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DJ Technorch - Boss On Parade (DJ Sharpnel Remix)

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Cyron
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, August 27, 2016 at 1:04:32 AM

Artist: DJ Technorch
Title: Boss On Parade (DJ Sharpnel Remix)
Tags: Techno Hardcore Electronic
BPM: 215
Filesize: 9621kb
Play Time: 05:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Otaku Overclocks (6.66 stars, 1814 notes)
Download: DJ Technorch - Boss On Parade (DJ Sharpnel Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Finally done mapping.
For approval...

Any mods are appreciated.

Updates:

SPOILER
Took too long to keep up with that.
Topic Starter
Cyron
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Weriko
hey :p

Mod from mod queue
00:12:696 (3,1) - you can stack this

00:14:370 (5,4) - maybe stack

00:22:184 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think the distance change doesnt fit the music correctly, might be just me, but i think last circle should have less DS than others

00:29:161 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make this a perfect square? (if it isnt already)

00:33:626 (1,2,3,4) - same

01:17:579 (3) - this circle felt weird

01:41:161 (4) - blanket police

01:41:719 (9,4) - maybe... stack

01:45:068 (9) - i think a weird slider can make good here

01:54:835 (1,2,3) - like this

01:59:579 (3) - making this slider the same size while being 1/2 makes it confusing

02:01:533 (1,2) - stack end

02:54:835 (2) - more weird sliderssss

03:02:928 (4) - and btw.... point in all the sliders in this sections are.... lol

03:48:138 (2,6) - stack

05:22:603 (5) - going to map this?

05:45:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - andddd this was confusing... probly just me







liked the map :p

Good luck!!!
Topic Starter
Cyron

Weriko wrote:

hey :p

Mod from mod queue
00:12:696 (3,1) - you can stack this Stacked

00:14:370 (5,4) - maybe stack Stacked

00:22:184 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think the distance change doesnt fit the music correctly, might be just me, but i think last circle should have less DS than others Yeah, right, the distance was a bit too much compared to the rest.

00:29:161 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make this a perfect square? (if it isnt already) Fixed

00:33:626 (1,2,3,4) - same Fixed

01:17:579 (3) - this circle felt weird Doesn't feel weird to me and it there is a sound in the song so it has to be a circle there

01:41:161 (4) - blanket police Fixed

01:41:719 (9,4) - maybe... stack Stacked

01:45:068 (9) - i think a weird slider can make good here I didn't map the song after voice at all so i won't add slider there

01:54:835 (1,2,3) - like this

01:59:579 (3) - making this slider the same size while being 1/2 makes it confusing You're right. I removed velocity change and made it like the others

02:01:533 (1,2) - stack end Stacked

02:54:835 (2) - more weird sliderssss I want to be a small break in that transition section

03:02:928 (4) - and btw.... point in all the sliders in this sections are.... lol ???

03:48:138 (2,6) - stack Stacked

05:22:603 (5) - going to map this? That is the last 5% that i haven't mapped. (now mapped)

05:45:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - andddd this was confusing... probly just me I really like this part so the best i can do is probably changing a little but i'll mostly keep it. It's also the most intense part of the song so it has to be harder.







liked the map :p

Good luck!!!
Thanks a lot for the mod, it really helped!
Kiki Iki
Hi. Random mod
(sorry for my english)


00:12:417 (1,2,3,4) - different distances between of notes. Fix please :)
00:18:835 (7,1) - increase the distance
01:11:021 (4,5,6,7,8) - 01:12:138 (3,4,5,6,7) - 01:13:254 (4,5,6,7,8) - 01:14:370 (5,6,7,8,9) - 01:15:486 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:16:603 (5,6,7,8,9) - 01:17:719 (4,5,6,7,8) - only need to use the same spacings
01:22:045 (3,4,5) - align
01:31:533 (1,2) - increase the distance
02:03:486 - 02:12:696 - why break here?
02:31:254 (3,4,5,6,7) - 02:32:370 (3,4,5,6,7) - 02:33:486 (5,6,7,8,9) - etc. - use the same spacings
02:57:626 (1) - 02:58:463 (3) - 02:59:300 (1) - 03:00:417 (4) - 03:01:533 (1) - 03:02:091 (2) - 03:02:928 (4) - 03:03:765 (1) - unrankable
03:24:138 (1) - ^
03:41:998 (1) - ^
03:50:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - i can offer increase the spacing :)
04:23:579 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - use two combo colours
04:26:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - increase the spacing?
04:49:254 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - ^
05:02:231 (1,2,3,4,5) - align
05:04:463 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
05:07:115 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - increase the spacing?
05:33:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^
05:49:533 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^


you need to fix all related points that use always different spacings

Amazing map! Good luck!
Topic Starter
Cyron

Kiki Iki wrote:

Hi. Random mod
(sorry for my english)


00:12:417 (1,2,3,4) - different distances between of notes. Fix please :) Fixed
00:18:835 (7,1) - increase the distance Fixed as well
01:11:021 (4,5,6,7,8) - 01:12:138 (3,4,5,6,7) - 01:13:254 (4,5,6,7,8) - 01:14:370 (5,6,7,8,9) - 01:15:486 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:16:603 (5,6,7,8,9) - 01:17:719 (4,5,6,7,8) - only need to use the same spacings Think you're right. Same spacing it is.
01:22:045 (3,4,5) - align Fixed
01:31:533 (1,2) - increase the distance Increased
02:03:486 - 02:12:696 - why break here? I actually put this here because the song was getting to exhausting at this point the it felt like it needed a break. Although I might map this as well. Not sure for now.
02:31:254 (3,4,5,6,7) - 02:32:370 (3,4,5,6,7) - 02:33:486 (5,6,7,8,9) - etc. - use the same spacings Fixed
02:57:626 (1) - 02:58:463 (3) - 02:59:300 (1) - 03:00:417 (4) - 03:01:533 (1) - 03:02:091 (2) - 03:02:928 (4) - 03:03:765 (1) - unrankable Wasn't sure if this was unrankable or not. Imo it fits that part of the song but i guess i'll have to change.
03:24:138 (1) - ^ same
03:41:998 (1) - ^ same
03:50:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - i can offer increase the spacing :) Increased
04:23:579 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - use two combo colours I like this as it is
04:26:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - increase the spacing? nah this feels fine
04:49:254 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - ^ Increased this one a bit
05:02:231 (1,2,3,4,5) - align Fixed
05:04:463 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ This was made on purpose
05:07:115 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - increase the spacing? Increased the first half a bit
05:33:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^ Think this is already spaced enough
05:49:533 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^ This is already quite spaced. I don't think i'll increase it even more cause i don't want to increase the star rating.


you need to fix all related points that use always different spacings Working on that. I think i fixed a lot of them but there might still be a few left.

Amazing map! Good luck!
Thanks a lot for the mod. It was very helpful!
O-Moei
Hi !, 🌀NM request

✨ = Suggestion
💧 = Uuhhh?
💥 = Warning !!!

Here we go...

General :
Is this extended version ? This must be marathon :)
...I don't know. This map really lack structures
Example : 02:38:370 (10) - Non-blanketing ; 02:38:649 (1,3) - Unnecessary overlap ; 02:45:905 (1,1) - Unneeded NC ; 03:02:928 (4) - Yeee, What slider is dis ? xD
Pick 4 Combo Colors suit here :)
For this Disaster map, I suggest use a specific diffname. To somewhat suit the song. How about "Metal Gear" ? LOL nevermind xD
You should NC every big white ticks, since I hardly suggesting NCs when it have gone this far :)

Insane :
Ouhh... I can't... This hurts my head :(
💥00:10:742 (4,5) - Inconsistency distance play like this one almost applied on overall the map. I don't think this is good cuz even osu! expert would get bored so fast nor forgiven since the map really gave no breaks. Example : 00:20:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I can understand if it's applied on kiai times. But here on the beginning song seemed like overmap

Duh, sorry. I just can't :( try to read this for a better look. It's okay if no kudos on this one. Good luck ! ;)
[ D Myung ]
Yohoo! o/ M4M From your Modding Queue

Your map is really really good. A noob like me can't mod something like this. I only said suggestions which, in my opinion, could improve the song. If you don't want to give kudos, I will understand :lol:

*Mod*
02:21:207 // 02:21:486 // 02:21:626 // 02:21:765 Add a circle on this points.
02:29:998 Add a circle here - 02:30:138 Start a slider here and finish it at 02:30:227 - 02:30:417 Start a slider here and finish it at 02:30:696
04:01:254 Add a circle here - 04:01:393 Start a slider here and finish it at 04:01:533 - 04:01:672 same as before - 04:01:951 same as before - 04:02:231 add a circle
You have so many parts on the song where could have notes to complete better. for example the notes that I suggest to put before. The map is pretty good and completing the parts which I mentioned before will be so much better I think :D
I hope that my mod has been helpful :|
Topic Starter
Cyron

[ Korox ] wrote:

Yohoo! o/ M4M From your Modding Queue

Your map is really really good. A noob like me can't mod something like this. I only said suggestions which, in my opinion, could improve the song. If you don't want to give kudos, I will understand :lol:

*Mod*
02:21:207 // 02:21:486 // 02:21:626 // 02:21:765 Add a circle on this points. Added circles Also added circle 02:21:068 -
02:29:998 Add a circle here - 02:30:138 Start a slider here and finish it at 02:30:227 - 02:30:417 Start a slider here and finish it at 02:30:696 I'll leave it as it is. Also the sound starts on 02:30:277 - not on 02:30:138 -
04:01:254 Add a circle here - 04:01:393 Start a slider here and finish it at 04:01:533 - 04:01:672 same as before - 04:01:951 same as before - 04:02:231 add a circle Added sliders instead.
You have so many parts on the song where could have notes to complete better. for example the notes that I suggest to put before. The map is pretty good and completing the parts which I mentioned before will be so much better I think :D
I hope that my mod has been helpful :|
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