_VianK_ wrote:
hai kak '-')/
M4M dari thread1/2/3/4
dunia yang pecah
00:02:381 (2381|0) - suara whistle nya ngapain sih....? hapus aja sama suara suara yang ada whistle nya // ok
00:10:537 - kayak nya ada suara deh // aku dulu dengernya cuma 6 note, ternyata kedengeran 7 wkwk
00:14:100 (14100|2) - same problem // ada apa emangnya?
00:20:221 (20221|2,20276|1) - hapus, trus adain note bagian situ soalnya disitu 1/4 // oh nggak, ini imo jelas 1/6, justru ga cocok kalo pake 1/4
00:38:499 (38499|0,38499|2,38499|3,38665|3,38749|1,38749|0,38749|2,38832|3,38999|0,38999|3,38999|2) - rearrange dikit aje, buat ngehindari stack // loh ini mah sengaja
01:00:248 - napa nggak di cover? suaranya sama kayak yang ini 01:00:082 (60082|3) - // terlalu kecil suaranya, ga di map juga ga masalah
03:29:330 (209330|0,209330|2,209497|3,209497|1,209663|3,209663|2,209830|1,209830|2) - untuk bagian yang kayak gini w liat semua nya ke arah kiri, trus patternnya juga rada monoton, tolong dong kak variasiin dikit // karena nadanya makin kecil, makanya ke arah kiri semua. also itu udah bervariasi patternnya
03:30:830 (210830|3,210886|1,210941|0,210997|3) - 1/4 snap 03:31:163 (211163|0) - add 1 (jadiin 2) 03:31:219 (211219|3,211274|2,211330|0,211386|1,211441|2) - 1/4 snap
// itu semua bzz bzznya aku ambil 1/8, trus setelahnya itu rata-rata 1/6 kecuali 03:31:163 - (baru sadar kalo cuma 1/2), also 03:31:580 - ternyata 1/8 sampe 03:31:663 -
03:31:997 (211997|2,211997|1) - ini ngapain 2 note? satu aja gih.... soalnya suaranya mirip ama 03:32:330 (212330|2) - tapi ini cuman 1 note // ya ini aku jadiin satu note aja deh, beda sendiri juga. aku dengernya ini hampir sama kaya 1/2 note sebelum dan sesudahnya sih, tapi yaudah lah
03:34:497 (214497|3) - mantap ini dikasih LN ampe 03:35:830 - sama juga buat bagian - bagian lainnya // ga cocok
dah itu aja...sorry ya // mmkay, thanks
Maxus wrote:
[Butiran Debu]
00:08:122 (8122|1) - this note felt awkward, its supposed to be at 00:08:143 - , try look at 00:08:143 - // lmao, definitely missed this
00:20:665 (20665|3,20721|1,20776|2) - Try 2-3-4 here? felt the pattern will overall flow better // yeah, that's nice
00:30:998 - Felt the pattern will accentuate the pitch better if you do https://puu.sh/zhbjN/c6d441e476.png instead. // perfect
00:49:415 (49415|2,49498|0) - Personally prefer to be at col 1 and col 3 instead here coz the current shield pattern kinda out of place. // yeah, okay
00:58:887 (58887|2,58943|1) - Isn't the snap supposed to be 1/8? i heard 3 sound coming instead of 2 here. // sorry, but i heard 2 note instead
01:26:248 - think you should add note here, quite obvious sound here. well, rearranged
01:33:163 - should add another note here, cause you also make double+LN at 01:30:497 - // ah i missed this
02:11:163 (131163|3,131247|2,131330|1,131413|0,131497|2,131497|3,131580|1,131663|0,131663|3,131747|2,131830|1,131830|3,131830|0) - Prefer if you actually Ctrl+H here, since you mirror between 02:09:330 - and 02:10:663 - , i figure this one should too , otherwise being the same pattern as 02:09:830 - makes it doesn't blend well with the piano pitch which is already different. // yeah agree with that, seems i forgot to change this one earlier lmao
02:23:830 - Should be double cause have same sound as 02:22:830 - // okay
03:00:997 - Should be double note here if follow consistency at 03:03:663 - and 03:06:330 - // okay
03:20:663 - think you can do small LN pattern like you did at 03:25:997 - // i got it
03:26:330 - This pattern should be different with 03:25:997 - due to quite distinct pitch differences here, try https://puu.sh/zhfZl/fcdb79852e.png //not a fan with that pattern, rearranged instead
03:30:663 - Felt the snap around here is really weird ._. , for instances, 03:30:997 - should be at same snap as 03:30:663 - , and 03:31:497 - have 1/8 again here, if i try to do the snap, i will do it like https://puu.sh/zhgtQ/43a7cd2684.png , you can try confirm with others, but i'm positive with this snap. // i did the exact timing except 03:31:247 (211247|3) - because i don't hear any sound there.
05:46:818 - I really prefer if you change how the LN placement every pitch changes, like this place and 05:47:818 - . like https://puu.sh/zhh1c/031876feed.png , it will makes the instrument more emphasized. // changed
05:55:891 - Isn't this supposed to be timed? (i mean, need additional red line), I think it needs it, try https://puu.sh/zhiSs/4e8151b473.png , or you can copy paste directly to the notepad:355891,612.244897959184,4,2,1,30,1,0
356503,625,4,2,1,30,1,0
356971,1000,4,2,1,30,1,0
357471,967.741935483871,4,2,1,30,1,0
357954,666.666666666667,4,2,1,30,1,0
358287,612.244897959184,4,2,1,30,1,0
358899,594.059405940594,4,2,1,30,1,0
360681,612.244897959184,4,2,1,30,1,0
362211,576.923076923077,4,2,1,30,1,0
362787,652.173913043478,4,2,1,30,1,0
363113,588.235294117647,4,2,1,30,1,0
// added those timings
06:54:028 - not sure if the small LN is intended or not, it feels come out of nowhere. // yeah it's intended, i heard whooping sound there, so it's fun to add a LN there
09:14:880 - Intended not get the timing? seems awkward this one suddenly not timed. // added the timing
09:24:351 (564351|0,564401|1) - I will make this 2-1 instead to make the change from 1/8 to 1/6 more apparent. // well that's nice
09:32:501 - This is a very good place to have 0,80x SV here, the moment immediately emphasized when having a bit slower SV. // sounds great
09:33:701 - if you do above, do 0,85x SV here.
09:46:001 (586001|3) - really recommend move this to col 2, so that there's break between minijack at 09:45:776 - and OH trill at 09:46:151 - // moved
09:50:651 (590651|0) - Will appreciate if this got moved to col 4, because it's too easy to stumbled here while this is already at minute 9, and its not really nice make players choked here. // moved
Really nice map here, it's nice getting marathon that keep things interesting for 10 minute , even 5 minute is quite rare already.
Call me back~