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Topic Starter
-Aerith-
I Need to Find BN right now !
Morgar

ExKyu wrote:

Aerith123 wrote:

because he's giving me a star i think ? .........is that a no ? :? :?
It means that he gives his kudosu that he has earned from modding to your map,which increases the star priority.

Oh and btw,i'll reply to Morgar's mod on friday since im still on vacation,ok?
Dont rush, Aeritg123 allready made the change to your map. Have a nice holliday!
-Kyu

Morgar wrote:

Dont rush, Aeritg123 allready made the change to your map. Have a nice holliday!
Ah thanks Aerith! And thanks Morgar!

Aerith123 wrote:

I Need to Find BN right now !
Slow down,your map still needs more mods,and the sumber of people favorited your map nor people demanding this to get rank doesn't mean the BN's will rank this immediately

holy shit my 100th post yay me
Topic Starter
-Aerith-

ExKyu wrote:

Morgar wrote:

Dont rush, Aeritg123 allready made the change to your map. Have a nice holliday!
Ah thanks Aerith! And thanks Morgar!

Aerith123 wrote:

I Need to Find BN right now !
Slow down,your map still needs more mods,and the sumber of people favorited your map nor people demanding this to get rank doesn't mean the BN's will rank this immediately

holy shit my 100th post yay me
Maybe you're right ;)
Summerleopard
Hey Aerith123,I just adjust the diff for Insane. I think that is just the problem was the hp. Only changed on that. Hope it is alright.. :idea:
Surono
oh ya, Taiko diff masih pake BG yang lama gak? kalau masih di keep aja ya buat perbandingan mode :3
Topic Starter
-Aerith-

SangKrazF1nal3 wrote:

Hey Aerith123,I just adjust the diff for Insane. I think that is just the problem was the hp. Only changed on that. Hope it is alright.. :idea:
Ofc its alright thank you :D
Topic Starter
-Aerith-

Surono wrote:

oh ya, Taiko diff masih pake BG yang lama gak? kalau masih di keep aja ya buat perbandingan mode :3
Ok
-Kyu

Aerith123 wrote:

SangKrazF1nal3 wrote:

Hey Aerith123,I just adjust the diff for Insane. I think that is just the problem was the hp. Only changed on that. Hope it is alright.. :idea:
Ofc its alright thank you :D

Why did you gave him kudosu?
He's not modding the map or anything so why did you gave him?
Do you know how Kudosu works?
Topic Starter
-Aerith-
im sorry ...that was my mistake.....i will tell him later to denied the kudosu >:( >:(
OsuAndGHWOR
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Topic Starter
-Aerith-

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and u know what...........im not going to accept this diff ....the light hard is already available......so yeah its a no
I AM VERY SORRY FOR ASKING U TO DO THIS ......... :( :(
if you want u can make GD for my other map ........
that WILL map .......u know right ?
( i need more diff 4 that map)
Topic Starter
-Aerith-
UPDATE!! on Mania Diff :) :)
Dmitry14kz
Well mapping is very good, but i added and fixed few things:
1) Added 1 spinner in start (now there 2 spinners)
2) Increased the beginning and the end of the last spinner
3) Fixed few sliders
4) Fixed poses of 2 sliders
Difficult: Hard.
Topic Starter
-Aerith-

Dmitry14kz wrote:

Well mapping is very good, but i added and fixed few things:
1) Added 1 spinner in start (now there 2 spinners)
2) Increased the beginning and the end of the last spinner
3) Fixed few sliders
4) Fixed poses of 2 sliders
Difficult: Hard.
Oh! Okay thanks for your help i appreciate it :) :) btw can you please give me the edit file...you fixed few things right ?
Dmitry14kz

Aerith123 wrote:

Dmitry14kz wrote:

Well mapping is very good, but i added and fixed few things:
1) Added 1 spinner in start (now there 2 spinners)
2) Increased the beginning and the end of the last spinner
3) Fixed few sliders
4) Fixed poses of 2 sliders
Difficult: Hard.
Oh! Okay thanks for your help i appreciate it :) :) btw can you please give me the edit file...you fixed few things right ?
Um, yah http://dropmefiles.com/8jtwA
Peter
Normal
Hey what about circle after this slider 00:19:133 (1) -
Hard
There could be circle after this slider too 00:33:767 (1) -
same 00:26:084 (3) -
Topic Starter
-Aerith-
[quote="PeterEU"]
Normal
Hey what about circle after this slider 00:19:133 (1) -
Hard
There could be circle after this slider too 00:33:767 (1) -
same 00:26:084 (3) -
[/
okay nice advice....i'll think about it
btw thanks 4 taking ur time modding this map even if just a little.....i appreciate it :D :D
myAccSuks
dang... looking through, I wonder if you still need my mod xd... I'll try my best to see if there's anything else that i find funky and what not. Umm, just a heads up, I can't mania, and my taiko is a joke, hitsounding.... still gotta learn that :C so I won't be able to help you out there. Anyways, here we go.
In all honesty, the maps to me, looked compeletly fine. So most the things i mention are 100% opinion and me just looking at the small details. so yeah, it's up to you if they make sense or not.

Normal Diff
First off, a few words from the best mod in town... aimod..... https://puu.sh/rJm0X/895055a2ce.png
Umm, so yeah, just check those two objects and relocated if necessary.
In terms of kiai, I'm not sure if the aimod applies there considering that the map in general is very very short, so I don't know if this kiai rules applies. sorry

00:33:767 (2,3,4) - hmm, i feel like you can blanket this better. move the 3 down a bit, so it fits snuggly in the 1st slider, then relocate slider 4 so circle 3 is surrounded perfectly between the two sliders. https://puu.sh/rJn0I/8eef2716fe.png As you can see in this terrible attempt to show you what i was thinking, in short, I just think you can make this look "cleaner" by having it nicely surrounded. Of course, that 2 slider won't blanket perfectly, but it's waaay too long for that imo.

00:42:548 (3) - umm, again, you can fix this so it blankets the note 2 better. (sorry if it seems like i'm just nitpicking pointless stuff, so many mods have been applied so it's literally perfect to me). also, people always point this out to me, but you just need 3 anchors to form that turn. Why does the number of anchors matter? idk, but people always tell me that so, might as well pass it on.

well, that's what i thought of for normal. I thought the patterns look good, my only remarks would be if you wanted to, you could blanked a few sliders and circles better. That's all.

Light Hard Diff
a light hard... can't say i've played a lot of those...

Aimod says.... 01:00:109 - You have two timing points exist at the same time! and yeah, you do. idk.

00:11:816 (5) - this slider right here, either make it a smooth turn, or angle the entrance better. It's a very minimal thing to note, but to me, it seems oddly angled. here's another janky pic to try and convey what i'm saying xd. https://puu.sh/rJnMT/897ecc34d4.png

00:27:365 (10,11) - same as above. again, it's not a problem what so ever, i'm just being a jerk rn. https://puu.sh/rJnV3/8c289f42a0.png

and well... that's all i have to say about light hard. Again, it's already a good map, so i can only pick at the pointless little details that bother me only.

hard
00:44:374 - ai mod says your kiai isn't snapped on!

Honestly. this map looks fine to me so... i'm just point out little details that i noticed... again, they are just really minimal design details
00:19:865 (3) - the 3 slider is a little bit off. move it very very very slightly to the right. as you can see in the pic, my cursor is pointing to a little gap, so the slider is just offset by a little. https://puu.sh/rJowJ/67635cfd64.png

00:31:389 (2,3) - did you want to blanket these?

00:33:401 (3,1) - same here? did you want to have slider 3 wrap around the head of slider 4? i mean, you could if you wanted to... but opinions are opinions.

Nerthar's Insane
00:27:182 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should slightly rotate the square jump. I say this because in the previous set, you have some 60 degree (or sharp angle) jumps, but then you transition with this fat obtuse angle into the square. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6325019 Just some idea i had in my mind. all i did was rotate the square, (ctrl shift r) and then moved the slider (slider 5) to the left for that gap distance.

01:00:109 - Personally, i think you should move this to the left, make the angle from 2 - 3 wider. I think it'll play out nicer.

In all honesty, there's not much to do with it, so I just nit picked some design things that could be changed. of course, that's just my opinons, so feel free to discard them. Anyways, i enjoyed the beatmap, and wish you luck in the ranking process.
Topic Starter
-Aerith-

ihatedwang wrote:

dang... looking through, I wonder if you still need my mod xd... I'll try my best to see if there's anything else that i find funky and what not. Umm, just a heads up, I can't mania, and my taiko is a joke, hitsounding.... still gotta learn that :C so I won't be able to help you out there. Anyways, here we go.
In all honesty, the maps to me, looked compeletly fine. So most the things i mention are 100% opinion and me just looking at the small details. so yeah, it's up to you if they make sense or not.

Normal Diff
First off, a few words from the best mod in town... aimod..... https://puu.sh/rJm0X/895055a2ce.png
Umm, so yeah, just check those two objects and relocated if necessary.
In terms of kiai, I'm not sure if the aimod applies there considering that the map in general is very very short, so I don't know if this kiai rules applies. sorry

00:33:767 (2,3,4) - hmm, i feel like you can blanket this better. move the 3 down a bit, so it fits snuggly in the 1st slider, then relocate slider 4 so circle 3 is surrounded perfectly between the two sliders. https://puu.sh/rJn0I/8eef2716fe.png As you can see in this terrible attempt to show you what i was thinking, in short, I just think you can make this look "cleaner" by having it nicely surrounded. Of course, that 2 slider won't blanket perfectly, but it's waaay too long for that imo.

00:42:548 (3) - umm, again, you can fix this so it blankets the note 2 better. (sorry if it seems like i'm just nitpicking pointless stuff, so many mods have been applied so it's literally perfect to me). also, people always point this out to me, but you just need 3 anchors to form that turn. Why does the number of anchors matter? idk, but people always tell me that so, might as well pass it on.

well, that's what i thought of for normal. I thought the patterns look good, my only remarks would be if you wanted to, you could blanked a few sliders and circles better. That's all.

Light Hard Diff
a light hard... can't say i've played a lot of those...

Aimod says.... 01:00:109 - You have two timing points exist at the same time! and yeah, you do. idk.

00:11:816 (5) - this slider right here, either make it a smooth turn, or angle the entrance better. It's a very minimal thing to note, but to me, it seems oddly angled. here's another janky pic to try and convey what i'm saying xd. https://puu.sh/rJnMT/897ecc34d4.png

00:27:365 (10,11) - same as above. again, it's not a problem what so ever, i'm just being a jerk rn. https://puu.sh/rJnV3/8c289f42a0.png

and well... that's all i have to say about light hard. Again, it's already a good map, so i can only pick at the pointless little details that bother me only.

hard
00:44:374 - ai mod says your kiai isn't snapped on!

Honestly. this map looks fine to me so... i'm just point out little details that i noticed... again, they are just really minimal design details
00:19:865 (3) - the 3 slider is a little bit off. move it very very very slightly to the right. as you can see in the pic, my cursor is pointing to a little gap, so the slider is just offset by a little. https://puu.sh/rJowJ/67635cfd64.png

00:31:389 (2,3) - did you want to blanket these?

00:33:401 (3,1) - same here? did you want to have slider 3 wrap around the head of slider 4? i mean, you could if you wanted to... but opinions are opinions.

Nerthar's Insane
00:27:182 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should slightly rotate the square jump. I say this because in the previous set, you have some 60 degree (or sharp angle) jumps, but then you transition with this fat obtuse angle into the square. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6325019 Just some idea i had in my mind. all i did was rotate the square, (ctrl shift r) and then moved the slider (slider 5) to the left for that gap distance.

01:00:109 - Personally, i think you should move this to the left, make the angle from 2 - 3 wider. I think it'll play out nicer.

In all honesty, there's not much to do with it, so I just nit picked some design things that could be changed. of course, that's just my opinons, so feel free to discard them. Anyways, i enjoyed the beatmap, and wish you luck in the ranking process.
Wow! thanks 4 modding it (i really need it right now) and for the kiai i think its fine i guess....im not going to chance anything for that one :)
-Kyu

ihatedwang wrote:

dang... looking through, I wonder if you still need my mod xd... I'll try my best to see if there's anything else that i find funky and what not. Umm, just a heads up, I can't mania, and my taiko is a joke, hitsounding.... still gotta learn that :C so I won't be able to help you out there. Anyways, here we go.
In all honesty, the maps to me, looked compeletly fine. So most the things i mention are 100% opinion and me just looking at the small details. so yeah, it's up to you if they make sense or not.


Light Hard Diff
a light hard... can't say i've played a lot of those...

Aimod says.... 01:00:109 - You have two timing points exist at the same time! and yeah, you do. idk.

00:11:816 (5) - this slider right here, either make it a smooth turn, or angle the entrance better. It's a very minimal thing to note, but to me, it seems oddly angled. here's another janky pic to try and convey what i'm saying xd. https://puu.sh/rJnMT/897ecc34d4.png

00:27:365 (10,11) - same as above. again, it's not a problem what so ever, i'm just being a jerk rn. https://puu.sh/rJnV3/8c289f42a0.png

and well... that's all i have to say about light hard. Again, it's already a good map, so i can only pick at the pointless little details that bother me only.

In all honesty, there's not much to do with it, so I just nit picked some design things that could be changed. of course, that's just my opinons, so feel free to discard them. Anyways, i enjoyed the beatmap, and wish you luck in the ranking process.
Fixed all and did some remap,thanks for the mod!

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oh,and i have to say something,the new BG is reaaally unnecessary,i like the previous one better since there's a rain sb at the kiai part,which makes it more cooler
Topic Starter
-Aerith-

ExKyu wrote:

ihatedwang wrote:

dang... looking through, I wonder if you still need my mod xd... I'll try my best to see if there's anything else that i find funky and what not. Umm, just a heads up, I can't mania, and my taiko is a joke, hitsounding.... still gotta learn that :C so I won't be able to help you out there. Anyways, here we go.
In all honesty, the maps to me, looked compeletly fine. So most the things i mention are 100% opinion and me just looking at the small details. so yeah, it's up to you if they make sense or not.


Light Hard Diff
a light hard... can't say i've played a lot of those...

Aimod says.... 01:00:109 - You have two timing points exist at the same time! and yeah, you do. idk.

00:11:816 (5) - this slider right here, either make it a smooth turn, or angle the entrance better. It's a very minimal thing to note, but to me, it seems oddly angled. here's another janky pic to try and convey what i'm saying xd. https://puu.sh/rJnMT/897ecc34d4.png

00:27:365 (10,11) - same as above. again, it's not a problem what so ever, i'm just being a jerk rn. https://puu.sh/rJnV3/8c289f42a0.png

and well... that's all i have to say about light hard. Again, it's already a good map, so i can only pick at the pointless little details that bother me only.

In all honesty, there's not much to do with it, so I just nit picked some design things that could be changed. of course, that's just my opinons, so feel free to discard them. Anyways, i enjoyed the beatmap, and wish you luck in the ranking process.
Fixed all and did some remap,thanks for the mod!

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oh,and i have to say something,the new BG is reaaally unnecessary,i like the previous one better since there's a rain sb at the kiai part,which makes it more cooler
You really think so ? well ........Okay I Will Change It :D
Nerthar

ihatedwang wrote:

Nerthar's Insane
00:27:182 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should slightly rotate the square jump. I say this because in the previous set, you have some 60 degree (or sharp angle) jumps, but then you transition with this fat obtuse angle into the square. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6325019 Just some idea i had in my mind. all i did was rotate the square, (ctrl shift r) and then moved the slider (slider 5) to the left for that gap distance. I agree with that, fixed

01:00:109 - Personally, i think you should move this to the left, make the angle from 2 - 3 wider. I think it'll play out nicer. Same, fixed
Heres the fix
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N0thing
general for every diff (timing points)
00:39:621 (1,2) - insert timing point making those sliders slower? maybe on other maps too, I think it fits the music

00:55:718 (5) - timing make 0.75 from that point on

00:59:377 (2) - hitsounds 80%, else they hurt ears. else no ranked I think? I can't really remember the words of the one who modded my map and said that they need to be at most at 80%

01:00:474 (1) - let spinner end 2 white ticks earlier and then compare when you play it

There might be a lot more oppurtinities where you can just make it slower and it will turn beautiful, but I probably missed them so you should keep looking out (slower or faster)

normal diff
00:12:548 (4) - maybe make it new Combo and HP higher? that way the HRDT player will have a little bit more challenge and normal players feel more of the music IMO though.

00:21:328 (4) I'd shorten it to red tick before and set a slider from white tick onward to next white tick

00:27:182 (3) - ^but to the red tick before next slider

00:40:718 (1) - normal players won't be able to play this slider, cuz 3 reverse arrows. How about circles instead of reverse arrows?

00:50:596 (2) - slighty change slidershape so that it looks better (or maybe not, I'm not sure about that)


Light Hard
00:11:450 (3) - why did you stack that one? I think spreading it might be better for that start

00:22:060 (1,2,3) - in stark constrast to everything else you did

00:23:157 (4) - maybe move slider around so that circle is not above slider (and move circles around)? If no solution found, then jsut keep old style.

00:29:743 (1) - try this http://puu.sh/rM3vK/71dff83d07.jpg

00:36:328 (6) - can#t hear a sound, also feels uncomfortable. maybe delete circle 6, but keep circle7, new combo at circle 7 and delete new combo at following slider

00:38:157 (1) - don't think that's a good place for a reverse slider

00:47:487 (4) - slider instead of circle

00:58:279 (2,3,4) - too hard for light hard, move closer or change to slider


Hard
00:10:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - too sharp, it's insane diff at that point

00:20:413 (1) - move more to the right?

00:44:926 (5,6,7) - if there is some guy saying that it's too hard for hard, it's barely alright and will probably be one of the good points later on

00:49:865 (8) - either change circle 7 or move the slider up, you decide. It#s too sharp now


Insane
edited stuff here, thought about previous style sorry

00:12:913 (2,3,4) - this part here is going to make so many ppl miss XD. Why stack though?

00:16:206 (1) - ugly slidershape

00:26:999 (4) - stack that properly so ppl can see it

00:27:913 (5) - ugly slidershape

00:35:962 (4) - try Strg+H

00:47:304 (2,3) - maybe line 'em up? personal opinion though, if not, then change slider (1)

00:49:865 (1) - ugly slidershape, no reason for loop,

00:50:962 (3,4) - too unexpected and hard for insane, try lining them up to the next slider

00:52:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice oppurtinity for shape, no need to stack 5 and 6

00:54:255 (1) - ugly slidershape which shouldn#t be stacked by the circle before, that way it will lose power

00:55:718 (4) - ugly slidershape

00:57:182 (2) - nice slider
00:58:645 (5) - nice too

01:00:109 (3) - personally I'd change it (to spinner maybe), but this one here is not so bad
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Sorry for rough mod, just pointing things which I personally would change, but next to every of that what I suggested can also just be kept the way it is now. Maybe you also just think about that part and do something else which is even better!

I liked the map, the SB can already be ranked XD
Topic Starter
-Aerith-

N0thing wrote:

general for every diff (timing points)
00:39:621 (1,2) - insert timing point making those sliders slower? maybe on other maps too, I think it fits the music (Not gonna insert timing point on other DIFF. i know it fits the music, but i just not gonna do that :D)

00:55:718 (5) - timing make 0.75 from that point on (Ok)

00:59:377 (2) - hitsounds 80%, else they hurt ears. else no ranked I think? I can't really remember the words of the one who modded my map and said that they need to be at most at 80% (Alright :D)

01:00:474 (1) - let spinner end 2 white ticks earlier and then compare when you play it (Good Advice :D)

There might be a lot more oppurtinities where you can just make it slower and it will turn beautiful, but I probably missed them so you should keep looking out (slower or faster)

normal diff
00:12:548 (4) - maybe make it new Combo and HP higher? that way the HRDT player will have a little bit more challenge and normal players feel more of the music IMO though. (Okay :D )

00:21:328 (4) I'd shorten it to red tick before and set a slider from white tick onward to next white tick

00:27:182 (3) - ^but to the red tick before next slider

00:40:718 (1) - normal players won't be able to play this slider, cuz 3 reverse arrows. How about circles instead of reverse arrows?
(Okay, i decide to changed it to short sliders)

00:50:596 (2) - slighty change slidershape so that it looks better (or maybe not, I'm not sure about that)
(Okay)


Light Hard
00:11:450 (3) - why did you stack that one? I think spreading it might be better for that start

00:22:060 (1,2,3) - in stark constrast to everything else you did

00:23:157 (4) - maybe move slider around so that circle is not above slider (and move circles around)? If no solution found, then jsut keep old style.

00:29:743 (1) - try this http://puu.sh/rM3vK/71dff83d07.jpg

00:36:328 (6) - can#t hear a sound, also feels uncomfortable. maybe delete circle 6, but keep circle7, new combo at circle 7 and delete new combo at following slider

00:38:157 (1) - don't think that's a good place for a reverse slider

00:47:487 (4) - slider instead of circle

00:58:279 (2,3,4) - too hard for light hard, move closer or change to slider


Hard
00:10:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - too sharp, it's insane diff at that point (Yeah i Realize that too xD)

00:20:413 (1) - move more to the right? (Alright)

00:44:926 (5,6,7) - if there is some guy saying that it's too hard for hard, it's barely alright and will probably be one of the good points later on
(for that part i changed to short sliders too)


00:49:865 (8) - either change circle 7 or move the slider up, you decide. It#s too sharp now
(Changed it :D)


Insane
edited stuff here, thought about previous style sorry

00:12:913 (2,3,4) - this part here is going to make so many ppl miss XD. Why stack though?

00:16:206 (1) - ugly slidershape

00:26:999 (4) - stack that properly so ppl can see it

00:27:913 (5) - ugly slidershape

00:35:962 (4) - try Strg+H

00:47:304 (2,3) - maybe line 'em up? personal opinion though, if not, then change slider (1)

00:49:865 (1) - ugly slidershape, no reason for loop,

00:50:962 (3,4) - too unexpected and hard for insane, try lining them up to the next slider

00:52:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice oppurtinity for shape, no need to stack 5 and 6

00:54:255 (1) - ugly slidershape which shouldn#t be stacked by the circle before, that way it will lose power

00:55:718 (4) - ugly slidershape

00:57:182 (2) - nice slider
00:58:645 (5) - nice too

01:00:109 (3) - personally I'd change it (to spinner maybe), but this one here is not so bad
___



Sorry for rough mod, just pointing things which I personally would change, but next to every of that what I suggested can also just be kept the way it is now. Maybe you also just think about that part and do something else which is even better!

I liked the map, the SB can already be ranked XD

Thanks for the mod "Nothing ! :)
Nerthar

N0thing wrote:

Insane
00:12:913 (2,3,4) - this part here is going to make so many ppl miss XD. Why stack though? I don't believe people would miss on that, this is pretty easy to follow since the stacking is due to the linear voice, It might be changed tho

00:16:206 (1) - ugly slidershape Modified, Rip slider skills

00:26:999 (4) - stack that properly so ppl can see it I believe that was readable, fixed tho

00:27:913 (5) - ugly slidershape <3

00:35:962 (4) - try Strg+H Done, was interesting, but damn that made me rework a big part

00:47:304 (2,3) - maybe line 'em up? personal opinion though, if not, then change slider (1) Well, I prefered keeping the flow and making a more circular slider

00:49:865 (1) - ugly slidershape, no reason for loop, Yup

00:50:962 (3,4) - too unexpected and hard for insane, try lining them up to the next slider Done + next slider slightly changed

00:52:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice oppurtinity for shape, no need to stack 5 and 6 Tried something different, I hope that'll be good

00:54:255 (1) - ugly slidershape which shouldn#t be stacked by the circle before, that way it will lose power <3

00:55:718 (4) - ugly slidershape Rip me

00:57:182 (2) - nice slider Oh rly ???
00:58:645 (5) - nice too Good Guy

01:00:109 (3) - personally I'd change it (to spinner maybe), but this one here is not so bad For once that I made a decent slider, I'll keep it :p
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Sorry for rough mod, just pointing things which I personally would change, but next to every of that what I suggested can also just be kept the way it is now. Maybe you also just think about that part and do something else which is even better!

I liked the map, the SB can already be ranked XD
Yay was waiting for someone to point out my slider designing skills Kappa, Thanks for the mod, here's the fix I believe http://puu.sh/rNsp7/9de0cd3b33.osu
Shiranai
We have irc about the sb,
08:19 Aerith123: hi mbak :D
08:19 Mako Sakata: Hallo
08:20 Aerith123: bagaimana cara buat pulse di Storyboard ya ?
08:22 Mako Sakata: Map apa?
08:23 Mako Sakata: Perasaan kmrn minta buatin ya
08:23 Aerith123: yg ini
08:23 *Aerith123 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1066088 Linked Horizon - Moshi Kono Kabe no naka ga Ikken no Ie Dato Shitara]
08:23 Aerith123: yup
08:27 Mako Sakata: Download dlu bentar
08:27 Aerith123: ok
08:30 Mako Sakata: Bagian mana aja yang mau dikasih pulse? o.o
08:30 Aerith123: bagian kiai nya aja
08:31 Mako Sakata: Bagian ini 00:33:767 - sama ini aja 00:45:474 - ?
08:31 Aerith123: kiai nya ada 2 kali jadi pulse nya cuma 2 aja :D
08:32 Aerith123: iyah
08:32 Mako Sakata: Err ini efek hujannya terlalu cepet muncul, harusnya baru mulai muncul di bagian ini 00:33:767 -
08:32 Mako Sakata: Biar pas sama mulai kiai
08:34 Aerith123: okay
08:34 Mako Sakata: Bentar ya aku buat pulse nya
09:10 Mako Sakata: Udah jadi
New sb: http://puu.sh/rNPvp/82bfbf7c52.osb
Topic Starter
-Aerith-

Mako Sakata wrote:

We have irc about the sb,
08:19 Aerith123: hi mbak :D
08:19 Mako Sakata: Hallo
08:20 Aerith123: bagaimana cara buat pulse di Storyboard ya ?
08:22 Mako Sakata: Map apa?
08:23 Mako Sakata: Perasaan kmrn minta buatin ya
08:23 Aerith123: yg ini
08:23 *Aerith123 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1066088 Linked Horizon - Moshi Kono Kabe no naka ga Ikken no Ie Dato Shitara]
08:23 Aerith123: yup
08:27 Mako Sakata: Download dlu bentar
08:27 Aerith123: ok
08:30 Mako Sakata: Bagian mana aja yang mau dikasih pulse? o.o
08:30 Aerith123: bagian kiai nya aja
08:31 Mako Sakata: Bagian ini 00:33:767 - sama ini aja 00:45:474 - ?
08:31 Aerith123: kiai nya ada 2 kali jadi pulse nya cuma 2 aja :D
08:32 Aerith123: iyah
08:32 Mako Sakata: Err ini efek hujannya terlalu cepet muncul, harusnya baru mulai muncul di bagian ini 00:33:767 -
08:32 Mako Sakata: Biar pas sama mulai kiai
08:34 Aerith123: okay
08:34 Mako Sakata: Bentar ya aku buat pulse nya
09:10 Mako Sakata: Udah jadi
New sb: http://puu.sh/rNPvp/82bfbf7c52.osb
Makasih ya mbak , StoryBoard nya Bagus :D
-Kyu

N0thing wrote:

Light Hard
00:11:450 (3) - why did you stack that one? I think spreading it might be better for that start but i like it~

00:22:060 (1,2,3) - in stark constrast to everything else you did i don't get this one

00:23:157 (4) - maybe move slider around so that circle is not above slider (and move circles around)? If no solution found, then jsut keep old style. was a bit confused,but changed it however?

00:29:743 (1) - try this http://puu.sh/rM3vK/71dff83d07.jpg Fixed

00:36:328 (6) - can#t hear a sound, also feels uncomfortable. maybe delete circle 6, but keep circle7, new combo at circle 7 and delete new combo at following slider there is a sound there.also,i think with the clap,it syncs with the song perfectly

00:38:157 (1) - don't think that's a good place for a reverse slider Fixed

00:47:487 (4) - slider instead of circle nah

00:58:279 (2,3,4) - too hard for light hard, move closer or change to slider oh come on,it's just 3 notes,can't be that hard...

Sorry for rough mod, just pointing things which I personally would change, but next to every of that what I suggested can also just be kept the way it is now. Maybe you also just think about that part and do something else which is even better!
Thanks for mod~

Now did some remap again with my mapping style (maybe)
osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:Linked Horizon
Creator:Aerith123
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N0thing
Quote:
00:58:279 (2,3,4) - too hard for light hard, move closer or change to slider oh come on,it's just 3 notes,can't be that hard...
Response:
I meant it was too hard for hard diff, yours is a Light hard, so it's supposed to be even easier

Gonna mod it again later, my mapping skills have improved a lot.
toara_fict
Sorry late.

Mod request as Aerith123

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[Sur's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:33:035 (43) - Change K ? ( Oni put K & high vocal sounds. )

  2. 00:43:279 (10) - add Finish ?

  3. 01:00:474 (31) - delete line. 01:00:109 - Vol 45%

  4. Recheck : Widescreen Support. and Display storyboard
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[Sur's Oni]
  1. 00:43:279 (10) - add Finish ?

  2. Recheck : Widescreen Support. and Display storyboard
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Nice Taiko diff Good Luck :3/
Surono

toara_fict wrote:

Sorry late.

Mod request as Aerith123

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[Sur's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:33:035 (43) - Change K ? ( Oni put K & high vocal sounds. ) hmm, I put D on this diff bcus for comparisson with 00:33:035 (43) - this. both of K and D is nice., maybe I keep it for D as Deeply vocal

  2. 00:43:279 (10) - add Finish ? ok, nice emphasis vocal and cymbal

  3. 01:00:474 (31) - delete line. 01:00:109 - Vol 45% fixed

  4. Recheck : Widescreen Support. and Display storyboard
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[Sur's Oni]
  1. 00:43:279 (10) - add Finish ? ok

  2. Recheck : Widescreen Support. and Display storyboard
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Nice Taiko diff Good Luck :3/ Thank you very much!
about widescreen and display sb I keep it avaible., maybe its nice for taco :D

Update: https://puu.sh/rQAwW/51a5ff91f3.rar

Aerith, bisa gak cocokin posisi SB+BG sama gameplay taikonya? tolong ya!
Topic Starter
-Aerith-

Surono wrote:

toara_fict wrote:

Sorry late.

Mod request as Aerith123

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[Sur's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:33:035 (43) - Change K ? ( Oni put K & high vocal sounds. ) hmm, I put D on this diff bcus for comparisson with 00:33:035 (43) - this. both of K and D is nice., maybe I keep it for D as Deeply vocal

  2. 00:43:279 (10) - add Finish ? ok, nice emphasis vocal and cymbal

  3. 01:00:474 (31) - delete line. 01:00:109 - Vol 45% fixed

  4. Recheck : Widescreen Support. and Display storyboard
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[Sur's Oni]
  1. 00:43:279 (10) - add Finish ? ok

  2. Recheck : Widescreen Support. and Display storyboard
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Nice Taiko diff Good Luck :3/ Thank you very much!
about widescreen and display sb I keep it avaible., maybe its nice for taco :D

Update: https://puu.sh/rQAwW/51a5ff91f3.rar

Aerith, bisa gak cocokin posisi SB+BG sama gameplay taikonya? tolong ya!
Oke akan kuusahakan ya ! :)
El SolarBeam
Well, regarding your third time asking if this map is rankable, yes I suppose it is, assuming this map is labeled as the first map you made. But as I said several times before, I recommend you to ask some experienced modder (one or two is enough, considering the map length) to mod your map. Well, I won't be that meanie bastard of a modder this time, but when you found someone experienced enough, ask them to focus on modding the flow as I think it's the most lacking thing in your map right now, especially on the harder diff.

Goodluck and ciao~
Koiyuki
  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Normal
  1. re-adjust the ds between notes to keep 1.0x? 00:32:304 (4,1,2) - only 0.93x, and 00:38:523 (3,4) - 1.07x
  2. 00:39:621 (4,1) - 00:43:645 (5,1) - blanket should be better
  3. 00:50:596 (2) - finish should be added on the tail, not the whole slider, and missing clap on the head
  4. 00:33:401 (1,2) - swap nc
  5. 00:54:987 (3,1,2,3,4) - this part of rhythm works quite weird for me, 00:58:645 - is better to be a slider/note's head which is clickable, 00:54:987 (3) - i dont even know which track you are following
  6. 01:00:109 (1) - mute it?
ExKyu's Light Hard
  1. 00:13:645 (1) - remove nc, like 00:11:450 (3) -
  2. 00:38:157 (1) - ^
  3. 00:44:011 (1) - too many spinners, i recommend to change this into 2 sliders
  4. 01:00:109 (1) - mute
Hard
  1. sv 2.0 is too high
  2. 00:19:133 (1) - nc is not necessary
  3. 00:22:243 (4,1) - swap nc
main problem:
  1. too high sv with not good sliders and patterns design
  2. the rhythm in kiai time is too weak
  3. nc patterns dont follow the music
Nerthar's Insane
  1. 00:12:913 (2,3,4) - why antijump? is this part anywhere special?
  2. 00:20:596 (4) - nc for changing sv
  3. 00:23:340 (1,2) - swap nc
  4. 00:27:913 (5) - nc
  5. 00:33:035 (2) - nc for changing sv
  6. 00:35:231 (1,2,3,4) - flow not well, plays bad for me
  7. 00:37:426 (3,4,1,2) - stack?
  8. 00:39:621 (1,2,3,4) - comparing with the same former rhythm at 00:36:694 (1,2,3,4) - , do you even think the ds here is quite small?
  9. 00:40:352 (3,4) - also nc for sv change and the anti looks weird
  10. 00:49:865 (5) - nc
  11. 00:54:255 (6,9) - nc, and why 00:54:255 (6) - end at 1/8?
  12. 01:00:109 (3) - mute the end

    slider shape looks ugly imo....
    and the diff is full of unnecessary overlap, the usage of ds is also not comfortable.
i am not good at pointing out my idea in English ahh
you all should learn more about patterns usage, rhythm setting from ranked maps, imo the std diffs still need a long way to go.
Topic Starter
-Aerith-

El SolarBeam wrote:

Well, regarding your third time asking if this map is rankable, yes I suppose it is, assuming this map is labeled as the first map you made. But as I said several times before, I recommend you to ask some experienced modder (one or two is enough, considering the map length) to mod your map. Well, I won't be that meanie bastard of a modder this time, but when you found someone experienced enough, ask them to focus on modding the flow as I think it's the most lacking thing in your map right now, especially on the harder diff.

Goodluck and ciao~
Thanks for the answer :) . Well im not gonna planned to rank it right now. (Still Need a long way to go :D )
Topic Starter
-Aerith-
[quote="Koiyuki"]
  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Normal
  1. re-adjust the ds between notes to keep 1.0x? 00:32:304 (4,1,2) - only 0.93x, and 00:38:523 (3,4) - 1.07x (Okay)
  2. 00:39:621 (4,1) - 00:43:645 (5,1) - blanket should be better (Okay)
  3. 00:50:596 (2) - finish should be added on the tail, not the whole slider, and missing clap on the head ( nice advice )
  4. 00:33:401 (1,2) - swap nc (okay)
  5. 00:54:987 (3,1,2,3,4) - this part of rhythm works quite weird for me, 00:58:645 - is better to be a slider/note's head which is clickable, 00:54:987 (3) - i dont even know which track you are following ( changed into slider, and for the 54:987 i think its good the way it is :D )
  6. 01:00:109 (1) - mute it?
(no, i decided to change the volume to 20%)



Hard
  1. sv 2.0 is too high (Changed it to 1.80)
  2. 00:19:133 (1) - nc is not necessary (Okay)
  3. 00:22:243 (4,1) - swap nc
(Right)



Thanks 4 the Mod Koiyuki :D :D
Nerthar

Koiyuki wrote:

Nerthar's Insane
  1. 00:12:913 (2,3,4) - why antijump? is this part anywhere special? Well, since you are the second person pointing this out, I believe that was a bad idea, was hearing a more calm part, nvm, fixed
  2. 00:20:596 (4) - nc for changing sv Ye
  3. 00:23:340 (1,2) - swap nc Done, looks nice
  4. 00:27:913 (5) - nc Ye
  5. 00:33:035 (2) - nc for changing sv Yeah I got it
  6. 00:35:231 (1,2,3,4) - flow not well, plays bad for me Oh, my last remap went wrong, that was not supposed to look like that lmao, mb
  7. 00:37:426 (3,4,1,2) - stack? I believe it is ok, isn't it ? If not I could change it anyway EDIT : In fact, I changed it
  8. 00:39:621 (1,2,3,4) - comparing with the same former rhythm at 00:36:694 (1,2,3,4) - , do you even think the ds here is quite small? Already thought about it, global SV reduced to 1.6x from 1.8x wich was pretty huge (beginners mistake, lul)
  9. 00:40:352 (3,4) - also nc for sv change and the anti looks weird NC added and changed pattern
  10. 00:49:865 (5) - nc
  11. 00:54:255 (6,9) - nc, and why 00:54:255 (6) - end at 1/8? Oh, When I changed the SV, this issue might have disappeared, and I don't believe that was a wanted end lmao
  12. 01:00:109 (3) - mute the end ye

    slider shape looks ugly imo.... I'd buy slider shaping lessons lmao
    and the diff is full of unnecessary overlap, the usage of ds is also not comfortable.
i am not good at pointing out my idea in English ahh
you all should learn more about patterns usage, rhythm setting from ranked maps, imo the std diffs still need a long way to go.
Well, after this mod, I had a look at most of the slider shapes and overlaping issues, so I believe the map will flow much better now, thanks for this mod :D
Here's the fix : http://puu.sh/rTNfK/0e3d45af03.osu
-Kyu

Koiyuki wrote:

  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

ExKyu's Light Hard
  1. 00:13:645 (1) - remove nc, like 00:11:450 (3) -
  2. 00:38:157 (1) - ^
  3. 00:44:011 (1) - too many spinners, i recommend to change this into 2 sliders don't think it's suitable tbh
  4. 01:00:109 (1) - mute
i am not good at pointing out my idea in English ahh
you all should learn more about patterns usage, rhythm setting from ranked maps, imo the std diffs still need a long way to go.
Thanks for the mod~

asdf
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-Aerith-
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