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please make sure that all mods got checked and replied

Easy
00:31:572 (1) - unnecessary nc imo
00:24:792 (4,5) - well forum pmed

insane still looks messy... especially these slider patterns in kiai plays like hard
for a new mapper it's just a ok diff but far from an enough quality diff, i'd like to give it a pass but you may not get a pass again from another bn
seriously
posted

Bz EsKa wrote:

Underdog's Hard the name is Underdog's or Underdogs' ? it's the latter
00:25:535 (2,3) - Try to converse these two (put the slider at - 00:25:535 - and the circle - 00:26:084 and change the map to fit the jump space) and say me what you think about it :3 it works the same either way
00:37:792 (3,4) - these two aren't parallel ;p fix
I'm done here too :D

Hytex wrote:

re mod lol

[winter story]
uhh you should try and use the default skin
those follow points bug me :o
still great diff tho ;):P
its blanket dude btw ye i know
00:38:706 (5,1) - blanket properly was reluctant but ok
00:33:767 (1) - 00:36:694 (1) - 00:45:474 (1) - 00:48:401 (1) - you used reverses there but not here 00:39:621 (1) - :thinking: there was a slight change on the singing so i made a slight pause to indicate the difference.

kd pls bye u fILtHY kDs faRmEr XdddddddddddddddddddDdDdDD

-Aerith- wrote:

Yea i already tell them :3 , they will answer your mod .... jeez relax kid
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Title:Moshi Kono Kabe no Naka ga Ikken no Ie da to Shitara
TitleUnicode:もしこの壁の中が一軒の家だとしたら
Artist:Linked Horizon
ArtistUnicode:Linked Horizon
Creator:-Aerith-
Version:Underdogs' Hard
Source:進撃の巨人
Tags:進撃の巨人 attack on titan 自由への進撃 kyojin Jiyuu e no Shingeki 柳麻美 Mami Yanagi Sound Horizon Revo Surono -Kyu MisakiAN misakiakill Underdogs Winter Story
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posted

Koiyuki wrote:

please make sure that all mods got checked and replied Okay

Easy
00:31:572 (1) - unnecessary nc imo Fixed ~
00:24:792 (4,5) - well forum pmed uh im sorry what do you mean i dont get it ;w;

insane still looks messy... especially these slider patterns in kiai plays like hard
for a new mapper it's just a ok diff but far from an enough quality diff, i'd like to give it a pass but you may not get a pass again from another bn
seriously yeah you're right lol , but dont worry we will try to fix that :oops:
Thank you very much ~
posted
So sorry for the late reply mod by -Kyu and MisakiAN ;w;

well Kyu has his own reason why he cant reply to some of your mod , wanna know why this is the reason :

No internet at my house,so I can't be online anymore,I'll try to find a way to connect to bancho

and as for MisakiAN , i think i heard my friend said that she's in hospital for 1 week and thats why she cant reply to your mod guys
(i feel bad for her xd i hope she get better soon :cry: )
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I will be in charge for replying on -Kyu's mod for awhile since i feel bad for him that he dont have a internet on his house ;w;

Bz EsKa wrote:

Hey :) new modder, if you may excuse me for my mistake :D

-Kyu's Advanced
00:13:096 - Put 2 circle here instead of a slider can be cool to follow the next patern (or make the next with a slider, or leave it as it right now, all will fit anyway).
i think its fine just like that so... no change ~

00:39:255 - the slider is a bit too much, maybe just a circle here - 00:39:438 is better ? (to separate the combo for each other as a comma, even if I admit that the slider fit best) same
Thats all :D

Good job all of you ! This mapset is really clean and complete by me, I think it can already be ranked ^^ at least, I want it to too.
Sorry for my english, have a good day you all :*
Thanks for the Mod Bz Eska ~
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Bz EsKa wrote:

Hey :) new modder, if you may excuse me for my mistake :D

MisakiAN's Freedom
Nothing in particular to say, I'll prolly miss my beloved triplet on this one but it's really cool to play, so I'll forgive you :P
Maybe some SV change in the first part (before the first kiai) who fit with the music can be cool :) Because 1,5x is fine but I think it can be even better with some change !

Good job all of you ! This mapset is really clean and complete by me, I think it can already be ranked ^^ at least, I want it to too.
Sorry for my english, have a good day you all :*

Hytex wrote:

re mod lol

[misakian]
difficulty needs some polishing in quality
by quality i mean sliders, jumps, flow etc. but flow is alright i guess
00:12:182 (4) - slider tail has higher beat than the head, so try to figure out how to fix this
00:13:096 (7,1) - in my screen they both have the same combo colours, huh
00:13:828 (2,5) - blanket, it looks "bad" when its not blanketed i guess
00:16:755 (2,3) - for me this flow so bad, because you have to rise your cursor when reaching (3)
00:22:426 (2,3) - blanket
00:32:304 (1,2) - should have the same pattern as 00:30:840 (1) - imo
00:37:060 (2,3) - blanket
00:38:157 (1,2) - ^
00:44:011 (3) - maybe try to fix this slider in a proper way
00:45:474 (1,2) - blanket
00:47:304 (3,5) - ^ you should try and look out for the blanket errors and stuff before submitting/update the gd :P
difficulty is still bad in terms of quality since it lacks of polishing
i just pointed out the obvious mistakes

kd pls bye
MisakiAN said she's kinda busy these days and doesnt have time to reply the mod ,
but she said all mods already Fix , so Thank you very much :D
(just let you guys know)
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reb
good luck
posted

Koiyuki wrote:

reb
good luck
Thank you very much :oops:
posted
wehhhhh balik <3

ayoo~
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wew
posted
I am a bit concerned about the storyboard

00:48:401 - the background for this part has no relation to AoT at all,while the rest of the images of the storyboard is AoT related,maybe it can be changed to synchronize it?
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-Kyu wrote:

I am a bit concerned about the storyboard

00:48:401 - the background for this part has no relation to AoT at all,while the rest of the images of the storyboard is AoT related,maybe it can be changed to synchronize it?
hmmm.....i think its alright cause there is part of the lyrics that says this '' The real world* is waiting for us. '' so .,,,,
i try to improvised to make the bg same like the lyrics , which i think thats okay..............

However if some bn later complain about that , I'll change the bg .....
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[general]
*Linked Horizon - Moshi Kono Kabe no Naka ga Ikken no Ie da to Shitara (Aerith123).osb is unused
*進撃の巨人 is already in source field you don't need to add it to tags
*Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
failsound.wav
*speaking about 00:48:401 - the bg is fittable enough to the song as it is in corelation with "the freedom" the bg suggest what the song does too: that we're finally free

[easy]
*AR 3
*i have so many concerns about rhythm structure first of all, i'm not fond of seeing sliders ending on stronger downbeats like 00:18:401 (2) - // 00:21:328 (4) - etc. because the tails does not give enough emphasis as the circles do since the vocal is really stronger at 00:18:401 (2) - for instance a rhythm like this one http://puu.sh/xa6TB/a9667fc9eb.jpg should work and also will give more corelation to the music imo therefore 00:30:109 (2) - can be splitted into 2 1/1 circles since the circle will give more emphasis to the stronger and prominent downbeat from 00:30:840 - than the tail so don't be afraid about using few circles since you need to give the newbie players a momentum from holding and holding since the sliders are actually hard for newbie players
*00:27:913 (1,2) - blanket
*00:35:962 (4,5) - a rhythm like this one http://puu.sh/xa7n1/8a2d99f2cf.png would give more corelation to the music plus moving 00:37:426 (1) - to 00:36:694 (1) - will give more emphasis since it's its head and not its tail and makes the prominent downbeat clicklable // 00:44:743 (2) - here you just need to split in 2 circles that's all but you have to nerf 00:45:840 (1,2,3) - afterwards
*00:51:328 - ~ 01:00:109 - at this whole section you started to put every NC after only every one downbeat which makes inconsistent through the whole diff since you put NCs only after every two downbeats so you most likely have to do the same scheme here too
*01:00:109 (1) - would be better if you'll move the end of the spinner to 01:04:133 - where the song actually ends

[normal]
*00:20:596 (3) - tbh this 1/1 slider with the reverse arrow does not have enough corelation to the song as it follows a bit weird the vocal and the instruments aswell something like this http://puu.sh/xa8qa/838b34d606.jpg would work as it would give more corelance to the music itself imo
*00:33:767 (1) - at 00:45:474 (1,2) - you used 2 1/2 sliders which really give more emphasis to the stronger vocal but here it's a bit weird to see that you used just an 1/1 slider as the song is the same here tbh just split it into 2 1/2 sliders as you did at 00:45:474 (1,2) - in order to give more emphasis to the stronger vocal and keep the consistency as well
*00:51:328 - ~ 01:00:109 - same as I said at Easy
*01:00:109 (1) - same as in Easy with spinner's end

[-kyu's advanced]
*00:07:243 (1) - that's the only diff which has a spinner at the intro which makes it inconsistent trough all diffs consider removing it
*00:11:450 (3) - i would ctrl+G it and move to 280|56 just to give the flow between the previous hitobject and this one a better flow as the current one seems a bit broken
*00:14:377 (5) - this doesn't need to have a hitclap since it does not even fit it
*00:18:035 (1) - needs a hitclap on its reverse arrow // 00:19:133 (2) - hitclap on tail
*00:25:353 (4) - does not need hitclap as it doesn't fit it // 00:26:084 (6) - same
*01:00:200 (1) - same as Easy and Normal

can't find really much except hitsounding issues

[underdogs' hard]
*00:11:084 (3) - its shape says everything: it plays a bit forced as i can see maybe making something like this http://puu.sh/xa9MO/1e87825e55.jpg
would make it play more softly tbh
*00:22:060 - ~ 00:27:731 - that's the only section where you started to raise the spacing so sudden at the first part the jump is a bit noticeable but here you started to raise it more and more making it inconsistent even if the song is the same as the first part do so i guess you should do with the spacing here as you did with the first part so the spacing would be more consistent across the whole diff imo
*00:15:657 (7,1) - blanket
*00:25:718 (3) - remove hitclap from its tail as it does not even fit it
*01:00:109 (1) - same as other diffs

[misakian's freedom]
AR 8.5? AR 9 seems a bit rough
*00:10:353 (1,2,3,4) - i have some concerns about the spacing here first of all the vocal is more stronger between (3)- and (4)- since between (1)- and (2)- the vocal is not really stronger so imo the spacing between (3)- and (4)- should be raised as the vocal is more stronger and the spacing raising will give more emphasis and build-up
*00:13:279 (1) - in the way how (1)- has been positioned it plays a bit...sloppy something like this https://puu.sh/xaavF/32f12ee95f.jpg would be more better to play imo
*00:14:926 (2) - would move this note to 351|137 since having this stacked with 00:14:377 (5) - 's tail drove me crazy and the flow really were broken a bit
*00:25:535 (2,3,4) - this actually should look like this http://puu.sh/xaaHp/2728769851.jpg so it would look more cleaner
*00:35:231 (1) - the flow seems to be a bit weird here so in order to improve it i would ctrl+H it for a better flow and direction of the cursor
*00:43:828 - having an 1/4 circle here just to follow the vocal wouldn't hurt so much as you most likely follow the vocal
*00:46:206 (3,4)- space them more? the vocal is really strong here as the instruments do too and a build-up effect would be good

rhythmically speaking is ok but aesthetics must be improved a little bit before rank

gl!
posted

ByBy wrote:

pm req

grey - suggestion
bold - should be considered

[general]
*Linked Horizon - Moshi Kono Kabe no Naka ga Ikken no Ie da to Shitara (Aerith123).osb is unused
*進撃の巨人 is already in source field you don't need to add it to tags
*Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
failsound.wav
*speaking about 00:48:401 - the bg is fittable enough to the song as it is in corelation with "the freedom" the bg suggest what the song does too: that we're finally free

[easy]
*AR 3
*i have so many concerns about rhythm structure first of all, i'm not fond of seeing sliders ending on stronger downbeats like 00:18:401 (2) - // 00:21:328 (4) - etc. because the tails does not give enough emphasis as the circles do since the vocal is really stronger at 00:18:401 (2) - for instance a rhythm like this one http://puu.sh/xa6TB/a9667fc9eb.jpg should work and also will give more corelation to the music imo therefore 00:30:109 (2) - can be splitted into 2 1/1 circles since the circle will give more emphasis to the stronger and prominent downbeat from 00:30:840 - than the tail so don't be afraid about using few circles since you need to give the newbie players a momentum from holding and holding since the sliders are actually hard for newbie players
*00:27:913 (1,2) - blanket
*00:35:962 (4,5) - a rhythm like this one http://puu.sh/xa7n1/8a2d99f2cf.png would give more corelation to the music plus moving 00:37:426 (1) - to 00:36:694 (1) - will give more emphasis since it's its head and not its tail and makes the prominent downbeat clicklable // 00:44:743 (2) - here you just need to split in 2 circles that's all but you have to nerf 00:45:840 (1,2,3) - afterwards
*00:51:328 - ~ 01:00:109 - at this whole section you started to put every NC after only every one downbeat which makes inconsistent through the whole diff since you put NCs only after every two downbeats so you most likely have to do the same scheme here too
*01:00:109 (1) - would be better if you'll move the end of the spinner to 01:04:133 - where the song actually ends

[normal]
*00:20:596 (3) - tbh this 1/1 slider with the reverse arrow does not have enough corelation to the song as it follows a bit weird the vocal and the instruments aswell something like this http://puu.sh/xa8qa/838b34d606.jpg would work as it would give more corelance to the music itself imo
*00:33:767 (1) - at 00:45:474 (1,2) - you used 2 1/2 sliders which really give more emphasis to the stronger vocal but here it's a bit weird to see that you used just an 1/1 slider as the song is the same here tbh just split it into 2 1/2 sliders as you did at 00:45:474 (1,2) - in order to give more emphasis to the stronger vocal and keep the consistency as well
*00:51:328 - ~ 01:00:109 - same as I said at Easy
*01:00:109 (1) - same as in Easy with spinner's end

rhythmically speaking is ok but aesthetics must be improved a little bit before rank

gl!
Almost Applied and Fixed all of your suggestions , im learning a lot from it ....
Thank you Very Much Byby , Really like your mod !...... oh and for the spinner part ...i prefer the spinner's end end in here -01:03:401 rather than that so.... no change.... but thanks for your opinion btw :oops:
posted
Gonna make this map popped bubble again when all the Gd'er reply their mods ,
But dont worry once i fix all of the error that i dont see in this mapset , Later on ....
I will make this map get bubble once again .......


Sorry for the inconvenience .............
posted

ByBy wrote:

[misakian's freedom]
AR 8.5? AR 9 seems a bit rough okay
*00:10:353 (1,2,3,4) - i have some concerns about the spacing here first of all the vocal is more stronger between (3)- and (4)- since between (1)- and (2)- the vocal is not really stronger so imo the spacing between (3)- and (4)- should be raised as the vocal is more stronger and the spacing raising will give more emphasis and build-up i already fix this but..i forgot to send the update to aerith Im sorry so,yeah fixed
*00:13:279 (1) - in the way how (1)- has been positioned it plays a bit...sloppy something like this https://puu.sh/xaavF/32f12ee95f.jpg would be more better to play imo well,thats a good idea~ fixed
*00:14:926 (2) - would move this note to 351|137 since having this stacked with 00:14:377 (5) - 's tail drove me crazy and the flow really were broken a bit well,fixed,and im gonna change some of this part but not a big change
*00:25:535 (2,3,4) - this actually should look like this http://puu.sh/xaaHp/2728769851.jpg so it would look more cleaner okay..
*00:35:231 (1) - the flow seems to be a bit weird here so in order to improve it i would ctrl+H it for a better flow and direction of the cursor but it kinda akward for me..so i wont change this for now
*00:43:828 - having an 1/4 circle here just to follow the vocal wouldn't hurt so much as you most likely follow the vocal Okay
*00:46:206 (3,4)- space them more? the vocal is really strong here as the instruments do too and a build-up effect would be good okay

rhythmically speaking is ok but aesthetics must be improved a little bit before rank i try :)

gl!
Thanks for your mod

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posted

ByBy wrote:

pm req

grey - suggestion
bold - should be considered

[-kyu's advanced]
*00:07:243 (1) - that's the only diff which has a spinner at the intro which makes it inconsistent trough all diffs consider removing it didn't realise this at all,removed
*00:11:450 (3) - i would ctrl+G it and move to 280|56 just to give the flow between the previous hitobject and this one a better flow as the current one seems a bit broken good one,fixed
*00:14:377 (5) - this doesn't need to have a hitclap since it does not even fit it
*00:18:035 (1) - needs a hitclap on its reverse arrow // 00:19:133 (2) - hitclap on tail
*00:25:353 (4) - does not need hitclap as it doesn't fit it // 00:26:084 (6) - same all fix the hitsounds
*01:00:200 (1) - same as Easy and Normal now this is the problem,personally i would change it but for me its best to follow what Aerith wants,and since she declines this, im doing it the same too

can't find really much except hitsounding issues

gl!
Thanks for the mod!
i suck at hitsounding
also @Aerith could you add my old username in tags? thanks!~

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posted
sorry for the late reply

ByBy : accepted all except the spinner part. Didn't want to waste a good slider for a spinner. Thanks a lot for modding

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164,52,30840,6,0,P|208:60|184:160,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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424,264,34865,2,0,P|440:212|440:168,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,68,35231,2,0,B|332:88|332:88|232:68,1,160
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504,272,37609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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311,184,39255,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,312,39438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,332,39621,6,0,P|112:300|76:200,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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276,296,41084,2,0,L|436:344,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,216,41633,2,0,P|432:168|344:104,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,42182,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,42365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,184,42548,6,0,B|120:240|120:240|76:272|76:348,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,332,43096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,332,43279,2,0,B|264:312|264:312|380:336,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,43828,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,44011,2,0,B|368:252|368:252|252:228,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,136,44560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,44743,2,0,L|108:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,344,45109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,233,45292,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,116,45474,6,0,P|116:92|24:132,2,160,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,220,46389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,124,46572,2,0,L|328:36,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,108,46938,2,0,L|420:272,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,340,47487,2,0,B|276:312|276:312|156:336,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,252,48035,2,0,L|180:232,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,160,48401,6,0,P|312:120|212:92,2,160,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,268,49316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,328,49499,2,0,P|372:340|440:340,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,236,49865,2,0,P|444:224|376:224,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,104,50231,2,0,P|330:120|281:169,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,88,50596,2,0,P|180:124|179:192,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,288,50962,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,284,51145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,132,51328,6,0,P|88:112|176:164,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,51877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,152,52060,2,0,L|336:68,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,24,52426,2,0,L|459:103,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,208,52792,2,0,B|356:188|356:188|236:212,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,324,53340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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140,148,54072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,280,54255,6,0,P|272:300|376:264,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,208,54804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,108,54987,2,0,L|380:16,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,184,55535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,100,55718,2,0,P|148:72|48:100,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,196,56267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,288,56450,2,0,P|108:316|208:288,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,56999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,292,57182,6,0,L|380:376,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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244,228,58462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,58645,2,0,P|204:80|200:16,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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136,272,59377,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,272,59560,1,4,3:0:0:0:
256,300,59743,1,4,3:0:0:0:
256,300,59926,1,4,3:0:0:0:
344,348,60109,6,0,B|380:216|248:200|248:200|368:188|368:188|376:144|440:116|440:116|252:112|252:112|236:56|148:28|72:68|80:160,1,863.999973632813,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:


also aerith can you add the word 'S' on the Underdog? i dont want people to mistype my name for someone else thanks
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