Linked Horizon - Moshi Kono Kabe no Naka ga Ikken no Ie dato · forum

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2016-10-13T09:41:45+00:00

[quote="PeterEU"]

Normal

Hey what about circle after this slider 00:19:133 (1) -

Hard

There could be circle after this slider too 00:33:767 (1) -
same 00:26:084 (3) -

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okay nice advice....i'll think about it
btw thanks 4 taking ur time modding this map even if just a little.....i appreciate it

myAccSuks

30 posts

Joined July 2016

myAccSuks 2016-10-15T03:42:45+00:00

dang... looking through, I wonder if you still need my mod xd... I'll try my best to see if there's anything else that i find funky and what not. Umm, just a heads up, I can't mania, and my taiko is a joke, hitsounding.... still gotta learn that :C so I won't be able to help you out there. Anyways, here we go.
In all honesty, the maps to me, looked compeletly fine. So most the things i mention are 100% opinion and me just looking at the small details. so yeah, it's up to you if they make sense or not.

Normal Diff

First off, a few words from the best mod in town... aimod..... https://puu.sh/rJm0X/895055a2ce.png
Umm, so yeah, just check those two objects and relocated if necessary.
In terms of kiai, I'm not sure if the aimod applies there considering that the map in general is very very short, so I don't know if this kiai rules applies. sorry

00:33:767 (2,3,4) - hmm, i feel like you can blanket this better. move the 3 down a bit, so it fits snuggly in the 1st slider, then relocate slider 4 so circle 3 is surrounded perfectly between the two sliders. https://puu.sh/rJn0I/8eef2716fe.png As you can see in this terrible attempt to show you what i was thinking, in short, I just think you can make this look "cleaner" by having it nicely surrounded. Of course, that 2 slider won't blanket perfectly, but it's waaay too long for that imo.

00:42:548 (3) - umm, again, you can fix this so it blankets the note 2 better. (sorry if it seems like i'm just nitpicking pointless stuff, so many mods have been applied so it's literally perfect to me). also, people always point this out to me, but you just need 3 anchors to form that turn. Why does the number of anchors matter? idk, but people always tell me that so, might as well pass it on.

well, that's what i thought of for normal. I thought the patterns look good, my only remarks would be if you wanted to, you could blanked a few sliders and circles better. That's all.

Light Hard Diff

a light hard... can't say i've played a lot of those...

Aimod says.... 01:00:109 - You have two timing points exist at the same time! and yeah, you do. idk.

00:11:816 (5) - this slider right here, either make it a smooth turn, or angle the entrance better. It's a very minimal thing to note, but to me, it seems oddly angled. here's another janky pic to try and convey what i'm saying xd. https://puu.sh/rJnMT/897ecc34d4.png

00:27:365 (10,11) - same as above. again, it's not a problem what so ever, i'm just being a jerk rn. https://puu.sh/rJnV3/8c289f42a0.png

and well... that's all i have to say about light hard. Again, it's already a good map, so i can only pick at the pointless little details that bother me only.

hard

00:44:374 - ai mod says your kiai isn't snapped on!

Honestly. this map looks fine to me so... i'm just point out little details that i noticed... again, they are just really minimal design details
00:19:865 (3) - the 3 slider is a little bit off. move it very very very slightly to the right. as you can see in the pic, my cursor is pointing to a little gap, so the slider is just offset by a little. https://puu.sh/rJowJ/67635cfd64.png

00:31:389 (2,3) - did you want to blanket these?

00:33:401 (3,1) - same here? did you want to have slider 3 wrap around the head of slider 4? i mean, you could if you wanted to... but opinions are opinions.

Nerthar's Insane

00:27:182 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should slightly rotate the square jump. I say this because in the previous set, you have some 60 degree (or sharp angle) jumps, but then you transition with this fat obtuse angle into the square. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6325019 Just some idea i had in my mind. all i did was rotate the square, (ctrl shift r) and then moved the slider (slider 5) to the left for that gap distance.

01:00:109 - Personally, i think you should move this to the left, make the angle from 2 - 3 wider. I think it'll play out nicer.

In all honesty, there's not much to do with it, so I just nit picked some design things that could be changed. of course, that's just my opinons, so feel free to discard them. Anyways, i enjoyed the beatmap, and wish you luck in the ranking process.

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2016-10-15T06:42:05+00:00

ihatedwang wrote:
dang... looking through, I wonder if you still need my mod xd... I'll try my best to see if there's anything else that i find funky and what not. Umm, just a heads up, I can't mania, and my taiko is a joke, hitsounding.... still gotta learn that :C so I won't be able to help you out there. Anyways, here we go.
In all honesty, the maps to me, looked compeletly fine. So most the things i mention are 100% opinion and me just looking at the small details. so yeah, it's up to you if they make sense or not.

Normal Diff
First off, a few words from the best mod in town... aimod..... https://puu.sh/rJm0X/895055a2ce.png
Umm, so yeah, just check those two objects and relocated if necessary.
In terms of kiai, I'm not sure if the aimod applies there considering that the map in general is very very short, so I don't know if this kiai rules applies. sorry

00:33:767 (2,3,4) - hmm, i feel like you can blanket this better. move the 3 down a bit, so it fits snuggly in the 1st slider, then relocate slider 4 so circle 3 is surrounded perfectly between the two sliders. https://puu.sh/rJn0I/8eef2716fe.png As you can see in this terrible attempt to show you what i was thinking, in short, I just think you can make this look "cleaner" by having it nicely surrounded. Of course, that 2 slider won't blanket perfectly, but it's waaay too long for that imo.

00:42:548 (3) - umm, again, you can fix this so it blankets the note 2 better. (sorry if it seems like i'm just nitpicking pointless stuff, so many mods have been applied so it's literally perfect to me). also, people always point this out to me, but you just need 3 anchors to form that turn. Why does the number of anchors matter? idk, but people always tell me that so, might as well pass it on.

well, that's what i thought of for normal. I thought the patterns look good, my only remarks would be if you wanted to, you could blanked a few sliders and circles better. That's all.

Light Hard Diff
a light hard... can't say i've played a lot of those...

Aimod says.... 01:00:109 - You have two timing points exist at the same time! and yeah, you do. idk.

00:11:816 (5) - this slider right here, either make it a smooth turn, or angle the entrance better. It's a very minimal thing to note, but to me, it seems oddly angled. here's another janky pic to try and convey what i'm saying xd. https://puu.sh/rJnMT/897ecc34d4.png

00:27:365 (10,11) - same as above. again, it's not a problem what so ever, i'm just being a jerk rn. https://puu.sh/rJnV3/8c289f42a0.png

and well... that's all i have to say about light hard. Again, it's already a good map, so i can only pick at the pointless little details that bother me only.

hard
00:44:374 - ai mod says your kiai isn't snapped on!

Honestly. this map looks fine to me so... i'm just point out little details that i noticed... again, they are just really minimal design details
00:19:865 (3) - the 3 slider is a little bit off. move it very very very slightly to the right. as you can see in the pic, my cursor is pointing to a little gap, so the slider is just offset by a little. https://puu.sh/rJowJ/67635cfd64.png

00:31:389 (2,3) - did you want to blanket these?

00:33:401 (3,1) - same here? did you want to have slider 3 wrap around the head of slider 4? i mean, you could if you wanted to... but opinions are opinions.

Nerthar's Insane
00:27:182 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should slightly rotate the square jump. I say this because in the previous set, you have some 60 degree (or sharp angle) jumps, but then you transition with this fat obtuse angle into the square. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6325019 Just some idea i had in my mind. all i did was rotate the square, (ctrl shift r) and then moved the slider (slider 5) to the left for that gap distance.

01:00:109 - Personally, i think you should move this to the left, make the angle from 2 - 3 wider. I think it'll play out nicer.

In all honesty, there's not much to do with it, so I just nit picked some design things that could be changed. of course, that's just my opinons, so feel free to discard them. Anyways, i enjoyed the beatmap, and wish you luck in the ranking process.

Wow! thanks 4 modding it (i really need it right now) and for the kiai i think its fine i guess....im not going to chance anything for that one

-Kyu

487 posts

Joined October 2015

-Kyu 2016-10-15T08:01:28+00:00

ihatedwang wrote:
dang... looking through, I wonder if you still need my mod xd... I'll try my best to see if there's anything else that i find funky and what not. Umm, just a heads up, I can't mania, and my taiko is a joke, hitsounding.... still gotta learn that :C so I won't be able to help you out there. Anyways, here we go.
In all honesty, the maps to me, looked compeletly fine. So most the things i mention are 100% opinion and me just looking at the small details. so yeah, it's up to you if they make sense or not.

Light Hard Diff
a light hard... can't say i've played a lot of those...

Aimod says.... 01:00:109 - You have two timing points exist at the same time! and yeah, you do. idk.

00:11:816 (5) - this slider right here, either make it a smooth turn, or angle the entrance better. It's a very minimal thing to note, but to me, it seems oddly angled. here's another janky pic to try and convey what i'm saying xd. https://puu.sh/rJnMT/897ecc34d4.png

00:27:365 (10,11) - same as above. again, it's not a problem what so ever, i'm just being a jerk rn. https://puu.sh/rJnV3/8c289f42a0.png

and well... that's all i have to say about light hard. Again, it's already a good map, so i can only pick at the pointless little details that bother me only.

In all honesty, there's not much to do with it, so I just nit picked some design things that could be changed. of course, that's just my opinons, so feel free to discard them. Anyways, i enjoyed the beatmap, and wish you luck in the ranking process.

Fixed all and did some remap,thanks for the mod!

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oh,and i have to say something,the new BG is reaaally unnecessary,i like the previous one better since there's a rain sb at the kiai part,which makes it more cooler

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2016-10-15T08:11:58+00:00

ExKyu wrote:

ihatedwang wrote:
dang... looking through, I wonder if you still need my mod xd... I'll try my best to see if there's anything else that i find funky and what not. Umm, just a heads up, I can't mania, and my taiko is a joke, hitsounding.... still gotta learn that :C so I won't be able to help you out there. Anyways, here we go.
In all honesty, the maps to me, looked compeletly fine. So most the things i mention are 100% opinion and me just looking at the small details. so yeah, it's up to you if they make sense or not.

Light Hard Diff
a light hard... can't say i've played a lot of those...

Aimod says.... 01:00:109 - You have two timing points exist at the same time! and yeah, you do. idk.

00:11:816 (5) - this slider right here, either make it a smooth turn, or angle the entrance better. It's a very minimal thing to note, but to me, it seems oddly angled. here's another janky pic to try and convey what i'm saying xd. https://puu.sh/rJnMT/897ecc34d4.png

00:27:365 (10,11) - same as above. again, it's not a problem what so ever, i'm just being a jerk rn. https://puu.sh/rJnV3/8c289f42a0.png

and well... that's all i have to say about light hard. Again, it's already a good map, so i can only pick at the pointless little details that bother me only.

In all honesty, there's not much to do with it, so I just nit picked some design things that could be changed. of course, that's just my opinons, so feel free to discard them. Anyways, i enjoyed the beatmap, and wish you luck in the ranking process.

Fixed all and did some remap,thanks for the mod!

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oh,and i have to say something,the new BG is reaaally unnecessary,i like the previous one better since there's a rain sb at the kiai part,which makes it more cooler

You really think so ? well ........Okay I Will Change It

Last edited by -Aerith- 2016-10-17T13:22:15+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Nerthar

67 posts

Joined May 2014

Nerthar 2016-10-15T08:26:55+00:00

ihatedwang wrote:
Nerthar's Insane
00:27:182 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should slightly rotate the square jump. I say this because in the previous set, you have some 60 degree (or sharp angle) jumps, but then you transition with this fat obtuse angle into the square. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6325019 Just some idea i had in my mind. all i did was rotate the square, (ctrl shift r) and then moved the slider (slider 5) to the left for that gap distance. I agree with that, fixed

01:00:109 - Personally, i think you should move this to the left, make the angle from 2 - 3 wider. I think it'll play out nicer. Same, fixed

Heres the fix

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N0thing

104 posts

Joined October 2015

N0thing 2016-10-17T14:59:13+00:00

general for every diff (timing points)

00:39:621 (1,2) - insert timing point making those sliders slower? maybe on other maps too, I think it fits the music

00:55:718 (5) - timing make 0.75 from that point on

00:59:377 (2) - hitsounds 80%, else they hurt ears. else no ranked I think? I can't really remember the words of the one who modded my map and said that they need to be at most at 80%

01:00:474 (1) - let spinner end 2 white ticks earlier and then compare when you play it

There might be a lot more oppurtinities where you can just make it slower and it will turn beautiful, but I probably missed them so you should keep looking out (slower or faster)

normal diff

00:12:548 (4) - maybe make it new Combo and HP higher? that way the HRDT player will have a little bit more challenge and normal players feel more of the music IMO though.

00:21:328 (4) I'd shorten it to red tick before and set a slider from white tick onward to next white tick

00:27:182 (3) - ^but to the red tick before next slider

00:40:718 (1) - normal players won't be able to play this slider, cuz 3 reverse arrows. How about circles instead of reverse arrows?

00:50:596 (2) - slighty change slidershape so that it looks better (or maybe not, I'm not sure about that)

Light Hard

00:11:450 (3) - why did you stack that one? I think spreading it might be better for that start

00:22:060 (1,2,3) - in stark constrast to everything else you did

00:23:157 (4) - maybe move slider around so that circle is not above slider (and move circles around)? If no solution found, then jsut keep old style.

00:29:743 (1) - try this http://puu.sh/rM3vK/71dff83d07.jpg

00:36:328 (6) - can#t hear a sound, also feels uncomfortable. maybe delete circle 6, but keep circle7, new combo at circle 7 and delete new combo at following slider

00:38:157 (1) - don't think that's a good place for a reverse slider

00:47:487 (4) - slider instead of circle

00:58:279 (2,3,4) - too hard for light hard, move closer or change to slider

Hard

00:10:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - too sharp, it's insane diff at that point

00:20:413 (1) - move more to the right?

00:44:926 (5,6,7) - if there is some guy saying that it's too hard for hard, it's barely alright and will probably be one of the good points later on

00:49:865 (8) - either change circle 7 or move the slider up, you decide. It#s too sharp now

Insane

edited stuff here, thought about previous style sorry

00:12:913 (2,3,4) - this part here is going to make so many ppl miss XD. Why stack though?

00:16:206 (1) - ugly slidershape

00:26:999 (4) - stack that properly so ppl can see it

00:27:913 (5) - ugly slidershape

00:35:962 (4) - try Strg+H

00:47:304 (2,3) - maybe line 'em up? personal opinion though, if not, then change slider (1)

00:49:865 (1) - ugly slidershape, no reason for loop,

00:50:962 (3,4) - too unexpected and hard for insane, try lining them up to the next slider

00:52:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice oppurtinity for shape, no need to stack 5 and 6

00:54:255 (1) - ugly slidershape which shouldn#t be stacked by the circle before, that way it will lose power

00:55:718 (4) - ugly slidershape

00:57:182 (2) - nice slider
00:58:645 (5) - nice too

01:00:109 (3) - personally I'd change it (to spinner maybe), but this one here is not so bad

___

Sorry for rough mod, just pointing things which I personally would change, but next to every of that what I suggested can also just be kept the way it is now. Maybe you also just think about that part and do something else which is even better!

I liked the map, the SB can already be ranked XD

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2016-10-18T01:11:11+00:00

N0thing wrote:
general for every diff (timing points)
00:39:621 (1,2) - insert timing point making those sliders slower? maybe on other maps too, I think it fits the music (Not gonna insert timing point on other DIFF. i know it fits the music, but i just not gonna do that )

00:55:718 (5) - timing make 0.75 from that point on (Ok)

00:59:377 (2) - hitsounds 80%, else they hurt ears. else no ranked I think? I can't really remember the words of the one who modded my map and said that they need to be at most at 80% (Alright )

01:00:474 (1) - let spinner end 2 white ticks earlier and then compare when you play it (Good Advice )

There might be a lot more oppurtinities where you can just make it slower and it will turn beautiful, but I probably missed them so you should keep looking out (slower or faster)

normal diff
00:12:548 (4) - maybe make it new Combo and HP higher? that way the HRDT player will have a little bit more challenge and normal players feel more of the music IMO though. (Okay )

00:21:328 (4) I'd shorten it to red tick before and set a slider from white tick onward to next white tick

00:27:182 (3) - ^but to the red tick before next slider

00:40:718 (1) - normal players won't be able to play this slider, cuz 3 reverse arrows. How about circles instead of reverse arrows?
(Okay, i decide to changed it to short sliders)

00:50:596 (2) - slighty change slidershape so that it looks better (or maybe not, I'm not sure about that)
(Okay)

Light Hard
00:11:450 (3) - why did you stack that one? I think spreading it might be better for that start

00:22:060 (1,2,3) - in stark constrast to everything else you did

00:23:157 (4) - maybe move slider around so that circle is not above slider (and move circles around)? If no solution found, then jsut keep old style.

00:29:743 (1) - try this http://puu.sh/rM3vK/71dff83d07.jpg

00:36:328 (6) - can#t hear a sound, also feels uncomfortable. maybe delete circle 6, but keep circle7, new combo at circle 7 and delete new combo at following slider

00:38:157 (1) - don't think that's a good place for a reverse slider

00:47:487 (4) - slider instead of circle

00:58:279 (2,3,4) - too hard for light hard, move closer or change to slider

Hard
00:10:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - too sharp, it's insane diff at that point (Yeah i Realize that too xD)

00:20:413 (1) - move more to the right? (Alright)

00:44:926 (5,6,7) - if there is some guy saying that it's too hard for hard, it's barely alright and will probably be one of the good points later on
(for that part i changed to short sliders too)

00:49:865 (8) - either change circle 7 or move the slider up, you decide. It#s too sharp now
(Changed it )

Insane
edited stuff here, thought about previous style sorry

00:12:913 (2,3,4) - this part here is going to make so many ppl miss XD. Why stack though?

00:16:206 (1) - ugly slidershape

00:26:999 (4) - stack that properly so ppl can see it

00:27:913 (5) - ugly slidershape

00:35:962 (4) - try Strg+H

00:47:304 (2,3) - maybe line 'em up? personal opinion though, if not, then change slider (1)

00:49:865 (1) - ugly slidershape, no reason for loop,

00:50:962 (3,4) - too unexpected and hard for insane, try lining them up to the next slider

00:52:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice oppurtinity for shape, no need to stack 5 and 6

00:54:255 (1) - ugly slidershape which shouldn#t be stacked by the circle before, that way it will lose power

00:55:718 (4) - ugly slidershape

00:57:182 (2) - nice slider
00:58:645 (5) - nice too

01:00:109 (3) - personally I'd change it (to spinner maybe), but this one here is not so bad
___

Sorry for rough mod, just pointing things which I personally would change, but next to every of that what I suggested can also just be kept the way it is now. Maybe you also just think about that part and do something else which is even better!

I liked the map, the SB can already be ranked XD

Thanks for the mod "Nothing !

Nerthar

67 posts

Joined May 2014

Nerthar 2016-10-18T19:31:22+00:00

N0thing wrote:
Insane
00:12:913 (2,3,4) - this part here is going to make so many ppl miss XD. Why stack though? I don't believe people would miss on that, this is pretty easy to follow since the stacking is due to the linear voice, It might be changed tho

00:16:206 (1) - ugly slidershape Modified, Rip slider skills

00:26:999 (4) - stack that properly so ppl can see it I believe that was readable, fixed tho

00:27:913 (5) - ugly slidershape <3

00:35:962 (4) - try Strg+H Done, was interesting, but damn that made me rework a big part

00:47:304 (2,3) - maybe line 'em up? personal opinion though, if not, then change slider (1) Well, I prefered keeping the flow and making a more circular slider

00:49:865 (1) - ugly slidershape, no reason for loop, Yup

00:50:962 (3,4) - too unexpected and hard for insane, try lining them up to the next slider Done + next slider slightly changed

00:52:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice oppurtinity for shape, no need to stack 5 and 6 Tried something different, I hope that'll be good

00:54:255 (1) - ugly slidershape which shouldn#t be stacked by the circle before, that way it will lose power <3

00:55:718 (4) - ugly slidershape Rip me

00:57:182 (2) - nice slider Oh rly ???
00:58:645 (5) - nice too Good Guy

01:00:109 (3) - personally I'd change it (to spinner maybe), but this one here is not so bad For once that I made a decent slider, I'll keep it :p
___

Sorry for rough mod, just pointing things which I personally would change, but next to every of that what I suggested can also just be kept the way it is now. Maybe you also just think about that part and do something else which is even better!

I liked the map, the SB can already be ranked XD

Yay was waiting for someone to point out my slider designing skills Kappa, Thanks for the mod, here's the fix I believe http://puu.sh/rNsp7/9de0cd3b33.osu

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2016-10-19T02:11:58+00:00

We have irc about the sb,

08:19 Aerith123: hi mbak :D
08:19 Mako Sakata: Hallo
08:20 Aerith123: bagaimana cara buat pulse di Storyboard ya ?
08:22 Mako Sakata: Map apa?
08:23 Mako Sakata: Perasaan kmrn minta buatin ya
08:23 Aerith123: yg ini
08:23 *Aerith123 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1066088 Linked Horizon - Moshi Kono Kabe no naka ga Ikken no Ie Dato Shitara]
08:23 Aerith123: yup
08:27 Mako Sakata: Download dlu bentar
08:27 Aerith123: ok
08:30 Mako Sakata: Bagian mana aja yang mau dikasih pulse? o.o
08:30 Aerith123: bagian kiai nya aja
08:31 Mako Sakata: Bagian ini 00:33:767 - sama ini aja 00:45:474 - ?
08:31 Aerith123: kiai nya ada 2 kali jadi pulse nya cuma 2 aja :D
08:32 Aerith123: iyah
08:32 Mako Sakata: Err ini efek hujannya terlalu cepet muncul, harusnya baru mulai muncul di bagian ini 00:33:767 - 
08:32 Mako Sakata: Biar pas sama mulai kiai
08:34 Aerith123: okay
08:34 Mako Sakata: Bentar ya aku buat pulse nya
09:10 Mako Sakata: Udah jadi

New sb: http://puu.sh/rNPvp/82bfbf7c52.osb

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2016-10-19T02:25:01+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:

We have irc about the sb,

08:19 Aerith123: hi mbak :D
08:19 Mako Sakata: Hallo
08:20 Aerith123: bagaimana cara buat pulse di Storyboard ya ?
08:22 Mako Sakata: Map apa?
08:23 Mako Sakata: Perasaan kmrn minta buatin ya
08:23 Aerith123: yg ini
08:23 *Aerith123 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1066088 Linked Horizon - Moshi Kono Kabe no naka ga Ikken no Ie Dato Shitara]
08:23 Aerith123: yup
08:27 Mako Sakata: Download dlu bentar
08:27 Aerith123: ok
08:30 Mako Sakata: Bagian mana aja yang mau dikasih pulse? o.o
08:30 Aerith123: bagian kiai nya aja
08:31 Mako Sakata: Bagian ini 00:33:767 - sama ini aja 00:45:474 - ?
08:31 Aerith123: kiai nya ada 2 kali jadi pulse nya cuma 2 aja :D
08:32 Aerith123: iyah
08:32 Mako Sakata: Err ini efek hujannya terlalu cepet muncul, harusnya baru mulai muncul di bagian ini 00:33:767 - 
08:32 Mako Sakata: Biar pas sama mulai kiai
08:34 Aerith123: okay
08:34 Mako Sakata: Bentar ya aku buat pulse nya
09:10 Mako Sakata: Udah jadi

New sb: http://puu.sh/rNPvp/82bfbf7c52.osb

Makasih ya mbak , StoryBoard nya Bagus

-Kyu

487 posts

Joined October 2015

-Kyu 2016-10-19T16:15:02+00:00

N0thing wrote:
Light Hard
00:11:450 (3) - why did you stack that one? I think spreading it might be better for that start but i like it~

00:22:060 (1,2,3) - in stark constrast to everything else you did i don't get this one

00:23:157 (4) - maybe move slider around so that circle is not above slider (and move circles around)? If no solution found, then jsut keep old style. was a bit confused,but changed it however?

00:29:743 (1) - try this http://puu.sh/rM3vK/71dff83d07.jpg Fixed

00:36:328 (6) - can#t hear a sound, also feels uncomfortable. maybe delete circle 6, but keep circle7, new combo at circle 7 and delete new combo at following slider there is a sound there.also,i think with the clap,it syncs with the song perfectly

00:38:157 (1) - don't think that's a good place for a reverse slider Fixed

00:47:487 (4) - slider instead of circle nah

00:58:279 (2,3,4) - too hard for light hard, move closer or change to slider oh come on,it's just 3 notes,can't be that hard...

Sorry for rough mod, just pointing things which I personally would change, but next to every of that what I suggested can also just be kept the way it is now. Maybe you also just think about that part and do something else which is even better!

Thanks for mod~

Now did some remap again with my mapping style (maybe)

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N0thing

104 posts

Joined October 2015

N0thing 2016-10-20T15:18:49+00:00

Quote:
00:58:279 (2,3,4) - too hard for light hard, move closer or change to slider oh come on,it's just 3 notes,can't be that hard...
Response:
I meant it was too hard for hard diff, yours is a Light hard, so it's supposed to be even easier

Gonna mod it again later, my mapping skills have improved a lot.

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

toara_fict 2016-10-21T05:45:36+00:00

Sorry late.

Mod request as Aerith123

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[

Sur's Muzukashii]

00:33:035 (43) - Change K ? ( Oni put K & high vocal sounds. )
00:43:279 (10) - add Finish ?
01:00:474 (31) - delete line. 01:00:109 - Vol 45%
Recheck : Widescreen Support. and Display storyboard

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

[

Sur's Oni]

00:43:279 (10) - add Finish ?
Recheck : Widescreen Support. and Display storyboard

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Nice Taiko diff Good Luck :3/

Surono

7,195 posts

Joined November 2013

Surono 2016-10-21T13:38:18+00:00

toara_fict wrote:
Sorry late.

Mod request as Aerith123

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[Sur's Muzukashii]
00:33:035 (43) - Change K ? ( Oni put K & high vocal sounds. ) hmm, I put D on this diff bcus for comparisson with 00:33:035 (43) - this. both of K and D is nice., maybe I keep it for D as Deeply vocal

00:43:279 (10) - add Finish ? ok, nice emphasis vocal and cymbal

01:00:474 (31) - delete line. 01:00:109 - Vol 45% fixed

Recheck : Widescreen Support. and Display storyboard
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

[Sur's Oni]
00:43:279 (10) - add Finish ? ok

Recheck : Widescreen Support. and Display storyboard
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Nice Taiko diff Good Luck :3/ Thank you very much!

about widescreen and display sb I keep it avaible., maybe its nice for taco

Update: https://puu.sh/rQAwW/51a5ff91f3.rar

Aerith, bisa gak cocokin posisi SB+BG sama gameplay taikonya? tolong ya!

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2016-10-21T21:39:31+00:00

Surono wrote:
toara_fict wrote:
Sorry late.

Mod request as Aerith123

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

[Sur's Muzukashii]
00:33:035 (43) - Change K ? ( Oni put K & high vocal sounds. ) hmm, I put D on this diff bcus for comparisson with 00:33:035 (43) - this. both of K and D is nice., maybe I keep it for D as Deeply vocal

00:43:279 (10) - add Finish ? ok, nice emphasis vocal and cymbal

01:00:474 (31) - delete line. 01:00:109 - Vol 45% fixed

Recheck : Widescreen Support. and Display storyboard
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

[Sur's Oni]
00:43:279 (10) - add Finish ? ok

Recheck : Widescreen Support. and Display storyboard
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Nice Taiko diff Good Luck :3/ Thank you very much!
about widescreen and display sb I keep it avaible., maybe its nice for taco

Update: https://puu.sh/rQAwW/51a5ff91f3.rar

Aerith, bisa gak cocokin posisi SB+BG sama gameplay taikonya? tolong ya!

Oke akan kuusahakan ya !

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

El SolarBeam 2016-10-23T13:37:58+00:00

Well, regarding your third time asking if this map is rankable, yes I suppose it is, assuming this map is labeled as the first map you made. But as I said several times before, I recommend you to ask some experienced modder (one or two is enough, considering the map length) to mod your map. Well, I won't be that meanie bastard of a modder this time, but when you found someone experienced enough, ask them to focus on modding the flow as I think it's the most lacking thing in your map right now, especially on the harder diff.

Goodluck and ciao~

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2016-10-23T14:22:02+00:00

Just some complaints.
My personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Normal

re-adjust the ds between notes to keep 1.0x? 00:32:304 (4,1,2) - only 0.93x, and 00:38:523 (3,4) - 1.07x
00:39:621 (4,1) - 00:43:645 (5,1) - blanket should be better
00:50:596 (2) - finish should be added on the tail, not the whole slider, and missing clap on the head
00:33:401 (1,2) - swap nc
00:54:987 (3,1,2,3,4) - this part of rhythm works quite weird for me, 00:58:645 - is better to be a slider/note's head which is clickable, 00:54:987 (3) - i dont even know which track you are following
01:00:109 (1) - mute it?

ExKyu's Light Hard

00:13:645 (1) - remove nc, like 00:11:450 (3) -
00:38:157 (1) - ^
00:44:011 (1) - too many spinners, i recommend to change this into 2 sliders
01:00:109 (1) - mute

Hard

sv 2.0 is too high
00:19:133 (1) - nc is not necessary
00:22:243 (4,1) - swap nc

main problem:

too high sv with not good sliders and patterns design
the rhythm in kiai time is too weak
nc patterns dont follow the music

Nerthar's Insane

00:12:913 (2,3,4) - why antijump? is this part anywhere special?
00:20:596 (4) - nc for changing sv
00:23:340 (1,2) - swap nc
00:27:913 (5) - nc
00:33:035 (2) - nc for changing sv
00:35:231 (1,2,3,4) - flow not well, plays bad for me
00:37:426 (3,4,1,2) - stack?
00:39:621 (1,2,3,4) - comparing with the same former rhythm at 00:36:694 (1,2,3,4) - , do you even think the ds here is quite small?
00:40:352 (3,4) - also nc for sv change and the anti looks weird
00:49:865 (5) - nc
00:54:255 (6,9) - nc, and why 00:54:255 (6) - end at 1/8?
01:00:109 (3) - mute the end

slider shape looks ugly imo....
and the diff is full of unnecessary overlap, the usage of ds is also not comfortable.

i am not good at pointing out my idea in English ahh
you all should learn more about patterns usage, rhythm setting from ranked maps, imo the std diffs still need a long way to go.

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2016-10-23T23:22:13+00:00

El SolarBeam wrote:
Well, regarding your third time asking if this map is rankable, yes I suppose it is, assuming this map is labeled as the first map you made. But as I said several times before, I recommend you to ask some experienced modder (one or two is enough, considering the map length) to mod your map. Well, I won't be that meanie bastard of a modder this time, but when you found someone experienced enough, ask them to focus on modding the flow as I think it's the most lacking thing in your map right now, especially on the harder diff.

Goodluck and ciao~

Thanks for the answer

. Well im not gonna planned to rank it right now. (Still Need a long way to go

)

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2016-10-24T09:26:47+00:00

[quote="Koiyuki"]

Just some complaints.
My personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Normal

re-adjust the ds between notes to keep 1.0x? 00:32:304 (4,1,2) - only 0.93x, and 00:38:523 (3,4) - 1.07x (Okay)
00:39:621 (4,1) - 00:43:645 (5,1) - blanket should be better (Okay)
00:50:596 (2) - finish should be added on the tail, not the whole slider, and missing clap on the head ( nice advice )
00:33:401 (1,2) - swap nc (okay)
00:54:987 (3,1,2,3,4) - this part of rhythm works quite weird for me, 00:58:645 - is better to be a slider/note's head which is clickable, 00:54:987 (3) - i dont even know which track you are following ( changed into slider, and for the 54:987 i think its good the way it is )
01:00:109 (1) - mute it?

(no, i decided to change the volume to 20%)

Hard

sv 2.0 is too high (Changed it to 1.80)
00:19:133 (1) - nc is not necessary (Okay)
00:22:243 (4,1) - swap nc

(Right)

Thanks 4 the Mod Koiyuki

Nerthar

67 posts

Joined May 2014

Nerthar 2016-10-24T10:08:33+00:00

Koiyuki wrote:
Nerthar's Insane
00:12:913 (2,3,4) - why antijump? is this part anywhere special? Well, since you are the second person pointing this out, I believe that was a bad idea, was hearing a more calm part, nvm, fixed
00:20:596 (4) - nc for changing sv Ye
00:23:340 (1,2) - swap nc Done, looks nice
00:27:913 (5) - nc Ye
00:33:035 (2) - nc for changing sv Yeah I got it
00:35:231 (1,2,3,4) - flow not well, plays bad for me Oh, my last remap went wrong, that was not supposed to look like that lmao, mb
00:37:426 (3,4,1,2) - stack? I believe it is ok, isn't it ? If not I could change it anyway EDIT : In fact, I changed it
00:39:621 (1,2,3,4) - comparing with the same former rhythm at 00:36:694 (1,2,3,4) - , do you even think the ds here is quite small? Already thought about it, global SV reduced to 1.6x from 1.8x wich was pretty huge (beginners mistake, lul)
00:40:352 (3,4) - also nc for sv change and the anti looks weird NC added and changed pattern
00:49:865 (5) - nc
00:54:255 (6,9) - nc, and why 00:54:255 (6) - end at 1/8? Oh, When I changed the SV, this issue might have disappeared, and I don't believe that was a wanted end lmao
01:00:109 (3) - mute the end ye

slider shape looks ugly imo.... I'd buy slider shaping lessons lmao
and the diff is full of unnecessary overlap, the usage of ds is also not comfortable.
i am not good at pointing out my idea in English ahh
you all should learn more about patterns usage, rhythm setting from ranked maps, imo the std diffs still need a long way to go.

Well, after this mod, I had a look at most of the slider shapes and overlaping issues, so I believe the map will flow much better now, thanks for this mod

Here's the fix : http://puu.sh/rTNfK/0e3d45af03.osu

Last edited by Nerthar 2016-10-24T19:46:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Kyu

487 posts

Joined October 2015

-Kyu 2016-10-24T13:18:04+00:00

Koiyuki wrote:
Just some complaints.
My personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable, you have to fix it.

ExKyu's Light Hard
00:13:645 (1) - remove nc, like 00:11:450 (3) -
00:38:157 (1) - ^
00:44:011 (1) - too many spinners, i recommend to change this into 2 sliders don't think it's suitable tbh
01:00:109 (1) - mute
i am not good at pointing out my idea in English ahh
you all should learn more about patterns usage, rhythm setting from ranked maps, imo the std diffs still need a long way to go.

Thanks for the mod~

asdf

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-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2016-10-25T07:58:35+00:00

Need More MOD.....XD

StrafeCombo_

264 posts

Joined May 2016

StrafeCombo_ 2016-10-25T14:49:07+00:00

Mai normal:
8 of OD pls

Mai hard:
8 OD

https://puu.sh/rV7Oq/be06bd081d.JPG

https://puu.sh/rV7PZ/f9ca976c46.JPG

StrafeCombo_

264 posts

Joined May 2016

StrafeCombo_ 2016-10-25T20:55:52+00:00

Thanks

StrafeCombo_

264 posts

Joined May 2016

StrafeCombo_ 2016-10-25T21:21:35+00:00

LOL MOD:
Kiai time in all diff :'''''''''''''(((((((((((((

_miu

30 posts

Joined March 2015

_miu 2016-10-28T13:45:35+00:00

this is in no way a professional mod; there are mistakes and issues in what i've said, apologies

'mod' from chat, log posted below.

2016-10-28 21:26 Aerith123: hi there (^_^)/. wanna try my map ?
2016-10-28 21:26 MatsuuraKanan-: uh
2016-10-28 21:26 MatsuuraKanan-: sure
2016-10-28 21:27 Aerith123: wait, i'll give the link
2016-10-28 21:27 MatsuuraKanan-: alright
2016-10-28 21:27 Aerith123: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1066088 Linked Horizon - Moshi Kono Kabe no naka ga Ikken no Ie Dato Shitara]
2016-10-28 21:27 MatsuuraKanan-: which diff do you want me to play
2016-10-28 21:28 Aerith123: normal,hard and insane
2016-10-28 21:29 MatsuuraKanan-: up the ar to 9
2016-10-28 21:29 MatsuuraKanan-: for the insane
2016-10-28 21:30 MatsuuraKanan-: or not 9 sorry
2016-10-28 21:30 MatsuuraKanan-: something like 8.5, or 8.7
2016-10-28 21:30 Aerith123: okay
2016-10-28 21:30 MatsuuraKanan-: 00:15:292 (3) - maybe make this slider straighter? looks a little awkward to play
2016-10-28 21:31 MatsuuraKanan-: plus, it doesn't fit with the two other sliders before and after
2016-10-28 21:31 Aerith123: hard ?
2016-10-28 21:31 MatsuuraKanan-: yeah
2016-10-28 21:31 MatsuuraKanan-: forgot to mention, sorru
2016-10-28 21:31 MatsuuraKanan-: sorry
2016-10-28 21:31 Aerith123: okay
2016-10-28 21:32 MatsuuraKanan-: 00:32:670 (1) - this slider should be the shape of 2 and 3
2016-10-28 21:32 Aerith123: alright
2016-10-28 21:32 MatsuuraKanan-: there's nothing that seems wrong with the hard diff or the insane
2016-10-28 21:32 MatsuuraKanan-: let me lookt hrough the hard diff quickly again
2016-10-28 21:33 MatsuuraKanan-: 00:12:182 (5) - I think this one should be in the place of 1
2016-10-28 21:33 MatsuuraKanan-: so it's a square
2016-10-28 21:33 MatsuuraKanan-: rather than that pattern
2016-10-28 21:33 Aerith123: i see
2016-10-28 21:34 MatsuuraKanan-: 00:13:096 (2) - this one is a little awkward, maybe place under the slider end of 1
2016-10-28 21:34 Aerith123: ur right
2016-10-28 21:34 Aerith123: changed it
2016-10-28 21:35 MatsuuraKanan-: light hard diff:
2016-10-28 21:35 Aerith123: not mine
2016-10-28 21:36 MatsuuraKanan-: should I still give feedback, or
2016-10-28 21:36 Aerith123: give it
2016-10-28 21:36 Aerith123: i'll tell him
2016-10-28 21:36 Aerith123: later
2016-10-28 21:36 MatsuuraKanan-: 00:24:621 (3) - this slider should probably be single taps
2016-10-28 21:36 MatsuuraKanan-: 2 single taps in the place of the slider start and end
2016-10-28 21:37 Aerith123: right
2016-10-28 21:37 MatsuuraKanan-: might look something like this, or different https://b.catgirlsare.sexy/Vu29.png
2016-10-28 21:39 MatsuuraKanan-: it's fine overall, but there are very slight timing issues
2016-10-28 21:39 Aerith123: alright.....thanks 4 telling me
2016-10-28 21:39 MatsuuraKanan-: I'll check the normal
2016-10-28 21:39 Aerith123: okay

2016-10-28 21:40 MatsuuraKanan-: 00:22:426 (1) - could be in the middle of the two sliderse
2016-10-28 21:40 MatsuuraKanan-: just a slight cosmetic thing
2016-10-28 21:40 Aerith123: do u want to post this conversation on my forum ? (i'll give u kudos)
2016-10-28 21:40 MatsuuraKanan-: nah, it's fine
2016-10-28 21:41 MatsuuraKanan-: unless you want to, then eh
2016-10-28 21:41 Aerith123: okay
2016-10-28 21:41 Aerith123: i want it
2016-10-28 21:41 MatsuuraKanan-: oh, then sure
2016-10-28 21:41 MatsuuraKanan-: do you want me to post the chatlog, or
2016-10-28 21:41 Aerith123: post the chatlog
2016-10-28 21:41 MatsuuraKanan-: a'ight, sure
2016-10-28 21:41 MatsuuraKanan-: give me the link too
2016-10-28 21:41 Aerith123: so everyone will know
2016-10-28 21:42 MatsuuraKanan-: 00:45:840 (3) - again, same thing here: should be in the middle probably
2016-10-28 21:42 MatsuuraKanan-: the map looks good either way, I don't think there's anythign particularly wrong with the placement and rhytthm
2016-10-28 21:42 MatsuuraKanan-: I also really like your hitsounding btw
2016-10-28 21:43 Aerith123: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1046785 Linked Horizon - Moshi Kono Kabe no naka ga Ikken no Ie Dato Shitara]
2016-10-28 21:43 Aerith123: yeah im good with hitsound xD

i put no effort into editing the log above, just copy pasted directly from what i've said to creator in game

StrafeCombo_

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Joined May 2016

StrafeCombo_ 2016-11-01T19:49:26+00:00

STAR

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2016-11-03T05:50:18+00:00

NekoCombo_ wrote:
STAR

Thank you very much

Envory

Envory 2016-11-04T01:56:52+00:00

NekoCombo_ wrote:
Mai normal:
8 of OD pls

Mai hard:
8 OD

https://puu.sh/rV7Oq/be06bd081d.JPG

https://puu.sh/rV7PZ/f9ca976c46.JPG

For normal and hard that was can't use 8 OD caused by 8 OD is that just for 3.50 and up
thanks..

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2016-11-05T08:32:14+00:00

Need More MOD , anyone ?

Surono

7,195 posts

Joined November 2013

Surono 2016-11-16T16:33:58+00:00

gimana kabar diff mania? mapper mania coba checks AiMod.

Yuuya_ke

243 posts

Joined May 2015

Yuuya_ke 2016-11-20T10:03:07+00:00

not a huge fan of the romanization of the lyrics, but eh

Lyric/9 of the Storyboard isn't timed correctly
Lyric/19 should probably fade out after the vocals finish

real quick stuff:
ExKyu's Light Hard

00:50:962 (1) - The focus varies between the vocals and instruments a lot during the chorus, but it is leaned towards the vocals. However, I dislike the use of a long spinner to emphasize the vocals' held out note, since the vocals aren't as important as the orchestral background showing more emphasis when the spinner begins.

Nerthar's Insaiyan

slider tick probably shouldn't be 2, since areas such as 00:16:206 (1) - allow the player to gain unnecessary score using slow slider velocities
00:53:889 (4) - the orchestral instruments are being mapped starting here, but why not start after the vocals are holding a note at 00:50:962 (2) -

how to mod taiko and mania pls

-Kyu

487 posts

Joined October 2015

-Kyu 2016-11-20T10:43:10+00:00

rickyrox3 wrote:
real quick stuff:
ExKyu's Light Hard

00:50:962 (1) - The focus varies between the vocals and instruments a lot during the chorus, but it is leaned towards the vocals. However, I dislike the use of a long spinner to emphasize the vocals' held out note, since the vocals aren't as important as the orchestral background showing more emphasis when the spinner begins. ok,deleted the spinner and map it

Thanks for the mod!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 33767
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
StoryFireInFront: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 7243,37426,46206,48035,57182
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Moshi Kono Kabe no naka ga Ikken no Ie Dato Shitara
TitleUnicode:もしこの壁の中が一軒の家だとしたら
Artist:Linked Horizon
ArtistUnicode:Linked Horizon
Creator:Aerith123
Version:ExKyu's Light Hard
Source:進撃の巨人
Tags:Shingeki no Kyojin AoT Sound Horizon Revo Nerthar Surono Mai9392 Exkyu
BeatmapID:1073361
BeatmapSetID:486719

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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Another Lie

Another Lie 2016-11-20T14:17:35+00:00

Maaf ya buat Aerith123 & mai9392, terpaksa request mod di https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/458742 saya tunda. Marked as bad quality map, maaf sekali ya T_T Mania map maksudnya

Last edited by Another Lie 2016-11-20T15:25:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Aerith-

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-Aerith- 2016-11-20T14:25:15+00:00

Another Lie wrote:
Maaf ya buat Aerith123 & mai9392, terpaksa request mod di https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/458742 saya tunda. Marked as bad quality map, maaf sekali ya T_T

Oh begitu ya. Ok gpp

Last edited by -Aerith- 2016-11-21T02:48:34+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Nerthar

67 posts

Joined May 2014

Nerthar 2016-11-20T14:35:12+00:00

rickyrox3 wrote:

Nerthar's Insaiyan

slider tick probably shouldn't be 2, since areas such as 00:16:206 (1) - allow the player to gain unnecessary score using slow slider velocities Ok, changed to 1
00:53:889 (4) - the orchestral instruments are being mapped starting here, but why not start after the vocals are holding a note at 00:50:962 (2) - Well I feel like there is no real sense in doing a long note here since i made the choise to keep following the instrumental

Thanks for you mod

-Aerith-

843 posts

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Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2016-11-21T07:42:39+00:00

Mania Difficulty :
in case u were wondering where is the mania diff , well i delete it (Because of the bad Quality and other stuff

But Dont worry I already ask PERMISSION from the owner of this diff to delete it, and He said its Fine

Last edited by -Aerith- 2016-11-21T13:22:47+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Handwriting

44 posts

Joined July 2016

Handwriting 2016-11-21T09:16:44+00:00

https://puu.sh/spsrh.osz...This is the new Sb :v..sorry for the wait..or not really this thing gimme a seisure

Please stop mmkay?Stop asking me to fix some MINOR things...

I hate my life
I hate my family
I hate everything

Envory

Envory 2016-11-21T11:56:40+00:00

Aerith123 wrote:
Mania Difficulty :
in case u were wondering where is the mania diff , well i delete it (Because of the bad Quality and other stuff
But Dont worry I already ask PERMISSION from the owner of this diff to delete it, and She said its Fine

"She said"

Saya laki2 kwkwkwkw By the way it's fine if the map will quickly improve/Ranked

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