 4 , pitch relevance. jangan lupa di rescale lagi panjang nya
00:25:764 (25764|1,25971|0) - delete
00:38:798 - kasi 1notes di 3 , karena ngikutin vocal three two one.
00:45:419 (45419|0) - kalo ngikut synth mending re-arrange. kalo ngikut hihat coba liat
00:46:661 (46661|1,46661|3,46764|2,46867|1) - vocal? kalo ngga re-arrange jadi 1/8 , dengerin pake 25% playback
00:57:419 - missing notes
00:57:833 - add di 1
00:58:764 - isi notes nya http://puu.sh/qqu1l/089c726403.jpg
01:01:557 (61557|2,61557|3) - pindah ke 1|2 ga balance
01:24:936 (84936|3) - LN abisnya di 01:25:143 -
01:30:212 - 01:30:419 - 01:30:626 - missing notes
01:32:592 - missing notes?
01:45:316 (105316|1) - delete. ghost notes
01:45:936 (105936|3,105988|2,106040|1,106092|0,106143|3,106195|2,106247|1,106298|0) - re-arrange , ikutin drum bassnya. itu ga sesuai banget
02:10:247 - add LN
02:24:730 - add notes
02:36:316 - s/d 02:36:936 - 1/8
02:37:971 - s/d 02:39:005 - http://puu.sh/qquoT/07448d1652.jpg di 02:38:592 - pake 1/6
02:39:316 - add di 4 02:39:419 - add di 3
03:58:247 - missing notes
03:59:178 - isi notes 1/4
04:11:281 - http://puu.sh/qquBh/2b5ce7ab68.jpg 1/6 ini
jangan lupa re-check lagi di section yang sama , bagian stream nya dah mantep :D
dahh , tenkyu m4mnya :3
L A U R A
103 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
L A U R A

Alsty- wrote:

hai , M4M here.
here the mod as requested. maaf kalo mungkin agak menyinggung tapi langsung to the point kok , feel free to reject xD
GENERAL
BPM : OK
offset : OK
BG : cari yang resolusi 1366x768
Audio : OK
Hitsound : X
COLUMN GUIDE 4k
1|2|3|4

mod
00:01:557 (1557|2,2178|2,3833|1,5488|0,8178|2) - ilangin single notes nya , tinggalin LN aja
00:13:971 - coba cek http://puu.sh/qqttp/d04e6f6222.jpg lebih rapih mungkin (?)
00:15:833 (15833|1) - ini harusnya bukan LN mungkin kalo LN harus berenti di 00:15:971 - rescale di 1/6 recheck lagi semua LN yang pendek
00:20:592 - http://puu.sh/qqtCT/64b8fbfa84.jpg
00:23:488 (23488|1) - tempatin di 4 , pitch relevance. jangan lupa di rescale lagi panjang nya
00:25:764 (25764|1,25971|0) - delete
00:38:798 - kasi 1notes di 3 , karena ngikutin vocal three two one.
00:45:419 (45419|0) - kalo ngikut synth mending re-arrange. kalo ngikut hihat coba liat
00:46:661 (46661|1,46661|3,46764|2,46867|1) - vocal? kalo ngga re-arrange jadi 1/8 , dengerin pake 25% playback
00:57:419 - missing notes
00:57:833 - add di 1
00:58:764 - isi notes nya http://puu.sh/qqu1l/089c726403.jpg
01:01:557 (61557|2,61557|3) - pindah ke 1|2 ga balance
01:24:936 (84936|3) - LN abisnya di 01:25:143 -
01:30:212 - 01:30:419 - 01:30:626 - missing notes
01:32:592 - missing notes?
01:45:316 (105316|1) - delete. ghost notes
01:45:936 (105936|3,105988|2,106040|1,106092|0,106143|3,106195|2,106247|1,106298|0) - re-arrange , ikutin drum bassnya. itu ga sesuai banget
02:10:247 - add LN
02:24:730 - add notes
02:36:316 - s/d 02:36:936 - 1/8
02:37:971 - s/d 02:39:005 - http://puu.sh/qquoT/07448d1652.jpg di 02:38:592 - pake 1/6
02:39:316 - add di 4 02:39:419 - add di 3
03:58:247 - missing notes
03:59:178 - isi notes 1/4
04:11:281 - http://puu.sh/qquBh/2b5ce7ab68.jpg 1/6 ini
jangan lupa re-check lagi di section yang sama , bagian stream nya dah mantep :D
dahh , tenkyu m4mnya :3

Thank for Mod :D UPDATED
Fubukicat
970 posts
Joined February 2012
Fubukicat
Hi there , mod

dadon
Key = 1/2/3/4
[Are You Ready ?]
How about
HP : 8.5
OD : 8.5
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00:20:592 (20592|1) - The End of this LN overlap with a single note just behind it , check ai mod :3
00:20:592 (20592|0) - move to 3 , to avoid this jack with this 00:20:798 (20798|0) - , the flow of the pattern is nice but just the start is abit anti flow imo

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00:41:074 (41074|2,41178|2) - ok , I don't recomend this , here the melody is way more catchy tham any other sound
I suggest : 00:41:178 (41178|2) - remove this note
then add : 00:40:971 (40971|2) - a note here for the melody
in that way it's way easier to catch up and emphasis well the song
an example here

^ this suggestion is also apply-able for thoose notes :
00:42:730 (42730|1,42833|1) -
00:47:695 (47695|2,47798|2) -
00:49:350 (49350|2,49454|2) -
02:27:005 (147005|1,147109|1) -
02:28:661 (148661|3,148764|3) -
02:33:626 (153626|1,153730|1) -
02:35:281 (155281|3,155385|3) -

--

00:46:867 (46867|3) - there is a drum sound here, add to 4 imo
00:53:488 (53488|1,53695|2) - Ctrl+J for pattern here : 00:52:867 (52867|0,52867|1,53178|1,53178|2) -
00:58:040 (58040|1) - move to 1 ? to avoid alot of note in 2nd collumn 00:57:626 (57626|1,57833|1,58040|1,58247|1) -
01:21:005 (81005|0) - add note to 1 then move : 01:21:109 (81109|0) - to 2
01:46:350 (106350|3) - add note to 4 for the drum
01:46:040 (106040|3,106040|2) - this should be 1 note , and this : 01:46:143 (106143|1) - two , but well your pattern seems cool to so up to you
01:46:454 (106454|2) - add another note in 2 for drum snare
02:03:471 (123471|3) - move to the blue line , it should be a 1/4 snap unless I missed the point here
02:14:592 (134592|1,134695|1) - move to 3 , the sounds aren't really the same with the notes before that (or just keep them)
02:16:247 (136247|3,136350|3) - ^well here you don't really have much choice , well up to you I guess, you can keep them as they are

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02:31:454 (151454|3,151505|2,151557|1,151609|0,151661|3,151712|2,151764|1,151816|0,151867|3,151919|2,151971|1,152023|0,152074|2) - here you used a full 1/8 stream
but here : 00:45:419 (45419|0,45471|1,45523|2,45574|3,45626|0,45678|1,45730|2,45781|3,45833|0,45885|1,45936|2,46040|1) - the stream miss one note to be complete
try to make both of them concistent
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02:58:936 (178936|2,179005|3) - Ctrl+J, (here the first two notes are 1/4 then it becomes 1/6 suddenly , and it still goes in the same direction
what would mostly occur is the player to play it as a 1/4 stair instead of reading both rythms
so I suggest to Ctrl +J the last two notes so the rythm is easier to catch up

03:28:764 (208764|2) - remove this note , following the bass instru is fine here, if you want to follow vocal you should map all of it
wich is a 1/8 stream from here 03:28:661 (208661|2) -

03:59:178 (239178|2) - move to the red line

04:24:109 (264109|2,264316|2) - that's cool :3

04:34:867 (274867|3) - move to 1
04:37:143 (277143|1,277143|0) - same as above and the 1/4 x 1/6 stair read as a 1/4 stair
here you have the same pattern going over 2 different rythm , I suggest to change the pattern at this point : 04:37:143 (277143|1,277143|0) -

Good Luck :3
laura is a good IS character :D
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