[Butiran Debu]
00:08:122 (8122|1) - this note felt awkward, its supposed to be at 00:08:143 - , try look at 00:08:143 -
00:20:665 (20665|3,20721|1,20776|2) - Try 2-3-4 here? felt the pattern will overall flow better
00:30:998 - Felt the pattern will accentuate the pitch better if you do
https://puu.sh/zhbjN/c6d441e476.png instead.
00:49:415 (49415|2,49498|0) - Personally prefer to be at col 1 and col 3 instead here coz the current shield pattern kinda out of place.
00:58:887 (58887|2,58943|1) - Isn't the snap supposed to be 1/8? i heard 3 sound coming instead of 2 here.
01:26:248 - think you should add note here, quite obvious sound here.
01:33:163 - should add another note here, cause you also make double+LN at 01:30:497 -
02:11:163 (131163|3,131247|2,131330|1,131413|0,131497|2,131497|3,131580|1,131663|0,131663|3,131747|2,131830|1,131830|3,131830|0) - Prefer if you actually Ctrl+H here, since you mirror between 02:09:330 - and 02:10:663 - , i figure this one should too , otherwise being the same pattern as 02:09:830 - makes it doesn't blend well with the piano pitch which is already different.
02:23:830 - Should be double cause have same sound as 02:22:830 -
03:00:997 - Should be double note here if follow consistency at 03:03:663 - and 03:06:330 -
03:20:663 - think you can do small LN pattern like you did at 03:25:997 -
03:26:330 - This pattern should be different with 03:25:997 - due to quite distinct pitch differences here, try
https://puu.sh/zhfZl/fcdb79852e.png03:30:663 - Felt the snap around here is really weird ._. , for instances, 03:30:997 - should be at same snap as 03:30:663 - , and 03:31:497 - have 1/8 again here, if i try to do the snap, i will do it like
https://puu.sh/zhgtQ/43a7cd2684.png , you can try confirm with others, but i'm positive with this snap.
05:46:818 - I really prefer if you change how the LN placement every pitch changes, like this place and 05:47:818 - . like
https://puu.sh/zhh1c/031876feed.png , it will makes the instrument more emphasized.
05:55:891 - Isn't this supposed to be timed? (i mean, need additional red line), I think it needs it, try
https://puu.sh/zhiSs/4e8151b473.png , or you can copy paste directly to the notepad:
355891,612.244897959184,4,2,1,30,1,0
356503,625,4,2,1,30,1,0
356971,1000,4,2,1,30,1,0
357471,967.741935483871,4,2,1,30,1,0
357954,666.666666666667,4,2,1,30,1,0
358287,612.244897959184,4,2,1,30,1,0
358899,594.059405940594,4,2,1,30,1,0
360681,612.244897959184,4,2,1,30,1,0
362211,576.923076923077,4,2,1,30,1,0
362787,652.173913043478,4,2,1,30,1,0
363113,588.235294117647,4,2,1,30,1,0
06:54:028 - not sure if the small LN is intended or not, it feels come out of nowhere.
09:14:880 - Intended not get the timing? seems awkward this one suddenly not timed.
09:24:351 (564351|0,564401|1) - I will make this 2-1 instead to make the change from 1/8 to 1/6 more apparent.
09:32:501 - This is a very good place to have 0,80x SV here, the moment immediately emphasized when having a bit slower SV.
09:33:701 - if you do above, do 0,85x SV here.
09:46:001 (586001|3) - really recommend move this to col 2, so that there's break between minijack at 09:45:776 - and OH trill at 09:46:151 -
09:50:651 (590651|0) - Will appreciate if this got moved to col 4, because it's too easy to stumbled here while this is already at minute 9, and its not really nice make players choked here.
Really nice map here, it's nice getting marathon that keep things interesting for 10 minute , even 5 minute is quite rare already.
Call me back~