Cats - Baby Cat

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Sakura

Charles445 wrote:

General
You're going to want a timing professional to help you time this map. It's a toughie Timing's fine imo, idk why you keep saying that X_X
The hitsounds are loud in comparison to the music. I suggest turning down the volume of the hitsounds. Make sure your own hitsound volume isnt loud as well X_X i even think that they could've been louder specially for kiai sections

Normal
00:11:825 (2) - Move this 1 grid down
00:12:371 (3) - Move this 1 grid left and down
00:14:007 (2) - Move this 1 grid left
00:14:552 (3) - Move this 1 grid down
00:15:098 (4) - Move this 1 grid left and 2 grids down
That should make that part more symmetrical
Fixed!
00:30:098 (4) - Move this up and outta there like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/116790 it helps the map not get too cluttered and hard to read.
actually you made me realize that (4) wasnt covering (3)'s curve perfectly
00:33:098 (1) - Add a finish uhh where? there's like 4 possible spots there... but anyways im not taking any finish suggestions i've already explained them to every other modder here.
00:37:462 (1) - ^^ I know why you would think a Finish fits there, but that's not the hitsound pattern im using.
00:41:825 (1) - ^^ really, that's not the hitsound pattern im using here D:
00:52:734 (4) - Avoid having short multiple-repeat sliders on a normal. This can be confusing to the below average player Actually kick sliders are fine on Normal difficulties ._.
00:58:189 (3) - Move this 1 grid down and 1 grid right Fixed!
01:38:825 - This break is indeed in the right place, it just feels too long. Make it as long as RJ's Take in mind RJ has an extra break before this one, while i only have this one right in the middle (and the small one because of the silent part), the break this long was intentional, it's only missing on Taiko because Taiko is not supposed to have breaks.
02:16:734 (1,2) - This is really confusing looking I was actually trying to Elbow (6) but that was hard to do X_X
02:24:370 (4) - New combo so the drain isn't so harsh here If anything that's about 10% hp the player needs at least to pass this part o.o
02:39:097 (1) - Avoid having short multiple-repeat sliders on a normal. This can be confusing to the below average player. Here's an idea for this part http://puu.sh/3wM0 Read comment on the other slider...
02:46:734 (5) - Move this 1 grid left so it isn't touching the 3 and 4 Another not perfect curve i fixed yay.

Taiko Oni
Man that speedup freaked me out lol
It's pretty darn solid

Insane
I think the main problem with the diff is the many antijumps under sliders
For example, right at the beginning 00:03:098 (3,4) - Is a simple circle under a slider
that you hit quickly. However 00:19:189 (7,8) - Is an antijump circle under a slider. Playing both one after another may confuse the player because they don't know what to expect. There's nothing technically wrong with having them, it's just something that might trip up the player.

00:16:462 (4,5,6,7,8) - Move these a grid to the right so it looks better with the 00:15:371 (6) Fixed!
00:18:098 (1,2,3) - This stream could be more straight lolwhat o.o
00:18:643 (4,5,6) - ^^
00:30:098 (3) - Move this 1 grid to the left so it's under the 1 I blame distance snap! <3
00:33:916 (5) - I'd change this slider into hitcircles. It's not a good idea to have a random 1/4 slider in a stream of circles
00:42:643 (5) - ^^ If you can explain to me why is not a good idea then i'll gladly think about it
00:47:553 (5,6,7,8) - Fix the spacing on these I blame dat one modder... lol
00:52:871 - Add a circle here. Makes more sense and plays better What is this i dont even, what the heck is supposed to go there according to you guys D: the stream is mapped to the lyrics and i dont hear any lyric there.
01:08:689 (4) - Change this slider into hitcircles. I still dont see why? i find it more fun to play that way than simple click spamming.
01:09:234 (7,8) - Try arranging these two like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/116777 , sounds and plays great Actually i noticed i needed to make the timing sections more close together instead...
01:15:780 (5) - Make this 5 not touch the 3. The problem here is it creates the illusion that 6 will be where 3 is. There's nothing not even remotely close to an approach circle near (3)
01:17:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is a good example of the antijumps becoming a problem. This is frustrating to read But Etna sliders are fun D:
01:38:825 - This break is indeed in the right place, it just feels too long. Make it as long as RJ's
Gets pretty nice, love the beat here
02:40:052 (6) - I'd replace this with circles again. Sure a large portion of the stream is sliders but it should only transition once from sliders to circles, not slider circle slider circle =/ sorry but nope (i've already explained it both of the previous times)
Nice ending


Good mapset for someone coming back to mapping, well done!
EDIT: Putting my map in here for m4m http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33197
I'll PM RJ and Crimmi to check the mods
Thanks for the mod! Kudosu well earned
RandomJibberish
val0108
ya o/

[General]
Please unify kiaitime at all diff.

[Crimmi's Easy]
HP AR OD 2?
02:12:370 (5,6) - I think soft sounds good.
02:21:097 (1) - ^
03:06:916 - delete timimg line?
03:07:052 - ^

[Normal]
00:10:734 (4) - middle
00:11:280 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 4grid right
00:15:643 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 1grid right
00:27:098 (1,2,3,4) - Symmetry
00:35:280 (1) - remove new combo
00:54:916 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Symmetry
01:10:189 (1) - remove new combo
02:15:916 (5) - 2grid left 1grid down
02:59:552 (3,4) - overlap (stack or away?)

[RJ's Hard]
offset 2553
01:36:103 (1) - spin end 01:38:558 -
02:08:011 - red line here(I do not mind it very much)

[Insane]
00:25:462 (4) - 1grid down left
00:26:552 (4) - ^
00:45:371 (5) - 00:45:507 - start here?
01:17:825 (4,5) - how about this? http://puu.sh/3xck
01:29:553 - add note?
02:33:643 (4) - 3grid down
02:50:961 (5) - start here?02:50:961 -

woo!!
mod4mod ok? http://osu.ppy.sh/s/30348
Andrea
[RJ's Hard]

02:50:968 (1) - Unsnapped.
02:51:377 (2) - ^
02:58:737 (2) - ^


Let me know what are you going to do with the other mods and I'll bubble this :3
DNR
Normal:
00:37:462 (1) - Add finish?
01:08:007 (1) - ^
01:12:371 (1) - ^
01:16:734 (1) - ^
02:08:007 (1) - Add clap (goes with music)
02:10:188 (3) - ^
02:16:734 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
02:20:007 (3) - Add clap

That's about it. uguu.
Crimmi

val0108 wrote:

[Crimmi's Easy]
HP AR OD 2? <--- Hmm, ok.
02:12:370 (5,6) - I think soft sounds good.
02:21:097 (1) - ^
03:06:916 - delete timimg line? <-=--= Ok.
03:07:052 - ^
I'm sticking by with my hitsounding, I know what i'm doing >.<
Topic Starter
Sakura
@val: Removed NC on [Normal] and did some grid adjustments on [Insane]
@CDFA: The claps that (go with the music) yeah indeed i missed them but i decided to go with whistle instead since that part of the song feels softer, thanks for pointing that out so Kudosu for that
Andrea
Seems good now.

Bubbled~
SapphireGhost
Yeah feel free to ignore this, I'm late.

[General]
- Add CrimmiSkye to the tags on all difficulties because he has ranked maps under that name.
- (Change the offset to 371 on all difficulties?)

[Crimmi's Easy]
02:10:188 (3) - Put a new combo here?
02:12:370 (5) - And maybe here too.

[Normal]
01:36:643 (1) - I don't really like this spinner being near-silenced, I'd rather have it audible.

[RJ's Hard]
I LOVE YOU

[Taiko Oni]
I don't know why the kiai ends at a different spot but alright.

[Insane]
01:28:734 (3,4,5,6) - I'm not exactly sure why you changed your 1/4 spacing here, but I can live.
01:59:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I got confused here, everything seemed so clumped together, but I mostly got confused by the spacing of (5,6,7,8)

I should have gotten to this earlier.
Topic Starter
Sakura

SapphireGhost wrote:

Yeah feel free to ignore this, I'm late.

[General]
- Add CrimmiSkye to the tags on all difficulties because he has ranked maps under that name. Added
- (Change the offset to 371 on all difficulties?) No, that's the pre-stanza, the first stanza is on the first downbeat, it wouldnt make any sense for the osu! cookie to start pulsing before the real beat starts.

[Normal]
01:36:643 (1) - I don't really like this spinner being near-silenced, I'd rather have it audible. Changed to 40% volume

[RJ's Hard]
I LOVE YOU

[Taiko Oni]
I don't know why the kiai ends at a different spot but alright.

[Insane]
01:28:734 (3,4,5,6) - I'm not exactly sure why you changed your 1/4 spacing here, but I can live. Because i dont want to make big 1/4 jumps
01:59:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I got confused here, everything seemed so clumped together, but I mostly got confused by the spacing of (5,6,7,8) Changed a bit

I should have gotten to this earlier.
I love how my maps always get modded after they're bubbled anyways *pops*
James2250
Everything checks out nicely

Have your bubble back :D

(Wish I could rank it cuz then I could post http://puu.sh/3yqa)
Zelos
Just throwing my star here. Don't mind me.
Topic Starter
Sakura
Thanks James for bubble and Zelos for star
Andrea
Let's go!

Ranked~
Topic Starter
Sakura
yaaaay
KanaRin
Congratz<3
Hana-chan~
Suzully
Congrats Sakura Hana-sensei<3
OzzyOzrock
oh yeeaah
Ekoro
another song from Audition :O

Congrats ~
Charles445
Oh wow, grats
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