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riya(eufonius) - Traveler's tale

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Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Garden
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年11月18日 at 15:55:05

Artist: riya(eufonius)
Title: Traveler's tale
Source: ISLAND
Tags: -Nanaka- Misure アイランド frontwing visual novel opening full version
BPM: 140
Filesize: 9872kb
Play Time: 03:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. 7ka's Insane (3.68 stars, 617 notes)
  2. Collab Normal (1.84 stars, 424 notes)
  3. Easy (1.36 stars, 235 notes)
  4. Endless tale (4.44 stars, 746 notes)
  5. Hard (2.92 stars, 543 notes)
Download: riya(eufonius) - Traveler's tale
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mapset:
Light Insane by -Nanaka-
Normal collab with Misure
Last edited by Garden , edited 35 times in total.
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Depths
<3
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Lavender
居然有人做了这部
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
Hello from my queue

[General]
  1. 因為你的BG是1280*720，所以記得到design裡把wildscreen support打勾(每個難度都要勾)
  2. 可以把アイランド和op放到tags裡
  3. 我覺得另外找的finish聽久了挺怪的... 如果在現有譜裡找不到適合的可以去LKs的首頁有個hitsound package找找
  4. clap的話也是有點硬.. 用原本的sampleset normal就挺好的，像7ka前奏的感覺
[Hard]
  1. 00:37:048 (4,1) 包一下?
  2. 03:50:763 NC
[7ka's Insane]
  1. 00:19:906 要這樣擺的話 NC可能要下在這裡
  2. 03:50:763 NC
[Insane]
  1. HP+1
  2. 01:31:477 (3,4,5,6,7) 這裡的擺法我覺得可以改成這樣，6.7.1 是一個大三角
    SPOILER
5個難度反反覆覆看了快三個小時，真的是摸不出甚麼東西啊啊啊 (抱頭)
曲子的變化沒有很大，譜也沒有踩邊界的地方算是保守的做法，我覺得完成度已經很高了...
真抱歉摸不出甚麼，也可能是因為我太久沒摸圖了吧 ( ´•̥̥̥ω•̥̥̥` )
(如果有甚麼其他要摸的可以隨時PM我...嗚嗚)
總之祝好運了，還有.. 請..請跟我做朋友!(つд⊂)
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Garden

Azure wrote:

Hello from my queue

[General]
  1. 因為你的BG是1280*720，所以記得到design裡把wildscreen support打勾(每個難度都要勾) 我记得widescreen support只和storyboard有关啊..我再问问
  2. 可以把アイランド和op放到tags裡 加了前者，opening里也包含了op二字应该不用加了
  3. 我覺得另外找的finish聽久了挺怪的... 如果在現有譜裡找不到適合的可以去LKs的首頁有個hitsound package找找 唔我再挑挑..有的地方感觉挺合适的
  4. clap的話也是有點硬.. 用原本的sampleset normal就挺好的，像7ka前奏的感覺 确实，这个我之后再改下
[Hard]
  1. 00:37:048 (4,1) 包一下? ok
  2. 03:50:763 NC ok

[Insane]
  1. HP+1 +了0.5，保护hr玩家
  2. 01:31:477 (3,4,5,6,7) 這裡的擺法我覺得可以改成這樣，6.7.1 是一個大三角 作了一下类似思路的改动
    SPOILER
5個難度反反覆覆看了快三個小時，真的是摸不出甚麼東西啊啊啊 (抱頭)
曲子的變化沒有很大，譜也沒有踩邊界的地方算是保守的做法，我覺得完成度已經很高了...
真抱歉摸不出甚麼，也可能是因為我太久沒摸圖了吧 ( ´•̥̥̥ω•̥̥̥` )
(如果有甚麼其他要摸的可以隨時PM我...嗚嗚)
總之祝好運了，還有.. 請..請跟我做朋友!(つд⊂) \(o︶o*\)
谢啦~
Yauxo
1,622 posts
Joined June 2011
Yauxo
Hi, from my queue

[Insane]
■ 00:10:906 (2,3,4,5) - I think it'd be cool if could either space these just a tiny bit less or space 00:11:548 (5,6) - a tiny bit more so that the increased pitch from (5 and 6) is highlighted a bit.
■ 00:26:977 (1) - You could replace this one with two Circles if you feel like it. The music has two high pitched noises here.
■ 01:16:691 (7) - Fix the stack here (it's off by 2/1).
■ 01:30:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Just a tad less spacing for this one so that it looks nice in relation to the rest? Spreadwise, they are *alot* more spaced than 7ka's ones too. (3.0ds instead of 3.2ds would do the job as example)
■ 02:13:691 (1) - stack off by 1.
■ 02:23:120 (4) - I'd place this one somewhere else. Having it under the previous' Sliders head makes the Slider useless and slows down the movement.
■ 03:37:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - same, if you did above.

[7ka's Insane]
■ I think that it'd be better if you were to copy the hitsound volumes from the Insane diff. Your hitsounds are really loud right now while the song is somewhat quiet in comparison.

■ 00:08:977 (2) - 00:09:834 (4) - 00:16:691 (4) - (etc) Silence Sliderends. There's no sound in the song, so there shouldnt be any from objects
■ 01:44:334 (1) - Having this one "above" the Slider feels better to me, so how about placing it at 367/252?
■ 03:21:191 (3,4,5) - 03:21:191 (3,4,5) - On all the previous ones youve used more spacing to highlight the drums, why not on this one too? (or the other way around; Why are the other ones spaced that much) Would probably be better to unify the spacing on these.

[Hard]
■ 00:33:406 (3,4,1) - This looks somewhat unnecessary in terms of spacing. The buildup/intensity isnt really as strong to justify the increased spacing and might just end up in reading issues since it's coming out of nowhere.
■ 03:09:406 (1,2) - The sounds of these two are really really, really silent (basically not audible, especially when playing) and it feels very odd to map a triplet for these in a Hard. Just keep them away, the repeat Slider should be more than enough.

Normal is fine. Easy has one or two weird parts in a rhythmical sense, but ultimately they seem to be fine.
I also feel like that the two Insanes have some weird flow here and there, but I assume that's your style since it's consistent throughout the entire map - so thats fine!

Good Luck!
Streliteela
612 posts
Joined January 2012
Streliteela
Hi M4M :3

[Insane]
  1. 00:26:977 (1) - 这里个人感觉没必要用3/4滑条，因为音乐的节奏是1/4的所以滑条直接红线结尾就行；像后面这种00:40:691 (1,1) - 明显有人声拖长的地方用3/4就是比较合适的了
  2. 00:51:620 (2,3) - 这两个之间不需要摆这么大的跳，节奏上并没有那么明显的变化。把00:51:834 (3) - 叠到00:50:977 (4) - 滑条尾就可以了
  3. 01:16:477 (5,6,7) - 这三个有点没stack好，再手动调整一下
  4. 02:22:691 (3,4) - 这间距相比于前面02:21:834 (5,6,1,2) - 来说有点太小了。试试这样？
    SPOILER
  5. 03:37:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 建议这几个note做成间距逐渐增大的感觉，现在突然放大跳感觉很突兀
  6. 03:54:620 (1) - 完全可以移到x201|y0的位置然后做一个三角形pattern，不改的话其实也没问题只是主观建议

[7ka's Insane]
  1. 00:23:763 (5) - Move to x238|y232 so as to increase the ds in 00:23:763 (5,1) - , it's a better way to emphysize 00:23:977 (1) - vocal in this long white tick imo.
  2. 02:11:120 (1) - Remove nc here?
    Totally a pretty solid map, gj~ :)

[Hard]
  1. 02:11:120 (1) - 原地ctrl+j？
  2. 01:45:298 (3) - 感觉可以去掉这个蓝线note；一是因为声音很弱可以忽略，二是缓和部分放这种三连感觉没有必要；像01:57:191 (3,4,5) - 这种激烈鼓点的地方放上一些三连感觉就很合适
  3. 03:11:334 (1,1) - 这里stack一下吧，感觉稍稍有点乱
  4. 03:38:548 (3,4,5,1) - 把3和5放到现在4的位置，然后把4放到3和5的位置。这样flow会更顺一些

[Collab Normal]
  1. 00:19:263 (5) - 这个改成1/2滑条吧
  2. 00:29:763 (4) - 这里从节奏上来说并没有拖长音，所以感觉没必要用长滑条。直接在00:29:763 - 的位置放note然后00:30:406 - 的位置放1/2滑条就行
  3. 01:54:834 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这串太长了。建议01:56:334 (1) - 这里换成一个note，然后01:56:763 - 也放一个note；如果可以的话01:58:048 (1) - 这个也换成一个note，然后01:58:477 - 这里也加一个note；这样这个长串就可以拆开了
    总体上很不错的normal，赞

不太会摸easy_(:з」∠)_不过看上去应该问题不大
That's it~ Nice map & gl for rank~ :)
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Shad0w1and
先占位
-Nanaka-
815 posts
Joined July 2013
-Nanaka-

Azure wrote:

Hello from my queue

[General]
  1. 因為你的BG是1280*720，所以記得到design裡把wildscreen support打勾(每個難度都要勾)
  2. 可以把アイランド和op放到tags裡
  3. 我覺得另外找的finish聽久了挺怪的... 如果在現有譜裡找不到適合的可以去LKs的首頁有個hitsound package找找
  4. clap的話也是有點硬.. 用原本的sampleset normal就挺好的，像7ka前奏的感覺
[7ka's Insane]
  1. 00:19:906 要這樣擺的話 NC可能要下在這裡
  2. 03:50:763 NC
改了

Wivaiien wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[7ka's Insane]
■ I think that it'd be better if you were to copy the hitsound volumes from the Insane diff. Your hitsounds are really loud right now while the song is somewhat quiet in comparison.

■ 00:08:977 (2) - 00:09:834 (4) - 00:16:691 (4) - (etc) Silence Sliderends. There's no sound in the song, so there shouldnt be any from objects
adjust
■ 01:44:334 (1) - Having this one "above" the Slider feels better to me, so how about placing it at 367/252?
aa,Nice :)
■ 03:21:191 (3,4,5) - 03:21:191 (3,4,5) - On all the previous ones youve used more spacing to highlight the drums, why not on this one too? (or the other way around; Why are the other ones spaced that much) Would probably be better to unify the spacing on these.
u-sorry nope
Good Luck!

Streliteela wrote:

Hi M4M :3

[notice][7ka's Insane]
  1. 00:23:763 (5) - Move to x238|y232 so as to increase the ds in 00:23:763 (5,1) - , it's a better way to emphysize 00:23:977 (1) - vocal in this long white tick imo.
    there calm part, Jump is not necessary
  2. 02:11:120 (1) - Remove nc here?
    00:47:120 (1,2,3) - and unification

    Totally a pretty solid map, gj~ :)
    Thanks :)
Thank you All! :oops:
aaaa
osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
Title:Traveler's tale
TitleUnicode:Traveler's tale
Artist:riya(eufonius)
ArtistUnicode:riya(eufonius)
Creator:Garden
Version:7ka's Insane
Source:ISLAND
Tags:-Nanaka- Misure アイランド eufonius frontwing visual novel opening full version
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210,262,215334,2,0,P|252:273|290:294,1,88.000002685547,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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290,143,216620,2,0,P|253:163|181:166,1,88.000002685547,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Garden

Wivaiien wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[Insane]
■ 00:10:906 (2,3,4,5) - I think it'd be cool if could either space these just a tiny bit less or space 00:11:548 (5,6) - a tiny bit more so that the increased pitch from (5 and 6) is highlighted a bit. i space things less here, the pitch goes like 1521 and increasing isnt that obvious, so random jumps may actually fit better w
■ 00:26:977 (1) - You could replace this one with two Circles if you feel like it. The music has two high pitched noises here. makes sense
■ 01:16:691 (7) - Fix the stack here (it's off by 2/1). nice catch
■ 01:30:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Just a tad less spacing for this one so that it looks nice in relation to the rest? Spreadwise, they are *alot* more spaced than 7ka's ones too. (3.0ds instead of 3.2ds would do the job as example) i nerfed
■ 02:13:691 (1) - stack off by 1. fixed
■ 02:23:120 (4) - I'd place this one somewhere else. Having it under the previous' Sliders head makes the Slider useless and slows down the movement. have the movement slow down a bit is my point here tho
■ 03:37:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - same, if you did above. nerfed

[Hard]
■ 00:33:406 (3,4,1) - This looks somewhat unnecessary in terms of spacing. The buildup/intensity isnt really as strong to justify the increased spacing and might just end up in reading issues since it's coming out of nowhere. modified a bit, i wanna transfer to a new part with the spacing but it seems to be kinda too much
■ 03:09:406 (1,2) - The sounds of these two are really really, really silent (basically not audible, especially when playing) and it feels very odd to map a triplet for these in a Hard. Just keep them away, the repeat Slider should be more than enough. k

Normal is fine. Easy has one or two weird parts in a rhythmical sense, but ultimately they seem to be fine.
I also feel like that the two Insanes have some weird flow here and there, but I assume that's your style since it's consistent throughout the entire map - so thats fine!

Good Luck!
Thank you~

Streliteela wrote:

Hi M4M :3

[Insane]
  1. 00:26:977 (1) - 这里个人感觉没必要用3/4滑条，因为音乐的节奏是1/4的所以滑条直接红线结尾就行；像后面这种00:40:691 (1,1) - 明显有人声拖长的地方用3/4就是比较合适的了 改
  2. 00:51:620 (2,3) - 这两个之间不需要摆这么大的跳，节奏上并没有那么明显的变化。把00:51:834 (3) - 叠到00:50:977 (4) - 滑条尾就可以了 叠4滑条尾那样太近，两段都稍改近了一点，怎么说也是vocal相对重一点的地方
  3. 01:16:477 (5,6,7) - 这三个有点没stack好，再手动调整一下 fixed
  4. 02:22:691 (3,4) - 这间距相比于前面02:21:834 (5,6,1,2) - 来说有点太小了。试试这样？你这个56有点远啊，我这里本来目的就是前面移动比较尖想在这里停一下
    SPOILER
  5. 03:37:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 建议这几个note做成间距逐渐增大的感觉，现在突然放大跳感觉很突兀 感觉上差不多强，音效也是这么下的，不过我两段大跳都削了应该没什么问题
  6. 03:54:620 (1) - 完全可以移到x201|y0的位置然后做一个三角形pattern，不改的话其实也没问题只是主观建议 这个可以有

[Hard]
  1. 02:11:120 (1) - 原地ctrl+j？ 远了，和整体感觉不太合
  2. 01:45:298 (3) - 感觉可以去掉这个蓝线note；一是因为声音很弱可以忽略，二是缓和部分放这种三连感觉没有必要；像01:57:191 (3,4,5) - 这种激烈鼓点的地方放上一些三连感觉就很合适 行
  3. 03:11:334 (1,1) - 这里stack一下吧，感觉稍稍有点乱 都是stack的a.. 就是自动堆叠的锅显得比较乱，挪开了一点希望好看一些
  4. 03:38:548 (3,4,5,1) - 把3和5放到现在4的位置，然后把4放到3和5的位置。这样flow会更顺一些 那样2->3巨远啊111

[Collab Normal]
  1. 00:19:263 (5) - 这个改成1/2滑条吧 改了点别的总之跟到了那个音
  2. 00:29:763 (4) - 这里从节奏上来说并没有拖长音，所以感觉没必要用长滑条。直接在00:29:763 - 的位置放note然后00:30:406 - 的位置放1/2滑条就行 改成了点别的
  3. 01:54:834 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这串太长了。建议01:56:334 (1) - 这里换成一个note，然后01:56:763 - 也放一个note；如果可以的话01:58:048 (1) - 这个也换成一个note，然后01:58:477 - 这里也加一个note；这样这个长串就可以拆开了 总之中间拆断了，方法好像不太一样
    总体上很不错的normal，赞

不太会摸easy_(:з」∠)_不过看上去应该问题不大
That's it~ Nice map & gl for rank~ :)
谢摸~
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Shad0w1and
Insane
00:26:548 (3) - no piano, use a sliderend cover this instead of a click
00:40:691 - 这种其实这样打着更好
SPOILER
02:23:334 (5,6) - 放右边一点

7ka
03:54:620 (1) - somewhere around 320-320 is better for readness to me.

Normal
00:38:334 - a slider will cover this vocal better. 00:38:977 - then should be a note
01:22:048 (5) - should be same as 01:22:906 (6,7) -
03:51:834 -
SPOILER
射跑
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
M4M

[Easy]
01:23:977 (1) - 折返箭头似乎稍稍被挡住了一点？还是换一个形状吧
http://puu.sh/rGibo/c7412ce764.jpg

[Collab Normal]
02:05:763 (2,3) - 没叠好
嗯好像挺多没叠好的，不然AImod不会报DS的错

01:28:906 - 感觉这个音比半拍后的那个重一点

[Hard]
01:23:977 (1) - 不太常见的形状...按普通的方法摆会好看一点
http://puu.sh/rGjAM/34e840a824.jpg

[7ka's Insane]
02:11:763 - そこにcircleしたい

[Insane]
00:32:548 (1) - 呃...这个3/4是为什么..一般地用1/2滑条塞上就可以，刚好那里有个比较轻的音

03:21:298 (2) - 我听不到这里有鼓点..也可能是我耳机的问题

03:22:370 (2) - 做成跳非常合适呀，没必要去弄三连

03:24:406 (3) - 滑条中间有个比较重的音，所以可以考虑弄成1/2折返

有的三连怪怪的..别的没什么
gl
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
[ Easy ]
00:14:548 (2,1) - 这个是建议可以无视，就是觉得这块地方重叠的效果不是很好，如果要这样重叠的话，我觉得这里blanket做好还是很有必要的
没啦，神

[ Hard ]
00:15:191 (1,3) - 这两个滑条要不要做成同样弧度的感觉？这样看起来似乎缺少点美观
01:03:191 (4,1) - 会不会跳的太大了一些？后面有几个类似的音没有这么大幅度的跳跃01:09:620 (4,1) - 01:14:120 (2,3) - 01:16:691 (6,1) -
基本走的DS，也很好看=W=

[ Insane ]
00:05:763 (3,4) - 这里要不要换成单点加滑条，滑条加单点和前面类似的一组对音方式首先有差别00:04:048 (2,3) -
然后就是重音都在滑条头尾上面，感觉换成单点加滑条的组合更好
00:23:977 (1,2) - 感觉这里效果不是特别好，2上面并不是一个很强的音
03:30:191 (4,5) - 看起来flow貌似比较差？
03:26:334 (2) - 这里要不要和滑条1尾巴叠住？因为后面2,3开始都是重音了，但是似乎都跳的一般大

都挺好的!由于在学校没数位板，我不能试图，只能用看的，射个星GL
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Garden

Shad0w1and wrote:

Insane
00:26:548 (3) - no piano, use a sliderend cover this instead of a click ok
00:40:691 - 这种其实这样打着更好 类似的地方都是统一形状了，不太想改，以后会考虑
SPOILER
02:23:334 (5,6) - 放右边一点 作了一点调整

Normal
00:38:334 - a slider will cover this vocal better. 00:38:977 - then should be a note k
01:22:048 (5) - should be same as 01:22:906 (6,7) - 不想太长orz
射跑

Lily Bread wrote:

M4M

[Easy]
01:23:977 (1) - 折返箭头似乎稍稍被挡住了一点？还是换一个形状吧 觉得基本够清楚，不过保险起见还是fixed
http://puu.sh/rGibo/c7412ce764.jpg

[Collab Normal]
02:05:763 (2,3) - 没叠好 ok全fixed
嗯好像挺多没叠好的，不然AImod不会报DS的错

01:28:906 - 感觉这个音比半拍后的那个重一点 是这样，这里不想combo太长就主要跟白线节奏了

[Hard]
01:23:977 (1) - 不太常见的形状...按普通的方法摆会好看一点 整张图里也有类似的形状所以不算太突兀，而且这里包了的话5->1跳就美丽了
http://puu.sh/rGjAM/34e840a824.jpg

[Insane]
00:32:548 (1) - 呃...这个3/4是为什么..一般地用1/2滑条塞上就可以，刚好那里有个比较轻的音 不比较轻的都跟了，这里大概是自己的感觉吧，重点在后面的piano，减速作个铺垫

03:21:298 (2) - 我听不到这里有鼓点..也可能是我耳机的问题 啊是没，我改了下这里的节奏

03:22:370 (2) - 做成跳非常合适呀，没必要去弄三连 改了个能跳的节奏

03:24:406 (3) - 滑条中间有个比较重的音，所以可以考虑弄成1/2折返 没那么重a

有的三连怪怪的..别的没什么
gl

[ Abhor ] wrote:

[ Easy ]
00:14:548 (2,1) - 这个是建议可以无视，就是觉得这块地方重叠的效果不是很好，如果要这样重叠的话，我觉得这里blanket做好还是很有必要的 其实前面滑条消失的时候缩圈还没包上来所以没那么明显，我尽力调整了下位置可能稍微好点
没啦，神

[ Hard ]
00:15:191 (1,3) - 这两个滑条要不要做成同样弧度的感觉？这样看起来似乎缺少点美观 没那么难看吧_(:зゝ∠)_，这里想表现下往下拐的音调.. 感觉看上去还可以
01:03:191 (4,1) - 会不会跳的太大了一些？后面有几个类似的音没有这么大幅度的跳跃01:09:620 (4,1) - 01:14:120 (2,3) - 01:16:691 (6,1) - 做梗，和前面合起来比较好看。开kiai跳的凶一点没什么啦
基本走的DS，也很好看=W=

[ Insane ]
00:05:763 (3,4) - 这里要不要换成单点加滑条，滑条加单点和前面类似的一组对音方式首先有差别00:04:048 (2,3) -
然后就是重音都在滑条头尾上面，感觉换成单点加滑条的组合更好 妥
00:23:977 (1,2) - 感觉这里效果不是特别好，2上面并不是一个很强的音 vocal，好像这样也没啥问题。意识流下法
03:30:191 (4,5) - 看起来flow貌似比较差？ 我改成往上翘的可能好看点，打起来没问题的
03:26:334 (2) - 这里要不要和滑条1尾巴叠住？因为后面2,3开始都是重音了，但是似乎都跳的一般大 那个有点远了，感觉这样还行啊，不是很特别的感觉不需要特别突出，整张图都差不多是这样

都挺好的!由于在学校没数位板，我不能试图，只能用看的，射个星GL
Thank you all!!
Hanazawa Kana
727 posts
Joined February 2013
Hanazawa Kana
As request
water mod
没试图就摸了 如果哪里摸的不好请见谅

[nanaka]
just some suggestions
00:06:834 (1,2,3) - you can have a try of this
00:12:191 (2) - what about that
00:19:263 (2) - i suggest to put a circle to 00:19:263 - amd put that slider to 00:19:477 - to make there feels not so empty
00:29:120 - i dont think use tick sound is a good choice... why not just make it as the slider end and add a circle
01:16:048 (4) - that extended slider maybe affect the game play since there's a triple followed
后面感觉没什么了

[花园]
00:16:691 (1) - 离后面那么远看着好难受 试下这个 https://puu.sh/rItFF.png
00:45:406 (5) - 音效应该放在3那里吧
02:09:406 (6) - 同 感觉放在第一个note上面听起来舒服些
00:47:763 - 降点音量吧
01:30:834 (1,2,3,4) - 我个人觉得放俩滑条好一点
03:10:263 (1) - 要不滑条尾改成单点?然后滑条少拉1/4?感觉这么重的音放滑条尾有点没爽到

我发现我也强迫症了 滑条尾巴不对着下一个物件就难受
nice set!
good luck and have my star
Misure
951 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure
03:51:834 - in Normal fixed, thanks for modding!
Codesu
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SP飞升
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Garden

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

As request
water mod
没试图就摸了 如果哪里摸的不好请见谅

[花园]
00:16:691 (1) - 离后面那么远看着好难受 试下这个 https://puu.sh/rItFF.png 其实没那么远11这个和后面那个形状是一样的就不改了
00:45:406 (5) - 音效应该放在3那里吧 红线听着还是怪怪的，我试着换个下法让三连听上去顺一点
02:09:406 (6) - 同 感觉放在第一个note上面听起来舒服些 ^
00:47:763 - 降点音量吧 好，第二段还有hard里一样地方也降了
01:30:834 (1,2,3,4) - 我个人觉得放俩滑条好一点 这里音效加得很凶，这样下好爆星比较爽
03:10:263 (1) - 要不滑条尾改成单点?然后滑条少拉1/4?感觉这么重的音放滑条尾有点没爽到 这里1/4感觉不太好抓前面跳得这么累，也当停顿休息的份

我发现我也强迫症了 滑条尾巴不对着下一个物件就难受
nice set!
good luck and have my star
Thx!
Hanazawa Kana
727 posts
Joined February 2013
Hanazawa Kana
妈的这歌越听越好听
我已经循环两个小时了
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Garden
2333
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
_Yiiiii
Hi, M4M from my q

[Insane]
00:04:906 (4) - 前面的音这么轻，在一个combo里就别变flow了，放到(140,200)的位置

00:59:977 (1,2) - 距离可以再远一点

01:16:477 (5) - 要么NC，要么01:16:477 (5,6,7) - 和01:16:048 (4) - 叠上

01:58:048 (1) - 把红点挪到右边那头吧，这样对滑条头的重音的强调效果大概会好一些

02:26:334 (1,2) - 2的音不是很强，这俩之间的间距就别弄那么大了

02:40:477 (5) - ^^

02:42:620 (6,1) - 间距最好再大一点


[7ka's Insane]
02:40:584 - You forgot red timing points like the one you set here 01:16:584 by the way, I don't think it's a good idea to overmap these two circles 01:16:584 (2) - 02:40:584 (2) - because the slider before makes an odd sense while tapping that triple


[Hard]
02:26:013 (2,3,4) - 1/4统一0.4xDS吧，和之前一样


[Collab Normal]
00:34:048 (1) - 把这个滑条改成头向下凹，尾向上凸的，因为头上有个重音，和这样能和之前的00:33:406 (6) - 方向相反而且又不影响之后的

01:45:191 - 多了个whistle，或者说是01:52:048 - 少了一个

03:53:977 (6) - 这里就不需要undermap了，直接一个1/2折返就好了


[Easy]
没啥别的问题，就是开头的音效是不是从高难度复制来的啊？全是whistle，去掉一些吧


没了，这是我的图 osu.ppy.sh/s/514124
-Nanaka-
815 posts
Joined July 2013
-Nanaka-

Shad0w1and wrote:

7ka
03:54:620 (1) - somewhere around 320-320 is better for readness to me.
sry no
射跑

Lily Bread wrote:

M4M
[7ka's Insane]
02:11:763 - そこにcircleしたい
light Insaneだしいらないかなぁ
gl

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

As request
[nanaka]
just some suggestions
00:06:834 (1,2,3) - you can have a try of this
I match it with the scale of the piano
00:12:191 (2) - what about that
No,It is necessary to emphasize 00:12:620 (3) -
00:19:263 (2) - i suggest to put a circle to 00:19:263 - amd put that slider to 00:19:477 - to make there feels not so empty
Well, I think that I do not need it because it is light Insane
00:29:120 - i dont think use tick sound is a good choice... why not just make it as the slider end and add a circle
Because it is a calm part, it is not necessary
01:16:048 (4) - that extended slider maybe affect the game play since there's a triple followed
However, there are many these in Garden Insane、the final practice
后面感觉没什么了

_Yiiiii wrote:

Hi, M4M from my q

[7ka's Insane]
02:40:584 - You forgot red timing points like the one you set here 01:16:584 by the way, I don't think it's a good idea to overmap these two circles 01:16:584 (2) - 02:40:584 (2) - because the slider before makes an odd sense while tapping that triple
Because here is the drum, it is not Overmap
Thank you for modding~I decline a lot it, and I am sorry :(

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Jonarwhal
1,216 posts
Joined November 2013
Jonarwhal
M4M
[General]
  1. 00:27:406 - Unnecessary Inherited Point (on Insane)
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:977 (1,2) - increase the spacing for emphasis
  2. 00:22:048 (5,2) - consider stacking this
  3. 01:08:334 (1) - make the shape more attractive
    that's all
Good Luck, and take a star~
Yorita Yoshino
369 posts
Joined April 2014
Yorita Yoshino
from QQ
这咋摸....射星跑路(
[7ka]
00:06:834 (1,2,3,4) - 有点起伏会更好？
[garden]
00:31:477 (2,3,4,5) - flow感觉有点奇怪
01:03:191 (4) - c+g?
02:27:191 (4) - ^
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Garden

_Yiiiii wrote:

Hi, M4M from my q

[Insane]
00:04:906 (4) - 前面的音这么轻，在一个combo里就别变flow了，放到(140,200)的位置 那4->1巨远啊，换了种改法

00:59:977 (1,2) - 距离可以再远一点 k

01:16:477 (5) - 要么NC，要么01:16:477 (5,6,7) - 和01:16:048 (4) - 叠上 可nc

01:58:048 (1) - 把红点挪到右边那头吧，这样对滑条头的重音的强调效果大概会好一些 强调的间距已经有了，我个人是比较喜欢目前的整体形状

02:26:334 (1,2) - 2的音不是很强，这俩之间的间距就别弄那么大了 打起来区别不大，这个整体间距我觉得比较美观

02:40:477 (5) - ^^ kk

02:42:620 (6,1) - 间距最好再大一点 修了一点

[Hard]
02:26:013 (2,3,4) - 1/4统一0.4xDS吧，和之前一样 这个是前一段没有的，想突出一下，其实打起来也没什么区别


[Collab Normal]
00:34:048 (1) - 把这个滑条改成头向下凹，尾向上凸的，因为头上有个重音，和这样能和之前的00:33:406 (6) - 方向相反而且又不影响之后的 k

01:45:191 - 多了个whistle，或者说是01:52:048 - 少了一个 删了

03:53:977 (6) - 这里就不需要undermap了，直接一个1/2折返就好了 k


[Easy]
没啥别的问题，就是开头的音效是不是从高难度复制来的啊？全是whistle，去掉一些吧 可以


没了，这是我的图 osu.ppy.sh/s/514124

Jonawaga wrote:

M4M
[General]
  1. 00:27:406 - Unnecessary Inherited Point (on Insane) k removed
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:977 (1,2) - increase the spacing for emphasis the pitch rises at 3 so thats where the emphasis is given instead
  2. 00:22:048 (5,2) - consider stacking this ok
  3. 01:08:334 (1) - make the shape more attractive uh i thought it was impressive enuf lol, will consider later
    that's all
Good Luck, and take a star~

-ClariS- wrote:

from QQ
这咋摸....射星跑路(

[garden]
00:31:477 (2,3,4,5) - flow感觉有点奇怪 是要这个感觉 vocal调子有转折
01:03:191 (4) - c+g? 改了第二个，两个全倒着好像有点容易断
02:27:191 (4) - ^
Thx guys!
Frostmourne
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Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
General
nothing

Easy
00:16:263 (3,4) - swap clap, they sound wrong.
01:47:977 (1) - a bit out of place at the repeat for the hitsound (should be Sampleset: Normal), disagree if you have reasoning behind it
03:35:120 (2) - additional drum and whistle on the start
03:47:120 (3,4) - swap clap, similar to what I mentioned

Collab Normal
00:04:906 (x) - add a note to follow piano behind the music
03:51:191 (x) - add a note to follow drum behind the music, this helps player to hit 03:51:620 (1) - intuitively when most of rhythms in this difficulty are mapped this way.

Hard
decent

7ka's Insane
00:19:263 (2) - better feel when you are to hit 2 circles instead of a slider here somewhat more intuitive to play
01:16:048 (4) - I feel this kind of slider is redundant even if it follows music in some way. The voice at the end here is next to unhearable. Additionally, the way you map makes it more confusing. It is less confusing when it looks like this below as it guides you to be 1/4, not some what similar to 1/2.
SPOILER
I highly suggest you either shorten 01:16:048 (4) - by 1/4, ending at 01:16:263 or adjust spacing of 01:16:477 (1,2,3) - to be close to the suggesting image above.
02:40:048 (4) - same as mentioned
03:09:191 (1,1) - spacing between these 2 feels like spacings in between 03:08:334 (1,1,1) - while the beat placement is different. It is different in spacing but when you actually play, it looks more like you can't decide whether it is 1/2 or 1 beat. If you want 1/2 here, make them closer and more distinct than this.
03:22:905 (4) - same as mentioned
03:50:120 (2) - 2 circles is better than 1 slider as mentioned

Insane
01:02:334 (1,2,3) - not a fan of this kind of mapping. Can you move 2 and 3 closer to 1? having this far feels annoying to play
02:26:334 (1,2,3) - same
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Garden

FrostxE wrote:

General
nothing

Easy
00:16:263 (3,4) - swap clap, they sound wrong. ok it really doesnt fit in easy
01:47:977 (1) - a bit out of place at the repeat for the hitsound (should be Sampleset: Normal), disagree if you have reasoning behind it ye its bit weird here, fixed
03:35:120 (2) - additional drum and whistle on the start nice catch fixed all similar places in easier diffs cuz i skipped this beat in insane
03:47:120 (3,4) - swap clap, similar to what I mentioned

Collab Normal
00:04:906 (x) - add a note to follow piano behind the music personally dont wanna make the very first rhythm patterns too intense, i skipped similar instrument sounds here as well 01:28:263 (3,4) - , will probably give a thought later
03:51:191 (x) - add a note to follow drum behind the music, this helps player to hit 03:51:620 (1) - intuitively when most of rhythms in this difficulty are mapped this way. k

Hard
decent

Insane
01:02:334 (1,2,3) - not a fan of this kind of mapping. Can you move 2 and 3 closer to 1? having this far feels annoying to play i moved the first one closer, making 01:02:334 (1,3) - 02:26:334 (1,3) - visual distance the same for pattern consistency. i want some challenge on the second one so keep that
02:26:334 (1,2,3) - same
Thx for mod~
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