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Rita - Egao no Sphere (Short Ver.)

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Topic Starter
KanaRin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年4月3日 at 17:43:14

Artist: Rita
Title: Egao no Sphere (Short Ver.)
Source: Marguerite Sphere
Tags: Meteor karenying SiU_Leaf
BPM: 152
Filesize: 14574kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Kana (4.93 stars, 274 notes)
  2. Karen (2.03 stars, 104 notes)
  3. Leaflet (4.09 stars, 173 notes)
  4. Taiko Oni (4.67 stars, 419 notes)
Download: Rita - Egao no Sphere (Short Ver.)
Download: Rita - Egao no Sphere (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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13th Beatmap.
PC Game 'Marguerite Sphere' Opening theme
Rita - 笑顔のスフィア

Hope you will like it ^w^/

Mapset:
[Easy+] - By karenying
[Normal] - By SiU_LeAf
[Taiko Oni] - By me
[Kana] - By me
Herschel
bakabakana :oops:
arien666

kanopu wrote:

bakabakana :oops:
>.>
aabc271
Star~ :)
Moe BG www
PeaChick
bakana :(
Suimya
here my star ;)
S o r d a
:oops:
Alace
i got -7ms to both offsets
good job AnaRin
K o h a k u
nemurin 8-)
h3k1ru
(ノ゚ω゚)ノ☆
Holoaz
<333 Love Rita Love <333
-maJu
star
Kotone
subarasikibuta
cuteww
Rucker
:3
bakabaka
Star:D
Disoy
XD

加油XDD~
期待中
poringlord
Okay! I see I am the first to actually mod this so here it is:
Anything that is blue is a suggestion ;)
Red stuff is important :twisted:
Karen
Must have gone through this dificulty one hundred times and still couldn't finding anything wrong. Good for you :D

Leaftet
Shame but this difficulty isn't as good as Karen =/
00:05:766(1) Remove?
00:05:766(4,5,6,7) Kind of a deathstream for normal players
00:10:898(1,2) You should alterate the way of the slider, it should start where it ends and vice versa
00:29:545 Make a slider here with the same lenght as 1 from this combo
00:30:681 Make a slider here that has the same lenght as 2 from the same combo

00:40:454 Keep the pattern that you have been using before the rhytm is still the same (like in 00:38:636)
01:06:818 (2) Remove =/
01:14:090 (4) Remove =/=/

01:25:454 New combo*
1:27:272 Not new combo*

*You should redesign this whole segment*
01:30:681 (1) Clap!
01:36:590 Replace this with a slider like the one at 01:35:681

Kana
Same as Karen, couldn't find anything wrong here either

Overall you made very few mistakes congratulations =D
Star <3

Kudo please? :oops:
Topic Starter
KanaRin

poringlord wrote:

Okay! I see I am the first to actually mod this so here it is:
Anything that is blue is a suggestion ;)
Red stuff is important :twisted:
Karen
Must have gone through this dificulty one hundred times and still couldn't finding anything wrong. Good for you :D

Leaftet
Shame but this difficulty isn't as good as Karen =/
00:05:766(1) Remove?
00:05:766(4,5,6,7) Kind of a deathstream for normal players
00:10:898(1,2) You should alterate the way of the slider, it should start where it ends and vice versa
00:29:545 Make a slider here with the same lenght as 1 from this combo
00:30:681 Make a slider here that has the same lenght as 2 from the same combo

00:40:454 Keep the pattern that you have been using before the rhytm is still the same (like in 00:38:636)
01:06:818 (2) Remove =/
01:14:090 (4) Remove =/=/

01:25:454 New combo*
1:27:272 Not new combo*

*You should redesign this whole segment*
01:30:681 (1) Clap!
01:36:590 Replace this with a slider like the one at 01:35:681

Kana
Same as Karen, couldn't find anything wrong here either
Thanks for modding
Fixed some.
Caami
;3
SiU_LeAf
Star~☆

最喜歡此花茉莉這個名字了!! >v<
Kotone
8-) update.
koko6162006
PC gal game song ww :)
Hinacle
star~ 8-)
DarkRingSystem
8-)
KSHR
~ :)
Cyril Scarlet
;)
Potofu
( ノ゚Д゚)ノ★
Madoka
star
kanpakyin
Mod.

[General]
統一開始的地方(Taiko Oni)

[Karen]
SV過快了..
00:25:908(1.2)-拉好一點把...
00:34:999(2)-其實你是不是在偷懶?
00:45:454(x)-加音.
01:06:022(x)-由於後面已經有1個spinner.連續2個spinner一齊就會好辛苦.所以這個spinner還是刪掉然後map點東西把. :D
01:08:863(x)沒有完全消音的比要..+vol然後加finish.
01:16:136(1.2)-這個節奏不工整(藍線上).新手很難抓.所以一般(2)-都會打快.
01:49:545(x)-spinner過短.

[Leaflet]
00:04:286(x)-建議在這裏加個spinner.
00:27:727(1.3)-折返加whistle.
00:38:636(1)-加Finish.
00:42:272(1.3)-^同上上.
01:14:090(x)-加一個音以平衡節奏.
01:14:545(1.2)-不要stack..打起來不順手.
01:31:818(2.3.4.5)-誤導新手.
01:49:545(x)-spinner過短.(在E/N diff)

[Taiko Oni]
首先.你需要向Jo同學拿一張Taiko BG 8-)
00:18:636(9.10.11)-聽起來不太fit the music.而且在白線上開是triplet很怪.
00:37:727(20~)-dkdkkdk.
00:59:318(9.10.11)-刪3連.在這種不是很強烈的地方不適合3連.
01:40:227(20)-這裏放slider不太好..用一個spinner代替/map
恩...其實還有一些pattern打起來不太順手..
Rating: (10)
pattern-(4)
rhythm-(3)
total-(7/10)

[Kana]
只做一個diff=懶人mapping法!
適當的加上whistle.
00:00:635(1)-據andrea的mod.notes不太建議放在offset前,第2..開是部分聲量過大.聽起來不舒服.
00:09:714(6)-這個note未和(2.3.5)-成一直線
00:30:454(6)-移走clap.
00:40:227(1.2.3.4)-這個跳有點突然..無法預測.
00:59:090(x)-加音.

就這樣.我懶.
Topic Starter
KanaRin

kanpakyin wrote:

[Taiko Oni]
首先.你需要向Jo同學拿一張Taiko BG 8-)
00:18:636(9.10.11)-聽起來不太fit the music.而且在白線上開是triplet很怪. 好吧改了00:37:727(20~)-dkdkkdk. Ok. dkdkddk, ^o^
00:59:318(9.10.11)-刪3連.在這種不是很強烈的地方不適合3連. 唔制
01:40:227(20)-這裏放slider不太好..用一個spinner代替/map 嗯..好吧
恩...其實還有一些pattern打起來不太順手.. 明明很順手
Rating: (10)
pattern-(4)
rhythm-(3)
total-(710000/10)

[Kana]
只做一個diff=懶人mapping法! 明明是兩個阿!!笨賢!! 還有我最喜歡懶了!
適當的加上whistle. 去死吧!
據andrea的mod.notes不太建議放在offset前,第2..開是部分聲量過大.聽起來不舒服. Byebye!
00:30:454(6)- 移走clap. 嗯..好吧
00:40:227(1.2.3.4)- 這個跳有點突然..無法預測. 明明好簡單
00:59:090(x)- 加音. [/color]
就這樣.我懶. 懶鬼,咬!
紅字=不改! 藍=改!
JoJo
Star!!~~o(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブ ★

Edit:Taiko BG by request >w<
SPOILER

如果有细节部分(如字体)需要修改的再找我哦 ._.
No kds~
SiU_LeAf

kanpakyin wrote:

[Leaflet]
00:04:286(x)-建議在這裏加個spinner.     不要~
00:27:727(1.3)-折返加whistle.     加clap去
00:38:636(1)-加Finish.     fixed.
00:42:272(1.3)-^同上上     小葉也同上上
01:14:090(x)-加一個音以平衡節奏.     fixed.
01:14:545(1.2)-不要stack..打起來不順手.     fixed.
01:31:818(2.3.4.5)-誤導新手.     fixed.
01:49:545(x)-spinner過短.(在E/N diff)     fixed.(?)
另外, 小葉嘗試去造1個taiko background~~
結果變成這樣呢...嗯嗯嗯

Download: Rita - Egao no Sphere (Short Ver.) (KanaRin) [Leaflet].osu
Kotone

kanpakyin wrote:

Mod.
[Karen]
SV過快了.. this is Easy+
00:25:908(1.2)-拉好一點把... 我覺得還好吧
00:34:999(2)-其實你是不是在偷懶? 正是
00:45:454(x)-加音. k
01:06:022(x)-由於後面已經有1個spinner.連續2個spinner一齊就會好辛苦.所以這個spinner還是刪掉然後map點東西把. :D 因為是Easy+所以大丈夫
01:08:863(x)沒有完全消音的比要..+vol然後加finish. k
01:16:136(1.2)-這個節奏不工整(藍線上).新手很難抓.所以一般(2)-都會打快. 因為是Easy+所以大丈夫
01:49:545(x)-spinner過短. k
thanks
改番呢個係easy+

Download: Rita - Egao no Sphere (Short Ver.) (KanaRin) [Karen].osu
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