1. Easy (1.3 stars, 88 notes)
2. Hard (3.48 stars, 236 notes)
3. Insane (4.41 stars, 309 notes)
4. Nihilism (5.59 stars, 368 notes)
5. Normal (2.08 stars, 155 notes)

alanrocks243 wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/486170
Don't need to mod hardest diff if u don't want to

• Hit Sounding is… inadequate xP I’d suggest placing whistle at every location where there’s bass drum, and a clap at every location where there’s snare drum in the music. (e.g. 00:18:698 - whistle 00:19:043 - whistle 00:19:215 - clap 00:19:560 - whistle 00:19:733 - whittle 00:19:905 (1,2) - whistle 00:20:077 - clap… etc)
  
  00:02:319 (1) - I think this note can be emphasized more since it’s downbeat + has piano sound. Also, there seem to be a flow break at 00:01:974 (4,1,2) - , but it would make more sense if the flow break was at 00:01:629 (3,4,1) -, since 00:02:319 (1) - is where the change happens.
  
  00:06:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Giving such a small beats this fast stream doesn’t make sense to imo. I’d recommend reducing this distance, and increasing at 00:07:060 (8) -. Also, this stream seem to have randomly inconsistent DS (from 1.95 to 2.05). This is barely noticeable while playing, but I’d still recommend using grid snap off for shaping streams.
  
  00:07:060 (8) - There is a sharp turn here, which but I think it should be moved to 00:07:146 (9) - because that’s the place where the music changes. Also, consider adding a NC here
  
  00:17:491 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, I think this stream is too fast for barely audible music
  
  00:22:664 (1,2) - I think DS here is too small, considering that the vocal kicks at 00:22:836 -
  
  00:30:250 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - I don’t think this follows the music very well. Music is calm, yet the jumps are huge. While there is no overlapping in terms of rhythm (i.e. there is a sound every 1/2), it doesn’t follows neither instrument (drum and piano) or vocal. I think what you did starting 00:18:698 - did much more sense.
  
  00:49:215 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:43:008 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It feels unintuitive to use identical patterns for these two places since the music doesn’t seem to have a similar beat.

CaffeAmericano wrote:

Also, pls give me kudosu for my hard work :v

Lilyanna wrote:

Hi nm from my Queuefhdjf u didnt say ora ora ora

Lilyanna wrote:

SV is the slider velocity

Lilyanna wrote:

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sv changes in easy and normal are better avoided it can be tripping for newplayers
as far as i know u can use it in normal but not so much different of sv and if it rly makes sense
chack aimod u have unsnapped objects ( ctrl -shift -A)
Normal
00:05:078 (3,4) - consistance spacing pls use ds in normal and make sure spacing stayes equal
00:06:457 (1,2) - i recommand u avoid this type of pattern in normal it can be confusing for new players
00:14:733 (5,6) - fix blanket
00:15:422 (6,1) - ^
00:44:733 (2,3) - again spacing
00:54:905 (1,1) - spinner recover u need at least 2 beats untill next object because normal players cant react fast after spinner
Hard
00:07:146 - remove this inherited point
00:17:836 (6,7) - make the spacing here same as here 00:17:491 (5,6) -
00:19:388 - 00:22:146 - there is no clickable beat here seem overmapped so maybe 1/2 slider from 00:19:215 - same for other rythm like these i wont mention all
00:53:698 (1,1,1,1) - remove nc
00:55:077 (2) - nc should be here
01:11:974 (1) - remove nc
01:27:491 (1) - move to x344 y176
hope i helped a little msg me in game if u have question
Good luck

1. Combo colours?
2. Disable widescreen support

1. Why not put CS 4? Seems normal to me kekeke
2. 00:07:664 (1,2) - the spacing here should be the same in 00:10:250 (7,1) - 00:13:008 (7,1) - 00:15:767 (7,1) - , decide which to change lel
3. You have unsnapped objects , CTRL + SHIFT + A to check
4. 00:18:181 (3) - make this to 3 circles, make it clickable as it's strong beats
5. 00:26:457 (1,2) - make more distance like 00:20:940 (1,2) - and 00:23:698 (1,2) -
6. 00:30:595 (3) - put it more to the left to make it flow better
7. 00:32:491 (1,2) - Why the sudden spacing? You didn't do that in 00:29:733 (1,2) - nor 00:35:250 (1,2) -
8. 00:38:008 (1,2) - ^ no spacing?
9. 00:45:767 (3,4) - change beats and follow the drum?
10. 00:49:388 (2,4) - don't see a need for the two jumps here as there's no strong beat here
11. 00:53:698 (1,1,1) - More spacings? Beats getting stronger here
12. 00:57:491 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - a little more spacings wouldn't hurt much I think
13. 01:00:767 (2) - why emphasis? No strong beats here
14. 01:01:802 (2) - ^

1. Check AiMod which is CTRL + SHIFT + A
2. 00:12:664 (3,1,2) - you can't have these type of overlaps if not mistaken
3. 00:29:215 (1,1) - stacking not allowed in Easy
4. 00:41:629 (1,2) - no touching would visually look nicer <3
5. 00:46:457 (1,2) - no stack, all notes can't be stacked/ overlapped
6. 00:53:008 (2,3,4,1) - ^
7. Should check blankets and some flows which might not be recommended to beginners
8. Such high AR is not allowed! --> More Info <--

alanrocks243 wrote:

Kinda busy, still trying to fix stuff doe. :3 Sorry for not replying

kanor wrote:

00:25:422 (1,2) - maybe （261，85）can stack the tail of 2 on the last slider

1. there are no custom hitsounds in ur beatmap folder, why do u use S:C1? what about adding a silent sliderslide hitsound

1. no hitsounds were added :<
2. as for the easiest diff in the set, it shall be strictly following distace snap unless there are some special reasons which is really rare case, thus 0.6x for non-kiai part and 1.0x for kiai is not allowed in this diff. forcing ds makes sv and ds choosing quite important in this diff, u can refer to ranked beatmaps for proper setting. ur rhythm is fine to me so reworking wont take that long i think.

1. still missing hitsounds .-.
2. sv changes are not quite suggested in normal diff, but since it makes sense to me here so its also ok
3. 00:33:871 (5,6,7,1) - etc. objects get messed up here, which should be avoided in such diff level cuz it increases reading difficulty and isnt neat
4. 01:04:388 (1,2) - no, such rhythm pattern is Never a wise choice in normal diff
5. imo this diff needs some rework specifically on clean patterning, again rhythm itself is fine to me except sth i mentioned above

1. 00:17:836 (6,7) - too far as a hard diff
2. 00:18:698 (1,2) - etc. too close, i suggest using same distance as 00:19:215 (2,1) - , plz dont put too much creativity in a hard diff, clean design is important in lower diffs xD
3. 00:36:284 (1,2,3) - etc. for such patterns, maybe try sth like this to keep visual ds, suddenly too close -> too far ->too close is not expected in hard diff
4. 00:54:388 (3,4,1) - 1/2 gap vs 1/1 gap, but u use similar spacing.. ppl might misread 4->1 as a 1/2 gap as well
5. 01:17:319 (2,3,1) - ^ similar point, for such rhythm pattern u can stack 3 on 1 to help reading
6. 01:11:284 (1,2,3,4) - again i say clean design>creativity in hard diff, follow a general ds and emphasize what shall be emphasized in the song would make it neater. u really have some nice ideas that can kinda be applied in higher diffs, but not here
7. 01:22:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part lacks hitsounds

1. 00:10:422 (1,2) - almost touching, move 1 left a bit
2. 00:25:422 (1,2) - 00:25:595 (2,3) - etc. dont be too stingy on spacing when mapping >=insane diffs, generally ppl seldom use overlapping on 1/2 rhythm unless it is for some special patterns

1. 00:20:595 (7,1) - again sth mentioned in insane
2. 00:59:043 (2,5) - unstack a bit would help reading!
3. 01:20:594 (4,1) - plz space out mooore to highlight vocal here
4. 01:25:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - impressive xDD

1. actually u can stop at expert diff imo, this diff isnt that necessary and some jumps are very much overdone