sky_delta - Cryonix

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Kinshara
zeroth
Arusamour

Kinshara wrote:

zeroth
𝓱𝓮𝓵𝓵𝓸, memeshara!
deetz
VINXIS - greetings is my fav artcore song
Meg
Hi i'm MEg
Doormat

Meg wrote:

Hi i'm MEg
Hi i'm DOormat
Kaifin
helo

Easy

  1. 00:03:911 (1,2) - nazi blanket, this really stood out to me for some reason so z
  2. 00:10:107 (2,3) - do you think this might be too confusing for easy player? i just think they'd click the slider end because of the flow, maybe if you flipped the pattern like this it would be better?
  3. 00:14:835 (2) + 00:15:324 - did something get deleted here by accident? you break DS then leave this huge space, if intentional then i think a rhythm like so would be much more fitting with what you were doing
  4. 00:21:683 (4,1) - breaking DS for emphasis in Easy? i think is only good in Normal+ to have variance so i'd change, but if its allowed then g, you only do it here so imo DSing it is g
  5. 00:41:085 (2,3,4) - i kno its a line but would flow be better lik this?
  6. 01:34:400 (4,1) - not perfectly parallel

Doormat

  1. 00:18:259 (3,4) -
  2. 00:22:661 (2,3) - breaking ds here is too confusing because of the rhythm, especially because you dont do the same thing with 00:25:270 (2,3), just put 3/4 down like this? you could adjust to make it look nicer than in screenshot
  3. 00:26:574 (5,6) -
  4. 00:58:694 (1) - this has enough spinner leniency, right? also, why not stack this note's slider end with 01:01:139 (1)'s slider end, then you get a cool blanket with 01:01:955 (2) and big money structure $$$$$$$
  5. 01:06:520 (1,2) -
  6. 01:40:107 (8,1) - this one is by like super little but i figured since its a big circle its worth pointing out because its kinda obvious due to the shape


    nice diff as always blanket mod z

Hard

  1. 00:48:259 (1,2) -

    its lit

Meg

  1. 01:05:379 (2,3,4) - shape is slightly uneven

    its very good ! 1 11

    i need juubak

Another

  1. 00:09:129 (1,2,3) - line is slightly off
  2. 00:27:716 (3) - have you considered moving this to somewhere like x:352 y:164 so its structured like its in the stream?
  3. 00:58:694 (1) - this note isnt even with either 00:58:042 (1,2) or 00:58:368 (1,2) :9

    solid


all nazi mod zz

feelin sky soon
Doormat

Kaifin wrote:

helo

Doormat

  1. 00:18:259 (3,4) - k
  2. 00:22:661 (2,3) - breaking ds here is too confusing because of the rhythm, especially because you dont do the same thing with 00:25:270 (2,3), just put 3/4 down like this? you could adjust to make it look nicer than in screenshot mistake on my part; fixed it using a different method
  3. 00:26:574 (5,6) - gotta tuck in your blanket for those cold nights zzzz
  4. 00:58:694 (1) - this has enough spinner leniency, right? also, why not stack this note's slider end with 01:01:139 (1)'s slider end, then you get a cool blanket with 01:01:955 (2) and big money structure $$$$$$$ yeah, leniency here should be fine; recommended minimum is 2-3 beats for a Normal, and the two beat gap makes sense with the music so-
  5. 01:06:520 (1,2) - yeha
  6. 01:40:107 (8,1) - this one is by like super little but i figured since its a big circle its worth pointing out because its kinda obvious due to the shape i tried :v


    nice diff as always blanket mod z (/w\)
thanks coffin

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Asphyxia
Quick thoughts!

[Another]
  1. 00:03:096 (2,3,4,5) - Definitely would sound better if there was a note at 00:03:341 - . Would follow the sound pattern.
  2. 00:31:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Stream could look better if the shape was more circular instead of having a random increase of curve. Maybe this instead?
  3. 01:01:139 (1) - If you can, space it out more so it fits better with 01:02:444 (1,1) - ?


[Hard]
  1. 01:35:379 - There's definitely a clickable / mappable sound! Music gets more intense there, builds up to the end so having no beat here is weird imo
ProfessionalBox
You'd love a mod but I won't be giving one cya
pkk
Andy Kwee! Stop with your incessant logorrhea or you will face the Hammer!
Giralda
yea

[Another]
  1. 00:18:259 (1,2,3) - unsure why this spacing is so low the way it is, perhaps you could clarify?
  2. 00:31:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the angle is pretty awkward here, maybe play around with this by rotating it? http://puu.sh/rIi84/534b4cae80.jpg
  3. 00:41:248 (2,3) - just a suggestion but since the pitch seems to be a bit higher here compared to 00:40:596 (2,3,4), would be nice if 00:41:248 (2,3) was going upwards from 00:41:085 (1) , and maybe something like this would be cool for some sort of linear structure http://puu.sh/rIiio/1f5c25a26d.jpg (4 can go anywhere tbh)
  4. 01:22:661 (4) - how about making this parallel to 01:22:498 (3) - ? seems like both 1/4s interpret the same thing from what i hear and leads into the stream afterwards pretty nicely http://puu.sh/rIir2/fa804dd06b.jpg
  5. 01:29:346 (4) - ctrl+g for more impact?
  6. 01:40:107 (3) - ctrl+g feels a bit better here since the direction you're headed is already downwards, and having this 1/4 direct itself upwards feels kinda counter-intuitive
  7. 01:48:259 - wanna maybe add an object to lead into the spinner?


good luck ~
Ascendance
Give me kudosu
Topic Starter
captin1

Ascendance wrote:

Give me kudosu
Ascendance
Hope u get silenced for kd abuse and kick from alumni
Sing

Ascendance wrote:

Hope u get silenced for kd abuse and kick from alumni
stop!stop!logorrhoea
Topic Starter
captin1
helo

Easy

  1. 00:03:911 (1,2) - nazi blanket, this really stood out to me for some reason so z
  2. 00:10:107 (2,3) - do you think this might be too confusing for easy player? i just think they'd click the slider end because of the flow, maybe if you flipped the pattern like this it would be better? beginner players read approach circles, not flow
  3. 00:14:835 (2) + 00:15:324 - did something get deleted here by accident? you break DS then leave this huge space, if intentional then i think a rhythm like so would be much more fitting with what you were doing don't feel like that follows anything, this is just purely following melody so i think it's alright
  4. 00:21:683 (4,1) - breaking DS for emphasis in Easy? i think is only good in Normal+ to have variance so i'd change, but if its allowed then g, you only do it here so imo DSing it is g
  5. 00:41:085 (2,3,4) - i kno its a line but would flow be better lik this?
  6. 01:34:400 (4,1) - not perfectly parallel

Hard

  1. 00:48:259 (1,2) -

    its lit

Another

  1. 00:09:129 (1,2,3) - line is slightly off close enough
  2. 00:27:716 (3) - have you considered moving this to somewhere like x:352 y:164 so its structured like its in the stream?
  3. 00:58:694 (1) - this note isnt even with either 00:58:042 (1,2) or 00:58:368 (1,2) :9 rotate 00:58:368 (1) - and you'll see the pattern

    solid


all nazi mod zz

feelin sky soon lies
Quick thoughts!

[Another]
  1. 00:03:096 (2,3,4,5) - Definitely would sound better if there was a note at 00:03:341 - . Would follow the sound pattern.
  2. 00:31:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Stream could look better if the shape was more circular instead of having a random increase of curve. Maybe this instead? did ryan's thing
  3. 01:01:139 (1) - If you can, space it out more so it fits better with 01:02:444 (1,1) - ? eh don't think it makes much of a difference


[Hard]
  1. 01:35:379 - There's definitely a clickable / mappable sound! Music gets more intense there, builds up to the end so having no beat here is weird imo i think it fits and i like the patterns as is
yea

[Another]
  1. 00:18:259 (1,2,3) - unsure why this spacing is so low the way it is, perhaps you could clarify? noticed more sounds so made it a stream wew
  2. 00:31:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the angle is pretty awkward here, maybe play around with this by rotating it? http://puu.sh/rIi84/534b4cae80.jpg
  3. 00:41:248 (2,3) - just a suggestion but since the pitch seems to be a bit higher here compared to 00:40:596 (2,3,4), would be nice if 00:41:248 (2,3) was going upwards from 00:41:085 (1) , and maybe something like this would be cool for some sort of linear structure http://puu.sh/rIiio/1f5c25a26d.jpg (4 can go anywhere tbh) this is a copy paste pattern from another map so keep wwwwww
  4. 01:22:661 (4) - how about making this parallel to 01:22:498 (3) - ? seems like both 1/4s interpret the same thing from what i hear and leads into the stream afterwards pretty nicely http://puu.sh/rIir2/fa804dd06b.jpg eh i like the visual of this as is
  5. 01:29:346 (4) - ctrl+g for more impact?
  6. 01:40:107 (3) - ctrl+g feels a bit better here since the direction you're headed is already downwards, and having this 1/4 direct itself upwards feels kinda counter-intuitive did other thing
  7. 01:48:259 - wanna maybe add an object to lead into the spinner? nah


good luck ~


thank

edit: hel yea high res bg
Kibbleru
mind getting like 2 more mods for the other diffs? lo

anotha
00:42:308 (4,1) - maybe u wana manual stack this so stack leniency doesnt ruin this pattern?
00:47:933 (1,1) - er, why no blanket?
01:08:721 (2,3) - consider ctrl g'ing this rhythm
01:14:183 - could map this triplet? cuz it feels like the percussions start here kinda.

meg
00:04:237 (2) - i think ctrl g here is more consistent with 00:01:303 (1,2) -

hard
01:18:259 (1,2,3) - something like this is a bit harsh to land a stream on for a hard diff, consider using just a 3/4 repeat

doormat
try ar 5.5
01:33:259 (2) - pls no, the slider head and tail overlaps and looks rely bad lo

easy
00:52:335 (4) - could try a 1/2 repeat here
00:53:476 (1) - tbh i'd rather just remove this spinner than having to skip 00:58:694 - for it :S
Topic Starter
captin1
i need help aaahhhhh
Doormat
lol k fixed the ugly slider shape and raised AR

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156,48,79400,6,0,L|275:58,1,120,12|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,104,79889,2,0,L|463:93,1,120,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
444,176,80379,2,0,L|364:182,1,60,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
324,240,80705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,191,81031,2,0,P|158:162|162:132,1,60,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
228,80,81357,2,0,P|228:50|220:21,1,60,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
136,4,81683,2,0,P|106:3|77:11,1,60,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
4,160,82172,5,0,1:0:0:0:
112,288,82498,1,8,1:2:0:0:
240,180,82824,1,0,1:0:0:0:
348,308,83150,1,8,1:2:0:0:
476,199,83476,2,0,P|488:141|481:82,1,120,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
332,4,84129,2,0,P|319:62|326:121,1,120,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
360,200,84618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,244,84781,6,0,L|170:221,1,120,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
28,132,85433,2,0,L|145:109,1,120,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
228,92,85922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,75,86085,2,0,P|371:81|421:112,1,120,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
436,196,86574,2,0,P|402:244|349:272,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,251,87063,1,8,1:2:0:0:
120,172,87389,6,0,L|132:28,1,120,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
44,44,87879,2,0,L|32:188,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,240,88368,1,8,1:2:0:0:
216,316,88694,2,0,P|272:296|344:312,1,120,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
492,256,89346,2,0,L|498:196,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,144,89672,2,0,L|422:84,1,60,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
344,51,89998,6,0,P|292:78|233:73,1,120,4|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,90487,2,0,P|102:18|46:39,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,112,90976,1,8,1:2:0:0:
56,180,91139,2,0,P|113:193|169:172,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,116,91629,1,8,1:2:0:0:
380,196,91955,2,0,L|372:256,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,268,92281,2,0,L|464:208,1,60,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,133,92607,6,0,P|375:115|317:146,1,120,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
200,255,93259,2,0,P|155:259|117:237,2,90,4|4|4,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
196,88,94074,1,4,1:2:0:0:
44,156,94400,2,0,B|20:188|20:188|28:276,1,120,12|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
40,352,94889,1,8,1:2:0:0:
192,279,95216,6,0,P|249:263|306:280,1,120,4|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
360,344,95705,2,0,P|419:344|470:314,1,120,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
496,236,96194,1,8,1:2:0:0:
420,204,96357,2,0,P|407:145|417:86,1,120,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
472,24,96846,1,8,1:2:0:0:
392,4,97009,2,0,L|252:24,1,120,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,97498,1,8,1:2:0:0:
312,152,97824,5,0,1:0:0:0:
475,108,98150,1,8,1:2:0:0:
432,272,98476,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,315,98802,1,8,1:2:0:0:
104,272,99129,1,4,1:2:0:0:
61,108,99455,1,8,1:2:0:0:
224,152,99781,2,0,L|283:146,1,60,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,100107,2,0,L|415:186,1,60,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
431,103,100433,6,0,P|498:190|421:270,1,240,4|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,276,101411,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,276,101574,2,0,L|264:128,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,355,102389,2,0,P|250:361|221:355,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,316,102716,2,0,P|118:318|91:331,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,295,103042,6,0,P|23:235|20:176,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,12,103694,1,2,0:0:0:0:
151,76,104020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
151,76,104183,2,0,P|200:80|280:72,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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144,232,105324,2,0,L|136:291,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,340,105650,6,0,P|104:368|184:360,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,280,106302,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,195,106629,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,195,106792,2,0,L|444:64,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,279,107607,2,0,P|419:270|397:250,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,260,107933,2,0,P|302:288|282:310,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,108259,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108422,12,0,110705,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
captin1
mind getting like 2 more mods for the other diffs? lo end my life

anotha
00:42:308 (4,1) - maybe u wana manual stack this so stack leniency doesnt ruin this pattern? eh it's fine
00:47:933 (1,1) - er, why no blanket? not my intention, moved so it's more clear
01:08:721 (2,3) - consider ctrl g'ing this rhythm i tried that already and really didn't like how it played out, imo this is fine
01:14:183 - could map this triplet? cuz it feels like the percussions start here kinda.

hard
01:18:259 (1,2,3) - something like this is a bit harsh to land a stream on for a hard diff, consider using just a 3/4 repeat i really think it's alright since sliders are so lenient, plus i do this later on and wouldn't want to be inconsistent

easy
00:52:335 (4) - could try a 1/2 repeat here nah
00:53:476 (1) - tbh i'd rather just remove this spinner than having to skip 00:58:694 - for it :S slider art


will 1 more suffice cuz i have one coming from ascendance
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