Garven wrote:

[Rin]
Add 2 seconds of audio lead-in please. seems i only forgot to add on my own diff
02:06:436 (1,2) - Compare the distance here and at 02:08:150 (1,2) - and 02:09:865 (1,2) - changed to a spacing increase way.
02:28:079 (5,6,7,8,9) - This might sound nicer with a diminuendo here (gradual volume reduction) nah. i'm using 50% volume for vocal notes and 40% for non-vocal. and the voice of vocal not decreased.
02:36:865 (1,1,1,1,1) - のーおーおーお <3 のーおーおーお
02:51:436 (1,2,1) - It's a neat idea with the kiai fountains here, but the problem is that they spray too much for too long, and they just look like one really long kiai burst instead of your intended effect. :/ deleted. yeah it works not that well...= =

Yeah, I'm mostly worried about the easier difficulties. Get a couple more mods on this and call me back~

Garven wrote:

よ。久しぶりだな。

[Dis]
00:42:436 (1) - Feels rather soon after a spinner, even for a normal. Maybe scoot the spinner to 00:40:079 - to fit with the start and end of the vocal and miss the cymbals.
00:56:793 (1) - Same thing here... Maybe start the spinner at 00:53:793 - , end it at 00:55:722 - and add a note at 00:56:365 - to keep the feel of the guitar?
01:11:579 (1) - Graaah. Give more time after your spinners for recovery in easier difficulties. ;_;
01:26:150 (4) - Looks kind of weird compared to 01:24:865 (1) -
01:39:007 (1) - Soon after spinner...
01:43:722 (4) - I ... guess these are done on purpose. Still looks weird to me.
01:48:865 - Starting the spinner here feels better than where you start it, imo
02:30:007 (1) - Low volume here, raise volume at 02:31:079 - ?
02:32:150 (1) - -_-
03:04:293 (3) - Extend to 03:04:936 -
03:08:150 (1) - Soon after, blah
03:18:865 (3,1) - I think musically it would have been more appropriate to save rhythms like this for the very end, instead of one repeat before the end.

Garven wrote:

よ。久しぶりだな。

[General]
02:27:436 - Gaaah, Tianshi rushes too much and stuff starts sounding off time. D:

[moeSamiPale]
Please raise stack leniency. I'm not seeing a reason for it to be this low. raised to 0.7
00:03:865 (2) - All these stacks under slider ends (especially with this rhythm)... I really wouldn't recommend doing them in the easiest difficulty. In general, I try to avoid stacks underneath slider ends because it's harder to tell what the rhythm is from the approach circle. This applies to all instances where this is used. changed... quite a lot.
00:27:650 (1) - Why a fourth repeat? Feels extraneous considering the strong vocals... Also awkward in the easy difficulty sense since it'll be hard for new players to tell when it will end to time when the 2 slider starts. ^
00:34:507 (1) - ^ ^
00:41:150 (4) - I'd recommend you just map something different here. Same issue as the previous two, but more because of the kick slider in an easy rather than just feeling weird rhythmically. ^
00:48:007 (4) - ^ ^
00:57:436 (1) - Waaay too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty - especially that far away from the center. Maybe end it at 00:55:936 - ? i guess you mean 00:56:365 -
01:09:436 (3,4) - Eeh, don't like this in an easy. reduced one repeat.
01:43:722 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:50:579 (1) - Same thing as before didn't change this one.
02:12:436 (1,2,3) - Eeeh, kind of iffy. deleted 2.
02:18:007 (5) - blah blah didn't change.
02:19:507 (7) - Maybe delete? deleted.
02:35:150 (1) - Kinda short, note after too soon... maybe extend to 02:36:865 - and delete the 1 slider? k.
Pretty much the same issues will be raised with the rest of the map. I think you get the idea. Make this more of an easy, considering how many difficulties there are in here.

[Colin Hou]
Raise HP drain please. due to the score spread. no.
00:44:365 (8,9,10) - Nice
01:11:365 (2) - I initially went for this instead of the 1 on sight read. Maybe position it so it's not in line as the the 1, 2, and 2 line up now? no.
02:37:507 (1,1,1) - This part is really messy with so many notes crammed together like that. rearranged.
02:59:150 (1) - Raise the arc a tad so it's not touching the 2 done.
03:00:436 (4,5,6) - Haha, nice variation

Garven wrote:

よ。久しぶりだな。

[General]


[eveless]
There a reason for stack leniency to be so low?umm...no reason i just copy the rin's diff at first lol
00:12:864 (1) - The way this slider is shaped, it leads me to think that you want to be moving in from the right side of it, but the way you have the pattern set up, you're having to zig zag and cut in from the left instead and kind of disrupts the slider's flow. Maybe do an H-Flip on it and restack it on the 2.changed the slider's shape
00:48:007 (5) - Could be placed betterif you means the spacing...fixed
03:01:507 (3,1) - This jump kind of felt uncharacteristic compared to the rest of the map. It still plays fine, but it didn't feel like it was part of the map I was just playing.wut but infact 00:02:793 (1,2,3,1,2) is the same pattern
03:04:293 (1) - Remove whistle from the end of the sliderkeep it but remove 2's whistle...because i felt it's strange if remove 1's whistle
03:34:936 (1) - Reduce volume to about 50%? It blends better that way instead of just sticking out against the hi-hat.kk


Yeah, I'm mostly worried about the easier difficulties. Get a couple more mods on this and call me back~

JauiPlaY wrote:

萌妹要哭了...自己map里的圖都被人用光了

loveFantasy wrote:

你好

天時<3

[SamiPale]
<00:14:579> (2) 原本這條綠線做什麼的? 另外降音的S: finish比現在的S:C1的適合呢 k.
<00:28:722> (2) new combo (你後面同樣的部分有放呢) k.
<00:57:007> (T) 降音? 01:09:222插一條升回來 nice.
<02:12:865> 認為(2)該往下移 不认同
<02:30:007> (5) finish? ok

[Colin Hou]
- fine
<01:37:722..> (T..) unused timing sections fixed. 好细致
<02:16:079> (6) minor spacing error fixed.

[Rin]
- fine. 希望那四條slider不要又出事了 (其實我去查了歌詞後還是不懂為什麼非得用SV change Orz) 只是普通渐强别想那么多
<01:32:150> 這個拍點感覺特別吵呢 原来就有所以顺应了
<03:04:293> 其實我希望這裡打到東西後再開始轉盤 好的。

star of course

loveFantasy wrote:

[eveless]
- 討厭那些 stacking streams T_T
- 嗯, 你整首出現的slider tick point很少, 所以僅僅是為了閃掉<02:26:579>那個醜醜的點我就會用0.5 tick ratethen 拉头:tick rate 1 plz
<00:29:150> 移除 finish我不知道为什么要去除
<01:32:150> 這個拍點感覺特別吵呢背景本来就在打锣 找打鼓的去233
<02:10:079> 重擺(1,2,3)來加(2,3) spacing故意的