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Brian the Sun - Maybe

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Cris-
Beatmap Nominator
551 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Cris-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 15 de octubre de 2016 at 20:23:56

Artist: Brian the Sun
Title: Maybe
Source: 甘々と稲妻
Tags: Sweetness and Lightning Amaama to Inazuma Ending 森良太
BPM: 125
Filesize: 18607kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,44 stars, 101 notes)
  2. Hard (2,67 stars, 234 notes)
  3. Normal (1,62 stars, 144 notes)
Download: Brian the Sun - Maybe
Download: Brian the Sun - Maybe (no video)
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甘々と稲妻 (Sweetness and Lightning) ~ Ending


: By Me (Done)
Thanks to wolf3211 for video and hitsounds

Opening by Shiguma here

Enjoy!
Last edited by Cris- , edited 31 times in total.
AzureDoctor
196 posts
Joined January 2016
AzureDoctor
Here is your NM :)
ayy first post

General

  1. Remove these inherited timing points: 01:08:602 and 01:09:562 . The 1-beat-long break in Kiai time is not necessary.

Easy


00:39:802 (2) - Add a clap hitsound here.
00:43:642 (2) - ^
00:47:482 (2) - ^
00:50:122 (1) - There needs to be more recovery time after this spinner ends. You could end the spinner at 00:53:242 to allow more time for recovery.
01:28:282 (3) - Add a new combo.

Normal


00:17:242 (6) - and 00:17:482 (7) - Un-stack these notes. I don't feel that 3 stacked notes would belong in a Normal difficulty.
01:27:802 (1) - This slider should be a part of the previous combo.
01:28:762 (2) - Add a new combo here.

Hard


01:26:842 (4) - Add a new combo here.
01:34:522 (1) - Extend this slider to the next white tick. It sounds incomplete when it's on an offbeat.

I hope my mod was helpful.
Good luck on rank :)
Shunao
1,906 posts
Joined February 2016
Shunao
Hey~

Your NM :D

Difficulties

Easy

  1. 00:18:682 (4) - Move this slider a little farther of the precedent slider.
  2. 01:04:762 (3) - ^

Normal

  1. 01:25:885 (3) - You can make it :
    ~


Hard

  1. 00:05:002 (2) - Put the circle at the end of the slider overturn.
  2. 01:09:082 (4) - Remove this note and place a stack (3 circles)
  3. 01:34:042 (5) - Remove this note and place a stack (3 circles) because when you put your slider overturn , to the last one overturn I did not hear music at the end.

Good luck for your map! :)
Pinguino
47 posts
Joined February 2011
Pinguino
Sorry for coming a bit later than i thought, here is my mod feel free to ignore anything you don't agree on not really an expert.

Hard
00:05:002 Put it down of the reverse slider not in it
00:06:202 If you are going to map that sound I would lower the volume of it by at least 30%
00:07:882 Put the following slider in the same spot as the 5
00:09:802 Make this a reverse slider
00:18:202 Make this follow the tail of the previous slider so put it more down
00:18:922 Lower this one I guess you don't wouldn't want to because you won't have space and will have to move everything, tough one.
00:27:562 Remove reverse slider add normal slider
00:39:802 Make this a reverse slider add HC after it ends
01:05:002 Make this part of the next combo
01:21:802 Make this 2 beats of length instead of 1 removing the (4)
01:29:962 Make the tail end going down or replace slider with two HC in the same spot
01:30:442 Put the following slider in the same spot

That's all i have for that diff of my little knowledge on hards I liked it, nice work!
h1b1k11
261 posts
Joined April 2014
h1b1k11


-from my modding queue-


Hard
00:05:002 (2) - I think overlapping like this isn't allowed. Move it where it's visible: http://puu.sh/qBCYW/2ee69343d8.jpg
01:01:882 (1) - Flow seems better if you move this here: http://puu.sh/qBD6l/155e63c4d2.jpg
01:25:882 (2) - Move the end to the left more: http://puu.sh/qBDaM/4466ed9d2d.jpg

Normal
00:50:362 (1) - Why not start the spinner here? 00:51:802

That's all I have! You're beatmap seems pretty decent, haha. :D
Weriko
182 posts
Joined December 2015
Weriko
hey there :p

Mod from queue :p


Hard
00:05:002 (2) - i think you might need to move this a bit, maybe something like this ?

00:37:642 (3,5) - im not sure about this kind of placement...... it might work? dunno

00:56:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i know this are triangles..... but it feels weird, like confusing, so i vote for a cleaner kind of jump

01:01:882 (1,2) - overlaps (aka overlapu)

01:03:562 (3,4,5,1,2) - maybe turn this into a star jump?? i feel like the map is too linear...probly just me


Normal
i cant really say much about this one.....

it feels like some circles need more space to breath... AGAIN probly just me

and... well it also feels too linear... not sure how to fix that on a norm diff :p


Easy
00:35:962 (2,3,4,5,6) - this kind of rhytm changes... im not sure if it fits an easy :p...



I think thats all for now!!! :p



i hope this helped you ;-;... your map already seems good :p
Cris-
Beatmap Nominator
551 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Cris-

Weriko wrote:

Normal
i cant really say much about this one.....

it feels like some circles need more space to breath... AGAIN probly just me

and... well it also feels too linear... not sure how to fix that on a norm diff :p
I changed any things of the Normal :)


Weriko wrote:

Easy
00:35:962 (2,3,4,5,6) - this kind of rhytm changes... im not sure if it fits an easy :p...
I conserve this because this part isn't really easy to map :o ...


Thank so much to all ! :)
Shiguma
476 posts
Joined May 2014
Shiguma
Easy
00:17:722 (3) - I would move this more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6126483 so it isn't as sharp of an angle
00:36:682 (3,4) - I highly recommend you change this, there should be 1/1 gaps for an Easy diff. https://puu.sh/rfGIx/210d23be97.png something like this is better
01:12:442 (4,5,1) - This looks weird, the angle you have to this the notes at

Normal
01:03:802 (1,2,3) - I think these should be 1/2 reverses and not 1/1 reverses
01:06:922 - Especially here because this sounds pretty strong but it's ignored
01:23:722 - Here too, I feel like this sound should not be ignored
01:27:562 - ^
01:30:442 - ^

Hard
00:13:882 (1,2) - Seems like a poor angle to me, kinda forced
00:45:802 (3,4,5) - hm... don't know how I feel about just stacking them like that
01:12:202 (3) - I think a straight slider would be better
01:17:242 (1) - why not curve down?
01:34:042 (5,6,1) - end of song is stack? D:
Shiguma
476 posts
Joined May 2014
Shiguma
updated my mod for the normal
Cris-
Beatmap Nominator
551 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Cris-

Shiguma wrote:

updated my mod for the normal
Okay, I'll update it tomorrow~
Ty for the mod n.n
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
As you requested in my queue
Sorry for delay

I wonder if there would be 2kd if I post the mod later, but who cares about that.
Let's start.

  1. Normal means nazi, feel free to ignore them
  2. Blue means I strongly suggest your doing so, but not a must
  3. Red represents for unrankable stuff, you'd better fix them

    [General]
    1. About metadata, 森良太 is the composer of the song. You can add his name into the tags. It doesn't matter with ranking.
    [Easy]
    Generally speaking, I guess this diff is good. I partly don't like the hitsound and some sliders though.
    1. 00:03:322 (4) - The custom whistle sounds weird here. I personally prefer to use the custom clap as you did on 3.
    2. 00:39:802 (2) - There's also a syllable in vocal on the tail of this slider. Strongly suggest adding a clap here.
    3. 00:44:602 (3) - I guess you've copied and pasted all these kind of sliders. However this one seems a bit ugly here. Consider moving the second tick a bit lower so that it lays around the middle of the slider?
    4. 00:48:442 (3) - ^, but a bit righter here
    5. 01:23:002 (1) - I prefer to make this one the same shape as 01:22:042 (5)
    [Hard]
    1. 00:05:002 (2) - Very misleading spacing here. Try moving it farer.
    2. 00:08:122 - The soft normal hit sound can be clearly heard here, and I don't feel very good about this. I'd suggest a lower volumn, about 45% from here.
    3. 00:31:882 (3) - Move the second tick lower to make the flow better.
    4. 00:48:922 (2) - It ends in the direction of left while the next note is on the upper side, which caused a bad flow. Make it normally end to upper side will be better imo.
    5. 01:03:802 (1) - I didn't see the point why New Combo here.
    [Normal]
    1. 00:16:762 (3) - Moving the second tick a bit righter to around x:44 y:160 seems better for me.
    2. 00:26:362 (6) - The same issue as mentioned in Easy diff. This kind of sliders seem strange especially while moving from top to bottom.
    3. 00:39:562 - I don't suggest leaving here empty since there is a syllable in vocal as well. Perhaps you can change (1) to a 1/2 slider and add a circle here.
That's all for me! The existing diffs are kinda nice. However, I think it far easier for this Hard diff to be the highest diff for a 125 BPM song. Even with this rhythm and beats you can make it harder by increasing distance.
Anyway, good luck for ranking! You've mapped much better than I did before the first rank :>


By the way I like your Aoba avatar :p
Last edited by raririn , edited 1 time in total.
Cris-
Beatmap Nominator
551 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Cris-

raririn wrote:

As you requested in my queue
Sorry for delay

I wonder if there would be 2kd if I post the mod later, but who cares about that.
Let's start.

  1. Normal means nazi, feel free to ignore them
  2. Blue means I strongly suggest your doing so, but not a must
  3. Red represents for unrankable stuff, you'd better fix them

    [General]
    1. About metadata, 森良太 is the composer of the song. You can add his name into the tags. It doesn't matter with ranking.
    [Easy]
    Generally speaking, I guess this diff is good. I partly don't like the hitsound and some sliders though.
    1. 00:03:322 (4) - The custom whistle sounds weird here. I personally prefer to use the custom clap as you did on 3.
    2. 00:39:802 (2) - There's also a syllable in vocal on the tail of this slider. Strongly suggest adding a clap here.
    3. 00:44:602 (3) - I guess you've copied and pasted all these kind of sliders. However this one seems a bit ugly here. Consider moving the second tick a bit lower so that it lays around the middle of the slider?
    4. 00:48:442 (3) - ^, but a bit righter here
    5. 01:23:002 (1) - I prefer to make this one the same shape as 01:22:042 (5)
    [Hard]
    1. 00:05:002 (2) - Very misleading spacing here. Try moving it farer.
    2. 00:08:122 - The soft normal hit sound can be clearly heard here, and I don't feel very good about this. I'd suggest a lower volumn, about 45% from here.
    3. 00:31:882 (3) - Move the second tick lower to make the flow better.
    4. 00:48:922 (2) - It ends in the direction of left while the next note is on the upper side, which caused a bad flow. Make it normally end to upper side will be better imo.
    5. 01:03:802 (1) - I didn't see the point why New Combo here.
    [Normal]
    1. 00:16:762 (3) - Moving the second tick a bit righter to around x:44 y:160 seems better for me.
    2. 00:26:362 (6) - The same issue as mentioned in Easy diff. This kind of sliders seem strange especially while moving from top to bottom.
    3. 00:39:562 - I don't suggest leaving here empty since there is a syllable in vocal as well. Perhaps you can change (1) to a 1/2 slider and add a circle here.
That's all for me! The existing diffs are kinda nice. However, I think it far easier for this Hard diff to be the highest diff for a 125 BPM song. Even with this rhythm and beats you can make it harder by increasing distance.
Anyway, good luck for ranking! You've mapped much better than I did before the first rank :>


By the way I like your Aoba avatar :p
Thank you for the mod! :D

Oh, thanks. Aoba is so cute :S
Chocobo
104 posts
Joined June 2013
Chocobo
Here's your NM~
Sorry a bit late;
Normal
Goes well, nothing serious found;
CS may change to 3.5 or 3;
Hard
1. Make some blankets plz;
2. 00:40:522 (1,2) - change to a slider + note rather than note + slider;
3. 01:08:362 - missing note;
4. Maybe add 24 clap to ur kiai time;
Rankable indeed~
Good luck and have fun~
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