here's the m4m you requested, mod this in return plsFigured I'd mod this before I sleep.
From my first impressions, this mapset looks rather good already, so this mod might be short :v
[normal]
00:22:804 (2,1,1) - Ahhh, this rhythm :v I know you responded to Sonnyc that this is mapped to a pretty clear beat, and I agree, but I think that it's not appropriate, especially because this is the first diff in the set. I understand you probably won't change these, but get another opinion at the least.
00:48:964 - Considering how powerful this vocal is, it's kinda awk to ignore it. I feel like I expect to be able to click something here.
01:09:364 (2,3,1) - I just don't think it's clear to the player that the difference between the slider and the circle is 3/4, not 1/2 like it would usually be.
01:50:404 - Again, I feel like I expect to be able to click something here (or have some kind of feedback) because of the vocal.
02:26:164 (2,1) - I think this shape would look better if the end of 1 wasn't curving into 2. Something like this perhaps?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/584939102:44:164 (3) - ayy, this is what I mean by expecting a clickable note here during "time"
03:08:404 (1) - Because this shape is perfectly symmetrical over the y axis, I kinda think 03:05:524 (1) - should be as well.
Really neat Normal diff, the patterns are unique without being too hard to read or too hard to play. While I disagree with the usage of 3/4 gaps in this diff, they're definitely original and fit the song well.
[Hard]
00:33:844 (1) - This shape would probably look nicer if it was symmetrical
00:52:564 (4,1) - This jump, I see in your response earlier that you'd like more opinions on it, I think it's a bit excessive. I don't think there should be THAT much emphasis on that sound. (not to mention the linear flow so this plays kinda meh)
01:04:564 (1,3) - It's bugging me that these two are slightly touching, would look better if there's a way you could get it so that they aren't (maybe lessen the curves of 01:05:044 (2,3) so that 3 can be a bit more to the left)
01:19:444 (5) - Slight blanket adjustment, the gap is thinner on the bottom than at the top.
01:56:404 (1,2,3,4) - Due to the stack, the spacing is kinda messed up here, but fixing that would break the symmetry of the the pattern...Maybe do something like this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5849482[Insane]
I love mid 3star 125ish bpm insanes because they're fun to DT
00:33:124 (8,9,10) - Moving this triplet so that 8 is near 170:200 looks better in my opinion. Makes this feel less dense.
Couldn't find anything else. Really good diff.
Good luck! Hope I could be of help.