Mayday Parade - Anywhere But Here

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Kuroneko-sHerald

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hello~ :)

~Kuro Easy~
00:11:757 (Brk) - Move the break to this point. Done.
00:48:121 (1) - I totally expected this to start at the previous white tick... Me too lol
02:25:757 (Brk) - Move the break to this point. Done.
Download: Mayday Parade - Anywhere But Here (Magicphoenix) [Kuro Easy].osu
Card N'FoRcE
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TorNis
[General]
- Red color combo is not so pleasant when these mostly on top of the screen. BG + Red Combo notes on top = Bad for eyes :(
- 01:11:575 & 02:56:303 - kinda weird fountain(not so "epic" moment imo) but it's ok :)

[Easy]
(All below comments are about "vocal sliders")
Start feels missplaced.
00:02:303 (2,3,1) - Move (2,3) 1 tick to the left, move (1) 2 ticks to the left and increase (1) for 2 tick maybe?
00:41:939 (1,2) - Isn't (1) should be 2 ticks more and (2) the same lenght as (1)?
01:25:575 (1,2) - again something off with "vocal sliders", maybe you don't follow vocals, but it's weird then.
Chorus is nicely done.

I can't find anything wrong in [Normal] and [Hard], they are well made at this point.

~ Star for non-J vocal song
Arusha Shuna
IRC mod
22:42 <Arusha_Shuna> : 00:28:484 (1,2,3) - comfusing
22:42 <Arusha_Shuna> : *n
22:42 <Arusha_Shuna> : but not much, it's up to you
22:42 <Magicphoenix> : i actually like it ..
22:42 <Arusha_Shuna> : like i said, up to you
22:43 <Arusha_Shuna> : 00:48:848 (6,7) - how about stream of 5 circles?
22:43 <Magicphoenix> : to follow the drums?
22:43 <Arusha_Shuna> : uhuh
22:44 <Arusha_Shuna> : this is insane after all
22:44 <Arusha_Shuna> : 01:07:030 (6,1) - swap new combo
22:45 <Arusha_Shuna> : if you want to follow sapcing that is
22:45 <Arusha_Shuna> : *spacing
22:45 <Arusha_Shuna> : 01:09:393 (3) - new combo
22:46 <Magicphoenix> : 01:08:666 (1) - remove combo here okay then ?
22:46 <Arusha_Shuna> : sure
22:47 <Arusha_Shuna> : 01:55:575 (7) - NC
22:47 <Arusha_Shuna> : *new combo
22:47 <Magicphoenix> : yeah ^^
22:47 <Arusha_Shuna> : 01:56:302 (1,2) - swap new combo
22:48 <Arusha_Shuna> : wait no
22:48 <Arusha_Shuna> : 01:56:302 (1,3) - swap NC
22:48 <Magicphoenix> : 01:54:848 (5) - shouldnt here be the NC _
22:48 <Arusha_Shuna> : "will you...", "WILL" starts on circle (7)
22:49 <Arusha_Shuna> : BUT if you want to follow spacing so be it
22:49 <Magicphoenix> : oohhh good job watson
22:49 <Magicphoenix> : followed lyrics
22:49 <Arusha_Shuna> : ._.
22:50 <Arusha_Shuna> : 02:27:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - align to the center of the map
22:51 <Magicphoenix> : hmm ...i think it's good the way it is
22:53 <Arusha_Shuna> : and oh, all the inheriting timing section is late for at least 11ms
22:53 <Magicphoenix> : woah what
22:53 <Arusha_Shuna> : no wait
22:53 <Arusha_Shuna> : 2-11ms late
22:54 <Arusha_Shuna> : maybe because you changed the BPM back then?
22:54 <Magicphoenix> : oh yup
22:54 <Arusha_Shuna> : i don't know hot to snap inherits
22:54 <Arusha_Shuna> : *how
22:54 <Magicphoenix> : i fixed
22:55 <Magicphoenix> : F6, select all sections
22:55 <Magicphoenix> : and then "Move offset by"
22:55 <Magicphoenix> : it was 15ms too late = =
22:55 <Arusha_Shuna> : k
22:55 <Arusha_Shuna> : then
22:56 <Arusha_Shuna> : tags
22:56 <Arusha_Shuna> : kuroneko-sherald is one word?
22:56 <Arusha_Shuna> : ah never mind
22:57 <Arusha_Shuna> : found out just now
22:57 <Magicphoenix> : ^^
23:02 <Arusha_Shuna> : other diff is fine i guess
star~
Kuroneko-sHerald

TorNis wrote:

[Easy]
(All below comments are about "vocal sliders")
Start feels missplaced.
00:02:303 (2,3,1) - Move (2,3) 1 tick to the left, move (1) 2 ticks to the left and increase (1) for 2 tick maybe? The suggestion for (1) is right, but I'll not change it because I don't change the position of (2,3)
00:41:939 (1,2) - Isn't (1) should be 2 ticks more and (2) the same lenght as (1)? I've tried to do some changes but I don't like it.
01:25:575 (1,2) - again something off with "vocal sliders", maybe you don't follow vocals, but it's weird then.
Chorus is nicely done.

~ Star for non-J vocal song
Sorry, no changes.
Koro McAlpine
Hello.

  • Blue: You must fix this.
    Red: You better fix it!
    Orange: Screenshot ahead.
    Black: Just suggestions though.

    ~Kuro Easy~
  1. 00:30:303 (1): Look how straight I did, check the difference carefully!!!

    ~Normal~
  2. I have nothing to say...

    ~Kite's Hard~
  3. I have nothing to say...


Guess, that's it. *Star*

Thank you and good luck.
Kuroneko-sHerald

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello.

[list]Blue: You must fix this.
Red: You better fix it!
Orange: Screenshot ahead.
Black: Just suggestions though.

~Kuro Easy~
[*]00:30:303 (1): Look how straight I did, check the difference carefully!!!
ATTACH[screenshot019.jpg]
Fixed.

Download: Mayday Parade - Anywhere But Here (Magicphoenix) [Kuro Easy].osu
ThePal
Hello there!

Red: Major issue, you should properly change this.
Green: Minor issue.
Gray: Just a suggestion, no need to change here if you think something else.
Black: Other.

General:
Found out that you have the resnap everything, You should properly do that with all diffs.

[Kuro Easy]
Great map! Only found one thing!
02:01:030 (4) A little too hard for the novice. End at 02:01:212 without return, then put circle at 02:01:575?

[Normal]
Very nicely made indeed! Here's some things:
01:07:030 (5) End slider at 01:07:939?
02:02:303 (6) End slider at 02:03:212?
02:08:304 (1) Timing offset needs to be 02:08:303 to let the slider go at 0.5! (Remember to use "Use Corrent Time" button.(or look at "General")
02:51:939 (spin) Start spin at 02:51:757?
02:57:757 (spin) Start spin at 02:57:575?

[Kite's Hard]
Everything seems to be in order if you do the "general" mod. :)

[Insane]
Pretty nice, but I'm not really to judge Insane maps, since I'm not that good yet. ;P
01:24:757 (6) I know this is Insane, but this won't fit in!

Great beatmap! I will be looking forward to this one! :)
Star~
Topic Starter
Magicphoenix

ThePal wrote:

Hello there!

Red: Major issue, you should properly change this.
Green: Minor issue.
Gray: Just a suggestion, no need to change here if you think something else.
Black: Other.

General:
Found out that you have the resnap everything, You should properly do that with all diffs. Messed up there, fixed

[Kuro Easy]
Great map! Only found one thing!
02:01:030 (4) A little too hard for the novice. End at 02:01:212 without return, then put circle at 02:01:575?

[Normal]
Very nicely made indeed! Here's some things:
01:07:030 (5) End slider at 01:07:939? no
02:02:303 (6) End slider at 02:03:212? no
02:08:304 (1) Timing offset needs to be 02:08:303 to let the slider go at 0.5! (Remember to use "Use Corrent Time" button.(or look at "General") fixed with previous suggestion
02:51:939 (spin) Start spin at 02:51:757? nope
02:57:757 (spin) Start spin at 02:57:575? no

[Kite's Hard]
Everything seems to be in order if you do the "general" mod. :)

[Insane]
Pretty nice, but I'm not really to judge Insane maps, since I'm not that good yet. ;P
01:24:757 (6) I know this is Insane, but this won't fit in! It does..

Great beatmap! I will be looking forward to this one! :)
Star~
Thank you very much ThePal :D
Kuroneko-sHerald

ThePal wrote:

Hello there!

[Kuro Easy]
Great map! Only found one thing!
02:01:030 (4) A little too hard for the novice. End at 02:01:212 without return, then put circle at 02:01:575? Sorry but I don't like it.
indyinyou
Hi~

My suggestions

[Hard]
00:10:666 : remove clap add fin
00:11:212 : ^
01:40:484 : fin

no kd for this
Roddie
Hi.

  1. Remove the letterbox. That black bar on top covering part of the name of that band isn't that great to see. :/
  2. Remove the countdown.
  1. For English's sake, call it Kuro's Easy. :P
  2. 00:52:666-Fix the timing on 1st kiai time. It starts off a little bit late. :P
  3. 01:07:575-I think it would be better if you end the kiai time on 01:08:303.
  4. 01:11:575-Fix the timing on the 2nd kiai time.
  5. 01:14:484-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
  6. 01:39:030 (1)-Add a finish?
  7. 01:47:939-Fix the timing on the 3rd kiai time.
  8. 02:03:939-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
  9. 02:37:393-Fix the timing on the 4th kiai time.
  10. 02:54:121-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
  11. 02:56:303-Fix the timing on the 5th kiai time.
  12. 03:00:303-I think it would be better if you end the kiai time on 02:59:939.
  1. 00:52:666-Fix the timing on 1st kiai time.
  2. 01:07:575-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
  3. 01:11:575-Fix the timing on the 2nd kiai time.
  4. 01:18:666-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
  5. 01:47:939-Fix the timing on the 3rd kiai time.
  6. 02:03:939-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
  7. 02:37:393-Fix the timing on the 4th kiai time.
  8. 02:54:121-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
  9. 02:56:303-Fix the timing on the 5th kiai time.
  10. 03:00:303-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
  1. 00:52:666-Fix the timing on 1st kiai time.
  2. 01:07:030-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
  3. 01:12:848 (6)-Put a new combo here?
  4. 01:13:393 (1)-Remove new combo.
  5. 01:15:757 (1)-^
  6. 01:16:121 (8)-Put a new combo here.
  7. 01:47:939-Fix the timing on the 2nd kiai time.
  8. 02:02:303 (1)-Here's a suggestion. Use the distance snap to space this slider out more to the right. Like this. It might just work out well. ;)
  9. 02:02:848-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
  10. 02:37:393-Fix the timing on the 3rd kiai time.
  11. 02:54:121-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
  12. 02:56:303-Fix the timing on the 4th kiai time.
  13. 03:00:303-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
  1. 00:11:757 (7)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
  2. 00:52:666-Fix the timing on 1st kiai time.
  3. 01:07:575-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
  4. 01:11:575-Fix the timing on the 2nd kiai time.
  5. 01:18:666-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
  6. 01:47:939-Fix the timing on the 34d kiai time.
  7. 02:02:848-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
  8. 02:37:393-Fix the timing on the 4th kiai time.
  9. 02:54:121-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
  10. 02:56:303-Fix the timing on the 5th kiai time.
  11. 03:00:303-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.

And that's it. Good luck!

Star!
Kuroneko-sHerald

Roddie wrote:

Hi.

[Kuro Easy]
  1. For English's sake, call it Kuro's Easy. :PI know that it's wrong in English but there is a reason for it so I won't change.
  2. 00:52:666-Fix the timing on 1st kiai time. It starts off a little bit late. :PFixed.
  3. 01:07:575-I think it would be better if you end the kiai time on 01:08:303. Done.
  4. 01:11:575-Fix the timing on the 2nd kiai time. Fixed.
  5. 01:14:484-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends. Fixed.
  6. 01:39:030 (1)-Add a finish? Done.
  7. 01:47:939-Fix the timing on the 3rd kiai time. Fixed.
  8. 02:03:939-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends. Fixed.
  9. 02:37:393-Fix the timing on the 4th kiai time. Fixed.
  10. 02:54:121-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends. Fixed.
  11. 02:56:303-Fix the timing on the 5th kiai time. Fixed.
  12. 03:00:303-I think it would be better if you end the kiai time on 02:59:939. Done.
Download: Mayday Parade - Anywhere But Here (Magicphoenix) [Kuro Easy].osu
jericho2442
revived
OzzyOzrock
[General]
02:24:666 - Why not add the lyrics in the SB here too? Maybe in a different font or... something... lolol

[Easy]
- Difficulty settings are pretty high for an easy. I'd recommend lowering some a bit.

This is fine. I didn't like where some sliders started though. But eh.
[Normal]
Good as well.
[Hard]
Kite <3
[Insane]
Tick rate 2 sounds bad here, but I guess it's for difficulty? Otherwise rate 1 is good.

At the end, you have 3 sliders. The last one is fine, but how about mapping through the other two?

Anyways, star~.
Topic Starter
Magicphoenix

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[General]
02:24:666 - Why not add the lyrics in the SB here too? Maybe in a different font or... something... lolol Nope, fine like that
[Normal]
Good as well.
[Insane]
Tick rate 2 sounds bad here, but I guess it's for difficulty? Otherwise rate 1 is good. It's necessary for the slow-downs, otherwise you won't notice one

At the end, you have 3 sliders. The last one is fine, but how about mapping through the other two? Pardon me?

Anyways, star~.
Thanks for mod OzzyOzrock! :D
OzzyOzrock
GUH, I meant spinners, not sliders.. lol
Tenshi-nyan
Why's this in WIP

/me runs
Topic Starter
Magicphoenix
Lol you're right ;)
Topic Starter
Magicphoenix
COME ON SOME MAT MOD THIS ! ! :D
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